1. Collab Easy (1.61 stars, 299 notes)
2. Hard (3.32 stars, 723 notes)
3. Insane (4.16 stars, 827 notes)
4. Normal (1.99 stars, 439 notes)

-[Koinuri] wrote:

Hi, checking sb! hi koinuri ></

01:03:252 - Here, you made two separate images for the lyric, like "想像 | Drive CarryOn", but not on 02:20:662 and 03:19:824. I suggest being consistent by breaking the last 2 or connecting the first one. cutting 02:20:662 - to "break your door" and then continue to "to get the other side" is not very nice imo since they both English and it'll be a bit strange..(while 01:03:252 - is JAP-ENG so the transition wouldn't very strange) but fix 03:19:824 - ;w;/ let's see other opinions
01:30:837 - I think scripting will make this look nicer. thanks a lot ;w;/

script

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/LR/17.png",320,240
 F,0,90837,91217,0,1
 M,0,90837,102609,320,453,320,271
 F,0,91217,101850,1,0.9868421
 F,0,101850,102609,0.9868421,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/LR/18.png",320,240
 F,0,93875,94255,0,1
 M,0,90837,102609,320,483,320,301
 F,0,94255,101850,1,0.9688977
 F,0,101850,102609,0.9688977,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/LR/19.png",320,240
 F,0,96913,97293,0,1
 M,0,90837,102609,320,513,320,331
 F,0,97293,101850,1
 F,0,101850,102609,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/LR/duapuluh.png",320,240
 F,0,98432,98812,0,1
 M,0,90837,102609,320,543,320,361
 F,0,98812,101850,1,0.9915779
 F,0,101850,102609,0.9915779,0

open .osb file, find "17.png", and paste over everything similar with these new lines
I just aligned all texts perfectly to center and made them move at the constant speed.

Make sure the lyrics are official. I occasionally hear some missing words such as "a" at 02:07:483 and "but" at 01:38:622. i guess i'll poke KSHR ;-; i got this from websites tho
02:42:609 - Why not same pulsing effects here like 01:28:179? oops added
02:44:603 - White Effect.png obstructs the lyrics a bit here. You can move White Effect up the list on the right to move it behind the lyrics. The lyric look nicer with it behind imo. whoops moved
03:44:888 - Same here as 02:42:609 sure

I like this part thanks a lot

Nice storyboard. Good luck!

1. 00:27:229 (8,9) - remove this note

1. needs to recheck all hitsounds
2. 00:06:723 (3) - remove clap at head
3. 00:41:090 (5,8) - whistle for this piano
4. 00:42:609 (1) - head for whistle
5. 00:51:723 (7) - remove clap, since this is not a drum part
6. 01:12:040 (6) - clap should be here, not 01:12:229 (7) -
7. 01:14:698 (7) - clap
8. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4) - clap ((1) at the end one)
9. 01:18:685 (8) - clap for slider end
10. 01:22:862 (3) - remove that slider end clap
11. 01:24:191 (6) - remove clap
12. 01:24:381 (7) - remove clap on slider end
13. 02:15:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dat copy paste though
14. 02:18:305 (1) - add clap on slider end
15. 02:27:419 (1) - remove clap
16. 02:29:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to add clap on some parts or all of them
17. 02:33:116 (8) - clap on end, not start
18. 02:39:381 (8) - clap here, not 02:38:812 (7) - on end
19. 02:55:141 (5,1,2,3) - clap
20. 03:08:432 - add 1 note here or set a break here
21. 03:23:242 (3,4) - clap here
22. 03:31:976 (6,7,8,9,10) - clap
23. 03:53:812 (3) - clap
24. 03:57:419 (5,1,2,3) - clap

1. some of them needs to improve blanket
2. 00:06:723 (3) - you can hear a drum at 00:06:913 - so why not set the slider end to 00:06:913 - ?
3. 00:07:293 (4,5) - needs to improve blanket a bit
4. 00:07:293 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:21:723 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:23:432 (4,5) - ^
7. 02:08:242 (7,8) - ^
8. 02:19:445 (3,4) - ^
9. 03:27:229 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
10. 03:52:483 (5) - you should NC this one, then 03:52:862 (1) - remove NC
11. 03:55:521 (9) - same like above
12. 03:58:559 (5) - ^
13. 04:15:267 (6,1) - needs to improve the blanket a little
14. 04:23:432 (2,3) - improve blanket

Storyboard

Insane

how about this?

click it XD

^

Dailycare wrote:

#from your queue

Before i start, i wanna tell you i didn't mod hard diff. Cuz it's still WIP You can ask me for help when you complete hard diff and need my noob-like modding xd

Storyboard

03:09:191 - until 03:19:824 - It's better to rotate MINI SNOW.png more slowly. Just in my opinion

Insane

00:06:723 (3) - Fix blanket Meh, not such a big issue.
00:07:483 (5) - ^ Yeah, this one can be improved. Done.
00:27:419 (1) - ctrl+shift+R and rotate by 40, 00:27:799 (2,3,4) - these too I like my pattern more.
00:28:938 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:30:457 (5) - Add NC here Fixed
00:45:647 - I suggest this green line be placed on 00:39:571 - Hm, I rather want the SV to be changed where that extra sound in the background comes.
00:53:242 (5) - Fix blanket Improved blanket.
01:01:597 (3) - x296 y160 Fixed
01:01:976 (5) - x360 y128 ^
01:23:622 (5) - Fix blanket Looks fine to me.
01:27:419 (1) - How about NC here? i think it's better, like as 02:41:850 (1) - It's not the same part of the music though. That one NC wouldn't really make sense there.

02:19:634 (4) - Fix blanket Improved blanket.
02:20:394 (1) - You can make this slider's shape better I changed the shape completely.
02:39:571 (1,2,3,4) - I think these rhythm is not suitable for here, I tried something different there to make it more challenging, but if someone else also points this out, I'll consider changing it.

how about this?

03:23:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about this rhythm? Followed your suggestion.

click it XD

03:31:976 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Nice suggestion. Fixed.

^

03:34:065 (4) - Fix blanket Looks fine to me.


My modding is finished, GL to your map~

Lasse wrote:

m4m (or rather ticket) thingy

starting with the finished diff obv

cant comment on sb since I have no idea about storyboarding but it looks nice

General
even though there is no delay at the start of your soft-hitclap it feels a bit "unresponsive" imo, I cut it a little bit (removed some of the "buildup") and it felt better fitting/way more accurate like that for me, maybe you can give it a try? Replaced the hitsound with this file. Thanks so much~
http://puu.sh/lOZiU/54865b507b.wav

Insane
00:03:116 (1,2,3) - at least make the sliderbodies have the same distance, would look way "cleaner", but imo it would play better with some ctrl-g/arranging, like http://i.imgur.com/tEGafTa.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/QYmkROL.jpg I like my pattern more, but I did make the distances similar.

00:07:293 (4,5) - having this pattern as a rotated copy of 00:06:533 (2,3) - would look way better I did sort of already made a change there by making the blanket better, thus the (5) slider looks a bit similar to the previous one.

00:09:191 (1,2) - sudden sharper flow feels a bit unfitting here imo, how about making the angles more like http://i.imgur.com/jhy0Vx1.jpg ? Ok, followed your suggestion.
=> 00:12:799 (3,4,5) - here you use a similar idea but it is executed way better

00:19:634 (4) - maybe move to 154-316 instead? would make it symmetric to 2 and keep a nicer flow, obviously move 5 to fit with the change etc http://i.imgur.com/Ru0G9KA.jpg Fixed

00:22:862 (1,2,3) - could play way better, for example by ctrl-j'ing 00:23:242 (2) - OR arranging it to keep similar angles http://i.imgur.com/glG0t0u.jpg Meh, I'm fine with my current pattern.

00:23:812 (4,5,6,1) - not overlapping would make them nicer to read probably Nah, I like the overlapping

00:33:495 - should really be clickable considering how you mapped the 1/1 and all afterwards and listening to this Since that slider doesn't end on a vocal, I don't really think it's necessary to make it clickable. The part where I made it clickable was a vocal.
=> 00:36:533 (1) - this is actually clickable and it fits way better

00:39:002 (8,9) - higher spacing for this one to emphasize the rising pitch in vocals? I don't really want this part to have a jump since I placed one here: 00:39:571 (1) - at the finish.
also why is the spacing to 00:39:571 (1) - so huge? by changing above you could smooth it out a bit I agree the jump is too big. Made the spacing consistent with the rest of the jumps. I wanted to blanket so that's why I made the jump bigger, lol

00:52:103 (1,2) - :(.jpg Yeah, lol, I probably have to fix that. Moved (2) a bit away from (1)

01:00:457 (4,5) - think it would be better to keep the flow from 1-2-3 and move it down/right Hm, I rather want to stack.

01:00:837 (1,2,3) - arrange 3 to fit with the other two http://i.imgur.com/se8dYTB.jpg It'll cause a visible overlap there that I don't want.

01:03:116 (1) - use ~0.6x sv here to make the change to 1x at 01:03:875 (1) - have more impact Ok, followed your suggestion.

01:17:356 (4,5,6) - if you want to change angles here than doing it on 4-5 would be better since 5 is the strongest sound here (followed by 7) Uhm, I don't really understand.

01:18:305 (7) - either map end to red tick or mute it, current one feels off as there is nothing on blue that warrants a full volume hitsound I shortened the slider to the red tick.

01:33:495 (3,4) - play pretty awkward imo I ctrl+G'ed the slider.
01:35:394 (9) - same 3/4 thing as before Shortened the slider by one tick
01:37:293 (5) - ^you get what I mean :v so I probably dont havbe to mention it again since it happens often, simply lowering the volume of the sliderend would be okay in most cases I suppose ^
01:40:995 (7) - dont think putting a note here is justified There is a clear vocal there so imo it has to be mapped.
especially if you then dont make stuff like 01:41:470 cllickable. it's a bit weird since there is pretty overmapped feeling triple before and after undermapping lots of 1/2 :/ I feel that it's important that vocals have to be clickable.
01:53:242 (1) - making this a 3/2 slider would fit better imo Ok, followed your suggestion.

02:16:407 (7) - think making this a 1/1 slider would fit better with everything or make 02:16:597 (8) - a 1/2 slider Hm, I like my idea more.
either would make the slider end just before before the silence and feel really nice

02:24:951 (2,3) - some more space between thos would look better. maybe overlap the pattern afterwards a bit more so you can move 3 down => http://i.imgur.com/4chib0U.jpg Moved the (3) a bit further away and the obviously did the same with the rest.
=> 02:37:103 (2,3,4,5) - is better in that regard

02:42:419 (6) - current position doesnt emphasize the sound with movement enough imo, maybe move aobe/left of the stream? I don't know. My current placement feels fine to me.
03:07:672 (9,10) - ^ ^
03:24:381 (3,4) - feel poretty unstructured, blanket them, make the symmetrial or anything, would look much better, sth like this owuld be nice here I think and pretty much keep the movement you intended http://i.imgur.com/IRpymPP.jpg I already did something else there.

03:32:736 (1) - not perfectly aligning this with the stream might actually emphasize the increasing intensity in vocals better http://i.imgur.com/niwgjA0.jpg I like it more if it's in-line.
03:44:508 (8,9) - 9 is so strong, should be reposistioned to make the angle emphasize it more Nah, I feel my current placement is better.
04:10:331 (10,11) - ^ ^
04:03:780 (4) - feels rly uncalled for as there doesnt seem to be anything on this tick, there are more of those I'll have to disagree. I think a triple fits nicely there. The music/vocals suggests it imo
04:12:609 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - stack makes this harder to read, why dont you overlap them lin a way you did with patterns similar to this all the time before I guess I didn't want to use the same patterns over and over again, but I still changed it anyway.
04:34:824 (8) - low sv 1/2 slider with low volume on tail might be nicer to "fade out" the song I like mine more.

Hard wip
00:03:116 (1,2) - so in a diff that is supposed to be easier than Insane you map real 1/2 here but on the insane you use 1/2 slider? It really doesn't matter lol.http://i.imgur.com/SuqG9Xc.jpg ?
00:05:014 (5,6) - the 3/4 on nothing while ignoring stronger red tick thing again. but it feels worse here since it's not even on vocals.. I'm following a different rhythm
But yeah, don't think need to comment on more of those since you get my idea :v
00:06:153 (1) - maybe flows better like this? http://i.imgur.com/0l8kVF3.jpg It'll mess up the flow with the previous note
00:33:495 - ignored, at least it it consitent with Insane, lol Not vocals
00:33:875 (1,2,3) - maybe space/overlap them a little bit at least? current one feels quite boring to play I overlapped at other places.
01:09:856 (5) - this might be okay on Insane for some or most people, but overmapped 1/4 should not really be there on a hard Placing triples in a Hard is not overmapping.
so you map ^but then make this only a rep. slider 01:15:647 (3) - even though this one is clearly audible? doesnt make that much sense to me I would have then placed 4 circles and I don't want streams in my hard. The repeat slider fits in much better with this kind of rhythm. A triple won't work.

01:40:995 (3) - even if it might emphasize the guitar a bit, it is not needed imo, even less on a hard I followed vocals and triples are very common in a Hard. Remember that I have to keep the gap between Insane and Hard in mind.
02:16:407 (4) - add a repeat or 1/1? same reasoning as insane I don't want to map a sound or music that's not there.

good luck with this and finishing the spread!

1. 00:03:875 (3) - This doesn't flow well imo, for the begining of this song.
   
2. 00:06:533 (2,3) - The blanket is not well done
   
3. 00:21:723 (3,4) - This is not nice, better blanket it..
   
4. 00:47:166 (1,2,3,4) - This is so random, i think you can improve this and flow this better imo
   
5. 01:03:875 (1) - I think you can space more this slider to emphasize the "DRIIIIVE" voice.
   
6. 01:05:964 (6) - Ctrl + G maybe ?
   
7. 01:06:533 (7) - ^
   
8. 01:07:483 (4) - maybe change the jump to emphasize this note ?
   
9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4) - just my opinion on this tho, as a player this is so weird to play xP
   
10. 01:16:597 (2,3) - I would do this instead, this is better for the rythmn.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:19:634 (2,3,4) - Same here
    
12. 01:30:267 (2,3) - blanket a bit off
    
13. 02:09:761 (2,3,4) - Don't know why u reapeat the same jump patern to all the song :/
    
14. 02:33:495 (1) - please space this a bit more to emphasize the voice
    
    SPOILER

    do this at least, something like that xD
    
15. 02:34:255 (3,4) - i would do this instead plays so well
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:36:153 (7) - short blankets like that doesn't look good imo
    
17. 02:54:571 (4) - ^
    
18. 03:01:027 (2) - CTrl + G ?
    
19. 03:20:584 (1) - space it to emphasize the voice again
    
20. 03:22:672 (2) - fdyhgsfhd
    
21. 03:25:141 (1,2,3,4) - make it smoother, hard to read for this difficulty..
    
22. 03:30:267 (2) - ok promise i'll stop with those, you might like them tho xD
    
23. 03:50:204 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm not so sure about this tho
    
24. 04:13:559 (7,1) - this doesn't play well
    
25. 04:19:634 (8) - emphasize the voice please
    
26. 04:19:634 (8) - don't like this
    
27. 04:33:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WHY LOL?
    
28. 04:30:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Sotarks wrote:

Hai!~ Comming here for a mod 'cause this song is awsome, the SB is awsome and Nya is awsome

Just wanted to see with you how your Insane could be better, imo.


[Insane]

1. 00:03:875 (3) - This doesn't flow well imo, for the begining of this song. Ok, Ctrl+G'ed these two sliders: 00:03:116 (1,2) -
   
2. 00:06:533 (2,3) - The blanket is not well done Looks fine. I'm never that great with blankets
   
3. 00:21:723 (3,4) - This is not nice, better blanket it.. Improved blanket
   
4. 00:47:166 (1,2,3,4) - This is so random, i think you can improve this and flow this better imo I don't really know how this flows badly since it goes in a circle . . .
   
5. 01:03:875 (1) - I think you can space more this slider to emphasize the "DRIIIIVE" voice. I don't really like too big jumps >.< I already think I have to ease some down.
   
6. 01:05:964 (6) - Ctrl + G maybe ? Made a change to 01:05:394 (5) - instead for better flow
   
7. 01:06:533 (7) - ^ No need anymore since I made a different change above
   
8. 01:07:483 (4) - maybe change the jump to emphasize this note ? I like my flower shape And there is still some kind of jump there.
   
9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4) - just my opinion on this tho, as a player this is so weird to play xP
   
10. 01:16:597 (2,3) - I would do this instead, this is better for the rythmn. Followed your suggestion
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:19:634 (2,3,4) - Same here Fixed
    
12. 01:30:267 (2,3) - blanket a bit off Improved a bit
    
13. 02:09:761 (2,3,4) - Don't know why u reapeat the same jump patern to all the song :/ My style
    
14. 02:33:495 (1) - please space this a bit more to emphasize the voice Fine, followed your suggestion
    
    SPOILER

    do this at least, something like that xD
    
15. 02:34:255 (3,4) - i would do this instead plays so well The overlap
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:36:153 (7) - short blankets like that doesn't look good imo Increased distance a bit
    
17. 02:54:571 (4) - ^ ^, made another change as well
    
18. 03:01:027 (2) - CTrl + G ? Fixed
    
19. 03:20:584 (1) - space it to emphasize the voice again It is 2.0x. My jump-spacing
    
20. 03:22:672 (2) - fdyhgsfhd Increased distance
    
21. 03:25:141 (1,2,3,4) - make it smoother, hard to read for this difficulty.. Hard to read . . . I don't understand how it is, lol
    
22. 03:30:267 (2) - ok promise i'll stop with those, you might like them tho xD Just increased distance a bit
    
23. 03:50:204 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm not so sure about this tho I like that pattern
    
24. 04:13:559 (7,1) - this doesn't play well Hm, made a change there. I don't know if it'll help though, lol
    
25. 04:19:634 (8) - emphasize the voice please I placed a triple there. Realized I can
    
26. 04:19:634 (8) - don't like this
    
27. 04:33:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WHY LOL? Changed those objects into a circle shape
    
28. 04:30:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't understand what's wrong with that

I think you need to be more careful about how you should empasize voice and big rythmn section in insane diff, 'cause all your jumps are the same with the same spacing, and in high section it doesn't change and in low section it's freaking huge like i said above..
Also the begining has a poor flow imo, from 00:03:116 - to 00:15:267 - .. I think it could be better..
Anyway, this is nice tho but a bit more polishment, flow and emphasize impovment could make this diff much more better imo.

Sorry for my "nazie mod" but, this is my favorite song and since there is a lot of ranked map of this and it's a full version I want this to be really nice...
Please why no insane 4,70-4,80 =( xD

Good luck with this set hope my shitty mod helped at least a bit

Kalibe wrote:

Hello -Nya-. This SB is lovely :3

Don't kudo this post, but if i helped, your choice. I have a few suggestion on Hard ~

~ Hard ~

You clearly sure HP 6 is good here on Hard diff which long is more than 4 minutes? I think HP 5 will be more consistent, but it's just my thoughts.

I found one unnessesary green line : http://puu.sh/lRErL/ba13317f66.png


00:09:761 (4) - 00:14:508 (7) - I think you can add Claps on heads.
00:26:470 (2,3) - Also prefer to do triple for vocal, it's nice to play tho.
00:30:267 (5,6,1) - You sure about this triple? I can't hear sound on blue. ;w;
00:54:761 (4,1) - Swap NC maybe? or you NC for vocal?
01:34:255 (1,2,3) - How about this pattern? : http://puu.sh/lREUG/0766aff713.jpg
01:41:850 (1) - Add Whistle to emphasis sound?
02:25:900 (5) - Missing NC?
02:31:786 (4,1) - I think there should be NC swapped because i hear (4) is stronger than (1) imo.
03:41:660 (4) - Missing Clap.
04:04:634 (3) - There should be Clap and Finish together.

Ok, that's all. Good luck -Nya- :3

Gamu wrote:

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

1. The current metadata is fine, and the SB's lyrics is also okay!

<Reference>

1. http://puu.sh/lUZc6/f4ac83a460.png
2. http://puu.sh/lUZcq/56b1f84e4f.png
3. http://www.aldnoahzero.com/
4. http://www.sh-nzk.net/artist/sawanohiroyukinzk/discography/DFCL-2108

Good luck~:3

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello from your queue.
Insane :

• 
  
  
  00:11:090 (5) - I recommend you to shorten this slider and try this pattern and this shape Followed your suggestion
  
  00:23:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think those flows good tho try this Fixed
  
  00:24:951 (2,3) - Space a little more so i can tell 00:24:191 (6,1) and 00:24:951 (2,3) - has same distance cause emphasising vocal on both. Good idea. Fixed
  
  01:03:116 (1) - I would use only a circle or a 1/4 slider instead of a 1/2 slider for this and add a circle at 01:03:495 (2) Shortened the slider and added a circle.
  
  01:03:875 (1,2) - really bad flow and i cant really tell the difference with this 01:05:394 (5,6) - so pls use same distance and similar flows for these Yeah, did something different there.
  
  01:15:647 (3,4,5,6,1) - Well if you ask me for this insane diff i think you should keep the streams similar try this I like my current stream more
  
  01:22:672 (2,3) - Same distance problem if you do this like this why you make 01:23:432 (4,5) - like this and 01:23:622 (5,6) - Changed the distances so they are the same.
  
  02:29:318 (1) - No please there isn't actual reason for you end this on blue tick instead of making it hard and slider after streams are really annoying when they don't fit. Yeah, shortened that slider.
  
  02:41:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - same simple stream suggestion I like my current stream placement.
  
  
  Generally i didn't understand why did you keep using same sv and ds on exciting parts(like kiai times) i cant really tell difference between with slow parts which seems like you just left the map too simple if you wanna keep that way okay but this is an light insane. All i can say is using more single taps and ds for exciting parts thats all.

Hard :

• 
  00:05:014 (6) - this works too. Followed your suggestion
  
  00:19:824 (1,2) - same ^ ^
  
  00:08:052 (5) - 1/4 slider works Changed to 1/4 slider. Did the same for other patterns as well
  
  00:43:369 (3) - not cool flow Ctrl+G'ed (3)
  
  00:49:445 (3) - maybe move arrow side a little to down flows better with the next slider Nah, keep as is.
  
  00:53:622 (2,3) - I don't know if this is you made something on purpose but not stacked I rather want it stacked.
  
  01:01:597 (4,5,6,7) - here drum is kind changing so http://puu.sh/lVGDT/29935390af.jpg shouldn't be an real problem for hard diff. No, keeping my current spacing.
  
  01:53:242 (1,2,1) - Use this pattern more on this part because on this part there is an different stromg drum on background and hell this pattern works too good like here 01:53:242 (1,2,1) - and more. I don't really know what you want me to do here >.<
  
  04:09:951 (2) - end it n blue tick Rather not

No problems found on AIMOD and AIBAT.

After all these check i didn't actualy find something important lol. I can't really check normal only think important is flows on it and i don't think there is anything else i would find same for easy nice map good luck.

Nhawak wrote:

helloooo

• Easy

1. 00:33:495 - I don't recommend to finish a slider at this beat >< it is a strong beat and it should be clicked, what about two circles? Nah, this is an easy diff afterall. There will be a lot of places where the strong beat isn't clickable.
2. 00:57:040 - A clap song within a slider is not a good idea :C you can put a note at 00:56:660 - and start a slider at 00:57:040 - Good idea. Followed your suggestion.
3. 01:17:356 - This beat sounds empty, what about add something? Nope, still an easy diff.
4. 02:00:078 (1) - Put the slider's red point on the slider tick is a good idea because flows the song in a better way C: Ok, fixed
5. 02:25:141 - You forced the flow here, the slider finishes on the opposite direction that the next note starts, it is weird to play Turned the slider the other way.
6. Finish to map this diff? Karen is still busy with the other half. Still WIP

• Normal

1. 00:38:052 - This problem again aaa, look at the first issue on easy diff ^ Well, personally, I don't think this beat is really that strong
2. 01:06:153 (5) - A ctrl+h in this slider would be better because provides a better flow with the next note, since currently it finishes on the opposite direction blablablab / Same at 03:57:799 (5) - Only fixed the first one. The second one is fine
3. 04:33:495 (4) - NC to warn players the rhythm acceleration Fine

• Hard

1. 00:06:913 - 00:09:951 - 00:12:989 - You ignored these important beats, it sounds bad D: I understand what you mean, but it is because I followed a different rhythm.
2. 00:26:660 (3) - This sudden direction change/hidden curve doesn't have a good readability, it is very confuse and uncomfortable playing Fine, made a change there.
3. 01:41:660 (5) - x17 y26 better flow, if you do it, don't forget to nerf the jump that it made with the next note Followed your suggestion
4. 02:07:293 (5,1,2) - Different combo section on the same pattern isn't good :C I had to, otherwise it's combo inconsistency
5. 02:41:090 - The beggining of this pattern should be here, try to finish the slider at 02:40:995 - (mute it too?) and add a note at 02:41:090 - Followed your suggestion
6. 02:42:609 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same pattern idea that you made at 03:44:888 (1,2,3,4) - , consistency is always good Meh, sometimes it's nice to use different patterns as well

• Insane

1. 00:41:470 (7,9) - This pattern seems non polished ;c; Try to move these two notes more aside and make the pattern symmetrical I don't really understand what you want me to do, lol
2. 00:47:166 (1) - You broke the emphasis here, making a bad flow because the jump was broke unexpectedly Added a jump at that slider
3. 01:08:812 (3,4) - A ctrl+g flows so much better @.@ Not really. The current placement also flows fine
4. 04:13:748 (1) - You broke the emphasis again Increased the distance.
5. 04:15:647 (1) - And again... ^

gl c:

XxSeonxX wrote:

hello, from my NM queue

mod

Insane
00:06:533 (2,4,5) - blanket The blanket is fine
00:17:166 (6,8) - make these sliders the same distance as 00:16:786 (5,7) - I don't know. They look fine to me
00:21:723 (3,4,5) - blanket It's fine

Hard
00:37:293 (3,4) - I don't think the change of direction here is good Fine, Ctrl+G'ed 00:37:293 (3) -
01:20:964 (2,3) - ^ Nah, that's fine
02:56:470 since there's a drum beat here,maybe you could add something I followed a different rhythm there

Normal
01:09:571 (5,1) - the flow here could be better Flow looks fine to me
02:48:305 (3) - maybe flatten this slider a bit to have better flow with previous slider Fine

sorry for the short mod. and good luck

Karen wrote:

my part

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also in your part:
01:00:837 (1,1) - this spacing is unrankable, there should be at least 4 beats after spinner in this diff.

and in storyboard:
01:28:179 - seems you missed a circle pic here

Okoratu wrote:

zzz
sb lol hello okoratu
minor stuff:

- all the full screen bgs are png when they don't really need to be lol would save a ton of filesize if you converted the non transparent ones to jpgs
- occasionally i don't think your lyrics match what's actually said lol well I want the image to be HQ since probably player play on wider screen than 1366x768 thus jpg only damage the quality qwq
- 00:32:043 - around here spacing between all those split up lyrics looks kinda arbitrary like http://puu.sh/lNXES/b776104cfb.jpg uhh one is much bigger than the others and there you split a particle from the next word with a space and i don't even get that in line 2 aaah fixed!
- just an idea would be not showing the whole lyric things for like 20 seconds just being there well i do want smooth coming animation movement since the song is really relaxing _:3
- LR/sepuluh.png is glowing slightly more red than the rest of the lyrics ?_? it is?? ?__? im sure the color is the same (checked on ps #f73838)
- 01:04:634 - are u sure CarryOn is like that like Carry On would actually look better xd the official lyrics wrote it without space ;w; confirmed lyrics with KSHR too we hope we didnt miss anything here
- you can move the 1st kiai bg down a bit actually that would cut off less of the character's head ? fixed
- 01:28:179 - just an idea that the circles that you let pop up could actually be centered to hitobjects as a diff specific sb i want some random circles (like rain ripples) here _:3
- http://puu.sh/lNXXr/6f04e45fb6.jpg this glowing effect looks a bit broken (likely cut off for some reason) i forgot i added more outer glow here, fixed
- http://puu.sh/lNY0g/796a2f9a34.jpg idk i would space the rows so far that there are no overlapping characters i would agree but if i made them far the movement will fast (new image come but no place to put so the previous image have to be on higher place) uuuhh how to describe it qwq
- 01:43:369 - the just stop disappears before she finished speaking it and overall the transition into the next line could be more smooth i guess fixd
- overall fading the text in and out in the first break would look cool maybe i want to make this part readable so yeah, more relax animation but lets see other opinion here (if -Nya- wants it I can change
- would display the thanks for playing thing when the beatmap actually ended so that people can read it before accessing the scoreboard..? okay!

FCL wrote:

M4M from your queue

• [Easy Collab]

1. 00:47:926 (3,1) - uneven blanket i guess Meh, not too much of a problem
2. 02:02:736 (3,1) - ^ ^
3. 02:06:153 (1) - i think you wanted put red dot at centre of the slider, but now it is not so Fixed I guess
4. 02:17:546 (3) - very controversial decision, i think you could put nc here, like before Rather not
5. 02:54:002 (2) - weird form imo This is already fixed
6. 03:00:078 (2) - just suggestion to put it on 416 292 Right now, that would be a distance problem
7. 03:01:597 (4,1) - fix blanket a bit
8. 03:41:470 (4,1) - ^
9. 04:00:078 (3,4) - ^
10. 04:09:951 (4,1) - ^ Improved blankets a bit

• [Normal]

1. 00:54:761 (1,2,3) - at all previous same moments you use smooth flow, but here you create a large angle between patterns that affects to flow Improved flow
2. 01:25:710 (2) - imo finish this slider at 01:26:280 will be better for rhythm I think my current rhythm is better, since the strong vocal starts exactly where the spinner starts
3. 02:09:951 (2,3) - same as 00:54:761 (1,2,3) nvm it's fine
4. 02:40:141 (2) - same as 01:25:710 (2) ^

• [Hard]

1. 00:09:191 (1,2,3) - yea, i understand why you do it, but i think you should follow a normal spacing I made a change there before so I'm not sure if you're referring to the same thing
2. 00:20:109 (2) - hm, i am sure that it's overmap Yeah, removed that note
3. 00:30:362 (6) - ^ No, keeping the triple, since I think it fits nicely.
4. 00:46:786 (1) - move on x=276 for better blanket Fixed
5. 01:26:280 (3,4,5) - create a triangle maybe? http://puu.sh/lWmC0/d68ddf39ec.jpg Ok
6. 01:37:293 (1) - too curved for your style imo Nah, it's fine
7. 02:02:356 (4,7) - same, overmap I like the triple there
8. 03:25:141 (1) - move on 152 88 for correct spacing Fixed
9. 03:27:229 (2) - spacing error i guess No, it's fine
10. 04:09:002 (6) - slider ends at downbeat, not sure that it's fine Meh, it's not such a strong beat

• [Insane]

1. 00:23:622 (8,9,10,11) - just don't like this jumps, my suggestion lol http://puu.sh/lWnn7/c48f2c294b.jpg Sorry, but this is my own style >.<
2. 00:42:040 (9) - due to stack this looks not good. Again, my suggestion http://puu.sh/lWnrG/e5c3bced29.jpg Fine, followed your suggestion
3. 00:50:204 (1,2,3,4) - star patterns? Rly will be nice Meh, I have enough star patterns, lol
4. 01:01:597 (3) - clap here is a valid reason for more spacing imo I agree. Spaced that note further
5. 01:29:698 (1,2,3) - straight flow? http://puu.sh/lWnAq/f22f7c6464.jpg Not such a big issue
6. 02:06:913 (3,4,5) - you are trying follow to pentagonal shape but here it's not look good due to space with 02:07:672 (6) - . Try to create square maybe Uhm, I don't really know how I should do it, but it looks fine to me.
7. 02:15:837 (4) - it's not too close? I be recommended to move it on 420 104 I think I already made a change there before you modded
8. 02:53:432 (6) - move on 392 240 for avoid overlap Fixed
9. 03:03:305 (4) - imo spacing here is randomly, since it not have a strong sound Meh, I just wanted some random jumps inbetween
10. 03:22:103 (1,2) - fix blanket Looks fine to me
11. 03:36:343 (2,3,4) - again, not sure about spacing here I don't know. Looks fine to me
12. 03:54:761 (6) - move on 144 124 for create a symmetry, rly better Fixed
13. 04:32:736 (3) - move on 236 240 for create a triangle Nah, not such a big deal. Rather want to keep that one stack.