Sotarks wrote:

Hai!~ Comming here for a mod 'cause this song is awsome, the SB is awsome and Nya is awsome

Just wanted to see with you how your Insane could be better, imo.


[Insane]

1. 00:03:875 (3) - This doesn't flow well imo, for the begining of this song. Ok, Ctrl+G'ed these two sliders: 00:03:116 (1,2) -
   
2. 00:06:533 (2,3) - The blanket is not well done Looks fine. I'm never that great with blankets
   
3. 00:21:723 (3,4) - This is not nice, better blanket it.. Improved blanket
   
4. 00:47:166 (1,2,3,4) - This is so random, i think you can improve this and flow this better imo I don't really know how this flows badly since it goes in a circle . . .
   
5. 01:03:875 (1) - I think you can space more this slider to emphasize the "DRIIIIVE" voice. I don't really like too big jumps >.< I already think I have to ease some down.
   
6. 01:05:964 (6) - Ctrl + G maybe ? Made a change to 01:05:394 (5) - instead for better flow
   
7. 01:06:533 (7) - ^ No need anymore since I made a different change above
   
8. 01:07:483 (4) - maybe change the jump to emphasize this note ? I like my flower shape And there is still some kind of jump there.
   
9. 01:14:888 (1,2,3,4) - just my opinion on this tho, as a player this is so weird to play xP
   
10. 01:16:597 (2,3) - I would do this instead, this is better for the rythmn. Followed your suggestion
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:19:634 (2,3,4) - Same here Fixed
    
12. 01:30:267 (2,3) - blanket a bit off Improved a bit
    
13. 02:09:761 (2,3,4) - Don't know why u reapeat the same jump patern to all the song :/ My style
    
14. 02:33:495 (1) - please space this a bit more to emphasize the voice Fine, followed your suggestion
    
    SPOILER

    do this at least, something like that xD
    
15. 02:34:255 (3,4) - i would do this instead plays so well The overlap
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:36:153 (7) - short blankets like that doesn't look good imo Increased distance a bit
    
17. 02:54:571 (4) - ^ ^, made another change as well
    
18. 03:01:027 (2) - CTrl + G ? Fixed
    
19. 03:20:584 (1) - space it to emphasize the voice again It is 2.0x. My jump-spacing
    
20. 03:22:672 (2) - fdyhgsfhd Increased distance
    
21. 03:25:141 (1,2,3,4) - make it smoother, hard to read for this difficulty.. Hard to read . . . I don't understand how it is, lol
    
22. 03:30:267 (2) - ok promise i'll stop with those, you might like them tho xD Just increased distance a bit
    
23. 03:50:204 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm not so sure about this tho I like that pattern
    
24. 04:13:559 (7,1) - this doesn't play well Hm, made a change there. I don't know if it'll help though, lol
    
25. 04:19:634 (8) - emphasize the voice please I placed a triple there. Realized I can
    
26. 04:19:634 (8) - don't like this
    
27. 04:33:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WHY LOL? Changed those objects into a circle shape
    
28. 04:30:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't understand what's wrong with that

I think you need to be more careful about how you should empasize voice and big rythmn section in insane diff, 'cause all your jumps are the same with the same spacing, and in high section it doesn't change and in low section it's freaking huge like i said above..
Also the begining has a poor flow imo, from 00:03:116 - to 00:15:267 - .. I think it could be better..
Anyway, this is nice tho but a bit more polishment, flow and emphasize impovment could make this diff much more better imo.

Sorry for my "nazie mod" but, this is my favorite song and since there is a lot of ranked map of this and it's a full version I want this to be really nice...
Please why no insane 4,70-4,80 =( xD

Good luck with this set hope my shitty mod helped at least a bit

Kalibe wrote:

Hello -Nya-. This SB is lovely :3

Don't kudo this post, but if i helped, your choice. I have a few suggestion on Hard ~

~ Hard ~

You clearly sure HP 6 is good here on Hard diff which long is more than 4 minutes? I think HP 5 will be more consistent, but it's just my thoughts.

I found one unnessesary green line : http://puu.sh/lRErL/ba13317f66.png


00:09:761 (4) - 00:14:508 (7) - I think you can add Claps on heads.
00:26:470 (2,3) - Also prefer to do triple for vocal, it's nice to play tho.
00:30:267 (5,6,1) - You sure about this triple? I can't hear sound on blue. ;w;
00:54:761 (4,1) - Swap NC maybe? or you NC for vocal?
01:34:255 (1,2,3) - How about this pattern? : http://puu.sh/lREUG/0766aff713.jpg
01:41:850 (1) - Add Whistle to emphasis sound?
02:25:900 (5) - Missing NC?
02:31:786 (4,1) - I think there should be NC swapped because i hear (4) is stronger than (1) imo.
03:41:660 (4) - Missing Clap.
04:04:634 (3) - There should be Clap and Finish together.

Ok, that's all. Good luck -Nya- :3

Gamu wrote:

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945

1. The current metadata is fine, and the SB's lyrics is also okay!

<Reference>

1. http://puu.sh/lUZc6/f4ac83a460.png
2. http://puu.sh/lUZcq/56b1f84e4f.png
3. http://www.aldnoahzero.com/
4. http://www.sh-nzk.net/artist/sawanohiroyukinzk/discography/DFCL-2108

Good luck~:3

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hello from your queue.
Insane :

• 
  
  
  00:11:090 (5) - I recommend you to shorten this slider and try this pattern and this shape Followed your suggestion
  
  00:23:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think those flows good tho try this Fixed
  
  00:24:951 (2,3) - Space a little more so i can tell 00:24:191 (6,1) and 00:24:951 (2,3) - has same distance cause emphasising vocal on both. Good idea. Fixed
  
  01:03:116 (1) - I would use only a circle or a 1/4 slider instead of a 1/2 slider for this and add a circle at 01:03:495 (2) Shortened the slider and added a circle.
  
  01:03:875 (1,2) - really bad flow and i cant really tell the difference with this 01:05:394 (5,6) - so pls use same distance and similar flows for these Yeah, did something different there.
  
  01:15:647 (3,4,5,6,1) - Well if you ask me for this insane diff i think you should keep the streams similar try this I like my current stream more
  
  01:22:672 (2,3) - Same distance problem if you do this like this why you make 01:23:432 (4,5) - like this and 01:23:622 (5,6) - Changed the distances so they are the same.
  
  02:29:318 (1) - No please there isn't actual reason for you end this on blue tick instead of making it hard and slider after streams are really annoying when they don't fit. Yeah, shortened that slider.
  
  02:41:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - same simple stream suggestion I like my current stream placement.
  
  
  Generally i didn't understand why did you keep using same sv and ds on exciting parts(like kiai times) i cant really tell difference between with slow parts which seems like you just left the map too simple if you wanna keep that way okay but this is an light insane. All i can say is using more single taps and ds for exciting parts thats all.

Hard :

• 
  00:05:014 (6) - this works too. Followed your suggestion
  
  00:19:824 (1,2) - same ^ ^
  
  00:08:052 (5) - 1/4 slider works Changed to 1/4 slider. Did the same for other patterns as well
  
  00:43:369 (3) - not cool flow Ctrl+G'ed (3)
  
  00:49:445 (3) - maybe move arrow side a little to down flows better with the next slider Nah, keep as is.
  
  00:53:622 (2,3) - I don't know if this is you made something on purpose but not stacked I rather want it stacked.
  
  01:01:597 (4,5,6,7) - here drum is kind changing so http://puu.sh/lVGDT/29935390af.jpg shouldn't be an real problem for hard diff. No, keeping my current spacing.
  
  01:53:242 (1,2,1) - Use this pattern more on this part because on this part there is an different stromg drum on background and hell this pattern works too good like here 01:53:242 (1,2,1) - and more. I don't really know what you want me to do here >.<
  
  04:09:951 (2) - end it n blue tick Rather not

No problems found on AIMOD and AIBAT.

After all these check i didn't actualy find something important lol. I can't really check normal only think important is flows on it and i don't think there is anything else i would find same for easy nice map good luck.

Nhawak wrote:

helloooo

• Easy

1. 00:33:495 - I don't recommend to finish a slider at this beat >< it is a strong beat and it should be clicked, what about two circles? Nah, this is an easy diff afterall. There will be a lot of places where the strong beat isn't clickable.
2. 00:57:040 - A clap song within a slider is not a good idea :C you can put a note at 00:56:660 - and start a slider at 00:57:040 - Good idea. Followed your suggestion.
3. 01:17:356 - This beat sounds empty, what about add something? Nope, still an easy diff.
4. 02:00:078 (1) - Put the slider's red point on the slider tick is a good idea because flows the song in a better way C: Ok, fixed
5. 02:25:141 - You forced the flow here, the slider finishes on the opposite direction that the next note starts, it is weird to play Turned the slider the other way.
6. Finish to map this diff? Karen is still busy with the other half. Still WIP

• Normal

1. 00:38:052 - This problem again aaa, look at the first issue on easy diff ^ Well, personally, I don't think this beat is really that strong
2. 01:06:153 (5) - A ctrl+h in this slider would be better because provides a better flow with the next note, since currently it finishes on the opposite direction blablablab / Same at 03:57:799 (5) - Only fixed the first one. The second one is fine
3. 04:33:495 (4) - NC to warn players the rhythm acceleration Fine

• Hard

1. 00:06:913 - 00:09:951 - 00:12:989 - You ignored these important beats, it sounds bad D: I understand what you mean, but it is because I followed a different rhythm.
2. 00:26:660 (3) - This sudden direction change/hidden curve doesn't have a good readability, it is very confuse and uncomfortable playing Fine, made a change there.
3. 01:41:660 (5) - x17 y26 better flow, if you do it, don't forget to nerf the jump that it made with the next note Followed your suggestion
4. 02:07:293 (5,1,2) - Different combo section on the same pattern isn't good :C I had to, otherwise it's combo inconsistency
5. 02:41:090 - The beggining of this pattern should be here, try to finish the slider at 02:40:995 - (mute it too?) and add a note at 02:41:090 - Followed your suggestion
6. 02:42:609 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same pattern idea that you made at 03:44:888 (1,2,3,4) - , consistency is always good Meh, sometimes it's nice to use different patterns as well

• Insane

1. 00:41:470 (7,9) - This pattern seems non polished ;c; Try to move these two notes more aside and make the pattern symmetrical I don't really understand what you want me to do, lol
2. 00:47:166 (1) - You broke the emphasis here, making a bad flow because the jump was broke unexpectedly Added a jump at that slider
3. 01:08:812 (3,4) - A ctrl+g flows so much better @.@ Not really. The current placement also flows fine
4. 04:13:748 (1) - You broke the emphasis again Increased the distance.
5. 04:15:647 (1) - And again... ^

gl c:

XxSeonxX wrote:

hello, from my NM queue

mod

Insane
00:06:533 (2,4,5) - blanket The blanket is fine
00:17:166 (6,8) - make these sliders the same distance as 00:16:786 (5,7) - I don't know. They look fine to me
00:21:723 (3,4,5) - blanket It's fine

Hard
00:37:293 (3,4) - I don't think the change of direction here is good Fine, Ctrl+G'ed 00:37:293 (3) -
01:20:964 (2,3) - ^ Nah, that's fine
02:56:470 since there's a drum beat here,maybe you could add something I followed a different rhythm there

Normal
01:09:571 (5,1) - the flow here could be better Flow looks fine to me
02:48:305 (3) - maybe flatten this slider a bit to have better flow with previous slider Fine

sorry for the short mod. and good luck

Karen wrote:

my part

Objects codes

254,24,150457,6,0,B|308:24|341:65|341:65|363:126,1,160
312,204,151597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,294,151976,2,0,P|386:304|428:292,1,80
484,224,152736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,128,153116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,32,153495,2,0,B|420:48|420:48|373:25|308:23,1,160
229,53,154634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,139,155014,2,0,L|192:233,1,80
96,203,155774,2,0,L|91:123,1,80
151,47,156533,2,0,P|192:41|284:119,1,160
362,160,157672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,109,158052,2,0,L|453:278,1,160
492,356,159191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,350,159571,2,0,P|356:331|277:353,2,120
492,356,161090,2,0,L|492:259,1,80
480,180,161850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,134,162229,2,0,L|305:135,1,80
66,260,164128,2,0,B|79:315|79:315|186:312,1,160
275,289,165267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,215,165647,2,0,P|343:171|336:136,1,80
247,99,166407,2,0,L|157:101,1,80
125,14,167166,2,0,L|298:10,1,160
380,20,168305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,66,168685,2,0,P|472:116|460:157,1,80
385,197,169445,2,0,P|378:236|386:275,1,80
455,341,170204,2,0,P|386:367|308:329,1,160
255,254,171343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,189,171723,2,0,L|98:189,1,80
45,265,172483,2,0,B|54:316|44:366|44:366|111:356,1,160
192,326,173622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,276,174002,2,0,B|345:248|345:247|369:306,2,120
192,326,175521,2,0,L|191:149,1,160
215,73,176660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,13,177040,2,0,P|333:5|376:14,1,80
421,91,177799,2,0,L|504:92,2,80
363,168,178938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,257,179318,2,0,P|324:314|334:342,1,80
426,323,180078,2,0,P|429:266|419:238,1,80
363,168,180837,2,0,L|265:172,1,80
205,229,181597,2,0,L|107:233,1,80
43,181,182356,2,0,P|29:254|97:323,1,160
175,324,183495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,229,183875,2,0,L|210:137,1,80
297,111,184634,2,0,P|340:107|379:117,1,80
444,182,185394,2,0,P|471:127|426:34,1,160
343,12,186533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,14,186913,2,0,L|156:14,1,80
79,56,187672,2,0,L|94:99,1,40
193,196,199824,6,0,L|285:200,1,80
322,282,200584,2,0,P|368:210|342:131,1,160
286,70,201723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,28,202103,2,0,B|141:35|93:19|93:19|96:85,1,160
120,164,203242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,226,203622,2,0,P|127:257|39:216,1,160
23,135,204761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,71,205141,2,0,L|184:72,1,80
267,96,205900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,183,206280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,272,206660,2,0,B|277:329|277:329|320:348|320:348|381:344,1,160
469,325,207799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,241,208179,2,0,P|395:162|445:88,1,160
495,28,209318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,6,209698,2,0,L|239:8,1,160
159,58,210837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,97,211217,2,0,P|62:45|75:13,2,80
123,177,212356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,271,212736,2,0,B|141:330|116:364|116:364|54:324,1,160
43,235,213875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,177,214255,2,0,L|217:171,1,80
289,131,215014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,180,215394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,275,215774,2,0,L|368:367,1,80
463,346,216533,2,0,L|462:266,1,80
470,170,217293,2,0,B|450:126|450:126|486:81|459:14,1,160
377,67,218432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,124,218812,2,0,B|236:154|236:154|132:156,1,160
64,204,219951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,220331,2,0,B|237:247|237:247|301:277,1,160
376,340,221470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,283,221850,2,0,P|472:334|467:364,2,80
374,227,222989,2,0,P|349:152|396:77,1,160
462,27,224128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,120,224508,2,0,L|488:214,1,80
117,262,226407,2,0,P|82:183|103:102,1,160
164,46,227546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,83,227926,2,0,L|343:85,1,80
423,115,228685,2,0,P|442:197|419:272,1,160
355,338,229824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,311,230204,2,0,L|164:307,1,80
164,212,230964,2,0,L|243:215,2,80
77,254,232103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,165,232483,2,0,B|18:110|32:47|32:47|80:75,1,160
143,124,233622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,166,234002,2,0,L|315:165,1,80
306,69,234761,2,0,L|392:68,1,80
477,37,235521,2,0,P|490:103|463:194,1,160
396,257,236660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,259,237040,2,0,L|220:260,1,80
206,355,237799,2,0,L|380:355,1,160
459,332,238938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,235,239318,2,0,P|419:230|367:239,1,80
287,262,240078,2,0,P|247:267|207:262,1,80
137,196,240837,2,0,P|111:263|163:346,1,160
244,349,241976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,262,242356,2,0,L|288:166,1,80
274,86,243116,2,0,P|236:77|182:95,2,80
364,119,244255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,188,244634,2,0,P|458:116|418:40,1,160
336,7,245774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,86,246153,2,0,L|193:89,1,80
98,97,246913,2,0,P|91:149|102:188,1,80
153,253,247672,6,0,B|104:280|48:255|48:255|68:314,1,160
140,361,248812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,353,249191,2,0,L|324:347,1,80
319,251,249951,2,0,L|408:245,1,80
459,320,250710,2,0,P|492:258|458:166,1,160
391,117,251850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,132,252229,2,0,L|209:129,1,80
148,60,252989,2,0,L|61:57,1,80
31,146,253748,2,0,P|16:197|38:261,2,120
111,199,255267,2,0,P|130:245|125:287,1,80
96,365,256027,2,0,L|183:361,1,80
248,297,256786,2,0,P|318:264|395:299,1,160
451,367,257926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
489,279,258305,2,0,L|490:189,1,80
395,178,259065,2,0,L|396:88,1,80
328,29,259824,2,0,P|388:3|452:19,2,120
274,109,261343,2,0,L|184:112,1,80
233,23,262103,2,0,L|143:26,2,80
274,109,263242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,202,263622,2,0,L|300:290,1,80
226,344,264381,2,0,P|157:361|105:343,1,120
43,278,265331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,193,265710,2,0,L|219:193,1,120
298,161,266660,2,0,P|355:149|420:170,1,120
470,242,267609,2,0,L|476:328,2,80
496,149,268748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,56,269128,2,0,L|339:53,1,120
254,45,270078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,78,270457,2,0,B|109:92|109:92|42:49,2,120
254,45,271976,2,0,P|272:94|250:208,1,160
189,268,273116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,319,273495,2,0,L|397:314,1,120
459,248,274445,2,0,L|462:157,1,80

also in your part:
01:00:837 (1,1) - this spacing is unrankable, there should be at least 4 beats after spinner in this diff.

and in storyboard:
01:28:179 - seems you missed a circle pic here

Okoratu wrote:

zzz
sb lol hello okoratu
minor stuff:

- all the full screen bgs are png when they don't really need to be lol would save a ton of filesize if you converted the non transparent ones to jpgs
- occasionally i don't think your lyrics match what's actually said lol well I want the image to be HQ since probably player play on wider screen than 1366x768 thus jpg only damage the quality qwq
- 00:32:043 - around here spacing between all those split up lyrics looks kinda arbitrary like http://puu.sh/lNXES/b776104cfb.jpg uhh one is much bigger than the others and there you split a particle from the next word with a space and i don't even get that in line 2 aaah fixed!
- just an idea would be not showing the whole lyric things for like 20 seconds just being there well i do want smooth coming animation movement since the song is really relaxing _:3
- LR/sepuluh.png is glowing slightly more red than the rest of the lyrics ?_? it is?? ?__? im sure the color is the same (checked on ps #f73838)
- 01:04:634 - are u sure CarryOn is like that like Carry On would actually look better xd the official lyrics wrote it without space ;w; confirmed lyrics with KSHR too we hope we didnt miss anything here
- you can move the 1st kiai bg down a bit actually that would cut off less of the character's head ? fixed
- 01:28:179 - just an idea that the circles that you let pop up could actually be centered to hitobjects as a diff specific sb i want some random circles (like rain ripples) here _:3
- http://puu.sh/lNXXr/6f04e45fb6.jpg this glowing effect looks a bit broken (likely cut off for some reason) i forgot i added more outer glow here, fixed
- http://puu.sh/lNY0g/796a2f9a34.jpg idk i would space the rows so far that there are no overlapping characters i would agree but if i made them far the movement will fast (new image come but no place to put so the previous image have to be on higher place) uuuhh how to describe it qwq
- 01:43:369 - the just stop disappears before she finished speaking it and overall the transition into the next line could be more smooth i guess fixd
- overall fading the text in and out in the first break would look cool maybe i want to make this part readable so yeah, more relax animation but lets see other opinion here (if -Nya- wants it I can change
- would display the thanks for playing thing when the beatmap actually ended so that people can read it before accessing the scoreboard..? okay!

FCL wrote:

M4M from your queue

• [Easy Collab]

1. 00:47:926 (3,1) - uneven blanket i guess Meh, not too much of a problem
2. 02:02:736 (3,1) - ^ ^
3. 02:06:153 (1) - i think you wanted put red dot at centre of the slider, but now it is not so Fixed I guess
4. 02:17:546 (3) - very controversial decision, i think you could put nc here, like before Rather not
5. 02:54:002 (2) - weird form imo This is already fixed
6. 03:00:078 (2) - just suggestion to put it on 416 292 Right now, that would be a distance problem
7. 03:01:597 (4,1) - fix blanket a bit
8. 03:41:470 (4,1) - ^
9. 04:00:078 (3,4) - ^
10. 04:09:951 (4,1) - ^ Improved blankets a bit

• [Normal]

1. 00:54:761 (1,2,3) - at all previous same moments you use smooth flow, but here you create a large angle between patterns that affects to flow Improved flow
2. 01:25:710 (2) - imo finish this slider at 01:26:280 will be better for rhythm I think my current rhythm is better, since the strong vocal starts exactly where the spinner starts
3. 02:09:951 (2,3) - same as 00:54:761 (1,2,3) nvm it's fine
4. 02:40:141 (2) - same as 01:25:710 (2) ^

• [Hard]

1. 00:09:191 (1,2,3) - yea, i understand why you do it, but i think you should follow a normal spacing I made a change there before so I'm not sure if you're referring to the same thing
2. 00:20:109 (2) - hm, i am sure that it's overmap Yeah, removed that note
3. 00:30:362 (6) - ^ No, keeping the triple, since I think it fits nicely.
4. 00:46:786 (1) - move on x=276 for better blanket Fixed
5. 01:26:280 (3,4,5) - create a triangle maybe? http://puu.sh/lWmC0/d68ddf39ec.jpg Ok
6. 01:37:293 (1) - too curved for your style imo Nah, it's fine
7. 02:02:356 (4,7) - same, overmap I like the triple there
8. 03:25:141 (1) - move on 152 88 for correct spacing Fixed
9. 03:27:229 (2) - spacing error i guess No, it's fine
10. 04:09:002 (6) - slider ends at downbeat, not sure that it's fine Meh, it's not such a strong beat

• [Insane]

1. 00:23:622 (8,9,10,11) - just don't like this jumps, my suggestion lol http://puu.sh/lWnn7/c48f2c294b.jpg Sorry, but this is my own style >.<
2. 00:42:040 (9) - due to stack this looks not good. Again, my suggestion http://puu.sh/lWnrG/e5c3bced29.jpg Fine, followed your suggestion
3. 00:50:204 (1,2,3,4) - star patterns? Rly will be nice Meh, I have enough star patterns, lol
4. 01:01:597 (3) - clap here is a valid reason for more spacing imo I agree. Spaced that note further
5. 01:29:698 (1,2,3) - straight flow? http://puu.sh/lWnAq/f22f7c6464.jpg Not such a big issue
6. 02:06:913 (3,4,5) - you are trying follow to pentagonal shape but here it's not look good due to space with 02:07:672 (6) - . Try to create square maybe Uhm, I don't really know how I should do it, but it looks fine to me.
7. 02:15:837 (4) - it's not too close? I be recommended to move it on 420 104 I think I already made a change there before you modded
8. 02:53:432 (6) - move on 392 240 for avoid overlap Fixed
9. 03:03:305 (4) - imo spacing here is randomly, since it not have a strong sound Meh, I just wanted some random jumps inbetween
10. 03:22:103 (1,2) - fix blanket Looks fine to me
11. 03:36:343 (2,3,4) - again, not sure about spacing here I don't know. Looks fine to me
12. 03:54:761 (6) - move on 144 124 for create a symmetry, rly better Fixed
13. 04:32:736 (3) - move on 236 240 for create a triangle Nah, not such a big deal. Rather want to keep that one stack.

1. 00:07:293 (5) - it's unnecessary to stack with previous circle, move to around 304 188 would create a better flow
2. 00:20:964 (9) - let heavy sound on the tail of this slider is bad imo, consider to use circles instead the slider here?
3. 00:41:850 (8,9,10) - flow is bad here, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153950
4. 00:50:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can create a shape here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153953
5. 00:53:812 (6,7) - bad flow here, consider to move 6 to around 372 152?
6. 01:01:597 (3,4,5,6) - make angle between 345 and 456 smaller would make here plays better, you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153963
7. 01:09:951 (1) - move this slider downward would make here flow better, consider to move it to around 168 368
8. 01:13:369 (2) - move to 320 360 would be better here imo
9. 01:35:014 (7,9) - move these two notes a little will make here looks nicer imo, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153973
10. 01:54:286 - missed a clear sound here, try to use a 3/4 slider + a 1/2 slider would improve here a lot
11. 02:40:710 (1,2) - bad flow here due to you bent the slider too much, maybe you can re-curve the slider, and pay attention of the flow between 02:40:521 (4,1) -
12. 04:07:672 (1,2) - still bad flow imo, try to move them to here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154001

1. 00:05:299 (7) - i can't hear any sound here, overmap in Hard diff is not good
2. 00:20:489 - ^ just use 1/1 slider is fine here imo
3. 00:51:343 (6,1,2) - triple stack is unreasonable and hard to read in a Hard diff, also their gap is different. maybe you can move away 00:51:343 (6,1) - , just let 00:51:723 (1,2) - be stacked is fine
4. 00:54:761 (4,1) - swap nc? and i also think stack is not good here, move them away from each other if you can accept
5. 01:37:293 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders' tail have no sound, abuse them will cause the rhythm be confusing here, not good for playing. so i suggest just use a 1/1 slider from 01:37:293 - to instead of these two slider will be much better
6. 01:54:002 (1) - consider to use a 3/4 slider here to follow the sound here 01:54:286 - like Insane diff?
7. 02:41:850 - good place to set a 1/4 repeat slider, why not?
8. 04:09:381 - try to use two repeat slider here, will make the rhythm clearer like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154042

1. 02:20:394 (5,6,1) - move them downward a little, they are too closed to hp bar

handsome wrote:

03:36:533 (3,1) - wrong claps
04:29:508 (2,3,4) - plz change to http://i.imgur.com/zJrI4UC.png
it makes more sense!

02:27:989 (2) - 03:30:267 (2) - - follow 01:16:597 (2,3) -

ZZHBOY wrote:

hi nya~! m4m(c4c lol
[Insane]

1. 00:07:293 (5) - it's unnecessary to stack with previous circle, move to around 304 188 would create a better flow Fixed
2. 00:20:964 (9) - let heavy sound on the tail of this slider is bad imo, consider to use circles instead the slider here? Placed a circle where the tail was
3. 00:41:850 (8,9,10) - flow is bad here, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153950 Made a change there
4. 00:50:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can create a shape here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153953 Ok
5. 00:53:812 (6,7) - bad flow here, consider to move 6 to around 372 152? I don't think that's better for flow, lol
6. 01:01:597 (3,4,5,6) - make angle between 345 and 456 smaller would make here plays better, you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153963 Nah, mine is fine also
7. 01:09:951 (1) - move this slider downward would make here flow better, consider to move it to around 168 368 Fixed
8. 01:13:369 (2) - move to 320 360 would be better here imo I did increase the spacing there but not too much
9. 01:35:014 (7,9) - move these two notes a little will make here looks nicer imo, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153973 I moved (9) upwards a bit
10. 01:54:286 - missed a clear sound here, try to use a 3/4 slider + a 1/2 slider would improve here a lot I did map that beat but just in a different way
11. 02:40:710 (1,2) - bad flow here due to you bent the slider too much, maybe you can re-curve the slider, and pay attention of the flow between 02:40:521 (4,1) - Looks fine to me
12. 04:07:672 (1,2) - still bad flow imo, try to move them to here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154001 That jump would be too big, lol

[Hard]

1. 00:05:299 (7) - i can't hear any sound here, overmap in Hard diff is not good Yeah, removed that note
2. 00:20:489 - ^ just use 1/1 slider is fine here imo Shortened the slider
3. 00:51:343 (6,1,2) - triple stack is unreasonable and hard to read in a Hard diff, also their gap is different. maybe you can move away 00:51:343 (6,1) - , just let 00:51:723 (1,2) - be stacked is fine Fixed
4. 00:54:761 (4,1) - swap nc? and i also think stack is not good here, move them away from each other if you can accept I follow vocals for NC and I rather want to keep the stack
5. 01:37:293 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders' tail have no sound, abuse them will cause the rhythm be confusing here, not good for playing. so i suggest just use a 1/1 slider from 01:37:293 - to instead of these two slider will be much better Fixed
6. 01:54:002 (1) - consider to use a 3/4 slider here to follow the sound here 01:54:286 - like Insane diff? Did something there
7. 02:41:850 - good place to set a 1/4 repeat slider, why not? I like my pattern more
8. 04:09:381 - try to use two repeat slider here, will make the rhythm clearer like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154042 I will miss a beat if I do that.

[Normal]
[*]02:20:394 (5,6,1) - move them downward a little, they are too closed to hp bar It's fine. It's not overlapping the HP bar. If it overlapped then it would be a problem.

[Easy]
fine for me~!

call me back after your reply. if you have any problem, you can catch me in-game or send me a forum pm :3
good luck

ZZHBOY wrote:

fine for me, bubbled!

ByBy13 wrote:

Ah yeah you forgot to add Karen to tags since he collabed with you in easy difficult

-Nya- wrote:

ByBy13 wrote:

Ah yeah you forgot to add Karen to tags since he collabed with you in easy difficult

Whoops, would a QAT be able to do that for me?

Kalibe wrote:

Gratzz -Nya- !!~ :3