ZZHBOY wrote:

hi nya~! m4m(c4c lol
[Insane]

1. 00:07:293 (5) - it's unnecessary to stack with previous circle, move to around 304 188 would create a better flow Fixed
2. 00:20:964 (9) - let heavy sound on the tail of this slider is bad imo, consider to use circles instead the slider here? Placed a circle where the tail was
3. 00:41:850 (8,9,10) - flow is bad here, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153950 Made a change there
4. 00:50:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you can create a shape here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153953 Ok
5. 00:53:812 (6,7) - bad flow here, consider to move 6 to around 372 152? I don't think that's better for flow, lol
6. 01:01:597 (3,4,5,6) - make angle between 345 and 456 smaller would make here plays better, you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153963 Nah, mine is fine also
7. 01:09:951 (1) - move this slider downward would make here flow better, consider to move it to around 168 368 Fixed
8. 01:13:369 (2) - move to 320 360 would be better here imo I did increase the spacing there but not too much
9. 01:35:014 (7,9) - move these two notes a little will make here looks nicer imo, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4153973 I moved (9) upwards a bit
10. 01:54:286 - missed a clear sound here, try to use a 3/4 slider + a 1/2 slider would improve here a lot I did map that beat but just in a different way
11. 02:40:710 (1,2) - bad flow here due to you bent the slider too much, maybe you can re-curve the slider, and pay attention of the flow between 02:40:521 (4,1) - Looks fine to me
12. 04:07:672 (1,2) - still bad flow imo, try to move them to here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154001 That jump would be too big, lol

[Hard]

1. 00:05:299 (7) - i can't hear any sound here, overmap in Hard diff is not good Yeah, removed that note
2. 00:20:489 - ^ just use 1/1 slider is fine here imo Shortened the slider
3. 00:51:343 (6,1,2) - triple stack is unreasonable and hard to read in a Hard diff, also their gap is different. maybe you can move away 00:51:343 (6,1) - , just let 00:51:723 (1,2) - be stacked is fine Fixed
4. 00:54:761 (4,1) - swap nc? and i also think stack is not good here, move them away from each other if you can accept I follow vocals for NC and I rather want to keep the stack
5. 01:37:293 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders' tail have no sound, abuse them will cause the rhythm be confusing here, not good for playing. so i suggest just use a 1/1 slider from 01:37:293 - to instead of these two slider will be much better Fixed
6. 01:54:002 (1) - consider to use a 3/4 slider here to follow the sound here 01:54:286 - like Insane diff? Did something there
7. 02:41:850 - good place to set a 1/4 repeat slider, why not? I like my pattern more
8. 04:09:381 - try to use two repeat slider here, will make the rhythm clearer like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4154042 I will miss a beat if I do that.

[Normal]
[*]02:20:394 (5,6,1) - move them downward a little, they are too closed to hp bar It's fine. It's not overlapping the HP bar. If it overlapped then it would be a problem.

[Easy]
fine for me~!

call me back after your reply. if you have any problem, you can catch me in-game or send me a forum pm :3
good luck

ZZHBOY wrote:

fine for me, bubbled!

ByBy13 wrote:

Ah yeah you forgot to add Karen to tags since he collabed with you in easy difficult

-Nya- wrote:

ByBy13 wrote:

Ah yeah you forgot to add Karen to tags since he collabed with you in easy difficult

Whoops, would a QAT be able to do that for me?

Kalibe wrote:

Gratzz -Nya- !!~ :3

10nya wrote:

sweet (:
double nya \o\ lol

grats ~

Karen wrote:

so fast o.o
congratz~
btw online tags can't work in game pwp atho i don't care about it xD