1. Breakfast (1.4 stars, 73 notes)
2. Dinner (2.66 stars, 164 notes)
3. Flo453's Dessert (4.3 stars, 395 notes)
4. Lunch (2.09 stars, 117 notes)
5. Midnight Snack (4.43 stars, 302 notes)

Colonel Sanders wrote:

Uhh it says it's requesting the "muffet" skin but I have no idea where to find it. I can't even find it by searching.

1. Mp3 is set at 320kbps. Remember to convert it to 192 or 128 kbps with a converter.
2. You video has an audio in it. Look at its Properites.

1. Kick sliders like 00:08:348 (1) should be avoided on the easiest difficulty, more importantly this 00:18:782 (3). See: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
2. 00:38:086 (2,3) - Distance Snapping should be used on this diff as this one has 0.68x DS.
3. 00:45:911 (1,1) - The recovery time after spinner is too short here. Some players might miss the next object.
4. Rhythm should be simple on this diff (but not too lazy). Try these kind of beats (with some variation):
   SPOILER

   
   

1. 00:49:563 - This timing point (green line) should be at 00:49:954 to be consistent with other difficulties.
2. You used many 1/4 sliders here (particularly kiai time). This is very difficult for some to play at.
3. Set CS to 4. Breakfast has 3 CS in which the difference is too high. Your beatmap should comply the difficulty spread.

1. Set CS to 4. A CS of 5 is too small (considering that this is not the highest diff)
2. 00:01:174 (4,5) - Overlapping here seems weird
3. 00:03:522 (6) - Turn this into a straight slider instead
4. 00:10:565 (1,2,1,2) - Pattern suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:695 (7,8,9,10) - Make circles curve here.
6. 00:50:085 (1) - This slider is very confusing as the direction of flow here is missing (whether left or right).

1. Increase AR because this is the harderst difficulty
2. Set CS to 4.5 or smaller. A CS of 5 is too small, again.

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, ordinary modding from my queue:

shortened

[Overall]

1. Mp3 is set at 320kbps. Remember to convert it to 192 or 128 kbps with a converter.
2. You video has an audio in it. Look at its Properites.

[Breakfast]

1. Kick sliders like 00:08:348 (1) should be avoided on the easiest difficulty, more importantly this 00:18:782 (3). See: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... y_elements
2. 00:38:086 (2,3) - Distance Snapping should be used on this diff as this one has 0.68x DS.
3. 00:45:911 (1,1) - The recovery time after spinner is too short here. Some players might miss the next object.
4. Rhythm should be simple on this diff (but not too lazy). Try these kind of beats (with some variation):
   SPOILER

   
   

[Lunch]

1. 00:49:563 - This timing point (green line) should be at 00:49:954 to be consistent with other difficulties.
2. You used many 1/4 sliders here (particularly kiai time). This is very difficult for some to play at.
3. Set CS to 4. Breakfast has 3 CS in which the difference is too high. Your beatmap should comply the difficulty spread.

[Dinner]

1. Set CS to 4. A CS of 5 is too small (considering that this is not the highest diff)
2. 00:01:174 (4,5) - Overlapping here seems weird
3. 00:03:522 (6) - Turn this into a straight slider instead
4. 00:10:565 (1,2,1,2) - Pattern suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:695 (7,8,9,10) - Make circles curve here.
6. 00:50:085 (1) - This slider is very confusing as the direction of flow here is missing (whether left or right).

[Dessert]

1. Increase AR because this is the harderst difficulty
2. Set CS to 4.5 or smaller. A CS of 5 is too small, again.

That's all I can mod

Also Happy New Year too!!

kiwibikercookie wrote:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-X5yrtf4J95bW1mUHdORkJFZ0E/view?usp=sharing
Here you go!

Flo453_xP wrote:

A player wishing for modders... your wish has been granted (/*-*)/

General

It's a way to big jump in difficulty, from
Dinner to Dessert,
i mean 1 Star, 2 Stars, 3 Stars, but then 5 stars,
there should be a 4 Star map too. :/
(if you want i can make one for you ._.)

Lunch

00:02:217 - try to use something different, instead of this.
00:10:564 - same ^
00:18:912 - ^
00:27:259 - this gets repetetive
01:36:257 - these two are off, put them to 01:35:996 - and 01:37:040 -

The Rest
i don't know why, but i did just found 5 (if you consider, that one is repeating, then it's 2) things to mod ,
i don't know, if that's good or bad :/

kiwibikercookie wrote:

Flo453_xP wrote:

A player wishing for modders... your wish has been granted (/*-*)/

General

It's a way to big jump in difficulty, from
Dinner to Dessert,
i mean 1 Star, 2 Stars, 3 Stars, but then 5 stars,
there should be a 4 Star map too. :/
(if you want i can make one for you ._.)

Lunch

00:02:217 - try to use something different, instead of this.
00:10:564 - same ^
00:18:912 - ^
00:27:259 - this gets repetetive
01:36:257 - these two are off, put them to 01:35:996 - and 01:37:040 -

The Rest
i don't know why, but i did just found 5 (if you consider, that one is repeating, then it's 2) things to mod ,
i don't know, if that's good or bad :/

Ooh, thank you! I'll apply these either later today or tomorrow!
But if you could make a 4 star difficulty for me that would be great!

Martinchooo wrote:

Hi~ I'm new at this so be gentle

Breakfast
00:00:000 (1,2,3) - Always use the distance snap, if you don't, it can be confusing for new player
00:04:695 (4) - Don't use long combos in a easy, NC here
00:08:348 (1) - Try to don't overlap
00:20:869 (4) - NC here
00:41:738 (1) - Don't overlap like this ;_;
00:43:825 (2,3,4,5) - I think this is too hard for an easy
00:50:085 (1) - This note is too close to the end of the spinner
00:54:781 (2) - Don't overlap
01:01:563 (7) - ^ Same here
01:23:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo is too long for an easy

Flo453_xP wrote:

3 Days and i can present this

"Flo453's Cake"

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31208
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56868
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.4

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Title:Spider Dance
TitleUnicode:Spider Dance
Artist:toby fox
ArtistUnicode:toby fox
Creator:kiwibikercookie
Version:Flo453's Cake
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Tags:undertale spider muffet rpg game dance sweets
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216,168,86084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,99127,12,4,100170,0:0:0:0:

I hope you like it

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

Dessert
00:45:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - OVERMAPPED TO THE EXTREME
This wasn't a serious mod, no kudosu pls.
You still need to fix that though.

kiwibikercookie wrote:

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

Dessert
00:45:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - OVERMAPPED TO THE EXTREME
This wasn't a serious mod, no kudosu pls.
You still need to fix that though.

Yeah I know I've been trying to think of something to replace that for so long
cries for ten years

Flo453_xP wrote:

i can help... Try this


Hope i could help

kiwibikercookie wrote:

Flo453_xP wrote:

i can help... Try this


Hope i could help

Ah, thank you! That did help. I used parts of that and edited the end a little bit.

Rizen wrote:

Hey, just popping in! o/

shortened

General

1. the bitrate of the mp3 file is too high! you need to reencode it down to 192kbps or else the mapset is unrankable! (this is to prevent large mapset sizes)
2. you must remove the audio track from the video file. This is also for the same reason as above
3. how custom hitsounds are used is that you have to enable them yourself in the timing section. This can be done by selecting "custom 1" in the timing section as shown here
4. maybe offset as -10 sounds better for timing?

Breakfast

1. 00:02:087 (2) - spacing here should be kept at 1.00x at both sides, +- 0.02
2. 00:18:772 (3) - I would not use a repeat slider which repeats more than one time in an easy difficulty. players would expect these sliders to only repeat once, so they would release after the first repeat, which kills their combo. The only time repeat sliders can repeat more than once is if the slider is long and the repeat sign is clearly visible to them with plenty of time
3. 00:20:859 (1) - I would also refrain from hiding these circles underneath sliders. It just makes it confusing for players as they have less time to find this object
4. 00:50:075 (1) - horizontal sliders such as this one are very uninteresting and bleh. I would consider styling it so it looks nicer such as (but not limited to) this
5. as this is the easiest difficulty, I would refrain from using rhythm patterns such as 01:23:475 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - as the consecutive circles may be too harsh for new players
6. 01:32:345 (2) - this huge difference in distance spacing is a no no, distance spacing in easier diffs such as easy and normal should always have consistent spacing.
7. 01:35:475 (5,6,7) - don't use 1/2 in easy, especially for 3 1/2 consecutive circles. too harsh for new players

Lunch

1. 00:00:521 (2,3) - the 3/2 gap in rhythm is will be way too difficult to play, especially for this song. I recommend placing a circle at the previous white tick place.
2. 00:10:564 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing should be even because it's rhythmically even. If this is a normal diff (and it is), spacing should be kept consistent throughout the entire diff
3. 00:18:912 (4,5) - too spaced out xd. I would of stacked slider head 5 on top of circle 4
4. 00:19:042 (5,6,1) - this rhythm here is very confusing. the spacing suggests that the rhythm spacing is consistent i.e. 1/4 1/4, but the timeline says otherwise. If you want to keep this rhythm, I would suggest moving circle 1 a little bit more out
5. 00:41:737 (5,1,2) - ^ again with the spacing making the rhythm confusing
6. 00:54:258 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders touching each other is very ugly and compact. I suggest spacing out the sliders a little more so there's a little gap in between each slider. By gap, I mean something like this
7. 01:13:562 (7,8) - too close to each other ;(
8. 01:15:127 (1) - sliders such as this aren't very good rhythmically. The repeat should land on a beat of significance, but it doesn't. something like 01:26:083 (4) - might be better
9. 01:31:822 (1,2,3) - even spacing pleaseee

General

1. still a lot of work needed to get this mapset into rankable condition. I suggest asking in #modhelp for help when you have questions and whatnot. Usually, there will be people there more than welcome to help you out (but sometimes they will be mean but ignore those people). You are also free to ask me questions ingame if you do have any.

good luck!