hi!!
[Oni]
00:05:425 (19) - maybe delete to go with singing?
00:06:878 (27,28,29) - k k d? sound is better~
00:07:523 (30,31,32) - only (d d)? for singing!
00:09:137 (38) - k?
00:19:464 (89,90,91) - make (kkk k) like the music (drums)!
01:19:490 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - maybe make (d k dd kd k d) to make different?
01:22:072 (77) - k?
01:33:689 (51) - d? (kdkはちょっと。。。)
01:36:110 (67) - make slider? for ああああああw
01:51:600 - なにも。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
02:28:713 (376) - k? more flow!
02:30:487 (391,392,393,394,395,396) - maybe (d kkd d k)?
02:32:262 (404,405) - kk? better stream i think..
you like to map singing huh? ww
[Muzukashii]
a lot of 1/4... too many!
maybe like this!:
(d k ddd d k d d k d d k k d)
one line: 1/4, other one, 1/2!
better for muzukashii i think... 1/4 confusing for new player...
00:40:602 (201) - stop at 00:41:247? then add notes after!
00:48:670 (33,34,35,36,37,38) - k d k d d k?
01:01:901 (92) -
http://puu.sh/hQdFb/22269ceca3.jpg ?
01:44:016 (32,33,34,35) - dkd k maybe better..
01:46:275 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) -
http://puu.sh/hQdFb/22269ceca3.jpg ?
ok! =w=d
[Fuutsu]
00:24:627 (52) - k!
いいだ!
[Kantan]
i think no big notes >< hard for new player...
but if big note is alone, that is ok!
たとえば: 01:02:547 (20) - no big note!
but good job!
i think the map is fun
がんばって!