Alright.
General
I want to suggest you to check the whole difficulty due you've used some changes of spacing but on some parts are quite confusing and inconsistent so you should fix that.
AR - 0.5 it doesn't works well on a Hard difficulty if you ask me.
Use 9 as AR.
Well I asked for some BNs opinions about the AR and we come the same conclusion about decrease it by - 3 so the AR be 9.3 also use 8 as OD as well.
General
- I'd like to suggest you to use my mp3/video to improve the quality also you can take my timing as well since there are some variations on it.
- This is a personal suggestion but you can take it if you want, what about to use this as background? it looks quite better if you ask me.
- About those last spinners I think it doesn't has enough time after the last note so I suggest you to starting them on the next tick.
I want to suggest you to check the whole difficulty due you've used some changes of spacing but on some parts are quite confusing and inconsistent so you should fix that.
- 00:50:065 (4) - Yeah I already know that you're trying to keep a consistent rhythm but if you ask me isn't that bad to try something different so what about to make like this?
- 00:54:725 (4) - Same as above. (take this as example but there are a couple of them that are similar so you can fix those as well.)
- 01:52:978 (2) - This is a bit outside of the mapping area so to avoid any possible disqualification I'd like to move it a couple of grids up.
- 02:02:298 (2) - Yes this one is unrankable.
- 00:16:570 (1) - What about shorten this slider by 1/2 and then adding a circle at this 00:17:153 - part? I think it fits better than a long slider if you ask me.
- 00:22:978 - Add something clickable here due vocals?
- 00:35:211 (2) - Yeah you should take a look at this note since the spacing is quite confusing. (You should apply the same thing to parts that are similar.)
- 01:37:832 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:23:852 (2,3,4) - I think that is a bad idea using stacks on a normal difficulty even if they fits with the song since it makes the pattern confusing for newbies players also if I'm not wrong you didn't used them until this part so it's makes a inconsistency tbh.
- 02:33:172 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
- 02:37:250 (5,1) - Stack them please, I found unnecessary a manual stacking with those two objects.
- 00:15:988 - I know that this is a easier Hard but still I found necessary to add a circle at this part since without nothing clickable here is kinda weird imo so how about to add a triple here?
- 00:27:347 (1) - You have a valid reason to add a NC here? because I see no reason to keep it as is since you're following the vocals so this looks like quite inconsistent with your NC patterns.
- 01:23:269 (1) - You're trying to follow the "AHHH" but it seems quite random for an advanced difficulty so I would like that you shorten this by 1 tick and everything could be fine.
- 01:55:017 - Clap?
- 01:59:968 (1) - Consider to remove this NC to keep the consistency with 00:45:114 (2) - this one.
AR - 0.5 it doesn't works well on a Hard difficulty if you ask me.
- 00:16:424 (1) - This is overmap so I suggest you to remove this circle since it doesn't follow nothing at the music/vocals so yeah.
- 00:34:920 (1,2) - I guess that this is a personal taste but don't you think that this looks quite random because you've used on the whole kiai a same spacing and at this part you just increased the spacing a bit so I'd like suggest you to reduce it.
- 00:35:356 (2,3) - Blanket?
- 00:58:803 (3,4,1) - Well isn't that bad but the rhythm here is just weird if you ask me so what about using this instead?
- 01:04:046 - You forgot to add a finish drum at this part.
- 01:23:269 (1) - Same thing that I've mentioned on the previous difficulty.
- 01:46:570 (2,3,1) - Make them with a proportional spacing each other, something like this maybe?
Use 9 as AR.
- Nothing to say,this one is so nice, you did a good job.
Well I asked for some BNs opinions about the AR and we come the same conclusion about decrease it by - 3 so the AR be 9.3 also use 8 as OD as well.
- The principal problem is this difficulty since you abused of the 1/4 sliders and that can be considered as overmapped also the jumps doesn't help at all btw the gap between Hard and Insane is quite huge if you ask me because 3.7 to 4.51 is unrankable, sadly that is the truth so you should add another difficulty there or at the least decrease the 1/4 spam on the Insane so I won't bubble it for those reasons.
- Your hitsounds is not that bad at all but sometimes it turned annoying for my ears, remember this is a 103 song that works with 206 of BPM and spamming 1/1 claps is so weird, I suggest you to remove some claps following the background could be a good option 02:19:774 - for example here you used claps when almost all of them makes no sense due the music at this part is soft, so using whistles instead claps could be good imo.
- Another thing that I want to drop here is about the higher SV on the Extra/Insane seriously 1.50 as SV is so exaggerated,quite random and hard to read at the first testplay but I guess that you won't to change that since you mapped it like this.
That's all, I hope you understand that I don't want to force myself to bubbled something that not making me feel sure so good luck for now.