1. Futsuu (2.33 stars, 293 notes)
2. Kantan (1.11 stars, 132 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3.31 stars, 596 notes)
4. Oni (5.1 stars, 931 notes)

mintong89 wrote:

Hi Elite Mapper

[Taiko Oni]
这star rating报错了吧, 明明那么容易 233

00:48:277 - & 00:48:448 - 这里加note? 后面你都跟这种的rhythm这里也跟吧?
00:57:534 (332) - k? 这里的声音pitch感觉比前一段高点
00:59:248 - 加note? 感觉note stream太短有点不爽... 這次就善良到底吧233
01:03:020 (369) - k, 一样
01:05:934 (387) - D? 听到了cymbal 爽
01:21:363 - => 01:21:706 - 感觉会毁了你的pattern不过我觉得这里跟歌的话kkddd会比较好 後來在別的mod有小改了

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:22:563 (85,86) - 感觉kk会比较好听而且比较好打, 后面一样的pattern都一样

accepted

其他都还可以
加油!

Firce777 wrote:

lol

_Gezo_ wrote:

Firce777 wrote:

lol

*blah

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Just leave an opinion here. Since this is the song for MBC#9, I'm not sure whether it is appropriate to submit this map before the beatmap contest is concluded.

Edit: OR is the submission already authorized? lol

1. 每個難度記得取消勾選Widescreen support
2. OD 和HP記得條一下,建議HP最低不低於4

qoot8123 wrote:

[General]

1. 每個難度記得取消勾選Widescreen support
2. OD 和HP記得條一下,建議HP最低不低於4

已改~

[ Kantan]

General

01:11:420 - ~01:33:363 - 這一段個futsuu落差有點大,建議放一點1/1像是這樣(01:11:420 - ~01:22:391 - )第2段也是
ok~ 已稍微縮小難度差距

[ Futsuu]

General

01:33:706 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - 個人覺得這裡可以跟鼓,像是這樣(01:33:363 - ~01:36:448 - ),後面也有類似的情況
這一段我已經在00:33:020 (57) - 用過了，keep it


[ Muzukashii]

General

00:55:306 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - 這裡也是有跟fuitsuu一樣跟vocal的pattern,建議還是跟鼓會比較好,例子(00:55:306 - ~00:57:706 - )第一個kiai幾乎都有相似的節奏,muzu這裡記得不要放太密集,要比第2個kiai還要簡單
我個人覺得跟vocal還是很不錯的，在第二個kiai的轉跟鼓點過程中也不會太違和，keep it
oni is fine.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Just leave an opinion here. Since this is the song for MBC#9, I'm not sure whether it is appropriate to submit this map before the beatmap contest is concluded.

Edit: OR is the submission already authorized? lol

• [Kantan]
  
  Consider HP-1 and OD-1 ? The difficulty settings across all difficulties will be more reasonable if this is employed.

1. 01:56:677 (60) - maybe d as you did at 00:23:420 (18) - ? The rhythms there are in fact very similar.
2. 02:02:163 (65) - same as ^

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:43:991 (85) - this is the only difficulty that the note is mapped as D. Consider removing finish for pattern consistency throughout the set ?
2. 01:05:934 (32) - similar reason as ^ , D would be better here.
3. From 01:11:077 to 01:59:420 - this part is mapped a way too dense for the difficulty. You may want to add some 2/1 breaks by deleting notes like 01:32:506 (83,84) -
4. 01:33:363 (86) - consider changing this note to D ? This could mark the change in song rhythm nicely like Kantan and Oni.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:22:048 (83) - Inconsistency of finishes also occurs here. Consider using d instead like the other three difficulties ?
2. From 00:26:163 to 00:27:534 - Although the representation of the music would be weakened, the current pattern could be simplified like this for a 2/1 break since the part from 00:00:106 to 00:43:991 - is rather dense: (cursor at 00:26:848 - )
3. From 00:31:648 to 00:33:020 - same as ^
4. 01:08:506 (270) - you may delete this note since the music here is less prominent than the others.
5. 01:32:506 (402,403,404,405) - same as Futsuu, it would be better to leave a 2/1 break by deleting these notes since the kiai is really consecutively mapped.
6. 01:33:363 (407) - same as Futsuu

• [Oni]
  
  Looks solid.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Thanks for the clarification.

[General]

The current BG size is 1200 x 600. Consider changing the size to either 4:3 or a widescreen equivalent?

• [Kantan]
  
  Consider HP-1 and OD-1 ? The difficulty settings across all difficulties will be more reasonable if this is employed.

1. 01:56:677 (60) - maybe d as you did at 00:23:420 (18) - ? The rhythms there are in fact very similar. ok
2. 02:02:163 (65) - same as ^ ok

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:43:991 (85) - this is the only difficulty that the note is mapped as D. Consider removing finish for pattern consistency throughout the set ?
2. 01:05:934 (32) - similar reason as ^ , D would be better here.
3. From 01:11:077 to 01:59:420 - this part is mapped a way too dense for the difficulty. You may want to add some 2/1 breaks by deleting notes like 01:32:506 (83,84) - deleted some notes~
4. 01:33:363 (86) - consider changing this note to D ? This could mark the change in song rhythm nicely like Kantan and Oni. ok

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:22:048 (83) - Inconsistency of finishes also occurs here. Consider using d instead like the other three difficulties ?
2. From 00:26:163 to 00:27:534 - Although the representation of the music would be weakened, the current pattern could be simplified like this for a 2/1 break since the part from 00:00:106 to 00:43:991 - is rather dense: (cursor at 00:26:848 - )
3. From 00:31:648 to 00:33:020 - same as ^
4. 01:08:506 (270) - you may delete this note since the music here is less prominent than the others.
5. 01:32:506 (402,403,404,405) - same as Futsuu, it would be better to leave a 2/1 break by deleting these notes since the kiai is really consecutively mapped.
6. 01:33:363 (407) - same as Futsuu ok

• [Oni]
  
  Looks solid.

Feel free to call me when you have got enough mods.

Nwolf wrote:

blah woof

Note that this mod contains mainly deletions and finishers so only kd this if you really think this deserves it. If I get to do a 2nd mod it will probably include less of that stuff and more ~colors~.

[General]

Add "LapFox Trax" and maybe also "Renard" to tags (1st cause that's his label for all the aliases). added

[Futsuu]

Mostly pretty fine, the only issue is the 2nd kiai which has to be nerfed drastically. It needs 2/1 breaks to split patterns and somewhere down the middle a 4/1 break as... break. This will lead to less 1/2 which is another thing we want. Try to aim for a maximum length of 7-15 1/1 notes. This is also more drastic in the first part of the 2nd kiai (up to where the vocals start).

[Muzukashii]

To have a nicer build up and less repeating stuff in the intro (probably going to mod the lower diffs here too but Muzukashii first) you could delete following notes:

00:12:277 (40) - 00:15:020 (52) - 00:17:763 (64) - 00:20:506 (76) - . After that change 00:15:791 (55) - 00:21:277 (79) - to kats to differ it from previous quads. deleted

00:52:220 (209) - Change to kat cause pitch. weff ok
01:09:363 - Try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3207138 this. It is based a bit on how Oni did it: Reducing notes a bit and then adding some again. This will also create more 2/1 breaks.

In the 2nd kiai I would suggest following deletions to create breaks: 01:12:448 (286,287) - 01:17:934 (318,319) - 01:23:420 (350,351) - 01:28:906 (382,383) - 01:33:020 (406) - , after the kiai: 02:00:020 (531) - 02:05:506 (557) -


02:16:906 (618,619,620) - Change to kat to make 02:17:248 (621) - more playable. While we're at it, 00:43:648 (192,193,194,195) - here too (including adding a finisher) :3

[Oni + Finishers below]

Following changes deletions recommend in Oni which will be connected to the following finisher additions:

00:32:934 (174) - 00:43:906 (268) - (also trade 00:43:734 (266,267) - ) 01:22:306 (507) - 02:17:163 (930) - (02:16:991 (928,929) - also trade these)



FINISHERS: I would recommend adding more finishers to all diffs to emphasis the crashes more. Especially in transitions between different parts of the song I would recommend finishers. Some of these finishers might already exist in some diffs.

00:00:106 - (important) 00:11:077 - 00:22:048 - 00:33:020 - 00:43:991 - (very important) 00:54:963 - 01:05:934 - (very important) 01:11:420 - 01:22:391 (508) - 01:33:363 - 01:44:334 - 01:55:306 - (important) 02:06:277 - 02:17:248 - (important)
more finishers now