Thanks Blocko >w<Blocko wrote:
shin shin shin shin
[General]
- Preview time conflicts with AL's INFINITE detected by AiMod, might wanna fix that.[NOVICE]7K Column wrote:
1|2|3|4|5|6|7
- You might wanna nerf this diff to below 2 stars, as it's unrankable if the lowest difficulty is over 2 stars.
- As a nerfing suggestion, you can remove the 1/4 notes or turn those to 1/2 to reduce the star rating. Or you could reduce/remove some notes to lower that.
00:57:648 to 01:19:343 - Try having more patterns here to add variety to the difficulty. Having these types of patterns like http://puu.sh/etxxz/286610dd64.jpg and http://puu.sh/etxG7/d2825d3196.jpg would really add fun to the difficulty in my opinion.
01:20:699 - Add a note here for the bell
01:24:766 to 01:27:478 - Same suggestion about the patterns, rearranging them would add a lot of variety here.
01:31:885 (91885|2,92224|2) - Move these to 2 to make the pattern symmetrical.
[ADVANCED]
00:08:326 (8326|0) - Move to 6 for a better pattern flow
00:25:783 - Add a note for the prominent instrument here
01:24:201 (84201|6) - Snap the LN's ending to 01:24:343 - using 1/12 Beat Snap Divisor.
01:27:309 (87309|2,87393|3) - Move these 1 column to the right then 01:27:478 (87478|4,87648|2,87817|4) - Ctrl + H to make it less confusing to read for players at this level.
01:34:936 (94936|4) - End the LN here on 01:35:105 - to make it less confusing to read and easier to do
[EXHAUST]
00:00:783 - Add a note at 2 for the kick/vocal
00:01:122 - Same suggestion as above, but on 6.
00:10:021 (10021|0,10063|1,10105|2,10148|3) - The vocal's in 1/6 but these are in 1/8, so it'd be better to turn the notes to 1/6 for the vocal instead.
00:13:665 to 00:14:258 - Maybe try an alternating pattern here, like this: http://puu.sh/etsvJ/1cc83e4e5e.png
00:19:343 (19343|3) - Move to 3 for better synth
00:25:699 - Missed a note here
00:25:783 - Missed note here
00:30:529 (30529|5,30614|4,30699|3,30783|2,30868|1,31037|5,31122|4,31207|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:31:885 (31885|1) - It'd be better to end this LN at 00:32:054 - to make it easier to execute
00:37:732 - Missed a note for the vocal here
00:40:783 (40783|4,40783|2) - I don't really hear a sound that these two notes emphasize. Remove?
00:44:936 - Add a note here for the kick (barely audible, though)
00:52:224 - Add a note for the kick here. Same suggestion for this on 00:52:902 - , 00:53:580 - , and 00:54:258 - .
01:00:190 - Add note for the sound heard here
01:05:614 - Same suggestion as above, but on 2.
01:11:037 - Here, too
01:12:902 (72902|3) - Move to 6 for better pattern flow
01:32:902 - Add a note here for the crash
01:45:105 - Same suggestion as above
[AL's INFINITE]
hi archer
00:01:037 (1037|0) - Move to 2 then 00:01:122 (1122|1) - move to 6 for hand balance
00:03:071 (3071|6,3156|0) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:04:173 - I think you missed a note here.
00:09:004 (9004|1) - I assume that column 2 is for the kick here, so move this note to 3 for better representation for the kick.
00:09:766 (9766|1,9851|1) - Don't really know the reason why this is mini-jacked. Move 00:09:766 (9766|1) - to 1 to remove it
00:14:004 (14004|1,14088|5,14173|1) - Move these three closer to the 4th column by 1 column each for a complete alternating pattern
00:24:512 (24512|1) - Move to 6 for comfortability
00:36:546 (36546|6) - Move to 3 for hand balance
00:40:699 (40699|3) - Move this to 2 for better pattern flow
00:55:614 to 00:56:292 - You could double stream this since the vocal and the kicks are strong enough for that
01:00:699 (60699|2) - Move to 7 so for note count balance on both hands
01:02:563 - Missing note here
01:12:224 - Add a note here for the kick
01:28:326 - Add a note here for the kick again
01:52:563 to 01:53:241 - Same suggestion about double streaming. Since the song is ending with a big finish, I recommend double streaming this here to give it a better buildup for the finisher.
[GRAVITY]
- I really really like the fun patterns here. Nice job!
- Reduce OD to 8 since there's quite a lot of LNs here.
- Since you said that this is an Extra difficulty, you seem to be missing some notes for the 'wubs' here. Listen carefully to the song. Hear the 'wubs' at every other red line? You can add notes to it since it's alright for an Extra difficulty. For example, there's one right here 00:03:580 - , and one right there 00:03:919 - , and here 00:04:258 - , 00:04:597 - , and so on. Use this suggestion at the right parts of the song, though.
- Keep in mind that the suggestion above will make the map harder and bring it close to the [X] icon as possible.
00:04:936 (4936|4,5021|3) - Move 1 column to the left for better pattern flow
00:05:190 (5190|1,5275|2,5360|3) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy, somewhat.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 00:05:444 (5444|4) - to 4 for better flow
00:06:800 (6800|2,7139|4) - Move to 2, 6 for comfortability
00:10:021 (10021|0,10063|1,10105|2,10148|3) - This is actually 1/6 from what I'm hearing using 25% playback.
00:12:309 (12309|2,12393|3) - Ctrl + J for the pitch?
00:25:190 (25190|2,25275|1,25360|0) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy.
00:31:885 - How about this pattern: http://puu.sh/etfrd/9684fa40b4.png It follows the pitch quite well while keeping the LN concept in.
00:33:410 (33410|5) - This note's actually on 1/8 but you can keep it like that if you don't want it harder.
00:33:919 to 00:34:936 - The 1/8 LNs there are really hard to get 300s/300gs on because of the 'press and release' timing. Consider turning these into regular 1/8 notes instead to make it easier to get 300s/300gs on.
00:38:326 (38326|0,38495|6) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:39:004 (39004|3,39060|4,39117|6) - This should be on 1/8 from what I'm hearing with 25% playback.
00:39:597 (39597|1) - Move to 1 then 00:39:639 (39639|0,39682|1,39724|2,39766|3,39809|4,39851|5) - Move these 1 column to the right to prevent hammer/minijack on 2.
00:41:800 (41800|1) - Remove? I don't really hear a sound that emphasizes this note.
00:42:987 (42987|4) - Move to 3 for hand balance for the right hand.
00:44:597 (44597|3) - Move note to 3 for comfortability
00:55:021 (55021|3) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:402 (55402|4) - Move this to 00:55:444 - , since the vocal starts at that point.
00:57:648 to 01:43:749 - Some of the 1/2 LNs here are actually 1/4 regular notes if you listen closely, like 00:58:156 (58156|6) - , 00:58:834 (58834|0) - and 00:59:512 (59512|3) - . I'd suggest to change those 1/2 LNs to regular 1/4 notes to give the map a better technical aspect.
01:00:190 - Add a note here so it doesn't really feel empty for this moment, and for the 'wubs'
01:09:512 (69512|2) - Move to 2 for better pattern synergy
01:11:037 - Add a note here so it's not as empty as before, and for the 'wub' sound effect
01:29:004 (89004|2) - Move to 4 so columns 3, 4 and 5 have some pitch relevancy going into it
01:29:682 (89682|4,89682|1,89766|3,89766|0) - Ctrl + J for the pitch
01:30:190 (90190|1) - Move this note to 6 for comfortability
01:30:868 (90868|1) - Move to 1, same reason as above
01:36:885 (96885|6) - Move to 5 then 01:36:970 (96970|5) - move to 7 to give it another type of pattern
01:37:987 (97987|4) - Move this to 6 for flow
01:45:614 (105614|3) - Move note to 6 for comfortability
01:50:190 (110190|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
01:51:546 to 01:51:885 - You could double stream this part since there're two instruments there, with the drums and the other sound.
Alright, I guess that's all I have for now.
Good luck!
Im sorry i cant reply all ur mod T_T but thanks xD
oh yeah i accept it ^^wagara wrote:
Hello!![]()
If it's good, please consult.![]()
ADVANCED
01:46:461 - add note
01:47:139 - ^
01:47:817 - ^
01:48:156 - ^
01:48:495 - ^
I think it's better to push 3 at the same time.![]()
For example.
01:46:461 (106461|6,106461|3,106461|0) -
01:47:139 (107139|5,107139|3,107139|1) -
01:47:817 (107817|6,107817|3,107817|0) -
01:48:156 (108156|5,108156|3,108156|1) -
01:48:495 (108495|6,108495|3,108495|0) -
How about this?![]()
I think it's very good!
good luck
UPDATED ALL DIFFArcherLove wrote:
@blocko : all applied thanks!
update http://puu.sh/ey3nF/2afe494c4c.txt