ArcherLove wrote:

thx I applied most
"hear harder" maybe the appripriated word hehe
00:25:027 (25027|3,25790|2) - Is this intended? <-

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi here's Mod for your chart owo/

Notice that i try to follow your mapping, cz your style is my priority. It's fine to reject most of it but plz give a reason why

[General]

1.BG should be 1280x768 so it will fit on computer screen around the world // Whoa !
2.Audio Preview Conflict with AL's INFINITE // yeah will fix it soon xD
3.Unsnapped Preview Time on Shinzo diff // ^
4.A lot of Unsnapped Inherited Point on some Diff // yeah, just change the offset and didnt fix all the SV xD
Prove:

[GRAVITY]

00:02:139 (2139|4,2309|4) - According to the pitch, move those to 4 n 6

00:03:834 (3834|6,3919|5) - Move this to 2 n 3 to create a stair as yours // jack ? T_T

00:06:546 (6546|1,6631|2,6715|3) - Move this stair to 4 cz it's pitch was different with the last stair

00:09:258 (9258|5) - Move to 4
00:12:309 (12309|2) - Move to 5

00:13:071 (13071|2) - Move to 1 cz has a same beat

00:13:665 - This trill looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2417739 // sorry maybe not matching with the sound xD

00:14:682 (14682|1) - Move to 4 zigzag looks fit on it

00:18:665 (18665|0,18665|4) - You can change this into short LN // maybe no cause it follow the bass

00:21:207 (21207|4,21461|2) - Ctrl+H

00:23:071 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2417755 ring trill (6767) is not suits unless it has high pitch on it

00:25:699 (25699|6) - Move to 5 // jack ?
00:29:258 (29258|1) - Move to 3 // re-arranged xD u can see the result when i update ^^
00:29:343 (29343|6) - Move to 5

00:35:444 - Can you do this Trill?

00:50:953 (50953|2,51037|3,51122|4,51207|5,51376|4) - Ctrl+H

00:55:021 - add to 4
01:08:071 - ^

01:13:919 (73919|1) - Delete, and add to 1 n 3 ,improved chord from before

01:44:512 - add to 4 missing beat

[EXHAUST]

00:08:665 (8665|4,8665|6) - Ctrl+H that was't same beat

00:19:512 (19512|6) - Move to 6

00:40:105 (40105|0,40105|3) - Move to white line below
00:40:275 - Add to 5 // sorry it has a same bea with before
00:40:529 - Add to |3|5| // ^
00:40:614 (40614|3,40614|0) - Move to white line above

01:13:410 (73410|2,73580|4) - Ctrl+J escalating Jack

01:17:478 (77478|1,77478|5,77817|1,77817|5) - Change it into |3|5|

01:20:021 (80021|3) - Change it into |2|6| for perfect clap

01:23:919 (83919|3) - Change it into |3|5|

01:53:580 (113580|0) - Move to 2 and add to 3 // no sorry 3 is enough xD
01:53:919 (113919|4) - Move to 7 and add to 2

// ^
[ADVANCED]

00:13:326 (13326|5) - Move to 5 to avoid use ring finger

00:22:393 - add to 4 to accent the crash

00:35:783 (35783|0) - Move to 3, trill here

01:13:241 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2418059

01:15:275 - add to 4 to accent crash
01:16:631 - ^
01:17:309 - ^

01:17:987 - add to 1 n 4

01:20:360 (80360|6) - move to 3 // sorry didnt have asame sound with the LN before

01:20:529 (80529|0,80614|1) - Move to 5 n 6 // terlalu berat di kanan

01:21:885 (81885|3) - Move to 5 and add to 4 on blue line // sorry following the bass

01:24:766 - add to 1
01:30:190 - ^

01:32:902 - add to 7

01:46:292 (106292|2) - you can change it into short LN and delete 01:46:376 (106376|3)

[NOVICE]

00:13:241 (13241|3,13326|5) - Ctrl+J

00:21:970 (21970|2,21970|0) - Ctrl+H beat was different with the last one

00:40:868 - add chord on col |3|5|
00:41:207 - ^

00:44:597 - add chord on col |2|6|

00:47:139 - add to 7
00:47:817 - ^
00:48:495 - ^
00:49:173 - ^
00:49:851 - add to 1
00:50:529 - ^
00:51:207 - add to 7
^ dont let this empty while there's instrument on this section

01:02:563 - Add to 5
01:10:699 - ^

01:32:902 - add to 6 for crash

01:49:512 (109512|1,109512|5) - Move to 1 n 7
01:50:190 (110190|1,110190|5) - Move to 3 n 5
01:50:529 - add to 4
01:50:868 (110868|1,110868|5) - Move to 1 n 7
01:51:546 (111546|1,111546|5) - Move to 3 n 5
^ better than non stop |2|6| chords

01:53:580 (113580|2,113919|4) - Ctrl+J escalating Beat, so use escalating jack

I Hope this helps you
Sorry that my mod is too short

Good Luck~ more SDVX plzzz

Remillion Cross wrote:

Because i'm so handsome, i will help your mapset // wkwkwk lol
Hi all, looks like your map has well-mapped so i think my mod shouldn't be helpful for you.
Mod requested from Shinzo-

Note that some mods will probably change your style, so you can freely ignore them if you didn't like, nor agree with my mods. i'm just help you *peace*

[General]

- Audio preview times conflict in AL's INFINITE diff. Check this out // oh yeah -_- forgot this
- BG recommended is 1366x768, 1024x768, and 800x600 pixels. Your BG seems didn't fit, but i didn't know if your size of BG was still allowed somehow. oh i didn't mentioned as what DE-CADE say in his mods in this thread, sorry
- Where is the hitsound ?

// waiting

Let's begin with the hardest diff, then the harder. so-so, easy, and the easiest diff, because i lovee the way you map this song yeyy

[GRAVITY]

- GOOD JOB man !!! HP 9 OD 9 wahahahah i wuv u <3333 /forget this anyway
- i'm suprised with your style. it awesome for me o-o

- 00:17:648 (17648|2) - put this to 1st column, it could be better
- i would never recommended put the reallly small slider like this 00:34:851 (34851|2), and change into circles, but it's okay if you like it // sorry but i didnt like it xD
- 00:36:461 - put a circle to 1st column, it for represent the beat (you do the same thing in 00:39:173 (39173|5))
- 00:41:037 (41037|5) - you can change this into slider that ends at 00:41:376
- 00:56:631 (56631|3,56800|1,56885|5) - these slider should ends at 00:57:309 , but remind if there's another sound that can be add by something, here for a suggestion : http://puu.sh/eiatr/d7dad0d5b9.png // better to just make a SV
- 01:09:682 - a suggestion too : http://puu.sh/eiaGL/72298142f7.jpg
- 01:10:190 - suggestion, again (also for a pitch relevancy) : http://puu.sh/eiaW3/37e8bfe32a.jpg
- 01:40:331 - add a circle in 3rd or 5th column // maybe no x_x (based by 1/12 snap divisor, fuu this song was so strange) // yup wkwkwk

Note : actually, there have so many potential to make this map harder and even reach the X star rating (if you notice something from 01:08:495 to 01:42:054 , but that's okay.

[EXHAUST]

- is this a Hard or Insane diff ? so many double stairs but that's good
- is this hard, then HP 8 OD 8 shouldn't the good choice ;; change to HP 8 OD 7, or HP 7 OD 8, or HP 7.5 OD 7.5

- 00:23:834 (23834|0) - delete this circle since it isn't necesarry in this diff
- 00:25:360 - add the circle in 3rd column, you can't just ignore this even if it's EXHAUST diff (remind if you also do in 00:30:529)
- nice pattern, didn't see anything wrong again

[ADVANCE]

- From 00:31:715 to 00:32:224 - the pattern should like http://puu.sh/eie2J/00a3c76ac0.jpg (for pitch relevancy)
- ew didn't see anything wrong here. nice~

[NOVICE]

- great, didn't see anything wrong again

Good, you map was great, so it took me not so long time for mod this.
Good luck~ i hope you make something special map again, Shinzo-

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Shinzonyan
mod ready
... mod

17VA wrote:

[AL's INFINITE]



00:34:258 (34258|2,34258|5) - no strong beat but two notes? delete one and rearrange here. // it's violin ~ maybe will change to short note :3 /

00:44:936 - right hand part is more empty than left hand part. move some notes to right hand part.

00:47:478 (47478|2,48156|2) - ~~ looks uncomfortable for me. move these notes to 2nd column.

01:01:037 - http://puu.sh/e6FxZ/6f31bb1ff9.jpg

01:27:817 - how about this ? http://puu.sh/e6FLV/57ce5f45cb.jpg

Remillion Cross wrote:

[AL's INFINITE]
[notice]- seems your pattern hasn't consistent, but this is just a not necessary problem.
- nice LN yesh

- From 00:07:817 to 00:08:156 - the right pitch for me should like http://puu.sh/ei3fR/3843312f12.png
- 00:59:512 - just a suggestion http://puu.sh/ei5uL/cd82d328aa.png
- 01:23:919 (83919|1,84088|3) - *gulp* you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for this. (suggestion : http://puu.sh/ei6HX/4051230539.jpg. i know, the sound between it has already tricks you, so you think if using 1/4 was a right thing in there.)

ArcherLove wrote:

BOOOYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
:u

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Shinzonyan
mod ready
... mod

shana so mean not modding my GD ;~;

17VA wrote:

[AL's INFINITE]



00:34:258 (34258|2,34258|5) - no strong beat but two notes? delete one and rearrange here. // it's violin ~ maybe will change to short note :3 /

00:44:936 - right hand part is more empty than left hand part. move some notes to right hand part.

00:47:478 (47478|2,48156|2) - ~~ looks uncomfortable for me. move these notes to 2nd column.

01:01:037 - http://puu.sh/e6FxZ/6f31bb1ff9.jpg

01:27:817 - how about this ? http://puu.sh/e6FLV/57ce5f45cb.jpg

puush ded can't apply your mod with puush, will do it later ok!

Remillion Cross wrote:

[AL's INFINITE]
[notice]- seems your pattern hasn't consistent, but this is just a not necessary problem.
- nice LN yesh

- From 00:07:817 to 00:08:156 - the right pitch for me should like http://puu.sh/ei3fR/3843312f12.png
- 00:59:512 - just a suggestion http://puu.sh/ei5uL/cd82d328aa.png
- 01:23:919 (83919|1,84088|3) - *gulp* you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for this. (suggestion : http://puu.sh/ei6HX/4051230539.jpg. i know, the sound between it has already tricks you, so you think if using 1/4 was a right thing in there.)

http://puu.sh/esk81/b81dc0dc3d.txt
updateeeee~
all applied (puush thing)

7K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Blocko wrote:

shin shin shin shin

[General]
- Preview time conflicts with AL's INFINITE detected by AiMod, might wanna fix that.

7K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[NOVICE]
- You might wanna nerf this diff to below 2 stars, as it's unrankable if the lowest difficulty is over 2 stars.
- As a nerfing suggestion, you can remove the 1/4 notes or turn those to 1/2 to reduce the star rating. Or you could reduce/remove some notes to lower that.

00:57:648 to 01:19:343 - Try having more patterns here to add variety to the difficulty. Having these types of patterns like http://puu.sh/etxxz/286610dd64.jpg and http://puu.sh/etxG7/d2825d3196.jpg would really add fun to the difficulty in my opinion.
01:20:699 - Add a note here for the bell
01:24:766 to 01:27:478 - Same suggestion about the patterns, rearranging them would add a lot of variety here.
01:31:885 (91885|2,92224|2) - Move these to 2 to make the pattern symmetrical.


[ADVANCED]
00:08:326 (8326|0) - Move to 6 for a better pattern flow
00:25:783 - Add a note for the prominent instrument here
01:24:201 (84201|6) - Snap the LN's ending to 01:24:343 - using 1/12 Beat Snap Divisor.
01:27:309 (87309|2,87393|3) - Move these 1 column to the right then 01:27:478 (87478|4,87648|2,87817|4) - Ctrl + H to make it less confusing to read for players at this level.
01:34:936 (94936|4) - End the LN here on 01:35:105 - to make it less confusing to read and easier to do


[EXHAUST]
00:00:783 - Add a note at 2 for the kick/vocal
00:01:122 - Same suggestion as above, but on 6.
00:10:021 (10021|0,10063|1,10105|2,10148|3) - The vocal's in 1/6 but these are in 1/8, so it'd be better to turn the notes to 1/6 for the vocal instead.
00:13:665 to 00:14:258 - Maybe try an alternating pattern here, like this: http://puu.sh/etsvJ/1cc83e4e5e.png
00:19:343 (19343|3) - Move to 3 for better synth
00:25:699 - Missed a note here
00:25:783 - Missed note here
00:30:529 (30529|5,30614|4,30699|3,30783|2,30868|1,31037|5,31122|4,31207|3) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:31:885 (31885|1) - It'd be better to end this LN at 00:32:054 - to make it easier to execute
00:37:732 - Missed a note for the vocal here
00:40:783 (40783|4,40783|2) - I don't really hear a sound that these two notes emphasize. Remove?
00:44:936 - Add a note here for the kick (barely audible, though)
00:52:224 - Add a note for the kick here. Same suggestion for this on 00:52:902 - , 00:53:580 - , and 00:54:258 - .
01:00:190 - Add note for the sound heard here
01:05:614 - Same suggestion as above, but on 2.
01:11:037 - Here, too
01:12:902 (72902|3) - Move to 6 for better pattern flow
01:32:902 - Add a note here for the crash
01:45:105 - Same suggestion as above


[AL's INFINITE]
hi archer

00:01:037 (1037|0) - Move to 2 then 00:01:122 (1122|1) - move to 6 for hand balance
00:03:071 (3071|6,3156|0) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:04:173 - I think you missed a note here.
00:09:004 (9004|1) - I assume that column 2 is for the kick here, so move this note to 3 for better representation for the kick.
00:09:766 (9766|1,9851|1) - Don't really know the reason why this is mini-jacked. Move 00:09:766 (9766|1) - to 1 to remove it
00:14:004 (14004|1,14088|5,14173|1) - Move these three closer to the 4th column by 1 column each for a complete alternating pattern
00:24:512 (24512|1) - Move to 6 for comfortability
00:36:546 (36546|6) - Move to 3 for hand balance
00:40:699 (40699|3) - Move this to 2 for better pattern flow
00:55:614 to 00:56:292 - You could double stream this since the vocal and the kicks are strong enough for that
01:00:699 (60699|2) - Move to 7 so for note count balance on both hands
01:02:563 - Missing note here
01:12:224 - Add a note here for the kick
01:28:326 - Add a note here for the kick again
01:52:563 to 01:53:241 - Same suggestion about double streaming. Since the song is ending with a big finish, I recommend double streaming this here to give it a better buildup for the finisher.


[GRAVITY]
- I really really like the fun patterns here. Nice job!
- Reduce OD to 8 since there's quite a lot of LNs here.
- Since you said that this is an Extra difficulty, you seem to be missing some notes for the 'wubs' here. Listen carefully to the song. Hear the 'wubs' at every other red line? You can add notes to it since it's alright for an Extra difficulty. For example, there's one right here 00:03:580 - , and one right there 00:03:919 - , and here 00:04:258 - , 00:04:597 - , and so on. Use this suggestion at the right parts of the song, though.
- Keep in mind that the suggestion above will make the map harder and bring it close to the [X] icon as possible.

00:04:936 (4936|4,5021|3) - Move 1 column to the left for better pattern flow
00:05:190 (5190|1,5275|2,5360|3) - Ctrl + J for pitch relevancy, somewhat.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 00:05:444 (5444|4) - to 4 for better flow
00:06:800 (6800|2,7139|4) - Move to 2, 6 for comfortability
00:10:021 (10021|0,10063|1,10105|2,10148|3) - This is actually 1/6 from what I'm hearing using 25% playback.
00:12:309 (12309|2,12393|3) - Ctrl + J for the pitch?
00:25:190 (25190|2,25275|1,25360|0) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy.
00:31:885 - How about this pattern: http://puu.sh/etfrd/9684fa40b4.png It follows the pitch quite well while keeping the LN concept in.
00:33:410 (33410|5) - This note's actually on 1/8 but you can keep it like that if you don't want it harder.
00:33:919 to 00:34:936 - The 1/8 LNs there are really hard to get 300s/300gs on because of the 'press and release' timing. Consider turning these into regular 1/8 notes instead to make it easier to get 300s/300gs on.
00:38:326 (38326|0,38495|6) - Ctrl + H for pitch relevancy
00:39:004 (39004|3,39060|4,39117|6) - This should be on 1/8 from what I'm hearing with 25% playback.
00:39:597 (39597|1) - Move to 1 then 00:39:639 (39639|0,39682|1,39724|2,39766|3,39809|4,39851|5) - Move these 1 column to the right to prevent hammer/minijack on 2.
00:41:800 (41800|1) - Remove? I don't really hear a sound that emphasizes this note.
00:42:987 (42987|4) - Move to 3 for hand balance for the right hand.
00:44:597 (44597|3) - Move note to 3 for comfortability
00:55:021 (55021|3) - Move to 2, same reason as above
00:55:402 (55402|4) - Move this to 00:55:444 - , since the vocal starts at that point.
00:57:648 to 01:43:749 - Some of the 1/2 LNs here are actually 1/4 regular notes if you listen closely, like 00:58:156 (58156|6) - , 00:58:834 (58834|0) - and 00:59:512 (59512|3) - . I'd suggest to change those 1/2 LNs to regular 1/4 notes to give the map a better technical aspect.
01:00:190 - Add a note here so it doesn't really feel empty for this moment, and for the 'wubs'
01:09:512 (69512|2) - Move to 2 for better pattern synergy
01:11:037 - Add a note here so it's not as empty as before, and for the 'wub' sound effect
01:29:004 (89004|2) - Move to 4 so columns 3, 4 and 5 have some pitch relevancy going into it
01:29:682 (89682|4,89682|1,89766|3,89766|0) - Ctrl + J for the pitch
01:30:190 (90190|1) - Move this note to 6 for comfortability
01:30:868 (90868|1) - Move to 1, same reason as above
01:36:885 (96885|6) - Move to 5 then 01:36:970 (96970|5) - move to 7 to give it another type of pattern
01:37:987 (97987|4) - Move this to 6 for flow
01:45:614 (105614|3) - Move note to 6 for comfortability
01:50:190 (110190|3) - Move to 3, same reason as above
01:51:546 to 01:51:885 - You could double stream this part since there're two instruments there, with the drums and the other sound.


Alright, I guess that's all I have for now.
Good luck!

wagara wrote:

Hello!
If it's good, please consult.

ADVANCED

01:46:461 - add note
01:47:139 - ^
01:47:817 - ^
01:48:156 - ^
01:48:495 - ^

I think it's better to push 3 at the same time.

For example.
01:46:461 (106461|6,106461|3,106461|0) -
01:47:139 (107139|5,107139|3,107139|1) -
01:47:817 (107817|6,107817|3,107817|0) -
01:48:156 (108156|5,108156|3,108156|1) -
01:48:495 (108495|6,108495|3,108495|0) -
How about this?

I think it's very good!
good luck

ArcherLove wrote:

@blocko : all applied thanks!
update http://puu.sh/ey3nF/2afe494c4c.txt

Brian_Ex wrote:

Hitsound Done

Okay Hitsound AL's INFINITE ALL DONE

>HERE<

pporse wrote:

hi~ shinzo :3 from pm

btw my last name is shin :3
so whenever i see ur name, i feel familiar to you lol

this mod has lots of my suggestions
so, if you are not satisfied with the suggestion, plz kick it

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

GO!

[NOVICE]
00:13:319 (13319|3) - move to 5th column

00:13:658 (13658|4) - move to 4th column
00:13:912 (13912|2) - delete
this diff is NOVICE. I hope you make this map easier.

00:18:997 (18997|0) - change to normal note
umm..i don't think that LN is necessary

00:19:675 - 00:22:217 - umm...this pattern is too spread
it gives a confusing to figure out the exact timing for novices.
how about this?


00:46:115 (46115|5) - move to 00:46:454 -
umm..i know why u used it in there.
but i think..it is sufficient, even if only one LN
and need to 1/1 LN at 00:46:454 -

00:59:505 (59505|0) - move to 3rd column

01:01:708 (61708|2,61878|4,62047|1,62217|3) - Ctrl+J
it's just suggestion. :3

01:04:590 (64590|4) - move to 6th column
01:04:759 (64759|2) - move to 5th column
01:05:098 (65098|1) - move to 3rd column

01:10:522 (70522|0,70692|1) - move to 4th & 5th column

01:15:268 - 01:16:285 - too spread
this pattern is really hard for novices.
if the pattern is too spread, they are hard to find the exact timing.
You have to make it a little more so that they are easy to find the exact timing.
for example,


01:54:251 (114251|3) - change to normal note

[ADVANCED]
00:02:725 (2725|5) - delete
00:03:403 - add note on 6th column
hmm..actually i don't think that this LN is necessary.

00:08:064 (8064|3) - delete
00:08:658 (8658|2) - move to 2nd column
00:10:098 (10098|1) - delete
00:11:115 (11115|3) - delete

00:13:234 (13234|6) - move to 6th column

00:13:912 (13912|3) - hmm...actually i hope that u use drum roll sound in this part.

00:18:912 (18912|5) - delete
00:19:505 (19505|4,19505|6) - move to 4th & 6th column

01:24:420 (84420|4) - misplaced?

00:24:844 (24844|1) - move to 5th column
00:25:014 (25014|3) - ^

00:27:980 (27980|4) - change to normal note and move to 2nd column
00:28:064 - add note on 5th column

00:29:166 - 00:30:522 - hmm..when i played, i felt little awkward in this part.
how about this?

just suggestion :3

00:38:319 (38319|1) - change to 1/2 LN

00:57:725 - 01:00:437 - 01:02:641 - 01:03:149 - 01:04:336 - 01:05:861 -
01:08:573 - 01:09:759 - 01:10:437 - 01:11:285 - 01:13:997 -
i think..it need to add note
this diff is almost 2.80
it's okay even if adding note.

01:18:997 - add 1/1 LN on 4th column

01:39:675 - how about this?


01:54:251 (114251|3) - change to normal note or endpoint until 01:55:946 -

[EXHAUST]
00:38:107 (38107|4,38234|4,38361|4) - misplaced
00:38:107 (38107|4) - move to 00:38:093 - (1/6 snap)
00:38:234 (38234|4) - move to 00:38:206
00:38:361 (38361|4) - move to 00:38:319

01:27:810 (87810|4) - change to 1/2 LN
01:28:827 (88827|0) - ^

01:29:844 (89844|6) - change to 1/1 LN

01:34:929 (94929|1,94929|2) - change to 1/2 LN
01:38:658 (98658|2) - ^

01:40:014 (100014|6,100056|5,100098|4,100141|3,100183|2,100183|1) - very awkward..
maybe misplaced? u need to remap this part.

01:54:251 (114251|3) - change to normal note or endpoint until 01:55:946 -
all diff had this LN lol
actually i don't think that the 1/1 LN is suited. it is too short compared to the sound.
so i have to point out that it continues :3

ok.. i modded 3 diff.
and next time, i'll mod INF and GRV

recently, im little busy ;_;
plz wait for my mod

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
Mod as requested

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Everything modded

[NOVICE]
Since you say this diff doesn't need mod anymore, I'll just put some suggestion on here.
• 00:25:098 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:30:607 - ^, for the flow of the notes
• 00:31:115 - ^
• 00:52:217 - ^, for the cymbal sound
• 00:53:573 - ^
• 00:54:929 - ^
• 00:55:268 - ^
• 01:13:912 - ^
• 01:45:437 (105437|6) - Move to 1 or 3, for hand balance
• 01:45:776 (105776|2) - Move to 5 or 7, ^

[ADVANCED]
• 00:03:403 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound (since you made three notes on 00:14:251 - for the cymbal sound)
• 00:25:098 - ^
• 00:35:946 - ^
• 00:36:454 (36454|3,36454|1,36624|4,36624|0) - optional Move one step to the right, for pattern balance
• 00:52:217 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:53:573 - ^
• 00:57:641 - ^
• 01:08:488 - ^
• 01:13:912 - ^
• 01:15:268 - ^
• 01:27:471 - optional Add a note on 4, for the cymbal sound
• 01:28:488 - optional ^
• 01:29:505 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:29:844 - ^
• 01:38:319 - optional Same in 01:27:471
• 01:39:336 - optional ^
• 01:49:166 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound

[EXHAUST]
• 00:08:488 - optional How 'bout this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945496 (Pattern balance)
• 00:20:607 (20607|5,20607|6) - Move to 1 and 2, for different pattern
• 00:46:793 (46793|5) - Move to 1, how 'bout a spread note?
• 00:58:658 (58658|6) - Move to 1 or 2, for spread note
• 00:59:336 (59336|5) - Move to 2 or 3, ^
• 01:08:827 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:10:183 (70183|1) - Move to 7, for pattern balance
• 01:51:878 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:52:556 - ^

[AL's INFINITE]
• 00:07:217 (7217|3,7302|4,7386|3) - Err these LNs seem hard, since everything you used in this part is always the right hand. I suggest this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945551
• 00:13:234 (13234|0) - optional Move to 2, trying to avoid jacks
• 00:15:607 (15607|5) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:35:776 (35776|5,35776|1) - Move to 3 and 5, trying to avoid jacks (If you purposely did the jacks, OK then lol)
• 00:36:624 (36624|3) - Move to 2, for spread note
• 01:38:149 (98149|5,98234|6) - Ctrl+G, trying to avoid jacks

[GRAVITY]
• 00:11:369 - Add three notes here, same pattern in 00:08:488
• 00:16:624 - ^
• 00:41:030 - Add a note, for the loud sound
• 00:46:454 (46454|2) - optional Make this LN until 00:46:454 (46454|2) - for the loud sound

Good luck~!

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ Shinzo-chan

Will probably be a short mod since I didn't see anything wrong at all lolz
well , hope it will help :3

Ma mi mu me mod

Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[GRAVITY]
00:08:149 (8149|6) - should have 3 notes , (according to previous pattern)
00:12:895 (12895|0,12895|4) - hmm ^same but I think (optional) since it flow well with 2 notes
owo ET diff , actually looks amazing to play ,
[AL's INFINITE]
00:32:302 (32302|3) - remove (this note is ghosting imo)
that's all , lol < that ryhme tho
[EXHAUST]
00:47:132 (47132|4) - add note to 5 ( drum beat )
00:47:810 (47810|4) - add to 5
00:48:488 (48488|5) - ^ add to 6
00:49:166 (49166|5) - ^ add to 6
00:49:844 (49844|1) - ^ to 3
00:50:522 (50522|1) - ^ to 3
01:33:403 (93403|2,93403|0) - should be 3 notes according to 01:32:895 (92895|2,92895|4,92895|3) -
01:33:912 (93912|4,93912|6) - ^same
[ADVANCED]
01:10:861 (70861|6) - add one more note according to previous pattern
nice diff ~
[NOVICE]
01:05:946 (65946|5,66030|4,66115|2) - this is the only thing I found
^ every other part have balanced spacing 642 753 etc and this one is not that balanced
maybe you could move 01:05:946 (65946|5) - to 7 or the overall thing , well up to you :3

Nice map , take my star desu owo/ where's ur star desu \owo
Have a nice day and Good Luck ^^/

ishimaru94 wrote:

Mod req via pm ~

Format (lanes) : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

Seems okay, mp3 is fine with 192 although I prefer 128 for less effort on downloading. The BG used seems not suitable w/ the song but hey, it's your preference. The hitsounds used is perfect suitable to use w/ the song.

[Novice]

The usage of 1/4 like 00:57:810 (57810|2,57895|3,57980|4) - and others are a bit too much for the said diff. Maybe consider to reduce them?

[Advanced]

Perfect arrangement. I've got nothing to suggest about. Great work.

[Exhaust]

~ 00:00:861 (861|1,903|2,946|3,988|4,1200|5,1242|4,1285|3,1327|2) - http://puu.sh/gU4Up/bb9c96546e.jpg would be better. Yes?
~ 00:47:132 (47132|0,47471|0,47810|0) - and 00:48:149 (48149|1,48488|1,48827|1,49166|1) - would be much better if these notes are at lane 1 and 2 respectively.

~ 00:50:861 (50861|1) - Lane 2.
~ 01:23:064 (83064|5,83107|4,83149|3,83192|2,83234|1) - http://puu.sh/gU5eK/c459d31ed2.jpg as to emphasize the pattern of 01:22:556 (82556|1,82598|2,82641|3,82683|4,82725|5) - and 01:22:047 (82047|6,82090|5,82132|4,82175|3,82217|2) - so they look more suitable and stylish at this part.

~ 01:25:437 (85437|4) - Lane 6.
~ 01:45:098 (105098|6,105098|2,105183|5,105268|4,105353|3,105437|6,105437|2,105522|5,105607|4,105692|3,105776|2,105776|6,105861|5,105946|4,106030|3,106115|2,106115|6,106200|5,106285|4,106369|3,106454|6,106454|1,106454|2) - This, Same pattern repeated 4 times. Maybe diversify the patterns? Like 2 same repeated x patterns and 2 other same repeated y patterns. Up to you.

~ 01:53:573 (113573|4,113573|0,113573|5,113912|5,113912|4,113912|0) - http://puu.sh/gU5Gu/9154513e0d.jpg seems more suitable. Yes?

[Al's Infinite]

The usage of SV in this diff is pretty good and it fits w/ the song. And the pattern arrangement seems okay, I guess? lol Although some arrangement parts doesn't fit to the song but it's pretty fun nevertheless. Up to you if you realize which parts that doesn't fit and want to change the arrangements of them.

[Gravity]

~ 00:24:759 - till 00:25:098 - Would love to see this part filled with suitable SV.
~ 00:31:369 - Add a note at Lane 4.

~ 00:32:895 (32895|0) - ? I don't get what's this note represents to. Up to you to delete or keep it.
~ 00:46:454 - till 00:46:793 - Fill with suitable SV.

~ 00:48:827 (48827|0) - The LN end seems not quite right as the opposite one. Make it same ends.
~ 01:40:692 - till 01:41:030 - Fill with suitable SV.

Overall, I see some music sounds (not hitsounds) are not used properly in note arrangements to describe the song itself but seems pretty fun to play anyhow. Up to you to add the missing parts or just stay the same as it is.

Good luck on ranking ~

arviejhay wrote:

hello req by pm

[NOVICE]
00:20:098 (20098|5,20353|1) - i suggest to move it to 3 and 5
00:52:047 (52047|1) - move to 3

[ADVANCED]
01:07:980 (67980|3) - i suggest to move to 3

[GRAVITY]
00:28:827 (28827|3) - move to 2
00:31:708 (31708|5,31793|4) - move to 2,3
01:26:200 (86200|3,86285|4,86369|5) - move 2 columns to the left then 01:26:454 (86454|3) - move to 5

[AL's INFINITE]
00:20:098 (20098|1,20353|5) - move to 3 and 5
00:20:607 (20607|2,20607|4) - move to 2 and 6

the rest seems fine

Good luck!

Julie wrote:

Here you go shinzo

[ADVANCED]

00:03:403 (3403|6) - Hmm no finish hitsound like in EXHAUST?

00:33:488 (33488|6) - delete? because sound here 00:33:488 - is like a continue of the sound here 00:33:403 -

00:40:861 - I think you forgot hitsound here XD

01:27:641 (87641|4) - Don't think a slider match for this part, add a normal note here 01:27:725 - , this part should be a bit different xD

01:28:658 (88658|5) - ^ also because the LN in 2/6 look repetitif xD

01:32:895 (92895|6) - add finish hitsound like you did in EXHAUST? and like you did here 01:33:403 - and some part after too :3

01:47:132 + - 3 finish is too much, mostly not hit at the same time ><, sound not good to ears XD. add LR3_KickDeepBassFR like you did on your other difficulties.

[EXHAUST]

00:25:183 - add a note here, feel a bit weird starthing here 00:25:268 (25268|0) - because the intrusment your mapping start here 00:25:183 - , should be fine for EXHAUST :3

01:13:234 - to 01:13:742 - You added hitsound on GRAVITY for this part but not on EXHAUST ><

01:45:098 - to 01:46:454 - Really feel a bit to right side, while the song is different for this part, really not suggest puting the same pattern 4 times here.

00:19:675 - , 01:23:403 - and 01:53:234 - same issue as GRAVITY

[AL's INFINITE]

00:06:878 (6878|6,7047|6) - Not really sure if these 2 should be on same column :S, different pitch xD

00:07:810 (7810|5,7895|6,7980|5,8064|6) - ^

00:10:522 (10522|4,10522|1,10607|5,10607|2,10692|6,10692|3,10776|5,10776|2,10861|4,10861|1,10946|0,10946|3,11030|2) - really not sure about the "stairs here", mostly because of this part 00:10:776 - of the song

00:22:217 - not sure why one note here xD, 2 note like here 00:22:302 - ?

00:32:302 (32302|3) - delete, no new sound

00:43:488 (43488|6,43573|5,43658|6,43742|5) - shouldn't the pitch be something like this http://puu.sh/gUivh.jpg . So also feel the difference from 00:45:098 -

01:19:336 (79336|2,79336|0,79336|3) - feel like 3 finish is really to much here, mostly when not hit at the same time, it can buzz the ears ><

[GRAVITY]

00:05:776 - Forgot LR4_KickDeepBassFR? I still hear some bass here xD

00:08:064 - add another note here? The sound is like this one 00:07:980 -

00:19:675 - to 00:20:607 - no bass or cym hitsound? This part is pretty loud, you add enough note but hitnormal really isn't enough xD.

00:21:030 - to 00:21:963 - ^

00:25:098 - miss LR4_KickDeepBassFR

00:25:946 (25946|0) - Try to follow the chord with those 00:25:607 (25607|5,25692|4,25776|2,26115|4,26115|6) - like you did here 00:25:183 (25183|2,25268|1,25353|0,25437|6,25437|4) -

00:29:844 (29844|1,30014|3) - lower these LN to blue stick, because the sound your matching with these LN, end up quick

00:33:064 (33064|2,33149|1) - turn these into normal note so it look like 00:30:522 - + and that it doesn't look like the part right after 00:33:234 - +

00:33:573 (33573|2) - move to 5? Really don't feel this 00:33:488 (33488|1,33573|2,33658|3,33742|4) - should be a stair judging from the sound.

00:37:641 - add a note here, I think you were trying to map this sound with 00:37:725 (37725|4) - o.o

00:39:420 (39420|3) - delete, since your trying to match this 00:39:251 (39251|3,39505|2) - instrument sound, but there none here 00:39:420 -

01:02:641 and 01:04:336 - hmm not mapping this sound anymore? xD

01:18:658 - still have bass here~

01:23:403 - to 01:23:912 - lack of hitsound xD

01:37:047 - not mapping this sound anymore?

I'm sorry took me so much more time to post it...maybe some part in my mod have already been fix orz...

Anyway...to be honest I'm FREAKING IMPRESS XD!! This is...AMAZING! *stick a stars* this is epic!! I'm looking foward for this mapset to be rank :3! Whoa ! Really ? thanks >w<

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

mod

ADVANCED
00:34:844 (34844|3) - move to 00:34:759 -
00:55:692 (55692|4,55776|5,55861|6,55946|5,56030|4,56115|3,56200|2) - Hard xD
01:24:759 (84759|6) - delete or EXHAUST 01:24:759 - add note
01:34:081 (94081|0,94166|1) - move to 2,3
01:40:098 (100098|4) - move to 01:40:070 - (1/6)

EXHAUST
00:11:115 - add note 5
00:38:742 - add note
00:38:912 - ^
01:27:471 - ^
01:38:319 - ^

good luck

MEGAtive wrote:

Yo, Mod here from queue~

[General]
Mapset: Keliatan bagus.
Graphic: 1200x676 -> Ganti jdi yg ber rasio 16:9 atau 4:3
Hitsound: Udh bagus
Timing: Udh bener sih kyknya
Metadate: Looks good https://remywiki.com/FIRE_FIRE_-DARK_BLAZE_REMIX-
Turn Off Widescreen Support

[GRAVITY]

Mods

00:04:675 - Add note? Kedengeran mirip sama 00:04:590
00:06:369 - ^
00:07:386 - ^
00:09:081 - ^
00:10:437 - ^
00:11:793 - ^
00:36:624 - Tambah not? Kedengeran lebih banyak instrumenny dri 00:36:454
00:37:980 - ^
00:42:047 - ^

[AL's INFINITE]

Mods

00:14:251 ke 00:15:607 - Di pattern sebelumny ad LN. Knp d sini gk ad? Reference: 00:03:403
00:52:302 - D depan d ksih not d suara kyk gini. Tambah satu?
00:52:810 (52810|2) - Ini not ap ya? D depan gk ad not untuk bagian ini.
00:55:353 - Tambah not? Kedengeran ad instrumenny d sini.
00:55:522 - ^

Reyzra wrote:

hey there Shinzo-
here's a mod that you req via chat in game
this is just recomendation, you can ignore it if you dont match your taste~
COLUMN = 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

NOVICE

00:36:624 (36624|1,36624|5) - these note should in column 1 and 7 like a next pattern you placed...ok
01:13:912 add note here? seems the sound hit hard hereadded
01:17:980 ^no sorry
01:27:471 ^^
01:28:488 ^^
01:29:505 ^^
01:29:844 ^^
01:19:050 add LN
and thats it~

ADVANCED

00:27:132 (27132|3) - move to 3no sorry
01:18:997 add LN here? nope
01:24:081 (84081|3) - move to 5 or 6? nopebut move the note before this
01:27:471 add note in col 5 i know but maybe no
01:28:488 add note in col 4 ^
01:28:658 (88658|6,88742|4) - move these 1 col to the left no for pattern
01:29:844 add note no sorry
01:45:607 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2959628 up to you~too hard for adv
and thats it~

EXHAUST

00:02:047 try like these? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2959642 your choice~u kidding
00:26:285 (26285|5,26369|4) - CTRL +Gno for PR
00:26:963 (26963|5,27047|3) - ^ pattern
00:52:217 add note 3 note ? o.o
01:45:098 add note sorry will be mini jack
01:15:098 (75098|4,75098|2) - these note move to 2 and 5moved
and thats it~

AL's INFINITE

00:03:742 add note
00:05:437 ^
00:05:776 ^
00:06:454 ^
00:08:488 ^
00:08:658 ^
00:10:522 ^
00:11:539 ^
00:15:268 ^
00:15:946 ^
00:16:285 ^
00:16:624 ^
00:38:234 add note in col 6?
00:39:336 delete one of the note except LN
00:46:115 - 00:46:454 change it to 1/8 stream?
00:53:573 add 1 note sound like hit hard
00:54:929 ^
01:02:047 add a note
01:08:488 ^
01:12:217 ^
01:12:438 ^
01:14:929 ^
01:15:268 ^
01:16:624 ^
01:17:302 ^
01:17:980 ^
01:19:336 add note in col 7
01:25:776 add a note
01:26:454 ^
01:29:505 add 2 note
01:29:844 add 1 or 2 note
01:33:064 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960023no sorry

00:27:132 (27132|3) - move to 6moved
00:30:014 (30014|2) - change to LN? end the LN to 00:30:522 ok
00:31:030 (31030|1) - move to 4 ok
00:32:895 (32895|2) - ^^
and thats it

GRAVITY

00:12:302 (12302|3,12386|2) - CTRL +G ok
00:09:929 (9929|1) - move to 5 moved to 1
00:13:488 (13488|3,13488|1) - move 1 col to the right ok
00:15:776 (15776|1,15946|2) - CTRL +G ?ok
00:20:607 (20607|3) - move to 3ok
00:37:556 (37556|0,37810|6) - change these to small LN?no sorry
00:46:115 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960179^
00:46:793 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960196 ^
00:47:471 add a noteadded
00:47:810 ^^
00:48:149 try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960208no sorry
00:48:827 add a note^
00:49:166 ^^
00:49:505 try like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960220 its the same pattern that i suggest aboveno
00:50:183 add a note^
00:50:522 ^^
00:50:861 use same pattern above or you can change it~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960244no sorry
i think thats it, i dont find anything to suggest after this time line^ or maybe i overlook something...

this is good map with good song good luck with ranked it Shinzo-

-Kamikaze- wrote:

fug da polis
1 kd= 1 rebel against sdvx fx

AYYYY AYYY L M A O AYYYY AYYYY L M A O AYYYY AYYYY

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Metadata:
Artis & title fine
add to tags:
kors k楽曲REMIXコンテスト Song REMIX Contest -added The contest this song was remixed for
Generic animu grill BG ayyyyy lmao

Difficulty settings:
damn gurl those settings are like WAAAAAY too low. For this spread and this diffiulty I suggest those settings:
NOVICE - HP7/OD7 (fine as it is)
ADVANED - HP7,5/OD7,5 ok
EXHAUST - HP8/OD8ok
AL'S INFINITE - HP8,5/OD8 (OD same cuz n00dl3z)ok
GRAVITY - at least HP8.5, okyou should put HP9/OD8,5 8,5tho
Reason for those settings is that it's too spammable. It's prolly even doable to get C on gravity and that is bad

I'll mod 2 hardest diffs cuz I'm a lazer, don't beat me pls

[HentaiLove's n00dl3z]

First things first, SVs. SVs are quite abrupt in your diff and player is prone to missing from onfusion on sight which is not good. I'll point out some examples:
00:46:793 - SV here is okay value-wise, but it seems pretty confusing on play. Consider moving green line 1/8 later, it's looking better imo
OR change up values like this:
00:46:793 - 0,9x
00:50:861 - 0,95x
00:54:929 - 1,15x
00:55:268 - 1,2x
00:55:607 - 1,25x
ok added all of them
01:13:234 - I think you could add subtle bumps here, something like:
01:13:234 - 1,25x
01:13:319 - 0,75x
01:13:403 - 1,25x
01:13:488 - 0,75x
and so on or something similar to 01:23:403 -
im so sorry but i think its to fast to make SV like that T^T
01:24:081 (84081|1,84208|3,84336|5) - SV on those LNs is very awkward imo, it's very hard to read those LNs without just spamming all 3 of them with panic on your face :VFixed

Let's go through rest now
00:00:692 - Add, idk why there are only 2 notes on strong startadded
00:01:030 - Add on 1stadded on 7
00:20:861 (20861|3,20946|3,21030|3) - This spacebar jack seems out of place to me, conisder moving first one of the three to 2nd column and last one to 7thre-arranged
00:38:149 (38149|6) - Move to 00:38:093 - (1/6) and add a note on 00:38:206 - ok
00:56:285 - SOMEBODY SCREEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AAAA
01:01:708 - This pattern works better for pitchfixed

SPOILER

01:19:336 (79336|2,79336|0,79675|3,79675|1,80014|0,80014|2,80353|3,80353|1,80692|0,80692|1,81030|3,81030|2,81369|0,81369|1,81708|2,81708|3) - All of those LNs should be single LNs not double, due to instruments being barerly audible and having a lot less impact than sounds that you've also layered with double LNs like 01:18:997 (78997|5,78997|1) - aka density inconsistencydelete 1 LN on every of it
01:21:200 - I don't know why you're ignoring 1/4 beat fading in here, but imo you should layer itsorry but they hate it
01:29:844 - 1/8 hereok

[but what if gravity isn't real, like whaaat]
As for SV things I'm pointing out, I don't expect harsh SV here, but some subtle SV like 1,2 -> 0,8 -> 1,0

00:05:776 - Since you have a lonely LN here, add SV bumpim sorry, no
00:11:200 - ^ //won't point out more, you get my point^
00:24:590 - This seems to work better for sounds playing here:im sorry but the 2 note didnt start there

SPOILER

00:38:093 - Not adding SV here?nope
00:39:802 (39802|5) - Delete this note, 00:39:759 (39759|4) - is an extended sound and does not warantee another note at 1/8. As for pattern, this should express instruments better:OK

SPOILER

00:46:454 - I expected SV here tbhadded
00:57:302 - Add 2 LNs at 3rd and 5th, then remove 00:57:641 (57641|4,57641|2) - because they're blocking the way l0lno theres a SV
01:00:014 - Another speedup SV^
01:10:861 - aaa I was supossed to not point out this anymore^
01:13:234 - Try adding some variation to those chords, just white key smash feels a bit plain for 5,6* diff, maybe try stair chordsRe-arranged

example

01:34:251 (94251|3,94420|3,94590|3,94759|3) - When I see this, words "miss" and "thumb awkwardness" scream inside my head. Isn't there a better way to handle this?i dont know

After I had a friend do testplay of this diff for me

his score

I have to point out that SV on 00:57:386 - is too harsh, it's not possible to sightread and that's a bad thing. Gadget said that rest is fun so it's cool

This looks already ready for BN checks, go for them! o/

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

at first, change bg size to 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9.

and cut these useless empty selection.

you can find some of other wavs are have that kind of things too. cut them too.

and delete 'contest' from tag if possible. i am not sure that this is related to song itself.

check aimod for each difficultes plz. whats wrong on aimod ?

NOVICE

• 
  
  i tbh want to suggest that you work further hitsounding here. you missed so many instrument sound here.
  
  and some sv parts are volumn 5%. i dont think it's good.
  
  overall patterns are okay.
  
  * 00:03:403 (3403|5) - Move to 5 because you usually don't use same column such as above patterns. but it's not problem tho.moved
  
  * 00:08:149 (8149|4,8149|1) - Ctrl G according to below pattern consistency.ctrl G and what happend ? ._.
  
  * 00:08:827 (8827|5) - Same suggestion as 3 sec. moved
  
  * 00:09:844 - 00:10:861 - Try to Re-Arrange here. To avoid boring.re-arranged
  
  * 00:13:319 (13319|3,13488|1) - Ctrl G for balance done
  
  * 00:16:285 (16285|2,16285|5) - Ctrl G according to below pattern consistency. nothing will happend ._.
  
  * 00:35:946 - 00:40:861 - Try to give varation here. Since sound pitch is different. OKay
  
  * 00:51:539 (51539|1) - Move to 3 moved
  
  * 00:53:573 (53573|6,54251|0) - Move to 6 and 2 moved
  
  * 00:57:641 (57641|1) - Move to 1moved
  
  * 01:02:725 - You can give just 1 LN like previous pattern.done
  
  * 01:06:285 (66285|6) - Move to 6 moved
  
  * 01:09:844 (69844|2) - Move to 4^
  
  * 01:13:912 (73912|5) - Move to 7^
  
  * 01:15:437 (75437|2,75522|5) - Ctrl G ok
  
  * 01:32:895 (92895|5,92895|1) - Move to 35 done
  
  * 01:37:641 (97641|5,97641|2) - Ctrl H okay
  
  * 01:42:386 - http://puu.sh/h18yl/a87ad584d4.png or re arrange a bit followed the pic
  
  i want to re-check it again after your re-hitsounding.

ADVANCED

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  * Feel like some stair pattern missed to use kick sound here. or leave it if it's your intension.
  
  about vol, same.
  
  * 00:06:115 - 00:07:810 - Give some notes to col 7. 3 note each bass ?
  
  * 00:07:980 (7980|2,8064|3,8149|4,8319|2) - Ctrl H done
  
  * 00:13:658 - 00:14:251 - I think stair would be more better.yeah but player dont like a stair
  
  * 00:19:336 (19336|1) - Move to 4 im sorry but i think the pitch is kinda diffrent
  
  * 00:21:454 (21454|6) - Move to 5 done
  
  * 00:29:166 (29166|4,29251|3,29336|2,29420|1) - Change them to normal notes. it's not good for this diff. yup u right !
  
  * 00:29:675 (29675|5) - I don't think it has good sound to use LN.
  
  * 00:31:369 - 00:33:234 - Use some col 1 hehehe, okay
  
  * 00:37:980 (37980|5,38093|1,38206|5) - ^^^
  
  * 00:39:505 - 00:40:014 - Try Re-arrange here? i can't get what you want to represent here re-arranged
  
  * 00:51:539 (51539|1) - I don't know what you want to represent sound. Make sure about LN length.re-arranged
  
  * 00:52:217 - 00:54:929 - If you use col 7 too, then it will be more creative. as you did in EXHAUST.rearranged some
  
  * 01:11:030 - Add note im sorry but i dont think so
  
  * 01:20:522 (80522|0,80607|1) - Move to 65 do u think its not too heavy on the right ? nevermind moved anyway
  
  * 01:45:607 - You can give varation from here since there has delay sound. re-arranged
  
  * 01:48:488 (108488|6,108488|0) - Move to 35 moved
  
  good pattern here.

EXHAUST

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* 00:01:624 (1624|0,1708|1,1793|2,1878|3,1963|4) - Ctrl H to avoid kinda same pattern with above oh yeah u right ! Done

* 00:08:488 - done

* 00:12:895 (12895|5,13064|5) - Move to 7 moved

* 00:14:251 - You should use 6 col here for consistency of 00:13:658 (13658|2,13742|4,13827|1,13912|5,13997|0,14081|6,14166|1) - stair pattern.HMMM YUP ! re-arranged

try to re-arrange a bit.

* 00:23:912 (23912|1) - Move to 1 moved

* 00:24:759 (24759|2,24844|4,24929|2,25014|4) - It will be a little hard for this diff. Since bpm is high.delete those LN

* 00:25:692 (25692|3,25776|2) - Ctrl G done

* 00:32:386 (32386|1) - Move to 3 done

* 00:33:064 - 00:33:319 - Try to provide column since instrument sounds are different. re-arranged

* 00:44:675 (44675|3,44759|2) - Ctrl G done

* 00:55:437 (55437|5,55437|1) - Move to 35 moved

* 00:58:319 (58319|0) - Move to 3 moved

* 01:17:302 - 01:17:980 - I can't understand why you used 1/4 stair pattern here.

i can't find some speicial sound compared to other 1/2 beatsnap.

tbh this even can be ghost note issue too.
removed those 1/4 note
* 01:20:522 (80522|5,80607|4) - Ctrl G good ! done

* 01:26:963 (86963|4,86963|0) - Move to 37 done

* 01:32:217 (92217|5,92217|1) - Move to 17 moved

* 01:35:946 (95946|2) - Move to 5 done

* 01:37:471 (97471|2) - Move to 1 moved

GRAVITY

* 00:03:997 (3997|3,4081|4) - Ctrl GDone

* 00:21:030 (21030|3,21200|3) - Move to 5 re-arranged

* 00:34:420 (34420|2) - Change to short note? Oke

* 00:38:093 (38093|3,38206|3) - Better to be short note. Okay

* 00:39:166 (39166|5,39251|3,39336|4) - Ctrl G DONE

* 00:43:064 - 00:43:403 - Use only 1 LN for each part plz okay

* 00:46:624 - 1.5 done

* 00:55:014 (55014|3,55141|3,55268|3) - Something inb4 for right hand players. try to spread more hereRE-ARRANGED

* 00:57:386 - Move sv to 00:57:302 - hereok

* 01:00:861 (60861|2) - Move to 6moved

* 01:09:675 (69675|2) - Move to 1moved

* 01:17:302 - Add a note on 1 sorry i think its inconsisten for the before and after this

* 01:18:658 - Change to x1.3done

* 01:24:463 - ^ ^

* 01:26:708 (86708|0) - Move to 01:26:624 - im sorry but the bass didnt start there

* 01:37:302 - 01:37:980 - Something overchord compared to others

* 01:39:844 - 01:40:692 - I prefer previous one when i test play but when i ask other to testplay, then can got it and didnt got the previous one

* 01:45:437 - try this kind of thing for balance with 1/8Done

* 01:48:954 (108954|0,108997|1,109039|2,109081|3,109124|4) - Move to each 1 right colmoved

sigh.. i will re-check.. because ai's diff posting was disappear..:O ok then