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Format (lanes) : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6
[General]
Seems okay, mp3 is fine with 192 although I prefer 128 for less effort on downloading. The BG used seems not suitable w/ the song but hey, it's your preference. The hitsounds used is perfect suitable to use w/ the song.
[Novice]
The usage of 1/4 like 00:57:810 (57810|2,57895|3,57980|4) - and others are a bit too much for the said diff. Maybe consider to reduce them?
[Advanced]
Perfect arrangement. I've got nothing to suggest about. Great work.
[Exhaust]
~ 00:00:861 (861|1,903|2,946|3,988|4,1200|5,1242|4,1285|3,1327|2) - http://puu.sh/gU4Up/bb9c96546e.jpg would be better. Yes?
~ 00:47:132 (47132|0,47471|0,47810|0) - and 00:48:149 (48149|1,48488|1,48827|1,49166|1) - would be much better if these notes are at lane 1 and 2 respectively.
~ 00:50:861 (50861|1) - Lane 2.
~ 01:23:064 (83064|5,83107|4,83149|3,83192|2,83234|1) - http://puu.sh/gU5eK/c459d31ed2.jpg as to emphasize the pattern of 01:22:556 (82556|1,82598|2,82641|3,82683|4,82725|5) - and 01:22:047 (82047|6,82090|5,82132|4,82175|3,82217|2) - so they look more suitable and stylish at this part.
~ 01:25:437 (85437|4) - Lane 6.
~ 01:45:098 (105098|6,105098|2,105183|5,105268|4,105353|3,105437|6,105437|2,105522|5,105607|4,105692|3,105776|2,105776|6,105861|5,105946|4,106030|3,106115|2,106115|6,106200|5,106285|4,106369|3,106454|6,106454|1,106454|2) - This, Same pattern repeated 4 times. Maybe diversify the patterns? Like 2 same repeated x patterns and 2 other same repeated y patterns. Up to you.
~ 01:53:573 (113573|4,113573|0,113573|5,113912|5,113912|4,113912|0) - http://puu.sh/gU5Gu/9154513e0d.jpg seems more suitable. Yes?
[Al's Infinite]
The usage of SV in this diff is pretty good and it fits w/ the song. And the pattern arrangement seems okay, I guess? lol Although some arrangement parts doesn't fit to the song but it's pretty fun nevertheless. Up to you if you realize which parts that doesn't fit and want to change the arrangements of them.
[Gravity]
~ 00:24:759 - till 00:25:098 - Would love to see this part filled with suitable SV.
~ 00:31:369 - Add a note at Lane 4.
~ 00:32:895 (32895|0) - ? I don't get what's this note represents to. Up to you to delete or keep it.
~ 00:46:454 - till 00:46:793 - Fill with suitable SV.
~ 00:48:827 (48827|0) - The LN end seems not quite right as the opposite one. Make it same ends.
~ 01:40:692 - till 01:41:030 - Fill with suitable SV.
Overall, I see some music sounds (not hitsounds) are not used properly in note arrangements to describe the song itself but seems pretty fun to play anyhow. Up to you to add the missing parts or just stay the same as it is.
Good luck on ranking ~
Format (lanes) : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6
[General]
Seems okay, mp3 is fine with 192 although I prefer 128 for less effort on downloading. The BG used seems not suitable w/ the song but hey, it's your preference. The hitsounds used is perfect suitable to use w/ the song.
[Novice]
The usage of 1/4 like 00:57:810 (57810|2,57895|3,57980|4) - and others are a bit too much for the said diff. Maybe consider to reduce them?
[Advanced]
Perfect arrangement. I've got nothing to suggest about. Great work.
[Exhaust]
~ 00:00:861 (861|1,903|2,946|3,988|4,1200|5,1242|4,1285|3,1327|2) - http://puu.sh/gU4Up/bb9c96546e.jpg would be better. Yes?
~ 00:47:132 (47132|0,47471|0,47810|0) - and 00:48:149 (48149|1,48488|1,48827|1,49166|1) - would be much better if these notes are at lane 1 and 2 respectively.
~ 00:50:861 (50861|1) - Lane 2.
~ 01:23:064 (83064|5,83107|4,83149|3,83192|2,83234|1) - http://puu.sh/gU5eK/c459d31ed2.jpg as to emphasize the pattern of 01:22:556 (82556|1,82598|2,82641|3,82683|4,82725|5) - and 01:22:047 (82047|6,82090|5,82132|4,82175|3,82217|2) - so they look more suitable and stylish at this part.
~ 01:25:437 (85437|4) - Lane 6.
~ 01:45:098 (105098|6,105098|2,105183|5,105268|4,105353|3,105437|6,105437|2,105522|5,105607|4,105692|3,105776|2,105776|6,105861|5,105946|4,106030|3,106115|2,106115|6,106200|5,106285|4,106369|3,106454|6,106454|1,106454|2) - This, Same pattern repeated 4 times. Maybe diversify the patterns? Like 2 same repeated x patterns and 2 other same repeated y patterns. Up to you.
~ 01:53:573 (113573|4,113573|0,113573|5,113912|5,113912|4,113912|0) - http://puu.sh/gU5Gu/9154513e0d.jpg seems more suitable. Yes?
[Al's Infinite]
The usage of SV in this diff is pretty good and it fits w/ the song. And the pattern arrangement seems okay, I guess? lol Although some arrangement parts doesn't fit to the song but it's pretty fun nevertheless. Up to you if you realize which parts that doesn't fit and want to change the arrangements of them.
[Gravity]
~ 00:24:759 - till 00:25:098 - Would love to see this part filled with suitable SV.
~ 00:31:369 - Add a note at Lane 4.
~ 00:32:895 (32895|0) - ? I don't get what's this note represents to. Up to you to delete or keep it.
~ 00:46:454 - till 00:46:793 - Fill with suitable SV.
~ 00:48:827 (48827|0) - The LN end seems not quite right as the opposite one. Make it same ends.
~ 01:40:692 - till 01:41:030 - Fill with suitable SV.
Overall, I see some music sounds (not hitsounds) are not used properly in note arrangements to describe the song itself but seems pretty fun to play anyhow. Up to you to add the missing parts or just stay the same as it is.
Good luck on ranking ~