1. Alcyone - 5Key (5.37 stars, 3379 notes)

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

00:21:883 (21883|4) - move to 00:21:804 -
00:23:375 (23375|0) - move to 00:23:297 -
01:03:899 (63899|0) - remove. and add LN 01:04:056 - and finish it 01:04:291 -
01:04:213 (64213|2) - change start point 01:04:291 -
01:19:684 (79684|1) - move 3
01:19:763 (79763|4) - move 2
02:36:726 (156726|2) - remove
03:17:564 (197564|2) - finish it 03:17:721 -
03:17:721 - add to LN and finish it 03:17:956 -
03:17:878 (197878|1) - remove
03:38:689 (218689|2) - move 1
03:44:579 (224579|1) - remove
03:47:092 (227092|1,227092|3) - remove Nope, loud beat
03:50:783 (230783|0) - remove
03:51:019 (231019|3) - remove
03:51:647 (231647|3) - move to 3
03:34:527 - ~ 03:54:710 - Too over mapping! you should the difficulty has to be down. i guess you didn't hear some because of the sound quality
04:03:899 (243899|3) - move 5
04:05:155 (245155|3) - move 3
04:07:825 (247825|3,247904|3,248139|3,248218|3,248375|3,248454|3,248611|3,248689|3,248846|3,248925|3,249082|3,249160|3) - It is very difficult
04:12:223 - ~ 04:14:815 - you should the difficulty has to be down. nerf it a little bit
04:35:941 (275941|2) - move 4
04:37:119 (277119|4) - remove
04:57:537 (297537|3,297537|0,297616|2,297616|3,297616|1,297694|4,297694|0,297694|2,297773|1,297773|2,297773|3,297852|4,297930|1,297930|3,297930|0,298009|2,298009|4,298009|3,298087|3,298087|1,298087|0,298166|2,298166|0,298166|4,298244|2,298244|1,298244|3,298323|2,298323|0,298323|4,298401|3,298401|0,298401|1) - what is it..?;; you should the difficulty has to be down nerf it a little bit

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I hope this helps.

Remillion Cross wrote:

you should put at least..

Title : Halcyon -Long Version-
Source : groundbreaking bof 2010 -the evolution of war- renaissance hardcore

based on http://gdbg.bandcamp.com/track/halcyon-long-version or http://www.gdbg.tv/2010/download/ and http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 7&event=65

no kd

Zan - wrote:

ikeeee 5K now

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:

hi hams i got off my lazy ass and did a mod for this (column 1l2l3l4l5)

gray thing

00:41:908- do this, since it's the same sound
00:43:950 (43950|1,45207|1) - Move to 3
00:49:290- Shouldn't it be like this?
01:05:940- Add another LN here, sounds like 2 violin thingies
01:11:751 (71751|3) - I think this should be a double note, unless you aren't mapping to the beat
01:13:793 (73793|0,73793|1) - This should be a triple since theres some beat in the background
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Make it like this\
01:15:992- Add a note for the beat
01:16:620- Cymbal sound, add note
01:26:359- Add another note here, since it's the same as the part before
01:32:013- ^ (except this is the same as the part after :3)
01:42:065-^
01:46:620 (106620|1,106699|2,106777|3,106777|1,106856|2) - I have some doubts about this pattern, because it feels awkward to do 2,3,2,3 or 4,3,4,3 streams as left and right handers respectively, try to change it :3 (I'm only gonna point this out once tho) I'm still thinking for a new pattern though
02:09:081- Try this maybe? (actually dont) Nope
So I'm gonna skip around 30secs because I'm too lazy to take a closer look at patterns :3
02:25:887 (145887|0,145887|4) - Move this to 3 and 4, same sound hams
02:39:866 (159866|3,159866|0,159866|2) - Why is this 3 note(?) Yeah my mistake
02:40:023 (160023|4,160023|1) - This should be 3 note instead c:
(I think you should add 1 note for every beat/bassdrop/whatever you hear)
03:01:542- The patterns at 03:01:856 should start here Nope
03:05:468 (185468|3,185468|1) - Move to 3 and 5
03:15:992- Add another LN, double violin powa ayy lmao
03:16:934- Use this
03:18:819 (198819|3) - Move to 5
03:24:003 (204003|2) - Move to 1, repeated sound
03:28:557 (208557|0) - Move to 4, ^
03:29:657- Make it like this
03:31:699 (211699|4) - Move to 4
03:32:955 (212955|1) - Move to 1
03:34:055 (214055|2) - Move to 1
03:46:699 (226699|1,226699|3) - Move to 1 and 5, because of the beat OR make into 2 spacebar jacks
03:49:133 (229133|1,229133|4,229212|3,229212|0) - These should be jacks
03:51:332 (231332|2) - y u do dis hams
03:51:646 (231646|4,231646|0,231725|3,231725|1) - These should be jacks too
04:15:678 (255678|1,255992|2,256149|1,256228|3,256306|0,256385|4,256463|1,256542|3) - It would be better if these notes were LNs
04:40:652 (280652|1,280652|2,280652|4) - This should be 4 notes
04:40:652 - 04:41:751- Dammit jamesu have some variety in patterns(Not like i can say anything about it) nah, i find it easier though :^)
04:59:657- The ending SV isn't really needed and screws players up sometimes ;w; Not gonna remove

I guess that's it from me.
Wonder where i got the idea of modding this from...
Some of the jacks feel unneeded tho, up to you to delete them hue

pwhk wrote:

xi! <3

| 0 - 4 |

[ Renaissance (Gray Another) ]
00:04:683 (4683|2,4997|2) - Song don't warrant 3 1/1 jacks here. Move to 4,3
00:05:626 (5626|4) - Remove, soft piano don't exist here
00:10:023 - Missing note for soft piano
00:10:338 (10338|2) - Triple is too strong here I guess. Remove one note
00:13:322 - Add note, as sounds like this are having 3 notes around.
00:33:898 (33898|3) - Move to 2 as bells are in different pitch
00:39:238 (39238|3) - Move to 2 for pitch
00:43:950 (43950|1) - Move to 0 as bells are in different pitch
00:49:762 (49762|1,49919|0) - Violin isn't right here. The sounds should be at 00:49:840 - and 00:50:037 - (You may want to use 25% playback to confirm this, especially because the latter one is on 1/8 which even me would suspect)
00:54:474 (54474|1) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:59:657 (59657|3,60285|4) - Swap for pitch
01:00:913 (60913|0,61071|1,61228|2,61385|3) - With above, Ctrl-H and move 01:01:542 (61542|1) - to 2
01:03:741 (63741|0,63976|2) - Violin isn't right here. What I found is at 01:03:544 - 01:03:780 - 01:04:035 - 01:04:251 - . But those are 1/8 and even 1/16 You definitely want to check with 25% playback. In fact the song is slowing down and may even suggest that there are genuine BPM changes warranting uninherited timing sections here.
01:09:133 (69133|1,69186|2) - No sound here, and...
01:09:238 (69238|3,69290|4,69343|0,69395|1,69448|2,69500|3,69552|4,69631|3) - What I get in 25% playback is 1/4s.
01:15:050 - Add note for cymbal
01:15:207 (75207|3,75285|2,75364|1) - Ctrl-H
01:16:620 - Add note for cymbal
01:19:526 - Missing note
01:19:762 - Add note for cymbal
01:22:275 - ^
01:24:788 - ^
01:26:987 (86987|2) - Move to 4 to prevent 3 jacks?
01:35:154 (95154|3) - move to 4
01:47:406 - Add note for cymbal?
01:59:029 - 01:59:971 - Ctrl-H all notes but keep LN (i.e. move resultant note onto 1-4
02:05:311 - Add note
02:06:411 - Add note at 0
02:06:882 - 02:07:196 - piano is present but notes are missing
02:17:249 (137249|4,137249|3) - Move 1/4 earlier and change to 2,3
02:23:924 (143924|1,144003|0,144081|3,144238|0,144317|4,144395|1) - Piano are absent here. Remove. I can heard some
02:24:160 - And add note here
02:28:872 - Add note for cymbal?
02:40:966 - You use double stream here but 02:43:636 - is single stream... Not sure what you want tho.
03:00:128 (180128|0) - Move to 1
03:06:568 - Add note for cymbals
03:08:139 - Extraneous note?
03:08:924 - Add note for cymbals
03:17:406 (197406|1,197563|0) - Violin isn't right here, I got is 03:17:484 - 03:17:681 - Again, check with 25% playback
03:23:845 (203845|0) - Move to 3 for pitch? nope
03:40:416 - Add note at 4 and move 03:40:495 (220495|4) - to 1
03:51:411 (231411|2) - Why jack here? move to 3.
03:59:343 - Add note
04:01:856 - Missing piano. Add 2 notes
04:07:196 - Add note for strong piano
04:07:667 - ^
04:09:395 - Add note for cymbal
04:12:144 (252144|2) - Triples are off-beat. Intentional?
04:12:537 (252537|2) - Misplaced note? Move 1/4 later.
04:21:018 - Missing note
04:24:945 - Add note for cymbal
04:26:044 - ^
04:36:961 (276961|3) - Move 1/4 later

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Also PM'ed you about GD stuff. I always find this a great song. Good luck!

-Kamikaze- wrote:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA-HALCYOOOOOON

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Unrankable stuff
Highly recommended various stuff
Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

Metadata: seems fine

Timing: Mass of wrong stuff, I've written some of them below
00:00:914 - 95,5 BPM here, metronomes are working well on every second line now so it should be halved BPM here. Adjust SV accordingly
00:02:170 - Another 95,5 BPM red line here for metronome reset (BPM should start here, but you can't do that due to notes before)
00:10:966 - Pretty sure there's slower BPM here, I don't know by how much tho, I suck at timing. Aske Zenny, Blocko or just someone good with piano timing for exact timing
00:12:379 - 95,5 BPM again
00:18:348 - those notes sound off already so another timing error here
00:26:359 - 95,5 BPM
01:03:741 - Pretty sure that BPM slows down here
01:08:767 - 181 BPM
01:09:709 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM
01:30:128 - Metronome reset, 181 BPM

basically exact same problems occur throughout the map. Don't KD this post, call me back after you've fixed timing and I'll do a proper mod on it

NO KUDOSU

YunoFanatic wrote:

GG HENTI PERSON.
5k henti indeed.
420weedsmokingshrek4life.
#shappy4life.

Black And White Renaissance:

00:05:311 (5311|2) - after replaying and replaying i still feel that this part is currently the same as 00:04:683 (4683|2,4683|0,4997|3,4997|1) - but just a little a little milder. otherwise its still loud. add nota plox
00:05:940 (5940|2) - this has some deep sound, deep sound + high sound = 1 note, gg m8 please no 420noscopperino. add note. prefferably on thee 1st column.
00:09:395 (9395|0) - not sure about this for just being a 1 noted only. Its not deep but its already high to put another note, its not deep as 00:09:395 (9395|0) - but its still high enough, consider this.
00:07:824 (7824|3,9081|2) - not sure to leave these parts 1 noted only. idunno rethink just mentioning this.
00:22:948 (22948|0) - could be double noted.no thx
00:26:359 (26359|4,28872|2) - - ayy lmao. please http://puu.sh/hfYlQ/adb4568543.jpg nope
00:31:385 (31385|2) - in here you could still remix this 420weedsmokin. there's a slight pause between 00:31:699 until 00:31:804 im quite sure about this. leaving as suggestion if youd like to noscope the players. also 1/12 no thx
00:31:385 (31385|2) - wrong ending of ln please 00:31:856 (31856|3) - wrong start please. wat u du in life. more precise and correct, > http://puu.sh/hfYeE/7e9c9b7d08.jpg its 1/12 im definitely right in here i cant be deaf. no change (listen closely at 25% playback.)
00:33:898 (33898|2) - ayyyyy http://puu.sh/hfYqJ/ad9cc24746.jpg yuno plz. no change
00:32:327 (32327|4,35154|3) - http://puu.sh/hfYxC/7806cf87c5.jpg wat u mop wit ot hidsit? plox henti-sama no thx
00:36:254 (36254|3,36411|0,36411|4) - http://puu.sh/hfYDO/8750b21130.jpg I repeated many times but i didn't hear anything 1/12 here so no change
00:40:023 (40023|1,40180|3,40180|4) - definitely SOUNDthing is wrong in here,"badumtsss" please re cheeeack it henti. no change plox
00:41:437 (41437|4,41437|3,41908|1,41908|0,42379|0,42379|1) - ''^w^ http://puu.sh/hfYSs/abf3abf17a.jpg again

from here on. not gonna FIX and POINT everything that is missed beat, i felt that this is kinda your job as the creator of this map, There are still more im pretty sure for example, 00:43:950 (43950|2) - sort of advice, as a mapper you have to take time and review the map you made, for example by making time for it, cause im gonna suggest you to check your map in 25% play back rate. youll see what you need to see, infact if this is not solved immediately as i see that you are currently planning for rank. "THIS" problems will make your headhurt finally when your about to get 420smonoscoped. seriously so make time to this map specially, THO WHY DOES ANY BODI HAS POINTED THIS KIND OF PROBLEM, PEOPLE WHY PLOX. also jamesu nyan becareful specially in this parts, from here 00:25:706 (25706|0) - - to - 01:08:767 (68767|0) - i want you to reviewww revieewww this part cause this is where mostly the problem you will see. but take note to take a look at the other parts too. i'm being doing this everytime yu no

00:39:238 (39238|2) - i would prefer that you would move this to 2nd column (or) another idea is to move 00:38:924 (38924|2) - to 5th, the pattern atm looks weird if youd ask me.
00:40:809 (40809|4) - this ln should be moved, to the 4th column, in here 00:39:866 (39866|0,40023|1,40180|3,40338|0,40495|2,40652|0) - im getting your idea or i already got it lmao. highly suggested since 00:40:180 (40180|3,40809|4) - also! i just found that, 00:40:495 (40495|2) - i the same sound so im suggesting that you move 00:40:180 (40180|3,40495|2,40809|4) - in "one" column only regardless of the pattern were talking about $$$$$$ here.
00:48:976 (48976|1) - id double note if youd ask me. cause of the BIG bell sound.
00:48:976 (48976|1,50233|3,50547|2,50861|1,51175|0) - regarding here if you'd ask me. ID PREFER TO FOLLOW THE PR HERE CAUSE IT FLOWS BETTER AND PLAY BETTER IN THIS WAY. more or less, ctrl g it and find a better pattern in 00:51:489 (51489|2,51489|1,51961|3,52432|2,52589|1) - . no thx
00:55:259 (55259|3,55259|1) - id ctrl h this for better flow of your 420 patturn.
00:56:516 (56516|1) - youd either place this note in the 1st or 3rd column got no other option m8 1st or 3rd or get rekt.
00:59:029 (59029|2,59657|4) - move 00:59:029 (59029|2) - in the 5th column and then 00:59:657 (59657|4) - to 1st for better 420 pattern
01:01:517 (61517|0) - id add another note here, for much stronger presence of the sound. 01:02:811 (62811|1) - here too. 01:04:271 (64271|4) - same.no thx
01:08:767 (68767|0) - my hmm suggestion you add another note cus of the weird deep sound no thx
01:09:238 (69238|0,69316|1,69395|2,69473|3,69552|4,69630|3,69709|1,69709|2,69709|0) - could do something more fancy here mr. smartpants http://puu.sh/hfZYw/f4a477a9b7.jpg just my opinion i liked this pattern it connects to the next pattern youre having and it felt nice to play.
01:11:122 (71122|4,71122|3,71436|4,71436|2) - should have 3 noted these guys or else delete 01:10:808 (70808|2,70808|3,70808|0) - one of your bae totally inconsistent and feels empty.
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1) - add another note please cause of 01:12:536 (72536|2,72536|1,72536|0,73321|3,73321|2,73321|0,73792|2,73792|1,73792|0) -
01:14:578 (74578|1,74578|4) - these is where id prefer put my 3 notes the fact that it is loud it suits here the most.
01:22:431 (82431|3,82431|1) - dont really know what is the reason behind this 2 notes that has to be here. delete you could continue stream instead!
01:37:667 (97667|0) - add another note.
01:46:148 (106148|4,106227|3,106306|1,106306|2,106384|3,106463|4,106463|1,106463|0,106541|3,106620|1,106698|2,106777|1,106777|3,106855|2,106934|3,106934|1,107012|2,107091|3,107091|0,107091|4,107169|2,107248|3,107248|1,107326|2,107405|0,107405|1,107405|3) - for me these felt messy could have polished this more. re-arranged
01:49:447 (109447|3,109525|1,109604|3) - delete this is not needed imo and oh! look it is much more neat!
01:52:038 (112038|4,112274|0) - dont know whyd you suddenly jump with these 2 lns. violin plox
02:32:484 (152484|3,152484|2,152484|0) - this sound is catchy, ive seen this before hmm check my past mod, AGAIN THIS IS CATCHY OMFG WHYD YOU SUDDNLY 02:32:798 (152798|1,152798|3,152955|0,152955|2,153112|4,153112|1) - bruh
03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - in my ways, if youd do something crazy as 03:49:604 (229604|2,229604|4,229682|0,229682|3,229761|4,229761|1,229840|0,229840|2,229918|1,229918|3,229997|2,229997|0,230075|1,230075|3,230154|0,230154|2,230232|1,230232|4,230311|3,230311|0,230389|4,230389|2,230468|3,230468|1,230546|2,230546|0,230546|4) - you wouldnt follow 03:49:054 (229054|1,229054|2,229290|1,229290|2,229290|3,229447|1,229447|2) - these sounds anymore "^w^ it just makes the pattern look messy get rid of it or i rekt u. just concentrate on your stream it will play better!
03:49:054 (229054|2,229054|1,229290|3,229290|2,229290|1,229447|2,229447|1,236201|4,236515|4,236829|4,237771|1) - id prefer if youd delete this, should've followed the pattern more. repatterned
04:25:573 (265573|3,265573|1) - this part is MORE stronger than 04:25:415 (265415|4,265415|2,265415|0) - and yet you gave it a 2 notes only? i felt bad for the part my bad

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Hi Hello! Jamesu nyan. A little sort of thingy advice thingy? as a mapper, you stated to me that you didnt need another diff oke. In this case this is a marathon right? which needs only 1 diff right as you said please. in this case [2] you should have reviewed and checked this more often if youd really plan on ranking this, cause one of the biggest pros of mapping marathon is having only 1 diff, therefore which means you only have 1 diff to give a shit at, and that doesnt mean to slack of no! you should have checked it more often and fixed it more often the fact that you only have "This" diff and yet the song isnt that really really really long i think you should give time to this awesome map that you made if your really aiming for rank. Review the parts,ask someone's opinion,ask more mods,ask more mods!, annoy bns to check it ( lmao dont lol jk) , play it more , and make time to it more, cause i know this map has a potential and i would be glad to see this in the ranked section soon : ^)


this is yuno nyan signing off.

Kazamastar11 wrote:

I haven't download the file, maybe my mod will come this evening/tomorrow..
Short mod for now ok ?

Add "yama_ko" and "Lyrical Signal" to the tags..

Btw, i recommend you to use this BG..
That's for now ^^

NO KUDOSU

1. I've mention this on the first mod

1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768

1. Resize to 1366x768

1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
2. 01:09:709 - Start
3. 01:19:133 - End
4. 01:19:761 - Start
5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
6. 01:49:918 - Start
7. 02:08:766 - End
8. 02:31:384 - Start
9. 02:40:808 - End
10. 02:41:436 - Start
11. 02:51:175 - End
12. 02:51:489 - Start
13. 03:00:913 - End
14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
15. 03:10:337 - End
16. 03:34:211 - Start
17. 03:53:374 - End
18. 03:54:316 - Start
19. 04:14:421 - End
20. 04:16:934 - Start
21. 04:26:358 - End
22. 04:26:986 - Start
23. 04:36:724 - End
24. 04:37:038 - Start
25. 04:46:463 - End
26. 04:47:091 - Start
27. 04:59:970 - End

1. No problem

1. Cruel, but ok

Kazamastar11 wrote:

From Kazamastar's Queue

[General]
1. Metadata

1. I've mention this on the first mod

2. Design

1. I think you must resize the BG to 1366x768

3. BG

1. Resize to 1366x768

4. Timing / BPM

1. Huh ? Where's the Kiai ?
2. 01:09:709 - Start
3. 01:19:133 - End
4. 01:19:761 - Start
5. 01:29:813 OR 01:30:127 - End
6. 01:49:918 - Start
7. 02:08:766 - End
8. 02:31:384 - Start
9. 02:40:808 - End
10. 02:41:436 - Start
11. 02:51:175 - End
12. 02:51:489 - Start
13. 03:00:913 - End
14. 03:01:541 OR 03:01:855 - Start
15. 03:10:337 - End
16. 03:34:211 - Start
17. 03:53:374 - End
18. 03:54:316 - Start
19. 04:14:421 - End
20. 04:16:934 - Start
21. 04:26:358 - End
22. 04:26:986 - Start
23. 04:36:724 - End
24. 04:37:038 - Start
25. 04:46:463 - End
26. 04:47:091 - Start
27. 04:59:970 - End

5. Hitsound

1. No problem

6. Difficulty

1. Cruel, but ok

LN : Long notes / Hold notes
PR : Pitch Relevancy
Stair : 0,1,2,3 / 3,2,1,0 (Ascending / Descending notes)
Trill : 0,1,0 / 3,2,3 (Like > / <)
Hammer (Jackhammer) : Notes on one column 0,0,0 / 1,1,1 (Spam on one column)

COLUMN

4K : |0|1|2|3|
5K : |0|1|2|3|4|
6K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|
8K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Renaissance (Gray Another)]
00:15:834 (15834|3) - Here, i know you're following the pitch, well it's up to you but i prefer if you move this to 1 no thanks
00:22:948 - 2 notes ?

01:29:813 (89813|1) - Move to 0
01:30:128 (90128|3) - Move to 4
01:41:593 (101593|3) - Move to 0/1 for PR
01:46:463 until 01:49:840 - I think it's overmapped nope
02:21:332 until 02:30:127 - ^ I think you didn't heard very well on piano and some small kicks
02:49:447 until 02:51:489 - ^ small kicks
02:54:787 (174787|1) - Move to 2 nope
03:01:855 until 03:05:154 - Overmap NOPE
03:08:609 (188609|1) - Move to 0
03:11:436 (191436|1,191515|0) - Move them to the next column
03:11:593 (191593|4,191672|3,191751|2,191829|1,191908|3,191986|2,192065|1,192143|0,192222|4,192300|3,192379|1,192457|0,192536|1,192536|2,192536|4,192614|3,192693|2,192771|1) - Ctrl+H
03:34:211 until 03:53:059 - Overmap woah nerf it a bit
03:58:086 (238086|1) - Move to 3
03:59:342 (239342|1) - ^ nope
04:01:463 (241463|3) - Move to 1/2
04:02:169 until 04:14:421 - Overmap nope
04:16:934 (256934|3) - Move to 4 nope
04:22:745 (262745|1) - Move to 0
04:46:148 (286148|2) - Move to 3
04:47:405 until 04:50:703 - Overmap same
04:56:201 until 04:58:086 - ^ same
Reduce some notes on the overmapped part, or it'll prevent fire to come (?)
rest of the mods applied
Really short mod
I'm sorry.. Take my star anyway ^^

I almost MM this song on Cytus (playing with thumb and forget the 3 hold note at the ending) oh
Good luck~

Feedback about my mod :

Not bad. Hope you can get better at modding

Eternalie wrote:

Hi Jamesu~
mod request from ハナヤマタ

hope it will help :3

Munya!

Collumn 5K = 1/2/3/4/5

[Gray Another]
00:08:139 (8139|0) - move to 5 to avoid jacku
00:14:263 (14263|2,14577|3) - Ctrl+J for pitch relevancy
00:22:948 (22948|0) - You could make this 1/1 LN imo , since it does sound abit longer tham other sounds nope
00:29:500 (29500|0,29735|2,29971|4) - This should be 1/3 snap ^^b
00:49:605 (49605|3,49840|0,50076|2) - ^ should be 1/3
00:55:259 (55259|1) - (optional) move to 1
01:11:279 (71279|0,71279|1,71279|3) - you used 3 notes here and only 2 here l 01:13:792 (73792|0,73792|1) - you may keep consistent amount of notes to the same sounds
^ I suggest to use 2 only for snares here or make all of it 3 notes if you want super hard diffu
01:18:661 (78661|2) - ^same reason for concistency reason you should make this 2 notes
01:33:190 (93190|4) - add note (drum sound here )
01:39:866 (99866|2) - add one more note for cymbal sound
01:43:243 (103243|4) - add note for drum sound
01:48:269 (108269|2) - add to 3 (drum sound here too ) this time nope
01:57:300 (117300|4) - I suggest to move it to 3 ( even tho both placement make it shielding with another LN ) I think it's better to make shield at end of LN tham the start of it in term of difficulty
^basically Easy = move to 3 Hard = don't move
=^)
02:07:667 (127667|1) - add one more note to 5 ( louder drum sound here imo)
02:12:143 (132143|3) - Move to 02:12:117 (132117|3) - (this is actually 1/3 snap )
02:12:222 (132222|0) - move to 02:12:326 (132326|0) - this one followed the drum
( if you were actually following drum then ) 02:12:143 (132143|3) - only this one need to be moved
02:31:855 (151855|4) - add one more note imo

special mention :
03:01:855 (181855|2,181855|3) - this part looks awesome *w* thx

----
03:08:452 (188452|4) - add 2 notes to for an example 1 and 5 no thanks
03:17:248 (197248|2,197484|1,197680|0) - this notes are 1/3 even it's reallllyy smallll gap it's 1/3
03:37:196 (217196|2,217353|1,217588|0) - same this notes are 1/3
04:01:698 (241698|4,241698|1,241698|2,241698|3) - I think 3 notes would be fine ,4 seems abit too much
04:40:651 (280651|2,280651|0,280651|1,280651|4,280887|1,280887|0,280887|2,280887|3,281122|1,281122|4,281122|3,281122|2,281279|0,281279|2,281279|1,281279|3,281515|3,281515|4,281515|1,281515|2) - wow I like this :O
04:46:148 (286148|2,286148|0) - should be 3 notes imo
04:54:002 (294002|4,294002|0) - add 2 notes
rest of the mods applied
Also On a side note only one thing that I find pretty special even i can't really say if i'm wrong
The piano part from here 03:34:211 (214211|1,214211|0) - to the end of the piano section after the whole wall of chords
some people might consider it as OVER map but tbh '' sound '' ''key pressed '' hmmm =^) trying to make hard stuff I like that tho i doubt being abble to pass this . First I thought hmm maybe it's not 1/4 but 1/3 but nope it does really sound like 1/4 so err
tl:dr : Consider nerfing that part if too much people complain about it (( consider )) (lol) x) Nerf it

Sugoi diff , hope it will help Good Luck Jamesu~ ^^/ take a stawwy and have a nice day desu~ !
As my opinion I consider nothing as Overmap atleast not when keys are pressed when it does have sounds actually legit to me xD

pwhk wrote:

GD arrived

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9i8jdjpu4rr4c ... D.osu?dl=0

Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps

Eternalie wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

wogh support this /o/
awsome song and mapset! xD
#ManiaNeedsMore5Kmaps

YOU HEARD IT , Go jamesu go~
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi o/
Mod from my queue~

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]

Mods

00:46:463 - Add a note on 2. There's this Impulse here different than 00:36:411
01:37:824 - Add a note? It has same sound as 01:37:510
01:47:876 - ^ same sound as 01:47:562
01:56:044 - ^ same sound as 01:55:258
01:58:557 - ^
01:58:871 - Add a note there. Because of a Snare.
02:46:463 - ^ Same sound as 02:43:949
03:36:724 - ^ Because the Piano sounds louder, so I ssume there's 2 piano there.
04:31:070 - ^ same sound as 04:29:813

Great 5K Map. Good Luck there~

Crono wrote:

5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it 1/6 actually. Either way I applied it

SPOILER

7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)

no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3

Crono wrote:

5k Gray Rennaisance

02:50:232 change like this. It flows better imo

04:36:724 to 04:37:038 sounds like there should be a 1/8 pattern instead 1/4. it's faster then the stairs before it


7k pw's Black Another

It's best if I leave this map to more experienced modders, This diff is both difficult for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me )

just a couple of suggestions:

There is too much broken stairs mixed in, it's good in some places but it messes up uniformity and readability.

A little less spacing with some notes might improve readability for less experienced players. For one such as myself who play crazy maps like these for fun, it's not fun when you can't even read it. (fyi I play with scrolling at 23 fixed)

no kd

EDIT 1: added 7k mod
EDIT 2: Good luck <3

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Crono wrote:

This Both diff is both difficult still impossible for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me )

Rayz141 wrote:

req from astral horizon q

quoting crono w/ some changes

Crono wrote:

This Both diff is both difficult still impossible for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me )

Columns: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 and 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

mod

[5K]
00:09:395 (9395|3) - different pitch from 00:08:767 (8767|3) - so why not moving to 5
00:29:186 (29186|1,29343|3) - Ctrl+H for more stair-ish pattern?
00:41:123 (41123|0) - to 3?
01:18:347 - add? you have 3 notes on cymbal sounds earlier
03:00:127 - ^

[7K]
00:10:985 - until 00:11:651 - this is the only time you don't map the background piano, so maybe add them here: 00:10:985 - , 00:11:318 - , and 00:11:651 - ya, noticed this before modding, added
00:48:505 - you missed a drum sound here fixed
00:53:531 - ^
00:58:557 - ^
01:03:343 - ^ All done
01:15:991 - add another note for cymbals? sure
01:19:133 - ^ done

that's all i can do, sorry. dont kd if not helpful enough

the others from the q may come to mod this

in the meantime, take this

good luck o/ Thanks!

Rayz141 wrote:

req from astral horizon q

quoting crono w/ some changes

Crono wrote:

This Both diff is both difficult still impossible for me to play and I can barely read it at times.
(I'm noob plz don't judge me )

Columns: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 and 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

mod

[5K]
00:09:395 (9395|3) - different pitch from 00:08:767 (8767|3) - so why not moving to 5
00:29:186 (29186|1,29343|3) - Ctrl+H for more stair-ish pattern? Nope, I like it
00:41:123 (41123|0) - to 3? nope
01:18:347 - add? you have 3 notes on cymbal sounds earlier
03:00:127 - ^

Rest Applied

that's all i can do, sorry. dont kd if not helpful enough

the others from the q may come to mod this

in the meantime, take this

good luck o/

Kruzon wrote:

Hi, modding extension from Astral Horizon, and I'll be modding your 7k Another
My 7k column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

Black Another

00:32:327 (32327|3) - move to 3, PR sure

*Optional 1: (Recommended)
00:35:468 (35468|1) - move to 5, Keep for PR
00:36:411 (36411|6,37667|0) - Press Ctrl + H

00:46:463 (46463|0) - move to 4, better pattern base
00:47:563 (47563|2) - move to 4, 00:47:563 (47563|3,47877|2,48034|0) - the rhythm seem decreasing at this point
00:57:929 (57929|2) - move to 2, same reason as above, 00:57:144 (57144|3,57615|2,57929|1) - I prefer trill here, and it sounds same pitch for me. May change if other modders complain

00:59:343 (59343|6) - considerably loud drum sound here, perhaps add 1 more note, on 4 Only change note here seems inconsistent, keep.

01:01:071 (61071|1,61071|4) - quite awkward and imbalance to press, perhaps implement pattern repetition instead. suggest 01:01:071 (61071|4,61071|1) - move them to 4 and 6 respectively, you'll get these 01:00:913 (60913|2,60913|6,61071|5,61071|3,61385|3,61385|1,61517|4,61517|0,61517|2) - ok

01:30:127 (90127|0) - move to 2 sure
01:33:740 (93740|0,93740|1) - shift them 2 times to the right, aligning on same column as 01:33:269 (93269|2,93269|3,93740|2,93740|3) - for better flow ok, but I would also move next two notes due to same-pitched piano.

01:37:038 (97038|5) - move to 2, for 01:36:410 (96410|1,96410|2,97038|1,97038|2) - , and sure
01:37:117 (97117|0) - move to 5, 01:37:038 (97038|2,97117|4,97196|2,97274|4,97353|6,97353|1) - 4 instead due to different pitch

*Optional 2: Starting at this time 01:43:792 (103792|1) - , suggestion: http://puu.sh/hq1UG/7c517c643f.png Same-pitch piano is present here, keep.
*Optional 3: Starting at this time 01:44:264 (104264|4) - , suggestion: http://puu.sh/hq1Zx/227f6e60bc.png Keep for PR reasons, moved 01:44:578 (104578|6) - to 1 anyway
Results:
01:44:107 (104107|0,104107|3,104892|3,104892|6) -
01:44:342 (104342|2,104421|4,104421|6,104499|2,104578|4,104578|6,104656|2,104735|4,104735|6) - fitting along rhythm

01:47:012 (107012|4) - move to 3, and
01:47:091 (107091|2) - move to 4, i think this has quite good pattern flow ok

01:59:970 (119970|4,119970|1) - shift them 2 times to the right, aligning to same column as 02:00:285 (120285|6,120285|3) - ok

02:25:573 (145573|6,145730|6,145887|6,146044|6,146201|6,146358|6,146515|6,146672|6,146829|6) - oh wow lol
suggestion:
02:25:887 (145887|6) - move to 2
02:26:044 (146044|6) - move to 5
02:26:201 (146201|6,146201|4,146201|2) - shift 2 times to the left , PR screw this i made too many changes i forgot the notes placement. so view these instead..
starting at this time 02:25:651 (145651|4) - >> http://puu.sh/hq2xI/97040429d0.png
and, starting at this time 02:26:358 (146358|3) - >> http://puu.sh/hq2zY/a22cac8382.png

02:27:929 (147929|0,148086|0,148243|0,148400|0,148557|0,148714|0,148871|0,149028|0,149185|0,149342|0,149499|0) - ... another one. well this is not wrong but i don't think continuous jacks blend well with on-going pattern, perhaps you need to separate some of the notes from column 1 to another
suggest to re-pattern Keep unless other modders complain (I think Akasha also do this but anyway)

02:57:300 (177300|0,177614|0) - shift 1 time to the right ok

03:05:782 (185782|0) - move to 3, see this 03:05:154 (185154|3,185154|4,185154|5,185468|2,185468|3,185468|4,185782|1,185782|3,185782|2) - ok

umm, starting at this time 03:06:096 (186096|2) - , a picture for you, again: http://puu.sh/hq2XJ/f955b13a49.png sure

03:24:080 (204080|4) - no, this should not belong with stair pattern. listen closely, this note should be include along the violin rhythm. therefore:
03:24:080 (204080|4) - move to 1 I put song into 25% and it seems suggest this pattern is at pitch, but I am going to change this anyway to 2 instead
03:24:159 (204159|1) - bad flow, just move it to 3 ok

-mod ends-

good luck with your map Thanks!

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
M4M

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Everything modded

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
• Putting kiai time would be nice, like on 7K :v
• 00:03:741 - Add a note on 5? sound has high pitch
• 00:13:949 - ^
• 01:29:499 ~ 01:29:813 - Add stairs here? for the drums
• 01:39:866 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:44:892 - ^
• 02:20:075 - ^ ? for the bass
• 02:26:358 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 03:01:541 - Add a note? for the cymbal sound
• 03:50:232 - How 'bout this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3074792 (since it has the same sounds, so it should follow the patterns: 03:46:620 - 03:49:133 - 03:51:646 -
• 04:10:651 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 04:47:091 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound

[pw- 7K Black Another]
• 00:03:741 - Add a note? Sound has high pitch Doubled sounds because there are two piano sound, rather than high pitch. Mixing them seems odd. May change if other modders complain.
• 00:07:824 - ^
• 00:08:139 - ^
• 00:13:321 - ^
• 00:13:949 - ^
• 00:15:834 - ^
• 00:18:391 - ^
• 00:40:809 (40809|4,41123|6) - Move two spaces to the right (hand balance) There isn't any room on the right!
• 00:41:437 (41437|3) - Move to 1 or 3? for hand balance sure
• 01:25:101 - Add a note, loud snare ok
• 01:26:358 - ^
• 01:27:614 - ^
• 01:32:012 - ^ all done
• 01:59:970 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound sure
• 02:05:311 - Add a note, loud snare ok
• 02:26:358 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound Added already
• 02:46:463 - ^ ok
• 03:12:850 - ^ ok
• 04:10:651 - ^ Exist already

That's all.
I have no complains on the streams.
Good luck~! Thanks!

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
M4M

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Everything modded

[Renaissance (5K Gray Another)]
• Putting kiai time would be nice, like on 7K :v
• 00:03:741 - Add a note on 5? sound has high pitch nope
• 00:13:949 - ^ nope
• 01:29:499 ~ 01:29:813 - Add stairs here? for the drums didn't hear any
• 01:39:866 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:44:892 - ^
• 02:20:075 - ^ ? for the bass
• 02:26:358 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 03:01:541 - Add a note? for the cymbal sound
• 03:50:232 - How 'bout this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3074792 (since it has the same sounds, so it should follow the patterns: 03:46:620 - 03:49:133 - 03:51:646 -
• 04:10:651 - Add a note or two notes, for the cymbal sound
• 04:47:091 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound

Rest Applied

That's all.
I have no complains on the streams.
Good luck~!

Harbyter wrote:

hi mod req via queue

[timing]

01:08:767 - offset wrong ,set the offset here 01:08:747 -

01:09:709 - ^ set offset here 01:09:689 -

01:30:128 - ^ offset here 01:30:106 -

apply after the mod


[7k]


00:26:359 (26359|2) - move in col 1? sure

00:29:735 (29735|2,29971|0) - those are in 1/3 00:29:709 - 00:29:919 - sure

00:29:186 (29186|5,29343|4,29500|3,29709|2,29919|0) - suggest to turn in LNs too sure

00:35:783 (35783|2,35940|3,36097|4,36254|5) - ^ sure

00:42:379 (42379|5) - starts here 00:42:484 - ok

00:49:840 (49840|2,50076|0) - same as before ,1/3 ok


02:09:080 (129080|3) - suggest to move in col 1 ok


i think you should fix the timing first , can't continue to mod :V

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66945,1500,4,2,0,55,1,0
67695,1445.78313253012,4,2,0,55,1,0
68417,314.13612565445,4,2,0,55,1,0

Yoshiap wrote:

Just did the 7k for now. There's a good chance I'll come back for the 5k later.

pw-7K

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Given the intro section, with both LNs and a massive slowdown, OD 9 seems slightly harsh for this map. I would still keep the OD on the higher end, however, due to the rest of the map being largely rice.
Preview point not snapped to anything. Not sure if this is unrankable or not however, so ignore this if it's fine.

Ok it looks like JamesHappy does not update my map after updating the timing Let me fix it.....

Notes Mod - I didn't look at these as hard as I probably should have, so there's probably several things that escaped my attention.
00:05:626 - add? similar to 00:06:254 - not adding as 00:06:254 actually has two pianos
00:08:139 - add? similar to 00:08:767 -
00:09:395 - ^ ^
00:10:347 - remove? two pianos here, keep
00:15:834 - add? similar to 00:14:892 - ok
00:20:057 (20057|3,20102|4,20147|5) - maybe try placing this on 567 instead? (and moving the note below this as well in that case) ok
The above section mostly disregards pattern in these suggestions. Feel free to reject if you like your current pattern.

00:26:359 - / 00:26:396 - Fix snapping sure!
01:06:652 - add? drum keeps going here I can't here drum here...
01:19:447 (79447|6) - note feels out of place by itself, even though I understand what you're trying to do here. Keeping
01:49:525 (109525|6,109552|5) - any particlar reason to switching the positions of these 2 notes? Redone this part due to I forgetting what it was before retiming the map lol

03:44:107 (224107|4,224185|4,224264|4) - /03:46:620 (226620|6,226698|6,226777|6) - Given how calm this section is, these jacks really don't go along with the song. Note, I am not saying this for 03:49:133 (229133|4,229211|4,229290|4) - and future jacks, as the song begins audibly playing its own drumroll at this point. The drum, which the jacks responds to, is very audible already. May still change if other modders complain, tho
In general, for this slow section of the song, it is strange how it has the highest note density in the song, given that it is also one of the slowest sections in the song. In addition, the slow scroll speed makes this section even more difficult to read. In fact this part is growing, so not really slow section anymore, but anyway I am nerfing this because this is really hard lol

SV Mods Unfortunately I lost the SVs when I re-apply 5K map's timing I am reapplying my SVs but might be off, so be wary
00:25:706 - This is really really really slow. Almost painfully so. Especially as a transition to the next section. Increased SV slightly, as further up will have to increase all other sections' SV to compensate
In general, this first section, while appropriately slow, feels slightly TOO slow.
00:46:463 - While it does get noticeably faster, it feels rather insignifcant. You can afford to bump this up more (probably).
01:02:165 - Entering painfully slow territory again. Increased both sections SV a bit
03:12:850 - Feels slightly weird for everything to just suddenly slow down like that. Maybe halt (nearly completely) and speed up again? Or possibly just slowdown from current speed. The direct jump is kinda jarring.
03:14:107 - This is faster than what is immediately before this. You should either make this the same, or make what comes before speed up to this scroll speed. (This is a suggestion, harsh wording sorry -_-. Not sure how else to say this.) Ok make both the same then
03:34:211 - You can probably start this section on a slightly higher scroll speed? Its already fine as is.
04:15:677 - I like. haha

I didn't look at the patterns too closely, but they felt somewhat arbitrary to me when I was playing through this. They might be perfectly fine though.

Aoi Minase wrote:

I think you should make an Easy/Normal difficulty with at least 2.0 star below

Frim4503 wrote:

M4M
My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322571
col.1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

General

1. No hs
2. from this begining until 00:25:701 - change vol. to 10%. 25% is too loud. then this part 01:08:417 - to 15% will do this all later

Renaissance (5K Gray Another)

00:07:824 (7824|3,7824|0) - delete 1. single note is more fit in here i think Strong piano so nope
00:11:651 - why in here become 3 note ? while the first part with same sound just using 2. i dont here any pitch
00:45:197 (45197|2) - move to 4 next time, please give a reason why i should move this note okay? About this one, keep
00:53:992 (53992|2) - remove. no piano soung like prev. faint piano there so keep
01:36:060 (96060|4) - move to 2. for better flow. see this 01:36:218 (96218|1,96296|3,96375|4) - inverse PR, also intended so keep
02:00:249 (120249|1) - move to 4 keep
02:18:862 (138862|1,138940|0,139019|1,139176|1,139254|0,139333|1,139411|0) - rearange. too much pressure in left hand intended for left handed so keep
02:27:579 (147579|0,147579|1) - make tripple for cymbal sound. see this 02:28:835 (148835|1,148835|4,148835|3) -
02:40:773 (160773|0) - move to 4 keep
03:19:568 - add note for piano sound like you did in 03:19:097 (199097|3) - i didn't hear piano sound so nope
03:22:867 (202867|2) - move to 4

just mod the 5k dif

PyaKura wrote:

It was fun, like really fun. I hardly play 5K at all and it's a shame there isn't more 5K mapper.

However...

The fuck is this from 03:44:228 - to 03:53:024 - ? If anything it just looks and feels like a filler pattern which does not follow the intensity of the song as opposed to the rest of the map.

PyaKura wrote:

There are also a few weird SVs but nothing game breaking (but for quality you should smooth them out, most notably during the part that starts at 03:12:814 - )

Ye just my 2 cents, no kd.

Fun map nonetheless, keep it up and go for rank!

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi James
oh i know this is already in my old queue xD sorry im too lazy with that old queue x..x oh lol

MOD READY

Mod by Request on



5K

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Mod Inside

[General]

Metadata/Song Setup

1. add Cytus to the Tags since it's on Cytus too

[Alcyone]

01:02:819 (62819|4,62819|3) - maybe delete one of it since it just 1 kind of violin actually it's 2
01:29:856 - 01:29:935 - 01:30:013 - if you hear it carefully there's a sound here It's intended to not add some notes since woosh SV is there
01:38:181 (98181|3) - ghost note, delete please, there's no sound, not hithat or even synt actually there's sound here so nope
01:41:008 - there is a snare here, you must layer it since you are currently following the snare well I intended to not add some since I follow piano
01:49:411 (109411|0,109464|1,109516|4,109568|0,109568|3,109621|2,109673|4,109725|3,109778|0,109830|1,109882|3,109882|4,109882|0) - consider Ctrl H this for hand balance, cuz 01:49:019 (109019|0,109097|1,109176|2,109254|0,109307|1,109359|2,109411|0,109464|1,109568|0) - this is ..... uhh ! I think it's balance enough.
02:09:673 - consider following 1/4 on this part for better play, also the piano on that part is replaced by those sound i don't wanna break it so i rather not
02:36:296 (156296|4,156532|0) - idk what sound that you follow, if you want to keep it then 02:36:375 - 02:36:453 - 02:36:610 - should be 2 ntoe since there's a kick not gonna add
02:45:877 - add 1 more note for snare ? ^
03:07:474 (187474|4,187474|3) - delete one of it, since there's no kick and 03:07:317 (187317|1,187317|2) - has a kick, so you can't make it same i hear another sound so nope
03:44:228 - this part is just overmapped for a calm part like this, consider remap this part, and i know you gonna reject what i say yep, see the bms file on this one

04:40:851 (280851|1,280851|3,280851|2,280851|4) - wrong snap, should be on 04:40:877 - please heat it carefully
04:41:244 (281244|1,281244|2,281244|4,281244|3) - wrong snap again, should be on 04:41:296 - please hear it more carefully
04:41:479 (281479|0,281479|3,281479|2,281479|1) - wong snap should be on 04:41:506 - hear it again please
Blame my headphones at that early times XD


04:42:186 (282186|1) - this one has no kick but 04:41:951 (281951|2,282029|0,282108|3,282265|4) - has a kick, so please delete 04:42:186 (282186|1) - or at least make them diffrent no thanks

ok Good Luck James =w=)b

Kivicat wrote:

Hi, HappyJames
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Inside :3

01:55:694 - I found it a bit uncomfortable and breaking pitch and accents (from next barline). Try this: http://puu.sh/mjteF/5208440f06.png. re-arrange for a bit
01:58:600 (118600|3) - Can't hear piano here. Do you use this note for something else? i can hear piano very well here so no
02:30:485 (150485|0) - Ghost? no
03:04:097 (184097|3) - Ghost? Even if you hear it clearly, better delete. Listen at 100% speed, interrupt in stream is needed there according to music. no, i don't want to break the streams here. Even in a BMS file, there's no interruption in streams.
03:28:835 (208835|0) - Delete, sounds like single note. i don't think so.
03:37:003 - Snaps are incorrect. Try: http://puu.sh/mjuPl/1efe2909b4.jpg. String is difficult to snap indeed, so i'm not completely sure. Ask some other experienced modders to pay attention on this bar. Actually this is accurate
03:38:888 (218888|4,219045|3) - Same as above, must be 1/4. Or they are not for string? Also, i'm not sure in 03:38:731 (218731|2) - , it seems to start a bit later. i'll just ask BN's to check this part
03:42:029 (222029|4,222108|2,222186|1,222265|0,222343|1) - Hmm, seems like 1/3. keep
03:43:914 (223914|3,224071|4) - 1/4 for string. ^
04:49:647 (289647|3) - Better delete, same as before. Same comment
04:53:731 - 04:53:809 - I hear background piano. What do you think? nah i don't wanna add anymore
Btw, i think, you should increase offset in main section for ~10 ms. i think it's accurate enough

Good luck!

Soul Evans wrote:

SPOILER

Soul's Modding
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General

1. Hmm, maybe you can find a suitable replacement for the BG, not that it doesn't work but i think there's something more suiting to this beautiful song
2. I'd advise making this map HP 8.5
   [Alcyone]
3. 00:06:567 (6567|2) - The map barely has any LNs so this is pointless to add to the overall structure, plus i think you're missing other short lns at the rest of the piano solo, consider making it regular notes wrong time stamp?
   
   
4. 00:20:057 (20057|1,20102|2,20147|3) - Yeah i consider moving those to the right of the columns because it seems off playing in middle, or you can just move (3,4) only and keep the 2 no change here
   
5. 00:21:502 (21502|4) - Yeah like i said about it, either make it like regular notes or add more of this, up to you because i want this to be consistent to use, remember a good map must have reason for every note or pattern
   
6. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - Add note? because 00:33:888 (33888|2) - so add for consistency
7. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - same here
8. 00:33:888 (33888|2) - anyways i think it's fine making two notes for it in my opinion
   Again, wrong time stamp?
   
9. 00:46:453 - until 00:48:966 - Why not add notes for that sound in the background? i think would make this as a warm up to what's coming (well mediocre atleast) intended because i want to focus more on violin
   
10. 00:52:422 (52422|2) - Maybe move this to 2 while 00:52:579 (52579|3) - to 4
    pitch
    
11. 01:08:417 - Why don't you follow the sound in the background? i think would make it more interesting and also i think you should nerf the SV a little
    Same comment as above in 00:46:453
    
12. 01:11:872 - Was thinking of making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326386
    i'll just keep the current pattern
    
13. 01:21:924 - Eh, i think you can reshape this pattern to flow more because packing it into 2-3 cols is kinda prevent flow for the map
    rearrange a bit
    
14. 01:29:464 - I think you can add some sort of LN here, but that's up to you if you wanna nerf the SV
    i rather not
    
15. 01:46:191 (106191|2,106348|2,106506|2,106663|2,106820|2,106977|2,107134|2,107291|2) - Not only this is an anchor but it's on the thumb aswell, anchors in general are what you should avoid if it's not anchor oriented, it just ruins the bursts completely i suggest changing the pattern pattern suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326420
    rearrange a bit
    
16. 01:59:935 - Maybe add an LN here i'm not sure, i think it would give it a nice feel
    i rather not
    
17. 02:07:081 - This can be changed to play out more nicely than what you used, i would give you a pattern suggestion but i want you to learn to make good patterns so experiment
    gotta keep those
    
18. 02:26:793 (146793|1,146951|1,147108|1,147265|1,147422|1,147579|1,147736|1) - Avoid doing these anchors please
    rearrange a bit
    
19. 02:41:872 (161872|2) - Consider moving to 1
    nope
    
20. 03:43:835 (223835|2,223992|2,224149|2,224307|2) - Hmm, maybe swap around the LNs to prevent this anchor on col 3
    this time i'll keep those
    
21. 03:58:521 - There is 1 note or 2 that you haven't added a chord for the loud drum yet, maybe add it
    didn't heard any drum here
    
22. 04:12:108 (252108|2,252265|2,252422|2,252579|2,252736|2,253050|2,253207|2,253364|2,253521|2,253678|2,253835|2,253992|2,254149|2,254307|2) - Theres alot of ways you can improve this bursts pattern, i suggest asking a mod from verify-chan or skalim for it
    gotta keep those
    
23. 04:36:689 - I would suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6326495
    made this for more challenging so gotta keep those