From my queue
oh another Absolute Soul <3
[General]
[byfar's Extra]
[handsome's Insane]
[Hard]
[Normal]
Well..... GL
oh another Absolute Soul <3
Bold : Should be fix it.
Green : high recommended suggestion
Normal : In my personal opinion.
Green : high recommended suggestion
Normal : In my personal opinion.
[General]
- you should be remove ' Absolute ' in tag already in tittle.
- cheak out widescreen in theramdans' Hard
[byfar's Extra]
You sholud be fix NC stuff. you use really many speed change. but you know? so Many NC make confused to play.
- AR : 9.3~9.5 , OD : > 8.3 HP : 7.3 // I think better this for gep with Insane diff.
- 00:01:350 (1) - you miss stack on this 00:00:871 (4) -
- 00:03:424 (1,1) - I can't understand why you add NC here? It's really confusing with 00:02:626 (1) - I guess remove NC make better to play.
- 00:03:424 (1,2) - and make ctrl + G seem to be better follow, I think. If got jump in 00:03:424 (1) - player can easier to understand with next jump 00:03:743 (1) -
- 00:04:541 (3) - you little miss blanket with 00:04:381 (2) -
- 00:07:733 (1) - tail didn't stack on 00:07:573 (5) -
- 00:10:286 (2) - tail didn't stack on 00:09:169 (1) -
- 00:10:605 (3) - I think normal whistle is really awkward. I think you add auto whistle on head and add sampleset Normal on resverse.
and you should be fix stack with 00:09:647 (4) - tail. - 00:12:201 (3) - Deceleration is better than acceleration.
- 00:14:594 (3) - well... Thing did not change yet I think there is a reason. but It's really hard to read. I think ctrl + G is really better. ( follow , read )
- 00:15:073 (4) - remove NC. no need here.
- 00:16:509 (1) - you miss stack with 00:16:030 (3) -
- 00:16:988 (1) - remove NC. no need here.
- 00:17:786 (3) - same above. remove NC
- 00:19:222 (1,3) - Switch NC better. If you want to emphasize the vocal you are unsure of changing.
- 00:19:062 (2) - move x : 415 , y : 196. better for design.
- 00:20:498 (1) - fix blanket pls
- 00:22:094 (2) - Nazi. just I think this is better symmetry.
- 00:22:413 (3) - tail didn't stack with 00:21:775 (1) - 's head.
- 00:23:052 (1) - remove NC. and add here 00:23:211 (3) - . remove NC 00:23:850 (1) - too.
- 00:24:328 (1) - cheak head. you miss stack, too.
- 00:25:286 (1) - remove NC. no need here.
- 00:27:839 (3) - ^
- 00:28:557 (2) - I guess It's really bad to play. The first time to play, surely we can't 300 point there.
- 00:28:956 (1) - remove NC better.
- 00:29:754 (1) - remove NC and add here 00:29:914 (2) -
- 00:30:233 (1) - same above. remove NC and add 00:30:392 (2) -
- 00:30:392 (2) - cheak stack pls.
- 00:31:748 - remove this green line.
- 00:31:828 - ^
- 00:31:828 (1) - remove NC here. no need.
- 00:35:339 (4,1) - I'm sure switch NC better. 00:35:339 (4,1,2) - those slider speed are different but you don't have NC here 00:35:818 (2) -
0.1 ~ 0.2x speed difference is okay because there are a lot of shifting. and matched 00:34:062 (1,2,3) - , make better to play. - 00:37:493 (2) - remove NC
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - 00:39:807 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change NC sutff.
>>00:39:807 (3) - remove NC
>>00:39:967 (1) - NC
>>00:40:286 (1) - remove NC
>>00:40:445 (1) - NC
>>00:40:685 (2) - remove NC
>>00:41:243 (2) - remove NC
>>00:41:722 (1) - NC
those NC is better to play and follow vocal's
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- - 00:43:478 (3,1) - switch NC better. 00:42:998 (1,2,3) - those are 1/3 beat.
- 00:49:701 (4) - remove NC
- 00:55:605 (5) - pls cheak stack here.
- 00:56:722 (4,1,2) - ^
- 00:57:520 (4) - ^
- 00:57:520 (4) - add NC instead 00:57:998 (1) - this.
- 00:58:477 (3) - add NC make great rhythm. ( 00:58:477 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - )
- 01:09:967 (5) - you little miss blanket at middle.
- 01:10:286 (1) - fix blanket with 01:10:764 (2) -
- 01:11:562 (3,1) - switch NC before remove NC here. 01:10:924 (1) -
- 01:12:839 (1) - add finish
- 01:18:424 (1,2,3) - fix stack pls.
- 01:21:615 (1) - add finish reverse.
- 01:22:413 (1) - didn't stack with 01:21:296 (3) - 's head. and fix blanket with 01:23:052 (3) -
- 01:23:211 (1) - remove NC and add NC here 01:23:371 (2) -
I think confused to read to NC. pls cheak one more time.
[handsome's Insane]
- OD 7.5 better for diff spread, I guess.
[Hard]
- 00:11:562 (1) - you little miss blanket
- 01:26:881 (1) - add NC better, I think.
[Normal]
- 01:25:605 (3) - same reason hard. add NC.
Well..... GL