Hard
00:00:782 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I would say this area this too repetitive. Also, instead of 3 circles and reverse slider, try reverse slider and 3 cirlces. It flows better with the music.
00:09:353 (1,2) - Does not follow the music. She only starts breaking up her voice at 00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) . Try adding something that follows the vocals.
00:13:960 (4) - This misses two more beats in the song. Don't trust me? Go into 50% playback rate. Maybe change it into 4 1/2 sliders
00:14:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - This lacks structure, it just repeats for the next couple of parts. Those pauses seem like your own beat rather than something that goes well with the song.
00:18:782 (1,2,3) - Make this into a triangle and stack 00:19:424 (4) - with the triangle. Looks and feels better
00:21:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't follow vocals. It's just another repeating step like before.
00:24:782 (3) - This can be placed somewhere much better. It looks messy here.
00:40:853 (4) - This could be made into a long slider with 00:41:282 (1) - this as the end beat of the slider.
00:42:139 (3,4) - Here it DOES follow vocals. You switch between the two too swiftly. Make a gradual switch between the two in the song or stick with one.
00:43:853 (3) - Try to make this not touch the slider.
00:44:710 (1,2,3) - Stacks look ugly, I suggest spreading it out.
00:54:567 (4,1,2) - This does not flow. Spread the 2 out of the stack or place the 4 on top of the stack.
01:00:782 (3) - Make this less round (muehue)
01:02:067 (3) - Although distance snap is fine I recommend making it a little closer with the slider after it for better reading.
01:03:782 (1) - Things like this need to appear more often. No, not the way it looks, but how it sounds.
01:15:139 (4) - Distance snap
01:17:067 (2,3,4) - I don't like stacks
00:09:353 (1,2) - Does not follow the music. She only starts breaking up her voice at 00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) . Try adding something that follows the vocals.
00:13:960 (4) - This misses two more beats in the song. Don't trust me? Go into 50% playback rate. Maybe change it into 4 1/2 sliders
00:14:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - This lacks structure, it just repeats for the next couple of parts. Those pauses seem like your own beat rather than something that goes well with the song.
00:18:782 (1,2,3) - Make this into a triangle and stack 00:19:424 (4) - with the triangle. Looks and feels better
00:21:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't follow vocals. It's just another repeating step like before.
00:24:782 (3) - This can be placed somewhere much better. It looks messy here.
00:40:853 (4) - This could be made into a long slider with 00:41:282 (1) - this as the end beat of the slider.
00:42:139 (3,4) - Here it DOES follow vocals. You switch between the two too swiftly. Make a gradual switch between the two in the song or stick with one.
00:43:853 (3) - Try to make this not touch the slider.
00:44:710 (1,2,3) - Stacks look ugly, I suggest spreading it out.
00:54:567 (4,1,2) - This does not flow. Spread the 2 out of the stack or place the 4 on top of the stack.
01:00:782 (3) - Make this less round (muehue)
01:02:067 (3) - Although distance snap is fine I recommend making it a little closer with the slider after it for better reading.
01:03:782 (1) - Things like this need to appear more often. No, not the way it looks, but how it sounds.
01:15:139 (4) - Distance snap
01:17:067 (2,3,4) - I don't like stacks
Normal
00:00:782 (1,2,3,4) - Repetitive
00:07:639 (1) - The pause after this is awkward.
00:09:353 (1,2) - You can't hear this in the vocals nor the music.
00:39:353 (5,1,2,3,4) - This is a very boring section, make a different pattern of sounds. Or attempt to.
I think this is more well done than hard.
00:07:639 (1) - The pause after this is awkward.
00:09:353 (1,2) - You can't hear this in the vocals nor the music.
00:39:353 (5,1,2,3,4) - This is a very boring section, make a different pattern of sounds. Or attempt to.
I think this is more well done than hard.
Easy
00:31:210 (4) - Good symmetry/whatnot, but it does not at all flow with the music.
01:14:924 (1,2) - I don't particularly like the pause.
01:21:353 (5) - Very ugly when two parts on on top of each other. Confusing for newbies to read.
Most well done diff.
01:14:924 (1,2) - I don't particularly like the pause.
01:21:353 (5) - Very ugly when two parts on on top of each other. Confusing for newbies to read.
Most well done diff.
Good luck! :3