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Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 11 years ago

很喜欢这首！先shoot一星

Last edited by Mafumafu 11 years ago, edited 3 times in total.

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 11 years ago

test diff

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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

lkx_Shore wrote:

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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 11 years ago

4anke wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

test diff

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72,124,18944,6,0,P|96:76|196:64,2,160,2|0|0,0:2|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,280,20028,1,0,1:0:0:0:
52,236,20209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,20299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,20389,6,0,P|112:240|132:256,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,332,20751,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,316,20932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,204,21112,2,0,P|276:176|216:196,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,21474,2,0,P|152:168|160:128,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,21835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
358,61,22016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,152,22197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,242,22377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,207,22558,1,2,0:2:0:0:
212,212,22648,1,2,0:2:0:0:
184,240,22739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
164,276,22829,1,2,0:2:0:0:
168,316,22920,2,0,L|128:304,3,40,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
92,320,23281,5,4,0:2:0:0:
60,192,23462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,23552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,23642,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,192,24004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24365,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,100,24727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,172,24908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,24998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,25088,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,52,25269,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,52,25450,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,264,25630,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,100,25811,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,196,40630,6,0,B|328:168|328:168|344:256,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
343,252,41173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,41353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,260,41534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,172,41715,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,172,41895,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,76,42257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,42438,2,0,P|208:140|180:132,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,42799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,42980,2,0,P|84:96|64:160,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43522,6,0,L|164:208,1,60.0000022888184,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,280,43883,1,0,1:0:0:0:
44,280,44245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,336,44426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,308,44606,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,308,44968,6,0,P|240:280|264:276,1,60.0000022888184
328,320,45329,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,320,45510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,304,45691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,45871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,45962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,46052,2,0,L|424:136,1,90.0000034332277,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,46414,6,0,B|356:84|356:124|292:104,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
294,104,46956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,180,47136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,47317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,144,47498,1,0,1:0:0:0:
92,144,47679,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,180,48040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,48221,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,328,48402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,328,48582,2,0,P|300:340|328:332,1,60.0000022888184
388,284,48944,2,0,L|440:252,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,164,49305,6,0,P|368:184|388:72,2,240.000009155274,4|0|4,0:2|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
420,164,50932,1,2,0:2:0:0:
428,284,51112,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,328,51293,1,2,0:2:0:0:
220,256,51474,2,0,P|208:208|228:168,1,90.0000034332277,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,180,51835,6,0,L|328:144,3,40,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
368,72,52197,1,4,0:2:0:0:

00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0 只是给个节奏你参考，你把3连换成两单点也可以的
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0 kioukiou

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 11 years ago

前辈你好我来啦

[Easy]
我觉得normal音效组不太适合建议换成soft或者drum
先开aimod点上check ds 低难度尽量保持全程ds一致
00:21:835 (2,1) - 尽量避免这种遮挡...好丑的
00:37:739 - 尽量不要让重音在滑条尾上会减弱打击感
00:52:197 - 同上而且让kiai由滑条尾开始也是很不好的
01:19:667 (3,1) - 移开点不要遮挡
然后就是你三个kiai里节奏都太挤了基本每拍都有note 不如适当空一些出来反而感觉好一些
[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - 这里也是遮挡比较丑
00:26:534 (1,2) - 这里可以弄个blanket 就是让下一个滑条包住上一个圈让滑条和圈的缩圈是一个同心圆
00:26:895 (2,3) - 也是尽量避免遮挡
01:29:426 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 你不觉得这一块很挤吗.-.
01:34:667 (3) - 这里就感觉有点overmap 可以去掉这个圈
02:30:510 (10,1) - 交换nc
[Hard]
这个难度用了1.0 1.2 1.3 1.5四种sv感觉不太好建议是用三种就可以了你思考一下
00:16:052 (5,6) - 两个滑条后半部分遮在一起有点丑
00:21:112 (1) - 这里遮挡感觉并不好而且没必要nc
00:30:510 (1,3) - 这里没有四分拍你却用了1/4的折返滑条感觉有点overmap
00:34:847 (1,2,4) - 这里遮挡也是不太好
00:49:305 (6) - 前后一直是4拍一个nc所以这里也应该nc才对
01:21:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段一拍的圈感觉有点偷懒...
01:44:245 - 既然前面放了六个圈这里再空感觉不太自然.-.
02:08:552 (6) - 这个圈overmap也有点明显建议去掉
02:21:835 (1) - 应该从后一拍开始因为02:21:926 - 这里似乎没有音
02:25:179 (4) - 这个圈是怎么回事?
02:40:450 - 这里音倒是比较明显所以不建议空出来
03:10:811 (6) - 建议换成一个1/2滑条和其他难度在同一个地方结束

前辈晚上好o.o

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

ZZHBOY wrote:
前辈你好我来啦
[Easy]
我觉得normal音效组不太适合建议换成soft或者drum一直都是soft...只是音量比其它难度大了点，调低了
先开aimod点上check ds 低难度尽量保持全程ds一致fixed
00:21:835 (2,1) - 尽量避免这种遮挡...好丑的不好改
00:37:739 - 尽量不要让重音在滑条尾上会减弱打击感不好改，以后会注意的
00:52:197 - 同上而且让kiai由滑条尾开始也是很不好的fixed
01:19:667 (3,1) - 移开点不要遮挡fixed
然后就是你三个kiai里节奏都太挤了基本每拍都有note 不如适当空一些出来反而感觉好一些删了一点note
[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - 这里也是遮挡比较丑0.0
00:26:534 (1,2) - 这里可以弄个blanket 就是让下一个滑条包住上一个圈让滑条和圈的缩圈是一个同心圆不明觉厉
00:26:895 (2,3) - 也是尽量避免遮挡没遮挡啊
01:29:426 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 你不觉得这一块很挤吗.-.好吧，删掉了01:29:606 (4) -
01:34:667 (3) - 这里就感觉有点overmap 可以去掉这个圈fixed
02:30:510 (10,1) - 交换ncfixed
[Hard]
这个难度用了1.0 1.2 1.3 1.5四种sv感觉不太好建议是用三种就可以了你思考一下fixed
00:16:052 (5,6) - 两个滑条后半部分遮在一起有点丑故意的，我觉得还好
00:21:112 (1) - 这里遮挡感觉并不好而且没必要ncfixed
00:30:510 (1,3) - 这里没有四分拍你却用了1/4的折返滑条感觉有点overmap感觉还好
00:34:847 (1,2,4) - 这里遮挡也是不太好往下移了一点
00:49:305 (6) - 前后一直是4拍一个nc所以这里也应该nc才对不必这么计较啦
01:21:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段一拍的圈感觉有点偷懒...嘘~别说出来嘛。前面那段跟吉他了，这段跟鼓
01:44:245 - 既然前面放了六个圈这里再空感觉不太自然.-.6个圈是突出音效的0.0仔细瞧瞧
02:08:552 (6) - 这个圈overmap也有点明显建议去掉lkx还叫我加多点overmap,虽然我也觉得这首歌不需要overmap，但是还是稍微加一点比较好
02:21:835 (1) - 应该从后一拍开始因为02:21:926 - 这里似乎没有音可是02:21:835 (1) - 有音，为了降低难度所以填过去
02:25:179 (4) - 这个圈是怎么回事?好吧，删了
02:40:450 - 这里音倒是比较明显所以不建议空出来这里跟鼓音
03:10:811 (6) - 建议换成一个1/2滑条和其他难度在同一个地方结束0.0
前辈晚上好o.o
thx~
我不是前辈><

Last edited by 4anke 11 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 11 years ago

Hi!M4M, and sorry for lateness!
EDIT：为啥我更新之后没bg了、、、
[General Check]
1.If you don't have any specific reason, please keep Stack Leniency at 7 in Easy (default value).
2.The volumn of Easy and Normal is inconsisitent.(80% in Easy and 60% in Normal)
[Easy]
General：
1.Easy难度的话ds保持一致，所以建议开着Distance Snap拖一遍note。而且你可以用稍大一些的DS防止overlap，这样排版不显得乱。
2.不同的段落使用不同的音量，例如在一开始的vocal部分，可以使用稍微低一些的音量，在KIAI 部分使用高一些的音量，有层次感。
Placement：
1. 00:20:389 (1,2) - 首先，不推荐使用这样的排列，尤其是在Easy中。
而且，检查一下位于左上角的坐标可以看出，这两个slider尾巴是没有完全叠在一起的。
2. 00:21:835 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/93o5v.jpg 把这两个分开一些距离，叠到一起了有一些不美观。
3. http://puu.sh/93oax.jpg通过AR圈可以检查到，这2个slider是没有blanket好的。
4. 00:55:812 (8,9) - 不要擦边，挪开一些
5. 01:05:209 (3,4) - 弄成平行的，美观一些
6. 01:16:775 (3,4,1) - 做成正三角形多好
7. 01:19:667 (3,4,1) - 同上
8. 01:22:558 (3,4,1) - 同上
9. 02:03:040 (4,5) - 像这样 http://puu.sh/98ISG/b12ab54a1b.jpg 包好，然后再调整一下后面的。
10. 02:44:968 (3,4) - 叠得太近了。Easy不推荐这样搞。
Hitsounds：
1. 00:36:294 (4) - 开头clap啊
Rhythm：
1. 00:28:341 (5) - 感觉应该是1/1来跟音乐而不是2/1
2. 00:42:257 (2) - 太短了
3. 00:44:245 (4) - 这么短新手反应不过来的，而且还是折返
4. 00:47:860 (2) - 向后挪 1/2
5. 01:26:173 (4) - 感觉不对节奏
6. 02:26:353 (2,4) - 已经阐述
7. 03:09:365 (1) - 向后推1/2
Others：
1. 02:08:823 (10) - combo太长，中间拆一下
[Normal]
Placement：
00:21:112 (3,4) - 现在是这样：http://puu.sh/9eeaA/0f3270d7bb.jpg 建议改成更平滑的比如：

00:26:895 (2,3) - flow不好，而且贴边了，建议改一下
00:34:124 (4,5,1,2,3) - 展开一些，都挤到一个角落了，然后还可以摆成正五边形
01:01:234 (4) - 让尾部坐标和00:59:425 (3) - 一致
01:29:426 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不要堆在一起，展开一些，这样的堆叠在normal也不太恰当，新手会误判的。
01:35:209 (4) - 和2做成一样的形状，在搞一个对称，美观。
02:06:656 (5,7) - 这样的堆叠目测危险
02:27:618 (6) - 和前面的距离大一些
02:53:281 (6) - 别和滑条擦边
02:53:642 (1,2) - 同上
Hitsounds：
02:34:847 (17,18,19) - NC，全部加whistle强调一下
Rhythm：
00:37:377 (6) - 尽量不要让vocal落在滑条尾，打击感不好。建议：http://puu.sh/9eekG/b5edbdc2ec.jpg
00:52:197 (1) - 试试：http://puu.sh/9eeoe/674a8f3ddd.jpg
01:12:076 (1,2,3,4) - 这段对不上节奏：试试：http://puu.sh/9eexJ/e469360daa.jpg
01:50:028 (1) - 同 00:52:197 (1) -
02:13:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同样是vocal不要落在滑条尾
02:54:727 (3,4,5) - 同上
02:30:510 - 加点东西，顺便NC
02:57:618 - 别漏音
Others：
00:14:968 (6) - New Combo
00:17:859 (2) - 在这NC，前面的去掉
01:38:462 (9) - combo有些长，建议分开。
[Hard]
Hard 好多了，简单看看。。。
00:39:908 (3) - 声音有点大
00:41:082 (2) - ？
00:48:040 (1) - 拆成1/2跟vocal？
01:00:871 (3,4,5,6) - 少挪开一些，尾巴别擦边到一起
01:03:402 (6,7,8) - NC？
01:09:727 (1) - 拆成1/2跟vocal？
01:10:630 (3,1) - 包一下：http://puu.sh/9k6qS/111f21264f.jpg
01:15:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 帅！
01:27:257 (4,5) - 感觉跟vocal好一些
01:38:462 - 加一个note，后面再breaktime
02:13:703 - 别漏音啊，加一个打击感比较连贯，下面的小节同
02:17:498 (1) - 1/1
02:18:944 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一节也排满一些，下面的小结突然排的很满感觉突兀啊
03:02:317 (1,2,3,4) - 包一下，下同
03:10:992 - 加一个note
============END=============
真的拖了好久！真的不好意思！

=======================================================
I'll finish my mod in several following days. Sorry for the procrastination!!

Last edited by Mafumafu 11 years ago, edited 4 times in total.

arronchu1207

806 posts

Joined December 2012

arronchu1207 11 years ago

Hi

.

15:53 4anke: hi~
15:53 arronchu1207: HI
15:54 4anke: 可以mod吗？
15:54 4anke: 0.0
15:54 arronchu1207: 試試OAO
15:54 4anke: thx~
15:54 4anke:

15:54 arronchu1207:

15:55 *4anke is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401926 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare]
15:55 arronchu1207: OK WAIT

15:55 4anke: 嗯
16:00 arronchu1207: 先mod normal\:D/
16:00 4anke: 嗯:D
16:03 arronchu1207: 00:14:968 (1) - 可以把旁邊的 (5) 複製到這裡會更好看:D 然後 (2) 過去一點點 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661659
16:04 arronchu1207: 00:16:774 (4) - 避免重疊D:
16:07 4anke: 嗯，都改了
16:08 arronchu1207: 01:29:786 (4,2) - 紅4跟藍2疊起來比較好看點
16:11 4anke: 不懂怎么叠才好看0.0
16:11 arronchu1207: 02:18:220 (4) - 尾巴的白點移右一小格吧
16:12 4anke: 嗯，改了
16:13 arronchu1207: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661679 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661681
16:13 arronchu1207: 建議@@ 不一定要改=w=
16:14 4anke: 0.0
16:15 4anke: 还是觉得原来的好一点o.o
16:15 arronchu1207: 那就照原來的吧w
16:16 4anke: 0.0
16:17 arronchu1207: 02:27:618 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661687 建議@@
16:18 arronchu1207: 02:36:293 - kiai的開頭應該在這裡吧OAO?
16:20 4anke: 在这里开头会不会太长了0.0
16:21 arronchu1207: 應該不會吧@@
16:23 4anke: fixed
16:30 arronchu1207: 02:46:414 (1) - Easy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661715 轉盤可以對準白線
16:30 arronchu1207:

16:30 4anke: 0.0
16:31 4anke: fixed
16:32 arronchu1207: 應該就這樣了:D
16:32 arronchu1207: Hard 還不錯OWO
16:33 4anke: thx~
16:33 arronchu1207: ˊˇˋ

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

Regraz wrote:
Hi!M4M, and sorry for lateness!
[General Check]
1.If you don't have any specific reason, please keep Stack Leniency at 7 in Easy (default value).
2.The volumn of Easy and Normal is inconsisitent.(80% in Easy and 60% in Normal)前几次的更新已经改了
[Easy]
General：
1.Easy难度的话ds保持一致，所以建议开着Distance Snap拖一遍note。而且你可以用稍大一些的DS防止overlap，这样排版不显得乱。
2.不同的段落使用不同的音量，例如在一开始的vocal部分，可以使用稍微低一些的音量，在KIAI 部分使用高一些的音量，有层次感。fixed
Placement：
1. 00:20:389 (1,2) - 首先，不推荐使用这样的排列，尤其是在Easy中。
而且，检查一下位于左上角的坐标可以看出，这两个slider尾巴是没有完全叠在一起的。尾巴叠起来了
2. 00:21:835 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/93o5v.jpg 把这两个分开一些距离，叠到一起了有一些不美观。改了DS就变了
3. http://puu.sh/93oax.jpg通过AR圈可以检查到，这2个slider是没有blanket好的。fixed
4. 00:55:812 (8,9) - 不要擦边，挪开一些fixed
5. 01:05:209 (3,4) - 弄成平行的，美观一些fixed
6. 01:16:775 (3,4,1) - 做成正三角形多好不够位置
7. 01:19:667 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
8. 01:22:558 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
9. 02:03:040 (4,5) - 像这样 http://puu.sh/98ISG/b12ab54a1b.jpg 包好，然后再调整一下后面的。fixed
10. 02:44:968 (3,4) - 叠得太近了。Easy不推荐这样搞。fixed
Hitsounds：
1. 00:36:294 (4) - 开头clap啊fixed
Rhythm：
1. 00:28:341 (5) - 感觉应该是1/1来跟音乐而不是2/1 音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
2. 00:42:257 (2) - 太短了fixed
3. 00:44:245 (4) - 这么短新手反应不过来的，而且还是折返fixed
4. 00:47:860 (2) - 向后挪 1/2 重音就在这里
5. 01:26:173 (4) - 感觉不对节奏音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
6. 02:26:353 (2,4) - 已经阐述fixed
7. 03:09:365 (1) - 向后推1/2-^
Others：
1. 02:08:823 (10) - combo太长，中间拆一下fixed
[Normal]
Placement：
Hitsounds：
Rhythm：
Others：
=======================================================
I'll finish my mod in several following days. Sorry for the procrastination!!
thx~

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 11 years ago

Hi. From your PM request

[General]

Input "Usagi Kinoko" in tags
All difficulty's Kiai end here 03:10:811 . on fit vocal

[Easy]

00:17:859 (5) - New combo here. 00:14:968 (1) - follow this pattern
00:32:317 (5) - 00:35:209 (7) - Same as first suggestion.
00:42:257 (2) - Try this. http://puu.sh/9lf8x/9d2321e151.jpg For now not fit beat.
00:43:522 (3) - 00:52:197 (5) - New combo. Begins switching beat here. And 00:52:197 (5) - On add finish
01:12:438 (4,5) - Try this. http://puu.sh/9lfwc/706c8066fb.jpg And (4) on new combo
01:30:148 (5,5) - Same as first suggestion
01:38:462 - Add beat please. You were doing it in Normal difficulty
01:52:920 (5,5,5) - Same as first suggestion
02:20:389 (6) - New combo. Same as Hard
02:28:703 (1,2,3,4) - 00:44:606 (4,5,6,7) - if you make unification new combo you'll get better.
02:39:185 (4,3,4,5) - Same as first suggestion
03:10:811 - Spinner's end here. Same as Hard, and fit a vocal's end

[Normal]

00:14:968 (6) - New combo here. Same as Normal's first suggestion and 00:20:389 (1) - follow this
01:06:293 - Here is drum place. Add note on clap same as this 01:09:186 (6)
01:13:522 - Same as second suggestion
01:23:280 (3,4,5) - Swap http://puu.sh/9lgEK/89dbafc907.jpg And 01:24:004 new combo here
01:27:618 - You forgot put in note here（*^_^*）
01:36:293 (6) - I suggest new combo here
02:07:377 (7) - Same as just above
02:20:389 (4) - New combo. Same as Hard
02:29:064 - Here place new combo circle's
02:30:510 - Same as just above
02:34:847 (16) - New combo
03:07:739 (4) - Same as just above
03:10:811 - Spinner's end here. Same as Hard, and fit a vocal's end

[Hard]

Normal SV : 0.9 AR : 5. Hard SV : 1.5 AR : 8. The deep differences in difficulty

00:23:462 - 00:24:185 - Soft whistle add here. Same as this 00:26:353 (2,4)
00:31:956 (6) - New combo
00:49:305 (6) - Same as just above
01:38:462 - Add beat. Same as Normal
02:32:136 (5) - New combo
02:40:630 (5) - Same as just above
02:55:088 (5) - Same above
02:59:064 (1) - Remove new combo. If you want to new combo here, add new combo all other this pattern

It's over.

Good Luck (・ω<)

wangrun

1 post

Joined October 2013

wangrun 11 years ago

[Hard]
HP-1
AR-1
00:31:956 (6) - NC
00:39:908 (3) - 声音调到75%
01:03:402 (6,7,8) - NC

Flower

1,728 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 11 years ago

irc mod

SPOILER

23:01 4anke: 花花晚上好，现在有空摸图吗？
23:01 Flower: you
23:02 *4anke is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/419204 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare]
23:02 Flower: 我玩一趟图就来看
23:03 4anke: 嗯，谢谢
23:07 Flower: ·你到底是谁？？？
23:07 4anke: 就是4anke0.0
23:07 Flower: 折算双
23:07 Flower: 难以置信
23:07 4anke: DT0.0
23:08 4anke: ？
23:08 Flower: 我去吃电视，一会回来
23:08 4anke: 0.0
23:09 Flower: 我回来了，我们开始吧
23:09 4anke: 嗯
23:10 Flower: 00:17:859 (1,2,3,4) - 柑橘缺少一些活力，直挺挺的不是很舒服
23:11 Flower: 00:18:944 (2,3,4) - 然后呢，这个因为挤在一起，放在1下面就窝成一团了，不是很好
23:12 Flower: 我没啥头绪，http://puu.sh/9rFyv/83adffbb11.jpg 这个仅供参考
23:12 4anke: 缺少活力怎么改
23:14 Flower: 。
23:15 4anke: 00:19:305 (4) - 要和1的尾巴叠在一起吗？
23:15 4anke: 00:19:667 (1) -
23:15 Flower: 我感觉似乎不用吧？看你喜欢啦w
23:15 4anke: 0.0
23:16 4anke: 话说缺活力是什么意思00.0
23:16 Flower: 横平竖直的很生硬啊
23:17 Flower: 图的其他部分都是有一定角度的，只有这个是竖着的，就不合风格了
23:17 Flower: 不然要是跟wcx的一些图一样的话横平竖直反而有意思
23:18 4anke: 确实摆着摆着就水平或者数字了
23:18 4anke: 不知道为什么
23:19 Flower: 把grid snap关掉就摆不出来了（躺
23:21 4anke: 0.0
23:21 4anke: 还有什么别的问题0.0
23:22 Flower: 别急，才刚开始呢
23:22 Flower: 00:23:281 (1) - 突然加速感觉有点突兀，可以改成1.3x，1.4x，然后才1.5x
23:22 4anke: 嗯
23:23 4anke: 嗯
23:24 Flower: 00:32:498 (2,3) - 看这个图：http://puu.sh/9rGaI/91f5f10ac8.jpg 可以看到有些微的没包好，可以用这个缩圈来作参考，方便摆blanket
23:27 Flower: 00:41:353 (3) - 移动到x:312,y:304，比较不挤
23:27 4anke: 嗯，好方法，以前都不知到可以用缩圈来检查包没包好
23:28 4anke: 教程好像也没这个方法
23:28 Flower: 有吧，只不过沉了没放导航里
23:28 Flower: 这事情也没人教我，直到一个印尼神麻婆给我mod了以后
23:29 4anke: 0.0
23:29 4anke: 真厉害
23:30 Flower: 00:57:618 (1,1) - 同上，另外前一个1可以用三点滑条重拉一下
23:33 4anke: 3点滑条好像不够光滑
23:34 Flower: 咦，我居然也有这种感觉
23:34 Flower: 不过现在的滑条的两头有点向里凹了，稍微再调整下吧
23:37 Flower: 01:00:871 (3,4,5,6) - 稍微有点不整齐，
23:38 Flower: http://puu.sh/9rH2j/b2d9701d83.jpg 至少保证这里的距离看上去一致
23:39 4anke: 嗯
23:41 Flower: 01:09:727 (1) - 节奏有些奇怪,建议还是用滑条+一个note
23:45 4anke: 嗯，改了
23:46 Flower: 01:21:112 (1) - 稍微移动一下到176,108
23:47 4anke: 嗯
23:49 Flower: 01:37:739 (3,4,5) - 稍微放远一点,在实际玩耍的时候,3和4会叠在5的左上方,所以就会和2重叠了
23:49 4anke: 嗯
23:51 Flower: 02:10:630 (3,4,2,3) - 感觉不是很舒服的样子...如果让02:09:908 (1) - 变直的话这么摆就比较干净了
23:52 4anke: 作图应该开grid span 吗？
23:53 Flower: 用到的时候比较少，到时候再开，其实很多时候grid snap都是ctrlc ctrlv能解决的事情
23:54 4anke: 嗯
23:54 Flower: 02:13:341 (2) - 02:14:606 (1) - 这里也可以灵动一些
23:55 4anke: 怎么灵动0.0
23:56 4anke: 在这里打算摆对称
23:56 Flower: 不要完全横平竖直就行了
23:57 Flower: 而且02:13:883 (3,4) - 也没有完全对称，可以在考虑考虑
00:00 Flower: 03:02:317 (1,2,3,4) - no comment
00:02 4anke: no comment是什么意思
00:02 Flower: 没有评价
00:02 Flower: 这里你应该知道怎么改了吧
00:03 4anke: 不知道0.0
00:03 4anke: 没包好？
00:03 Flower: 队
00:03 Flower: http://puu.sh/9rIst/74ff2fb63f.jpg 参考
00:04 4anke: 嗯
00:04 Flower: 03:05:209 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
00:05 Flower: 好，排列说完了，我们来说说节奏和音效
00:06 4anke: 嗯
00:06 Flower: 首先一个是finish的使用，原曲里有的话完全可以放上
00:07 4anke: 像这里？00:50:751 (1,2,3) -
00:08 Flower: 对
00:08 Flower: 不对
00:08 Flower: 只有1
00:08 Flower: 2和3不要
00:08 4anke: 0.0
00:09 4anke: 感觉2和3也有finish的音
00:10 Flower: 2和3的话，确实有一个重的鼓点，但那不是finish的音
00:10 Flower: finish是镲声，而2和3是鼓
00:11 Flower: 比起这个，还有00:11:715 - 00:23:281 - 00:29:064 - 等等等等，都应该加上finish
00:11 4anke: 分辨不出0.0
00:11 Flower: 你用的音频播放设备是什么？
00:12 4anke: 一般的耳机
00:12 Flower: 你能上维基百科吗？
00:13 4anke: 能
00:14 Flower: 等下我找下
00:14 4anke: 嗯
00:14 Flower: 在此之间仔细听一下00:11:715 - 的音跟00:51:112 - 的区别
00:16 Flower: http://puu.sh/9rJ9L/3d7723aaca.wav 这个是00:11:715 - 的那个声音
00:17 Flower: http://puu.sh/9rJdU/2db4088b57.wav 这个是00:51:112 - 的
00:17 Flower: 虽然都是打击乐，但是后者更轻一点，所以用finish就有些喧宾夺主了
00:18 4anke: 播放不出0.0
00:18 Flower: 右键页面另存为，下载再播放
00:21 Flower: 那我问你，你能不能听见00:11:715 - 有“哐”的一声？
00:21 4anke: 能
00:22 4anke: 拆出来听差别好大
00:22 Flower: 直接听歌的话，觉得00:51:112 - 跟之前是一样的么
00:24 4anke: 直接听歌感觉00:51:112 - 比00:11:715 - 更重
00:24 Flower: 那我给个建议，这里用normal finish
00:25 4anke: 00:51:112 - 这里？
00:25 Flower: 嗯，你看怎么样，不好就还用soft finish
00:27 4anke: 嗯
00:28 Flower: 01:03:763 - 01:38:462 - 02:47:859 - 03:10:992 - 这几处也都是有finish的，可以考虑一下要不要加note
00:29 4anke: 嗯
00:29 Flower: 我柑橘没啥问题了
00:30 4anke: 谢谢谢谢谢谢
00:30 Flower: 太迟了……其他两个就不摸了，音效可以照着hard检查一下
00:31 Flower: 那我就发论坛骗个kd可否？
00:34 4anke: 嗯

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 11 years ago

嗨，4anke，抱歉來晚。

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
1.Stack Leniency 只有Easy不同，要一致。
2.Kiai線未對齊:00:52:197 (1) 和 02:13:161 (1) .

[Easy]

00:11:715 (1,2) - 最初開始就先來個stack也不太好，有些剛開始玩會很難點這個，所以覺得還是保持間距比較好點。(要stack后面再用)
00:20:389 (1) - stack歪了。
00:23:282 (1) - 好像錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
00:28:341 (5) - 建議頭跟尾端不要overlap。
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺新手玩這邊會有點錯亂,imo.
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
02:13:161 (1) - ^
02:36:293 (1) - ^

后面看過去節奏和擺放沒什麼問題。

[Normal] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:23:281 (1) - 同Easy (看看順便Hard也加一下，Hard部分就不提這個)
00:34:124 (4,5,1) - 間距保持一致，看得比較整齊。
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
01:19:304 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 可以擺個S形，不一定要照直線這樣死板板的擺放。
01:38:462 (5) - 我覺得再加一個note然後再break比較好(Easy剛沒講到，看看要不要加)? 在這邊滑完2個1/2滑條再break有點不太cool的感覺。
01:54:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感覺這段如果用DT連續打2組3個1/2note會很難打(我覺得會被黑一分)，畢竟是NM，也許能換個節奏擺。
02:57:618 (7) - 怎麼忽然空了一拍在這裡，不加note? 打得不舒服。

[Hard] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:19:305 (4) - Stack 00:19:667 (1) 尾?
00:25:450 (4,5,6) - 聽音樂這邊間距可放大，現在這樣太小了，至少放大個1.2x~1.4x?
00:36:655 (2) - 應該能Ctrl+g
00:42:167 (2) - 聽這邊有個連打，或許可加個note.
00:44:245 (9) - 現在這樣放不太flow，放到(172|256)?
01:03:402 (1,2,3) - 不疊好?
01:44:245 (1) - 加一個note+finish?
02:19:124 (3) - 這邊弄個連打? (前面都有表現連打了，這怎不表現一下)
02:19:215 (2) - ^
02:19:938 (6) - ^
02:21:293 (5) - 感覺錯過一個note漏掉vocal?
02:23:281 (3) - Music從這起頭來個NC?
02:27:618 (6) - ^
02:29:606 (2) - 紅線有音呢，建議加個note。
02:49:847 (8) - 擺在(366|118)會比較整齊(然後后面的(1)稍微弄遠點間距)。
03:10:992 (1) - 在前面紅線結束有點蠻奇怪的感覺，重音在大白線，所以這邊應該是結束才是，加個note試試看(上面兩個diff也如此)。

質量還可以，但有些直線排列有點太Bored(尤其是Hard需要改進些)，沒什麼大問題，如果要拿給BAT看我覺得可以了，加油。

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

smallboat wrote:
嗨，4anke，抱歉來晚。

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
1.Stack Leniency 只有Easy不同，要一致。
2.Kiai線未對齊:00:52:197 (1) 和 02:13:161 (1) .

[Easy]

00:11:715 (1,2) - 最初開始就先來個stack也不太好，有些剛開始玩會很難點這個，所以覺得還是保持間距比較好點。(要stack后面再用)
00:20:389 (1) - stack歪了。
00:23:282 (1) - 好像錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
00:28:341 (5) - 建議頭跟尾端不要overlap。
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺新手玩這邊會有點錯亂,imo.
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
02:13:161 (1) - ^
02:36:293 (1) - ^

后面看過去節奏和擺放沒什麼問題。

[Normal] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:23:281 (1) - 同Easy (看看順便Hard也加一下，Hard部分就不提這個)
00:34:124 (4,5,1) - 間距保持一致，看得比較整齊。
00:40:630 (1) - 錯過finish? (然後finish調小聲一點降個10~20%)
01:19:304 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 可以擺個S形，不一定要照直線這樣死板板的擺放。
01:38:462 (5) - 我覺得再加一個note然後再break比較好(Easy剛沒講到，看看要不要加)? 在這邊滑完2個1/2滑條再break有點不太cool的感覺。
01:54:365 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感覺這段如果用DT連續打2組3個1/2note會很難打(我覺得會被黑一分)，畢竟是NM，也許能換個節奏擺。
02:57:618 (7) - 怎麼忽然空了一拍在這裡，不加note? 打得不舒服。

[Hard] (同Easy，注意finish。)

00:19:305 (4) - Stack 00:19:667 (1) 尾?
00:25:450 (4,5,6) - 聽音樂這邊間距可放大，現在這樣太小了，至少放大個1.2x~1.4x?
00:36:655 (2) - 應該能Ctrl+g
00:42:167 (2) - 聽這邊有個連打，或許可加個note.
00:44:245 (9) - 現在這樣放不太flow，放到(172|256)?
01:03:402 (1,2,3) - 不疊好?
01:44:245 (1) - 加一個note+finish?
02:19:124 (3) - 這邊弄個連打? (前面都有表現連打了，這怎不表現一下)
02:19:215 (2) - ^
02:19:938 (6) - ^
02:21:293 (5) - 感覺錯過一個note漏掉vocal?
02:23:281 (3) - Music從這起頭來個NC?
02:27:618 (6) - ^
02:29:606 (2) - 紅線有音呢，建議加個note。
02:49:847 (8) - 擺在(366|118)會比較整齊(然後后面的(1)稍微弄遠點間距)。
03:10:992 (1) - 在前面紅線結束有點蠻奇怪的感覺，重音在大白線，所以這邊應該是結束才是，加個note試試看(上面兩個diff也如此)。

質量還可以，但有些直線排列有點太Bored(尤其是Hard需要改進些)，沒什麼大問題，如果要拿給BAT看我覺得可以了，加油。
船业的mod很多都改了
hard的第二个kiai time大部分跟的是伴奏

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,175 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 11 years ago

Hello There!
[General]

I believe you have 2 mp3 files unless I have to re-download this map.

[Easy]

Looking at the spacing, I recommend using a smaller circle size like 3.
A bit inconsistent spacing here. Please move this slider 2 grids to the right to fix this.
00:21:825 (2,1) - Don't let these notes touch each other.
00:23:994 (2) - Move this slider a grid down so the end of this slider stacks.
02:46:404 (1,1) - Avoid doing this on Easy difficulties. Allow novice players to rest after the spinner.
Easy difficulty Guide: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy

[Normal]

00:13:873 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could have re-arrange these notes and make perfect stacks with them. For example, you could have stacked 00:14:958 (1) with 00:12:789 (4), stack 00:15:319 (3) with the start of 00:13:150 (5), and stack the end of 00:16:764 (6) with 00:15:680 (4). Fix spacing if necessary.
00:22:187 (4,1) - Again, try not the overlap notes if possible.
00:26:885 (2,3,4) - This slider pattern seem kind of random. Try doing something else.
00:28:331 (4) - I would probably add a reverse here to capture the crash cymbals playing.
00:55:078 (1,2) - Bad blanklet. Try copy and paste 00:55:078 (1) and flip it 180 degrees (Press Ctrl + > 2 times). Adjust spacing if nescessary.
02:23:632 (3) - Try this pattern:
Photo
02:30:500 (4) - Add note?
02:50:741 (1,2,3) - Don't overlap notes. Same with 02:52:548 (5,6) and 02:53:632 (1,2), and 02:56:163 (5,6).
03:07:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward pattern arrangement. Try separating these patterns a bit.

[Hard]

I recommend AR7 or AR7.5!
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 03:09:523 - snap to 03:09:536
00:17:849 (1,3) - You tend to overlap a lot with your notes. Try to avoid that as possible.
00:19:295 (4,1) - In addition, stack notes when you have the opportunity to.
00:28:693 (5) - Ghost note.
00:41:072 (2) - Another ghost note.
01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Polish your patterns. You can make this a better star pattern and a straight triangle pattern:
Photo
01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe delete these notes? The break time is inconsistent compare to the easier difficulties.
02:48:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this and also stack 5 with 2, 6 with 3, and 7 with 4: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833063

[Collab]

Increase drain rate 6? Hard difficulty already has HP drain 5.
01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as Hard.
01:50:379 (2,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
02:08:813 (1) - Not perfectly stacked with the start of 02:07:548 (2).
02:10:982 (4) - You could use the same slider shape as 02:10:259 (1) since they both share the same sound in the music.

Yeah...this map needs a lot of work! Hope this mod helps a bit. Good luck!

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 11 years ago

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello There!

[Collab]
Increase drain rate 6? Hard difficulty already has HP drain 5.
01:42:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as Hard.
01:50:379 (2,4) - Not perfectly stacked.
02:08:813 (1) - Not perfectly stacked with the start of 02:07:548 (2).
02:10:982 (4) - You could use the same slider shape as 02:10:259 (1) since they both share the same sound in the music.
Yeah...this map needs a lot of work! Hope this mod helps a bit. Good luck!

ALL FIXED except the 1st one! It will be decided by the owner of the map.
Thank you ike!~
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CODE

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Chata - kokkei to i u na kare.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52197
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Kokkei to Iu Nakare
TitleUnicode:滑稽というなかれ
Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:4anke
Version:Collab
Source:
Tags:Usagi Kinoko Regraz
BeatmapID:444605
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
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4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

fixed lke's mod

k1suke

70 posts

Joined April 2012

k1suke 11 years ago

[General]
送分界的良心（
fycho.jpg

[Collab]

有一些overmap的串感觉有点奇怪
全图blanket重新排查一下
OD+1

4anke
00:13:512 (4,5,6) - 这个往右下角的移动简直报复社会。。（仅从打图角度吐槽，不用在意）
00:28:693 (3) - 考虑做成滑条？有个比较突出的音轨
00:31:223 (5) - 滑条多拉了1格？音在红线上。。
00:34:657 (4) - 重音滑条尾有点奇怪（其他地方也有这个问题，建议全图排查。但是类似于00:42:247 (2) - 这个我觉得重音在滑条尾上还不错，有一种强烈的结束、提示空拍的感觉）
01:14:959 (6,7,8,9,10) - 弧度有点过分。。
01:15:861 (2,5) - 这2个要么删去要么在后面的几段重复上加上
02:18:934 - 到 02:22:910 - 串十分莫名。。我是认真的。。
02:27:247 - 放一个叠在5上做成原地3单点，那么重一个鼓音。。（其他地方也有建议排查一下
03:10:711 - 这里塞一个做成整串？
Regraz
01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？重新拉下blanket
02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？

[Hard]
HP+1
00:27:608 (1) - 这个折返点上的clap有点奇怪
00:50:379 (2) - 音不是在红线么。。
02:37:006 (3,1) - 从这2个之后出现好多90°的直角滑条。。前面没怎么又。。感觉一下子换了图风。。
02:48:211 (2,3,4) - 既然都做blanket了那3个就一起包一下

[Normal]
kiai比其他地方简单你不觉得吗（
从02:28:693 - 到 02:30:500 - 空闲感太重
02:41:524 (4) - y-1 or 02:41:705 (5) - y+1
02:55:078 (4) - 考虑和(3) blanket一下？

nice map, good luck

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

Okazaki Ushio wrote:
[General]
送分界的良心（collab难度我自己都断了很多orz，这应该不送分吧）
fycho.jpg =w=

[Collab]

有一些overmap的串感觉有点奇怪？
全图blanket重新排查一下没问题
OD+1fixed
4anke
00:13:512 (4,5,6) - 这个往右下角的移动简直报复社会。。（仅从打图角度吐槽，不用在意）
00:28:693 (3) - 考虑做成滑条？有个比较突出的音轨拉成滑条的话00:29:054 (1,2,3) - 这个三连就没办法突出了
00:31:223 (5) - 滑条多拉了1格？音在红线上。。这个音比较长，这样拉没关系
00:34:657 (4) - 重音滑条尾有点奇怪（其他地方也有这个问题，建议全图排查。但是类似于00:42:247 (2) - 这个我觉得重音在滑条尾上还不错，有一种强烈的结束、提示空拍的感觉）很多图都这样
01:14:959 (6,7,8,9,10) - 弧度有点过分。。insane难度不过分吧
01:15:861 (2,5) - 这2个要么删去要么在后面的几段重复上加上偶尔换一下节奏，一直同一个节奏太无聊了
02:18:934 - 到 02:22:910 - 串十分莫名。。我是认真的。。这里音很密集啊
02:27:247 - 放一个叠在5上做成原地3单点，那么重一个鼓音。。（其他地方也有建议排查一下这里跟人声
03:10:711 - 这里塞一个做成整串？没音
Regraz
01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？重新拉下blanket
02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？
[Hard]
HP+1
00:27:608 (1) - 这个折返点上的clap有点奇怪fixed
00:50:379 (2) - 音不是在红线么。。音结束在蓝线
02:37:006 (3,1) - 从这2个之后出现好多90°的直角滑条。。前面没怎么又。。感觉一下子换了图风。。0.0
02:48:211 (2,3,4) - 既然都做blanket了那3个就一起包一下好难包好啊，包好两个第三个很难包，就这样留点误差没关系

[Normal]
kiai比其他地方简单你不觉得吗（0.0没规定kiai必须难吧
从02:28:693 - 到 02:30:500 - 空闲感太重fixed
02:41:524 (4) - y-1 or 02:41:705 (5) - y+1fixed
02:55:078 (4) - 考虑和(3) blanket一下？fixed
nice map, good luck

thank you for mod my map

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 11 years ago

M4M sorry for late D:

General

your BG have weird dimensions, will be nice if you can resize it to a properly one
I think your preview point is unsnapped, snap it to 00:52:187
Adding some sb with the names for collab will be nice
I think ¨Collab¨ as diff name is not allowed, use Collab Insane or another diff name that you like

Collab

your HP is really low, I suggest you to go with HP 7 after all this is an Insane diff
same with your OD, try OD 8 or 7.5
00:16:132 (2) - 00:17:398 (5) - there are a lot of triplets that doesn't fit the music nicely IMO
00:23:271 (1,2,3) - you have some transitions that are kinda weird to play like this one, try this instead:
SPOILER
00:25:440 missing whistle? since it sound pretty nice with the music at this point
00:29:145 (2) - 00:29:868 (6) - there are more triplets like this that doesn't have support from the music
00:31:223 (5) - I don't see a reason to have this extended slider here, the music is clearly in 1/2
00:36:554 (2,3) - will be nice if you stack this, to be consistent with 00:36:916 (4,5) - 00:37:277 (6,7) -
00:43:512 (6) - you are missing a NC here
00:53:632 (5) - ^
01:08:813 (3,4) - really tricky pattern ¿what one is the head? ¿what one is the tail? also that sv change without advice is really annoying IMO
01:12:066 this NC is unnecesary
01:16:765 (1) - there is not 1/4 in the music a 1/2 slider will fit better this part, the triplet should be in 01:17:036 -
01:17:217 ^
01:26:163 kinda weird that you are ignoring this important beat in the music
01:50:018 (1,1) - I don't see a valid reason for this combo spam
02:03:030 (1,2) - ugly overlap, try to move 1 a bit to the left to avoid it
02:06:283 (2,4) - same this overlaps doesn't look nice
02:12:428 (1) - this NC is not even necessary
02:13:873 ^
02:14:596 (4) - you are missing a NC here
02:16:765 (5,6) - this spacing is so confuse O.O, since it looks like 1/4 when it is 1/2
03:05:922 (4,2) - not stacked properly
03:10:801 (10) - a slider will be nice ending in 03:10:982

Hard

HP +1 (6)
00:22:548 (4,5,6) - 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - 00:23:994 (4,5,6) - patterns like this are kinda difficult for a hard diff, since the off hand streams are always hard to get, maybe use normal triplets or 1/4 repeat sliders instead? also you will improve the rhythm
00:29:054 (5,1) - swap NC following your combo pattern
00:31:765 (5) - there is not music at 1/4, as I said in ¨collab¨ diff there are a lot of triplets that doesn't have support from the music
00:43:512 (6) - missing NC, following your combo pattern
00:47:036 (2,3) - weird rhythm and really hard to play for a hard diff, if you still want to keep that rhythm use a slider instead, the current one is not appropriate
00:50:379 (2) - this extended slider is not necessary the music is clearly 1/2
00:52:910 (3,1) - there are some ugly overlaps like this one, that will be nice if you check by yourself to improve your diff design
01:13:512 (6,2) - ^
01:24:898 a 1/4 repeat slider will sound really nice here
02:00:861 (3,4,5) - same as 00:22:548
02:08:813 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, the music is clearly 1/2
02:21:825 (1,2) - really confuse to play, mainly cuz the repeat slider end in an otherwise way that the next slider
02:24:355 (4,1) - those beats are too close, add some more spacing to make this less confused to play
02:30:319 (5) - ending slider on such important beats like the one in 02:30:500 doesn't fit the music at all, those beats should be mapped as slider head or circles
02:33:392 (1,2,3) - whistle spam sound really bad, consider to remove some
02:34:837 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, music and vocals are landing in 1/2
02:49:295 (5) - missing NC
03:10:801 (6) - same as collab diff

Normal

00:20:379 (1,2) - circle + slider stack are nice, but circle to circle in the easy diff of the set is not ok IMO, try a single slider instead
00:21:825 (1,2) - ^, also remove NC from here 00:21:825 (1) - is breaking your combo pattern
00:39:897 (5,6,1) - this look really hard to play for new players (since you don't have an easy diff)
00:43:512 (6) - from this point you break your combo pattern >:
00:49:295 (7) - your NC should be here 00:49:295 (7) - but not in 00:50:740 (1) -
00:51:463 (3,1) - anti jumps in the easy diff of the set are discouraged, try to keep your stacks at the same gaps, if you use 1/1 stacks don't use 1/2 or other gaps
00:59:416 (3) - this slider shape look really bad IMO, try to make the curve in the last part a bit better
01:13:873 (3,4,1,2) - this kind of patterns are not suitable for a normal which is the easy diff in the set
01:25:801 (4,5,6,7) - same as above, also take in mind what I said about stacks gaps in 00:51:463
01:37:729 (5,6,7) - same as 01:13:873
02:13:150 (1) - too soon after a spinner
there are more patterns that are really hard to play for this diff, since by adding an easy diff you can have a harder normal diff, but in this case your normal diff have to be ¨new player friendly¨

GL hope this help a bit

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

Natsu wrote:
M4M sorry for late D:

General

your BG have weird dimensions, will be nice if you can resize it to a properly onewhich size is properly?
I think your preview point is unsnapped, snap it to 00:52:187 fix
Adding some sb with the names for collab will be niceI don't know how to make a sb :<
I think ¨Collab¨ as diff name is not allowed, use Collab Insane or another diff name that you like
fixed

Collab

your HP is really low, I suggest you to go with HP 7 after all this is an Insane diffI think HP6 is enough for this map
same with your OD, try OD 8 or 7.5-^
00:16:132 (2) - 00:17:398 (5) - there are a lot of triplets that doesn't fit the music nicely IMOfixed
00:23:271 (1,2,3) - you have some transitions that are kinda weird to play like this one, try this instead:fixed
SPOILER
00:25:440 missing whistle? since it sound pretty nice with the music at this pointno
00:29:145 (2) - 00:29:868 (6) - there are more triplets like this that doesn't have support from the musicfixed
00:31:223 (5) - I don't see a reason to have this extended slider here, the music is clearly in 1/2fixed
00:36:554 (2,3) - will be nice if you stack this, to be consistent with 00:36:916 (4,5) - 00:37:277 (6,7) - fixed
00:43:512 (6) - you are missing a NC herefixed
00:53:632 (5) - ^fixed
01:08:813 (3,4) - really tricky pattern ¿what one is the head? ¿what one is the tail? also that sv change without advice is really annoying IMOfixed
01:12:066 this NC is unnecesaryfixed
01:16:765 (1) - there is not 1/4 in the music a 1/2 slider will fit better this part, the triplet should be in 01:17:036 - fixed
01:17:217 ^ -^
01:26:163 kinda weird that you are ignoring this important beat in the musicI don't think so,there isn't important beat
01:50:018 (1,1) - I don't see a valid reason for this combo spam
02:03:030 (1,2) - ugly overlap, try to move 1 a bit to the left to avoid it
02:06:283 (2,4) - same this overlaps doesn't look nice
02:12:428 (1) - this NC is not even necessary
02:13:873 ^fixed
02:14:596 (4) - you are missing a NC herefixed
02:16:765 (5,6) - this spacing is so confuse O.O, since it looks like 1/4 when it is 1/2fixed
03:05:922 (4,2) - not stacked properlyfixed
03:10:801 (10) - a slider will be nice ending in 03:10:982
fixed

Hard

HP +1 (6)I think HP5 is enough
00:22:548 (4,5,6) - 00:23:271 (1,2,3) - 00:23:994 (4,5,6) - patterns like this are kinda difficult for a hard diff, since the off hand streams are always hard to get, maybe use normal triplets or 1/4 repeat sliders instead? also you will improve the rhythmfixed
00:29:054 (5,1) - swap NC following your combo pattern fixed
00:31:765 (5) - there is not music at 1/4, as I said in ¨collab¨ diff there are a lot of triplets that doesn't have support from the musicfixed
00:43:512 (6) - missing NC, following your combo patternfixed
00:47:036 (2,3) - weird rhythm and really hard to play for a hard diff, if you still want to keep that rhythm use a slider instead, the current one is not appropriatefixed
00:50:379 (2) - this extended slider is not necessary the music is clearly 1/2I think the music is end in00:50:651 -
00:52:910 (3,1) - there are some ugly overlaps like this one, that will be nice if you check by yourself to improve your diff design fixed
01:13:512 (6,2) - ^prefer mine
01:24:898 a 1/4 repeat slider will sound really nice hereprefer mine
02:00:861 (3,4,5) - same as 00:22:548fixed
02:08:813 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, the music is clearly 1/2fixed
02:21:825 (1,2) - really confuse to play, mainly cuz the repeat slider end in an otherwise way that the next sliderend at 02:22:367 - fixed
02:24:355 (4,1) - those beats are too close, add some more spacing to make this less confused to playfixed
02:30:319 (5) - ending slider on such important beats like the one in 02:30:500 doesn't fit the music at all, those beats should be mapped as slider head or circles
02:33:392 (1,2,3) - whistle spam sound really bad, consider to remove someI don't think so
02:34:837 (1,2,3) - unnecesary extended sliders, music and vocals are landing in 1/2unnecesary to fixed,I think the voice is a bit extended at 1/4
02:49:295 (5) - missing NCfixed
03:10:801 (6) - same as collab difffixed
Normal

00:20:379 (1,2) - circle + slider stack are nice, but circle to circle in the easy diff of the set is not ok IMO, try a single slider instead Is allowed at normal,another BAT say
00:21:825 (1,2) - ^, also remove NC from here 00:21:825 (1) - is breaking your combo patternfixed
00:39:897 (5,6,1) - this look really hard to play for new players (since you don't have an easy diff)if they can retry,there isn't difficult to play
00:43:512 (6) - from this point you break your combo pattern >:fixed
00:49:295 (7) - your NC should be here 00:49:295 (7) - but not in 00:50:740 (1) - fixed
00:51:463 (3,1) - anti jumps in the easy diff of the set are discouraged, try to keep your stacks at the same gaps, if you use 1/1 stacks don't use 1/2 or other gapsfixed
00:59:416 (3) - this slider shape look really bad IMO, try to make the curve in the last part a bit betterno
01:13:873 (3,4,1,2) - this kind of patterns are not suitable for a normal which is the easy diff in the setfixed
01:25:801 (4,5,6,7) - same as above, also take in mind what I said about stacks gaps in 00:51:463
01:37:729 (5,6,7) - same as 01:13:873
02:13:150 (1) - [/color]too soon after a spinner[/color]fixed
there are more patterns that are really hard to play for this diff, since by adding an easy diff you can have a harder normal diff, but in this case your normal diff have to be ¨new player friendly¨
GL hope this help a bit

Thank you to mod my map

Last edited by 4anke 10 years ago, edited 8 times in total.

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 11 years ago

hi :3
[Normal]

00:31:946 (6,3) - Overlap
00:44:234 (7,8) - ctrl+g以及整理
01:14:415 (4) - 忽略了白线去押较轻的红线，不合适
02:12:428 - 转盘结束可以往前一拍，具体细则https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019

[Hard]

00:26:885 (3,4,2,3) - 有点乱，拉开些或者叠一下或许比较好
00:42:066 (1,2) - 后移1/2
01:03:392 (1,2,3) - 三连建议挪到红线
01:05:922 (5,6,7) - 形状不太规则，可以用ctrl+shift+d调整
01:26:343 (1) - 感觉有点刻意了，而且后面接三连的话也容易miss
02:21:825 (1) - 试下拆成两个一折
02:47:849 - circle

[Collab Insane]

00:11:705 (1) - 尽量避免白线三连
00:14:054 (4,4) - overlap
----
01:54:717 (2,3) - 重叠次数可以减少些
02:06:825 (4,4) - 叠好
02:09:536 (3,4) - 叠在3尾部比较合适
---
02:19:657 (8) - NC
02:27:970 (2,2) - 叠好

goodluck

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 11 years ago

AIR wrote:
hi :3
[Normal]
00:31:946 (6,3) - Overlap?
00:44:234 (7,8) - ctrl+g以及整理?
01:14:415 (4) - 忽略了白线去押较轻的红线，不合适fixed
02:12:428 - 转盘结束可以往前一拍，具体细则https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
fixed

[Hard]
00:26:885 (3,4,2,3) - 有点乱，拉开些或者叠一下或许比较好我觉得还好啦，间距都一样，不乱
00:42:066 (1,2) - 后移1/2我这样摆也可以
01:03:392 (1,2,3) - 三连建议挪到红线没音
01:05:922 (5,6,7) - 形状不太规则，可以用ctrl+shift+d调整这里不是三角型，而是五角星的一部分
01:26:343 (1) - 感觉有点刻意了，而且后面接三连的话也容易miss0.0
02:21:825 (1) - 试下拆成两个一折？
02:47:849 - circle
没位置放circle

[Collab Insane]
00:11:705 (1) - 尽量避免白线三连0.0
00:14:054 (4,4) - overlapfixed
----
01:54:717 (2,3) - 重叠次数可以减少些
02:06:825 (4,4) - 叠好
02:09:536 (3,4) - 叠在3尾部比较合适
---
02:19:657 (8) - NCfixed
02:27:970 (2,2) - 叠好fixed
goodluck

Thank you to mod my map

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 11 years ago

Okazaki Ushio wrote:
Regraz
01:32:669 (1) - 真的不是放歪了？重新拉下blanket ?
02:09:536 (3) - 这个滑条为什么不和02:04:114 (1) - 还有02:07:006 (1) - 一样在那个音上起？因为这个是为了后面节奏变化而准备的

nice map, good luck

Thank you!

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 11 years ago

Natsu: all fixed
AIR: Fixed except the last one. Since they are too fur away from each othe in the timeline, I dont think there is a neccesity.
Thx~!
CODE:

My Part

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161,172,116343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,132,116524,2,0,P|261:77|236:36,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,172,116885,2,0,P|147:227|172:268,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,286,117247,6,0,B|305:284|305:284|346:312,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,337,117789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,256,117970,2,0,P|108:246|70:260,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,186,118331,2,0,B|124:143|124:143|84:114,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,93,118693,6,0,P|119:48|167:53,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,131,119054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
225,131,119235,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,253,119416,2,0,P|227:298|179:293,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,215,119777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
121,215,119958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,131,120138,5,2,0:0:0:0:
399,156,120319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,107,120500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,180,120681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,84,120861,2,0,B|170:81|170:81|112:107|74:92,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,96,121313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,96,121404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,271,121584,1,4,0:0:0:0:
270,277,121765,5,0,0:0:0:0:
270,277,121946,2,0,P|288:222|255:176,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,96,122307,2,0,P|73:151|106:197,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,127,122669,2,0,L|340:124,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,250,123030,6,0,L|31:253,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,193,123392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
342,322,123572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,122,123753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,193,123934,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,193,124114,6,0,P|190:109|126:146,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,271,124657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,271,124837,2,0,B|135:304|135:304|183:308,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,228,125199,2,0,B|209:195|209:195|161:191,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,297,125560,2,0,P|337:266|339:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,128,125922,6,0,P|119:159|117:213,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,297,126283,2,0,P|347:320|409:308,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,350,126645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,238,126825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,238,127006,6,0,B|386:182|386:182|446:151|446:78,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,86,127548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,86,127729,2,0,P|283:64|244:76,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,221,128090,2,0,P|323:243|362:231,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,143,128452,2,0,B|508:89|508:89|500:51,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,86,128813,6,0,B|316:140|316:140|324:178,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,297,129175,2,0,P|167:280|128:295,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,220,129536,2,0,P|201:205|283:239,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,358,130078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,358,130259,6,0,B|171:289|171:289|196:297,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,302,130620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,302,130801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,136,130982,2,0,B|291:205|291:205|266:197,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,167,131343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,167,131524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,303,131705,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,126,131886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,193,132067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,261,132247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,84,132428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,84,132789,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,701 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 10 years ago

[Normal]

00:18:933 (3) - Try "CTRL + G" I think more better flow.
00:33:030 (3) - Broken distance snap. please remake this note.
00:37:729 (1,2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:39:897 (5) - add clap on slider head. You should respond by a drumbeat of the back.
00:44:234 (2) - It is an awfully crooked slider imo. Please changed this ? ( I used 00:46:403 (1) - this slider ctrl + h
00:43:512 (1,2,3) - If you are not understand. try this code.
```
173,71,43512,6,0,P|229:45|288:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,141,44235,2,0,P|365:197|410:237,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,44958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
img
00:51:464 (5) - add clap better.
00:53:272 (2) - Please not used "overlap" You should be changed another pattern.
00:56:525 (3) - A point of view is sudden and is not beautiful. try this.
img
00:59:416 (3) - Same as above.
01:01:223 (4) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle on slider end.
01:03:030 (7) - add clap on slider head too.

01:03:030 (7,1,2) - Try an arrange like this. for to make it easy to show it more.

img

148,292,63030,2,0,L|112:348,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,63753,6,0,B|248:232|256:268|256:268|280:232|328:208|368:204|404:216,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,304,64837,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:06:283 (4) - You shouldbe move x380 y60. because distance snap.
01:25:440 (3,4,1) - Same as abobe. Please used "distance snap *0.9" remake this part.
01:37:729 (5) - add clap on slider head.
02:10:259 (1) - spinner end 02:11:705 - here. and add finish.
02:17:488 (3) - To make it easy to show it more. Try this arrange.
img
02:23:632 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:28:693 - add note.
02:30:500 - and 02:30:861 (4) - this. Try this rhythm?
02:35:560 (3) - add clap.
02:41:524 (4) - Remove note. because the different patterns are dangerous to only here.
02:57:970 (4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and 02:58:512 (5,6,1) - this is overlap imo. Please changed another pattern. I suggestion here. Try this?

img
03:01:584 (4,5) - Please used Distance *0.9 The different patterns are dangerous to only here.
03:08:090 (2) - Remove whistle. and Add finish better.
03:08:813 (3) - Same as above. add finish better *slider head.

[Hard]

00:11:705 (1,4) - I think that it is slightly tight. Please changed this pattern?
img
00:13:151 (1,4) - Why use 1/4 slider here? I think it's overmapped. You should be changed 1/2
00:16:042 (5,6) - It looks slightly dirty to be piled up. Please use my suggestion here.
img
00:20:379 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:23:994 (3,4,5,3) - add whistle
00:29:777 (3) - Please do blanket more neatly.
img
00:30:500 (1,3) - Same as before part.
00:30:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please remapping. You should be use Distance snap *1.1
00:34:837 (1,2,3) - Need distance *1.1
00:38:632 (2) - Remove clap. not need. I think add whistle better.
00:39:898 (3) - No. not follow melody. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:42:247 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:46:404 (1,2) - Why is only this place that distance becomes small ? I think you should be use distance *1.1 This spacing is really awkward.
00:47:126 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:48:572 (2,3,4,5) - Humm... I think that it is hard to look a little on Hard diff. Try this ?
img
00:49:295 (1) - Why changed SV*1.2 ? I think not need this point. please use 1.00.
00:51:916 (5,6,7) - all add clap ?
00:55:259 (1) - More better rhythm suggestion and placement suggestion.
img
01:01:946 (6,1) - Why do you use the big jump at this place ? This spacing is really awkward on Hard diff. Please changed another pattern.
01:03:030 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me and This spacing is really awkward. please use this suggestion.
01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This consecutive rhythm is very dangerous in Hard diff. You must be use Slider. because for mapset diff spread. and Please reconsider some these neighboring consecutive rhythm.
01:20:560 (1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. please changed rhythm and pattern.
01:25:982 (3,1) - Same as above.
02:03:934 (1) - Not need SV changed.
02:06:825 (1) - Same as above.
02:09:898 (1,2) - Swap NC here, so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
02:24:355 (4,1,2) - Remove note.
02:26:885 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Please changed this.
02:29:777 (2,3) - More better rhythm here. and 02:30:319 (4) - remove note.
02:30:500 (4) - add Nc and 02:30:861 (1) - remove Nc. for downbeat.
02:30:861 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm here.
02:32:669 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Hard to look. Please remake another pattern.
02:34:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard rhythm. Please switch to simpler rhythm.
02:38:271 (2,3,4) - Please change rhythm here.
02:39:898 (2,3,4) - Hard to look. please changed another pattern.
02:49:295 (1,2,3) - I know stack. But hard to jump on Hard diff. please changed another pattern.
02:50:199 (1) - Not need SV changed.
02:59:054 (1) - remove Nc
03:09:536 (1,2,6) - Not need SV changed too.

Sorry late. and sorry I feel needs more work on Normal and Hard diff. Please gets 3~5mods call me again ! good luck !

Last edited by Satellite 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

reply for Satellite:normal diff is all fixed

sorry so late,all fixed now.

Last edited by 4anke 10 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,701 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 10 years ago

If you are busy. or Not find some modder call me back again.
I can find some modder lol

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 10 years ago

hi

[General]
Looks fine.

[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like this

SPOILER

00:37:910 - consider adding a note here
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybe
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imo
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here.
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?

01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try this

SPOILER

02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before

SPOILER

03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5x
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythm

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imo
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) -
00:23:994 (3,4) - try this

SPOILER

00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem better
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 sliders
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked well
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be fine
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern

SPOILER

02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?

SPOILER

02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinner
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff

[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanket
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try this

SPOILER

00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)

wow, finished

good luck!

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

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Last edited by 4anke 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

4anke wrote:
Crystal wrote:
hi

[General]
Looks fine.

[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like thisfixed
SPOILER
00:37:910 - consider adding a note hereI think delete this circle can make the rhythm more playable
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybefixed
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imofixed
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine00:45:319 (3) - in order to stack with00:46:042 (6) -
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here. unnecessary IMO
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)fixed
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?
01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try thisfixed myself
SPOILER
02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before02:37:367 (4) - in order to stack with02:36:283 (1) -
SPOILER
03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5xunnecessary IMO
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?fixed
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythmI want to end with the long white line
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imofixed
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) - I want to follow the voice there
00:23:994 (3,4) - try thisjprefer mine
SPOILER
00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286 the DS is no problem there
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem betterfixed
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 slidersI follow the drum there
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )fixed
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked wellfixed
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be finewhy0.0
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this patternfixed
SPOILER
02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?fixed
SPOILER
02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinnerthere is no problem IMO
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff-^

[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanketfixed
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try thisno problem IMO
SPOILER
00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)this spinner should end at 02:11:705 - that the BAT say.oh,I don't know why I haven't fixed last update?orz

wow, finished
good luck!
Thank you to mod my map

Jonarwhal

1,227 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 10 years ago

Hey, m4m on your queue

Normal-

SPOILER

00:17:849 (2,3,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2) correctly, try snapping the end of (2) to the grid, and re blanketing (3)
00:26:163 (1,2) - these should be a bit less curved, to keep it consistent with 00:23:994 (3,4) - these,
or make 00:23:994 (3,4) - these look more curves
00:36:283 (4,5) - blanket this a bit better by making it a bit more curved example
00:43:512 (1) - this should look like 00:42:066 (3) - this because it sounds similar
00:50:017 (2) - this is a tight curve and a bad blanket, make it a bit less curved
00:51:464 (5) - x-64 y-64 example
00:53:271 (2,3) - this is spaced weirdly, try something like this and then this
01:35:560 (1) - overlap, try rotating example i did it by 20 clockwise
01:55:078 (4,1) - blanket
02:15:319 (5,1) - ^
02:23:632 (3) - x-352 y-136, then stack the next (1) and (5)
02:26:524 (5,1) - these aren't perfectly aligned
03:02:307 (1) - flipping this vertically would avoid overlap and improve flow here example

Hard-

SPOILER

00:13:873 (4) - this is a bit far away, so either move it closer or move 00:13:151 (1) - this farther away
01:03:753 - 01:03:753 - add note? at x-200 y-288, then stack 01:04:838 (6) - this to it
01:14:054 (2) - overlap, try moving (2) to x-484 y-128
01:37:006 (1,2) - blanket
01:57:157 - add note here, stacked with 01:57:247 (5) - this
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4) - this should be centered
02:57:066 - add note, stacked with 02:57:247 (3) - this, you do have harder jumps than this in this diff, so it's not so bad

I would have modded insane, but you wrote on your queue not to mod it.

Good Luck!

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

jonawaga wrote:
Hey, m4m on your queue

Normal-
SPOILER
00:17:849 (2,3,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2) correctly, try snapping the end of (2) to the grid, and re blanketing (3)fixed
00:26:163 (1,2) - these should be a bit less curved, to keep it consistent with 00:23:994 (3,4) - these,
or make 00:23:994 (3,4) - these look more curvesprefer mine
00:36:283 (4,5) - blanket this a bit better by making it a bit more curved prefer mineexample
00:43:512 (1) - this should look like 00:42:066 (3) - this because it sounds similarunnecessary IMO
00:50:017 (2) - this is a tight curve and a bad blanket, make it a bit less curvedfixed
00:51:464 (5) - x-64 y-64 examplefixed
00:53:271 (2,3) - this is spaced weirdly, try something like this and then thisfixed
01:35:560 (1) - overlap, try rotating example i did it by 20 clockwiseunnecessary
01:55:078 (4,1) - blanketfixed
02:15:319 (5,1) - ^fixed
02:23:632 (3) - x-352 y-136, then stack the next (1) and (5)It still stack at x-333 y-133,
02:26:524 (5,1) - these aren't perfectly aligned no problem IMO
03:02:307 (1) - flipping this vertically would avoid overlap and improve flow here examplefixed
Hard-
SPOILER
00:13:873 (4) - this is a bit far away, so either move it closer or move 00:13:151 (1) - this farther awayno problem IMO
01:03:753 - 01:03:753 - add note? at x-200 y-288, then stack 01:04:838 (6) - this to itfixed
01:14:054 (2) - overlap, try moving (2) to x-484 y-128 fixed
01:37:006 (1,2) - blanketfixed
01:57:157 - add note here, stacked with 01:57:247 (5) - thisI think the rhythm at there shouldn't jump there
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4) - this should be centered?
02:57:066 - add note, stacked with 02:57:247 (3) - this, you do have harder jumps than this in this diff, so it's not so badin order to same with 01:57:247 (5)
I would have modded insane, but you wrote on your queue not to mod it.

Good Luck!

Thank you to mod my map,I will mod your map.

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 10 years ago

M4M
[General]
BG must be 4:3 or 16:9 aspect rate, but current is 10:6, so it looks Unrankble. You need to find another BG for Ranked.
Uncheck Widescreen Support because there is no SB.
Delete all SC2 hitsounds in this folder, you don't use these hitsounds.
[Normal]
Prefer AR4 for newbie because there is no Easy diff, so this diff is the easiest diff.
Placement
02:13:151(1) Change the direction of slider like this, and the flow to next note would be more good.

SPOILER

02:36:283(1) Similar suggestion, upword curve would be better flow than current one.

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:37:729(1) Prefer 1/2 slider than a circle becuase you followed vocal on next note(2), so to be consistence.

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:46:404(1) Add finish at head same as other diffs.
01:25:440(3) Add whistle at head same as other diffs.
01:55:078(4) Delete whistle at head.
03:09:536(1) Add finish.
[Hard]
Placement
00:22:367(3) I don't like to stack this note on the end of slider, it looks not good. So move this note like this?

SPOILER

00:34:657(5) Similar suggestion, this flow from (4) is a bit odd for me.

SPOILER

00:41:705(3) Bent this slider a bit? I feel better than current one.

SPOILER

01:04:837(2) CTRL+G to make a jmping, I found similar part in previous.
01:29:777(1,2,3,4) So weird placement, why these sliders start on the end of pre slider... these flow doesn't look good.
01:32:669(1,2,3,4) ^
02:50:199(1) Useless NC I suppose.
02:55:259(2) Stack this note on (1) better to see clearly.
Rhythm
01:50:018 Unnecessary green line.
01:03:753 Add a note here because there is cymbal sound here, so I don't suppose it is better to ignore this. (You already picked the sound on Normal and Insane)
01:38:452 ^
02:47:849 ^
Hit Sound
00:51:464(3) Missing clap.
01:15:319(1) Add finish.
02:11:715(1) Add clap same as Insane.
02:33:392(1,2,3) Too loudly on this part, down the voleme better.
02:34:837(1,2,3) Missing hitsounds?
03:08:090(1,4,1,8) Add finish to follow the cymbal sound. Whistles sound weakly. (allpy to all diffs)

Good luck.

Your Good Self

334 posts

Joined June 2012

Your Good Self 10 years ago

M4M from your queue

[Normal]
00:37:910 - Add note?
00:45:319 (4) - Slider isn't symmetrical; it's a bit off-center
00:47:488 (3,4,5) - Also a bit off from the symmetrical pattern. 00:48:211 (5) should be in the same place as 00:44:235 (2)
00:54:355 (4,1) - Blanket can be better. Look from 00:54:717
00:56:525 (3) - Bounce on the white tick 00:56:885 instead
00:59:416 (3) - ^
01:01:223 (4) - NC
01:05:199 (3) - Slider shape can be better

suggestion

01:27:247 (2) - The last ~1/2 beat of the slider is straight, because of the last red node. You should make the first 1/2 beat straight too.
01:34:114 (3,4) - Make these the same shape (copy, paste, rotate)
01:34:114 (3,1) - Overlap D:
01:35:741 - Add note? Hope it doesn't get too hard
01:38:452 - Break start is manually pushed back to some strange time 01:38:663 ; it should start on 01:38:452 if you don't plan on mapping it.
02:17:488 (3) - Replace with 1/1 slider
02:33:392 (1) - Try to have a smoother transition from straight>curve. It will look better.
02:39:899 (2,3) - Blanket can be better.
03:02:307 (1) - Curve down instead of up. Improves flow, and fixes overlap with 03:01:945 (5)
03:03:753 (3) - Red node on the white tick 03:04:114

[Hard]
00:21:645 - Add note
00:28:331 (4) - How about something like this?

SPOILER

00:29:777 (3) - Shape on both halves should be the same
00:38:813 (3,1) - This?

SPOILER

00:41:163 - Add note?
00:42:428 (3,5) - Overlap is ugly D:
00:49:295 (1,2) - ^
00:57:608 (6) - End at where 00:58:151 (1) bends
00:59:416 (1) - After the repeat the flow is not so good, maybe change to slider + circle?
01:03:753 - Map the downbeat
01:13:512 (6,2) - More overlap D:
01:38:452 - Same as Normal, break time start is pushed too far back
01:52:548 (5) - Change to 1/2 beat slider
01:55:440 (5) - ^
02:16:584 - Add note
02:17:307 - ^
02:24:355 - Add note to complete the symmetrical pattern, with just whistle hitsound and no clap
02:29:054 (1,3) - Turn overlap sliders into parallel sliders.

SPOILER

02:33:392 (1) - Stacking doesn't feel right.
02:43:512 (1) - Move the white node to x:312 y:180 for better blanket with 02:43:331 (4)
02:48:211 (2,3,4) - Use the same slider and copy paste rotate for a cleaner looking pattern
02:57:247 (2,2) - Overlap, just move the tail of 02:56:524 (1,2) down so that it blankets instead
03:02:669 (3,4) - Blanket around 03:02:307 (1,2) can be better.
03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:09:536 (1,2) - Short slider + overlap => :/
03:10:620 (7,8) - Replace with:

[Thoughts]
This map has potential for ranking, just need to make some stuff look prettier.

Hope my mod was helpful, it's past 12 midnight here so I'm probably not thinking/modding properly.
I might mod Insane ~~tomorrow~~ (edit: later today) if I feel like it (and if I have the time).

For now, good luck!

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
BG must be 4:3 or 16:9 aspect rate, but current is 10:6, so it looks Unrankble. You need to find another BG for Ranked.fixed
Uncheck Widescreen Support because there is no SB.fixed
Delete all SC2 hitsounds in this folder, you don't use these hitsounds.fixed
[Normal]
Prefer AR4 for newbie because there is no Easy diff, so this diff is the easiest diff. fixed
Placement
02:13:151(1) Change the direction of slider like this, and the flow to next note would be more good.fixed
SPOILER
02:36:283(1) Similar suggestion, upword curve would be better flow than current one.but It will stack with other circle
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:37:729(1) Prefer 1/2 slider than a circle becuase you followed vocal on next note(2), so to be consistence.unnecessary
SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:46:404(1) Add finish at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:25:440(3) Add whistle at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:55:078(4) Delete whistle at head.fixed
03:09:536(1) Add finish.fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:22:367(3) I don't like to stack this note on the end of slider, it looks not good. So move this note like this?prefer mine
SPOILER
00:34:657(5) Similar suggestion, this flow from (4) is a bit odd for me. I don't think so
SPOILER
00:41:705(3) Bent this slider a bit? I feel better than current one.fixed
SPOILER
01:04:837(2) CTRL+G to make a jmping, I found similar part in previous.fixed
01:29:777(1,2,3,4) So weird placement, why these sliders start on the end of pre slider... these flow doesn't look good. fixed
01:32:669(1,2,3,4) ^fixed
02:50:199(1) Useless NC I suppose.fixed
02:55:259(2) Stack this note on (1) better to see clearly.fixed
Rhythm
01:50:018 Unnecessary green line.fixed
01:03:753 Add a note here because there is cymbal sound here, so I don't suppose it is better to ignore this. (You already picked the sound on Normal and Insane)fixed
01:38:452 ^fixed
02:47:849 ^fixed
Hit Sound
00:51:464(3) Missing clap.unnecessary,because the voice is too loudly there
01:15:319(1) Add finish.fixed
02:11:715(1) Add clap same as Insane.fixed
02:33:392(1,2,3) Too loudly on this part, down the voleme better.fixed
02:34:837(1,2,3) Missing hitsounds?fixed
03:08:090(1,4,1,8) Add finish to follow the cymbal sound. Whistles sound weakly. (allpy to all diffs)fixed

Good luck.

Thank you to mod my map

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

reply for Your Good Self:fixed something

Mafumafu

Nomination Assessment Team

3,395 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 10 years ago

要起飞了！哇加油啊

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Regraz wrote:
要起飞了！哇加油啊

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,701 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 10 years ago

hitsound suggestion

23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]

00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

[Hard]

Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
01:38:632 - Not need break time here.

changed here
01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.

Lin-Kun

88 posts

Joined June 2014

Lin-Kun 10 years ago

Please don't hate me but...
I can't find anything wrong with your beatmap

I've been going over it for the last month now that my internet's fixed and i cant find anything wrong with it :<
(I'm new to modding and probably don't have enough experience)
please forgive me (offers cake) and it's no lie

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Lin-Kun wrote:
Please don't hate me but...
I can't find anything wrong with your beatmap
I've been going over it for the last month now that my internet's fixed and i cant find anything wrong with it :<
(I'm new to modding and probably don't have enough experience)
please forgive me (offers cake) and it's no lie

thank you to test my map,I haven't hate you

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,701 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 10 years ago

fight !! wating reply!

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Satellite wrote:
hitsound suggestion
23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]
00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9
[Hard]
Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
01:38:632 - Not need break time here.

changed here
01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.
Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.

Sorry,so late.I can't notice your reply in time.All fixed,except normal diff:00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.I can't understand your means,so I don't know how to fix.

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 10 years ago

hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlap
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this

)
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistle
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenline
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some

02:24:537 - unsnapped greenline
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imo

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tail
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imo

Anyway good luck ^^

4anke

115 posts

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

pkhg wrote:
hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.fixed

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlapfixed
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this )fixed
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistlefixed
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3unnecessary IMO
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imoprefer mine

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverseprefer mine
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?no
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tailfinish is proper on there
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3I don't think so.
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:fixed
234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard let me think...

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imoI am so lazy to map a new diff,if necessary,I will map a new different between the normal and hard

Anyway good luck ^^

think you to mod my map

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

[Normal]

00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.
```
492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.

[Hard]

00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.

00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object

334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds

01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.

rhythm

placement

code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )

426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.

[Collab Insane]

00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
00:41:163 - add note better.
00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.

01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.

395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit For example move X : 386 Y : 271
02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.

Ohhh. sorry late recheck >_>
If you are question. Please send me " Forum - PM " Good luck 4anke san

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4anke

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4anke 10 years ago

reply for Satellite:all fixed now

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

Collab Insane missing update ;w;

please reupload ~

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T

4anke

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4anke 10 years ago

Satellite wrote:
sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T

0.0why?T^T

Last edited by 4anke 10 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T

4anke

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Satellite wrote:
Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T

ok.I also busy too.T^T

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 10 years ago

hi there, metadata check as requested.

SPOILER

Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!

4anke

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

IamKwaN wrote:
hi there, metadata check as requested.
SPOILER
Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!

fixed

smallboat

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smallboat 10 years ago

Sorry delay few days to check this map cuz so busy housework in irl.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Nothing.

[Normal]

00:11:705 (1,2) - From the QAT viewpoint, avoid the stack entirely in easy diff, suggest follow the distance place better (所以從頭到尾都照間距擺別stack了，因為是最低的難度，後面以此類推)
00:58:331 (1) - DS consistent
01:34:837 (4,2) - Don't stack entirely at beginner diff,it makes confused playing by their viewpoint. (後面依此類推也要改)
02:32:669 (4,5) - 合併1/1，這個跟hard一樣節奏，用簡單點

[Hard]

00:34:476 (4,5,1) - 這個00:34:657 (5) - 移動一下有好的flow :
SPOILER
00:39:898 (3) - Follow the distance to place,it seems cover to the number,not a good thing to these ppl I think. (建議紅線尾端)
00:43:512 (1) - 藍線沒音，擺紅線比較好
00:46:223 (4,1) - Avoid overlap better.
00:50:379 (2) - 藍線沒音，擺紅線比較好
00:52:910 (3,4) - Same as 00:39:898
02:27:608 (1) - ^ (其實像這種尾端藍線沒音的我不太喜歡放，很容易有dq的危險，把尾端藍的統一改成到紅線，Insane 也一樣)

[Insane] (同Hard建議藍線尾聽起來沒音的也改紅線)

00:36:554 (2,4,6) - 藍線Tick沒音，建議去掉，follow vocal will be better.
00:42:247 (2,3) - Seems too close,also make (3) use ctrl+g I think.
01:20:560 (1) - 這個兩個都是重音，所以不要壓在尾端會玩得不cool，你可以放這樣(注意間距和音效):
SPOILER
02:17:488 (1,2,3) - Just imo :
SPOILER

4anke

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4anke 10 years ago

reply for smallboat:fixed everything

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

sorry for late. no kds pls!

[General]

Easy and Normal AR+1 better imo. because AR 3/5/7/9 is best spread.

[Easy]

01:37:006 (2) - The contact with the Hp bar. It should be lowered a little more.
nice easy

[Normal]

looks fine

[Hard]

00:38:632 (2) - Not stack this circle. because Shape is changed by Stack leniency.
img
00:51:825 (4) - Ctrl+G better.
02:35:922 (4) - Same as above.

[Insane]

00:36:102 - add note better.　(my suggestion x:20 y:256)
01:09:536 (1,2,3,4) - Why interval is falling apart?
01:14:054 (2,3) - Try ctrl+g I think more better flow!
01:15:138 (8,9) - add clap
01:18:573 (4,8) - Try changed rhythm ? about 1/2 slider :3
01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above.
01:25:259 - add note
01:26:885 (8) - add Nc. 01:27:428 (1) - remove Nc
01:38:090 (6,7,1) - Jump placement suggestion.
img
02:11:705 (1) - add finish
02:12:428 (5) - same as above.
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped. please do this rhythm.
02:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
02:30:229 (7) - Remove note. it is overmapped imo.
02:35:560 (5) - add clap ?
02:39:355 (2) - not much this rhythm. try this
.
03:01:946 (1) - Remove Nc
03:04:837 (1) - same as above.
03:09:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Mmmm... too big jump orz Please be a little more small ;_;

Easy Normal and Hard is Cool. Insane still needs more work imo ;_; but call me back <3
I'll recheck insane diff. Really sorry for late mod QAQ

4anke

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

reply for Satellite:fixed everything,except for insane diff,'01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above'I don't know how to fix,this place looks nice IMO.Can I unfix?.

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

no kds

red = unrankable

[General]

Easy diff remove widescreen support check.
normal-hitnormal.wav is not use this map. remove this wav file.
soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide3 is must be use 44byte file. try used this wav. http://puu.sh/hJgLP/842271a41e.zip

before irc log

2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: hi
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: keep is ok
2015-05-10 22:14 4anke: hi
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: insane
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:186 (3) - 
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:908 (11) - clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:23:090 (12) - remo clap
2015-05-10 22:19 Satellite: 02:24:536 (5) - overmapped. remove note
2015-05-10 22:19 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:20 Satellite: 02:24:626 (5) - add whistle
2015-05-10 22:21 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4) - m0ve x256 y352 ? because
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4,5) - this spacing hard to read
2015-05-10 22:22 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: 02:33:211 (7) - move x164 y292 
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: ?
2015-05-10 22:23 Satellite: 02:35:018 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better
2015-05-10 22:23 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: 02:56:343 (6) - stack is not fit this melody
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: move x:108 y:340 better
2015-05-10 22:25 02:58:693 (3,4,5) - please use distance *1.0
2015-05-10 22:26 Satellite: 03:10:801 (10) - not fit this slider. i think circle + circle better (jump
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: http://puu.sh/hIbxJ/376a745480.jpg
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: jump suggestion
2015-05-10 22:29 Satellite: that's all update pls
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: I can watch the photo from punsh now ;w;
2015-05-10 22:30 Satellite: other puush http://puu.sh/hIbHs/52e8927570.jpg
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: cann't
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: can't
2015-05-10 22:32 4anke: ;w;my computer have some problem that can't watch the photo from punsh ;w;
2015-05-10 22:33 4anke: can you say the (x,y) for me?
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: k
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: 03:10:259 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 
2015-05-10 22:35 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3112262
2015-05-10 22:35 4anke: thank

call me back

4anke

115 posts

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

reply for Satellite:fixed

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me

4anke

115 posts

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Satellite wrote:
no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me

fixed.thank you very much

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/

4anke

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Satellite wrote:
wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/

thank you

smallboat

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smallboat 10 years ago

Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

wow! omg congrats 1st ranked!

4anke

115 posts

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

smallboat wrote:
Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !

thank you!

Fycho

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Fycho 10 years ago

Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下，尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]

00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?

[Hard]

The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
02:09:536 (3,4) -
02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -

[Easy]

I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.

For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
###D

4anke

115 posts

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Topic Starter

4anke 10 years ago

Fycho wrote:
Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下，尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]
00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?
[Hard]
The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
02:09:536 (3,4) -
02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -
[Easy]
I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.
For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
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almost fixed your suggestion,and a few suggestion is diffcult to fix.Normal is difficult than before.

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

Repair Bubbled.

log

17:35 Satellite: normal
17:35 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - 
17:35 Satellite: overlap
17:36 4anke: how can i fix?
17:37 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFcQ/9d804ddba0.jpg
17:37 Satellite: try this?
17:38 4anke: sorry,i can't watch the photo on punsh
17:38 Satellite: ehhh
17:38 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFgE/b1c4ee2a34.jpg.
17:38 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFgE/b1c4ee2a34.jpg
17:40 4anke: can you updata the photo to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/?
17:40 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205746
17:41 4anke: ok
17:42 Satellite: 02:11:705 (3) - add finish on slider head
17:43 4anke: fixed
17:44 Satellite: 02:47:849 (1) - overlap
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205749
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205751.
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205751
17:46 Satellite: that's all
17:48 4anke: 02:48:934 (2,4) - overlap?
17:48 Satellite: no
17:51 4anke: upload
17:52 4anke: thx~

smallboat

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smallboat 10 years ago

~~Hold this ,looks fine,will requa this later (seems full now )~~

Looks good.

ReQualified ~ !

Satellite

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Satellite 10 years ago

good job :3

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