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- 00:18:933 (3) - Try "CTRL + G" I think more better flow.
- 00:33:030 (3) - Broken distance snap. please remake this note.
- 00:37:729 (1,2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:39:897 (5) - add clap on slider head. You should respond by a drumbeat of the back.
- 00:44:234 (2) - It is an awfully crooked slider imo. Please changed this ? ( I used 00:46:403 (1) - this slider ctrl + h
00:43:512 (1,2,3) - If you are not understand. try this code.173,71,43512,6,0,P|229:45|288:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,141,44235,2,0,P|365:197|410:237,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,44958,1,2,0:0:0:0: - 00:51:464 (5) - add clap better.
- 00:53:272 (2) - Please not used "overlap" You should be changed another pattern.
- 00:56:525 (3) - A point of view is sudden and is not beautiful. try this.
- 00:59:416 (3) - Same as above.
- 01:01:223 (4) - I kinda want a regular soft whistle on slider end.
- 01:03:030 (7) - add clap on slider head too.
- 01:03:030 (7,1,2) - Try an arrange like this. for to make it easy to show it more.
148,292,63030,2,0,L|112:348,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,63753,6,0,B|248:232|256:268|256:268|280:232|328:208|368:204|404:216,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,304,64837,1,8,0:0:0:0: - 01:06:283 (4) - You shouldbe move x380 y60. because distance snap.
- 01:25:440 (3,4,1) - Same as abobe. Please used "distance snap *0.9" remake this part.
- 01:37:729 (5) - add clap on slider head.
- 02:10:259 (1) - spinner end 02:11:705 - here. and add finish.
- 02:17:488 (3) - To make it easy to show it more. Try this arrange.
- 02:23:632 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 02:28:693 - add note.
- 02:30:500 - and 02:30:861 (4) - this. Try this rhythm?
- 02:35:560 (3) - add clap.
- 02:41:524 (4) - Remove note. because the different patterns are dangerous to only here.
- 02:57:970 (4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and 02:58:512 (5,6,1) - this is overlap imo. Please changed another pattern. I suggestion here. Try this?
- 03:01:584 (4,5) - Please used Distance *0.9 The different patterns are dangerous to only here.
- 03:08:090 (2) - Remove whistle. and Add finish better.
- 03:08:813 (3) - Same as above. add finish better *slider head.
- 00:11:705 (1,4) - I think that it is slightly tight. Please changed this pattern?
- 00:13:151 (1,4) - Why use 1/4 slider here? I think it's overmapped. You should be changed 1/2
- 00:16:042 (5,6) - It looks slightly dirty to be piled up. Please use my suggestion here.
- 00:20:379 (3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:23:994 (3,4,5,3) - add whistle
- 00:29:777 (3) - Please do blanket more neatly.
- 00:30:500 (1,3) - Same as before part.
- 00:30:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please remapping. You should be use Distance snap *1.1
- 00:34:837 (1,2,3) - Need distance *1.1
- 00:38:632 (2) - Remove clap. not need. I think add whistle better.
- 00:39:898 (3) - No. not follow melody. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:42:247 (2,3,4,5) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:46:404 (1,2) - Why is only this place that distance becomes small ? I think you should be use distance *1.1 This spacing is really awkward.
- 00:47:126 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:48:572 (2,3,4,5) - Humm... I think that it is hard to look a little on Hard diff. Try this ?
- 00:49:295 (1) - Why changed SV*1.2 ? I think not need this point. please use 1.00.
- 00:51:916 (5,6,7) - all add clap ?
- 00:55:259 (1) - More better rhythm suggestion and placement suggestion.
- 01:01:946 (6,1) - Why do you use the big jump at this place ? This spacing is really awkward on Hard diff. Please changed another pattern.
- 01:03:030 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me and This spacing is really awkward. please use this suggestion.
- 01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This consecutive rhythm is very dangerous in Hard diff. You must be use Slider. because for mapset diff spread. and Please reconsider some these neighboring consecutive rhythm.
- 01:20:560 (1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. please changed rhythm and pattern.
- 01:25:982 (3,1) - Same as above.
- 02:03:934 (1) - Not need SV changed.
- 02:06:825 (1) - Same as above.
- 02:09:898 (1,2) - Swap NC here, so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
- 02:24:355 (4,1,2) - Remove note.
- 02:26:885 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Please changed this.
- 02:29:777 (2,3) - More better rhythm here. and 02:30:319 (4) - remove note.
- 02:30:500 (4) - add Nc and 02:30:861 (1) - remove Nc. for downbeat.
- 02:30:861 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm here.
- 02:32:669 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Hard to look. Please remake another pattern.
- 02:34:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard rhythm. Please switch to simpler rhythm.
- 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - Please change rhythm here.
- 02:39:898 (2,3,4) - Hard to look. please changed another pattern.
- 02:49:295 (1,2,3) - I know stack. But hard to jump on Hard diff. please changed another pattern.
- 02:50:199 (1) - Not need SV changed.
- 02:59:054 (1) - remove Nc
- 03:09:536 (1,2,6) - Not need SV changed too.