hi
[General]
Looks fine.
[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like this
00:37:910 - consider adding a note here
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybe
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imo
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here.
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?
01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try this
02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before
03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5x
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythm
[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imo
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) -
00:23:994 (3,4) - try this
00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem better
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 sliders
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked well
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be fine
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern
02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?
02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinner
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff
[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanket
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try this
00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)
wow, finished
good luck!
[General]
Looks fine.
[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like this
00:37:910 - consider adding a note here
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybe
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imo
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here.
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?
01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try this
02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before
03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5x
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythm
[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imo
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) -
00:23:994 (3,4) - try this
00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem better
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 sliders
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked well
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be fine
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern
02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?
02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinner
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff
[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanket
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try this
00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)
wow, finished
good luck!