4anke wrote:

Crystal wrote:

hi

[General]
Looks fine.

[Insane]
00:16:042 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 sliders is too low, which is much lower than the other jumps. it gives a sudden feeling on stopping but not as good as "anti-jump" or "stack" blahblah, so i suggest something like thisfixed

SPOILER

00:37:910 - consider adding a note hereI think delete this circle can make the rhythm more playable
00:39:355 - ^
00:42:066 (1,2) - to blanket well, maybefixed
00:42:789 (3) - 316|296, the stack here seems unnecessary imofixed
00:44:958 (1,3) - such overlaps seem weird for me x.x put 00:45:319 (3) - at 440|216 would be fine00:45:319 (3) - in order to stack with00:46:042 (6) -
00:52:367 - i prefer to emphasize this beat, since it is at the beginning of kiai, where there is thought to be stronger beats, so don't ignore the beat here. unnecessary IMO
00:56:163 (5) - 448|240, look nicer with 00:55:801 (4) - (adjust objects behind if necessary)fixed
01:38:452 - is this guy for some reason or just misplaced?
01:49:657 - map the 1/4 drums here, it might be better
02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - irregular shapes of streams don't look nice for me, try thisfixed myself

SPOILER

02:37:367 (4) - try something like this, as i mentioned before02:37:367 (4) - in order to stack with02:36:283 (1) -

SPOILER

03:04:837 (1) - to emphasize the speed-up, you can change it to 1.5xunnecessary IMO
03:07:729 (6) - stack with 03:06:825 (2) - ?fixed
03:10:801 (10) - try this rhythmI want to end with the long white line

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:14:596 (7) - how about stack at the head of 00:13:873 (4) - ? the previous one seems too straight imofixed
00:16:584 - add a note here to keep consistent with 00:15:861 (4) - I want to follow the voice there
00:23:994 (3,4) - try thisjprefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:114 (3,4) - this can be mistook as 1/2 because of 00:33:392 (1,2) - , try to put 00:34:114 (3) - at 345|286 the DS is no problem there
00:39:898 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? seem betterfixed
00:50:922 00:51:283 - don't miss these beats, i prefer to change 00:50:741 (1,2) - to 2 slidersI follow the drum there
01:15:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just simply use the rhythm in the insane diff, just put reverse sliders at triples. that would be fine with lower distances (compared with insane) (same goes with 01:21:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - )fixed
01:26:885 (3) - this isn't stacked wellfixed
01:29:777 (1,2,3,4) - i don't like this pattern x.x use simple sliders would be finewhy0.0
01:37:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - try this patternfixed

SPOILER

02:03:934 (4) - this pattern looks nicer, right?fixed

SPOILER

02:11:705 (1) - spinner? surprising for me, just continue mapping instead of making a spinnerthere is no problem IMO
03:10:801 (8) - same as insane diff-^

[Normal]
00:43:151 (5,1) - blanketfixed
00:56:525 (3) - the shape looks weird, try thisno problem IMO

SPOILER

00:59:416 (3) - ^
02:10:259 (1) - prolong this spinner to 02:12:428 (maybe you should ask a BAT to make sure if this will be against the rule)this spinner should end at 02:11:705 - that the BAT say.oh,I don't know why I haven't fixed last update?orz


wow, finished
good luck!
Thank you to mod my map

jonawaga wrote:

Hey, m4m on your queue

Normal-

SPOILER

00:17:849 (2,3,4) - (4) isn't stacked with (2) correctly, try snapping the end of (2) to the grid, and re blanketing (3)fixed
00:26:163 (1,2) - these should be a bit less curved, to keep it consistent with 00:23:994 (3,4) - these,
or make 00:23:994 (3,4) - these look more curvesprefer mine
00:36:283 (4,5) - blanket this a bit better by making it a bit more curved prefer mineexample
00:43:512 (1) - this should look like 00:42:066 (3) - this because it sounds similarunnecessary IMO
00:50:017 (2) - this is a tight curve and a bad blanket, make it a bit less curvedfixed
00:51:464 (5) - x-64 y-64 examplefixed
00:53:271 (2,3) - this is spaced weirdly, try something like this and then thisfixed
01:35:560 (1) - overlap, try rotating example i did it by 20 clockwiseunnecessary
01:55:078 (4,1) - blanketfixed
02:15:319 (5,1) - ^fixed
02:23:632 (3) - x-352 y-136, then stack the next (1) and (5)It still stack at x-333 y-133,
02:26:524 (5,1) - these aren't perfectly aligned no problem IMO
03:02:307 (1) - flipping this vertically would avoid overlap and improve flow here examplefixed

Hard-

SPOILER

00:13:873 (4) - this is a bit far away, so either move it closer or move 00:13:151 (1) - this farther awayno problem IMO
01:03:753 - 01:03:753 - add note? at x-200 y-288, then stack 01:04:838 (6) - this to itfixed
01:14:054 (2) - overlap, try moving (2) to x-484 y-128 fixed
01:37:006 (1,2) - blanketfixed
01:57:157 - add note here, stacked with 01:57:247 (5) - thisI think the rhythm at there shouldn't jump there
02:16:042 (1,2,3,4) - this should be centered?
02:57:066 - add note, stacked with 02:57:247 (3) - this, you do have harder jumps than this in this diff, so it's not so badin order to same with 01:57:247 (5)

I would have modded insane, but you wrote on your queue not to mod it.

Good Luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
BG must be 4:3 or 16:9 aspect rate, but current is 10:6, so it looks Unrankble. You need to find another BG for Ranked.fixed
Uncheck Widescreen Support because there is no SB.fixed
Delete all SC2 hitsounds in this folder, you don't use these hitsounds.fixed
[Normal]
Prefer AR4 for newbie because there is no Easy diff, so this diff is the easiest diff. fixed
Placement
02:13:151(1) Change the direction of slider like this, and the flow to next note would be more good.fixed

SPOILER

02:36:283(1) Similar suggestion, upword curve would be better flow than current one.but It will stack with other circle

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:37:729(1) Prefer 1/2 slider than a circle becuase you followed vocal on next note(2), so to be consistence.unnecessary

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:46:404(1) Add finish at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:25:440(3) Add whistle at head same as other diffs.fixed
01:55:078(4) Delete whistle at head.fixed
03:09:536(1) Add finish.fixed
[Hard]
Placement
00:22:367(3) I don't like to stack this note on the end of slider, it looks not good. So move this note like this?prefer mine

SPOILER

00:34:657(5) Similar suggestion, this flow from (4) is a bit odd for me. I don't think so

SPOILER

00:41:705(3) Bent this slider a bit? I feel better than current one.fixed

SPOILER

01:04:837(2) CTRL+G to make a jmping, I found similar part in previous.fixed
01:29:777(1,2,3,4) So weird placement, why these sliders start on the end of pre slider... these flow doesn't look good. fixed
01:32:669(1,2,3,4) ^fixed
02:50:199(1) Useless NC I suppose.fixed
02:55:259(2) Stack this note on (1) better to see clearly.fixed
Rhythm
01:50:018 Unnecessary green line.fixed
01:03:753 Add a note here because there is cymbal sound here, so I don't suppose it is better to ignore this. (You already picked the sound on Normal and Insane)fixed
01:38:452 ^fixed
02:47:849 ^fixed
Hit Sound
00:51:464(3) Missing clap.unnecessary,because the voice is too loudly there
01:15:319(1) Add finish.fixed
02:11:715(1) Add clap same as Insane.fixed
02:33:392(1,2,3) Too loudly on this part, down the voleme better.fixed
02:34:837(1,2,3) Missing hitsounds?fixed
03:08:090(1,4,1,8) Add finish to follow the cymbal sound. Whistles sound weakly. (allpy to all diffs)fixed

Good luck.

Regraz wrote:

要起飞了！哇加油啊

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Lin-Kun wrote:

Please don't hate me but...
I can't find anything wrong with your beatmap
I've been going over it for the last month now that my internet's fixed and i cant find anything wrong with it :<
(I'm new to modding and probably don't have enough experience)
please forgive me (offers cake) and it's no lie

Satellite wrote:

hitsound suggestion

23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]

1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9

[Hard]

1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
   
6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.
   
   changed here
   
8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
    
12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
    
14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
    
15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
    
20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
    
21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.

Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

pkhg wrote:

hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.fixed

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlapfixed
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this )fixed
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistlefixed
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3unnecessary IMO
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imoprefer mine

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverseprefer mine
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?no
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tailfinish is proper on there
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3I don't think so.
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:fixed

234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard let me think...

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imoI am so lazy to map a new diff,if necessary,I will map a new different between the normal and hard

Anyway good luck ^^

think you to mod my map

1. 00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
2. 00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
   
3. 01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
   Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.
   

   492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
5. 01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
6. 02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
7. 03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.
   

1. 00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.
2. 00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object
   

   334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
   487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds
4. 01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.
   
   rhythm

   
   placement

   
   code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )

   426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
7. 01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
   
8. 01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
9. 02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
10. 02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
    
11. 03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
12. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.
    

1. 00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
2. 00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
3. 00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
4. 00:41:163 - add note better.
5. 00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
   
6. 00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
7. 00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.
8. 01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.
   

   395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
10. 01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
11. 01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit For example move X : 386 Y : 271
12. 02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
13. 02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
14. 02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    
15. 02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
16. 02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.

Ohhh. sorry late recheck >_>
If you are question. Please send me " Forum - PM " Good luck 4anke san

Satellite wrote:

sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T

Satellite wrote:

Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T

IamKwaN wrote:

hi there, metadata check as requested.

SPOILER

Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!

1. Easy and Normal AR+1 better imo. because AR 3/5/7/9 is best spread.

1. 01:37:006 (2) - The contact with the Hp bar. It should be lowered a little more.
2. nice easy

1. looks fine

1. 00:38:632 (2) - Not stack this circle. because Shape is changed by Stack leniency.
   
   img

   
2. 00:51:825 (4) - Ctrl+G better.
3. 02:35:922 (4) - Same as above.

1. 00:36:102 - add note better.　(my suggestion x:20 y:256)
2. 01:09:536 (1,2,3,4) - Why interval is falling apart?
3. 01:14:054 (2,3) - Try ctrl+g I think more better flow!
4. 01:15:138 (8,9) - add clap
5. 01:18:573 (4,8) - Try changed rhythm ? about 1/2 slider :3
   
6. 01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above.
7. 01:25:259 - add note
8. 01:26:885 (8) - add Nc. 01:27:428 (1) - remove Nc
9. 01:38:090 (6,7,1) - Jump placement suggestion.
   
   img

   
10. 02:11:705 (1) - add finish
11. 02:12:428 (5) - same as above.
12. 02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped. please do this rhythm.
    
13. 02:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
    
14. 02:30:229 (7) - Remove note. it is overmapped imo.
15. 02:35:560 (5) - add clap ?
16. 02:39:355 (2) - not much this rhythm. try this
    .
17. 03:01:946 (1) - Remove Nc
18. 03:04:837 (1) - same as above.
19. 03:09:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Mmmm... too big jump orz Please be a little more small ;_;

1. Easy diff remove widescreen support check.
2. normal-hitnormal.wav is not use this map. remove this wav file.
3. soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide3 is must be use 44byte file. try used this wav. http://puu.sh/hJgLP/842271a41e.zip

2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: hi
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: keep is ok
2015-05-10 22:14 4anke: hi
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: insane
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:186 (3) - 
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:908 (11) - clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:23:090 (12) - remo clap
2015-05-10 22:19 Satellite: 02:24:536 (5) - overmapped. remove note
2015-05-10 22:19 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:20 Satellite: 02:24:626 (5) - add whistle
2015-05-10 22:21 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4) - m0ve x256 y352 ? because
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4,5) - this spacing hard to read
2015-05-10 22:22 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: 02:33:211 (7) - move x164 y292 
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: ?
2015-05-10 22:23 Satellite: 02:35:018 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better
2015-05-10 22:23 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: 02:56:343 (6) - stack is not fit this melody
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: move x:108 y:340 better
2015-05-10 22:25 02:58:693 (3,4,5) - please use distance *1.0
2015-05-10 22:26 Satellite: 03:10:801 (10) - not fit this slider. i think circle + circle better (jump
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: http://puu.sh/hIbxJ/376a745480.jpg
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: jump suggestion
2015-05-10 22:29 Satellite: that's all update pls
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: I can watch the photo from punsh now ;w;
2015-05-10 22:30 Satellite: other puush http://puu.sh/hIbHs/52e8927570.jpg
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: cann't
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: can't
2015-05-10 22:32 4anke: ;w;my computer have some problem that can't watch the photo from punsh ;w;
2015-05-10 22:33 4anke: can you say the (x,y) for me?
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: k
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: 03:10:259 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 
2015-05-10 22:35 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3112262
2015-05-10 22:35 4anke: thank

Satellite wrote:

no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me

Satellite wrote:

wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/