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Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare

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4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月3日星期三 at 21:55:54

Artist: Chata
Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Tags: 落日 Rakujitsu ウサギキノコ Usagikinoko bassy Regraz
BPM: 166
Filesize: 4733kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Insane (4.4 stars, 697 notes)
  2. Easy (1.3 stars, 175 notes)
  3. Hard (3.25 stars, 506 notes)
  4. Normal (2.03 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
Thanks to all modders!
Especially thanks for Satellite.Satellite help to improve this map so much. <3
Collab part
00:11:715 - ~ 01:27:438 - by me
01:27:438 - ~ 02:13:161 - by Regraz
02:13:161 - ~ 03:10:992 - by me
Thanks to
Satellite:Bubbled
smallboat:Qualified
fycho:
Satellite:Rebubbled
smallboat:Requalified
Last edited by 4anke , edited 90 times in total.
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei

[General]
look AI mod, there are objects unsnapped and some inconsistencies on the song setup
[Easy]
00:16:414 (3,4,5) - this is a bad overlap, don't do this, this may confuse the newbies
SPOILER
00:20:389 (1,2) - don't stack
00:21:835 (2,1) - overlap, move (2) a bit to the right
00:31:956 (4,5,6,7) - a stack then a multiple hitcircles could confuse, change 00:32:679 (6,7) - to a slider?
00:55:812 (7,8) - overlap, move (7) a bit to the right
01:08:100 (6,1) - overlap, rotate / flip (1) elsewhere, and then adjust the next object too to tidy up the flow
01:28:703 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - overlap, make them like this?
SPOILER
01:54:365 (7) - change to 1/1 repeat slider?
SPOILER
01:56:172 (2,3) - make them like this?
SPOILER
02:04:486 (5,7) - overlaps, rotate them a bit so it won't nudge each other
02:44:968 (3,4) - overlap
02:51:835 (2,3) - put them lower a bit
03:02:317 (1) - ctrl+G
[Normal]
00:22:196 (4,1) - overlap
00:33:040 (2,4) - stack them, looks tidier
00:59:425 (3) - stack properly, x 299 y 173
01:14:425 (4) - extend to 01:14:787 -
01:27:979 (1,3) - stack properly
01:33:762 (2,5) - overlap
02:17:497 (3,4) - ^
02:20:389 (4,5,1) - ^
02:26:534 (5,6) - ^
02:39:909 (2,3) - ^
02:50:751 (1) - x 96 y 36
03:00:148 (3) - x 309 y 235 to make a nice stack 03:00:148 (3,5) -
[Hard]
00:20:389 (3,4) - fix the circle stack
SPOILER
00:21:835 (1,3) - stack properly
00:49:305 (6,7) - ^
00:57:618 (6,1) - overlap
01:30:148 (2,3,4) - stack properly
01:31:956 (3,4) - ^
01:33:040 (2,3,4) - ^
01:34:847 (3,1) - ^ 01:35:570 (1) - x 140 y 102
02:25:179 (4) - not recommended here, overmapping, delete
02:28:342 (8,1) - stack properly

nice hitsounding, good luck!
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SuperHD
37 posts
Joined May 2013
SuperHD
[General]
break time有点杂乱 特别是后面的那段(02:07开始的）感觉打着打着突然就break 建议把这一段填上
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:871 (2) - 建议改成滑条
  2. 00:33:763 (2) - same as above
  3. 00:34:847 (1,2,3) - 后面再加一个circle 这样圆滑一些
  4. 00:39:908 (3) - 这里有5个四分拍就可以啦 7个显得乱
  5. 00:41:082 (2) - 挪到红线上好一些（其实是我读图烂
  6. 00:51:835 (4,5,6,7) - 摆成直线
  7. 00:53:281 (4) - 00:54:365 (5) - 这两个平行起来有奇效
  8. 01:02:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用distance snap有奇效
  9. 02:25:179 (4) - 挪到红线上好一些
  10. 03:09:185 (6,7) - 间距要跟3,4相同
:)
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:040 (2,4) - 重叠起来
  2. 01:06:293 - 这里建议加一个note
  3. 01:38:462 - 这里建议加一个note
  4. 02:25:449 (3) - 与1 2 齐平
  5. 02:38:102 (3) - 垂直一下
;)
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

Setsurei wrote:


[General]
look AI mod, there are objects unsnapped and some inconsistencies on the song setup fixed
[Easy]
00:16:414 (3,4,5) - this is a bad overlap, don't do this, this may confuse the newbies
SPOILER
fixed
00:20:389 (1,2) - don't stack prefer mine
00:21:835 (2,1) - overlap, move (2) a bit to the right prefer mine
00:31:956 (4,5,6,7) - a stack then a multiple hitcircles could confuse, change 00:32:679 (6,7) - to a slider? fixed
00:55:812 (7,8) - overlap, move (7) a bit to the right i can't understand how to overlap when i move right
01:08:100 (6,1) - overlap, rotate / flip (1) elsewhere, and then adjust the next object too to tidy up the flow fixed
01:28:703 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - overlap, make them like this? fixed
SPOILER
01:54:365 (7) - change to 1/1 repeat slider? fixed
SPOILER
01:56:172 (2,3) - make them like this? prefer mine
SPOILER
02:04:486 (5,7) - overlaps, rotate them a bit so it won't nudge each other fixed
02:44:968 (3,4) - overlap i think overlap may confuse the newbies
02:51:835 (2,3) - put them lower a bit fixed
03:02:317 (1) - ctrl+G fixed
[Normal]
00:22:196 (4,1) - overlap fixed
00:33:040 (2,4) - stack them, looks tidier fixed
00:59:425 (3) - stack properly, x 299 y 173 fixed
01:14:425 (4) - extend to 01:14:787 - nice fixed
01:27:979 (1,3) - stack properly fixed
01:33:762 (2,5) - overlap fixed
02:17:497 (3,4) - ^ prefer mine
02:20:389 (4,5,1) - ^ fixed
02:26:534 (5,6) - ^ prefer mine
02:39:909 (2,3) - ^ ?
02:50:751 (1) - x 96 y 36 prefer mine
03:00:148 (3) - x 309 y 235 to make a nice stack 03:00:148 (3,5) - prefer mine
[Hard]
00:20:389 (3,4) - fix the circle stack still stack
SPOILER
00:21:835 (1,3) - stack properly
00:49:305 (6,7) - ^ prefer mine
00:57:618 (6,1) - overlap i don't know how to overlap there
01:30:148 (2,3,4) - stack properly don't know how to stack there
01:31:956 (3,4) - ^ fix
01:33:040 (2,3,4) - ^ -^
01:34:847 (3,1) - ^ still stack 01:35:570 (1) - x 140 y 102 prefer mine
02:25:179 (4) - not recommended here, overmapping, delete i think no problem here
02:28:342 (8,1) - stack properly still stack here

nice hitsounding, good luck!
very thank you for your mod
Last edited by 4anke , edited 2 times in total.
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

SuperHD wrote:

[General]
break time有点杂乱 特别是后面的那段(02:07开始的）02:07的break fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:871 (2) - 建议改成滑条 为了与吉他音的摆放重合（好像又不是吉他）
  2. 00:33:763 (2) - same as above -^
  3. 00:34:847 (1,2,3) - 后面再加一个circle 这样圆滑一些 后面没音
  4. 00:39:908 (3) - 这里有5个四分拍就可以啦 7个显得乱 没有吧。。。
  5. 00:41:082 (2) - 挪到红线上好一些（其实是我读图烂 我觉得还好
  6. 00:51:835 (4,5,6,7) - 摆成直线 done 原本就打算摆直然后眼花了@-@ fixed
  7. 00:53:281 (4) - 00:54:365 (5) - 这两个平行起来有奇效 我没发现有奇效...
  8. 01:02:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里用distance snap有奇效 这里不是一直用着distance snap吗？
  9. 02:25:179 (4) - 挪到红线上好一些 我倒是觉得我这样比较好
  10. 03:09:185 (6,7) - 间距要跟3,4相同
:) fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:040 (2,4) - 重叠起来 fixed
  2. 01:06:293 - 这里建议加一个note
  3. 01:38:462 - 这里建议加一个note 这里加的话就是下一句歌词的开始了
  4. 02:25:449 (3) - 与1 2 齐平 fixed
  5. 02:38:102 (3) - 垂直一下 滑条短，垂直不好看
;)
thx for your mod
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Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,771 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia
Chata!!!!

Here's mine~ :3

[General]
The original artist name should be "茶太" not "Chata".

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:161 (3) - The distance of this circle to the next slider is 0.85x which is too close , change it into 1.00x.
  2. 00:14:606 (5) - Change the distance from the previous slider to 1.00x
  3. 00:16:053 (2) - ^^^
  4. 00:17:498 (4) - ^^^
  5. 00:18:944 (6) - ^^^ (Change the distance to the next slider to 1.00x)
  6. 00:24:004 (2) - This slider is too far away from the previous object.
  7. . . .
  8. . . .

    Almost all of the objects in the entire map have a wrong distance spacing. I Suggest you should remapping this (to fix the distances) and don't forget to use "Distance Snapping". I recommend 1.00x

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:100 (1,2,3) - change the distance of 2 last circles to 1.00x , to keep the distance constantly.
  2. 02:29:064 (7) - move this into x:416 , y:48 , to keep the distance~
  3. 02:42:438 (4) - NC
  4. 00:45:329 (1) - Remove NC , and change it to 00:46:414 (2)
  5. 00:55:088 (4) - NC
  6. 01:09:907 (8) - NC
  7. 01:50:028 (1) - add kiai time from here to 02:07:016 (6)
  8. 02:13:160 (1) to 02:23:642 (3) didn't fit to be a kiai time in my opinion. it think this should be removed.
  9. Make a spinner from 01:47:136 (1) to 01:49:667 (1)
  10. 02:07:016 (6) - 02:13:160 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.

[Hard]
  1. 02:06:835 (1) - 02:13:161 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.
  2. 01:47:136 (1) - make Spinner , end at 01:49:305 (1)

That's all from me.
I wish you luck and i hope more Chata's song get ranked! :D
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

Shurelia wrote:

Chata!!!!

Here's mine~ :3

[General]
The original artist name should be "茶太" not "Chata". fixed

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:161 (3) - The distance of this circle to the next slider is 0.85x which is too close , change it into 1.00x. fixed
  2. 00:14:606 (5) - Change the distance from the previous slider to 1.00xin fact,i choose 0.9x with distance on this diff
  3. 00:16:053 (2) - ^^^-^
  4. 00:17:498 (4) - ^^^-^
  5. 00:18:944 (6) - ^^^ (Change the distance to the next slider to 1.00x)-^
  6. 00:24:004 (2) - This slider is too far away from the previous object.fixed,when i upload the map i forgget this problem><
  7. . . .
  8. . . .

    Almost all of the objects in the entire map have a wrong distance spacing. I Suggest you should remapping this (to fix the distances) and don't forget to use "Distance Snapping". I recommend 1.00xin fact,i choose 0.9x with distance on this diff and i choose grid size with small so there have something tiny wrong

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:100 (1,2,3) - change the distance of 2 last circles to 1.00x , to keep the distance constantly.fixed
  2. 02:29:064 (7) - move this into x:416 , y:48 , to keep the distance~fixed
  3. 02:42:438 (4) - NCfixed
  4. 00:45:329 (1) - Remove NC , and change it to 00:46:414 (2) fixed
  5. 00:55:088 (4) - NCfixed
  6. 01:09:907 (8) - NCfixed
  7. 01:50:028 (1) - add kiai time from here to 02:07:016 (6) kiai time shouldn't too much
  8. 02:13:160 (1) to 02:23:642 (3) didn't fit to be a kiai time in my opinion. it think this should be removed.there is special on the song
  9. Make a spinner from 01:47:136 (1) to 01:49:667 (1)
  10. 02:07:016 (6) - 02:13:160 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.fixed

[Hard]
[notice][list]
[*] 02:06:835 (1) - 02:13:161 (1) - Why leaving this part blank? it would be better if you fill this.fixed
[*] 01:47:136 (1) - make Spinner , end at 01:49:305 (1)
That's all from me.
I wish you luck and i hope more Chata's song get ranked! :D
:oops: thanks for your mod i will try my best to get rank
[Twinkle]
179 posts
Joined October 2012
[Twinkle]
[Hard]
00:11:715 (1,2) - 在不影响与后面的ds情况下忘左边转一点 不要让00:11:715 (1) - 和00:12:618 (4) - 重叠到
00:22:377 (3) - 和00:21:835 (1) - 没叠好
00:22:558 (4) - 也和00:22:197 (2,3) - 一样间距？这里很明显间距大了
00:22:558 (4) - 包一下00:23:281 (1) - 的末尾 然后00:23:010 (5,6) - 直接放在底下像下面这样
SPOILER
00:26:353 (2,4) - 这上面的clap换成whistle？clap有点吵
00:30:510 (1,3) - 00:33:402 (1,3) - 也换成whistle
00:41:082 (2) - 这个放错了吗？没音 往后移一格或者前面滑条短一格这个移到前面
00:44:968 (1) - 包一下00:45:510 (2) -
00:47:046 (2,3) - 去clap
00:50:389 (7) - 去掉尾巴上的finish
00:54:365 (5) - 去clap
00:55:269 (1) - 不推荐使用track音clap 打起来很难受
00:54:727 (1) - 不是太好看 改成这样？
SPOILER
00:57:618 (1,1) - 和前面一样
SPOILER
01:03:492 (7,8) - 去clap
01:05:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以摆成两个五角星组合的造型
SPOILER
01:09:185 (1) - 包好一下
SPOILER
01:09:727 (1) - track音不推荐加
01:15:148 (7,8) - 去clap
02:08:552 (6,7) - 去clap
02:10:992 (5) - 加NC
02:13:341 (2,4) - 去掉不在白线上的clap
02:16:233 (2,4) - 和上面一样
02:21:835 (1) - 太长了 后面改成点连打
02:25:179 (4) - 这和前面00:41:082 (2) - 一样没音
02:37:739 (1) - 不好看，改成包02:38:281 (2) - 的应该好一点
02:40:992 (6) - ctrl+g
02:48:221 (4) - 没包好
03:04:667 (4,5) - 移到03:03:763 (1) - 的尾巴上

[Normal]
00:20:389 (1) - 和前面4太近了
01:21:112 (1,2) - 都往中间转10度
02:17:497 (3,4) - normal里不要这样叠
02:27:618 (6) - 这也是
02:30:510 这里加一个note
02:39:909 (2,3) - 不要这么叠

[Easy]
问题不大，就是感觉有点太难了节拍用的过密，有些都堆起来了，不过应该没什么问题>.<

:) :) :)
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

[Twinkle] wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:715 (1,2) - 在不影响与后面的ds情况下忘左边转一点 不要让00:11:715 (1) - 和00:12:618 (4) - 重叠到原来的好像也没重叠吧，fixed
00:22:377 (3) - 和00:21:835 (1) - 没叠好fixed
00:22:558 (4) - 也和00:22:197 (2,3) - 一样间距？这里很明显间距大了fixed
00:22:558 (4) - 包一下00:23:281 (1) - 的末尾 然后00:23:010 (5,6) - 直接放在底下像下面这样把上面那个间距问题改好之后已经自动包好了，虽然包得不太明显，感觉滑条弧度太大，滑条后面的二连就变难看了，叠起来的话DS又有问题0.0
SPOILER
00:26:353 (2,4) - 这上面的clap换成whistle？clap有点吵fixed
00:30:510 (1,3) - 00:33:402 (1,3) - 也换成whistlefixed
00:41:082 (2) - 这个放错了吗？没音 往后移一格或者前面滑条短一格这个移到前面0.0虽然没音，这里是打算自创节奏的，但是打起来还好,我再考虑一下
00:44:968 (1) - 包一下00:45:510 (2) - fixed
00:47:046 (2,3) - 去clap不加clap没存在感了
00:50:389 (7) - fixed
00:54:365 (5) - 去clapfixed
00:55:269 (1) - 不推荐使用track音clap 打起来很难受fixed
00:54:727 (1) - 不是太好看 改成这样？fixed
SPOILER
00:57:618 (1,1) - 和前面一样fixed自己改了0.0改成下面图那样DS有问题
SPOILER
01:03:492 (7,8) - 去clapfixed
01:05:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以摆成两个五角星组合的造型fixed
SPOILER
01:09:185 (1) - 包好一下fixed
SPOILER
01:09:727 (1) - track音不推荐加fixed
01:15:148 (7,8) - 去clapfixed
02:08:552 (6,7) - 去clapfixed
02:10:992 (5) - 加NCfixed
02:13:341 (2,4) - 去掉不在白线上的clapfixed
02:16:233 (2,4) - 和上面一样fixed
02:21:835 (1) - 太长了 后面改成点连打hard难度不用能用长串吧，话说hard可以改成自定义难度名吗？
02:25:179 (4) - 这和前面00:41:082 (2) - 一样没音-^
02:37:739 (1) - 不好看，改成包02:38:281 (2) - 的应该好一点我觉得还好0.0
02:40:992 (6) - ctrl+gfixed
02:48:221 (4) - 没包好fixed
03:04:667 (4,5) - 移到03:03:763 (1) - 的尾巴上fixed

[Normal]
00:20:389 (1) - 和前面4太近了fixed
01:21:112 (1,2) - 都往中间转10度fixed
02:17:497 (3,4) - normal里不要这样叠fixed
02:27:618 (6) - 这也是fixed
02:30:510 这里加一个notefixed
02:39:909 (2,3) - 不要这么叠fixed

[Easy]
问题不大，就是感觉有点太难了节拍用的过密，有些都堆起来了，不过应该没什么问题>.<

:) :) :)
thanks very much~
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Hard]
无力吐槽...感觉2kiou附体，流水线1/2节奏还是特别无聊的...
而且那种XXX XXX XXX XXX的节奏真是什么曲子都通用...

[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - nm就尽量别完全遮叠起来了...
00:38:100 (1,2,3) - 有点恐怖(
01:21:112 (1) - 这clap重复了吧
01:29:605 (4,5,1,2) - 分散，不要堆叠
01:38:462 - 一般这样的结束，大白线是重音就别漏了
03:09:365 (1) - 同大白线结束

[Easy]
od-1
比起easy，更像normal
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 堆得太密集了，新手不好读图
00:42:799 (3,4) - 平行更好看
00:46:414 (1) - 停止在00:47:498 - 就好
01:15:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 太单调，加点1/2滑条过渡一下
02:26:896 (3) - 停在大白线
02:30:511 (1) - 和上面说过的一样改法
02:47:859 - 为啥空了一截
03:09:365 (1) - 结束在大白线更好
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hard]
无力吐槽...感觉2kiou附体，流水线1/2节奏还是特别无聊的...这首歌的音大部分都很规则在1/2的地方，不在的地方我都跟了，新手，不会加合曲的节奏0.0，曲子本身比较慢，加太多note不太好吧，都2.3星了。试着加了点note构成3连，感觉太怪了，可能是因为歌曲节奏太慢，除了3连，其它合曲的节奏不会加
而且那种XXX XXX XXX XXX的节奏真是什么曲子都通用...XXX XXX XXX XXX的节奏是怎样的...

[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - nm就尽量别完全遮叠起来了...2L叫我改的，现在又改回来了fixed
00:38:100 (1,2,3) - 有点恐怖( 恐怖在哪0.0
01:21:112 (1) - 这clap重复了吧听起来感觉没什么问题
01:29:605 (4,5,1,2) - 分散，不要堆叠我觉得这样好看呐，也没完全堆叠
01:38:462 - 一般这样的结束，大白线是重音就别漏了fixed
03:09:365 (1) - 同大白线结束fixed

[Easy]
od-1fixed
比起easy，更像normal
00:29:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 堆得太密集了，新手不好读图fixed
00:42:799 (3,4) - 平行更好看fixed
00:46:414 (1) - 停止在00:47:498 - 就好fixed
01:15:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 太单调，加点1/2滑条过渡一下感觉改了不好看，这里节奏平缓，单点就够了
02:26:896 (3) - 停在大白线fixed
02:30:511 (1) - 和上面说过的一样改法fixed
02:47:859 - 为啥空了一截感觉easy转盘后要留点时间给新手缓冲，不过还是fixed
03:09:365 (1) - 结束在大白线更好fixed
Last edited by 4anke , edited 1 time in total.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
很喜欢这首！先shoot一星
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lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
test diff
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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

lkx_Shore wrote:

test diff
osu file format v12

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00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore

4anke wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

test diff
osu file format v12

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132,132,16052,6,0,P|152:100|156:52,1,80
52,212,16414,2,0,P|32:244|28:292,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,340,16775,2,0,L|280:304,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
279,304,17498,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,17679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,312,17859,2,0,P|428:344|396:352,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,18221,2,0,P|242:316|213:343,1,80
136,288,18492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,18582,2,0,L|92:172,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,124,18944,6,0,P|96:76|196:64,2,160,2|0|0,0:2|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,280,20028,1,0,1:0:0:0:
52,236,20209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,20299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,20389,6,0,P|112:240|132:256,1,80,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,332,20751,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,316,20932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,204,21112,2,0,P|276:176|216:196,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,21474,2,0,P|152:168|160:128,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,21835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
358,61,22016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,152,22197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,242,22377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,207,22558,1,2,0:2:0:0:
212,212,22648,1,2,0:2:0:0:
184,240,22739,1,2,0:2:0:0:
164,276,22829,1,2,0:2:0:0:
168,316,22920,2,0,L|128:304,3,40,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
92,320,23281,5,4,0:2:0:0:
60,192,23462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,23552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,23642,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,192,24004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,100,24365,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,100,24727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,172,24908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,176,24998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,25088,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,52,25269,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,52,25450,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,264,25630,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,100,25811,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,196,40630,6,0,B|328:168|328:168|344:256,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
343,252,41173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,41353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,260,41534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,172,41715,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,172,41895,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,76,42257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,42438,2,0,P|208:140|180:132,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,42799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,42980,2,0,P|84:96|64:160,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,43522,6,0,L|164:208,1,60.0000022888184,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,280,43883,1,0,1:0:0:0:
44,280,44245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,336,44426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,308,44606,1,0,1:0:0:0:
200,308,44968,6,0,P|240:280|264:276,1,60.0000022888184
328,320,45329,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,320,45510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,304,45691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,45871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,45962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,232,46052,2,0,L|424:136,1,90.0000034332277,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,46414,6,0,B|356:84|356:124|292:104,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
294,104,46956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,180,47136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,47317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,144,47498,1,0,1:0:0:0:
92,144,47679,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,180,48040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,248,48221,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,328,48402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,328,48582,2,0,P|300:340|328:332,1,60.0000022888184
388,284,48944,2,0,L|440:252,1,60.0000022888184,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,164,49305,6,0,P|368:184|388:72,2,240.000009155274,4|0|4,0:2|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
420,164,50932,1,2,0:2:0:0:
428,284,51112,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,328,51293,1,2,0:2:0:0:
220,256,51474,2,0,P|208:208|228:168,1,90.0000034332277,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,180,51835,6,0,L|328:144,3,40,0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
368,72,52197,1,4,0:2:0:0:
00:43:522 (1,2,3,4,5) - xxx xxx
不知道我自己摆3连的时候为什么感觉很怪，我果然不会摆3连orz，还需要努力
摆太多这种1+3连的梗感觉已经不是hard难度了0.0 只是给个节奏你参考，你把3连换成两单点也可以的
最近又没什么时间作图，再完成一个insane也不知道要多久...
话说2kiou是谁？id查不到0.0 kioukiou
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
前辈你好我来啦
[Easy]
我觉得normal音效组不太适合 建议换成soft或者drum
先开aimod点上check ds 低难度尽量保持全程ds一致
00:21:835 (2,1) - 尽量避免这种遮挡...好丑的
00:37:739 - 尽量不要让重音在滑条尾上会减弱打击感
00:52:197 - 同上 而且让kiai由滑条尾开始也是很不好的
01:19:667 (3,1) - 移开点不要遮挡
然后就是你三个kiai里节奏都太挤了 基本每拍都有note 不如适当空一些出来反而感觉好一些
[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - 这里也是遮挡比较丑
00:26:534 (1,2) - 这里可以弄个blanket 就是让下一个滑条包住上一个圈 让滑条和圈的缩圈是一个同心圆
00:26:895 (2,3) - 也是尽量避免遮挡
01:29:426 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 你不觉得这一块很挤吗.-.
01:34:667 (3) - 这里就感觉有点overmap 可以去掉这个圈
02:30:510 (10,1) - 交换nc
[Hard]
这个难度用了1.0 1.2 1.3 1.5四种sv感觉不太好 建议是用三种就可以了你思考一下
00:16:052 (5,6) - 两个滑条后半部分遮在一起有点丑
00:21:112 (1) - 这里遮挡感觉并不好 而且没必要nc
00:30:510 (1,3) - 这里没有四分拍你却用了1/4的折返滑条感觉有点overmap
00:34:847 (1,2,4) - 这里遮挡也是不太好
00:49:305 (6) - 前后一直是4拍一个nc所以这里也应该nc才对
01:21:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段一拍的圈感觉有点偷懒...
01:44:245 - 既然前面放了六个圈这里再空感觉不太自然.-.
02:08:552 (6) - 这个圈overmap也有点明显 建议去掉
02:21:835 (1) - 应该从后一拍开始因为02:21:926 - 这里似乎没有音
02:25:179 (4) - 这个圈是怎么回事?
02:40:450 - 这里音倒是比较明显所以不建议空出来
03:10:811 (6) - 建议换成一个1/2滑条和其他难度在同一个地方结束
前辈晚上好o.o
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

ZZHBOY wrote:

前辈你好我来啦
[Easy]
我觉得normal音效组不太适合 建议换成soft或者drum一直都是soft...只是音量比其它难度大了点，调低了
先开aimod点上check ds 低难度尽量保持全程ds一致fixed
00:21:835 (2,1) - 尽量避免这种遮挡...好丑的不好改
00:37:739 - 尽量不要让重音在滑条尾上会减弱打击感不好改，以后会注意的
00:52:197 - 同上 而且让kiai由滑条尾开始也是很不好的fixed
01:19:667 (3,1) - 移开点不要遮挡fixed
然后就是你三个kiai里节奏都太挤了 基本每拍都有note 不如适当空一些出来反而感觉好一些删了一点note
[Normal]
00:22:197 (4,1) - 这里也是遮挡比较丑0.0
00:26:534 (1,2) - 这里可以弄个blanket 就是让下一个滑条包住上一个圈 让滑条和圈的缩圈是一个同心圆不明觉厉
00:26:895 (2,3) - 也是尽量避免遮挡没遮挡啊
01:29:426 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 你不觉得这一块很挤吗.-.好吧，删掉了01:29:606 (4) -
01:34:667 (3) - 这里就感觉有点overmap 可以去掉这个圈fixed
02:30:510 (10,1) - 交换ncfixed
[Hard]
这个难度用了1.0 1.2 1.3 1.5四种sv感觉不太好 建议是用三种就可以了你思考一下fixed
00:16:052 (5,6) - 两个滑条后半部分遮在一起有点丑故意的，我觉得还好
00:21:112 (1) - 这里遮挡感觉并不好 而且没必要ncfixed
00:30:510 (1,3) - 这里没有四分拍你却用了1/4的折返滑条感觉有点overmap感觉还好
00:34:847 (1,2,4) - 这里遮挡也是不太好往下移了一点
00:49:305 (6) - 前后一直是4拍一个nc所以这里也应该nc才对不必这么计较啦
01:21:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段一拍的圈感觉有点偷懒...嘘~别说出来嘛。前面那段跟吉他了，这段跟鼓
01:44:245 - 既然前面放了六个圈这里再空感觉不太自然.-.6个圈是突出音效的0.0仔细瞧瞧
02:08:552 (6) - 这个圈overmap也有点明显 建议去掉lkx还叫我加多点overmap,虽然我也觉得这首歌不需要overmap，但是还是稍微加一点比较好
02:21:835 (1) - 应该从后一拍开始因为02:21:926 - 这里似乎没有音可是02:21:835 (1) - 有音，为了降低难度所以填过去
02:25:179 (4) - 这个圈是怎么回事?好吧，删了
02:40:450 - 这里音倒是比较明显所以不建议空出来这里跟鼓音
03:10:811 (6) - 建议换成一个1/2滑条和其他难度在同一个地方结束0.0
前辈晚上好o.o
thx~
我不是前辈><
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Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi!M4M, and sorry for lateness!
EDIT：为啥我更新之后没bg了、、、
[General Check]
1.If you don't have any specific reason, please keep Stack Leniency at 7 in Easy (default value).
2.The volumn of Easy and Normal is inconsisitent.(80% in Easy and 60% in Normal)
[Easy]
General：
1.Easy难度的话ds保持一致，所以建议开着Distance Snap拖一遍note。 而且你可以用稍大一些的DS防止overlap，这样排版不显得乱。
2.不同的段落使用不同的音量，例如在一开始的vocal部分，可以使用稍微低一些的音量，在KIAI 部分使用高一些的音量，有层次感。
Placement：
1. 00:20:389 (1,2) - 首先，不推荐使用这样的排列，尤其是在Easy中。
而且，检查一下位于左上角的坐标可以看出，这两个slider尾巴是没有完全叠在一起的。
2. 00:21:835 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/93o5v.jpg 把这两个分开一些距离，叠到一起了有一些不美观。
3. http://puu.sh/93oax.jpg通过AR圈可以检查到，这2个slider是没有blanket好的。
4. 00:55:812 (8,9) - 不要擦边，挪开一些
5. 01:05:209 (3,4) - 弄成平行的，美观一些
6. 01:16:775 (3,4,1) - 做成正三角形多好
7. 01:19:667 (3,4,1) - 同上
8. 01:22:558 (3,4,1) - 同上
9. 02:03:040 (4,5) - 像这样 http://puu.sh/98ISG/b12ab54a1b.jpg 包好，然后再调整一下后面的。
10. 02:44:968 (3,4) - 叠得太近了。Easy不推荐这样搞。
Hitsounds：
1. 00:36:294 (4) - 开头clap啊
Rhythm：
1. 00:28:341 (5) - 感觉应该是1/1来跟音乐 而不是2/1
2. 00:42:257 (2) - 太短了
3. 00:44:245 (4) - 这么短新手反应不过来的，而且还是折返
4. 00:47:860 (2) - 向后挪 1/2
5. 01:26:173 (4) - 感觉不对节奏
6. 02:26:353 (2,4) - 已经阐述
7. 03:09:365 (1) - 向后推1/2
Others：
1. 02:08:823 (10) - combo太长，中间拆一下
[Normal]
Placement：
00:21:112 (3,4) - 现在是这样：http://puu.sh/9eeaA/0f3270d7bb.jpg 建议改成更平滑的比如：00:26:895 (2,3) - flow不好，而且贴边了，建议改一下
00:34:124 (4,5,1,2,3) - 展开一些，都挤到一个角落了，然后还可以摆成正五边形
01:01:234 (4) - 让尾部坐标和00:59:425 (3) - 一致
01:29:426 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不要堆在一起，展开一些，这样的堆叠在normal也不太恰当，新手会误判的。
01:35:209 (4) - 和2做成一样的形状，在搞一个对称，美观。
02:06:656 (5,7) - 这样的堆叠目测危险
02:27:618 (6) - 和前面的距离大一些
02:53:281 (6) - 别和滑条擦边
02:53:642 (1,2) - 同上
Hitsounds：
02:34:847 (17,18,19) - NC，全部加whistle强调一下
Rhythm：
00:37:377 (6) - 尽量不要让vocal落在滑条尾，打击感不好。建议：http://puu.sh/9eekG/b5edbdc2ec.jpg
00:52:197 (1) - 试试：http://puu.sh/9eeoe/674a8f3ddd.jpg
01:12:076 (1,2,3,4) - 这段对不上节奏：试试：http://puu.sh/9eexJ/e469360daa.jpg
01:50:028 (1) - 同 00:52:197 (1) -
02:13:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同样是vocal不要落在滑条尾
02:54:727 (3,4,5) - 同上
02:30:510 - 加点东西，顺便NC
02:57:618 - 别漏音
Others：
00:14:968 (6) - New Combo
00:17:859 (2) - 在这NC，前面的去掉
01:38:462 (9) - combo有些长，建议分开。
[Hard]
Hard 好多了，简单看看。。。
00:39:908 (3) - 声音有点大
00:41:082 (2) - ？
00:48:040 (1) - 拆成1/2跟vocal？
01:00:871 (3,4,5,6) - 少挪开一些，尾巴别擦边到一起
01:03:402 (6,7,8) - NC？
01:09:727 (1) - 拆成1/2跟vocal？
01:10:630 (3,1) - 包一下：http://puu.sh/9k6qS/111f21264f.jpg
01:15:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 帅！
01:27:257 (4,5) - 感觉跟vocal好一些
01:38:462 - 加一个note，后面再breaktime
02:13:703 - 别漏音啊，加一个打击感比较连贯，下面的小节同
02:17:498 (1) - 1/1
02:18:944 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一节也排满一些，下面的小结突然排的很满感觉突兀啊
03:02:317 (1,2,3,4) - 包一下，下同
03:10:992 - 加一个note
============END=============
真的拖了好久！真的不好意思！


=======================================================
I'll finish my mod in several following days. Sorry for the procrastination!!
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arronchu1207
804 posts
Joined December 2012
arronchu1207
Hi
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15:53 4anke: hi~
15:53 arronchu1207: HI
15:54 4anke: 可以mod吗？
15:54 4anke: 0.0
15:54 arronchu1207: 試試OAO
15:54 4anke: thx~
15:54 4anke: :D
15:54 arronchu1207: :D
15:55 *4anke is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401926 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare]
15:55 arronchu1207: OK WAIT :D
15:55 4anke: 嗯
16:00 arronchu1207: 先mod normal\:D/
16:00 4anke: 嗯:D
16:03 arronchu1207: 00:14:968 (1) - 可以把旁邊的 (5) 複製到這裡會更好看:D 然後 (2) 過去一點點 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661659
16:04 arronchu1207: 00:16:774 (4) - 避免重疊D:
16:07 4anke: 嗯，都改了
16:08 arronchu1207: 01:29:786 (4,2) - 紅4跟藍2疊起來比較好看點
16:11 4anke: 不懂怎么叠才好看0.0
16:11 arronchu1207: 02:18:220 (4) - 尾巴的白點移右一小格吧
16:12 4anke: 嗯，改了
16:13 arronchu1207: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661679 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661681
16:13 arronchu1207: 建議@@ 不一定要改=w=
16:14 4anke: 0.0
16:15 4anke: 还是觉得原来的好一点o.o
16:15 arronchu1207: 那就照原來的吧w
16:16 4anke: 0.0
16:17 arronchu1207: 02:27:618 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661687 建議@@
16:18 arronchu1207: 02:36:293 - kiai的開頭應該在這裡吧OAO?
16:20 4anke: 在这里开头会不会太长了0.0
16:21 arronchu1207: 應該不會吧@@
16:23 4anke: fixed
16:30 arronchu1207: 02:46:414 (1) - Easy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1661715 轉盤可以對準白線
16:30 arronchu1207: :D
16:30 4anke: 0.0
16:31 4anke: fixed
16:32 arronchu1207: 應該就這樣了:D
16:32 arronchu1207: Hard 還不錯OWO
16:33 4anke: thx~
16:33 arronchu1207: ˊˇˋ
4anke
115 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
4anke

Regraz wrote:

Hi!M4M, and sorry for lateness!
[General Check]
1.If you don't have any specific reason, please keep Stack Leniency at 7 in Easy (default value).
2.The volumn of Easy and Normal is inconsisitent.(80% in Easy and 60% in Normal)前几次的更新已经改了
[Easy]
General：
1.Easy难度的话ds保持一致，所以建议开着Distance Snap拖一遍note。 而且你可以用稍大一些的DS防止overlap，这样排版不显得乱。
2.不同的段落使用不同的音量，例如在一开始的vocal部分，可以使用稍微低一些的音量，在KIAI 部分使用高一些的音量，有层次感。fixed
Placement：
1. 00:20:389 (1,2) - 首先，不推荐使用这样的排列，尤其是在Easy中。
而且，检查一下位于左上角的坐标可以看出，这两个slider尾巴是没有完全叠在一起的。尾巴叠起来了
2. 00:21:835 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/93o5v.jpg 把这两个分开一些距离，叠到一起了有一些不美观。改了DS就变了
3. http://puu.sh/93oax.jpg通过AR圈可以检查到，这2个slider是没有blanket好的。fixed
4. 00:55:812 (8,9) - 不要擦边，挪开一些fixed
5. 01:05:209 (3,4) - 弄成平行的，美观一些fixed
6. 01:16:775 (3,4,1) - 做成正三角形多好不够位置
7. 01:19:667 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
8. 01:22:558 (3,4,1) - 同上-^
9. 02:03:040 (4,5) - 像这样 http://puu.sh/98ISG/b12ab54a1b.jpg 包好，然后再调整一下后面的。fixed
10. 02:44:968 (3,4) - 叠得太近了。Easy不推荐这样搞。fixed
Hitsounds：
1. 00:36:294 (4) - 开头clap啊fixed
Rhythm：
1. 00:28:341 (5) - 感觉应该是1/1来跟音乐 而不是2/1 音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
2. 00:42:257 (2) - 太短了fixed
3. 00:44:245 (4) - 这么短新手反应不过来的，而且还是折返fixed
4. 00:47:860 (2) - 向后挪 1/2 重音就在这里
5. 01:26:173 (4) - 感觉不对节奏 音乐就是2/1，后面那个是长音
6. 02:26:353 (2,4) - 已经阐述fixed
7. 03:09:365 (1) - 向后推1/2-^
Others：
1. 02:08:823 (10) - combo太长，中间拆一下fixed
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I'll finish my mod in several following days. Sorry for the procrastination!!
thx~ :)
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