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- 00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
- 00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
- 01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0: - 01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
- 01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
- 02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
- 03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.
- 00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.
- 00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object
334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds
- 01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )
426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0: - 01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
- 01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
- 01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
- 02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
- 03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
- 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.
- 00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
- 00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
- 00:41:163 - add note better.
- 00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
- 00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.
- 01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.
395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
- 01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
- 01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit For example move X : 386 Y : 271
- 02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
- 02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
- 02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
- 02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
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