Kocari wrote:

Here as requested from lonely boy in desperate need Kocari <--------- damn that was quick

[Tsuki]

1. 00:26:896 (2) - This note here is too slow imo, you can here the sound being shot out so my impression would to either 1.) make it a little slower than what you had SV or 2.) make it go pretty fast but this it wouldn't feel right. I would go with the first one and change it to .85 because it seems like the appropriate speed for the change Please move it however you like I'll consider making this slider a bit faster but .85 seems a bit too fast for the flow. It made things a bit awkward to play around there so maybe .6~.75 ...
2. 00:30:086 - No distinctive sound here for the triple to be used I would just make it as single notes instead and don't move any of it because it keeps the challenging factor there I think the triple is pretty easy to hear in the music
3. 00:32:413 (2) - A little bit of a struggle to play this stream because lack of feedback from hitting notes to play into this stream, something needs to be placed here 00:32:241 for players to not miss that stream since it will be hidden especially with the delay it has before hitting the stream I think this is pretty cool as is, but I'll try for a solution to this too
4. 00:38:620 (1,2) - This is hard to adjust into playing imo since it's completely different SV you can either make one as a NC to keep players informed instead of hitting the (2) as a 1/2 slider or making them even and reduce the speed a little bit more, because the transitioning between these 3 notes 00:38:362 (7,1,2) - has many factors into hitting them and could create problems in doing so I reduced the speed of the first and NCed the second... I'm really trying to find a solution to this one. I think this will be the most modded part of the map lol.
5. 00:43:362 (1,2) - You have 2 finishes here and emphasizing them both isn't a strong suit for this song, I suggest just removing the fish on (1) and leave the other one be to bring out the end of the stream otherwise the claps and the double finishes don't really go together that well kinda like this one 02:55:776 (1) oh what the f**k
6. 00:44:137 (3) - Drum clap here so Drum-clap here instead of normal sampleset That's actually a cymbal finish
7. 01:23:620 (1,2) - How about adjusting the way they look to something more like this? http://puu.sh/fYCU7/7824f73b28.jpg yeah yeah I dig it
8. 01:49:655 (2,3) - The speed for this can be .5 instead of .75 since it would look way too small of a slider and the effect of gradual increase in speed to these 3 notes seems better 01:50:000 (1,2,3) I'll have to think about this. I need more mods here because I'm not sure if I should keep it 1/8 or 1/4. In the song there's sounds on the blue ticks in slow-mo but sound so puny in full-speed. Until I get more feedback on these two sliders I'm not sure I'll change them
9. 02:00:689 (1,1,1,1) - Can't really tell if all these NC are actually necessary but we'll just leave it there for now
10. 02:11:724 (1,1,1,1) - Same ^ FOR MAXIMUM AWESOMENESS
11. 02:13:793 (1) - Music has that long note being hit in it but is instead a single note on the map but it occurs here 02:15:172 (3) how about making them both with the same type of rhythm but to emphasize both those instrument notes by making a slider instead of a single note Actually it repeats the same pitch twice in the song. It's just a bit hard to hear
12. 02:19:655 (3,1) - You didn't have polarity here and it doesn't sound right how about something on the lines of this http://puu.sh/fYDTX/359645479d.jpg to match with what way you mapped before Wait what? I think I copy/pasted from where I mapped this before lol
13. 03:16:551 (1,2) - Same a bit too fast and not much of a change for the next sliders, how about changing it to 1.1 or 1.2 SV so it fits more There was an inconsistency here lol. I got it. One was 1.2 and the other was 1.4 for scaling intensity
14. 03:39:827 (3,4,5,6) - This part is really hard to play because of how it's hidden and a triple after the 1/2 I believe the fact that it's hidden is more of the problem in itself, I would suggest moving it someplace where it wouldn't be hidden so future players who uses mods and stuff wouldn't miss by the only sequence that has a hidden triple like this This is so cool though. I'll get more thoughts on it but I already have an alternative
15. 04:02:069 (2,3) - Same ^ ^ just need more thoughts on the 1/8 vs 1/4
16. 04:08:103 (10) - Give this the same spacing that 9 has for consistency okie
17. 04:50:516 (5) - A little too far down and out of grid, try moving that up a bit more fixed
18. 04:51:637 (1,2) - These are too fast to make use of them like before too cool though :#

Just follow some of these and you will be good. I don't see any more problems as of now. It's a pretty good song and reminds me of Amamiya Yuko's ranked maps but a little less challenging. Anyhow hoped this mod helped and lets see this ranked in the future

Makoa wrote:

quite the fun map you get here bud.

[General]
you could increase the drain a little bit if you wanted. shouldn't matter so basically your preference. okie
along the same lines of making it a little more challenging i think if you reduced the circle size, it could make it a little more fun. nooo way

[Map]
00:32:413 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hitsounding is a little obnoxious It's fitting but I couldl reduce the volume I could reduce the volume a bit. The hits are fitting though
00:54:827 (1) - maybe new combo color Nah it's good
01:04:137 (1,1) - i think this might be easier to read if these were the same combo and 01:04:482 (1,2,3) - these were all new colors Really don't wanna nc spam this
01:11:724 (1) - i really like this but if you kink it a little more visibly, it would look better. same for 01:33:793 (1) - and stuff This look cool though
01:27:413 (3,4,5,6,7) - snare hit that isn't mapped. you could consider addint something I think I got everything ?
02:34:482 (1,2) - isn't stack but 02:35:862 (1,2) - is. i dont know if its intentional It's intentional. To make hitting the next slider easier for the people that just spam fingers
02:45:172 (5) - new combo color No NC
03:07:241 (5) - 05:19:655 (5) - same as ^ ^ it's not really fitting
02:45:517 (1,2) - isn't stacked but when repeated it is. (nevermind, this is probably intentional) that it is ^^
03:16:551 (1,1,1,2,3) - same as 01:04:137 (1,1) -
03:39:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:27:413 (3,4,5,6,7) -
03:55:172 (5,6,1) - looks a little strange. consider just stacking normally changing triple direction no this was intentional. It happened in the other portion of the map too
04:51:637 (1,2) - i feel like ctrl+G each of these would make it play more easily Blue tick jumps are hell @~@
04:57:155 (1,2) - 05:13:706 (1,2) - same as above
05:30:689 (2) - point the reverse arrow away for better flow the original flow here feels better :::

^this is all just opinion. if you prefer your original mapping, dont change anything. thanks so much ^^

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Naitoshi! As requested c:

:idea: General

* soft-hitclap2.wav gave me an error message when I tried to open it in GoldWave. The file may be corrupt, I'd use this one instead. not sure it matters but replaced
* Your background size is quite large. You can decrease the file size without having noticeable quality loss. Use this image instead. alright
* Add 'shandybass 2' (album name) and 'c86' to the tags? done
* The artist should be 'Shandy kubota' - without the capital letter K, according to the official blog post from UOM Records. That's so weird. Even on the album thing it's capital. Not sure why it'd be lower-case there. I keep for now cause I have a fetish for capital letters :<

Tsuki

* HP6? HP6,5 could also work, considering how you used NCs. ok
* 00:15:861 (2) - Optional, but since you placed whistles earlier on xylophone/piano sounds, why not here as well? yup
* 00:19:310 (1) - ^ okie
* 00:19:999 (3) - Use whistle? same sound as 00:31:034 (3) - Everything's just softer here I'd rather not whistle that
* 00:26:379 (1) - Was a bit tricked by the SV change to x0.5 - mainly because it has almost the same shape as 00:25:689 (4) - the slider before. I'd use a different slider shape (such as a straight one, red points, large curve) to make the SV change play more smoother. I'd rather keep the curved flow so instead I tried to increase the sv of the first
* 00:36:896 (4) - The finish on the slider end is a bit overpowering, considering sounds like 00:35:689 (4) - are stronger, but only have a clap. I'd use a whistle/clap instead here. I could lower volume (I'd rather keep my finishes :<)
* 00:59:310 (5) - Small overmap issue, I'd remove this 3/4 slider and use 1/1 instead? I can't really hear a sound/silence where the slider end could go with on the blue tick. I'd use a 1/1 slider followed with a 1/2 circle, so it's rhythm-wise consistent with 03:11:034 (3,4,5) - It actually is consistent with that part... though both parts have the 3/4 slider because I feel that the note there is elongated all the way to the next beat.
* 01:05:172 - and 03:17:241 - There's currently a discussion going on whether 5% volume slider ends are rankable or not. In this case I recommend you to raise the volume to around 25%. There is a sound at 01:05:344 - and a silent slider end doesn't really catch that well imo. done
* 01:08:965 (1,2) - Well, it's not unrankable, since this slider is still in the playfield - but the player has to go literally jump from the centre of the playfield to the border of the screen, which plays really awkward. I'd move 01:08:275 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - a bit up... Literally moved that whole portion of the map upward. It was too low-field for me
* 01:30:344 (4,5,6) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit, especially (5,6). Since the kicksliders already break the flow, I'd try to keep the jumps reasonable. Try to make a sort triangular shape with the slider ends + note? alright

* 01:31:551 (2,3,4,1,2) - Hmm.. it bugs me that (2,3) is spaced exactly the same as (1,2), while one is 1/2 and the other one 1/4... If you could increase the spacing from (2,3), or reduce the spacing from (1/2) would be better. I think this is cool
* 01:52:413 (1) - 02:03:448 (1) - etc.. This 1/1 slider feels a bit out the place. The long beep already ends on the red tick - which is also indicated by the bass there. I recommend you to turn this into a normal 1/2 slider instead. The long beep ends on the next beat and over actually. I'd rather not change these
* 01:59:568 (5) - Putting the finish + clap on the slider end instead makes more sense to me, since that's where the actual cymbal is. I effed this up. It was suppose to be finish on head clap on end
* 01:55:344 (8,9,10,1) - Form diamond/square shape with these? brilliant

* 02:01:982 (3,4) - Keep spacing here? Usually when you use this 1/2 slider - 3/4 slider - note rhythm you keep your spacing, like 02:07:241 (2,3,4) How the fark did I screw that up? - 02:12:758 (2,3,4) - etc..
* 02:24:655 (6,1) - Kinda expected a jump here ._. Try ctrl+g 02:24:482 (5,6) - ? Maayybe I really like the suggestion but I also like the square flow...
* 02:31:724 (3) - NC here to keep same pattern as 04:43:793 (1,2,1) - ? There wasn't supposed to be any ncs there so I removed the other ones
* 03:54:482 (3) - Same as above, to keep same pattern as 01:41:724 (1,2,1) - yup
* 03:58:965 (3) - Missing a clap here. WTFAFIOELTGKAHTAOITKALDTGJAITPDAHPRHJREPIHKERHPJPDIFHKADFHJAPDOH
* 03:50:000 (5) - Change to normal-sampleset to keep your hitsound pattern. done

most of these are just suggestions, great map!
good luck ~ what a god

monstrata wrote:

From my queue~

[Tsuki]

00:27:586 (1) - This slider isn't consistent with your previous rhythm: 00:22:068 (1,2) - 00:23:448 (1,2) - It was more for the consistency of the next 1/1 slider but I could change if more people say I should
00:38:620 (1,1) - 00:40:000 (1) - Again, the rhythm isn't consistent. You can have a varying rhythm like you did for 00:33:189 (1,2,1,2) - But both measures should be consistent. Most modded portion of map. The reason that the measures should be different is because of the rhythms before it though. I still need something for this...
00:54:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should NC if you make a stream like this so players know when the stack ends. I honestly think it's alright
01:04:137 (1,1) - It makes more sense to have 1/4 beats here and 1/2 beats at 01:04:482 (1,2,3) - Those are 1/4 beats... and there's 1/6 at 01:04:482 -
01:09:655 (3,4,1) - You should have more distinctive NC colors so it's easier to read patterns like this. My colors probably won't change for anything :#
01:12:413 (3,1) - ^
01:36:982 - 01:37:068 - Could add notes here. I really don't think it's necessary mostly because the rhythms there are so quiet. I believe that space adds more to a map than circles do sometimes.
01:49:655 (2,3,1,2,3) - Same as before. There are 1/4 beats at the beginning but the become 1/2 beats. The rhythm, slows down. it doesn't speed up. ^ somewhere up there
01:52:758 (2,1) - Poor flow. pls the whole map flows bad then, it's everywhere
02:03:965 (2) - Ctrl+G and reposition better. Cool idea but the style of the first kiai has those sliders in those parts of the music facing the same direction
03:06:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before. Imo You should have a 5 stack, and then begin the linear stream at 5.
03:16:551 (1,1,1,2,3) - See, this time it works because the beats double up at the end instead. I'm pretty sure you talked about rhythm at these parts and not placement :# What "works"?
03:49:396 - Add triplet same as before
03:54:137 (1,2) - Swap 1 and 2 in timeline. It actually originally was like that. But I changed it because it feels incredibly horrid to play like that.
04:02:069 (2,3,1,2,3) - This one doesn't work either because the beats don't accelerate. what doesn't "work"? They aren't supposed to accelerate for consistency with the other part before the first kiai
05:17:241 (1) - Triplet. keeping the space here
05:19:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. ^
05:22:758 (1) - Triplet. ^

Very Skystar-like map... Uggghhh stahp comparing this to skystar But you need to use more varying Combo Colors. It also helps if you have certain colors (brown/black/red etc...) for sped up/slowed sliders. Sorry these colors stay because they're the best colors https://osu.ppy.sh/s/95701 For example, uses red NC for speed changes. Also, please check your NC pattern. Your NC pattern isn't consistent. In Kiai sections the NC is every measure but other times, it's every 2 measures. You should be more consistent about that. If you could point out inconsistencies that'd be great... but I have solid reasons for every NCs here. I think another modder pointed out most of them though Since this is a marathon map I would recommend NC'ing every measure so the player has more breathing room. Also it would reduce all the 10-15 note combo's you have to 5/8. I only have combos that go up to 10 besides a few near the end

Good luck!!

handsome wrote:

hi

Tsuki

00:27:586 (1) - what mosntrata said +1 I really want to keep it as is because it'd play extremely weird following the 1/4 sliders if I used my previous rhythms...
00:38:620 (1) - whats the point of nc here. its a small SV change on a 1/4 slider, if anything the NC spam might make it look like 1/2. remove this. The nc was for the downbeat of the measure (big white tick) but I removed the one after it
00:54:482 (1,2,3,4) - zzzzz dont do this it just fucks with stack leniency in all the wrong ways. do regular stack else custom stack with minimum 3 pixel displacement. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2829564 Alright changed
01:04:482 (1,2,3) - i never landed this pattern from sightread once lol DON'T WORRY I HAVE AN ALTERNATIVE
01:08:534 (7,8,9) - the flow isn't good here, easing the sharp turn making it much more fluid http://i.imgur.com/Q4iCtMy.png Eased
01:10:172 (2) - how bout a nice neat blanket It is blanketed to the slider follow circle of the slider end
01:18:103 (1,2,3) - there's no logic behind the distance spacing and rhythm spacing of these notes. you;'re gonna have to move 3 much further away. :< I like this. Mapping logically is boring
01:19:568 (7,8,9) - same thing here but not as harsh Yeah it's not as harsh that's why I'd reduce the spacing a bit or keep as is... I'll probably reduce spacing
01:41:724 (1,2) - do a stream no because consistency with something later in the map
01:54:827 (3,4) - i would say this works in theory but are just yuck ingame... although personal preference I'd say it plays pretty well... though in theory it seems to be yuck lol
02:00:689 - y did u fountain here MAXIMUM AWESOMENESS
05:24:482 (9,1) - :I nothx' I'm evil

didn't like slidershapes, didn't like erratic SV changes. otherwise a pretty cool map. good luck. Thanks. I don't think when I map. It's all preference.

lkx_Shore wrote:

Hi. Hiii

General

1. Add shandybass2 in TAG? Ok but I kept "shandybass" too

Tsuki

1. 00:14:482 (3) - Use Normal-sampleset on the slider tail. cool but with lowered volume
2. 00:44:137 (3) - 80% vol? k
3. 01:52:413 (5) - Change to 1/2 slider? It is different with this 01:57:931 (1) - But same as 02:03:448 (1) - . Let make them apart will better imo. (And 02:03:448 (1) - 02:14:482 (1) - ..... ) I'd rather keep these as is. It could be cool to map that red tick but I happen to like how the longer slider emphasizes the extended notes in the songs. (even if one is more emphasized in the song than the other)
4. 02:48:965 (3) - Normal-sampleset on the slider tail.yup did the same as the last

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Tsuki
00:16:034 (3) One circle instead? there's a sound on the red tick
00:38:620 (1,2) I dont think a jump like that is necessary It's there because of the previous rhythm. Without it like this, it makes the part there feel awkward and empty. I'vev tried to change it to something different but the other ways are all so weird feeling ;_; (still contemplating what to do here...)
01:01:379 (2) Move it too 192/320
01:02:758 (4) ^ I'd rather keep these stacked
01:10:172 (2) ctrl+g, it plays better in my opinion eh it makes it less impactful though. I'll stick with the counter-clockwise motion for now
02:06:724 (10) ^ sliders like these in the map should always go the same direction
04:50:344 (3,4,5) ^ I like the idea (while also changing the next slider) but I'll keep it this way for now so the flow after the slider won't have to change too much ********************************************



Really good Mapset :3 Thanks
Good Luck!

Estellia- wrote:

Yay 2nd approved modding today~ (I love approved )

00:11:379 (2,3,4) - Try blanket? no that makes it look cheesy lol
00:14:137 (2,3,4) - Try equalizing the DS between 2-3 and 3-4 I wanted more spacing for the downward flow
00:17:930 (1,3) - Don't make them touch they're barely not touching
00:24:310 (4) - Curve this more so it isn't as close to 3 curving sliders here rekts slider style. It's as close to that as it is to other objects around this point
00:26:379 (1,1,1,2) - SV changes here may be too sudden Ehhh it's a weird part but I like it. Though this is a bit cheesy lol
00:30:344 (1) - You can have a doublet + slider here because of the voice stutter at the beginning I'd rather not map the voice stutters ;_;
00:40:000 (1,2,3) - These sliders look too close to each other, suggest shift apart I agree
00:40:517 (2,1) - Maybe blanket instead of stack? no blankets are too mainstream
01:07:068 (1) - Slider shape is very ugly, suggest change x.x no bro it's cool
01:07:413 (2) - NC because SV change I didn't want to nc spam all over the map. My NCs (and non-NCs) are consistent and whether or not there is an NC doesn't really affect how it's played. Though if it's COMPLETELY needed I'll add all the missing NCs. I mostly have those parts in NC groupings to avoid NC spam
01:07:931 (3) - NC
01:08:275 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe join 8 up with the stream? Ha maybe... I'd like to remain evil though
01:10:172 (2) - NC
01:10:689 (3) - NC (Will stop talking about NCs now!~ Just remember, every time SV is changed, NC~)
01:11:379 (1,1) - Maybe angle one of these sliders so its more readable? this is cool though
01:12:586 (1) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the beginning shouldn't be so squashed, if not the speed of the slider changes This slider will be changed cause I don't like it anyway.
01:16:896 (1) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the back bit should have a larger gap within the slider body for players to read better. I'm not exactly sure myself, maybe check with a BN This is ok
01:18:103 (1) - ^ Maybe. I still don't think "weird sliders" like these are considered unrankable. If they were, where would all the "creativity" be?
01:18:965 (3) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the slider body is too squashed up to be readable This pattern has been played enough for the player to expect a 1/2 slider. It's readable
01:20:862 (1) - Slider shape is very awkward, suggest change slider points to 2nd point: 160|289 and 3rd point: 227|299 That makes it look a bit more awkward but also kinda cool
01:22:413 (1,1) - Angle one of these for reading This is cool
01:25:517 (1,3) - The stack may be confusing to read I like meh stacks :<
01:27:413 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Oh it's not that hard to read
01:29:137 (1,2) - Maybe blanket 1's head with 2's body? nononono blankets look like hell at these points of the map. Looks like I'm trying to be weird with cheese blankets
01:29:482 (2,3) - Flow is very awkward It's still a counter-clockwise flow
01:33:448 (1,1) - Angle like before
01:38:965 (1) - Weird slider shape That's kind of the point
01:44:482 (1,1) - Angle
01:45:689 (1) - Awkward slider shape
02:33:103 (1) - ^
02:34:137 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make them all stick together (referring to last note) so its more like a stream This is cool too ;_; it plays ok
02:52:413 (1,3) - Don't touch ^
03:23:793 (1,1) - Angling (I think I'll stop mentioning this too~)
03:25:000 (1) - Awkward slider shape Most of my slider shapes are weird because that's kinda how the song is. The weird sliders are all intentional.
03:25:344 (2,4) - May be hard to read Not because of the reading factor... honestly it just looks sloppy
03:29:310 (1) - Mentioned before about unrankability These are cool and I doubt they're unrankable. Is it unrankable because it's not seen in ranked maps? Because to me, I swear it plays well and is readable. It would only be unreadable if it was something like this at the beginning of a slider
03:29:655 (1,2) - Flow from 1 to 2 is very weird, suggest shift 2 to 321|38 ? Most of the circles at points like these have slight overlaps. It's part of the style.
03:31:724 (4,5,6,7,8) - Join them up into a stream? nooo
03:33:275 (1) - Ugly slider shape Honestly I'll probably change this
03:33:620 (2,3) - Shift 3 away maybe, the way they intersect is very un-flowy This isn't really a flowy map
03:36:034 (1,2) - Fix the beginning of 1 to blanket 2's head better tried, succeeded... maybe
03:39:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - May be hard to read from the stacking sooo coool. not too hard to read
03:40:689 (1) - Redo this slider, I think the slider body is deformed from an error Oh trust me it's not. I didn't want the curve to be a the center of the slider just so that the previous slider could look more at home.
03:40:689 (1,2) - Change 2 to be blanketted by 1? a million times no. blankets in this map look like meh
03:41:896 (2) - Change point 2 to: 59|218 and point 3 to: 100|209 for a nicer shape The "better" shape doesn't fit the previous slider
03:44:310 (1,2) - Ugly slider shapes Oh pls
03:52:586 (1) - Change point 3 to: 321|342 and point 4 to: 284|333 for a nicer shape I made it look nicer but not as said. The red dots were too close in the example
03:52:586 (1,2) - Recheck blanket did
03:55:344 (1,2) - ^ rotated
03:55:172 (3,4,1) - Looks very unreadable and unrankable, suggest the doublet to come from the bottom and recheck slider shape I'll get more opinions on this one
03:56:724 (2) - ctrlg noooo
03:56:896 (1) - ^ ^
03:57:241 (1) - ^ ^
04:33:793 (6,1) - Blanket? It wouldn't be noticed. There's no blankets in these parts of the map anyway.
04:37:586 (3,1) - ^ (slider bodies) I might do this. That could actually be pretty cool
04:45:517 (1) - Redo slider shape like 03:52:586 (1) - This is ok
04:46:551 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put them together for a stream same as before
04:49:137 (3,1) - Shift 3 away from 1 more, they look too close together I agree
05:08:620 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put them together for a stream noooo waay
05:24:482 (9,1,2,3,4) - ^ I'm evil

Its an alright map. I liked the SV changes a lot, they fit well with the map. All I can say is that the map is cool only at the bits before the kiai, and the bits at the kiai were a bit lacklustre. You can rock up the SV by so much more at the kiai to make the effects generally better. I thought my kiais were ok but I actually do like the sv rev idea. Idk if I'll actually do it because that'd involve so much remap. Honestly I don't think I'd need to do thatAlso, I noticed a lot of linearly curved sliders like 01:55:862 (1) - 01:58:620 (1) - 02:00:000 (7) - which can make the map boring. These are the best sliders I suggest adding sliders that are curved more like 01:57:931 (1) - 01:40:517 (2) - 01:46:034 (2) - , these give a nicer feel of the map. Curvy is boring in this map :< Unless used sparingly...
Thanks for visiting my queue~

deetz wrote:

[General]
phosphorus has its merits

[the diff]
00:38:103 (5,6,7) - make 7 the same as 5,6 so that it's less confusing and makes the double rhythm easier to read (I think its more fun too) OMFG YES THANK YOU YOU ARE A F**KIN GOD YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD IT WAS TO FIND A SOLUTION TO THIS PIECE OF SH*T
00:40:862 (3) - repeat sliders are lame, this is a cooler pattern imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901166 yes
01:04:482 (1,2,3,1) - this is hard to play because it's hard to tell that they're 1/6 sliders, and then you expect the player to make a large 1/3 jump like that flowing in the opposite direction. You'll probably want to keep the spacing so this is much better to play: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2901180 I'll consider this. Even as it is these are still pretty easy for me to play. But I like the idea here so I'm marking it... ****************************************************************************************
01:07:068 (1) - why is this slider so bumpy/convoluted looking Because I'm Satan
01:50:000 (1,2,3,1) - same as 01:04:482 (1,2,3,1) - it's much more comfortable to play when it flows I wouldn't change these though. Actually I was thinking about making the less impactful ones sliders instead...
03:16:896 (1,2,3,1) - ^ 3^
04:32:931 (2) - i think a ctrl-g works better here The next slider would feel awkward getting to
04:51:379 (3,1,2) - I think you should make a bigger difference in shape/length beween 3 and 1,2. it's not fun trying to guess what a slider will be
04:56:896 (3,1,2) - ^
05:13:448 (9,1,2) - ^ ^^^Easy fix... I'll consider though. I like same size sliders because I'm satan.

that's all I got. sorry for short mod, and damn cool map. gl

Aka wrote:

finally hi


general

・are you sure k in kubota shouldn't be capitalized? its strange how they are not using capitalized k for some songs and as staff here is capitalized one
http://shandybass2.tumblr.com/ http://puu.sh/gT94x/7cd88fac36.png I thought it was weird too :> But I'm changing it again cause I like capital letters and Aka told me to! (Totally not getting blamed for this) see this


tsuki

・00:38:103 (5,6,7,8) - i'd recommend to ignore that ~beat~ on the white tick 00:38:275 - sinse its not that hearable as that ~vocal~ thingy and tapping this rhythm as doubles wasn't really comfortable. if you had slider from blue to blue tick, the pattern would flow lighter and more natural, i believe yes

SPOILER

・01:04:482 (1,2,3) - 01:50:000 (1,2,3) - 04:02:413 (1,2,3) - 03:16:896 (1,2,3) - (this case is actually special since 1/4 beats suddenly appeared here and there is a high possiblity that people would click in like 1/4)sinse these are not casual 1/4, the bigger spacing is recommended. we are used to see smaller spacing between 1/8s which are clicked like 1/4 ones. (02:34:137 (1,1,1,1) - for ex) same for these patterns, when we see those sliders with that clamped spacing, we expect 1/8s instead of 1/6. most of time 1/6s are done with bigger spacing to make the rhythm change be more obvious Slight bigger spacing. Hopefully it's noticeable. Yes for the ones before the wubby sections. No to the ones before the kiais. As I'd like to keep the contrast there. It plays easier as is before the kiais.

・02:15:172 (3,4) - 02:26:206 (3,4) - 02:31:724 (3,4) - 04:27:586 (3,4) - 04:38:448 (2,3,4) - 04:44:137 (3,4) - why did you stop using 1/2 slider+1/4 slider for these parts after kiai time ;_; the way how you were following that rhythm was best and now the ignored thingy on red tick is pretty noticeable during the gameplay I liked the idea of a less intensive section after the kiais. It's why I skipped the red tick there

・03:06:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:44:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:54:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - three times in a row you had the same shaped stream from the the corner, it really does feel like a frank copy-pasta. maybe you could start at least one of three part from somewhere else? it would provide some variety But friggin yes though. Actually I did this four times :> It's the signature copi-pasta-wombo-combo stream that I added to the map every time I heard that sound.
・04:51:810 (2) - 04:57:327 (2) - 05:13:879 (2) - i'd additionally increase spacing between this and previous (1) slider to make this part more special and emphasized. you have more speed here but spacing is still visually same as for (9,1). this part would be more powerful if you had big spacing, i believe :9
And yes I increased spacing here. Just slightly though because the 3/4 slider would be hell to get to with super high spacing

that is all, you can poke me if you would like to

Fycho wrote:

[Tsuki]

1. 01:49:655 (2,3) - If you use 1/4 instead of 1/8 for these, it would be better, actually beats are at 01:49:741 - and 01:49:913 - , there is no beat at 1/8 ticks yes but slowed for "awesomeness(tm)"
2. 04:02:069 (2,3) - ^ ^
3. 01:28:275 (1) - I'd like to put it like http://puu.sh/gUS4I/72e2736a51.jpg, for better flow The flow's ok. I'd like to keep it as is for the equal spacing between objects though
4. 02:19:913 - I suggest adding a circle with clap, to make the rhythm more complete.(move 02:20:000 (1) - to(252,353)nearly if needed)
5. 04:04:741 - ^, other similar parts are also applied. I liked how the spacing emphasized the slider that came after it in those parts. Though I did stack this slider 02:19:655 (3) - with the circle... honestly it played horribly and looked bad. There was a slight increase in spacing too lol
6. 03:20:344 - 03:42:413 - 03:56:207 - 1ms unsnapped green lines. These green lines are 1ms late, which makes your speed-changed siliders not work. wtf... FIXED ALL

solid work, call me back!