From Pho's Queue >w<
[General]
Uncheck letterbox during breaks.
[Tsuki]
00:23:448 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/fInZP/2d99a4b61d.jpg Both the sounds at 00:23:448 and 00:23:620 can be emphasized.
00:26:206 (6,2) - Your map can be neater if you stack them perfectly.
00:38:620 (1,1) - Hmm. Didnt recommend this. They are in the same length. It causes confusion with the slider velocity change, even if there're NCs.
00:42:758 (6) - NC. And remove NC at 00:43:362 (1) - .
01:15:000 and 01:15:086 Add note? Five notes sound better than triplet. Same at 01:37:068. (Also in latter sections.)
01:18:448 (2,3) - I guess NCs are needed. There is no ticks to indicate the slider velocity change, even if slight changes. Also there're many places for the same reason.
01:38:965 (1) - I guess this should be modified. The slider end overlaps with the sliderbody.
01:51:379 (5,1) - Swap NC. Same at 01:56:896 (5,1) - .
02:02:413 (5) - NC just like yhour previous section.
02:55:517 (5,1) - Swap NC and remove NC at 02:55:776 (1) - .
03:10:344 (1,2,3) - Better to use 3/4 here. Such as two 3/4 sliders?
03:13:103 (1,2,3,4) - How about following the downbeat drums here by using single taps? Guess it will fit in better with rhythm and provide a better sense of playing.
03:40:344 (7) - Make it into two 1/4 sliders?
04:47:068 Add a note?
Very very creative mapset. Really. I see many nice and innovative ideas! Shoot a star for this!
Good luck!
[General]
Uncheck letterbox during breaks.
[Tsuki]
00:23:448 (1,2) - Try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/fInZP/2d99a4b61d.jpg Both the sounds at 00:23:448 and 00:23:620 can be emphasized.
00:26:206 (6,2) - Your map can be neater if you stack them perfectly.
00:38:620 (1,1) - Hmm. Didnt recommend this. They are in the same length. It causes confusion with the slider velocity change, even if there're NCs.
00:42:758 (6) - NC. And remove NC at 00:43:362 (1) - .
01:15:000 and 01:15:086 Add note? Five notes sound better than triplet. Same at 01:37:068. (Also in latter sections.)
01:18:448 (2,3) - I guess NCs are needed. There is no ticks to indicate the slider velocity change, even if slight changes. Also there're many places for the same reason.
01:38:965 (1) - I guess this should be modified. The slider end overlaps with the sliderbody.
01:51:379 (5,1) - Swap NC. Same at 01:56:896 (5,1) - .
02:02:413 (5) - NC just like yhour previous section.
02:55:517 (5,1) - Swap NC and remove NC at 02:55:776 (1) - .
03:10:344 (1,2,3) - Better to use 3/4 here. Such as two 3/4 sliders?
03:13:103 (1,2,3,4) - How about following the downbeat drums here by using single taps? Guess it will fit in better with rhythm and provide a better sense of playing.
03:40:344 (7) - Make it into two 1/4 sliders?
04:47:068 Add a note?
Very very creative mapset. Really. I see many nice and innovative ideas! Shoot a star for this!
Good luck!