Yay 2nd approved modding today~ (I love approved
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00:11:379 (2,3,4) - Try blanket?
00:14:137 (2,3,4) - Try equalizing the DS between 2-3 and 3-4
00:17:930 (1,3) - Don't make them touch
00:24:310 (4) - Curve this more so it isn't as close to 3
00:26:379 (1,1,1,2) - SV changes here
may be too sudden
00:30:344 (1) - You can have a doublet + slider here because of the voice stutter at the beginning
00:40:000 (1,2,3) - These sliders look too close to each other, suggest shift apart
00:40:517 (2,1) - Maybe blanket instead of stack?
01:07:068 (1) - Slider shape is very ugly, suggest change x.x
01:07:413 (2) - NC because SV change
01:07:931 (3) - NC
01:08:275 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe join 8 up with the stream?
01:10:172 (2) - NC
01:10:689 (3) - NC (Will stop talking about NCs now!~ Just remember, every time SV is changed, NC~)
01:11:379 (1,1) - Maybe angle one of these sliders so its more readable?
01:12:586 (1) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the beginning shouldn't be so squashed, if not the speed of the slider changes
01:16:896 (1) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the back bit should have a larger gap within the slider body for players to read better. I'm not exactly sure myself, maybe check with a BN
01:18:103 (1) - ^
01:18:965 (3) - I believe these sliders are unrankable now, the slider body is too squashed up to be readable
01:20:862 (1) - Slider shape is very awkward, suggest change slider points to 2nd point: 160|289 and 3rd point: 227|299
01:22:413 (1,1) - Angle one of these for reading
01:25:517 (1,3) - The stack may be confusing to read
01:27:413 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:29:137 (1,2) - Maybe blanket 1's head with 2's body?
01:29:482 (2,3) - Flow is very awkward
01:33:448 (1,1) - Angle
01:38:965 (1) - Weird slider shape
01:44:482 (1,1) - Angle
01:45:689 (1) - Awkward slider shape
02:33:103 (1) - ^
02:34:137 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make them all stick together (referring to last note) so its more like a stream
02:52:413 (1,3) - Don't touch
03:23:793 (1,1) - Angling (I think I'll stop mentioning this too~)
03:25:000 (1) - Awkward slider shape
03:25:344 (2,4) - May be hard to read
03:29:310 (1) - Mentioned before about unrankability
03:29:655 (1,2) - Flow from 1 to 2 is very weird, suggest shift 2 to 321|38 ?
03:31:724 (4,5,6,7,8) - Join them up into a stream?
03:33:275 (1) - Ugly slider shape
03:33:620 (2,3) - Shift 3 away maybe, the way they intersect is very un-flowy
03:36:034 (1,2) - Fix the beginning of 1 to blanket 2's head better
03:39:655 (2,3,4,5,6) - May be hard to read from the stacking
03:40:689 (1) - Redo this slider, I think the slider body is deformed from an error
03:40:689 (1,2) - Change 2 to be blanketted by 1?
03:41:896 (2) - Change point 2 to: 59|218 and point 3 to: 100|209 for a nicer shape
03:44:310 (1,2) - Ugly slider shapes
03:52:586 (1) - Change point 3 to: 321|342 and point 4 to: 284|333 for a nicer shape
03:52:586 (1,2) - Recheck blanket
03:55:344 (1,2) - ^
03:55:172 (3,4,1) - Looks very unreadable and unrankable, suggest the doublet to come from the bottom and recheck slider shape
03:56:724 (2) - ctrlg
03:56:896 (1) - ^
03:57:241 (1) - ^
04:33:793 (6,1) - Blanket?
04:37:586 (3,1) - ^ (slider bodies)
04:45:517 (1) - Redo slider shape like 03:52:586 (1) -
04:46:551 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put them together for a stream
04:49:137 (3,1) - Shift 3 away from 1 more, they look too close together
05:08:620 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put them together for a stream
05:24:482 (9,1,2,3,4) - ^
Its an alright map. I liked the SV changes a lot, they fit well with the map. All I can say is that the map is cool only at the bits before the kiai, and the bits at the kiai were a bit lacklustre. You can rock up the SV by so much more at the kiai to make the effects generally better. Also, I noticed a lot of linearly curved sliders like 01:55:862 (1) - 01:58:620 (1) - 02:00:000 (7) - which can make the map boring. I suggest adding sliders that are curved more like 01:57:931 (1) - 01:40:517 (2) - 01:46:034 (2) - , these give a nicer feel of the map.
Thanks for visiting my queue~