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Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size)

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Neo Adonis
320 posts
Joined November 2009
Neo Adonis
[Easy]
00:13:060 (1) - A little confusing start. Move the start of the slider 1/2 beat after.
00:22:900 (5) - Why don't you add finish sound to the end of the slider?
00:26:260 (1) - Why don't you add a finish sound?
00:56:980 (1) - ^
01:07:300 (1) - ^
01:12:340 (1) - From this point the objects aren't snapped!

[Hard]
Too many combo tips. This is because the combos must have consistency with the different parts of the song (think on multiplayer tag games).
00:10:420 (1) - Remove new combo...
00:10:900 (2) - ...and add it here
00:28:180 (8) - Now add new combo here...
00:28:660 (1) - And remove it there ^^
00:31:540 (1,2) - Add combo to the first and remove to the second
00:42:580 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:540 (4) - Add it here
00:44:020 (1) - Remove it there
01:04:180 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:660 (2) - Add it here
01:05:860 (1) - Remove combo
01:06:580 (3) - Add combo
01:07:300 (1) - Remove here
00:26:260 (1) - Why don't you add finish sound to the start of the slider?
00:41:620 (4) - ^
01:27:460 (3) - ^

[Harder]
Many objects aren't well snapped. Check them with AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
00:14:020 (5) - Move 1 grid down
00:35:620 (1) - Move 2 grids right
00:49:060 (3) - To keep a symetry with 00:48:100 (1,2) move this object one grid down.
01:27:460 (7) - Remove whistle and add finish sound.


Good map.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Edit: Never mind this post
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Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
My Diff is Almost Finshed So Here Is A Sample.

P.S. Sorry For The Delay... >.<

Edit 1 : Why Did The Mp3 ended so suddenly? get a better one please.
Edit 2: Completed My [Normal]

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (Death_the_kid) [Crimmi's Normal].osu
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blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
A very late remod. Sorry.

The video still has audio, please remove the audio off the vid.
As I complained about before, please get the full video.
Is it just me, or is the mp3 very soft in volume.

Easy:
Make this diff have the same preview times as your other 2 finished diffs
Also, resnap the notes at the end of the diff.
Combo mod:
01:18:094 (1) - personally I would remove the new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 01:04:180 (1), but that would make a very short 2 note combo. As a result, I recommend splitting the long slider into multiple notes because long sliders are boring and this would accommodate your combos better

Timing section mod:
00:51:453 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:55:522 - ^ (also there are new timing section here, so even if you make one of them a unique timing section, please delete the other
00:55:773 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:09:679 - ^

Hard:
Kiai timing sections should be the same in every nonguest diff unless you have a reason to put your kiai timing in a different location
Normal mod:
00:18:100 (4,1) - Why is there a jump here. It feels sort of random to me.
00:24:100 (10,1) - ^ (wondering because a lot of your other combos do not have jumps, so this seems strange)

Combo mod:
You seem to inconsistent with your combos in this diff. For example, compare 00:10:420 (5,1) and 00:14:500 (5). Please make sure the combos throught your diff are consistent.

Timing section mod:
00:56:976 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Harder: (As people said before, change the name of this diff to insane since harder is a very strange difficulty name)
Combo mod:
00:57:940 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:01:780 (3)

========================
Overall nice map. Still, it would be nice if the lower difficulties were not so linear. Star.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Well the reason I called it harder instead of Insane is because the diff isn't as hard as insane.
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
General

Tags: Don't forget to add CrimmiSkye on the tags, since he made a difficulty for you.
And please make the tags uniform for all diffs
Huh? Crimmi's Normal has custom combo colours while the other diffs don't have. Make it consistent.

On all diffs:
00:51:460 - Useless green line.
00:55:540 ^
00:55:780 ^
01:09:700 ^

Easy
00:18:580 (4,5) - spacing :o = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5786
00:22:900 (5) - maybe removing the whistle and adding a finish on the slider's end would sound nice
01:15:214 (6,7,1) - spacing :o = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5787
01:26:974 (4,5) - move two grids downward

Crimmi's Normal - 4.4 star rating for a normal is too much and this lacks some hitsounds in some parts.
00:07:054 (1) - finish hitsound here
00:07:054 (1) - ^
00:40:166 (1) - ^

Hard
00:17:380 (2) - this slider is not perfectly placed beneath the previous slider's end point. Turn off grid snap and set distance snap multiplier to 0.0x and resnap those sliders.
00:17:860 (3) - this beat ^
00:46:900 (4) - this beat is not properly snapped
00:47:140 (5) - align this with the previous beat
00:48:100 (1,2) - align this beat and slider

Insane
00:14:260 (1) - snap this slider so that it aligns to the next two sliders
00:34:180 (1,2) - move one grid down
01:16:180 (1) - align to the previous slider
01:26:020 (3) - align this slider to the two previous sliders

Here you go ;3
Sabzor
3 posts
Joined November 2009
Sabzor
That's good job but there isn't video :( so i give you the video ;) : http://www.mediafire.com/?y3wbzwz3myt
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
[Easy]
OA+1.
[Crimmi's Normal]
Good.
[Hard]
OA+1.
[Insane]
00:39:220 (1) - first jump I think it would be the same space as previous.
01:15:220 (5) - reduce a back.
Good map.
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Easy:

00:14:260 (2) - Slightly too far from (1)
00:20:980 (1) - Slightly too far from 00:19:060 (5). Also, perhaps align with 00:19:060 (5)?
00:30:580 (1) - Too close to 00:29:620 (6)
00:42:820 (2) - Align with the endpoint of (1)?
00:45:940 (2) - Too close to (1). Also, align with the endpoint of (1)
01:18:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing (too close)

Crimmi's Normal:

00:17:611 (3) - Perhaps align better with (1)?
00:43:525 (5,6) - These seem a bit lopsided. Try making them a bit more symmetrical
01:00:801 (1) - Align with (8)
01:01:521 (2) - Align with (1)

Hard:

00:23:140 (7) - Perhaps align with (5)? (If you do move the notes after it so they're aligned with (7))
01:01:060 (2,3) - Align with (1)
01:27:460 (3) - Align with (2)

Insane:

00:11:860 (5) - New combo to denote change in spacing
00:15:700 (4) - Align with (3)
00:35:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Too close together
00:43:300 (5) - Move one level 3 grid left
00:50:020 (1) - Align with (5)
00:52:420 (4) - Align with (3)
00:53:860 (7) - Make this go a bit closer to (6)
01:02:980 (2) - Align with (1)?

Nice work. :) *star*
Guy-kun
770 posts
Joined December 2009
Guy-kun
Very good~ Played every difficulty and got SS/S
Just two things:

1)Bad mp3 cut, really needs to be changed to a better cut/fade or maybe use the full version?
2)Medium beat size is too massive for medium, could do with being reduced a little

*stars
maal
maal
[General]
Look what I found. The preview times aren't the same. Two of the has: 40536 And the other two : 40646.

~[Easy]~

Nothing!




Actually. No problems found in this beatmap :D
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. The song stops too suddenly. This song's cut badly. But it's okay, I think. Still, I recommend you to make a better mp3.
2. Is it just me or the video doesn't played correctly on background? [?]

[Easy]
-- There are so many unsnapped notes. Fix this. [!]
-- The distance, I think, is too wide for an easy diff.
00:08:980 (1) - This note wil be better if you add finish.
00:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These notes and sliders' distances seem error.
00:13:060 (1) - I don't really like the timing when this slider starts. I prefer move this

1/2 tick, then reduce it one 1/2 tick. After you do this, you may extend the previous slider

(6) one 1/4 tick.
00:22:900 (5) - Remove finish from the beginning of this slider.
00:36:820 (6) - Consider reducing it one 1/2 tick? [?]

[Crimmi's Normal]
-- Disable the countdown, please.
00:33:927 - Where's the clap pattern? ;__;

[Hard]
This one is good enough.

[Insane]
Cool.
Star.
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
-Xero-
[Overall]
The mp3 ends very aprubt. I suggest you to get a new one.

[Easy]
00:58:900 (4,5,6) - 1 tick to the left

[Crimmi's]
00:38:486 (2,3,4,5) - 1 tick down ( I know i am very nazi .. ><)
01:00:321 (8) - Add a whistle
01:01:760 (3-8) - 1 tick up

[Hard]
Nothin'.

[Insane]
00:31:780 (6,7,8,9) - 1 tick up
OD+ 1,2

Good Luck!
star
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
Good job on your first map
Only problems I found are...

[All Difficulties]
I recommend making all the difficulties end at the same place, it's kinda weird how ALL of them end at DIFFERENT places.
I like where [Easy] and [Hard] end, so you can make the others consistent to either of these, your choice.

[CrimmiSkye]
The timing is waaay different than the other maps, there are two sections and a .03 added.
To ask for my opinion, I think the BPM/OFFSET in the other maps are better than this.
Even further, I got an offset of 1290, but you can wait to switch on the offset, I'm not good at timing and it might just be my Universal Offset.

[Hard]
There are some odd combo changes here, I'm not good at New Combos, but the combos here are not very consistent, it's alright though, I guess.

good job
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*The quality of the mp3 is kinda shoddy; I recommend getting a better one. The video's audio track has better quality than this. :/ (The way it ends abruptly at the end is horrid, anyway)
*The video filetype .wmv cannot be used in osu!. Please remove it or find a different one. Also, a video should have it's audio track cut out.
*comboburst.png is too large. The max width allowed is 500px. Please resize it.
*kiai is inconsistent across all difficulties. It should start/end at the same places in each diff.

[Easy]
Fine.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Offset doesn't match the other diffs.
01:09:936 - Get rid of the uninherited section here and resnap.
01:10:414 (1) - Perhaps move this back 1/2 and extend?

[Hard]
01:26:260 (2,3) - ugly overlap
01:27:220 (2,3) - ugly overlap; incorrect spacing

[Insane]
*I recommend turning down the overall difficultly by one tick. Otherwise, one can barely blink while playing @.@;

The mapping of this set is fine, but those other problems really need to be addressed. I see that many others have mentioned audio/video problems, but they still don't seem to be fixed. :/
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Timing seems off, use 1,290

Easy
Fine

Crimmi's Normal
00:09:940 (4) - Why the whistle on the sliderparth? Remove it, it's pointless. This is the same for LOTS of sliders in the difficulty and is really quite annoying.
00:34:900 (3,4,5,6,7) - Horrible overlap. Pretty unrankable to be honest.
01:14:494 (5,6,7,8) - This overlap is just plain ugly.

Hard
00:11:380 (3,4,5,6) - I dislike these reverse stacks... they're so bleh.
00:16:900 (1,2,3) - Why stack these? They play so much better not stacked.
01:27:460 (3) - Pointless slowdown slider >:( At least add a new combo

Insane
00:11:860 (1) - Don't like this jump, it has no link to the music
00:16:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's the point of these stacks?
01:04:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:10:180 (1,2,3,4) - This patten's off, move 4 down a grid
01:27:460 (7) - Pointless slowdown slider >:( At least add a new combo
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi,

Just two things:

1)As people have said before, the mp3 ends kinda abruptly, try to get another one ^^

2)I think you should add "(TV Size)" to the title of the map :)

Have a star! ^_^
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Hey should I change the circle size in Insane to Large?
It looks neat to me.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D

[General]

Delete unused .osb file and full submit.
Change the title to (TV Size) instead of (Tv Size) and full submit.
Find a better .mp3. It does not sound good at the end.

[Easy]

00:17:140 (1) - Too close to previous combo.
00:35:380 (3) - Whistle?

[Crimmi's Normal]

00:45:940 (8) - Take (7) and copy paste it in (8) place and flip/reverse for symmetry.

[Hard]

Fine.

[Insane]

Fine.
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Hi ! :D

Easy
00:39:460 (4) - New combo here

Normal
01:03:940 (6) - New combo here

Hard
00:38:980 (5) - Hit sound Whistle

Insane
It's fine

very nice map ^^ *Starrr
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Requested mod session

[Easy]
00:17:140 (1) - spacing (must be consistent on easy and normal difficulties)
00:19:060 (5) - ^, also maybe align it with 4?
00:38:500 (3) - reduce 1/4, put it 1/4 forward
01:18:100 (1) - align with 3?

[Normal]
Clear

[Hard]
Clear

[Insane]
00:09:940 (5) - it sounds better 1/4 later

~star
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
00:24:58(Break) - Seems very short. You need to delete this break.
00:38:020 (1,2,3) - Distance is different ;_;
00:41:140 (2) - [Suggestion] End at 00:42:460 ?

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:34:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seem messy ;_; [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7068 ] Maybe, you need to move some notes to make look better :3

[Hard]
No problem

[Insane]
00:32:500 (1) - [Suggestion] Align with 00:32:260 (9)?
00:39:940 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:43:300 (5) - Align both start and end plz :3



Good song :3
And I recommanded this song to a BAT :3
Anyway good luck XD

After fix, contact me and I'll pubble this song :3

Here's my star.



edit. Proto-bubbled :3
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
dude!!!
about your MAP....
IT ROCKS

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Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
:3
Thanks~
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Popping.

I see no improvement in the quality of the mp3. This is not a small issue; please find a better mp3.

Also, the video is unacceptable. It's too large (1280px wide), not to mention that it's a kinda-crappy widescreen version. Please find a better video in addition to an mp3.
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Enjoy.. :)

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Insane].osu
Last edited by Vergence , edited 2 times in total.
thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
Overall a well mapped song ^^

Suggestions (details in italics):

MP3 Cut is horrible, but a quick search on my own doesn't show better cuts either...

Easy
00:44:260 (1) - Perhaps reshape this slider so that it doesn't create an unintuitive jump in spacing?
01:17:140 (2,3) - Perhaps center these to make a nicer triangle

Crimmi's Normal
Everything seems fine except spacing seems a little inconsistent at times? Not a big deal cause it's not very noticeable.
01:16:174 (1,2,3) vs 01:14:254 (4,5,6) for example

Hard
00:38:260 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps center this over the slider
Ehh feels too much like a metronome per half beat.

Insane
00:33:220 (3) - Space this correctly? I know you want to overlap, but imho it's not as intuitive as it can be.
00:39:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMHO the music doesn't call for jumps
Sometimes the beats feel too monotonous with the 1/2 beat stretches...

Star~
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Guess I'm going hunting
Edit: Found a better Mp3 and video :D
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
The new video is much better, but the new mp3 sounds barely (if at all) better than the last one. I've searched for about 15 minutes on google and can't find a better quality mp3, so I can't really help anymore from here. I guess for now just put the old mp3 back so that the timing isn't completely screwed up.

I'm terribly sorry that I couldn't help. x_x (I'm sure that someone else will be able to help, though)

Also, I noticed that you have a spinner-circle in the folder, but spinner-metre and spinner-background are missing. Please add those and full submit.

orz
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Lol it's harder than it looks, right?
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
hmmm.. Fix all related to new mp3 and video (offset, video offset, timing sections offset, resnap notes...)
Set custom circle colors.
Add more skin elements.. (especially hitcircleoverlay and spinner pictures)
Here is my try D:

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [KIA's Insane].osu
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[insane]
*Some snapping problem occured.
*Some clap sound doesn't fit the lyrics?
0:09:940 (3,4,5) Up 1 grid such that (2,3,4) can be on the same level?
0:49:780 (4) Spacing? Can be a bit up.
1:07:660 (2) remove clap?
1:07:780 (3) clap?
1:10:420 (2) Suggestion: (2,4) whistle, (5) remove clap?
1:12:100 (2,3,4) Similar to 1:07:660

[hard]
0:10:180 (4) Take the slope between (3) and (5)?
Good.

[Normal]
Good!

[Easy]
Some sliders does a bigger jump with the previous note. Try to avioud that in easy.

Star~
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
rawr ;_;

Download: 01 Golden Time Lover.mp3
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
You got the full version there ^
edit: A clip from the full version
Cheery
259 posts
Joined July 2008
Cheery
^__^

advice on irc~
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Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
irc modding along with...

[General]
*Again, you're missing spinner-background and spinner-metre in the song folder.
00:57:290 - start kiai here on the big white tick.
End kiai either 1/4th before the new section or in another reasonable place. Right now I see it ending in different places in different diffs and in the middle of spinners. It should be consistent and make sense.
01:12:650 - start kiai here
Again, end in a sensible and consistent place.
*Video fades out before the mp3 ends, but meh.. its offset is good and the vid has nice quality. :U

[Easy]
00:16:010 (5,6,1) - spacing
00:26:330 - All beats from here on out are behind by 1/2. Select them along the timeline to move them all back at once. (At least, I THINK most of them are. Some seem to be on purpose, so please replay through it all and change it to your liking.)
01:07:370 (1) - ends on an awkward note, try ending it on 01:10:490 instead.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Get rid of the extra inherited section.

[Hard]
*A bit spammy with whistles and claps, but otherwise fine.

[Insane]
*Looks good.

[KIA's Insane]
*Looks fine but...
00:46:610 (1,2) - spacing
01:28:850 (9) - I'd def. end this with a finish instead of a clap. The way the mp3 cuts out is weird enough without ending on an awkward/stale hitsound. :(
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
WOOT FINALLY DONE!!!

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Sparta's Expert].osu
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Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
The mp3 ends abruptly couldnt you have done a fade-out cut instead?
Delete .osb file and full submit
The mp3 feels low quality
Considering it repeats itself along all difficulties i must mention Kiai should start on: 00:57:290 and 01:12:650

[Easy]
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the fact that all theese notes end up on red ticks cant be a good thing... after checking it again, i think maybe the should be on the white ticks ahead (they look half a beat early)
00:57:290 Kiai time should begin here... as well as the notes, they all feel offbeat
01:12:650 ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
Why the heck are 2 red timing sections at the start?
Same comments for kiai than [Easy]
00:38:090 (1,2,5) - 1 grid down

[Hard]
Same kiai comments than on [Easy]
No breaks?

[Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]
I guess no breaks can pass on insane

[KIA's Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]

This has too many issues to earn my star yet, give me a forum PM for a remod when they are fixed
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
spinner is so uncomfortable >< Can you add center or something?

Insane
00:15:530 (3,4) - separate a bit... keep consistency in distance..
00:16:730 (5) - and this one is too far
00:35:450 (4,1,2) - i can notice you didn't use distance snap in some parts (is cool but keep consistency).. these 3 should be farther from each other. Same with the two combos after this. Distance between circle is smaller compared to rest of the map, this is not good ><
00:51:050 (4,5,6) - these are to close together. (should be at the same distance as 00:50:330 (1,2)
Same with the combo that comes after this...
01:26:810 (4,5,6,1) - same problem, are too close together.

Hard
ok

Crimmi's Normal
Can you decrease overall diff a bit?

Easy
00:26:330 to 01:20:090 - Keep it on White ticks<<<

KIA's Insane
01:17:450 (4) - unpredictable anti-jump, add new combo or stack it >.<
Rest of the map plays fine with me =D

have a star!
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Offset: 1,320

- Music is too soft and the ending is poor D:

~Easy~
00:30:360 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move 1/2 left
00:44:280 (1) - end on right white tick

~Crimmi's Normal~
00:45:480 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~Hard~
Timing is weird, check again.

~Insane~
00:15:720 (4) - should be symmetry
00:22:920 (5,6) - stack the ending
00:57:000 (1) - add hitfinish only first note
01:00:840 (1,2) - stack the ending

~KIA's Insane~
00:15:240 (7) - add clap
01:02:760 (7) - new combo


+Star
Sakura
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Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion


[Easy]
00:13:080 (1) - Ends on blue tick? wth? Oo
00:51:480 (1) - Awkward Spinner
01:07:080 (1) - ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
01:25:800 (1) - Awkward Spinner

[Hard]
Looks fine

[Insane]
Looks fine

[KIA's insane]
Looks fine

After issues are fixed or justified, please forum PM me for a remod
Sakura
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The spinner: 01:07:320 (1) on [Easy] is still awkward, doesnt seem to be following something that leads me to think a spinner is necessary, try instead putting some notes in this section.

Fix and i'll star

Edit: Star'd
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KIA
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KIA
I'm here again. Hi!
1310 offset is better IMO :<
USE custom circle colors, pleeeeeeaaaase. Standart colors sucks...
[General]
Try to ramap hitsounds on your diffs.
[Insane]
Claps placement look very randomly.
[Hard]
00:57:710 (4) - remove whistle from start and ann to slider end
00:58:670 (7) - remove whistle
00:58:910 (1) - add whislte
01:00:590 (1) - remove whistle from slider start.
[Crimmi's]
whistles a bit werd but anyway ok
[Easy]
ok
ah... sry, have no time to continue
Mok
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Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.
Tags: I don't think Edward Alphonse Elric FMA could be useful like tags, delete them D:
There's two red! Change the second red or cutomize colours D:

[Easy]
01:09:960 - Delete this break time and add a slider.

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:38:760 (3,4,5) - Flip horizontally.
01:27:480 (5) - Symmetrize it.

[Hard]
00:25:320 (2,3,4,5) - They're awful! try to change them with a 1/4 slider D:

[Insane]
Ok.

[KIA's Insane]
Ok.
Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun

tmokb93 wrote:

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.
How exactly do I do that?
YGOkid8
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Death_the_kid wrote:

How exactly do I do that?
edit it with a program, or ask someone else (that can) to do it.
Kiddo-Kun
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Can you?
YGOkid8
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can't, I'm capped D:

2 people I know who can do these stuff are:
Ephemeral, and Matma Rex.
try asking them

EDIT: If you can get Ephemeral to, tell him to deny kudosu! for the post you gave me kudosu! for. There was nothing constructive in it that improved this map :P

EDIT: Don't kudosu! this as well
Kiddo-Kun
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Thanks
Btw I really didn't mean to give you kudosu!
Matma Rex
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Matma Rex
Louder mp3: http://www.speedyshare.com/files/22212755/Opening_3.mp3

Make sure the offset didn't change, modyfying mp3s sometimes causes that.



By the way, Easy has a lot of ugly sliders (not perfectly horizontal/vertical, for example 00:44:040 (1). Fix them all please D:). I didn't look at other diffs.
Kiddo-Kun
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Thanks a millions
The new mp3 is a beauty
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Nakagawa-Kanon
[Easy]
00:19:080 (6) - spacing check

umm.... It seems to Normal......

[Normal]
01:14:280 (4) - add new combo

[Hard]
01:02:040 (1) - remove new combo

[Insane]
01:26:880 (5,6) - it's too insane!!

[KIA's Insane]
01:06:360 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:320 (3) - add new combo


good map!
+star~
fartownik
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fartownik
Random mod.

The mp3 ends so suddenly. Can't you edit it by adding the fade effect or find better mp3?

[Easy]

00:16:680 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing. Please space it it with 0,7x Distance Spacing value.
00:52:200 (2) - Sounds far better placed the repeat at [00:53:160] and the end of the slider at [00:54:120].

[Crimmi]

[00:34:440] - [00:39:720] - Strange spacing change. I prefer spacing it with 0,9x Distance Spacing, like previous notes (or space previous notes with 1,1x spacing). The same thing here: [01:25:800].

[Hard]

01:27:480 (3) - The end of this slider sounds weird (considering the sudden, not faded end of the mp3 too). Please expand it to the next white tick (01:28:680).

[Insane]

The same issue as in Hard's.

[KIA]

It's okay.

+star
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Here the right post :P

Moded and nothing found.
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- The mp3 you have ends really suddenly, and it sounds ugly, could you fade it?
- Delete the .osb file and do a Full Submit next time you update the map.
- I recommend to add "fma" to tags, I think people would rather write "fma" than "full metal alchemist" xP

~Easy~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty, please.
- The slider speed is IMO a bit faster...

00:28:680 (4) - Fix Spacing.
00:50:280 (2) - ^
01:14:280 (4) - ^
01:17:160 (2) - ^
01:18:120 (1) - ^

~Crimmi's Normal~
- Well... Having those long chains of sliders and circles this diff looks more like a Hard (actually this appears as H on web)... :/ Maybe making those chains shorter and having some more blank spaces will help =x

00:37:080 (8) - Fix Spacing.
01:15:000 (4,5) - Looks ugly, maybe do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8723
01:25:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.

~Hard~
01:10:680 (3) - Fix spacing.

~Insane~
00:15:720 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.
00:36:600 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:51:000 (5,6) - ^
01:26:880 (5,6) - ^

~KIA's Insane~
No problems, good job! :3

Fun map, just some spacing inconsistences on some places but that's all. Good luck! :3 *star*
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
Well I've mod this long ago, and when I check again I don't any major issue, so it's better for you to find BAT to take a look at this :)
Kiddo-Kun
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It's pretty hard
Ekaru
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Ekaru
Had a little of IRC modding. Basically I had one of the combo colors changed to something that didn't blend in with the BG.

Good job, star!
TheVileOne
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Hey! I checked your maps. Not a lot to say.

Real minor issue but 01:22:560 (2,3) - could be moved one unit down in Insane.

Star
minyeob
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minyeob
1. Add spinner approaching circle
2. I suggest deleting osb. file

Map looks fine, I guess
You can reconnect me ^^
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
i didn't find anything
Kiddo-Kun
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X_x BATs are so hard to find.
minyeob
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minyeob
Your fixed map is fine but

I forgot to redownload.......

Umm Did you do full submit?
There's still osb file, and there's no spinner approach circle, either.
Would you remind re full submitting?

And==================================
Well really sorry for saying this but accroding to rule,
More than 2 Insane(I)s can't be ranked.
But I won't force you to remove one.

Do you think is Hard HARD but not INSANE?
:D
YGOkid8
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minyeob wrote:

Well really sorry for saying this but accroding to rule,
More than 2 Insane(I)s can't be ranked.
I wouldn't say that's true, it's if there aren't enough [I]> diffs to balance it out...

eg. [E][N][I][I] would be rankable, but not [E][H][I][I]

...just keep that in mind ;)
Kiddo-Kun
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Cool, so I make my normal easier, then I'm good
Edit: x_X harder than I thought, I'm gonna need some AID
Kiddo-Kun
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I was told by others that [E] [H] [I] [I] [I]
is quite alright
YGOkid8
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Death_the_kid wrote:

I was told by others that [E] [H] [I] [I] [I]
is quite alright
really? I'm a bit skeptical about it :|
MaxwellDemon
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[Easy]

What a strange hitsound placement... but it is okay considering Easy's beat placement. XD

00:47:880 (1) - I can kinda see what you are doing with Easy (easiest way of mapping easy is to map beat by beat...)... but this slider simply doesn't fit. I think it has to be mapped to the singing... so, move this slider 1/2 forward, repeat one less and then map an additional beat 00:49:320
01:06:120 (3) - Funny slider XD

[Normal]

Technically, nothing wrong... but I find the beat placement a little repetitive (especially for the verse), which, I supposed, is an expected thing considering the nature of the song. Or maybe it is just because I know I wouldn't have mapped the song like that. XD XD

[Hard]

... I think I still find the hitsounds designed haphazardly. Like, why are there so many strange whistles? :(
This song is suitable for whistles, but I think that is too many whistles in one go. XD

00:04:920 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Considering how many beats you have later on in the song, I really won't used that many beats just for the opening sequence. It sets up for repetitiveness to the player (e.g what, this again?).
01:27:480 (3) - Don't really agree with the slowdown slider either. :/

[Insane]

For the intro of the song, same thing as hard. You are using the same mapping techniques for two very different part of the songs.
Same problems with hitsounds, too many whistles in strange places, I think. XD XD
Also, still don't find myself agreeing with the final slowdown slider. :P

[KIA's Insane]

Well... hahaha, yeah, I don't actually find any problems here in particular, I think. XD XD

Strange spinner circle... can't you find something that covers the entire circle?

ztrot's Link has a completely mapped spinner circle (a good one, unlike the one from my skin, hahaha), so maybe you can ask for his permission to use it? In addition to that, why don't you skin the slider ball as well? You already got a slider follow circle for it.

Anyway, as your first map, it's good. But you can definitely do a lot of improvement. Right now, your mapping style seems to be consisting of mapping every single possible beat in the song (1/2 beats in hard, full beats in easy). Throw some variation in the mix. There is a lot of things going on in this song, but you don't necessarily have to map every single thing. If you want to figure out something "nice" from this song, KIA's difficulty is a nice way to learn a few things from (hitsound patterns, variations, streams, non-linear design, etc.). Don't feel discouraged though! If you have any questions regarding my mod, you are always free to ask me any questions online and I'd be happy to try to explain and help you through my critique. XD

Oh yeah, in regards to the difficulty spread... I personally don't really mind since there IS a normal... but that normal could definitely be toned down if possible.

As an encouragement, here is a BAT star. :P
anonymous_old
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General
MP3 just cuts off. Try getting a better MP3.

Skin
???

Seems unnecessary.

Easy
Best diff next to KIA's.
Increase circle size.
Make this less square, please.

01:25:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels poorly timed.

Crimmi's Normal
Feels like a Hard dummied with some sliders. I don't like it.

Hard
Okay, I guess.

KIA's Insane
Looks good.
KIA
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KIA
= = update

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [KIA's Insane].osu
MaxwellDemon
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strager wrote:

General
MP3 just cuts off. Try getting a better MP3.
That is what I thought too, but apparently the song ends like that in the HD TV intro?

By the way, I just realized something... ztrot got a few of his skin elements from here. ;)

I am such a credit whore. XD

Anyway...

[Easy]

Sounds great now.

[Crimmi's Normal]

Well... yeah... you know what I said already. XD XD

[Hard]

Good now.

[KIA's Insane]

Never had a problem with this difficulty.

Bubb.
YGOkid8
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hoi, don't kudosu! people for updating difficulties (or submitting a guest diff for that matter)

next BAT to deny kds
Crimmi
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Crimmi

strager wrote:

General
MP3 just cuts off. Try getting a better MP3.

Skin
???

Seems unnecessary.

Easy
Best diff next to KIA's.
Increase circle size.
Make this less square, please.

01:25:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels poorly timed.

Crimmi's Normal
Feels like a Hard dummied with some sliders. I don't like it. I Feel Offended. :(

Hard
Okay, I guess.

KIA's Insane
Looks good.
Kiddo-Kun
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MaxwellDemon wrote:

I am such a credit whore. XD

YGOkid8 wrote:

hoi, don't kudosu! people for updating difficulties (or submitting a guest diff for that matter)
I'm a Kudosu! hore xD
KIA
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Oh, god... y u updated map and popped bubble? :<<<
:o
Kiddo-Kun
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x_X it dose that?
I was just changing skin
Sakura
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Any update to the map regardless of what you did pops the bubble
Kiddo-Kun
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Damn! :o
MaxwellDemon
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[General]

Skin issues... remove the cursor, though the main issue is you forgot to include the skin.ini, so the pointer is spinner around unnaturally, hahahahaha.
I know I made the skin, but the cursor plays lousy and that's something I had intended to fix... so, just use your previous cursor (easier playability) or just simply remove it.

You also got some skin elements you don't need such as:
- star.png
- playfield.png
- section-fail.png
- section-pass.png
- followpint-1.png (followpoint 1 to 5 actually, remove all these except for followpoint)

It is also highly recommended you remove these components of the skin as the other parts of the skin element have not been skinned:
- go.png
- ready.png

While I am at it, I found some other nitpicky stuff... XD

[Easy]

00:29:160 (5) - Needs to start 1/4 earlier. XD

Other than that, still finding no problem with the maps. Fix the skin elements then I will return with the bubble (again?????). XD XD

EDIT: I added the current cursor I am currently using in the most latest update for my skin (not uploaded yet)... I am pretty sure this came from ztrot though, so, the credit still goes to him for it.

Kiddo-Kun
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MaxwellDemon wrote:

[General]

Skin issues... remove the cursor, though the main issue is you forgot to include the skin.ini, so the pointer is spinner around unnaturally, hahahahaha.
I know I made the skin, but the cursor plays lousy and that's something I had intended to fix... so, just use your previous cursor (easier playability) or just simply remove it.

You also got some skin elements you don't need such as:
- star.png
- playfield.png
- section-fail.png
- section-pass.png
- followpint-1.png (followpoint 1 to 5 actually, remove all these except for followpoint)

It is also highly recommended you remove these components of the skin as the other parts of the skin element have not been skinned:
- go.png
- ready.png

While I am at it, I found some other nitpicky stuff... XD

[Easy]

00:29:160 (5) - Needs to start 1/4 earlier. XD

Other than that, still finding no problem with the maps. Fix the skin elements then I will return with the bubble (again?????). XD XD

EDIT: I added the current cursor I am currently using in the most latest update for my skin (not uploaded yet)... I am pretty sure this came from ztrot though, so, the credit still goes to him for it.
Fixed
KIA
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KIA
skin looks good :)
MaxwellDemon
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Alright then, in this case... finally, re-bubbled. XD XD
Kiddo-Kun
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XD finally
Thanks~
Gens
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Log~

SPOILER
15:07 <Gens> : Hey
15:07 *Gens is editing (Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12082]
15:07 <Death_the_kid> : yah?
15:07 <Gens> : I have a few problems with the skin...
15:08 <Death_the_kid> : I C
15:08 <Death_the_kid> : what are they?
15:09 <Gens> : First of all, there are some unnecessary files in the folder
15:10 <Gens> : I don't believe having two hit0.png makes a difference?
15:11 <Gens> : The skin.ini has also no effect over it
15:11 <Death_the_kid> : oh
15:11 <Gens> : "menu-button-background.png" is also useless
15:13 <Gens> : okay... that's all for unnecessary files
15:13 <Gens> : Next, some skin elements have to be resized or cut
15:13 <Gens> : The comboburst's width cannot be +500px
15:15 <Gens> : Also "spinner-clear.png" must be a 1x1 image
15:15 <Gens> : ...am I going too fast for you? :P
15:15 <Death_the_kid> : no keep going lol
15:15 <Gens> : alright
15:15 <Gens> : Next, some skin elements are missing
15:16 <Gens> : hmm, well, no not really
15:16 <Gens> : just the cursortrail, as far as I can see it
15:16 <Death_the_kid> : alright
15:18 <Gens> : And last, the "default-x" images' glow is horribly cut (no offense)
15:18 <Gens> : Being obvious if you look at default-percent.png
15:18 <Death_the_kid> : I'll fix these ASAP but for now I g2g
15:19 <Death_the_kid> : Thanks~
15:19 <Gens> : alright, I'll keep a log just in case
15:19 <Gens> : no problem
15:19 <Death_the_kid> : alright

[General]
  1. Could you make the lead-in the same on all difficulties?
[Easy]

00:29:040 (5) - It isn't a good idea to change to 1/4 like this on an Easy difficulty.

[KIA's Insane]
  1. I wish the jumps were consistent and actually made sense... it makes me rage...
So pop until you fix this.
Kiddo-Kun
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Gens wrote:

Log~

SPOILER
15:07 <Gens> : Hey
15:07 *Gens is editing (Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12082]
15:07 <Death_the_kid> : yah?
15:07 <Gens> : I have a few problems with the skin...
15:08 <Death_the_kid> : I C
15:08 <Death_the_kid> : what are they?
15:09 <Gens> : First of all, there are some unnecessary files in the folder
15:10 <Gens> : I don't believe having two hit0.png makes a difference?
15:11 <Gens> : The skin.ini has also no effect over it
15:11 <Death_the_kid> : oh
15:11 <Gens> : "menu-button-background.png" is also useless
15:13 <Gens> : okay... that's all for unnecessary files
15:13 <Gens> : Next, some skin elements have to be resized or cut
15:13 <Gens> : The comboburst's width cannot be +500px
15:15 <Gens> : Also "spinner-clear.png" must be a 1x1 image
15:15 <Gens> : ...am I going too fast for you? :P
15:15 <Death_the_kid> : no keep going lol
15:15 <Gens> : alright
15:15 <Gens> : Next, some skin elements are missing
15:16 <Gens> : hmm, well, no not really
15:16 <Gens> : just the cursortrail, as far as I can see it
15:16 <Death_the_kid> : alright
15:18 <Gens> : And last, the "default-x" images' glow is horribly cut (no offense)
15:18 <Gens> : Being obvious if you look at default-percent.png
15:18 <Death_the_kid> : I'll fix these ASAP but for now I g2g
15:19 <Death_the_kid> : Thanks~
15:19 <Gens> : alright, I'll keep a log just in case
15:19 <Gens> : no problem
15:19 <Death_the_kid> : alright

[General]
  1. Could you make the lead-in the same on all difficulties?
[Easy]

00:29:040 (5) - It isn't a good idea to change to 1/4 like this on an Easy difficulty.

[KIA's Insane]
  1. I wish the jumps were consistent and actually made sense... it makes me rage...
So pop until you fix this.
Fixed~
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mtmcl
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Bubble repair!
Kiddo-Kun
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Awesome, now hopefully it stays that way xD
Gens
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I told you to remove the skin.ini... =/
Kiddo-Kun
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Gens wrote:

I told you to remove the skin.ini... =/
Fixed~
Gens
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Hmm, just noticed that I had to update Hard even when deleting and redownloading... something went wrong with submitting maybe? Better safe than sorry...
Kiddo-Kun
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?????
Is something wrong?
Gens
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Gens
Try another full submission maybe?

(forgot to say that on the other post, I rushed it up p:)
Kiddo-Kun
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Re-full sumbiting as we speak.
Edit Fixed~
Gens
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Great!

(for the record, the full submit didn't fix, it was just a small grid change done and resubmitted standard)
Lilly-chan_old
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good map :3 good song :3

staar
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Thank you ~
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Quality map with a good skin and perfect timing.

Ranked.
Kiddo-Kun
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0_o finnaly after 6 months :D
Breeze
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Death_the_kid wrote:

0_o finnaly after 6 months :D
yay, finally it got ranked, congratulations :D
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