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Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size)

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Guy-kun
770 posts
Joined December 2009
Guy-kun
Very good~ Played every difficulty and got SS/S
Just two things:

1)Bad mp3 cut, really needs to be changed to a better cut/fade or maybe use the full version?
2)Medium beat size is too massive for medium, could do with being reduced a little

*stars
maal
maal
[General]
Look what I found. The preview times aren't the same. Two of the has: 40536 And the other two : 40646.

~[Easy]~

Nothing!




Actually. No problems found in this beatmap :D
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. The song stops too suddenly. This song's cut badly. But it's okay, I think. Still, I recommend you to make a better mp3.
2. Is it just me or the video doesn't played correctly on background? [?]

[Easy]
-- There are so many unsnapped notes. Fix this. [!]
-- The distance, I think, is too wide for an easy diff.
00:08:980 (1) - This note wil be better if you add finish.
00:08:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These notes and sliders' distances seem error.
00:13:060 (1) - I don't really like the timing when this slider starts. I prefer move this

1/2 tick, then reduce it one 1/2 tick. After you do this, you may extend the previous slider

(6) one 1/4 tick.
00:22:900 (5) - Remove finish from the beginning of this slider.
00:36:820 (6) - Consider reducing it one 1/2 tick? [?]

[Crimmi's Normal]
-- Disable the countdown, please.
00:33:927 - Where's the clap pattern? ;__;

[Hard]
This one is good enough.

[Insane]
Cool.
Star.
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
-Xero-
[Overall]
The mp3 ends very aprubt. I suggest you to get a new one.

[Easy]
00:58:900 (4,5,6) - 1 tick to the left

[Crimmi's]
00:38:486 (2,3,4,5) - 1 tick down ( I know i am very nazi .. ><)
01:00:321 (8) - Add a whistle
01:01:760 (3-8) - 1 tick up

[Hard]
Nothin'.

[Insane]
00:31:780 (6,7,8,9) - 1 tick up
OD+ 1,2

Good Luck!
star
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
Good job on your first map
Only problems I found are...

[All Difficulties]
I recommend making all the difficulties end at the same place, it's kinda weird how ALL of them end at DIFFERENT places.
I like where [Easy] and [Hard] end, so you can make the others consistent to either of these, your choice.

[CrimmiSkye]
The timing is waaay different than the other maps, there are two sections and a .03 added.
To ask for my opinion, I think the BPM/OFFSET in the other maps are better than this.
Even further, I got an offset of 1290, but you can wait to switch on the offset, I'm not good at timing and it might just be my Universal Offset.

[Hard]
There are some odd combo changes here, I'm not good at New Combos, but the combos here are not very consistent, it's alright though, I guess.

good job
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*The quality of the mp3 is kinda shoddy; I recommend getting a better one. The video's audio track has better quality than this. :/ (The way it ends abruptly at the end is horrid, anyway)
*The video filetype .wmv cannot be used in osu!. Please remove it or find a different one. Also, a video should have it's audio track cut out.
*comboburst.png is too large. The max width allowed is 500px. Please resize it.
*kiai is inconsistent across all difficulties. It should start/end at the same places in each diff.

[Easy]
Fine.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Offset doesn't match the other diffs.
01:09:936 - Get rid of the uninherited section here and resnap.
01:10:414 (1) - Perhaps move this back 1/2 and extend?

[Hard]
01:26:260 (2,3) - ugly overlap
01:27:220 (2,3) - ugly overlap; incorrect spacing

[Insane]
*I recommend turning down the overall difficultly by one tick. Otherwise, one can barely blink while playing @.@;

The mapping of this set is fine, but those other problems really need to be addressed. I see that many others have mentioned audio/video problems, but they still don't seem to be fixed. :/
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Timing seems off, use 1,290

Easy
Fine

Crimmi's Normal
00:09:940 (4) - Why the whistle on the sliderparth? Remove it, it's pointless. This is the same for LOTS of sliders in the difficulty and is really quite annoying.
00:34:900 (3,4,5,6,7) - Horrible overlap. Pretty unrankable to be honest.
01:14:494 (5,6,7,8) - This overlap is just plain ugly.

Hard
00:11:380 (3,4,5,6) - I dislike these reverse stacks... they're so bleh.
00:16:900 (1,2,3) - Why stack these? They play so much better not stacked.
01:27:460 (3) - Pointless slowdown slider >:( At least add a new combo

Insane
00:11:860 (1) - Don't like this jump, it has no link to the music
00:16:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's the point of these stacks?
01:04:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:10:180 (1,2,3,4) - This patten's off, move 4 down a grid
01:27:460 (7) - Pointless slowdown slider >:( At least add a new combo
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi,

Just two things:

1)As people have said before, the mp3 ends kinda abruptly, try to get another one ^^

2)I think you should add "(TV Size)" to the title of the map :)

Have a star! ^_^
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Hey should I change the circle size in Insane to Large?
It looks neat to me.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D

[General]

Delete unused .osb file and full submit.
Change the title to (TV Size) instead of (Tv Size) and full submit.
Find a better .mp3. It does not sound good at the end.

[Easy]

00:17:140 (1) - Too close to previous combo.
00:35:380 (3) - Whistle?

[Crimmi's Normal]

00:45:940 (8) - Take (7) and copy paste it in (8) place and flip/reverse for symmetry.

[Hard]

Fine.

[Insane]

Fine.
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Hi ! :D

Easy
00:39:460 (4) - New combo here

Normal
01:03:940 (6) - New combo here

Hard
00:38:980 (5) - Hit sound Whistle

Insane
It's fine

very nice map ^^ *Starrr
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Requested mod session

[Easy]
00:17:140 (1) - spacing (must be consistent on easy and normal difficulties)
00:19:060 (5) - ^, also maybe align it with 4?
00:38:500 (3) - reduce 1/4, put it 1/4 forward
01:18:100 (1) - align with 3?

[Normal]
Clear

[Hard]
Clear

[Insane]
00:09:940 (5) - it sounds better 1/4 later

~star
arien666
6,275 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Easy]
00:24:58(Break) - Seems very short. You need to delete this break.
00:38:020 (1,2,3) - Distance is different ;_;
00:41:140 (2) - [Suggestion] End at 00:42:460 ?

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:34:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seem messy ;_; [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7068 ] Maybe, you need to move some notes to make look better :3

[Hard]
No problem

[Insane]
00:32:500 (1) - [Suggestion] Align with 00:32:260 (9)?
00:39:940 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:43:300 (5) - Align both start and end plz :3



Good song :3
And I recommanded this song to a BAT :3
Anyway good luck XD

After fix, contact me and I'll pubble this song :3

Here's my star.



edit. Proto-bubbled :3
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
dude!!!
about your MAP....
IT ROCKS

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Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
:3
Thanks~
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Popping.

I see no improvement in the quality of the mp3. This is not a small issue; please find a better mp3.

Also, the video is unacceptable. It's too large (1280px wide), not to mention that it's a kinda-crappy widescreen version. Please find a better video in addition to an mp3.
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
Enjoy.. :)

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Insane].osu
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thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
Overall a well mapped song ^^

Suggestions (details in italics):

MP3 Cut is horrible, but a quick search on my own doesn't show better cuts either...

Easy
00:44:260 (1) - Perhaps reshape this slider so that it doesn't create an unintuitive jump in spacing?
01:17:140 (2,3) - Perhaps center these to make a nicer triangle

Crimmi's Normal
Everything seems fine except spacing seems a little inconsistent at times? Not a big deal cause it's not very noticeable.
01:16:174 (1,2,3) vs 01:14:254 (4,5,6) for example

Hard
00:38:260 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps center this over the slider
Ehh feels too much like a metronome per half beat.

Insane
00:33:220 (3) - Space this correctly? I know you want to overlap, but imho it's not as intuitive as it can be.
00:39:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMHO the music doesn't call for jumps
Sometimes the beats feel too monotonous with the 1/2 beat stretches...

Star~
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Guess I'm going hunting
Edit: Found a better Mp3 and video :D
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
The new video is much better, but the new mp3 sounds barely (if at all) better than the last one. I've searched for about 15 minutes on google and can't find a better quality mp3, so I can't really help anymore from here. I guess for now just put the old mp3 back so that the timing isn't completely screwed up.

I'm terribly sorry that I couldn't help. x_x (I'm sure that someone else will be able to help, though)

Also, I noticed that you have a spinner-circle in the folder, but spinner-metre and spinner-background are missing. Please add those and full submit.

orz
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Lol it's harder than it looks, right?
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
hmmm.. Fix all related to new mp3 and video (offset, video offset, timing sections offset, resnap notes...)
Set custom circle colors.
Add more skin elements.. (especially hitcircleoverlay and spinner pictures)
Here is my try D:

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [KIA's Insane].osu
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[insane]
*Some snapping problem occured.
*Some clap sound doesn't fit the lyrics?
0:09:940 (3,4,5) Up 1 grid such that (2,3,4) can be on the same level?
0:49:780 (4) Spacing? Can be a bit up.
1:07:660 (2) remove clap?
1:07:780 (3) clap?
1:10:420 (2) Suggestion: (2,4) whistle, (5) remove clap?
1:12:100 (2,3,4) Similar to 1:07:660

[hard]
0:10:180 (4) Take the slope between (3) and (5)?
Good.

[Normal]
Good!

[Easy]
Some sliders does a bigger jump with the previous note. Try to avioud that in easy.

Star~
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
rawr ;_;

Download: 01 Golden Time Lover.mp3
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
You got the full version there ^
edit: A clip from the full version
Cheery
259 posts
Joined July 2008
Cheery
^__^

advice on irc~
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Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
irc modding along with...

[General]
*Again, you're missing spinner-background and spinner-metre in the song folder.
00:57:290 - start kiai here on the big white tick.
End kiai either 1/4th before the new section or in another reasonable place. Right now I see it ending in different places in different diffs and in the middle of spinners. It should be consistent and make sense.
01:12:650 - start kiai here
Again, end in a sensible and consistent place.
*Video fades out before the mp3 ends, but meh.. its offset is good and the vid has nice quality. :U

[Easy]
00:16:010 (5,6,1) - spacing
00:26:330 - All beats from here on out are behind by 1/2. Select them along the timeline to move them all back at once. (At least, I THINK most of them are. Some seem to be on purpose, so please replay through it all and change it to your liking.)
01:07:370 (1) - ends on an awkward note, try ending it on 01:10:490 instead.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Get rid of the extra inherited section.

[Hard]
*A bit spammy with whistles and claps, but otherwise fine.

[Insane]
*Looks good.

[KIA's Insane]
*Looks fine but...
00:46:610 (1,2) - spacing
01:28:850 (9) - I'd def. end this with a finish instead of a clap. The way the mp3 cuts out is weird enough without ending on an awkward/stale hitsound. :(
Vergence
546 posts
Joined December 2009
Vergence
WOOT FINALLY DONE!!!

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Sparta's Expert].osu
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Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
The mp3 ends abruptly couldnt you have done a fade-out cut instead?
Delete .osb file and full submit
The mp3 feels low quality
Considering it repeats itself along all difficulties i must mention Kiai should start on: 00:57:290 and 01:12:650

[Easy]
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the fact that all theese notes end up on red ticks cant be a good thing... after checking it again, i think maybe the should be on the white ticks ahead (they look half a beat early)
00:57:290 Kiai time should begin here... as well as the notes, they all feel offbeat
01:12:650 ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
Why the heck are 2 red timing sections at the start?
Same comments for kiai than [Easy]
00:38:090 (1,2,5) - 1 grid down

[Hard]
Same kiai comments than on [Easy]
No breaks?

[Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]
I guess no breaks can pass on insane

[KIA's Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]

This has too many issues to earn my star yet, give me a forum PM for a remod when they are fixed
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
spinner is so uncomfortable >< Can you add center or something?

Insane
00:15:530 (3,4) - separate a bit... keep consistency in distance..
00:16:730 (5) - and this one is too far
00:35:450 (4,1,2) - i can notice you didn't use distance snap in some parts (is cool but keep consistency).. these 3 should be farther from each other. Same with the two combos after this. Distance between circle is smaller compared to rest of the map, this is not good ><
00:51:050 (4,5,6) - these are to close together. (should be at the same distance as 00:50:330 (1,2)
Same with the combo that comes after this...
01:26:810 (4,5,6,1) - same problem, are too close together.

Hard
ok

Crimmi's Normal
Can you decrease overall diff a bit?

Easy
00:26:330 to 01:20:090 - Keep it on White ticks<<<

KIA's Insane
01:17:450 (4) - unpredictable anti-jump, add new combo or stack it >.<
Rest of the map plays fine with me =D

have a star!
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Offset: 1,320

- Music is too soft and the ending is poor D:

~Easy~
00:30:360 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move 1/2 left
00:44:280 (1) - end on right white tick

~Crimmi's Normal~
00:45:480 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~Hard~
Timing is weird, check again.

~Insane~
00:15:720 (4) - should be symmetry
00:22:920 (5,6) - stack the ending
00:57:000 (1) - add hitfinish only first note
01:00:840 (1,2) - stack the ending

~KIA's Insane~
00:15:240 (7) - add clap
01:02:760 (7) - new combo


+Star
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion


[Easy]
00:13:080 (1) - Ends on blue tick? wth? Oo
00:51:480 (1) - Awkward Spinner
01:07:080 (1) - ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
01:25:800 (1) - Awkward Spinner

[Hard]
Looks fine

[Insane]
Looks fine

[KIA's insane]
Looks fine

After issues are fixed or justified, please forum PM me for a remod
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
The spinner: 01:07:320 (1) on [Easy] is still awkward, doesnt seem to be following something that leads me to think a spinner is necessary, try instead putting some notes in this section.

Fix and i'll star

Edit: Star'd
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KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
I'm here again. Hi!
1310 offset is better IMO :<
USE custom circle colors, pleeeeeeaaaase. Standart colors sucks...
[General]
Try to ramap hitsounds on your diffs.
[Insane]
Claps placement look very randomly.
[Hard]
00:57:710 (4) - remove whistle from start and ann to slider end
00:58:670 (7) - remove whistle
00:58:910 (1) - add whislte
01:00:590 (1) - remove whistle from slider start.
[Crimmi's]
whistles a bit werd but anyway ok
[Easy]
ok
ah... sry, have no time to continue
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.
Tags: I don't think Edward Alphonse Elric FMA could be useful like tags, delete them D:
There's two red! Change the second red or cutomize colours D:

[Easy]
01:09:960 - Delete this break time and add a slider.

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:38:760 (3,4,5) - Flip horizontally.
01:27:480 (5) - Symmetrize it.

[Hard]
00:25:320 (2,3,4,5) - They're awful! try to change them with a 1/4 slider D:

[Insane]
Ok.

[KIA's Insane]
Ok.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun

tmokb93 wrote:

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.
How exactly do I do that?
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8

Death_the_kid wrote:

How exactly do I do that?
edit it with a program, or ask someone else (that can) to do it.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Can you?
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
can't, I'm capped D:

2 people I know who can do these stuff are:
Ephemeral, and Matma Rex.
try asking them

EDIT: If you can get Ephemeral to, tell him to deny kudosu! for the post you gave me kudosu! for. There was nothing constructive in it that improved this map :P

EDIT: Don't kudosu! this as well
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