Things have been touched up and updated. If there is any more problems just tell me.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

thanks that really helped. I finished making the easy level. Again if there is any problems just post up.

there are still spacing problems in [Hard]

1. spacing in a combo is the same, if there's a jump, you should use new combo
2. In a diffculty, distance spacing shouldn't change too often
3. First start mapping, I suggest you use distance snap to put notes all the way, that can't be wrong

about [Esay] :
some notes didn't follow the lyrics, use more sliders to make map easy, you needn't to totally follow the lyric but rhythem,
look at other maps more, and you will know how to handle that, use 1/2 beat snap divisor could make it more easy

[Skin]
I had seen this skin before, if you are taken from other mapper's map, you'd better ask the mapper for a permission of using skin, if you do it by yourself, ignore this

[hard] looked better now
and a star for you

no kudosu for me in this map any more
you could ask more player to mod your map

You're awesome man. Thanks for all your help. I made a totally different [Easy] if you wanna check it out.
Do you know any good players to Mod the map?

you could post your map to plaers' queue
viewforum.php?f=60
read their rules first

also you could PM some players to mod your map
there are many players accept PM mod request
modded by more plaers and it get your map more better

I want to create a taiko map~ can you put it? XD

Sure

Easy
Hard

Can you tell me what the many more are. And also, is there anything else wrong besides the placements?

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

change your BPM to 125. (it's currently 125,005)

As leorda said, spacing is crappy. after fixing leorda's thing, here are some things about timing of notes :

[Easy]
00:09:455 (2) - end of this slider isn't snapped. or badly timed. put it on blue tick
Besides, this is an Easy diff. you don't need tricky timing which completely sticks to the lyrics. 00:11:735 (4) - this slider is one of the example another one is 00:27:694 (4,5,6,7).
think about modifying this.
resnap the end of all your slider. they are terribly BAD

[Hard]
GARGL spacing is horrible. FIX IT
and there are a lot of bad timed notes. like this slider 00:16:775 (1)


GO WORK ON THIS
Move this map to Work In progress.
Fix these and i'll may do a proper mod if you catch me in-game.

Change the BPM like Sushi said and fix the spacing with a consistent distance snap like Leorda pointed out.

I can't really mod it in it's present state, work on the spacing that's the main issue and keep testing it I guess. Feel free to ask me to mod again when you've fixed those issues.

Easy
Keep distance spacing exactly the same in Easy, ie. no jumps
Also, don't use 1/4 Beat Snap on Easy. Gets confusing for newbies.

Hard
Some beats are... out of place. Recheck this difficulty.

[Easy]
use distance snap

[Hard]
BPM 125,05
make use of the distance snap
remove the second uninherited section
use more hitsounds

00:12:451(8) remove this note
00:35:722(1) **

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

[Easy]
There's still some spacing problem
Consider re-snap all the note from the start to the end
0.8x distance is good
00:11:613 (4) - move it to 00:11:853
00:19:051 (5) - put the slider's end to the next white tick (00:20:491)
00:22:890 (5) - ^ (00:24:330)
00:51:683 (1) - Put the spinner's end to the white tick (00:55:552) and add a finish?

[Hard]
I'm having trouble modding this difficulty
Just like YGOkid8 said re-check it again

That's all I can help
Just keep going and perfect it, I'm sure you can
Good luck

Why does your story board refer to a "Hitcircleoverlay.png" when there is no such file in your folder? Please add that file, or remove those lines of code. (If you don't plan to sb the map,you should delete the .osb file entirely and do a full resubmit)

The preview times for the maps are different, so please make them the same.
The BPMs for the 2 maps are also different, so please make them both to 125.000.
offset: 1290

Make the tags the same for both diffs and remove "alchemist" and "'brotherhood" from the tags because they are already in the source.

Remove the audio from the video.
Also, why does your video seem cut off. The short ending flower scene is missing.

Easy:
Normal mod:
As Sallad4ever said, please go through the map and fix the scattered spacing problems including some of the spacings between combos. Examples: (00:11:853 (4,1), 00:36:327 (5,6), and 01:05:120 (2,3,4))

Combo mod:
00:10:413 (1) - remove new combo to follow your lyrical pattern
01:02:720 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:14:254 (4)
01:18:094 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 01:14:254 (4)
01:21:214 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:06:079 (3) (you can rearrange the combos in these locations as long as they care consistent and make sense with your pattern)

Timing section mod:
01:09:934 - Why do you have an uninherited timing section here? Please remove it

Hard:
Combo mod:
00:14:016 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 since the pitch of the lyrics changes at 2
00:16:176 (6) - add a new combo if you intend to add a new combo for instruments, otherwise remove 00:33:456 (1)'s new combo
00:31:536 (6) - new combo to follow the lyrics and be consistent with your lyrical pattern
00:40:896 (1) - between here and the next spinner I am not too sure what your combos are following
01:02:912 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 00:58:832 (1)
01:25:951 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to follow the lyrics

Timing section mod:
00:56:913 - Why do you have an uninherited timing section here, please remove it
00:56:913 - unneeded timing section please remove
01:10:112 - Why are there 3 timing sections at this point? Please remove 2 of them
01:10:172 - ^
01:10:232 - Why are there 2 timing sections at this point? Please remove 1 of them
01:11:834 - unneeded timing section please remove

================================
Sadly, continuous straight lines is very boring. Sorry if I missed a few things in my mod. Still, this map needs some fine tuning before I will be willing to star this map. Sorry.

[Gerneral]
Why the song ends suddenly?

[Easy]
00:40:166 (5) - align with 00:39:446 (4)
01:04:160 (1) - align with 01:03:680 (3)
01:16:174 (1) - align with 01:15:694 (7)

[Hard]
00:16:896 (1) - spacing. and align with 00:16:176 (5,6,7)
00:17:376 (2,3,4) - align with 00:16:896 (1)
00:21:936 (1) - align with 00:21:696 (4)
00:26:736 (2,3,4) - align with end of 00:26:256 (1)
00:28:656 (1,2,3) - align with 00:28:176 (7)
00:30:816 (3) - align with 00:30:336 (2)
00:33:456 (1,2,3) - align with 00:32:976 (10)
00:32:976 (10) - align with 00:34:896 (3,4,5)
00:40:176 (8) - hidden slider
00:45:456 (1) - spaing. and align with 00:45:216 (4)
00:48:096 (1,2) - align with end of 00:47:616 (2)
00:51:456 (7,8) - align with 00:51:216 (6)
00:53:136 (1,2,3) - align with 00:52:656 (4)
00:58:112 (1,2,3) - align with end of 00:57:632 (4)
01:04:592 (2) - spacing
01:07:952 (4) - align with 01:07:712 (3)
01:11:312 (1) - spacing
01:12:512 (2) - align with 01:12:272 (1)
01:16:832 (1) - spacing
01:19:472 (1) - spacing
01:24:751 (1) - spacing, and align with 01:24:511 (2)

Hi.

If I put "(?)" - it means im not sure.

First of all, try to keep your spacing similar throughout the difficulty. Don't make sudden jumps and stuff like that. If it's your first beatmap, I suggest you not to make it so hard. You need to get the basics and then go to more advanced level.

[Easy]
00:10:413 (3,4,5) - Sraightaway I can see that the spacing is different than "00:08:974 (1,2)". I think you should make it equal.

00:19:051 (5) - is it supposed to be higher than 00:18:571 (4) ?
00:20:971 (1) - same here, and also spacing error.
00:32:008 (1) - Remove new combo (?)
00:35:847 (4,5,6) - The spacing doesn't look good. See the screenshot:


00:40:646 (6) - Same here
01:00:801 (1) - Spacing is wrong
01:03:680 (6) - ^
01:16:174 (1) - ^
01:18:094 (1) - ^ Too far
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Why these 3 are so close (?)


[Hard]
Your combinetions of sliders & circles mixed together is a bit confusing. It's hard to read the map

00:26:016 (4) - Unexpected jump.
00:26:256 (1) - From this point, the spacing is very weird. See the screenshot:


00:30:096 (1) - Same here.
00:33:696 (2) - What's this jump all of a sudden?
00:38:976 (5) - ^
00:41:376 (3) - ^

And same throughout the map. Try to ballance your spacing.

Hello

General

• You need a better MP3
  It ends with no fade out, or something

Easy

• 00:34:407 (1) 2 grids left
  00:40:646 (6) None

Hard

• 01:00:336 (4) Whistle
  01:01:296 (3) ^
  01:08:256 (5) ^

Star

[General]

Comboburst is too wide, must be under 500px.
hitcircle.png is included, but hitcircleoverlay.png is not. Both must be there.
Consider using custom combo colours.
Remove the audio track from the video.

[Easy]

In general, just watch out for spacing. Here're some spots I saw:
00:11:853 (6,1) -
00:18:571 (4,5) -
00:22:410 (4,5) -
00:34:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:45:924 (2,3,4) -
01:02:720 (4,5,6,1) -

[Hard]

Generally, I'll be more lenient on spacing on harder diffs, as long as it's intuitive. That being said, there're some issues with consistency, for example (00:22:896 (3,4,5,6,7)). (close spacing vs. far spacing)

As well, many of the patterns are hard to read, see if you can arrange them in a nicer way.

Finally, the map really just feels like a constant 1/2 metronome at times. Try to change up the placement a bit.

Good luck! (you can poke me again after 3 MAT mods or 10 more priority, if you want a remod.)

Overall :
PreviewTime: 40646[Easy]
PreviewTime: 40536[Hard]

as you see,tiny wrong about pre-time
set a absolute numeric values

Title : Golden Time Lover(TV Size)

[Easy]
fine

[Hard]
00:14:496 (1,3) - make it horizon with 00:14:016 (4)
00:16:896 (1) - enlarge spacing.(a bit confusing when i have first try.
coz there are 2/1 empty break here.short spacing is not suitable)

Star.

[Normal]

-Maybe too slow

[Hard]

-00:24:336 - 00:25:296 make this slider more short and use the same time (beat snap divisor 1/4)
-00:45:216(4) <-> 00:45:456(1) distance wrong
-01:03:216(2) <-> 01:03:456(3) -----^-------------- (move 1 square to the right)(grid level 3)
-01:07:056(5) <-> 01:07:296(1) -----^-------------- (try to keep the same distance)
-01:07:296(1) to 01:08:256(5) --------^---------------------------------^
-01:26:736(3) <-> 01:26:976(1) -----^
-Sometimes it becomes confusing to follow the circles

I'll give you a star, but try to be a little less confusing in the mapping, Good luck =)

Easy
00:14:252 (2,3,4) - move the 2nd beat 5 squares left, the 3rd one 3 square left and the 4th one a square left
00:21:450 (2,3,4) - move them 3-4 squares left
01:06:079 (3, 4) - move it 2 squares left
01:07:279 (spinner, 1) - add a break time between these beat and spinner!

Hard
00:28:176 (8) - move it a square up
00:30:096 (1) - move it a square left
00:50:256 (3) - ^
00:50:736 (5) - move it a square right
00:51:456 (7) - move it 3 squares right and 2 squares down
00:54:096 (spinner) - it's weird to start a spinner at the same time of a beat... start it on 00:54:576 (same end point)

A good try for a 1st time!
Sadly, I can see that hitsound's volume is too loud... set less lower sounds and try to add more hitsounds!
The ones in the map are quite nonsense...

[General]
- Background Colour: Black
- IMO, I think normal hitsound is better with this song

[Easy]
00:20:971 (1) - spacing.. I know It's already new combo but here's easy, imo
00:51:683 (1) - try sound finish
01:27:454 (5) - try sound finish at last silder

[Hard]
many note are hidden here.. but i guess it fine
00:51:936 (1,2,3,4) - move down 1grid (lvl3)
00:54:336 (1) - try sound finish
01:27:456 (3) - try sound finish at last silder

starr ~ Goodluck

Hard
00:13:056 (1) - separate more from prev (8)
00:46:416 (3) - this slider is hard to see >.<
01:04:176 (1) - this jump don't fit, imo
01:04:896 (3) - put this slider more visible
01:13:776 (2) - hard to see >.<
01:21:456 (1) - ^
for what are you using the inherited timing sections?
increase HP drain, this is hard diff

Easy
delete all inherited timing setions your not using plz
remove Full Metal alchemist brotherhood from tags
BPM sholud be the same in all difficulties

Star

I made a new difficulty
Harder

When did you post your mod request? >.<
And I'm terribly sorry.

Mod:

Harder
00:40:176 - this section and 00:40:656 - this section, you should inherit previous timing (green line) then select the correct BPM adjustment, .5 and 1, respectively

Hard
Spacing in some parts are confusing. Inconsistent Spacing. Respace your hard.

Other diff is fine~


Try to use other hit-sounds, claps and finishes makes your map catchy~

Why don't you put a Kiai section? plus your map is nicely done d(^0^)~!

Request Accepted
sorry for the delay


good, STAR!

As your request.Songs of Fullmetal Alchemist are all very good.

[General]
You need a hitcircleoverlay.png,just copy a default one to your folder.
The volume of mp3 file is too low,try to get a better one?
And why the end goes suddenly?
What about add Kiai Time?
About Tags,between "Elric" and "FMA" there're two spaces,delete one
Delete .osb file and do a full submission.

You can go on ignoring these,but the advices are good for your map easier to be ranked

[Easy]
Tags should be the same with Hard and Harder
BPM should be 125,the same as Hard and Harder
00:56:962 to 01:06:559 - they need more whistle
01:07:279(1) - spinner end at white tick

[Hard]
00:23:376(5) - spacing

[Harder]
PreviewTime should be 40536,the same as Easy and Normal
Objects aren't snapped
00:26:976(3) - spacing
00:40:896 and then - Can you see the notes don't align with the ticks?
00:54:336(1) - spinner end at white tick
01:17:856(4) - spacing
01:20:496(3) - spacing

about note rhythm suggestion,i just give example.you judge if it sounds better
00:20:736 - picture
00:24:936 - add a circle

It is just an example,you just feel it and needn't to fix,if you feel it sounds better just make more combos rhythmic next time


Hard and Harder are almost the same level of diffculty..and IMO Hard is harder than Harder because of a lot of hidden notes..

Try to make your map rhythmic (follow vocal is also ok but creating a nice rhythm is
better) and...remember don't make a map like a metronome more.

BY AL2e's modmodmod!!

[Harder]
00:44:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't use a wistle with many time !!
01:01:296 (2,3,4) - Also
01:07:296 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Remove new combo
00:46:877 (1) -
00:49:757 (1) -
00:51:437 (1) -
New combo
00:49:997 (2) -
00:51:677 (2) -
*Resnap all notes !!

[Hard]
Remove new combo
00:14:496 (1) -
00:21:936 (1) -
00:49:536 (1) -
00:51:936 (1) -
00:58:176 (1) -
01:00:576 (1) -
01:02:016 (1) -
01:16:896 (1) -
01:20:736 (1) -
01:22:896 (1) -
01:26:016 (1) -
New cobmo
00:49:776 (2) -
00:52:176 (2) -
01:01:056 (2) -
01:23:136 (2) -

[ALL]
I don't want to mod your Normal ~
YOU make many wistle for a time, Please change it, THANK !

STAR !

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

The video ends, like, 3 secs before the song ends. Get a new video.

Easy:

00:12:096 (6) - Reduce it by 1/4 beat.

Harder:

Maybe turn up the OD by one tick?

That's it, star. *:

[General]

• • Offset 1300 (resnap all notes)
  • If you could get an mp3 that is NOT cut off at the end, that would be awesome D:

[Hard]

• • 00:47:136 (5) - End this slider here 00:47:860 (white tick)

[Harder] (rename this diff Insane)

• • 00:11:856 (5) - 2 squares down and 2 squares to the right (grid level 3)
  • 01:11:136 (5) - 2 squares up (grid level 3)
  • 01:27:456 (7) - End this slider here 01:27:700 (white tick)

Hello there.

The song is cut pretty uglish. If you have the original mp3, you can cut it later to make it not sound so bad when it ends. I could do this for you but I don't have the mp3 required.

[Easy]

1. Kinda repeptetive. But hey, it's an Easy.
2. Tags: There are 3 spaces between "Elric" and "Full". Make it one. Oh hello nitpicking
3. 00:55:780 - Unused timing section. Delete for neatness.
4. 01:09:940 - ^
5. 01:04:180 (1) - Oh, I went there. This is nazi so you dont have to fix at all, but move this slider one grid down.

[Hard]

1. Tags are different from Easy!They have to be the same!
2. Hahaha, this Hard reminds me of my first ranked Hard. Long 1/2 streams. I like it.

[Harder]

1. Tags are once again different here compared to Easy.
2. Hey! This map gives less score than [Hard]. This is fixed by puttinh HP drain one more tick higher. This makes the map give 1.9mil instead of 1.5, and it also makes it harder. Win-win.

A shining star for you!

•Harder•
00:09:940 (5) - Seriously, It's a useless and bad jump. Wrong Spacing, fix it.
00:11:860 (5) ^
00:31:540 - Add a hitcircle.
00:31:900 - ^
00:59:860 (4) - 1 grid down?

•Hard•
00:18:580 (1) - Wrong spacing, fix it. If you want to keep this jump, please make it more near.

•Easy•
01:16:174 (1) - 1 grid up?

Not bad for first map~
Star~

YGOkid8 wrote:

Death_the_kid wrote:

Would any one like to help me by making a [Normal] or [Insane] Guest Diff?

Better to put that in the first post where everyone can see

You're most likely right, thanks.

Death_the_kid wrote:

Would any one like to help me by making a [Normal] or [Insane] Guest Diff?

Better to put that in the first post where everyone can see
Answering: I'd do Normal, but could you post on my modding queue so I won't forget?

EDIT: omg, haven't I starred this yet??? How unfortunate.

Also: Remove "alchemist brotherhood" from tags. They're already in the source, so it should be fine.

Question: Before I make Normal, would it be possible for you to make Easy easier? (Yes, this would require you to remap...)

Your Easy is a bit more like a Normal, due to the:
- Frequency of Beats
- Slider Velocity
- Overall Difficulty (reduce it by 1, btw)

Just to name a few, sorry to do this to you

PS. No kds for this post

[Easy]
00:13:060 (1) - A little confusing start. Move the start of the slider 1/2 beat after.
00:22:900 (5) - Why don't you add finish sound to the end of the slider?
00:26:260 (1) - Why don't you add a finish sound?
00:56:980 (1) - ^
01:07:300 (1) - ^
01:12:340 (1) - From this point the objects aren't snapped!

[Hard]
Too many combo tips. This is because the combos must have consistency with the different parts of the song (think on multiplayer tag games).
00:10:420 (1) - Remove new combo...
00:10:900 (2) - ...and add it here
00:28:180 (8) - Now add new combo here...
00:28:660 (1) - And remove it there ^^
00:31:540 (1,2) - Add combo to the first and remove to the second
00:42:580 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:540 (4) - Add it here
00:44:020 (1) - Remove it there
01:04:180 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:660 (2) - Add it here
01:05:860 (1) - Remove combo
01:06:580 (3) - Add combo
01:07:300 (1) - Remove here
00:26:260 (1) - Why don't you add finish sound to the start of the slider?
00:41:620 (4) - ^
01:27:460 (3) - ^

[Harder]
Many objects aren't well snapped. Check them with AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
00:14:020 (5) - Move 1 grid down
00:35:620 (1) - Move 2 grids right
00:49:060 (3) - To keep a symetry with 00:48:100 (1,2) move this object one grid down.
01:27:460 (7) - Remove whistle and add finish sound.


Good map.

Edit: Never mind this post

My Diff is Almost Finshed So Here Is A Sample.

P.S. Sorry For The Delay... >.<

Edit 1 : Why Did The Mp3 ended so suddenly? get a better one please.
Edit 2: Completed My [Normal]

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (Death_the_kid) [Crimmi's Normal].osu

A very late remod. Sorry.

The video still has audio, please remove the audio off the vid.
As I complained about before, please get the full video.
Is it just me, or is the mp3 very soft in volume.

Easy:
Make this diff have the same preview times as your other 2 finished diffs
Also, resnap the notes at the end of the diff.
Combo mod:
01:18:094 (1) - personally I would remove the new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 01:04:180 (1), but that would make a very short 2 note combo. As a result, I recommend splitting the long slider into multiple notes because long sliders are boring and this would accommodate your combos better

Timing section mod:
00:51:453 - unneeded timing section, please remove
00:55:522 - ^ (also there are new timing section here, so even if you make one of them a unique timing section, please delete the other
00:55:773 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:09:679 - ^

Hard:
Kiai timing sections should be the same in every nonguest diff unless you have a reason to put your kiai timing in a different location
Normal mod:
00:18:100 (4,1) - Why is there a jump here. It feels sort of random to me.
00:24:100 (10,1) - ^ (wondering because a lot of your other combos do not have jumps, so this seems strange)

Combo mod:
You seem to inconsistent with your combos in this diff. For example, compare 00:10:420 (5,1) and 00:14:500 (5). Please make sure the combos throught your diff are consistent.

Timing section mod:
00:56:976 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Harder: (As people said before, change the name of this diff to insane since harder is a very strange difficulty name)
Combo mod:
00:57:940 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:01:780 (3)

========================
Overall nice map. Still, it would be nice if the lower difficulties were not so linear. Star.

Well the reason I called it harder instead of Insane is because the diff isn't as hard as insane.

General

Tags: Don't forget to add CrimmiSkye on the tags, since he made a difficulty for you.
And please make the tags uniform for all diffs
Huh? Crimmi's Normal has custom combo colours while the other diffs don't have. Make it consistent.

On all diffs:
00:51:460 - Useless green line.
00:55:540 ^
00:55:780 ^
01:09:700 ^

Easy
00:18:580 (4,5) - spacing = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5786
00:22:900 (5) - maybe removing the whistle and adding a finish on the slider's end would sound nice
01:15:214 (6,7,1) - spacing = http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5787
01:26:974 (4,5) - move two grids downward

Crimmi's Normal - 4.4 star rating for a normal is too much and this lacks some hitsounds in some parts.
00:07:054 (1) - finish hitsound here
00:07:054 (1) - ^
00:40:166 (1) - ^

Hard
00:17:380 (2) - this slider is not perfectly placed beneath the previous slider's end point. Turn off grid snap and set distance snap multiplier to 0.0x and resnap those sliders.
00:17:860 (3) - this beat ^
00:46:900 (4) - this beat is not properly snapped
00:47:140 (5) - align this with the previous beat
00:48:100 (1,2) - align this beat and slider

Insane
00:14:260 (1) - snap this slider so that it aligns to the next two sliders
00:34:180 (1,2) - move one grid down
01:16:180 (1) - align to the previous slider
01:26:020 (3) - align this slider to the two previous sliders

Here you go ;3

That's good job but there isn't video so i give you the video : http://www.mediafire.com/?y3wbzwz3myt

[Easy]
OA+1.
[Crimmi's Normal]
Good.
[Hard]
OA+1.
[Insane]
00:39:220 (1) - first jump I think it would be the same space as previous.
01:15:220 (5) - reduce a back.
Good map.

Easy:

00:14:260 (2) - Slightly too far from (1)
00:20:980 (1) - Slightly too far from 00:19:060 (5). Also, perhaps align with 00:19:060 (5)?
00:30:580 (1) - Too close to 00:29:620 (6)
00:42:820 (2) - Align with the endpoint of (1)?
00:45:940 (2) - Too close to (1). Also, align with the endpoint of (1)
01:18:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing (too close)

Crimmi's Normal:

00:17:611 (3) - Perhaps align better with (1)?
00:43:525 (5,6) - These seem a bit lopsided. Try making them a bit more symmetrical
01:00:801 (1) - Align with (8)
01:01:521 (2) - Align with (1)

Hard:

00:23:140 (7) - Perhaps align with (5)? (If you do move the notes after it so they're aligned with (7))
01:01:060 (2,3) - Align with (1)
01:27:460 (3) - Align with (2)

Insane:

00:11:860 (5) - New combo to denote change in spacing
00:15:700 (4) - Align with (3)
00:35:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Too close together
00:43:300 (5) - Move one level 3 grid left
00:50:020 (1) - Align with (5)
00:52:420 (4) - Align with (3)
00:53:860 (7) - Make this go a bit closer to (6)
01:02:980 (2) - Align with (1)?

Nice work. *star*

Very good~ Played every difficulty and got SS/S
Just two things:

1)Bad mp3 cut, really needs to be changed to a better cut/fade or maybe use the full version?
2)Medium beat size is too massive for medium, could do with being reduced a little

*stars

[General]
Look what I found. The preview times aren't the same. Two of the has: 40536 And the other two : 40646.

~[Easy]~

Nothing!




Actually. No problems found in this beatmap

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

Star.

[Overall]
The mp3 ends very aprubt. I suggest you to get a new one.

[Easy]
00:58:900 (4,5,6) - 1 tick to the left

[Crimmi's]
00:38:486 (2,3,4,5) - 1 tick down ( I know i am very nazi .. ><)
01:00:321 (8) - Add a whistle
01:01:760 (3-8) - 1 tick up

[Hard]
Nothin'.

[Insane]
00:31:780 (6,7,8,9) - 1 tick up
OD+ 1,2

Good Luck!
star

Good job on your first map
Only problems I found are...

[All Difficulties]
I recommend making all the difficulties end at the same place, it's kinda weird how ALL of them end at DIFFERENT places.
I like where [Easy] and [Hard] end, so you can make the others consistent to either of these, your choice.

[CrimmiSkye]
The timing is waaay different than the other maps, there are two sections and a .03 added.
To ask for my opinion, I think the BPM/OFFSET in the other maps are better than this.
Even further, I got an offset of 1290, but you can wait to switch on the offset, I'm not good at timing and it might just be my Universal Offset.

[Hard]
There are some odd combo changes here, I'm not good at New Combos, but the combos here are not very consistent, it's alright though, I guess.

good job

[General]
*The quality of the mp3 is kinda shoddy; I recommend getting a better one. The video's audio track has better quality than this. :/ (The way it ends abruptly at the end is horrid, anyway)
*The video filetype .wmv cannot be used in osu!. Please remove it or find a different one. Also, a video should have it's audio track cut out.
*comboburst.png is too large. The max width allowed is 500px. Please resize it.
*kiai is inconsistent across all difficulties. It should start/end at the same places in each diff.

[Easy]
Fine.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Offset doesn't match the other diffs.
01:09:936 - Get rid of the uninherited section here and resnap.
01:10:414 (1) - Perhaps move this back 1/2 and extend?

[Hard]
01:26:260 (2,3) - ugly overlap
01:27:220 (2,3) - ugly overlap; incorrect spacing

[Insane]
*I recommend turning down the overall difficultly by one tick. Otherwise, one can barely blink while playing @.@;

The mapping of this set is fine, but those other problems really need to be addressed. I see that many others have mentioned audio/video problems, but they still don't seem to be fixed. :/

Timing seems off, use 1,290

Easy
Fine

Crimmi's Normal
00:09:940 (4) - Why the whistle on the sliderparth? Remove it, it's pointless. This is the same for LOTS of sliders in the difficulty and is really quite annoying.
00:34:900 (3,4,5,6,7) - Horrible overlap. Pretty unrankable to be honest.
01:14:494 (5,6,7,8) - This overlap is just plain ugly.

Hard
00:11:380 (3,4,5,6) - I dislike these reverse stacks... they're so bleh.
00:16:900 (1,2,3) - Why stack these? They play so much better not stacked.
01:27:460 (3) - Pointless slowdown slider At least add a new combo

Insane
00:11:860 (1) - Don't like this jump, it has no link to the music
00:16:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's the point of these stacks?
01:04:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:10:180 (1,2,3,4) - This patten's off, move 4 down a grid
01:27:460 (7) - Pointless slowdown slider At least add a new combo

Hi,

Just two things:

1)As people have said before, the mp3 ends kinda abruptly, try to get another one ^^

2)I think you should add "(TV Size)" to the title of the map

Have a star! ^_^

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Hey should I change the circle size in Insane to Large?
It looks neat to me.

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.

[General]

Delete unused .osb file and full submit.
Change the title to (TV Size) instead of (Tv Size) and full submit.
Find a better .mp3. It does not sound good at the end.

[Easy]

00:17:140 (1) - Too close to previous combo.
00:35:380 (3) - Whistle?

[Crimmi's Normal]

00:45:940 (8) - Take (7) and copy paste it in (8) place and flip/reverse for symmetry.

[Hard]

Fine.

[Insane]

Fine.

Hi !

Easy
00:39:460 (4) - New combo here

Normal
01:03:940 (6) - New combo here

Hard
00:38:980 (5) - Hit sound Whistle

Insane
It's fine

very nice map ^^ *Starrr

Requested mod session

[Easy]
00:17:140 (1) - spacing (must be consistent on easy and normal difficulties)
00:19:060 (5) - ^, also maybe align it with 4?
00:38:500 (3) - reduce 1/4, put it 1/4 forward
01:18:100 (1) - align with 3?

[Normal]
Clear

[Hard]
Clear

[Insane]
00:09:940 (5) - it sounds better 1/4 later

~star

[Easy]
00:24:58(Break) - Seems very short. You need to delete this break.
00:38:020 (1,2,3) - Distance is different ;_;
00:41:140 (2) - [Suggestion] End at 00:42:460 ?

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:34:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Seem messy ;_; [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7068 ] Maybe, you need to move some notes to make look better :3

[Hard]
No problem

[Insane]
00:32:500 (1) - [Suggestion] Align with 00:32:260 (9)?
00:39:940 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:43:300 (5) - Align both start and end plz :3



Good song :3
And I recommanded this song to a BAT :3
Anyway good luck XD

After fix, contact me and I'll pubble this song :3

Here's my star.



edit. Proto-bubbled :3

dude!!!
about your MAP....
IT ROCKS

:3
Thanks~

Popping.

I see no improvement in the quality of the mp3. This is not a small issue; please find a better mp3.

Also, the video is unacceptable. It's too large (1280px wide), not to mention that it's a kinda-crappy widescreen version. Please find a better video in addition to an mp3.

Enjoy..

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Insane].osu

Overall a well mapped song ^^

Suggestions (details in italics):

MP3 Cut is horrible, but a quick search on my own doesn't show better cuts either...

Easy
00:44:260 (1) - Perhaps reshape this slider so that it doesn't create an unintuitive jump in spacing?
01:17:140 (2,3) - Perhaps center these to make a nicer triangle

Crimmi's Normal
Everything seems fine except spacing seems a little inconsistent at times? Not a big deal cause it's not very noticeable.
01:16:174 (1,2,3) vs 01:14:254 (4,5,6) for example

Hard
00:38:260 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps center this over the slider
Ehh feels too much like a metronome per half beat.

Insane
00:33:220 (3) - Space this correctly? I know you want to overlap, but imho it's not as intuitive as it can be.
00:39:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMHO the music doesn't call for jumps
Sometimes the beats feel too monotonous with the 1/2 beat stretches...

Star~

Guess I'm going hunting
Edit: Found a better Mp3 and video

The new video is much better, but the new mp3 sounds barely (if at all) better than the last one. I've searched for about 15 minutes on google and can't find a better quality mp3, so I can't really help anymore from here. I guess for now just put the old mp3 back so that the timing isn't completely screwed up.

I'm terribly sorry that I couldn't help. x_x (I'm sure that someone else will be able to help, though)

Also, I noticed that you have a spinner-circle in the folder, but spinner-metre and spinner-background are missing. Please add those and full submit.

orz

Lol it's harder than it looks, right?

hmmm.. Fix all related to new mp3 and video (offset, video offset, timing sections offset, resnap notes...)
Set custom circle colors.
Add more skin elements.. (especially hitcircleoverlay and spinner pictures)
Here is my try D:

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [KIA's Insane].osu

[insane]
*Some snapping problem occured.
*Some clap sound doesn't fit the lyrics?
0:09:940 (3,4,5) Up 1 grid such that (2,3,4) can be on the same level?
0:49:780 (4) Spacing? Can be a bit up.
1:07:660 (2) remove clap?
1:07:780 (3) clap?
1:10:420 (2) Suggestion: (2,4) whistle, (5) remove clap?
1:12:100 (2,3,4) Similar to 1:07:660

[hard]
0:10:180 (4) Take the slope between (3) and (5)?
Good.

[Normal]
Good!

[Easy]
Some sliders does a bigger jump with the previous note. Try to avioud that in easy.

Star~

rawr ;_;

Download: 01 Golden Time Lover.mp3

You got the full version there ^
edit: A clip from the full version

^__^

advice on irc~

irc modding along with...

[General]
*Again, you're missing spinner-background and spinner-metre in the song folder.
00:57:290 - start kiai here on the big white tick.
End kiai either 1/4th before the new section or in another reasonable place. Right now I see it ending in different places in different diffs and in the middle of spinners. It should be consistent and make sense.
01:12:650 - start kiai here
Again, end in a sensible and consistent place.
*Video fades out before the mp3 ends, but meh.. its offset is good and the vid has nice quality. :U

[Easy]
00:16:010 (5,6,1) - spacing
00:26:330 - All beats from here on out are behind by 1/2. Select them along the timeline to move them all back at once. (At least, I THINK most of them are. Some seem to be on purpose, so please replay through it all and change it to your liking.)
01:07:370 (1) - ends on an awkward note, try ending it on 01:10:490 instead.

[Crimmi's Normal]
*Get rid of the extra inherited section.

[Hard]
*A bit spammy with whistles and claps, but otherwise fine.

[Insane]
*Looks good.

[KIA's Insane]
*Looks fine but...
00:46:610 (1,2) - spacing
01:28:850 (9) - I'd def. end this with a finish instead of a clap. The way the mp3 cuts out is weird enough without ending on an awkward/stale hitsound.

WOOT FINALLY DONE!!!

Download: Sukima Switch - Golden Time Lover (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Sparta's Expert].osu

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[General]
The mp3 ends abruptly couldnt you have done a fade-out cut instead?
Delete .osb file and full submit
The mp3 feels low quality
Considering it repeats itself along all difficulties i must mention Kiai should start on: 00:57:290 and 01:12:650

[Easy]
00:26:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the fact that all theese notes end up on red ticks cant be a good thing... after checking it again, i think maybe the should be on the white ticks ahead (they look half a beat early)
00:57:290 Kiai time should begin here... as well as the notes, they all feel offbeat
01:12:650 ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
Why the heck are 2 red timing sections at the start?
Same comments for kiai than [Easy]
00:38:090 (1,2,5) - 1 grid down

[Hard]
Same kiai comments than on [Easy]
No breaks?

[Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]
I guess no breaks can pass on insane

[KIA's Insane]
Same comments for kiai than on [Easy]

This has too many issues to earn my star yet, give me a forum PM for a remod when they are fixed

spinner is so uncomfortable >< Can you add center or something?

Insane
00:15:530 (3,4) - separate a bit... keep consistency in distance..
00:16:730 (5) - and this one is too far
00:35:450 (4,1,2) - i can notice you didn't use distance snap in some parts (is cool but keep consistency).. these 3 should be farther from each other. Same with the two combos after this. Distance between circle is smaller compared to rest of the map, this is not good ><
00:51:050 (4,5,6) - these are to close together. (should be at the same distance as 00:50:330 (1,2)
Same with the combo that comes after this...
01:26:810 (4,5,6,1) - same problem, are too close together.

Hard
ok

Crimmi's Normal
Can you decrease overall diff a bit?

Easy
00:26:330 to 01:20:090 - Keep it on White ticks<<<

KIA's Insane
01:17:450 (4) - unpredictable anti-jump, add new combo or stack it >.<
Rest of the map plays fine with me =D

have a star!

Offset: 1,320

- Music is too soft and the ending is poor D:

~Easy~
00:30:360 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - move 1/2 left
00:44:280 (1) - end on right white tick

~Crimmi's Normal~
00:45:480 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~Hard~
Timing is weird, check again.

~Insane~
00:15:720 (4) - should be symmetry
00:22:920 (5,6) - stack the ending
00:57:000 (1) - add hitfinish only first note
01:00:840 (1,2) - stack the ending

~KIA's Insane~
00:15:240 (7) - add clap
01:02:760 (7) - new combo


+Star

Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion


[Easy]
00:13:080 (1) - Ends on blue tick? wth? Oo
00:51:480 (1) - Awkward Spinner
01:07:080 (1) - ^

[Crimmi's Normal]
01:25:800 (1) - Awkward Spinner

[Hard]
Looks fine

[Insane]
Looks fine

[KIA's insane]
Looks fine

After issues are fixed or justified, please forum PM me for a remod

The spinner: 01:07:320 (1) on [Easy] is still awkward, doesnt seem to be following something that leads me to think a spinner is necessary, try instead putting some notes in this section.

Fix and i'll star

Edit: Star'd

I'm here again. Hi!
1310 offset is better IMO :<
USE custom circle colors, pleeeeeeaaaase. Standart colors sucks...
[General]
Try to ramap hitsounds on your diffs.
[Insane]
Claps placement look very randomly.
[Hard]
00:57:710 (4) - remove whistle from start and ann to slider end
00:58:670 (7) - remove whistle
00:58:910 (1) - add whislte
01:00:590 (1) - remove whistle from slider start.
[Crimmi's]
whistles a bit werd but anyway ok
[Easy]
ok
ah... sry, have no time to continue

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.
Tags: I don't think Edward Alphonse Elric FMA could be useful like tags, delete them D:
There's two red! Change the second red or cutomize colours D:

[Easy]
01:09:960 - Delete this break time and add a slider.

[Crimmi's Normal]
00:38:760 (3,4,5) - Flip horizontally.
01:27:480 (5) - Symmetrize it.

[Hard]
00:25:320 (2,3,4,5) - They're awful! try to change them with a 1/4 slider D:

[Insane]
Ok.

[KIA's Insane]
Ok.

tmokb93 wrote:

[General]
MP3 is too weak, make it louder.

How exactly do I do that?

Death_the_kid wrote:

How exactly do I do that?

edit it with a program, or ask someone else (that can) to do it.

Can you?

can't, I'm capped D:

2 people I know who can do these stuff are:
Ephemeral, and Matma Rex.
try asking them

EDIT: If you can get Ephemeral to, tell him to deny kudosu! for the post you gave me kudosu! for. There was nothing constructive in it that improved this map

EDIT: Don't kudosu! this as well

Thanks
Btw I really didn't mean to give you kudosu!

Louder mp3: http://www.speedyshare.com/files/22212755/Opening_3.mp3

Make sure the offset didn't change, modyfying mp3s sometimes causes that.



By the way, Easy has a lot of ugly sliders (not perfectly horizontal/vertical, for example 00:44:040 (1). Fix them all please D:). I didn't look at other diffs.

Thanks a millions
The new mp3 is a beauty

[Easy]
00:19:080 (6) - spacing check

umm.... It seems to Normal......

[Normal]
01:14:280 (4) - add new combo

[Hard]
01:02:040 (1) - remove new combo

[Insane]
01:26:880 (5,6) - it's too insane!!

[KIA's Insane]
01:06:360 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:320 (3) - add new combo


good map!
+star~

Random mod.

The mp3 ends so suddenly. Can't you edit it by adding the fade effect or find better mp3?

[Easy]

00:16:680 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing. Please space it it with 0,7x Distance Spacing value.
00:52:200 (2) - Sounds far better placed the repeat at [00:53:160] and the end of the slider at [00:54:120].

[Crimmi]

[00:34:440] - [00:39:720] - Strange spacing change. I prefer spacing it with 0,9x Distance Spacing, like previous notes (or space previous notes with 1,1x spacing). The same thing here: [01:25:800].

[Hard]

01:27:480 (3) - The end of this slider sounds weird (considering the sudden, not faded end of the mp3 too). Please expand it to the next white tick (01:28:680).

[Insane]

The same issue as in Hard's.

[KIA]

It's okay.

+star

Here the right post

Moded and nothing found.

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- The mp3 you have ends really suddenly, and it sounds ugly, could you fade it?
- Delete the .osb file and do a Full Submit next time you update the map.
- I recommend to add "fma" to tags, I think people would rather write "fma" than "full metal alchemist" xP

~Easy~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty, please.
- The slider speed is IMO a bit faster...

00:28:680 (4) - Fix Spacing.
00:50:280 (2) - ^
01:14:280 (4) - ^
01:17:160 (2) - ^
01:18:120 (1) - ^

~Crimmi's Normal~
- Well... Having those long chains of sliders and circles this diff looks more like a Hard (actually this appears as H on web)... :/ Maybe making those chains shorter and having some more blank spaces will help =x

00:37:080 (8) - Fix Spacing.
01:15:000 (4,5) - Looks ugly, maybe do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8723
01:25:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.

~Hard~
01:10:680 (3) - Fix spacing.

~Insane~
00:15:720 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.
00:36:600 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:51:000 (5,6) - ^
01:26:880 (5,6) - ^

~KIA's Insane~
No problems, good job! :3

Fun map, just some spacing inconsistences on some places but that's all. Good luck! :3 *star*

Well I've mod this long ago, and when I check again I don't any major issue, so it's better for you to find BAT to take a look at this

It's pretty hard

Had a little of IRC modding. Basically I had one of the combo colors changed to something that didn't blend in with the BG.

Good job, star!

Hey! I checked your maps. Not a lot to say.

Real minor issue but 01:22:560 (2,3) - could be moved one unit down in Insane.

Star