[Marathon]
00:41:529 (41529|0) - delete, no need if you want to put the LN already
Mapped left hand to low pitched drum here -
where got the drum instrument here? please respect the composer instrument base and try not make additional hitsounds for your own rhythm.00:41:779 (41779|0) - ^
Mapped left hand to low pitched drum here .
ok thats fine 00:41:904 (41904|2,41966|1) - remove, ^
Mapped left hand to low pitched drum here ( ask fullerene, he's probably right since he is a master at placing notes ) I think it also matches the vocal pitch transition not pretty much clear this, i don't feel there got a triplet, in my suggestion 00:41:904 (41904|2) - remove this note and 00:41:966 (41966|1) - move this note on removed notes 00:41:904 - |3|00:43:529 (43529|2) - ^
Mapped left hand to low pitched drum here remove it! same reason on the first part as i said00:44:279 - for these chords, I don't think this is comfrtable, suggest remove the ones on column 2 or move it to other column
I have no idea how is it hard to push the whole hand down here (?) sakura is right, considered as overnote 00:46:529 (46529|5) - should ends at 00:46:779 - since the string instrument and the vocal both are
The vocal is the same here, basically a repetition, using a shield LN here to represent that, a 1/4 spacing so that it plays better -[
color=#0000FF] looks both are fine, it's up to you[/color]00:58:277 - 00:59:277 - why are these 3 notes please remove 1 note
Err cause i mapped 3 notes (?) and it cause i wanna keep the center note here for rhythm (?), well basically a thumb trill patterning here the note count are not similar with previous part even repeated. i highly recommend make it same for better quality or explain all of each note you refer from.00:59:777 - whats the difference between this and 00:58:402 -
what, it's rather different in note placement alright01:00:652 - If you are mapping this small sound, there is one at 01:00:777 - too, but I suggest you to remove it and map the clap instead
Focusing on the unique vocal rhythm here, i feel that it's better to emphasize it entirely ignoring other sounds so as to bring out the vocal mapping here01:01:652 - same as above, I suggest to map the drum at 01:01:527 - and the claps at 01:01:777 -
Same as above01:03:152 - ~ 01:04:027 - a bit uncomfortable
Dooon't think so.. i asked a couple of people about this ( and saw them FC these kinds of patterns without trouble ) ez to fc but sick quality caused of overnote with BGM(example this note 01:03:652 (63652|2,63652|0,63652|1,63902|1,63902|3,63902|2) - obviously, please hear carefully01:07:777 - add
Focusing on the vocal here, thus i ignored some instruments and emphasized the starting vocal 1/4 after this with a chord01:09:777 - ^^^
Focusing on vocal01:11:027 - ~ 01:11:902 - a bit uncomfortable
Yeeaa, alot of people fced this no problem, so i think it's cool huh? dont think about people. i highly recommend follow the rhythm well here
01:30:402 - why so many chords here, I don't think they are necessary, i highly recommend remove them. Err no, i think they play fine and are pretty fun for people you're thinking your mapping for fun but not thinking overall base quality. im not accept those chord obviously nonsense. use note properly01:33:652 (93652|4,93652|5,93902|4,93902|5) - remove, or reduce
It's mapped to the vocals01:35:027 - again, I do not think this requires that much chords
Eeeh, hammering with 1 note or a 2 note chord or a 3 note chord on a single hand don't really make much difference anyways, so i went with 3, the jacks at this bpm should be easily playable as it is only a 2 note jack i dont get it where you did refer those note01:41:652 - remove, or reduce
For vocals01:43:527 - until here, there was too much chords
I think the chords are fine unless they really hinder playability/readability here -
from my mod
[SB note]
why you need to add exact hitsound BGM on SB? you know it's just a waste
unsnapped sb note
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[Marathon]
00:41:779 (41779|6,41904|4,42029|5) - what those LN refer to?
01:00:402 - i dont get this rhythm seriously
01:01:402 - ^
01:12:027 to 01:26:027 -
ok i can say here this quality pattern are not so good honestly. the pattern looks no creative at all i have to give you 2 option : remap all or remove overnote and re-arrange