Hey there, giving this my random mod since god damn it I love this song. Also talked with Charles about this map, who also showed it to me. I also don't feel like being a total bitch and douchebag by just being rude that the map isn't even really good at all, so I'm just giving it a mod and I hope to see the map improving.
- You should really get a normal difficulty to fit in the difficulty spread.
Hope it helps.
Easy
- 00:08:499 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, the (2) should be distance snapped around 1.
- 00:18:499 (4) - Shouldn't be overlapping, also noticed it's 0,89x away from the previous object, move it so it's around 1 away.
- 00:19:166 (1,2) - 'Squary' slider patterns like this usually don't really look and play intuitive, so I suggest to just use something like a blanket (like this)
- 00:24:499 (1) - I suppose you should keep this around 0,50/0,60 away from the previous object to keep it consistent with the other patterns before.
- 00:32:499 (1) - Might want to move this away a little so it doesn't overlap with the slider.
- 00:54:833 (2) - Same here, would look way better here if it doesn't have that slight overlap.
- 01:44:166 (5) - Might be a not so good idea, since I suppose it's kinda hard for new players to read hitcircles under slider ends.
- 01:53:500 (2) - As mentioned before, would look way better if it doesn't have that slight overlap.
- You should really get a normal difficulty to fit in the difficulty spread.
Hard
- 00:22:833 - I like the idea of having a slow down here but it doesn't really make sense. I suggest to just slow down the whole temp of the intro (from 00:05:833 to 00:26:499) and remove this little slow down.
- 00:31:833 (7) - Move this down so it's perfectly on 00:30:833 (4)
- 00:42:166 (3,4) - Shouldn't be overlapping since 4 isn't overlapping with 1 either. It looks better when not overlapped, so I suggest you move 4 and 1 a liitle down.
- 01:17:833 - This combo here untill the break shouldn't be overlapping, just use the same spacing as you used before so it looks better and plays better.
- 01:41:166 (5) - Looks really weird, I think you should put it so that (4) coats the begin of (5) nicely.
Insane
- 00:12:833 (3,4,5,6,7) - This would look better if made circular instead of pointy, to fit with the wiggle slider you used before it.
- 00:27:166 (1,2,3,4) - The overlaps on this pattern look pretty ugly, I don't think you should overlap sliders this way. They also look extremely bent, which feels like a little bit too much. The spacing between 3 and 4 is also inconsistent, so please use the same spacing for a pattern here.
- 00:55:499 (3,4,5,6) - Overmapped, which is bad in every map. Don't put a stream here, it doesn't sound good and there's absolutely no need to.
- 01:22:499 (1,2,3) - Use the same spacing you used for the combo before here, it would look and play better.
- 01:43:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also overmapped, I seriously hope you will remove them.
- - I really suggest you look over your streams, to make kinda sure they're not bad overmaps. Overmaps are like the most hatred thing you can do, so try to avoid them.
Hope it helps.