[General]
The artist here is "Djerv", not Riot. You should put Riot in the tags though so people can search for them!
You have a widescreen background, so you need to check the Widescreen Support box in all difficulties. It's in Song Setup -> Design
Offset 5500 would work better here. When you change the offset, make sure it's on all difficulties and don't forget to move the inheriting sections with it.
For the 'Source' of the map, I think "League of Legends" would look better than "lol"
[Normal]
I think this plays more like a Hard. I recommend renaming it.
00:21:817 (1,2,3) - Fix up the spacing here, the 2 is overlapping with 3 for some reason
00:22:817 (3,1) - Same with these two
00:28:483 (3) - Put this 3 directly under the endpoint of the 2 slider. This makes sure players don't think it is a stream.
01:13:483 (2,3,4) - The spacing change here is pretty awkward. I recommend making the distance between 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 much bigger.
01:17:483 (4) - Move this down about two spaces, this will make the spacing change less dramatic, easing the player into it.
01:51:817 (6,7) - Move these up and to the left one grid. It will fix up the spacing.
[Insane]
OD 9 is very harsh for the player, I recommend using OD 8 for difficulties like these.
00:13:817 (1,2) - You might want to position these two a bit so they don't overlap each other. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/4ToMh.jpg
00:26:484 (7,8,9) - This is an interesting idea to start increasing spacing here, but it looks really odd and might be hard to read. A more dramatic increase like http://puu.sh/4ToJb.jpg would help out here.
00:32:150 (10) - Move this one grid space down, it looks like it got moved up by accident
00:42:150 (2) - Move the red point in the slider two grid spaces to the right. It will make that linear slant more orderly.
Finish the set!
The artist here is "Djerv", not Riot. You should put Riot in the tags though so people can search for them!
You have a widescreen background, so you need to check the Widescreen Support box in all difficulties. It's in Song Setup -> Design
Offset 5500 would work better here. When you change the offset, make sure it's on all difficulties and don't forget to move the inheriting sections with it.
For the 'Source' of the map, I think "League of Legends" would look better than "lol"
[Normal]
I think this plays more like a Hard. I recommend renaming it.
00:21:817 (1,2,3) - Fix up the spacing here, the 2 is overlapping with 3 for some reason
00:22:817 (3,1) - Same with these two
00:28:483 (3) - Put this 3 directly under the endpoint of the 2 slider. This makes sure players don't think it is a stream.
01:13:483 (2,3,4) - The spacing change here is pretty awkward. I recommend making the distance between 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 much bigger.
01:17:483 (4) - Move this down about two spaces, this will make the spacing change less dramatic, easing the player into it.
01:51:817 (6,7) - Move these up and to the left one grid. It will fix up the spacing.
[Insane]
OD 9 is very harsh for the player, I recommend using OD 8 for difficulties like these.
00:13:817 (1,2) - You might want to position these two a bit so they don't overlap each other. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/4ToMh.jpg
00:26:484 (7,8,9) - This is an interesting idea to start increasing spacing here, but it looks really odd and might be hard to read. A more dramatic increase like http://puu.sh/4ToJb.jpg would help out here.
00:32:150 (10) - Move this one grid space down, it looks like it got moved up by accident
00:42:150 (2) - Move the red point in the slider two grid spaces to the right. It will make that linear slant more orderly.
Finish the set!