Charles445 wrote:

[General]
The artist here is "Djerv", not Riot. You should put Riot in the tags though so people can search for them!
No worries, done. Wasn't sure who the real creator was, so thanks.
You have a widescreen background, so you need to check the Widescreen Support box in all difficulties. It's in Song Setup -> Design
Double checked.. all clear.
Offset 5500 would work better here. When you change the offset, make sure it's on all difficulties and don't forget to move the inheriting sections with it.
Awesome, thanks for that
For the 'Source' of the map, I think "League of Legends" would look better than "lol"
haha, of course.

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I think this plays more like a Hard. I recommend renaming it.
Done.
00:21:817 (1,2,3) - Fix up the spacing here, the 2 is overlapping with 3 for some reason
Easy
00:22:817 (3,1) - Same with these two
Easy again.
00:28:483 (3) - Put this 3 directly under the endpoint of the 2 slider. This makes sure players don't think it is a stream.
Wondered if people would have that issue... done.
01:13:483 (2,3,4) - The spacing change here is pretty awkward. I recommend making the distance between 1 to 2 and 2 to 3 much bigger.
Sure, no problems.
01:17:483 (4) - Move this down about two spaces, this will make the spacing change less dramatic, easing the player into it.
Awesome, done.
01:51:817 (6,7) - Move these up and to the left one grid. It will fix up the spacing.
Sweet, thanks.

[Insane]
OD 9 is very harsh for the player, I recommend using OD 8 for difficulties like these.
Yeah, contemplated that and i felt a bit like a douche for doing it... changed.
00:13:817 (1,2) - You might want to position these two a bit so they don't overlap each other. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/4ToMh.jpg
Ok, awesome. Done.
00:26:484 (7,8,9) - This is an interesting idea to start increasing spacing here, but it looks really odd and might be hard to read. A more dramatic increase like http://puu.sh/4ToJb.jpg would help out here.
Ahh, thank you.
00:32:150 (10) - Move this one grid space down, it looks like it got moved up by accident
yeah it did...
00:42:150 (2) - Move the red point in the slider two grid spaces to the right. It will make that linear slant more orderly.
Haha, wow you pick up on some precise stuff.... thanks.


Finish the set!
Sorry, i had plans to do that today

Keyholder wrote:

Hard:
00:07:833 (3) - increase the spacing a bit to match 00:08:999 (2). This will complement the closer spacing you use right after.
Yeah, easy.
00:15:833 (3) - I feel this pattern should be repeated in 00:37:166 (6) because it fits with the drums there, but also because it's nice to have a theme that recurs in the song. Kind of like the three one note combos that end the sections in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37054 Insane/Cosmos levels. In that vein I recommend also replacing 01:43:833 (5) and 01:59:833 (5) with that pattern. Don't replace 01:01:166 (2) with it to avoid getting too predictable.
Yeah i see what you're saying.
00:24:499 (1) - Up until this point you generally have the notes flowing in counterclockwise, and suddenly after the reverse slider this combo starts going clockwise. You can move 3-4-5-6-7 so that it makes a more obvious clockwise circle heading to 00:27:166 (1), where the flow returns to counterclockwise.
Err... an attempt... how is that?
00:51:499 (2) - Add variety so it's not seven single notes in a row with the same pattern.
Got a little symmetry going there, in a way... better?
01:01:166 (2) - cramped. move down and right.
Not entirely sure what you mean, but, still an attempt.

I think this song is more "jagged" than smooth. You've got a nice flow going, but maybe you could make it more jagged? The beginning is fine since it's buildup, but maybe from 00:27:166 (1), where the music starts getting intense, you can make the angles more violent. Since there aren't as many notes in this map, the shapes and flow stand out more than in the insane. I think if you keep the flow nice and smooth it's like a horror movie where the monster is sneaking up on the school, but the bgm hasn't caught up and is still playing "I love you" from Barney. Well I'm exaggerating, and the level already feels it's part of a ranked map to me, so it's not anything too important. Use your own discretion.
Ehh, you see, normal/hards are not my strong point... I think thats about as good as i'll get it unless you really recommend it...

Insane:
00:05:500 (1) - For flow, rotate clockwise so your combo forms a flat U shape with (2).
Better?
00:10:166 (4) - ooo I actually suggested a different rhythm, but I like this one too. You could use the rhythm I suggested (1...3.4.5.) here instead, so there's a progression from the original (....3.4.5.) to (1...3.4.5.) and finally to your rhythm, (1.2.3.4.5.) This also adds a third rhythm you can use for variation.
Yeah i did have it, but some other modder suggest to make it a continuous stream... i dunno I'm not sold on the way it is currently.

Starting in the section beginning with 01:12:083 (1) Each time you have the 2 slider idea like in 01:16:166 (1), set it apart in its own combo. The sliders are like an awesome echo of awesome slider idea you have at 01:00:166 (1). Whether the echo was intentional or not, thumbs up. One thing though, this section is sort of a middle section. I don't have any suggestions, but maybe you could do something to set it apart from the other KIAI sections? Whatever you'd do have to fit the song and your mapping style though. But this isn't strictly necessary. It's one of those things that not only take a lot of time, but only improves the map a little bit when done well.
Unsure of what you mean here, sorry.

01:19:833 (9) - turn this so it's parallel with (8), or turn (8) to be parallel with (9).
Cool, no problem.
01:21:999 (3) - maybe new combo? Maybe have (3) and (4) switch positions?
Phworr yeah i love the idea of switching them around... However, I don't think a new combo here is really necassary...
01:22:499 (5) - new combo.
Makes sense
00:26:500 (7) - new combo
Again, yeah.
~01:01:166 (4) - Use a longer stream around this time point to end the song. All the triplets and quintuplets before it (a nice touch, by the way) are begging for it to happen.
This what you're looking for?

I'm liking this map. I liked how the insane got hectic before, but the flow version works as well. I do think you could make it less flowy at some points though. Also, the easy level looks good, so yeah, good work.

Ayu wrote:

Hey there, giving this my random mod since god damn it I love this song. Also talked with Charles about this map, who also showed it to me. I also don't feel like being a total bitch and douchebag by just being rude that the map isn't even really good at all, so I'm just giving it a mod and I hope to see the map improving.
Umm... thanks...

Easy

1. 00:08:499 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, the (2) should be distance snapped around 1.
   Don't even understand why thats so out of place.
2. 00:18:499 (4) - Shouldn't be overlapping, also noticed it's 0,89x away from the previous object, move it so it's around 1 away.
   ...wasn't overlapping? Did move it any way so spacig is 1...
3. 00:19:166 (1,2) - 'Squary' slider patterns like this usually don't really look and play intuitive, so I suggest to just use something like a blanket (like this)
   Did it just like that.
4. 00:24:499 (1) - I suppose you should keep this around 0,50/0,60 away from the previous object to keep it consistent with the other patterns before.
   of course... i tried to minimize overlapping here.
5. 00:32:499 (1) - Might want to move this away a little so it doesn't overlap with the slider.
   done.
6. 00:54:833 (2) - Same here, would look way better here if it doesn't have that slight overlap.
   Done here too.
7. 01:44:166 (5) - Might be a not so good idea, since I suppose it's kinda hard for new players to read hitcircles under slider ends.
   Tried to fix that up too.
8. 01:53:500 (2) - As mentioned before, would look way better if it doesn't have that slight overlap.
   No problem.

- You should really get a normal difficulty to fit in the difficulty spread.
Unfortunately, I can't add more difficulties because I have 0 ranked maps.

Hard

1. 00:22:833 - I like the idea of having a slow down here but it doesn't really make sense. I suggest to just slow down the whole temp of the intro (from 00:05:833 to 00:26:499) and remove this little slow down.
   Yeah that slow down never fit... Did what you said and slowed down that whole section that you mentioned... when the melody changes i returned it back to normal speed.
2. 00:31:833 (7) - Move this down so it's perfectly on 00:30:833 (4)
   Gahh i thought i fixed that...
3. 00:42:166 (3,4) - Shouldn't be overlapping since 4 isn't overlapping with 1 either. It looks better when not overlapped, so I suggest you move 4 and 1 a liitle down.
   Both are now "touching"
4. 01:17:833 - This combo here untill the break shouldn't be overlapping, just use the same spacing as you used before so it looks better and plays better.
5. 01:41:166 (5) - Looks really weird, I think you should put it so that (4) coats the begin of (5) nicely.

Hope thats a bit better.

Insane

1. 00:12:833 (3,4,5,6,7) - This would look better if made circular instead of pointy, to fit with the wiggle slider you used before it.
   Is a star ok? thats what i've put in.
2. 00:27:166 (1,2,3,4) - The overlaps on this pattern look pretty ugly, I don't think you should overlap sliders this way. They also look extremely bent, which feels like a little bit too much. The spacing between 3 and 4 is also inconsistent, so please use the same spacing for a pattern here.
   Not overlapped anymore.
3. 00:55:499 (3,4,5,6) - Overmapped, which is bad in every map. Don't put a stream here, it doesn't sound good and there's absolutely no need to.
   Umm... I heard people like this... i had a mod say they loved it...
4. 01:22:499 (1,2,3) - Use the same spacing you used for the combo before here, it would look and play better.
   Ok
5. 01:43:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also overmapped, I seriously hope you will remove them.
   Really?
6. - I really suggest you look over your streams, to make kinda sure they're not bad overmaps. Overmaps are like the most hatred thing you can do, so try to avoid them.

I've heard so much crap about how easy my insane is, and these streams are the only thing that is challenging about it... and you want me to remove it...?
End of the day did what you said. Thanks for the mod.
Hope it helps.
Every bit helps... Here's your kudo.

Tiza wrote:

You should pick up the raw music file instead of using the version from the music video to get rid of the random sound effects and Jinx yelling.

You can download it for free from the official LoL Soundcloud account. https://soundcloud.com/leagueoflegends/get-jinxed

Proph Nobster wrote:

Hi! I wanted to give a few tips on how to improve this beatmap. There's really not much I can correct considering all the past mods.

General

The kiai time certainly fits the song, but I do think it can be shortened as it is a little less than half the draining time of the song.
Certainly, i reduced each segment to the first half of the chorus... perhaps that is better?

Easy

00:29:166 (4) - Try not to stack notes. Overlap is fine, it's just for an easy song it has to be visibly obvious that there is a note there, and not just by approach rate.
00:35:833 (4) - ^
00:45:499 (5) - ^
I hope these changes are acceptable.

00:37:499 (1) - I think there should be more time between the end of these sliders and the next note. People need time to refocus, and most new players are mouse players.
Moved the end of that spinner back one beat, doesn't seem out of place to me.
01:36:166 (1) - ^
I moved this one back two 2 beats, but i added a note on the ... larger white tick (?) to make sure that "Finish" hit sound remains!

6 OD is overkill for easy songs- most go from 1 to 3.
I'll go with 3, hopefull that is okay.

Hard

This hard feels weird... it has a huge difficulty gap between itself and Insane. I understand this used to be Normal, but since this is now named "Hard", maybe you could do something to make it feel more like a Hard diff?
Indeed I see what you mean... i added in a few extra notes, i guess technically triplets, let me know if i over did it.

For one instance, you could increase the slider speed a small notch and make blanketing sliders where possible. I'm not asking you to completely remap this, so I'll just suggest a few places where it'll feel more difficult.
Interesting proposition... i'll give it a shot.


00:13:833 (1) - Changing the angle and position of this slider and the next could make a potential set of reverse zig-zag sliders or reverse krisom-krosses

00:15:833 (3) - Starting from this stream, you can make a pattern of repeating streams (3-note).
at
00:18:499 (4) -
00:21:166 (4) -
00:24:499 (1) -
by closing the gaps with an extra hit circle.
Haha, did this all when i read the first lines of the "Hard" section!
Can you just check the area of that last one however? i'm unsure if that's viable for ranking.

00:36:499 (5) - The speedy beat before the spinner shortly after this slider consists of 4 fast halfbeats. The problem is that this stream actually starts on the red mark right after the slider. Adding an extra note will make it sound more consistent with the song's beat as well as making a slightly longer stream. (5 hits including the end of the slider)
Oh, i managed to already to that too.

00:42:166 (3) - You can reverse one of these two sliders to create a quick jump (or two).
Yep done that, aiming for the one jump though.

01:19:499 (4) - Turn off Grid Snap and adjust this blanket so that the spacing is even and the hit circle doesn't touch it.
Ah-hah! Thank you, i hope this adjustment is worthy.

The second chorus is very similar to the first in terms of beat placement so the changes can also be made to that part too.
Doin' it.

Insane

00:12:833 (3) - This sticks out too much. It has the difficulty of the more upbeat chorus of the song, but it's too contrasting to short streams of the same speed in this intro. I think this could be moved to the transition between intro and chorus and be replaced with a simple stream.
Welp, to be honest it originally was a stream, but i wanted to try and spice it up and added that. I'll change it back no sweat.

00:47:499 (3) - There are too many squares! You should make the jumps more chaotic. All these times posted below are all the square jumps that I found in the song.
00:58:166 (4)
01:18:333 (3)
01:41:499 (1)
01:42:166 (1)
01:50:833 (1)
01:56:833 (3)
Hmm... okay, so recently i've seen in ranked maps where these jumps are usually substituted with seemingly random placements...
Is this what you intend for me to do? I see that as chaotic... it's also fun! Let me know if these changes are acceptable.


This beatmap is great though! If you apply these changes (or not xP) you might have a chance of getting this thing ranked!

A BIG THANKS TO YOUR AWESOME MODD!!! HAVE A KUDOSU!

Your Good Self wrote:

Just a random mod passing by. You shouldn't count on these, I only mod like that when I have nothing better to do.

[General]
EDIT: missed this out previously
"game music" can be dropped from the tags regardless, it's a subset of "video game music" so the tags are already there.

I think even "video game music" can be dropped too.
- When the map is ranked, "Video Game" will be added as the genre.
- "music" is kind of pointless, everything here is music anyway Ah yes, thank you sir.

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00:18:499 (4) - Move this down so it flows better from 00:17:499 (3) I see...
00:20:166 (2,1) - Blanket can be better. Look from 00:20:833 Ew, that's awful. Thanks for pointing that out.
00:28:499 (2,4) - Try not to have too much overlap in easier diffs because it can get confusing. Looks gross too, fixed.
00:29:166 (4,1) - This kind of overlap should be avoided at all costs since it doesn't look very good. Furthermore, it's completely preventable if you shift (1) up a little so it is closer to 1.00x DS. Fixed that with the previous... find?
00:30:499 (2) - Move the first kink to the downbeat 00:30:833 - the rest of the slider is fine I do hope that looks better.
00:44:166 (4,5,1) - Overlap doesn't look so good. Ideally I would suggest moving (5) up, but since you're near the top edge of the screen here, I think an alternative would be needed. I simply moved it away from both of the sliders, i think that's still playable.
01:42:833 (4) - You can make a smoother transition from straight to curve sections in this slider. More control points on the curved section will also make a smoother and better looking curve.Ew, that's awful, i can't believe i left it like that. Thank you
01:51:166 (3,1) - I think there could be a better blanket around here, but that's up to you.I attempted to make it look better anyways.

00:42:166 (4) - Curve could be less sharp, to remove the slight overlap between the start and end.Gotcha covered.
01:40:833 (4) - ^ ^

00:51:499 (2) - Kink on the beat Yes sir
01:50:166 (2) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:14:833 (2) - ctrl+G would fit better here imo. Adjust the later notes accordingly. Yeah the reason i had it the other way was because of the distance snapping... i'll change it for now, but we'll see what another modder says
00:48:833 (2) - Kink on the red tick. Currently the kink is a bit too late. Jesus the detail! Good eye!
00:48:833 (2,2) - Can we avoid the overlap? Sorry, rotated the slider up to dodge it
01:01:166 (2) - Can have a better blanket around 01:00:833 (1) , and maybe have the slider end on where 00:59:833 (2) is.Hmm i tried, perhaps to no avail.
01:17:499 (4) - Continue using 1.00x DS both before and after the note. It's embarressing to even think i left it like that.
01:40:833 (4,5,6) - Overlap is ugly. Especially 01:40:833 (4,6) Fixed that.
01:47:166 (1,3) - Try not to overlap, it's briefly visible. Ah yes, thanks.


00:44:166 (1,2) - A little too close for comfort, but it's up to you. Okay, spaced it out a bit
00:51:833 (3,5) - ^ ^



I don't have the time to mod Insane, and I can't mod ctb, so that's about it from me.
The map has potential, good luck!

Yuthuil wrote:

I literally jumped when I saw Jinx staring at me in the BG Sorry about that :/

General: Imo the combo colours are annoying since most players play with background 100% dimmed so then they cant see the approach circles

Normal:

you can't change distance snap halfway through normal :/

00:05:833 (1,2) - almost touch the hp bar and the approach circles are out of screen - this only matters in normal Oh, okay thanks!
00:10:499 (3) - spacing error Ew, why was that even like that.
00:13:833 (1) - distance snap Seemed to have solved that, not entire sure however.
00:16:499 (2) - too low, in normal the slider follow circle should not go out of the screen Fixed that, had to do a bit of re-arrangement for that.
00:19:166 (1) - distance snap Did that
00:20:166 (2) - you might want to curve this around the previous object better, since it's such a close blanket the mistake sticks out sorely ? i thought it was okay...?
00:21:833 (1) - touches the score numbers Does it? Doesn't on my end.
00:22:833 (2) - distance snap Fixed
00:32:833 (2,4) - too low I hope that is better.
00:34:833 (1,2,3,4) - form a square shape? Ha, two birds, one stone.
00:52:499 (3) - better flow with ctrl + j Oops, thank you.
01:44:500 (1,2) - try to blanket Change the slider to make it a little easier. I don't know if it was successful.
01:47:166 (1,3) - make them on the same x coordinate Did you mean y co-ordinate? Cause x seems a little weird.
01:51:166 (3) - better with ctrl + j

sorry for being an ass with all the hp bar stuff, but it's unrankable if you dont fix ;_;
Not an ass by any chance! I greatly appreciate the feed back!! You picked up things i would NEVER have seen.

Hard:

at least ar 7.5 :/ even better - 8 ! I was reluctant to do so... but i changed to 7.5

00:17:166 (2) - make the red node right in the middle - looks more neat Ahh, that's better.
00:27:833 (2,3) - stack properly Fixed
00:29:499 (1) - I have concerns that this is too low? Fixed
00:32:166 (1) - better flow with ctrl + j, h and g Yup
00:36:999 (6,7,8,9) - make this more neat Whaa not sure how i can make that neater. Tried anyway
00:48:833 (2,2) - maybe a little too close to the slider Done
00:51:833 (3,5) - copy one of the other, it looks more neatFixed
01:17:833 (1,2,3) - spacing error...i think Yes, fixed.

Insane:

00:36:833 (3,4) - ugly overlap Done
00:51:333 (3,6) - stack properly Done
00:52:833 (5,1) - ugly overlap Fixed
00:55:499 (3,5) - if you copy 5 of 3 it will look neater I at least tried to...
00:57:166 (4,2) - overlap Fixed
00:59:833 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:40:499 (2,5) - not stacked properly or done on purpose Fixed

overall: nice mapset, but you can improve just a bit