From my modding queue ~
[General]
[General]
- No issues found.
- 00:14:158 (3) - Add whistle at sliderstart.
- 00:20:845 (1) - Move slider a bit to the right so it does not overlap with the previous one. http://puu.sh/cN01n/1c840b4d0e.jpg
- 00:33:134 (1,2,3,1) - This really is just preference, but maybe keep the rhythm simple here by just setting beats at the white ticks? http://puu.sh/cNRrM/23c5d37338.jpg
- 00:36:568 (2,3) - Would be nice if you keep stacks away from easy diffs for better readability, as this diff is addressed to the very new osu! players. Stacks shouldn't appear before normal diffs I think.
- 00:45:785 (2) - Make this end on the next white tick? Sounds a bit strange to end it on the current one and makes the flow somewhat choppy.
- 00:58:797 (1) - Same as above.
- 01:01:688 (1) - End on the previous white tick already, it goes better with the cymbal here.
- I believe these 3/2 beat gaps are somewhat hard to play for new players, so try to minimize them maybe. Otherwise, pretty neat diff.
- 00:05:122 (3,1) - You could stack this if you want.
- 00:53:737 (2) - Maybe switch the clap HS with a whistle HS instead, 3 claps in a row sounds a bit excessive.
- 01:07:110 (5,1) - Please blanket properly. kdplsthxbye
- Didn't find any serious issue here, everything's pretty polished already. Nice job.
- 00:01:508 (2) - Better switch this with two circles as this is an unnecessary offbeat slider.
- 00:17:231 (1) - The NC looks a bit irregular at these parts, maybe delete this and the following ones? 00:19:580 (1) - 00:22:472 (1) -
- 00:23:014 (2,3,4,5) - Can make a diamond pattern here? http://puu.sh/cNU1i/143c7d582a.jpg
- 00:29:158 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
- 00:29:881 (5,1) - NC at 5 already, as you set NC after every stanza. Same at 00:31:508 (5) -
- 00:35:303 (1,2) - NC at 2 and not on 1, as that's the point where the tone of the song changes.
- 00:37:472 (1) - and 00:38:194 (3) - Add clap HS here.
- 00:50:664 (2) - Better stack this on the next slider instead of slider 1, as it's easier to read and goes well with 00:51:206 (4,1) - too
- 00:54:279 (4,1) - Have you considered a blanket in here?
- 01:03:134 (5,1) - NC on 5 already, not on 1
- 01:26:086 (5,1) - Same as above.
- Mostly minor issues, the NC placement is a bit strange to me at times.
- I generally find your combos a bit too long, might be a good idea to set NC after every stanza already. Especially for patterns like 00:21:929 (3,4,5) - this is quite useful.
- 00:13:616 (3) - Put this at the previous red tick, as it goes better with the vocal and you seem to set your focus on it.
- 00:27:170 (1) - and 00:30:423 (2) - Delete these circles. This is a calm part, so it'd be nice if you would lower the pressure a bit as well.
- 00:33:857 (3,4) - Ctrl+g and reposition? I find this to go really well with the bass in the background.
- 00:57:170 (5) - There's such a strong beat at the end of this slider which should be clickable, why not switch this with 2 circles?
- 01:05:122 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, goes better with the vocal?
- 01:21:568 (8,9) - Ctrl+g, as I feel you need a strong beat at 01:21:929 - for the 'new section' of the song.
- Nice flow and jumps.
- 00:20:845 (4) - NC here already?
- 00:58:255 (2,3) - Ctrl+g, goes better with the vocal.
- 01:03:857 (3,4) - Same as above.
- 01:06:387 (2,3,4) - This is a bit suboptimal because of these two non-fitting offbeat sliders imo. Maybe try this out: http://puu.sh/cNXuT/d1d9f9f8d1.jpg
- 01:10:905 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
- 01:19:941 (4) - Switch with a 1/2 slider instead to go better with the vocal? It's not like the music is actually stopping here, both the vocal and bg instruments can be heard at 01:20:122 - . You can consider this for the Insane diff as well if you want.
- Again, neat flow and jumps, but there were some offbeat sliders which don't go well with the music/vocal lead for me (the ones I mentioned above). Please consider them, otherwise a really fun map to play.