Sakura wrote:

Sorry for being late, from my modding queue.

[litoluna's Normal]

00:01:688 (2,3) - I disagree with this, at 1/2 and this distance it looks kinda cramped and could trip new players.
keep it,add easy diff
00:04:580 (2,3) - ^
00:07:472 (2,3) - ^
00:42:170 (2,3,4) - Eh i think this is a bit too complex.
fixed

It feels fine in general, I think Normal needs a bit of toning down tho, oh and please include the video on all the difficulties, Good Luck!

1. No issues found.

1. 00:14:158 (3) - Add whistle at sliderstart.
2. 00:20:845 (1) - Move slider a bit to the right so it does not overlap with the previous one. http://puu.sh/cN01n/1c840b4d0e.jpg
3. 00:33:134 (1,2,3,1) - This really is just preference, but maybe keep the rhythm simple here by just setting beats at the white ticks? http://puu.sh/cNRrM/23c5d37338.jpg
4. 00:36:568 (2,3) - Would be nice if you keep stacks away from easy diffs for better readability, as this diff is addressed to the very new osu! players. Stacks shouldn't appear before normal diffs I think.
5. 00:45:785 (2) - Make this end on the next white tick? Sounds a bit strange to end it on the current one and makes the flow somewhat choppy.
6. 00:58:797 (1) - Same as above.
7. 01:01:688 (1) - End on the previous white tick already, it goes better with the cymbal here.
8. I believe these 3/2 beat gaps are somewhat hard to play for new players, so try to minimize them maybe. Otherwise, pretty neat diff.

1. 00:05:122 (3,1) - You could stack this if you want.
2. 00:53:737 (2) - Maybe switch the clap HS with a whistle HS instead, 3 claps in a row sounds a bit excessive.
3. 01:07:110 (5,1) - Please blanket properly. kdplsthxbye
4. Didn't find any serious issue here, everything's pretty polished already. Nice job.

1. 00:01:508 (2) - Better switch this with two circles as this is an unnecessary offbeat slider.
2. 00:17:231 (1) - The NC looks a bit irregular at these parts, maybe delete this and the following ones? 00:19:580 (1) - 00:22:472 (1) -
3. 00:23:014 (2,3,4,5) - Can make a diamond pattern here? http://puu.sh/cNU1i/143c7d582a.jpg
4. 00:29:158 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
5. 00:29:881 (5,1) - NC at 5 already, as you set NC after every stanza. Same at 00:31:508 (5) -
6. 00:35:303 (1,2) - NC at 2 and not on 1, as that's the point where the tone of the song changes.
7. 00:37:472 (1) - and 00:38:194 (3) - Add clap HS here.
8. 00:50:664 (2) - Better stack this on the next slider instead of slider 1, as it's easier to read and goes well with 00:51:206 (4,1) - too
9. 00:54:279 (4,1) - Have you considered a blanket in here?
10. 01:03:134 (5,1) - NC on 5 already, not on 1
11. 01:26:086 (5,1) - Same as above.
12. Mostly minor issues, the NC placement is a bit strange to me at times.

1. I generally find your combos a bit too long, might be a good idea to set NC after every stanza already. Especially for patterns like 00:21:929 (3,4,5) - this is quite useful.
2. 00:13:616 (3) - Put this at the previous red tick, as it goes better with the vocal and you seem to set your focus on it.
3. 00:27:170 (1) - and 00:30:423 (2) - Delete these circles. This is a calm part, so it'd be nice if you would lower the pressure a bit as well.
4. 00:33:857 (3,4) - Ctrl+g and reposition? I find this to go really well with the bass in the background.
5. 00:57:170 (5) - There's such a strong beat at the end of this slider which should be clickable, why not switch this with 2 circles?
6. 01:05:122 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, goes better with the vocal?
7. 01:21:568 (8,9) - Ctrl+g, as I feel you need a strong beat at 01:21:929 - for the 'new section' of the song.
8. Nice flow and jumps.

1. 00:20:845 (4) - NC here already?
2. 00:58:255 (2,3) - Ctrl+g, goes better with the vocal.
3. 01:03:857 (3,4) - Same as above.
4. 01:06:387 (2,3,4) - This is a bit suboptimal because of these two non-fitting offbeat sliders imo. Maybe try this out: http://puu.sh/cNXuT/d1d9f9f8d1.jpg
5. 01:10:905 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
6. 01:19:941 (4) - Switch with a 1/2 slider instead to go better with the vocal? It's not like the music is actually stopping here, both the vocal and bg instruments can be heard at 01:20:122 - . You can consider this for the Insane diff as well if you want.
7. Again, neat flow and jumps, but there were some offbeat sliders which don't go well with the music/vocal lead for me (the ones I mentioned above). Please consider them, otherwise a really fun map to play.

Pho wrote:

From my modding queue ~

[iMage's Hard]

1. 00:01:508 (2) - Better switch this with two circles as this is an unnecessary offbeat slider. no problem this slider for me. keep
2. 00:17:231 (1) - The NC looks a bit irregular at these parts, maybe delete this and the following ones? 00:19:580 (1) - 00:22:472 (1) - no change
3. 00:23:014 (2,3,4,5) - Can make a diamond pattern here? http://puu.sh/cNU1i/143c7d582a.jpg fixed
4. 00:29:158 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket fixed
5. 00:29:881 (5,1) - NC at 5 already, as you set NC after every stanza. Same at 00:31:508 (5) - no change
6. 00:35:303 (1,2) - NC at 2 and not on 1, as that's the point where the tone of the song changes. fixed
7. 00:37:472 (1) - and 00:38:194 (3) - Add clap HS here. fixed
8. 00:50:664 (2) - Better stack this on the next slider instead of slider 1, as it's easier to read and goes well with 00:51:206 (4,1) - too fixed
9. 00:54:279 (4,1) - Have you considered a blanket in here? fixed
10. 01:03:134 (5,1) - NC on 5 already, not on 1 no change
11. 01:26:086 (5,1) - Same as above. ^
12. Mostly minor issues, the NC placement is a bit strange to me at times. My NC style is for vocal basically. so there are vocal-accent with NC. so no change some points.

That's all from me, good luck with this mapset to get ranked! /o/

Pho wrote:

From my modding queue ~

[General]

1. No issues found.

[Normal]

1. 00:05:122 (3,1) - You could stack this if you want.
2. 00:53:737 (2) - Maybe switch the clap HS with a whistle HS instead, 3 claps in a row sounds a bit excessive.
   umm,no changed
3. 01:07:110 (5,1) - Please blanket properly. kdplsthxbye
4. Didn't find any serious issue here, everything's pretty polished already. Nice job.

That's all from me, good luck with this mapset to get ranked! /o/

1. Nice mapset

1. 00:49:399 (3,1) - Avoid stacking here? Try this instead~
   
   
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2. 00:53:014 (1,1) - Stack with x:280 y:179
3. 01:32:411 - May be hard because the next Slider 1 shows after Slider 2 ends.

1. 00:37:291 (4) - Slightly curve this slider.
2. 00:42:170 (2,3,4) - Try to avoid grouping these objects, it was somewhat confusing when I played it. Because the pattern is not symmetrical with the Y-axis, I also suggest that you make Slider 4 a straight slider to add diversity.
3. 00:59:520 (3,4) - I personally find this to play better with an 180 degree rotation (compared to the reflection over the Y-axis).
   
   

1. Nice diff, but on 01:44:520 (3,4) - I felt like the ending would have a larger jump due to the emphasis in the song. Try to increase the Distance Snap a bit. This will also help the map be consistent with Insane / Dream. I personally prefer the DS at 2.00x.

1. 00:25:544 (1,5) - It would have a nice effect if you curve these sliders.
   
   
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2. 00:50:845 (3,1) - x:328 y:144? Unless you did this intentionally.
3. 01:33:134 (9,1) - Personal preference, but I would also curve the slider here. It is the emphasis of the insturmental change IMO.
   
   

1. 01:30:243 (5,1) - Fix the stack here. You may need to re-draw the slider because of osu! bug.

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi m4m

[iMage]

1. Nice diff, but on 01:44:520 (3,4) - I felt like the ending would have a larger jump due to the emphasis in the song. Try to increase the Distance Snap a bit. This will also help the map be consistent with Insane / Dream. I personally prefer the DS at 2.00x. this is symmetry pattern. so I don't want to change. keep

Rank soon

1. 01:43:616 - The hits for the first few notes sound too loud; should move the 70% section to 01:44:158 to better fit the music and lower 01:43:616 to around 50%

1. 01:44:339 (1) - Sounds better to start at 01:44:158 so you capture all the last notes.

1. 00:20:484 (3,4) - This flows more naturally:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:387 (2) - You should move this to to 00:36:206 or delete and start a 1/2 slider at 00:36:206 since there's no good reason to ignore the vocal there and map an almost silent note at the current location (while ignoring the same sound at 00:36:749). Or just delete it and only follow the piano.
3. 00:39:098 - Similar to ^

1. 00:26:990 - This is a strong downbeat and vocal so it's better off without the slider ending on it. I suggest swapping 00:26:809 (5,1) - so the circle is first and the slider after.
2. 00:32:773 - Similar to ^, shouldn't ignore the downbeat since there's a sound on it.
3. 00:46:508 (5,6) - Also should swap these since 00:46:688 - 00:46:869 - 00:47:050 are equivalent vocals so they can all be covered by the repeat slider while 00:46:508 isn't a vocal so it can have the circle.
4. 01:04:219 (4) - Plays a bit awkwardly. Maybe it's the distance or the near-180° change in angle, try this with 01:04:219 (4,1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:15:965 (4,1) - Also feels strange while playing. Ctrl-G on (1) or moving (4) to around 300, 344 should make it better.
6. 01:32:231 (6,7) - Rotate (7) counter-clockwise some so the circle flows smoothly into the slider's curve.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:15:423 (1) - Give it a tiny bit of upwards facing curve to assist with the transition between it and the objects around it.
2. 00:31:508 (2) - This clap sounds out of place since it's not in the music. Also 00:31:688 (3) - has an identical sound but doesn't have the clap.
3. 00:58:074 (1,2,3) - 2 circles followed a slider would make more sense so you have a keypress on every drum hit as well as both vocals.
4. 01:06:387 (2,3,4,5) - Why not just use all 1/2 sliders that start on the white ticks for the same reason as ^, so you follow the vocals and claps without sliders ending on them.

xxdeathx wrote:

I decided to mod this but never got around to it >.<

It'll be soon tm

So this and clover days look like the two games Snowwhite was advertising on his profile...they both look so moe, I feel like I want to play them if they had English translations available :/

[Hard]

1. 00:20:484 (3,4) - This flows more naturally:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:387 (2) - You should move this to to 00:36:206 or delete and start a 1/2 slider at 00:36:206 since there's no good reason to ignore the vocal there and map an almost silent note at the current location (while ignoring the same sound at 00:36:749). Or just delete it and only follow the piano.
3. 00:39:098 - Similar to ^

That video was somewhat amusing.

Good luck!

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[Easy]

1. 00:03:857 (1) - it sounds a little weird to me, try this? http://puu.sh/de3uS/575061418e.jpg I think that rhythm is too hard because of 3/2 beat spacing into two consecutive offbeats. I think it will be difficult for beginners to understand that rhythm, and the beat on 00:04:761 is weaker, so I don't want to put a circle there.
2. 00:55:905 (1) - add a finish at head? ok, added. Added to all of my own diffs.
3. 01:13:255 (1) - why not extend to 01:13:978 - ? The end is matching with the piano sound. I think that rhythm is fun to play.
4. 01:20:303 (2) - this sounds better to me: http://puu.sh/de6dT/2c5c6d2775.jpg You're right. Fixed.

[Insane]

1. 00:41:990 (3) - whistle at end instead of clap here sounds better to me The current hitsound matches the drums in the music better, so I prefer to keep it.
2. 00:45:062 (4) - ^ ^
3. 01:44:881 (1) - just a presonal advice, NC? I prefer no NC, since it is part of the same phrase, and especially here, since it is stacked under another object, it's important to have the follow points for better readability.

[Dream]

1. 00:42:170 - remove clap to keep consistency as 00:36:387 - ,since the clap here is really week This is same has Insane.
2. 00:56:989 (7,8) - I recommend not to stack here, just put 8 away from 7 to keep a jump among 6,7,8,9 is better. Ok, I changed the pattern for this.
3. 01:24:279 (4) - stack this with 3? ok.
4. 01:44:881 (7) - same suggestion in Insane. Same.

poke me later

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[iMage's Hard]

1. od 5.0 is a bit low in the thread, I recommend you to rise to od 5.5 ok :3
2. 00:20:845 (4,5) - yey stack prefectly plz~ fixed
3. 00:41:990 (2) - remove the clap at end? i can listen snare sound, and other diffs also has clap. so i want to put clap

poke me later

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[litoluna's Normal]

1. 00:36:387 (2) - why there is a clap? I cant hear it from the song.
   really? this point ,hiting snare sounds
2. 00:42:170 (2) - Although here can be a clap, it's too week. I recommend to remove this clap.
   umm. no change.
3. 00:36:568 (3) - whistle on the end instead?
   I think not fit bass drums sound. this point ,not bass drum sound.
4. 00:39:459 (3) - ^
   same as 00:36:568 (3) -
5. 00:47:953 (2,3) - same as above
   same as 00:36:387 (2) -

poke me later

Minakami Yuki wrote: