1. Hard (2,66 stars, 201 notes)
2. Insane (4,09 stars, 303 notes)
3. Normal (1,77 stars, 132 notes)

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  00:59:678 (3) - этот слайдер предлагаю сократить и сделать ещё под него сёркл ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008482 )
  01:05:907 - 01:06:613 - заполни пространство ,три сёркала подойдут ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008551 )
  02:02:175 - слушай,сюда кстати можно сунуть сёркл ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008463 )

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  00:44:177 - мб сёркл?
  00:52:019 (7) - стакнешь со слайдером 00:52:383 (1) -
  00:58:949 (3) - тоже может стакнешь со слайдером 00:59:313 (4) - (или ты это специально делал?)
  01:00:955 - может сделаешь circle ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008690 )
  01:02:231 (2) - стак ин слайдер т/т
  01:15:747 (1,2,3,4) - странное место ,так как дальше ты делаешь совсем по иному! 02:14:232 (3,4,5,6) - как здесь например(странно!)

• 
  я тут я просто в ауте(без обид,я просто сложные диффы не очень понимаю)

Gordon123 wrote:

Hello~
[Normal]

• 
  00:59:678 (3) - этот слайдер предлагаю сократить и сделать ещё под него сёркл Да, сделал
  01:05:907 - 01:06:613 - заполни пространство ,три сёркала подойдут нет, это неранкабильно ;_;
  02:02:175 - слушай,сюда кстати можно сунуть сёркл cлабоват бит, пока не буду, может потом

[Hard]

• 
  00:44:177 - мб сёркл? по белым тикам вокалы и сильные биты, если я замапаю красный, то звучать будет уныло
  00:52:019 (7) - стакнешь со слайдером 00:52:383 (1) - они стакнуты. Игра все равно их анстакнет, а так они хоть выглядят интересно.
  00:58:949 (3) - тоже может стакнешь со слайдером 00:59:313 (4) - (или ты это специально делал?) аналогично
  01:00:955 - может сделаешь circle ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008690 ) давай
  01:02:231 (2) - стак ин слайдер т/т это и есть стак.
  01:15:747 (1,2,3,4) - странное место ,так как дальше ты делаешь совсем по иному! 02:14:232 (3,4,5,6) - как здесь например(странно!) там другой паттерн и даже скорость слайдеров. но да, этот выделяется. Вообще, мне нравится этот паттерн и вписывается он неплохо. Если ещ будут придираться, поменяю.

[Christmas]

• 
  я тут я просто в ауте(без обид,я просто сложные диффы не очень понимаю) ничего страшного o/

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Для этой мапы,так что доведи её до конца!
Good Luck

Shadren wrote:

Так, я делал его ещё со вчера, и не обращал внимания на мод Gordon123. Так что, будь осторожен.
[box=Мод][General]

1. Preview time забыл.
2. Думаю, ты не хочешь резать мп3 , просто у тебя в сумме 38% трека не используется (а с конца 19.9 (будто точно попал))
3. Во вкладке Design ещё посмотри, я просто не знаю, нужно ли это или нет.
4. Alternative в теги ещё можно.
5. Теги посмотри, либо твоя задумка, либо ты упустил. В Christmas есть теги, которых нет в других диффах.

[Normal]

1. OD + 0,3~0,5
2. Можно ещё CS 3,3 Я бы и рад, но настройки поставлены с расчетом на то, что это самая легкая дифа мапсета.
3. 00:49:101 (3,1,2) - ^ симметрия убъется ;_;
4. 01:15:379 (1) - попытайся его поставить так, чтобы флоу был более закруглённым но я люблю прямые линии с флоу \w/
5. 02:11:305 (1,3,4) - Может придать им немного наклона? прямые \w/

[Hard]

1. На мой взгляд слишком быстрый SV на киаях а мне кажется в самый раз, песня сама по себе очень просит хардкора
2. 01:37:668 (1,2) - может заменить начало слайдера на сёркл, а его хвост и (2) на слайдер? мне нравится, как он тут звучит, пока оставлю ;_;
3. 02:03:997 (1) - я тут пока слайдер слушал, заметил, что либо слайдер не так стоит, либо оффсет/bpm другой. Прислушайся тайминг, скорее всего. потом поковыряю

[Christmas]
[list]
[*]OD+1? Мсье садист
[*]00:55:301 (1,3) - blanket? подправил где смог
[*]02:23:012 - Чё тут пусто то? D:

1. Тут как бы, это самое. У тебя чуть больше минуты неиспользованного мп3 ~40 сек в начале и 30 в конце. Было бы неплохо убрать и начало и конец. Если ну ОЧЕНЬ хочешь оставить начало, то конец обрежь и сделай затухание где-то после спиннера. Там повторяется почти одна и та же мелодия, нет смысла оставлять концовку.

1. 00:49:465 (1,2) - All blankets should be fixed, you know.
2. 01:11:356 (1) - Не совсем понимаю, зачем тут НК. Ну правда, в нем нет смысла.

1. 01:18:692 (3) - Прослеживается асимметрия. Fix that, please o/
2. Lemme help you with NCs:
   01:50:834 - add, 01:52:298 (1) - delete,01:53:954 (3) - add, 02:11:305 (5) - add, 02:12:769 (1) - delete, 02:14:232 - add, 02:20:451 - add, 02:21:549 (1) - delete, 02:23:012 - add, 02:24:110 (1) - delete
3. 02:54:117 - сюда можно влепить серкл с антиджампом, как ты делал раньше, слишком пусто.

1. 01:35:473 (7) - Почему бы не ctrl+g? По флоу лучше пойдет.
2. 01:44:997 (1,2,1) - Может, сделать тут одинаковое расстояние?
3. 02:11:305 (3,4) - Вот этот бланкет просто не могу не упомянуть :3
4. НК стафф:
   02:09:842 (1) - delete, 02:11:305 - add, 02:12:769 (1) - delete, 02:14:232 - add, 02:18:622 (1) - delete, 02:20:086 - add, 02:21:549 - delete

AlexaBM wrote:

It's my #666 post. It needs a cool banner, I guess \o3o/


Привет, Саша!

[General]

1. Тут как бы, это самое. У тебя чуть больше минуты неиспользованного мп3 ~40 сек в начале и 30 в конце. Было бы неплохо убрать и начало и конец. Если ну ОЧЕНЬ хочешь оставить начало, то конец обрежь и сделай затухание где-то после спиннера. Там повторяется почти одна и та же мелодия, нет смысла оставлять концовку. Интро может быть любым, а в конце нужно заканчивать где-то за 80%. У меня 80,1% так что все ранкабильно. Место жрет, да, но яхочу, чтоб песня была именно такой и имею право на это

[Normal]

1. 00:49:465 (1,2) - All blankets should be fixed, you know. У кого-то руки неоттуда, проблема в ассиметричности слайдера. А это мне не в силу пофиксить /shrugs
2. 01:11:356 (1) - Не совсем понимаю, зачем тут НК. Ну правда, в нем нет смысла. Там стоит линия, такого же цвета, как и эта фраза. А значит, там смен БПМ. О ней я предупреждаю поставив НК

[Hard]

1. 01:18:692 (3) - Прослеживается асимметрия. Fix that, please o/ I TRIED SO HARD
2. Lemme help you with NCs:
   01:50:834 - add, 01:52:298 (1) - delete,01:53:954 (3) - add, 02:11:305 (5) - add, 02:12:769 (1) - delete, 02:14:232 - add, 02:20:451 - add, 02:21:549 (1) - delete, 02:23:012 - add, 02:24:110 (1) - delete fixed 'em all o/
3. 02:54:117 - сюда можно влепить серкл с антиджампом, как ты делал раньше, слишком пусто. перед внезапным "взрывом" оставляю затишье для усиления эффекта

[Christmas]

1. 01:35:473 (7) - Почему бы не ctrl+g? По флоу лучше пойдет. Конечно.
2. 01:44:997 (1,2,1) - Может, сделать тут одинаковое расстояние? Там разница х0,01 ;_;
3. 02:11:305 (3,4) - Вот этот бланкет просто не могу не упомянуть :3 Мяу, исправил.
4. НК стафф:
   02:09:842 (1) - delete, 02:11:305 - add, 02:12:769 (1) - delete, 02:14:232 - add, 02:18:622 (1) - delete, 02:20:086 - add, 02:21:549 - delete поправил

Собственно, все :3 Удачи, ghbyw o/ ghbywtccf!

Asagi wrote:

Im gonna mod this because Bakari is baka o3o

[Christmas]

1. 01:04:055 (1) - i dont like that you skip the drum roll here 01:05:907 - it feels weird for some reason ,try to reduce the spinner until 01:05:555 (1) - and add 1/3 sliders like this. I did something else here, but the main idea was to stress the vocals
2. 02:21:915 (4,5,6) - how bout speeding them up? it fits well because of the high pitch vocals I sorta love how the slowdown gets a little forced here, it matches better with the vocals, imo

[Hard]

1. 01:12:414 - how about adding circle here? the gap between 01:11:356 (1,1) - is kinda long and it feels empty but there is a rhythm there I did it to give some recovery time and stress the upcoming part of the vocals
2. 02:54:117 - add note here then add finish hitsound too? not sure if the hitsound fits I'll consider that \w/

Almost perfect, but the hitsound is incomplete on the last half ;w;

I checked normal and i cant point out anything ;w; how2map

Sorry for the poor mod, hope it helps
Merry Christmas o3o

Kazuya wrote:

Hi \o It's only Ideas.

[Insane]

Use AR: 9, and CS 4 >_<

00:44:906 (4,1,2,3,4) - Okay. I think, please follow the vocal: Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dDqJQ/b6f0ea70b0.jpg
Use this similar, because the vocal stronger! I did change this one but in another way

00:48:371 (3,4,5) - Same as above. I think, please follow the vocal, because the vocal stronger! Timeline example: sorry, I'll keep this one. I really love the rhythm here for some reason.

00:50:742 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. Vocal is stronger! ^-^; okay \w/

02:02:543 (1) - Please, map drums. :3
02:25:939 (1) - ^ I am not really interested in long 1/3 streams/slider-streams, so the spinner here would work better in these cases, I believe


[Hard]

Use AR: 7, and OD 6 okay, OD is set to 6. I'll keep the AR for the sake of balance, though.

00:44:906 (5,1,2,3,4) - Same as insane. Please, follow the vocal. :3 I'd rather focus on the music as it provides more regular rhythm >.<

00:49:465 (1) - I think move slider here: 00:49:283 - , and change slider end here: 00:49:648 - Timeline example:

http://puu.sh/dDr7Z/4e70e8c993.jpg Because vocal start here: 00:49:283 - Currently conception is bad, and weird. yeah, I got the point, but I'd rather follow the insturuments here, sorry.

^-^;
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00:50:195 (3) - I think, please, remove reverse, and put 1/1 slider here: 00:50:742 - , and remove 00:51:107 (4) - isn't it the same as above? I guess that's somewhat similar so I'll go on with the same rhythm

circle. Timeline: http://puu.sh/dDrck/d037fdffb7.jpg

00:51:654 (6) - Move slider here: 00:51:471 - , and put 1/2 slider here: 00:51:836 - , and remove 00:52:019 (7) -

circle. Timeline: http://puu.sh/dDrfR/5a89452dcf.jpg

I think my suggestion is good, because this vocal is stronger. Please follow the vocal. :3 Use this similar. vocals are strong, indeed. However, I'd prefer to keep the rhythm as it is because of the instruments @.@ sorry
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00:53:660 (3,4,5) - Same as above. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dDrk4/d3fa339e5a.jpg
00:57:125 (5,6) - Same as above. Timeline example: http://puu.sh/dDrmk/90acf0ccfe.jpg
00:59:313 (4,5) - Same as aove. Map the vocal. >_< same as above ;_;

01:49:005 (4,5) - Follow the vocal, please. :3 Don't use 1/3 here, because this vocal is stronger! Timeline: yup, 1/3 wasn't working well there. replaced it with 1/1, though.

02:15:695 (1) - I think, spinner is not fit here. Please, map the drums. Use reverse sliders.
02:25:939 (1) - ^ that's my way of mapping the drumrolls in the musing. I'll think about changing them, but I am afraid that the balance will be ruined. :c

[Normal]

Use AR5. I think better, and this song is 160 BPM. but that's the easiest diff + it has lots of long sliders, let's keep it this way

02:54:891 (1) - This spinner is not too long/tiring? Change spinner start here: 02:59:391 - and end here: 03:00:891 nah, I think it's fine. the spinner isn't too long, anyway

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Sorry, good. x'D

Good Luck!

1. AR9 would be nice. A lot of your fast-paced patterns call for it imo especially with the abundance of 1/3 patterns

1. 01:22:328 (3) - I can find this being an issue, since the slider repeats quite a bit and its kind of long players might get lost trying to follow it and end up dropping combo. Adding a curve to the slider will clear it up tbh

1. You might wanna add the Kiais in Normal and Hard too, and in Chrimstas the third one is really weirdly placed ^^
2. The Claps are rather inconsistent in all diffs, pointing them all out would be a lot of work, just go through it with lowered music-volume and see for yourself ^^Also, just an idea, maybe add Finishes on all the upbeats starting from 02:41:087 until 02:51:406 -?

1. 00:50:897 (2,3) - You barely have any 2/1-gaps at all across the map and this one feels especially weird, how about moving it one 1/1 earlier, and maybe even extending it to 2/1?
2. 01:06:948 (1,2) - The lower anchor is notably off the slidertick, dunno if you want to fix that ^^
3. 01:15:007 (3,1,2) - Since you didn't space things uneven like that anywhere else you should fix that one too, it's actually more than just x0,06 difference since the section that starts at (2) is lower bpm
4. 01:21:593 (1,2) - Mapping those exactly the same kinda takes away the 'specialness' of the 1/3s at (2), so I'd make (1) a 1/1 and maybe even add a circle between 01:18:676 (1,1) so the break is more emphasized (I hope you understand what I mean lol)
5. 01:24:516 (1,2,3) - Again I kinda dislike the inconsistent 2/1-gaps, you didn't map 01:27:451 (1,2,3) like that which feels imbalanced to me : \
6. 01:36:190 (1,2,1) - Imo this would flow better if you put (2) down at y:361
7. 02:16:770 - I feel like adding a note here would fit the buildup in the song
8. 02:50:214 (1,2) - Swapping those rhythmic-wise would make more sense I think

1. The beginning section not being 1/3 feels so off lol - I feel like some parts could focus better on the vocals to make it feel less awkward, like swapping 00:53:635 (3,4,5) rhythmic-wise, as well as 00:56:386 (3,4) and 00:56:934 (5,6) -, and 00:49:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) could be more vocal-focused too imo, like having 1/2-sliders start at 00:51:080 and 00:51:445 and maybe leaving 00:49:985 empty instead?
2. 01:06:948 (1,2) - spacing too big lol
3. 01:38:306 (2,3) - 02:24:351 (5,6) - 02:44:545 (3,4) - Just my taste but spacing these out feels very forced to me, those are the only three spaced clickable 1/3s in the whole diff, all other 1/3s are way more comfortable to play as they start with a passive note / slidertail, so I'd suggest stacking these two
4. 01:43:526 (3,4) - Those should be 1/2
5. 01:53:011 (4,1,2) - Those being 1/2s feels really off, stacking (1) above (2) at 01:53:981 would feel way better imo -> Maybe add a note at 01:56:172 too then
6. 02:09:110 (2) - Maybe silence the tail since there's no active note here?
7. 02:14:216 (1,2,3,4) - feels pretty overdone to me, the tail of (2) doesn't snap to anything as the lyrics are on the red tick if anything, so maybe just replace that one with a circle? : \
8. 02:59:404 (1) - end isn't snapped right ^^

1. 01:01:677 - So many 1/2s but not mapping the vocals here? :c
2. 01:06:242 - Since you mapped the other buildups, how about moving 01:06:948 (1,2) to here and mapping something else there? ^^
3. 01:18:676 (1) - WHAT ARE THOSE anchor-points lol - Could you make this more beautiful / at least symmetrical? ^^
4. 01:22:311 (3,4,5) - unusually high-spaced clickable 1/3s o:
5. 01:41:554 (4,5) - whoa you sure about this spacing lol
6. 01:43:526 (6,7,8,9) - Those are 1/2 again, deleting 01:43:403 (5) would be good too I think
7. 01:04:061 (1) and 01:44:998 (1,2,1,2,3,4) are really inconsistent, dunno if you did something with my point about the first buildup but I think they should be rather equal
8. 01:46:471 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make the SV and volume of the first two lower?
9. 02:15:675 (1,2,3) - (2) being offbeat is really weird to play, maybe let (1) end earlier so you can start a slider on the white tick?
10. 02:17:134 (1) - Uh either there's a note missing here or it isn't snapped right ^^

log

16:01 *Bonsai is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/493997 My Chemical Romance - All I Want For Christmas Is You [Hard]]
16:01 Bonsai: 03:45:338 - lololol
16:02 Bakari: did I mess up something?
16:02 Bonsai: sounds like there's half a second of another song at the very end lol
16:02 Bonsai: some weird sound ^^
16:04 Bakari: welp
16:04 Bakari: let's hope it's somewhat made by MCR
16:04 Bonsai: I could just edit the mp3 so it fades out one second earlier if you want ^^
16:06 Bakari: if that won't require offset shifts and stuff \w/
16:07 Bonsai: anyways I timed [http://puu.sh/mo6PV/d68d5e2c1d.txt intro] and [outro http://puu.sh/mo6Sj/7de032c2c5.txt]
16:07 Bonsai: whoops
16:07 Bonsai: uuuh could be that it requires a shift of 30ms because all of my programs are weird
16:09 *Bakari is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/131508 My Chemical Romance - All I Want For Christmas Is You]
16:09 Bakari: same thing happens here, though
16:09 Bonsai: well didn't you steal the mp3 from there? ^^
16:09 Bakari: I did
16:10 Bonsai: then that's not a very valid argument ^^
16:10 Bakari: the thing I'm afraid of
16:10 Bakari: is the need to re-do the whole timing
16:11 Bonsai: nah if I edit it it just shifts, nothing else changes
16:12 Bakari: Then do it, please!
16:12 Bonsai: oki one moment ^^
16:12 Bonsai: should I just apply everything end stuff and send you the .osz? I updated everything one hour ago
16:14 Bakari: Do please ♥
16:26 Bonsai: uh just to be sure, do you have a few AiMod-issues in the Christmas right now too?
16:27 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/QKL9KymR.png
16:27 Bonsai: phew
16:30 Bonsai: oh god the uninheriting timing points-conflict though
16:30 Bonsai: it is kinda impossible to find out what's wrong there
16:30 Bonsai: aaaaaaaaaaaa
16:31 Bakari: just copy 'em all from one diff \w/
16:32 Bonsai: yeah but WHICH ONE IS THE RIGHT ONE AAAAAAAAA
16:32 Bonsai: nvm I stil have my timing-diff
16:32 *Bakari throws a banana at you
16:34 Bonsai: aaaaaa
16:34 Bonsai: http://puu.sh/mo8oM/dd9ccabb26.png
16:37 *Bakari gives a banana
16:37 Bonsai: I don't understand but I'm okay with that
16:39 Bonsai: how does the bottom-timeline of Christmas look for you?
16:39 Bonsai: everything is chaos
16:39 Bonsai: (the Kiais)
16:40 Bakari: I've probably messed them up
16:40 Bonsai: oh
16:40 Bonsai: you
16:40 Bonsai: made the red ones Kiai but not the green ones lol http://puu.sh/mo8Jg/5399d7b37d.png
16:40 Bakari: DON'T BLAME ME
16:40 *Bakari throws another banana
16:40 Bonsai: WHO ELSE IS THERE TO BLAME
16:41 Bakari: PENGUINS
16:41 Bonsai: http://puu.sh/mo8Ll/07afc71acb.png
16:41 Bonsai: WHY IS THERE SUDDENLY EVEN MORE UNSNAPPED NOTES
16:41 Bonsai: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
16:42 Bakari: IT'S THE SPINNERS
16:42 Bonsai: nu-uh weird sliders
16:42 *Bakari sighs
16:43 Bakari: the SV-multipliers
16:43 Bakari: if they get off snapping, sliders go wild
16:43 Bonsai: omg everythinnnnnng
16:44 Bonsai: oh
16:44 Bonsai: the thing with the Kiais
16:44 Bonsai: was me
16:44 Bonsai: whoops
16:44 Bonsai: : )
16:45 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/grqnhqUq.png
16:45 *Bakari throws another banana
16:45 *Bonsai hides underneath all the bananas
16:46 Bakari: ever wondered were all the osu!supporter money go?
16:46 Bakari: we buy bananas and throw them at people
16:46 Bonsai: lol
16:48 Bonsai: I d i d i t
16:48 Bonsai: last thing, where do you want the preview point to be
16:50 Bakari: a little bit earlier than the first kiai hits
16:50 Bakari: 1/2 or 1/3 earlier
17:01 Bonsai: [http://puu.sh/mo9Pp/f34d30935d.osz ヘ（。□°）ヘ]
17:02 Bakari: That was my face when I first saw timings for the map
17:02 Bonsai: the only thing I didn't fix now is the lead-in-thinigy at 01:47:244 - in CHristmas, I didn't even know this was editable lol
17:02 Bonsai: ^_^
17:03 Bonsai: there's a fancy 26bpm-section in the intro now lol
17:03 Bakari: You just take a corner of the break and delay it as much as you want
17:03 Bakari: you can easily edit those in any map, just don't overuse them :p
17:03 Bonsai: oh
17:03 Bonsai: wow
17:03 Bakari: Thank you ♥
17:03 Bonsai: I thought that only works for the beginning
17:04 Bonsai: Seems like I always missed that lol
17:04 Bonsai: but hey I also wanted to say that this pre-Kiai-part is really inconsistent in CHristmas + with the other diffs
17:04 Bonsai: in Hard there's the spinner until 01:47:244 -
17:04 Bonsai: in Normal only until 01:46:526 -
17:05 Bonsai: and in Hard and Christmas it it thus inconsistent with 01:05:592 -
17:06 Bonsai: oh yeah the Kiais in Normal and Hard are still msising whoops sry
17:06 Bakari: inconsistencies are the thing I always feel too lazy to fix, blame it all on my laziness \w/
17:06 Bonsai: lol
17:07 Bonsai: I'm still allowed to blame you for messing the timing points through the diffs anyways >:D
17:07 Bakari: that's mainly because I didn't place them
17:07 Bonsai: nah it's because I copied them from my timing-diff and they weren't there yet
17:08 Bakari: I could simply forget to place those, so it could be me
17:09 Bonsai: whatever ^^