Hiya!
That's all I guess, bye and GL~
[General]
- Filesize is +24mb and the video has audio :/
- Kiai time is using more than 50% of the song, which I think is an overuse. You could finish the first kiai at 01:04:046 - but idk I'm not too sure about this
- Already told this to flutters but I'll write it here jic: the diff gap between hard and insane is huge, but a BAT might say this is okay or something so idk
[Kenterz's Easy]
- 00:30:259 (3,4) - These need a bit more spacing i think. Just compare the spacing between these and 00:29:094 (2,3) -
- 00:36:085 (4) - Same^^
- 00:47:735 (2) - Same^^
- 01:07:541 (3) - Blanket here could be improved if you move the middle node a bit to the right.
- 01:12:201 (3) - Move tail to x8-y168 to make it parallel with 01:09:871 (1) - (not really necesary since they are very far, but meeh.. xD)
- 01:40:162 (3) - Move red node up a little so it blankets better.
- 01:43:657 (2) - Same spacing thing as I mentioned first.
- 01:52:978 (2) - Same^^
- 02:09:288 (4) - Ctrl+J & Ctrl+G for better aesthetics ?? If you do plz be sure to move 02:10:454 (1) - and everything else to the left to keep a good flow.
[Normal]
- 00:09:288 (1,2,3) - Doesn't look better if you make these symmetric? Like 00:37:250 (1,2,3) -
- 00:13:949 (1,2,3) - Same happens here orz...
- 00:20:939 (1) - This shape looks odd. Maybe try moving the red node further to the middle?
- 00:43:366 (3) - Move tail to x304-y368 so it pass exactly through the center of the slider.
- 00:53:560 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle here moving 00:54:725 (3) - to x424-y268.
- 01:02:881 (3) - Move tail to x428-y300.
- 01:07:541 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here plz.
- 01:40:162 (1) - Move it to x408-y156 for perfect triangle.
- 02:02:298 (3,1) - These seems to be quite close. The main problem here is that 02:03:463 (1,2) - can't be moved to the left, so you could try rotating 02:02:298 (3) - anticlockwise and then rearranging the rest. Also if you can make 02:02:298 (3,4,1) - a perfect triangle it would be excelent ^^"
- 02:06:958 (3) - Move red node to x208-y332 and rearrange the tail to make it pass through the slider center.
- 02:20:939 (2,3,1) - These notes can't breathe!! Give them some space dude!! Happens the same lots of times later, so slightly move every note with x1.1 DS :/
[ColdTooth's Hard]
- 00:40:745 (3,1) - Definitely not a good idea. Try this? http://puu.sh/cTqtu/bca6ff6ca9.jpg
- 01:23:269 (1,1) - This surely is strange. Plz try to find an alternative to this.
That's all I guess, bye and GL~