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细细想了一下我感觉还是你这个rank的快, 你这个没视频, modder下载速度比较快
抽了还是不够有经验, 这层问题都没有考虑到, 唉
细细想了一下我感觉还是你这个rank的快, 你这个没视频, modder下载速度比较快
抽了还是不够有经验, 这层问题都没有考虑到, 唉
你说的对 我他妈直接删掉VIDEO RESUBMIT[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
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细细想了一下我感觉还是你这个rank的快, 你这个没视频, modder下载速度比较快
抽了还是不够有经验, 这层问题都没有考虑到, 唉
CerealeKiller wrote:
Hi,
[Easy]
00:50:194 (2,1) - I find that new combo kinda weird 2 downbeat 1 NC
[Normal]
Found nothing to say
[Hard]
00:33:663 (2,3) - Those slider don't really fit to eachother, consider replacing the second one, making a blanket or somethingyes
01:27:235 (1,2) - imo the second slider is too close to the 1styes
[Insane]
00:04:429 (4,1) - The spacing between them may be confusing
00:12:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same, the spacing is barely catchable in sightread
01:16:214 (3,4,5,1,2) - ^I think they all readable and fun
Well that's a such poor mod, I don't know what I expected from modding a bat.
Anyway, GL in further mapping !
tutuhaha wrote:
[Insane]
00:02:286 (5) - ..怎么想都觉得这个note删掉后rhythm比较好
00:04:735 (1) - ^有钢琴音
00:29:990 (2,3) - 这俩放近点比较好感觉对着的问题应该不大
00:33:663 (3,4) - ...ctrl+g..你不觉得换完之后满天飞么
00:48:510 (3,4) - 这个我是真的觉得ctrl+g好一点成吧
01:08:714 (1,2,3) - 感觉好奇怪,总觉得slider应该是从1那个地方开始?有音啊仔细听听
01:19:582 (7,8) - 干脆这个ctrl+g一下!flow一下就乱了
01:28:459 (1) - 最后的这个节奏不对啊.................全部放在蓝线上还正常一点orz!还是没理解你在说啥。。
最近我mod的insane都是"教你怎样用ctrl+g改变人生"
[Hard]
01:27:235 (1,2) - 间距k
01:28:459 (1) - 奇怪啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
00:12:847 (1,2,3) - ..我读不懂这个节奏读不懂这个间距啊...
00:12:541 (x) - 其实从insane我就在想为啥你要miss掉这个节奏...
00:12:541 (x) -
00:13:000 (x) -
00:13:459 (x) -这三个地方下个circle这块的节奏就ok了啊orz
00:15:602 (1) -
00:18:051 (1) - 这俩的NC我觉得其实不太需要跟downbeat加的
00:19:888 (1,2,3) - 莫名的觉得这边搞个跳会更好读怕喷难
00:25:245 (2) - +clap没听见鼓啊。。
00:48:051 (1,2,3) - 这边用NC强调一下好了问题应该不大
00:56:469 (4,1) - 这块还是跟歌词slider放到红线开始比较好
大部分节奏没改,我跟inst多基本不跟vocal
[Normal]
这个normal好难orz
00:25:704 (6) - 这个完全可以删掉
00:43:612 (2) - ^
01:00:755 (2) - 强烈建议删掉
01:15:602 (2) - 太难了还是普普通通的移到这里吧
01:25:092 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这块节奏相对于Normal难度太完整了我觉得orz考虑一下吧
01:29:454 (x) - 哎呦摸到这里我才发觉这块节奏真的是蓝线的最起码你应该要end到这里
我觉得真的不是很难。。应该没什么问题 我再看看别人怎么说吧
[Easy]
00:05:500 (3) - 虽然能懂节奏是从那里开始的但是果然放到这里比较好打没懂。
01:28:459 (3) - 01:29:454 (x) - 哎呦摸到这里我才发觉这块节奏真的是蓝线的最起码你应该要end到这里我觉得蓝线只是延长出来的看到你们那么水深火热我这个V家狗值了
谷子的normal都好难好难好难
koreapenguin wrote:
Yaa M4M
GeneralEasy
- seem first note's start offset is 1521 so add AudioLeadIn: 479 ?will change MP3
- add 'opening' on the tagsdont like
Normal
- Fine to me :3
Hard
- 00:55:704 (2,3) - i don't think so it's match with song D: so how about this ? http://puu.sh/ciLHb/aed729b1de.jpgfollow a little vocal.the whistle hears good isn't it?
- 00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) - omg D: i don't recommend this use on normal also it's high BPM orz. try this I'll consider ,seems sohttp://puu.sh/ciLQP/a9d12bb8be.jpg or change smooth thing :3
- 01:03:051 (2,3) - same here, i feel so it's weird orz^
- 01:18:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) - ; ^ ; imo.same
Insane
- 00:55:398 (1) - add finish on slider head :3k
- 01:27:235 (1,2) - seem ugly D: how about give same distance, like this 01:26:010 (1,2) - 1.35x or 1.3x? :3 ?k
- 00:02:286 (1) - add new combo here? 00:04:735 (1) - same as herenot a big thing I think
- 00:30:602 (4,1) - i think it's so far D: 5.78x orzit's easy to read it's 1/4 and easy for players who can handle insane imo
- 00:49:123 (6,1) - how about give more distance? when do i play that feel so weird to me..hmm//will consider
- 00:55:398 (1) - add finish on slider head :3k
- 00:28:459 (1) - eh... look on slider head you added whistle, and look normal diff D; there is added finish orz i think so you fix itremoved normal's.the song is really hard to hear out.
Hard wrote:
Hello there. I think your mapset is already fine but I want a mod for my map so well... If I don't find much I'll just leave with a few ideas:
EasyNormal
- 00:29:072 (2) - I think the beginning of this slider could use a whistle (or another hitsound) because the singer becomes louder here. Or higher. The sound experience (is that even a thing?) increases a bit so I think you should emphasize this.
00:32:133 (3) - same thing but now do a whistle at the end. It sounds much better, imo!
00:36:112 (1,2,3) - This is just nazi-modding and actually not that important, but I guess you could try to make the gaps between those three the same. Maybe move 2 a bit higher?
00:37:643 (3) - here's that hitsound again I feel is missing. She gets louder and stronger but the map doesn't show this !
00:39:939 (4) - i think the emphasize is at this point you can clearly hear a 'cling' in the background so use a hitfinish herek
00:45:908 (2) - the 'tsu' is the beginning of a shout and also the piano is really louder here so maybe do something about this.
about others ,I want this hitsound fits for taiko mode so no more whistleHard
- 00:29:072 (2) - the same as in easy
00:32:133 (3) - ^
00:33:357 (1,2) - i'm usually not that much of a blanket modder, but this blanket is really unclean. Please use the approach circle and fix it.k
00:34:276 (2) - the start also deserves some hitsound
00:44:378 (4) - ^ (the end)
00:46:214 (2) - ^
00:48:051 (1,2,3) - this could maybe confuse newer players. In this section you started mapping the vocalist and now you suddenlydon't think so change to drums and this could really be not good. It doesn't play to well and you may think about doing something else here. (go with the vocals?)
00:51:725 (4) - hitsound missing again. I don't need to explain myself with this anymore but I'll still point it out because I can. Sorry if this makes you angry. Please don't be angry.
00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) - do a whistle at the end of each slider. The piano is emphasizing on the 2nd note the whole time so you can do it as well. Else this plays awkward.
01:00:908 (3) - hitsound on end again
01:02:745 (1) - ^
01:03:510 (3) - ^
01:29:072 (5) - maybe use a repeating slider instead? this feels wrong because it's neither on the vocals or on the drums. Well it IS on some of the drums but you could nail it with a repeating slider. I think.ok
still.don't want to add too much hitsound in normalInsane
- 00:02:286 (3,4,5) - I think you should strg + g 4 and 5. It's difficult to guess the circles at this point. The flow is okay, but changing 4 and 5 won't destroy it but change the feeling of it. It'll feel like going back and the piano goes back. (Sorry I am not good with explaining myself)dont know what do you mean..
00:04:734 (3,4,5) - ^^
00:29:072 (2) - same as in easyk
00:37:643 (3) - I don't know why but this feels awkwardif you listen carefully,you'll get it
00:42:847 (4) - This slider doesn't fit the feeling of the singer. before she used staccato but now she changed it. I suggest you to break the pattern with this one. Maybe use a forth- and back movement?just simplely 4 sliders one group
01:05:194 (1) - I don't recommend using a repeating slider. Use a single one and place a note on 01:05:653 - simplfy the diff
01:19:888 (1) - ^ same. rather place a note at 01:20:347 - ^
01:27:694 (2) - I think you should distance snap this. this feels awkward. Why is this so near? to 01:27:235 (1) - my mistake
- 00:32:133 (1) - same as in easyk
00:36:265 (2) - ^k
00:38:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you change the combo colour. It's difficult to differ this and the yellow-green tone you got before. Maybe use red? Or something else. But this green isn't a really good idea, imo.hmm not a big problem imo.wll consider
00:41:623 (4) - beginning could use a whistle, you know why.k
00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really enjoy this pattern. Because of the one before this flows really bad. You put in energy and force from before and then you use antijumps and this is a really awkward flow-breakwill see others how to say,I think it's just a little difficult to react
00:50:959 (3) - use a hitsound because of the vocalsno for vocal
This is it I guess. I hope I could help a little bit. If not ignore me q.q. I really enjoyed your map and most I did was hitsounding. I hope something was okay...
kakifly wrote:
m4m
GeneralEasy
- Get a better mp3 (you probably are) since the current one is over 192kps
- Add video (you probably also are getting it...)will do soon
Normal
- 00:01:521 (1) - add whistle on tail? for following the piano since you did at 00:02:592 (2) -
- 00:03:969 (1) - ^k.as^
- 00:22:337 - i suggest mapping this downbeat; i dont see the point in not putting a note heredon't want to map harder..
- 00:25:092 (3,4) - not really sure what you are following here but it doesnt create a little bit of inconsistent rhythm imodrum
- 00:26:929 (2) - maybe make this downbeat clickable? since i dont hear any major sound you are following still drum
- 00:41:929 - add note here? same reason as 00:22:337same
- 00:43:153 (1,2,3) - again i dont get what you are following here, theres nothing too significant in the music so i suggest having a better "flowing' rhythm here
- start a 1/1 slider here 00:51:725 - ? for a constant rhythm thats easier for beginners
- 00:56:623 - add note; theres a clear piano here
- 00:56:929 (2,1,2) - distance is just a tiny bit inconsistent with these notes
- 01:01:521 - again add note; theres a piano here and theres nothing stopping you from mapping this part
- 01:03:969 - ^
- 01:22:337 (1) - add repeat? probably know why since i said a lot lol
- 01:23:561 - add note
- 01:26:010 - ^
errr well..I usually do simple rhythms for drums so it won't be too hard..so no change for those
overall your easy is pretty good and i'm not sure if its just your mapping style but i personally think you should have a more steady rhythm rather than random pauses since it feels awkward; and for beginners once they get the "momentum" of playing the awkward pause and feel really weird if that makes sense...Hard
- 00:26:623 (2,3,4) - distance is a bit inconsistent hereI saw it all 1.0x...anything wrong?
- 00:34:276 (2) - remove whistle; it feels random and out of place
- 00:39:174 (2) - ^
- 00:50:959 (2) - ^hmm..follow the guitar sound
- 00:54:633 - add note here? to emphasize pianodont want to make harder
- 00:55:704 (2) - i think a 2/1 slider can work here too; if you listen carefully you can clear this clicking sound lolhmm keep for now
- 00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) 01:18:663 (4,5,6,7) - - rhythm wise; this is fine but it can be pretty hard for beginners to play; if possible find an simpler way to map this partyes,changed
- 01:03:051 (2,3) - same as 00:55:704 (2)same
- 01:18:051 (1,2,3) - use 1/2 repeat slider here; its much easier to play; and i personally dislike these mainly when using DTk
- 01:22:796 (2) - remove whistlestress vocal
Insane
- 00:06:878 (2) - move this to here 00:07:031 (2) - since theres nothiing to be emphasized at 00:06:878 - err..wrong time point maybe
- 00:09:327 (1,2) - this distance can get a bit confusing since its so different from 00:05:806 (3,4,1) - people might think the notes are 1/1 apartdon't think so
- 00:12:847 (1,2,3,1) - i dont think circles suit this part; the piano is really faintslider will make unnecesarry sound
- 00:13:765 (1,2,3) - maybe do a repeat slider here? because its awkward to hit (2) since its on a red tickdon't like tick appears,and the pattern now is fun imo
- 00:38:255 (1) - remove whistle on tail
- 00:38:867 (3) - ^following guitar
- 00:48:051 (1,2,3) - add clap on head and tail of sliders? (same with normal if you didnt)no need seems
- 00:49:276 (1) - remove this.. it feels weird since its mapped to nothing but the weird sound that creates momentum for the chorushear carefully you'll get sth like a wind sound
- 00:55:857 (2,3) - rhythm feels weird here; maybe ctrl + g 00:55:857 (2,3,4) - don't think so
- 01:14:990 (1,2,1) - spacing here is a bit hard to read especially with HDdon't need to read,just see the ar circle
- 01:27:694 (2) - fix distance herek
good luck ~
- 00:01:674 (2,4) - dont think circles work here; do two 1/2 sliders instead; since the beats on 2 and4 are weak
- 00:03:969 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 00:08:867 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - try some sliders in here; you have too many circles in this area all the way to 00:18:051 (1) - , its only circles so some sliders would be nice
- 00:12:847 (1,2,3,1) - same as hard
- 00:29:990 (2,3,4) - please decrease their distance a bit; they're only 1/4 apart but the distance is way over x2just head-click,enough imo
- 00:49:276 (1) - same as hardsame
- 01:08:714 (1) - 01:08:867 (3) - swap NC's since you changed the SVthe tick shows it's a speed change
- 01:16:827 (1,2) - find somewhere else to put these? idk but imo stacking these makes this part repetitiefun pattern imo
most circle-slider don't change.cuz they will add unnecessary sound
Don wrote:
nice meme
great set
sorry for the big amount of NC
good luck getting this ranked first
[Easy]
00:01:521 (1,2) - Might be quite hard for easy players polarity wise. Not sure how to change, I've tried my fair share of thingsyes maybe,but it's really bad if I follows other sound,in fact there is no other sound.as it's a long time distance so maybe no problem
00:31:214 (2,3) - The flow like this doesn't feel that nice and to be honest, I don't find it too satisfying visually either. Consider a shape like this.the present is enough good imo
01:00:296 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here.k
01:21:418 (4,1) - Please blanket this, this'd fit better.not blanket here
01:27:541 (2,3) - This could be blanketed as well!^
[Normal]
00:30:908 (1,2,3) - Consider a different note placement like I'm suggesting in the box belowI think this enough good
00:33:357 (1) - This should have two white anchors to make the blanket betterk
00:35:041 (4,1) - This is hard to play because of polarity. Consider something else rhythm wisedon't think so//
00:37:031 (3,1) - These notes are supposed to be blanketed right? If so, make them into a nice looking blanket.k
00:48:969 (3,4) - Consider your combo usage here. Followpoints look shit here here.no
00:59:072 (4) - NC because this is a new patternno
01:02:133 (5,1) - Make this into a nice blanketnot going to blanket
01:18:663 (4) - NCno
[Hard]
Tick rate +1
00:33:663 (2,3) - This is ugly, I'd reconsider this pattern in favor of something more visually satisfyingk
00:48:051 (1,2,3) - This overlap is too confusing for a hard, I feel. Consider spreading them out or trying something else.keep for now
00:49:276 (1) - There's no audiocue for this slider. I'd consider removing it.you'll get there is sth like a wind sound if you hear carefully
01:08:867 - You could start a long slider here to accomodate to the long note in the songk
01:14:990 (1,2) - This is unreadable, try changing 1 into a slider so polarity is fineno need to read,just react is enough
01:27:235 (1,2) - I feel like a blanket'd be more fitting herek
[Insane]
00:07:643 (4) - Sloppy spacing on this note. Check the spacing numbers.k
00:24:786 (1) - Make the previous/next spacing more even. I feel like this kills flow.hmmm.ok imo
00:49:276 (1) - This note doesn't really map to anything. See hard.same
00:51:265 (4,5) - Perhaps a blanket here?dont want
00:53:408 (2,3) - ^k
01:05:194 (1,2) - Improve this blanketk
01:07:490 (6) - NC
01:07:643 (1) - Remove NC
01:19:276 (5) - NCI like the present setting
Kibbleru wrote:
m4m pls owo?
[General][Insane]
- Your mp3 is 320kbps
I'm sure you know whats wrong with this.nvm i see that you're getting a new one[Hard]
- 00:22:337 (1) - add whistle here? i think it fits well since its a pretty strong soundk
00:24:786 (1) - ^k- 00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these kinda feel empty without any hitsounds, maybe add some whistles or finish maybe?I don't hear these in music
- 01:18:969 (3,5,7) - how bout adding some nc here? o-o
00:40:245 (4) - ^ maybe here toono need imo- 01:19:735 (8,1) - maybe try to make this jump here bigger to express the finish sound betterhmm..want to keep the pattern here..
- 00:02:286 (5) - NC? for both readability and consistency with 00:04:735 (1) - no need imo
- 00:57:388 (3,1) - nazi blanket could really be better here x.xk
[Normal]
- 00:24:021 - i skipping a note with an antijump is pretty hard to read for a hard diff. this is just my personal opinion but usually this is something you would see in insane and extras. a bit too much for a hard.
00:27:082 - this is better because it is spaced out properly so people can see that it is a 1/1 gapit's a tradition for me to use 1/1 stack in h/i- 01:27:235 (1,2) - uhh spacing o-o?k
[Easy]
- 00:11:316 - you can totally map this out... i don't think you need breaks in tv sizes lolinst in this part is really few..hard to map in easy and normal
- 00:22:643 (4,5) - really awkward rhythm here imo lol try this? feels alot more natural to mewill consider
- 00:55:704 (2,3) - try this rhythm, i think it's better since it doesn't have the awkward gap in betweennot so bad imo
- 00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) - eh... arguably a bit difficult.k
- maybe ar 3.5? i don't think the object density is high enough for ar 4seems a little.keep for now
- 00:11:316 - same as normal :/it's hard to map this part cuz I follow inst
- 00:22:337 - you should map out this downbeat
00:41:929 - ^
00:44:378 - ^ it just feels empty if you don't map these out :/
eh there's alot and i'm not too sure if they're intentional but it really feels awkward when you don't have something on a downbeatI always do easy like this.no problem- 00:22:643 (3) - extend this slider by 1/2 to get that feint crash sound?don't want to skip snare drum
Milan- wrote:
m4m from u q' owo
[Insane][Hard]
- 00:01:980 (4,7) - 00:04:429 (4) - and others - you can make a little jump for those notes. would fit the music. Like you did here 01:12:694 (1,2,3) - want to keep here
- 00:13:765 (1,2,3) - playing it is very awkward, cuz the vocals are too off to the piano, and you can hardly hear it. other DS would be much better imopiano.
- 00:19:888 (1,2) - this deserves a stream or something. feels so empyI think this is the correct way the music shows
- 00:30:296 (3,3) - stack these would be nicedon't want to do so
- 00:47:898 (8,1,2) - this change is very weird imo. while playing, you have in mind that you are changing direction on every note and suddenly it stops doing it and make a weird change. maybe if you not overlap 00:48:204 (2,3) - would be much more readable imo1,2 is still in last pattern.just it happens to seem like intended
- 00:49:276 (1) - it's also weird cuz you were mapping drums and then you follow the vocals. Even a spinner would be much better imo, but it'd be a bit too short maybe ><here comes a wind sound .try to hear carefully
- 01:28:765 - it doesn't need to be mapped at all. anyways as a circle may work better.music has,then I map
- 00:05:041 (3) - this as 2 circles should be better. will fix the NC problem too
- 00:04:735 (1) - cancel NC or add one to 00:02:286 (5) - these two are to mention part change
- 00:07:643 (4,1) - swap NC? constant nc makes more sense here i think. for that also add 00:08:867 (2) - ahhhh nice,I donno why I made mistake here
- 00:18:663 (2) - add nc or 00:16:214 (1) - would not make any senseyay
- 00:46:521 (4,1) - 00:56:469 (4,1) - 01:03:816 (4,1) - swap NC? the new rhythm start on (4) not on (1) i think[/color]no
- 01:08:867 (3) - this should be nc, shouldn't it?yes
- i guess u don't like blankets cuz most of them are a bit ugly ;w;
[Normal]
- 00:20:500 (1) - is it nc really necessary?they say it's hard to read the sv change..
- 00:28:153 (4) - better as circle + slider? >http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2152283 as you have it right now is a bit weird cuz doesn't follow neither vocals nor musichmm don't want to make harder
- 00:39:327 (4,1) - swap NC?k
- 00:49:276 (1) - same as insane (leave it as you did on easy and normal would be nice too)same
- 01:11:010 (5,1) - swap nc? maybeno
- 01:15:755 (2) - what does this note do? i couldn't understand it at all ><piano
- 01:27:694 (2) - ctrl g ? or something. the ds and placement is bad atmk
[Easy]
- 00:03:969 (1) - whistle on tail? as you did on 00:01:521 (1) - k
- 01:03:969 (1) - cancel NC k
- 01:05:194 (3) - add nck
- 01:25:551 (3) - maybe better delete this note? the 1/2 combo is too long imo
- i'm not too confident of my hitsounds skills but from 00:56:623 (4) - to 00:56:623 (4) - whistle sounds too random to me (like one whistle on every 2 measures or something >< maybe add some others?maily whistle for vocal herea
gl <3
- 00:01:521 (1) - whistle on tail as your normal? and 00:03:969 (1) - same suggestionyes
- 01:14:990 (1,2) - check the DS of these ><not by mistake,the time gap is too big so I lower the ds
- there are some places where you can add whistle (as you did on insane or hard) but i dunno i guess you didn't want towant to fit the taiko diff so no
CSLMVenezuela wrote:
well....mmm....hi...
i know what the m4m slots over, but here is another one if you want accept
plz accept plzzzzzz
[General]
the bg is of 1365x768will resize
imo, the offset is in: 00:01:534 will change mp3
why the source isn't in kanji? :/hah don't want
[Easy]
00:37:031 (2,3) - this aren't paralelare you sure?.....
01:28:459 (3) - this slider mubt extend to 01:29:531 - for be consistent with the vocaljust don't want to follow vocal
[Normal]
00:26:623 (2) - move first point of this slider to x68 y200 for have more flow together the 00:25:857 (1) - sliderhmm dont like
00:33:357 (1,2) - fix blanketk
00:37:031 (3,1) - ^k
00:59:072 (4,5,6,7) - i don't like this, i think what is confusing for a normal, maybe if you delete 2 of this sliders and the another 2 make it 2 reverse each one, is more easy to read imok
01:18:663 (4,5,6,7) - ^k
01:28:459 (4,5) - for get better the rhythm, in (4) make another reverse and (5) move it a red tick more, in 01:29:225 - of that way have more consistence with the vocalk
[Hard]
00:58:765 (4,1,2) - this doesn't have the same spacing with 00:58:306 (2,3,4) - maybe if you fix this will be have more consistence, considering what the song doesn't aumenting your intensity in that partk
01:27:694 (2) - move to x288 y40 for have the same spacingk
01:28:459 (1,2,3,4) - this have a weird rhythm imo, maybe if you make something like this: http://i.imgur.com/PyiQOxy.jpg will be better (adding note in 01:28:306 - and 01:29:531I think music expresses so
[Insane]
00:18:663 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:22:796 (3,1) - ^
00:30:296 (3,3) - improve stack?
00:30:296 (3,3) - fix blanketchecked some
01:28:306 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the same what in hard weird rhythm imo, change like the img plzsame
384059043 wrote:
不战即胜
我怎么觉得你最近越来越能呛人了Amamiya Yuko wrote:
甘拜下風
我只是幫chloe說而已 別亂想啊No_Gu wrote:
我怎么觉得你最近越来越能呛人了Amamiya Yuko wrote:
甘拜下風
都是跟的钢琴Shad0w1and wrote:
雖然覺得你多半會改,但還是提一下Insane的
00:11:316 (3) - 這裏開始太空了,我隨手改了一下也不知你看得上不O.o
從黃色4開始到藍色結束
smallboat wrote:
- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[General][Easy] OD怎麼是1呀,調3吧。k
- Disable the Widescreen Support and Enable coundown on all of the difficulties.k
- 01:29:378 this green should be reduced a bit volume (Set 20~35%),sounds like have bit weird now. k
- Feel the song end time at 01:29:378 (Blue line) ? (Another diff are the same reason at this time point.)hm don't want to follow the vocal in the end
[Normal] OD+2 or 2.5 ?k
- 00:25:092 (3,4) - Make play easily,combine with 2/1 slider ? (00:25:398 (4) - The slider head which I dindn't sound any drum voice there.)orz why I hear it..but anyway,it's not so hard in easy imo
- 00:25:398 (4) - Removed this slider and change a note at 00:25:704 , will be played better and fit the part combo rhythmI think. so much 2/1 circles..will make it really boring
- 01:05:194 (4) - Forgot add a NC here?yes
- 01:13:765 (2) - The last white line rhythm can be ignored it,,because has no drum beat there,so I think can reduce a reverse to follow piano voice is okay to play cool.but that will give a big and unfamiliar time space between 2 and 3.in fact the white line is to follow the beginning sound of guitar
- 01:28:459 (3) - And the end hitsound removed clap and change whistle,will be sounds like not weird I think. hmm I think it's a drum in music
[Hard]
- 01:08:255 (2,3) - This rhythm looks playing weird,select all and move rhythm ? in fact if you hear clearly,the music changed drum pattern here
- 01:13:459 (3) - At quiet part which I think the rhythm don't place so hurry in normal,change a not keep a space?k
- 01:28:459 (4) - Reduce a reverse to follow the vocal? (If fix it,don't forget set the hitsound.)if do so..the part between 4,5 will be a little empty,and if I add a note in front of 5,it will seem a little hard and weirdfor 4 1/2 notes
- 01:28:918 (5,6) - The same as aboveues this rhythm : that will miss a drum orz
- 01:29:072 (5) - And the end hitsound removed clap and change whistle,will be sounds like not weird I think. hmm I think it's a drum in music
[Insane] 00:01:521 (1) - The volume are different with red and green line.k
- 01:08:867 (4) - Speed change,add a NC make easy to read here? k
- 01:29:378 (4) - And the end hitsound removed clap and change whistle,will be sounds like not weird I think. hmm I think it's a drum in music
- 00:30:602 (4) - Feel this DS have bit far,maybe can copy 00:29:990 (2),and use ctrl+h here? just a slider click part,it's ok enough imo.and,even if I ctrl+h that...it seems only do little difference
- 00:35:041 (3,4) - Sounds like this music maybe can do a big jump here?;p just want to keep this
- 00:40:245 (4) - Forgot add a NC here?ah not really,cuz I mainly add NC for downbeat
- 01:16:214 (3) - Because change a DS , so still suggest add a NC is proper.k
- 01:29:378 (5) - And the end hitsound removed clap and change whistle,will be sounds like not weird I think.hmm I think it's a drum in music
About the breaks.This part really lacks of insts,only few pianos here.and I don't want to follow the vocal in e/n as I followed inst in other parts.and if I map the few pianos,the time is so random that it will be hard for newbies to catch.in fact,I do the same thing on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87171 .the breaks in that song are also the same reason,only few pianos.So i leave the break hereKonei wrote:
Hey there.
[General]
- Add "TV size, opening" to the tags.k
[Insane]
- 01:01:827 (2) - This extension does not fit the music that well, besides 1/2 works better here.hmm..I think there is a vocal sound "hi" on the 3/4.that's also the reason why add a note at 01:02:056 in hard diff
[Hard]
- 00:54:174 (1) - Kind of a weird jump here, might want to reduce it a bit.k
[Normal]
- 00:11:623 - I really dislike having breaks on a TV Size map, mapping this part would be really cool so please do consider it.
[Easy]
- 00:11:623 - Same concern as on Normal.
This mapset is really well done, good job.
But I'd really like you to consider mapping the breaks before letting this go.
Call me.
Amamiya Yuko wrote:
刀剑杯第四届撕逼大战 閉幕
Amamiya Yuko wrote:
刀剑杯第四届撕逼大战 閉幕
hmm..i can hit for nearly 0ms..and i once asked kpy.his timing is only have a difference of 3msAka wrote:
i dont want to spoil anything but the offset is really late ._. like on 14 or something