Momochikun
Momochikun wrote:
Hi gu ~
[General]
Don't forged to add tv size on tag, also maybe some of the character ? that would help players on getting into your map ~will add when an official label comes outthat BG namelol just copied from net
[Insane]
00:04:735 (5) - This anti jump is pretty confusing considering that it was looks like on the same spacing like the pattern before, a NC here wouldn't be hurt.k
00:06:265 (7) - Sounds a bit noisy to me, how about remove whistle here to give pressure to the next piano pitch ?changed volume
00:35:041 (3) - Finish here ? i can hear cymbal on the music, lower the volume a bit would create great effect.k
00:37:796 (5) - Change the clap with normal sampleset instead seems better to emphasize the bgm imohm.keep for now
00:47:439 (5) - Maybe NC this note to separate this pattern into 2 section ? quite work to recover Hp drain since this pattern is pretty hard imodon't need imo..
00:48:663 (4) - Remove whistle pls.. it doesn't sounds good along with the drum hit here.yes
00:59:378 (3) - Drum finish here and 01:00:143 (8) - Clap here ?k
01:05:194 (1) - You can hear cymbal here too.. add soft finish or whistle instead i guessk
01:07:643 (1) - Hard diff has a finish at this point, i think you missed itk
01:19:276 - Raise the volume a bit here to smooth the 1/2 drum hit ?k
[Hard]
Seems you missed a lot of whistle especially on the kiai part, if you got time would be nice to make it consistent :3added a NC for now
00:20:194 (3) - I barely catch this as 3/4 slider because of the slider velocity, don't stack 00:20:194 (3,4) - for better readiblity during gameplay. Something like this :
01:23:408 - Add note here that stacked to 01:22:796 (2) - to follow the vocal maybe ?the present follows piano better
01:25:398 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off herek
00:40:245 (3) - missed finish on slider start according to Insane diffk
00:35:041 (2) - Normal finish instead on the reverse ? hmm I think it's a soft finish in music
01:18:357 (3) - A bit noisy here, reduce the volume ?yes
01:21:112 (1,3) - Blanket is off here.. k
01:24:480 (4) - How about copy this from (1) , then reverse selection.1 is not so flat so not fit here
01:29:072 (3) - Remove clap on the slider's reverse since there're no drum hit on the music there that make it sounds weirdhmm..I'm not sure but I hear a 3 beats here using 100%..will comfirm again when changing a MP3
[Normal]
00:02:286 (2) - Replace the whistle on reverse to end instead since the piano on BGM is louder there ?yes
00:56:469 - Note here maybe ?don't want to make harder ;p
01:04:582 (2) - This can be confusing since the reverse is more close to the previous object than the slider start, i'd move the tail into something like 423 363 to create easier pattern for beginners to catchnot a big problem imo,flow is good
01:27:694 (2,3) - It's out of the pitch since there's no drum hit at 01:27:847 - , Try a new rhythm like 01:27:694 - Start a 1/1 slider here and note at 01:28:153 - to follow the drums.yes
01:13:765 (4) - How about curve this on the opposite way ? i think it looks betterhmm i thought the present is good
01:29:072 (5) - I prefer start this at 01:28:918 - to follow the vocal and add note at 01:29:378 - instead, since it does plays weird if you spaced it 1/1 since the vocal is very strong01:28:918 - is very weak sound,so I think the present one to follow the drum is better
Except from some missing hitsounds, this diff looks good ~donno why but this MP3..is really hard to hear
[Easy]
00:42:847 (3) - I don't really agree with the downbeat being skipped when there're high vocal and cymbal there.. try 1/1 and note instead ? >< I know it would be a bit hard to fix but it's can't be helped since it plays really weird orzchanged to another pattern
01:05:500 (5) - I'd add more curve here k
01:28:459 (3) - Seems boring to have this slider completely straight, how about some variation ? Like below for example hmm will consider
Good Luck
Kloyd
Kloyd wrote:
FOR M4M in your unnamed queue
- Insane
- 00:48:510 (3,5) - i think NC is needed to make easier to discern this patternwill consider
- 01:13:306 (4) - ^^
- 01:29:531 - vocal ends here so can u extend this note to a slider? 01:29:378 (6) -don't want to follow vocal
- Hard
- 00:20:500 (4) - NC for velocity changek
- 01:00:296 (1) - move up to make better blanket 192:177k
- 01:29:531 - same on Insanesame
- Normal
- only the thing i've mentioned on other diffs....orz
- Easy
- 00:42:847 (3) - ive found something weird on rhythm here. try the rhythm something like this changed to another pattern
- 01:28:459 (3) - same on all diffssame
Thank you very much!