Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take?
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle?
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather?
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward.

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following.
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) -
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle?
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle.
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish.
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
N/A

[Insane]
Feel that many sliders are curved a bit too much. I would suggest that you standardize the curved sliders a bit, looks a bit too inconsistent atm. Just personal opinion though. Maybe I will take some times to fix all slider dots cause I was still newbie at that time

00:07:573 (3,6) - avoid overlapping? Curved (6)
00:09:128 (2,3) - Not a fan over such stacking, as the music is progressing smoothly and there is no sensible pause. Moved
00:10:240 (5) - missing clap? Whistle looks good to me
00:11:573 (4) - Less curvature? And maybe ctrl+G Fixed
00:13:351 (5) - There are four notes in the duration of this slider so this plays a bit too awkwardly for me. (Could try a 3/4 slider follow by a 1/2 one) I think like you too,fixed
00:15:128 (4,5,6) - personally I prefered a triplet after 3 instead of 4 No this rhythm look good to me
00:19:128 (5) - too curved Fixed
00:19:573 (1,2,3,4) - these are really confusing. would suggest decrease spacing or simply stacking Stacked
00:21:795 (3) - move this to the left a bit Fixed
00:23:573 (5,6) - fix blanket Fixed
00:28:684 (2,3,4) - ^ and perhaps making a triangle Fixed
00:39:573 (1,2,3) - why not centering this? Also better blanket for 2 and 3 with 1 Fixed
00:42:240 (7) - missing a vocal on the red line makes it werid Fixed
00:44:240 (4) - ctrl + g? Okay
00:45:128 (6,7,1) - fix spacing Fixed
00:46:906 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing gradually to fit the music? Changed pattern
00:53:128 (7) - move this to the left Moved (6) instead
00:53:573 (8) - make this a slider until the white line. Otherwise 9 is really confusing to read Okay
00:54:240 (3,1) -

SPOILER

Fixed
00:57:795 (5,6) - blanket Fixed
01:02:462 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:04:017 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
01:07:795 (2,3,4,5) - doesn't play well Fixed , I shouldn't mess with blue line too much
01:21:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - consider follow this part of the music?

SPOILER

I listen to music at 25% speed but didn't hear any instrument on 01:22:684 - and 01:23:128 - so fixed

Well many spacing looks random... Try to make things a bit more consistent unless you are making some patterns out of it.

Guess I will skip other diffs. Fell free to ask me to recheck them when it's a bit more polished

eINess wrote:

From my Queue.

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

I don't have break time XD

[Insane]

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take? 1.5x DS on 1,2,4 x2.0 DS for 3
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle? No
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G No It's jump between end of (6) and head of (7)
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather? No I prefer this
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg Fixed
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward. Fixed

[Hard]

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following. Fixed
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg Accetped
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg No

[Normal]

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) - Little fixed
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle? Added
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg Fixed

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle. No
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg Fixed
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish. Whistle look fine and soft to me
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg Fixed

GL ~

1. You have to remove "anime" in tags since it doesn't need.
2. Please add "aoki hagane no" to tags. As you know, it's a title of this anime.also how about adding "ARS NOVA" to tags ? It's a subtitle.
   

1. Overall Difficulty -1 or 2. It's too hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:10:684 (4) - add a new combo, These patterns are too long for this difficulty.
3. 00:12:017 (5) - hmm ... I think this note doesn't need here. Please remove it
4. 00:16:906 - ,00:18:684 (4) - It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners. So you should consider adding a clap same as your patterns 00:07:128 (1,2) -
5. 00:26:684 (2) - flow suggestion : Please try to make a repeat slider like this image. It would be better for the flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:48:462 (1) - These claps doesn't fit well with this kind of music. It's enough to use only whistle.
7. 00:49:795 - add a finish.
8. 00:51:573 - ,00:52:462 - ,00:53:351 - clap
9. 00:55:795 - Please remove this section. I feel this sliderslide is a bit loud
10. 01:19:128 (1) - In my opinion, it's better to put a note near center for beginners after a spinner. So Please remake this note like this
    
    SPOILER

    

1. Overall Difficulty -1.
2. 00:19:128 (2) - It's unnatural for the flow and visual. Please try to move it up and make a triangle
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:462 (3) - add a clap to the tail of the slider.
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff.
5. 00:49:795 - add a finish for kiai time.
6. 00:59:128 (3) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:13:573 - add a whistle here ? I agree your previous patterns at here 00:10:017 (4,5) -
2. 00:16:018 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, i prefer to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going anput ~ x1.20
3. 00:17:351 (6) - flow suggestion : try to rotate this slider about 90°for example :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:684 (1) - I think this spinner is too short for this difficulty. Please remake this part to some circles or sliders.
5. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff.
6. 00:49:796 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
7. 00:55:351 (4,5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this overlap. If you make like this image, it would look better to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:240 - ,00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here.
9. 01:04:017 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
10. 01:07:128 (4,5) - Same opinion as above. 00:55:351 (4,5) -

1. 00:08:462 - missing a clap
2. 00:13:573 - ~ 00:14:017 - Again, Please use whistles same your patterns at here. 00:10:017 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:15:240 (5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this 3 hits 00:15:128 (4,5,6) - . I feel this note (5) follows nothing. So consider removing it.
4. 00:20:906 - How about add a clap to the tail of the slider ?
5. 00:48:462 (1) - Same as Easy diff.
6. 00:28:684 (2) - I prefer to stack on here 00:27:573 (5) - It would be better for visual.
7. 00:32:906 (2,3,4,5) - I don't agree these big jumps at here. These doesn't fit well with this kind of music. So you should consider reducing these spacing at here.
8. 00:49:795 (1) - add a finish
9. 00:57:573 - ~00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here.
10. 01:16:240 - Why don't you turn down the volume at here ? it would fit well with this kind of music.

alacat wrote:

Hi, from my queue : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86607/

[General]

1. You have to remove "anime" in tags since it doesn't need. Okay
2. Please add "aoki hagane no" to tags. As you know, it's a title of this anime.also how about adding "ARS NOVA" to tags ? It's a subtitle.
   [img]http://puu.sh/9qiBu/35e4b103d4.jpg%20%20I%20will%20add%20ars%20nova[/img]

[Easy]

1. Overall Difficulty -1 or 2. It's too hard for this difficulty. Okay
2. 00:10:684 (4) - add a new combo, These patterns are too long for this difficulty. NC
3. 00:12:017 (5) - hmm ... I think this note doesn't need here. Please remove it I think so,fixed
4. 00:16:906 - ,00:18:684 (4) - It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners. So you should consider adding a clap same as your patterns 00:07:128 (1,2) - Okay
5. 00:26:684 (2) - flow suggestion : Please try to make a repeat slider like this image. It would be better for the flow. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:48:462 (1) - These claps doesn't fit well with this kind of music. It's enough to use only whistle. Fixed
7. 00:49:795 - add a finish. Okay
8. 00:51:573 - ,00:52:462 - ,00:53:351 - clap Okay
9. 00:55:795 - Please remove this section. I feel this sliderslide is a bit loud Decreased the volume
10. 01:19:128 (1) - In my opinion, it's better to put a note near center for beginners after a spinner. So Please remake this note like this Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. Overall Difficulty -1. Okay
2. 00:19:128 (2) - It's unnatural for the flow and visual. Please try to move it up and make a triangle I forgot this is normal XD,my bad
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:462 (3) - add a clap to the tail of the slider. Okay
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
5. 00:49:795 - add a finish for kiai time. Okay
6. 00:59:128 (3) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:13:573 - add a whistle here ? I agree your previous patterns at here 00:10:017 (4,5) - Fixed
2. 00:16:018 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, i prefer to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going anput ~ x1.20 If you say so Okay
3. 00:17:351 (6) - flow suggestion : try to rotate this slider about 90°for example : I will consider it
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:684 (1) - I think this spinner is too short for this difficulty. Please remake this part to some circles or sliders. Okay
5. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
6. 00:49:796 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. Okay
7. 00:55:351 (4,5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this overlap. If you make like this image, it would look better to me. I think so , fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:240 - ,00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here. Removed some
9. 01:04:017 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. Finish at Kiai time start Okay
10. 01:07:128 (4,5) - Same opinion as above. 00:55:351 (4,5) - Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:08:462 - missing a clap Oops
2. 00:13:573 - ~ 00:14:017 - Again, Please use whistles same your patterns at here. 00:10:017 (4,5,6) - Okay
3. 00:15:240 (5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this 3 hits 00:15:128 (4,5,6) - . I feel this note (5) follows nothing. So consider removing it. Hmm..I didn't hear instrument at (5) so fixed
4. 00:20:906 - How about add a clap to the tail of the slider ? No,thanks
5. 00:48:462 (1) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
6. 00:28:684 (2) - I prefer to stack on here 00:27:573 (5) - It would be better for visual. Okay
7. 00:32:906 (2,3,4,5) - I don't agree these big jumps at here. These doesn't fit well with this kind of music. So you should consider reducing these spacing at here. Fixed
8. 00:49:795 (1) - add a finish Okay
9. 00:57:573 - ~00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here. Fixed
10. 01:16:240 - Why don't you turn down the volume at here ? it would fit well with this kind of music.Decrease volume to 50%

that's all for now~ honestly this map needs more works quality on flow and aesthetic for bubble. well, Good luck

1. 00:16:906 (3) - clap at beginning, remove clap at end
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - change (1) to note, add slider from 00:25:795 - to 00:26:240 - (back-and-forth slider is fine where it is). This makes beat consistent with 00:21:351 - to 00:24:017 - (see screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751601 ; just focus on bar on top)
3. 00:28:462 (1,2,1) - nothing really "wrong" here, but I feel that three sliders in a row like this is a bit boring. You can try something like add a note at 00:31:573 - .
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC (just like 00:48:462 (1) - )

1. 00:14:239 (1) - to 00:19:128 (2) - Awkward change in clap placement. Keep it consistent by removing clap from 00:14:239 (1) - , placing clap on 00:14:683 (2) - , and continue alternating from there. (nenoat's mod brought this up before, but it still hasn't been fixed :\ )
2. 00:21:795 (2) - (being very picky here): slight alignment issue. Move the three points to (304,120), (258,96), and (211,107) (adjust however you want) (screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751617 )
3. 00:22:684 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:23:128 (4) - add NC
5. 00:29:795 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:30:240 (4) - add NC
7. 00:31:795 (7) - add NC, 00:32:905 (1) - remove NC (I'm actually not too sure about these two. It's up to you)
8. 00:56:462 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:56:906 (2) - add NC
10. 00:58:240 (1) - remove NC
11. 01:14:684 (5) - add NC

1. 00:15:573 (5) - add clap
2. 00:23:573 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:51:462 (6) - unnecessary note; music doesn't quite match this triplet. You'll probably have to change surroundings notes as well, but how you do that is up to you.
4. 00:53:573 (5) - add NC
5. 00:54:018 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:56:906 (7) - clap on slider end
7. 01:07:795 (6) - add NC, remove NC at 01:09:128 (1) -

1. 00:13:351 (5) - cursor stays in this corner of the screen a bit too long for my liking. Shorter back-and-forth slider, then add a note somewhere.
2. 00:15:128 (4,5) - The double stacked notes, in and of themselves, are not "bad", but throughout the song they're a bit excessive and break the flow. In particular, the double stacked notes in the intro should occur at the end of every other measure, so this one is out of place. Another example of these notes is 00:51:351 (2,3) - . Overall I would suggest cutting down on these and replace with other patterns.
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is an insane diff, but the spacing for these sliders is too small and feels "cramped". (Instead, something like 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is an improvement as there is flow/decent pattern, so you can use that as an example)
4. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (screenshot for reference: http://postimg.org/image/gauls7y9l/ ) So I'm playtesed this and I hit (1), (2), (3), and (4). (4) is about to curve downward and the slider direction is going to the left, so the next note is down and to the left? Nope, it makes a switchback to (1). Furthermore, I now have to make a sharp angle back up and to the right to hit the next combo. I think if 00:51:128 (1) - were a 180-degree image of 00:50:684 (4) - I would be happier (combo colors are a bit off; I was experimenting, sorry)
5. 00:53:906 (2) - Try making this a slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1754518 (or something like that)
6. 01:08:128 (3) - ^
7. 00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the speed up; music isn't changing in intensity/volume.

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hi Celsius; terribly sorry for this late mod, but I haven't forgotten about your map! That's Okay

[General]
Excess timing sections in all diffs (for instance, in normal the sections starting at 00:38:906 - , 00:39:351 - , 00:39:462 - , and 00:42:240 - can be removed). Though I point out some hitsound issues below, I highly suggest checking each diff thoroughly and making sure your hitsounds are as consistent as possible. Same advice goes for NCs (and it would be nice if the NCs occur at the beginning of measures, since this song has a steady beat) Thanks for pinpoint at timing section

[Easy]

1. 00:16:906 (3) - clap at beginning, remove clap at end Okay
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - change (1) to note, add slider from 00:25:795 - to 00:26:240 - (back-and-forth slider is fine where it is). This makes beat consistent with 00:21:351 - to 00:24:017 - (see screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751601 ; just focus on bar on top) Good idea
3. 00:28:462 (1,2,1) - nothing really "wrong" here, but I feel that three sliders in a row like this is a bit boring. You can try something like add a note at 00:31:573 - . Good idea
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC (just like 00:48:462 (1) - ) Okay

[Normal]

1. 00:14:239 (1) - to 00:19:128 (2) - Awkward change in clap placement. Keep it consistent by removing clap from 00:14:239 (1) - , placing clap on 00:14:683 (2) - , and continue alternating from there. (nenoat's mod brought this up before, but it still hasn't been fixed :\ ) I fixed it and I shall remain it like that :^:
2. 00:21:795 (2) - (being very picky here): slight alignment issue. Move the three points to (304,120), (258,96), and (211,107) (adjust however you want) (screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751617 ) Fixed
3. 00:22:684 (1) - remove NC Removed
4. 00:23:128 (4) - add NC Added
5. 00:29:795 (1) - remove NC Removed
6. 00:30:240 (4) - add NC Added
7. 00:31:795 (7) - add NC, 00:32:905 (1) - remove NC (I'm actually not too sure about these two. It's up to you) No
8. 00:56:462 (1) - remove NC Removed
9. 00:56:906 (2) - add NC Added
10. 00:58:240 (1) - remove NC Removed
11. 01:14:684 (5) - add NC Added

[Hard]

1. 00:15:573 (5) - add clap Okay
2. 00:23:573 (1) - remove NC Removed
3. 00:51:462 (6) - unnecessary note; music doesn't quite match this triplet. You'll probably have to change surroundings notes as well, but how you do that is up to you. Looks like I overmapped that part.Delete 00:51:240 (5) -
4. 00:53:573 (5) - add NC Added
5. 00:54:018 (1) - remove NC Removed
6. 00:56:906 (7) - clap on slider end Added
7. 01:07:795 (6) - add NC, remove NC at 01:09:128 (1) - Okay

[Insane]
I'll be blunt; I feel like this diff needs more polishing in terms of spacing and flow. I will point out some things that need work and why, and what can be done to fix it (I admit I'm not an expert on "fixing" things, but I'll try ._.' ). After you've done that, send a message to me and I can take a quick look. Lots of mods mention about flow and spacing. I should double check this diff.

1. 00:13:351 (5) - cursor stays in this corner of the screen a bit too long for my liking. Shorter back-and-forth slider, then add a note somewhere. Okay
2. 00:15:128 (4,5) - The double stacked notes, in and of themselves, are not "bad", but throughout the song they're a bit excessive and break the flow. In particular, the double stacked notes in the intro should occur at the end of every other measure, so this one is out of place. Another example of these notes is 00:51:351 (2,3) - . Overall I would suggest cutting down on these and replace with other patterns. I made jumps
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is an insane diff, but the spacing for these sliders is too small and feels "cramped". (Instead, something like 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is an improvement as there is flow/decent pattern, so you can use that as an example) Okay I fixed it . I see that no one mention about this part so I let it stay like that
4. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (screenshot for reference: http://postimg.org/image/gauls7y9l/ ) So I'm playtesed this and I hit (1), (2), (3), and (4). (4) is about to curve downward and the slider direction is going to the left, so the next note is down and to the left? Nope, it makes a switchback to (1). Furthermore, I now have to make a sharp angle back up and to the right to hit the next combo. I think if 00:51:128 (1) - were a 180-degree image of 00:50:684 (4) - I would be happier (combo colors are a bit off; I was experimenting, sorry) How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1755766
5. 00:53:906 (2) - Try making this a slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1754518 (or something like that) Okay
6. 01:08:128 (3) - ^ Okay
7. 00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the speed up; music isn't changing in intensity/volume. Okay

That's my mod; hope you find this useful, and please let me know if you have criticisms/questions!

Regards,
NP

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


*BG - OK

*Mp3 - OK

Nyan~MOD

" Let me just clean your Map "

[Normal]
01:04:462 Blanket? No,thanks
01:07:129 ^ ^

[Hard]
00:10:240 Blanket? No,thanks
00:19:218 > copy the long note in 00:18:684 then move just below it > ctrl+g > then put a repeat . . like this? No


00:38:017 (4) Change placement? like this . . Okay


00:38:906 (7) End here - 00:39:128 Okay
00:39:351 Add a note ^


00:43:573 (4) Blanket? No,thanks
00:46:906 (3) ^ ^
00:48:240 (1) Remove Okay
00:49:128 Add a note No
00:49:240 ^ No
00:49:573 ^ No


^ This pattern is much better for Hard . . I don't think so,sorry

00:54:017 like this? Nice


01:17:351 try this. . Nice


01:18:461 Remove Blanket? Yes


01:23:128 Add a note No

Sorry can't MOD Insane . . though it needs more polishing . . ( >_< )

Great Map . . Hope my MOD helps . .
Good Luck~

sheela901 wrote:

Yo. I'm returning a favor.Thank you

Easy

1. 00:08:906 (2) - Copy and paste 00:10:684 (1) , do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + G, then move it to x:288 y:292. This way, 00:08:906 (2,3,1) can make a mirror pattern. Also, you have to move 00:07:128 (1) to x:231 y:115. Okay
2. 00:15:128 (2) - Move the second point to x:298 y:251, and the last point to x:241 y:229, so it could have a same aspect as 00:13:351 (3) . Okay
3. 00:32:017 (1) - Perfect the blanket by moving the second point to x:392 y:220, and the last point to x:391 y:107, with the Grid Snap disable. second point x=399 y=153 last point x=374 y=95
4. 00:40:017 (1) - It could have the same aspect as 00:38:240 (2) . Which means that, move the slider to x:217 y:168, the second point to x:273 y:152, and the last point to x:332 y:164. Okay
5. 00:47:128 (2) - Perfect the blanket by moving the last point to x:338 y:328. Okay
6. 00:58:684 (2) - Move the second point to x:356 y:313, and the last point to x:403 y:317. That way, it could have a better flow. Fixed

Normal

1. 00:07:128 (1) - Move this to x:16 y:318, so it could improve the flow? Yes,it is
2. 00:56:906 (1) - Move the second point to x:332 y:258, so it could flow with 00:58:240 (2) ? Nice
3. 01:07:129 (5) - Make a blanket combo with 01:06:240 (3) ? Hmm..Okay

Hard

1. 00:09:128 (2) - Add a point at x:290 y:310, by holding Ctrl and click on the slider, to add a point. It'll curve the slider. Okay
2. 00:38:017 (4) - Ugly overlap. Move this to x:269 y:308. But you have to modify the slider. Fixed
3. 00:56:906 (8) - Improve the blanket, by moving the second point to x:342 y:82, and the last point to x:277 y:62. Okay
4. 00:57:795 (2) - Same here, but move the slider to x:291 y:250. Move the second point to x:227 y:225, and the last point to x:196 y:164. Okay
5. 01:07:795 (1) - Try to improve the blanket with the approach circle of 01:07:573 (5) . Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane

1. 01:13:351 (1) - Move the note to x:276 y:159. No

Well, that's all. Good Luck on ranking this map. If you have any question, PM or poke me in-game.

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

1. Delete the .osb file in the song folder since your map doesn't have a storyboard. Okay
2. Make sure the video offset of each diff is consistent, I saw E and N have a video offset of 0 while that of H and I is -90. Okay
   
   SPOILER

   Video,-90,"ccc.avi"

3. 00:19:573 - You are using S:C4 here but I can't find it in the folder. Is it being deleted accidentally? Forgot to change
4. Your preview time isn't snapped. Snap it to 00:48:128. Okay

Insane

1. 00:17:128 (5) - Add whistle on head and tail, like what you did on 00:13:351 (5). Music sounds similar imo. Okay
2. 00:18:684 (3) - This clap sounds a little bit noisy to me, coz it kinda breaks the pattern and the music is not that strong. Remove it? Changed to whistle
3. 00:22:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - these whistles are quite loud to me too, perhaps you can add them only on 00:22:684 (1,3) and head of 00:23:573 (5) coz these are the high pitches which need to be emphasized. Similar for other places using this whistle pattern. Okay
4. 00:35:128 (8,9,10) - I'm pretty sure these are overmapped without any solid beats on (9) and (10). Consider replacing them by a slider. I think so
5. 00:35:128 (8) - Add a normal-clap as you can hear something similar in the music. Okay
6. 00:43:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm is quite interesting, frequently switching from vocals to drums, like 00:43:351 (1) to 00:43:795 (2) (vocal --> drum) and 00:44:462 (4) to 00:44:684 (5) (drum --> vocal). Try this and it would be more consistent: Nice
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:128 (6) - Remove clap on tail, also clap on tail of 00:52:240 (8). The music isn't that strong imo. Okay
8. 01:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something similar to above: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:08:684 (3,4,5) - Suddenly switching from vocals to instruments bothers me :c Keep track on the vocal would be great: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:128 (3) - Normal sampleset clap as for resonance with background music. Okay
11. 01:23:351 (1) - The music is fading out and the whistle you put is somehow too loud. I'd suggest reducing the volume or removing it. Reduced volume

Hard

1. 00:19:129 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is misplaced, try this or something which matches the beats: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:240 (3,4) - Again, same like in Insane. Okay
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is also weird. I don't know what u are intended to follow. No matter your aim is vocal or drums, rhythm should be something like this, with every stress lying on a slider head: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:38:017 (4) - This sudden dwindle in DS with steady music feels misleading, use a consistent DS please. Fixed
6. 01:12:017 (2,3,4) - The stresses are mistakenly captured too. 01:12:240 isn't a stress, so don't place a slider head there. Instead, stresses are on 01:12:017 and 01:12:462. Therefore, do it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. Hitsound suggestions are the same as Insane. I am too lazy to type them out again.

Normal

1. Delete these redundant green lines. All deleted
   
   SPOILER

   00:08:906 -
   00:10:684 -
   00:57:573 -
   01:22:240 -
2. 00:51:573 (4,5,6,7) - Difficulty suddenly increases a lot for this part because u suddenly follow vocal here, simplification of rhythm is highly recommended: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Why does the clap pattern suddenly change from 2-4 clap to 1-3 clap in the second kiai till the end?
4. 01:10:684 (4,1) - Improve the blanket. Okay

Easy

1. OD is too high for an Easy diff, decrease it by 1 please. Decreased
2. The clap pattern is very weird, they don't lie on downbeats but upbeats. Use slider tick to place claps on 2nd and 4th white ticks like I and H please. Poke me in-game if you don't understand what I mean. I will fix it
3. 00:24:906 (3) - NC, the combo seems too long for three big white ticks. Okay
4. 01:21:795 (3) - NC too. Okay

Good luck!

-Chata- wrote:

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

1. Clear

[Easy]

1. 00:32:017 (5) - suggest two kinds of here. delete this circle. or 00:32:240 (1) - stack on (5)'s space Stacked
2. 00:34:240 (1,1) - These spin are doesn't fit Easy diffculty. they are make sudden jump for Easy players Fixed
3. 01:21:795 (1,2) - delete circle. You should do make 1/1 beat here. it doesn't fit Easy Okay

[Normal]

1. 00:46:017 (5,1) - swap NC. acording to Insane NC (1) and delete NC this note 00:47:795 -
2. 00:52:240 (6,5) - remove the body of the slider on whistle. is not fit background muzic Okay
3. 01:10:017 (1,1) - Same as just above. you don't used it other diffs Okay
4. 01:20:017 (5) - New combo. same as others diffs Okay

[Hard]

1. 00:23:351 (2,3,4) - You can make blanket this better Improved blanket
2. 00:31:351 (5,6,1) - What's strange distance. don't use 0.75x section here. It so strange Fixed
3. 00:45:128 (1,4) - swap NC Okay
4. 01:16:684 (2) - I feel so strange this clap sound. you can try replace whitle sound here. Okay I find whistle more fit for this note

[Insane]

1. 00:51:795 (7) - New combo. same as Hard's pattern Okay
2. 00:52:906 - add clap Okay
3. 00:53:795 - Why you don't put in clap sound here? It's easier than Hard's pattern. how about this? http://puu.sh/a81M8/5b9ace95cb.jpg Change rhythm to http://puu.sh/a96au/7d5e8a49b7.jpg to match the instrument
4. 00:56:017 - 00:56:462 (1) - swap hitsound. clap's place wrong now Fixed
5. 01:07:795 (1) - same as 00:53:795 - 's suggetion Change rhythm to http://puu.sh/a973j/3c114b0557.jpg
6. 01:08:462 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/a81Xw/299a7015c4.jpg and don't forget put in clap sound ^
7. 01:17:128 (3) - turn down the volume a little Okay

it' over

good luck!

Fort wrote:

hi mod by Fort

[Insane]
change AR 8.5 to AR8, cause with that AR is better. and cause this map has simple pattern, so dont worry to read it with AR8 (seems good too for DT plays) Okay

00:08:462 (6) - i think this one is overlap a little. fix it like this http://puu.sh/agAz5/e55395dbbf.jpg Okay
00:10:462 (6) - wrong pattern , just change it to circles cause 00:10:684 - is clickable object Okay
00:36:906 (3,4) - overlaps in this pattern, maybe like this better http://puu.sh/agAJw/7383411278.jpg Okay I'm trying to make a jump there but didn't know it overlap
00:42:240 (7,8,9) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/agAMG/982255d782.jpg Fine
00:54:128 - add circle in here Why?
00:55:795 (8,9) - delete circle, then extend slider to 00:56:240 - Okay
00:57:573 (3) - NC this cause SV changes (optional) Okay
00:58:462 (1,2,3,4) - try this one http://puu.sh/agAXR/075ab61efd.jpg Fine changed a little bit tho
01:08:684 (4) - change to circle Okay
01:08:906 - add slider in here and delete 01:09:128 (5) - Okay

seems some pattern is good flow for me, good luck!
Red means change
Blue means no change

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there! here for a mod
Blue means personal opinion

[Easy]

1. I don't think it is necessary to have so many NCs at the starting part, but that's up to you Because Easy has low notes so that each combo are a small number
2. 00:12:462 (1) - Nazi-ish flow mod: Move to x:84 y:228 (it bugs me lol) (readjust 2) Okay
3. 00:32:240 (1) - End this 1 white tick earlier and put a circle at where the end used to be. Fits the rhythm better No
4. 00:50:684 (3) - Nazi-ish flow mod: Move to x:284 y:80 (readjust 1 and 2 after that) Okay
5. 00:54:240 (1) - ^ (x:300 y:196) Okay
6. 00:54:684 (2) - ^ (x:348 y:184) Okay
7. 00:57:351 (3) - ^ (x:384 y:76) Okay
8. 01:04:906 (3) - ^ (x:372 y:260) No
9. 01:12:017 (1) - ^ (x:292 y:72) Okay
10. 01:14:240 (2) - ^ (x:240 y:100) (Might need to adjust DS of note 3) Okay

Sorry for all the nazi mods, but apart from the sort-of jerky flows with the hitcircles, this diff is almost free from mistakes. Good job! (If having this "jerky" flow is your intention then ignore this mod lol) The problem is I made this diff too rushed

[Normal]

1. 00:15:128 (2) - Move to x:376 y:196 Okay
2. 00:15:573 (3) - ^ x:344 y:292 No
3. 00:48:462 (1) - ^ x:380 y:248 Okay
4. 01:08:240 (2) - ^ x:336 y:312(readjust 3. maybe 4 also) Okay
5. 01:12:017 (1) - ^ x:312 y:120 Okay

Same as before, couldn't find many errors so I just modded the placements

[Hard]

1. 00:11:128 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved a little bit Okay a little bit improve
2. 00:13:351 (3) - x:260 y:132 No
3. 00:54:906 (1) - x:156 y:160 (readjust 2 and 3) No
4. 01:01:795 (5,6) - Blanket them? No
5. 01:09:128 (1) - x:248 y:236 No
6. 01:15:573 (2) - x:428 y:168 Okay
7. 01:21:128 (5) - Super nazi mod: y-1 to stack perfectly with 3 Okay

^^

[Insane]

1. 00:10:684 (7) - Nazi mod: y-1 Okay
2. 00:11:351 (3) - Why does this move back in? wouldn't it flow better somewhere like x:72 y:256? I try to experiment some back jump pattern but if it doesn't flow good okay fixed
3. 00:12:906 (3) - x:340 y:340 (Better square IMO) Okay
4. 00:13:128 (4) - x:241 y:248 ^(Also move 6 to the same position) Okay
5. 00:19:128 (5) - x:212 y:100 (Lines up better) Okay
6. 00:19:573 (1,2) - x:12 y:200 Okay
7. 00:27:128 (4) - Line 4 up to 5 and 6 please Changed a little bit
8. 00:58:906 (2) - Nazi mod: x+1 to stack perfectly with 3(blue) Okay
9. 01:01:351 (2) - Nazi mod: y-1 Okay
10. 01:05:795 (1) - Nazi mod: x-1, y+1Okay

^^

Sorry once again for all the nazi-ish placement mods, but those are really all I could find. I try not to pick out smaller ones and only those I could see obviously
That's all I could find, very good mapset overall. Good luck getting it ranked soon!~

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Insane video offset is different (Video,-193,"ccc.avi") from Easy, Normal, and Hard. Video, 0,"ccc.avi" I thought I fixed that from IamKwan's mod already xD Okay fixed it for real this time


00:13:351 (5) – rotate -60 for better flow Okay
00:17:795 (1) - rotate 40 for better flowOkay
00:20:240 (5,6,7,8,1) -

picture

Okay
00:22:017 (2,3) -

picture

Changed in my way
00:46:906 (4) -

picture

Okay
00:59:795 (4) – move to x:424 y:164 for better alignment with 00:58:906 (2,6) – Okay
01:06:462 (4) – stack slider tail on top of slider tail of 01:05:351 (6) – Okay
01:08:128 (2) – move up a bit to align with 01:07:795 (1) – Okay

01:13:128 (4) – move to x:72 y:136 Okay
01:13:351 (5) – stack on slider tail of 01:12:017 (2) –Okay
01:14:017 (7,8) – move to x:176 y:36
Adjust slider tail to stack on 01:13:128 (4) Okay

picture

00:12:017 (5) - blanket on 00:11:128 (3) -

picture

How about stack (5) and (3) ?
00:12:462 (1,2,3) - Adjust like so -

picture

Okay
00:16:906 (3) – ctrl+h and ctrl+g. I think it looks better grouped with 00:16:017 (1) as a set - -

picture

Okay
00:18:462 (3,4,5,6) – inconsistent spacing Fixed
00:19:128 (6) – adjust slider head and tail to fit accordingly to 00:18:240 (2,3,4,5) -

picture

(5) and (6) are blanket
00:34:240 (2) – could be blanketed better Fixed

00:38:684 (4) – move to x:136 y:88 Okay
00:38:906 (5) – move to x:64 y:132 Okay

picture

00:39:573 (1) – stack slider head on 00:38:684 (4,1,2) - and adjust rest accordingly Okay

picture

00:53:906 (2) – move down for better alignment with 00:53:573 (1) – Okay


00:28:017 (5) – move to x:332 y:164 I like your flow okay fixed
00:28:462 (1) – blanket on 00:27:573 (4) – Okay
00:31:128 (2) – stack on 00:27:573 (4) – Okay
00:29:795 (1) – blanket on 00:31:128 (2) –Okay
00:37:351 (4) – adjust slider tail up a bit so it forms a perfect star with 00:36:017 (1,2,3) – Okay
00:38:684 (5) – adjust to be vertically aligned with 00:36:462 (2) – while being blanketed by 00:37:351 (4) – I don't understand you mean make slider tail verticallly aligned with (2) ?

01:20:017 (1) – blanket on 01:18:240 (1) – Changed in my way
01:21:795 (1) – stack slider head on 01:18:240 (1) – and blanket 01:20:017 (1) Okay

Nice song, good luck with your map!~
Red mean change
Blue mean no change

1. ทุกดิฟตัวแรกสุดใส่ finish
   [Easy]
2. 00:17:795(1) - ย้ายไปที่ x436 y212
3. 00:19:128(2) - ต่อจากอันบน ย้ายไปที่ x300 y156 จะวนครบรอบพอดี
4. 00:33:795(2) - ลบ clap ตรงนี้เส้นขาวใหญ่ ใส่ whistle แทน
5. 00:34:684(4) - ลบ clap
6. 00:35:128(5) - ใส่ finish ปลายสไลด์
7. 01:03:573 - http://puu.sh/asY7f/d50f58da88.jpg แนะนำแบบนี้ flow กว่า
8. 01:18:240(1) - ลบโน๊ตออก คนเล่นใหม่ๆลากเมาส์ไม่ทัน
9. 01:22:462(2,3) - แนะนำทำเป็นสไลด์
   
   [normal]
10. 00:07:128(1) - add finish
11. 00:10:240(2) - ลบ whistle ย้ายไปใส่ตัวต่อไป 00:10:684(1) -
12. 00:13:795(2) - ^
13. 00:17:351(2) - ^
14. 00:33:351(2) - ใส่ clap
15. 00:34:240 - ลบโน๊ต สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ แก้เสียง spin เป็น finish สปินจบที่ 00:35:573 -
16. 00:36:017(1) - clap เริ่มตรงนี้ ใส่เส้นเว้นเส้น แก้ใหม่หมด
17. 00:44:684(3) - ลบ clap
18. 00:46:906 - ลบ clap
19. 00:48:017(3) - ลบclap
20. 00:48:462(1) - whistle ตัวหน้าตัวเดียวก็พอ
21. 00:54:017 - ลบ clap
22. 00:54:684(3) - ใส่ clap ตรงนี้ แก้ทั้งท่อน
23. 00:58:906 - ลบ clap
24. 01:00:017(4) - ลบ whistle ใส่ clap
25. 01:02:684 - ^
26. 01:03:573 - ^
27. 01:07:795(1) - ลบ clap
28. 01:08:906 - ใส่ clap
29. 01:09:795(5) - ^
30. 01:13:351 - ^
31. 01:16:462 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้
32. 01:18:240(1) - finish
33. 01:23:351 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้
    
    [Hard]
34. Ar=7 HP=5 OD=5
    -----------------
35. 00:21:684 - ตรงนี้รัว
36. 00:32:240(1) - Improve spacing
    
    [Insane]
37. HP=6 OD=7
    -----------------
38. 01:16:906(2) - remove clap
39. 01:17:128 - soft hs
40. 01:18:240(1) - add finish

- N a n a k a - wrote:

From M4M #thai lang

1. ทุกดิฟตัวแรกสุดใส่ finish ก็เข้าท่าดี
   [Easy]
2. 00:17:795(1) - ย้ายไปที่ x436 y212 Okay โน้ตเรียงสวยขึ้น
3. 00:19:128(2) - ต่อจากอันบน ย้ายไปที่ x300 y156 จะวนครบรอบพอดี Okay
4. 00:33:795(2) - ลบ clap ตรงนี้เส้นขาวใหญ่ ใส่ whistle แทน แก้ละ เราใส่ clap เกิน
5. 00:34:684(4) - ลบ clapสงสัยกำลังเบลอ ใส่ clap เกินมาได้ไงเนี่ย เรา
6. 00:35:128(5) - ใส่ finish ปลายสไลด์ Okay ใส่แล้วมันเน้นตรงทำนองดี
7. 01:03:573 - http://puu.sh/asY7f/d50f58da88.jpg แนะนำแบบนี้ flow กว่า ขอเวลาตัดสินใจดู เพราะ เราอยากให flow มันโค้งลงมาข้างล่าง
8. 01:18:240(1) - ลบโน๊ตออก คนเล่นใหม่ๆลากเมาส์ไม่ทัน Okay ไม่ใช่ downbeat ก็ลบได้ xD
9. 01:22:462(2,3) - แนะนำทำเป็นสไลด์ Okay ดูง่ายสมกับ easy ขึ้น
   
   [normal]
10. 00:07:128(1) - add finish Okay
11. 00:10:240(2) - ลบ whistle ย้ายไปใส่ตัวต่อไป 00:10:684(1) - Okay พอมันปนกับ clap แล้วฟังดูยังไงๆอยู่
12. 00:13:795(2) - ^ ู^
13. 00:17:351(2) - ^ ^
14. 00:33:351(2) - ใส่ clap อ่า ลืมใส่ clap ตรงนี้
15. 00:34:240 - ลบโน๊ต สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ แก้เสียง spin เป็น finish สปินจบที่ 00:35:573 - Okay ก็เข้าท่าดี
16. 00:36:017(1) - clap เริ่มตรงนี้ ใส่เส้นเว้นเส้น แก้ใหม่หมด สงสัยเราจะเบลอจริงๆ แล้วมอดก่อนหน้านี้ ก็ไม่บอก xD 555
17. 00:44:684(3) - ลบ clap Okay ใส่ whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
18. 00:46:906 - ลบ clap ^
19. 00:48:017(3) - ลบclap ^
20. 00:48:462(1) - whistle ตัวหน้าตัวเดียวก็พอ Okay เสียง beat เน้นแค่ตรงพยางค์แรกของเสียงร้อง
21. 00:54:017 - ลบ clap Okay whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
22. 00:54:684(3) - ใส่ clap ตรงนี้ แก้ทั้งท่อน แล้วเราก็ใส่ผิด HS ที่อีกแล้ว xD
23. 00:58:906 - ลบ clap Okay whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
24. 01:00:017(4) - ลบ whistle ใส่ clap Okay
25. 01:02:684 - ^ ^
26. 01:03:573 - ^ ^
27. 01:07:795(1) - ลบ clap Whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
28. 01:08:906 - ใส่ clap Okay ใส่ clap ผิดที่อีกละ xD
29. 01:09:795(5) - ^ ^
30. 01:13:351 - ^ ^
31. 01:16:462 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ Okay ก็เข้าท่าดี
32. 01:18:240(1) - finish Okay จะได้เหมือนตอนเริ่มเพลง
33. 01:23:351 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ Okay diff นี้ เราเน่ามาก xD
    
    [Hard]
34. Ar=7 HP=5 OD=5 Okay
    -----------------
35. 00:21:684 - ตรงนี้รัว Hmm.. ใส่เป็น slider 1/2 วน 1 รอบ ละกัน
36. 00:32:240(1) - Improve spacing DS ก็ 1.2 เท่ากันนะ เดียวเราย้ายให้มันเรียงตรงกับ (6) ขึ้น
    
    [Insane]
37. HP=6 OD=7 Okay
    -----------------
38. 01:16:906(2) - remove clap Okay ใส่ whistle กับลบ whistle ตรงท้าย (1) กับ (3) แทนจะได้เหมือน hard
39. 01:17:128 - soft hs Okay xD
40. 01:18:240(1) - add finish Okay จะได้เหมือนตอนเพลงเริ่ม

comment : ต้องปรับปรุงเรื่อง HS นะ
ปล. เผื่อให้คนอื่นม็อดบ้างเนอะ :3 อ่าๆ xD
แดงคือ เปลี่ยน
น้ำเงินคือ ไม่เปลี่ยน

[Colours]
Combo1 : 234,234,234
Combo2 : 228,148,192
Combo3 : 191,191,255
Combo4 : 0,128,64
Combo5 : 176,255,176
Combo6 : 13,104,138

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my Modding Queues.

[General]

The background has beautiful colors. I suggest to replace to you colors of new combos, because these colors very bright and unpleasant to an eye.

try these: http://puu.sh/ayzgD/60dc7e040e.png

[Colours]
Combo1 : 234,234,234
Combo2 : 228,148,192
Combo3 : 191,191,255
Combo4 : 0,128,64
Combo5 : 176,255,176
Combo6 : 13,104,138

I agree with your suggestion

Preview Point move here 00:48:462, because the text before Kiai here begins. Okay

[Easy]

- 00:54:240 (1,2) - place 2 combos further from 1 on a grid. because it looks here so http://puu.sh/ayzBi/5c074c23d9.jpg but has to be here so http://puu.sh/ayzE5/102b7a8837.jpg Okay I noticed that DS was wrong there
- 00:08:906 (1,1,1) - delete new combo, it is spam new combos, because music and speed not so often changes. Okay I just thought I would NC them just like in the others diff
- 00:08:906 (1) - place a slider here x:396 y:56, that 00:07:128 (1) and 00:08:906 (1) they served as a blanket each other Okay
- 00:12:462 (1) - make a copypaste of this slider 00:10:684 (1) then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G and and turn it on 10 degrees. further place it into place where there was a slider. is so http://puu.sh/ayAqi/74c62c3853.jpg Okay good suggestion better flow
- 00:32:240 (1) - it is inadmissible in the easiest complexity in your map. move it here and finish here 00:33:351. AND 00:32:017 (5,1) - remove imposing of objects at each other Hmm.. where to move ? I deleted (5) and stretched (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1876172
- 00:52:017 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - delete new combo, it is spam new combos, because music and speed not so often changes. Okay I just thought I would NC them just like in the others diff

[Normal]

do the same with new combos. Fixed some NC

- 00:28:462 (1,2) - spacing, 2 combo closer to 2 combo Okay
- 00:31:128 (2,3) - spacing, 3 combo closer to 2. Okay DS wrong here
- 00:56:684 (1) - move here 00:56:906 No If I move there I will lose the downbeat at 00:57:351 - maybe I will shorten it

[Hard]

- 00:22:462 (4) - add note, because here 00:26:017 (5) and 00:29:573 (5) and 00:31:795 (6) - there is a note. but rhythm identical. means and objects have to or be present or absent. Okay
- 00:32:017 (6,1) - spacing. Stack at head of (1)
- 00:45:128 (4,5,6,1) - ^ Fixed
- 01:02:462 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
^^^^^^ even if your of down speed you shouldn't place them so close
- 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4) - make identical transition http://puu.sh/ayDx1/0be841627d.jpg Okay

[Insane]

00:25:573 (3) - Ctrl+G No, it looks fine
00:56:684 (2) - move here 00:56:906 and finish here 00:57:351 Okay better rhythm

Good luck!
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Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, CelsiusLK !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Easy

Suggestion : Change HD & OD to 2,5, Changed only HP your OD is too high for Easy diff
Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0 , What’s the function ? Okay
00:24:017 (4,5) – Change to 1/1 Slider, Okay
00:27:573 (3,4) - ^, ^
00:33:795 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:45:351 (3,4) - ^, ^
00:56:462 (1,2) OR 00:56:906 (2,3) - ^, Chose 00:56:906 (2,3) -
01:04:017 (1,2) - ^, ^
01:14:240 (2,3) - ^. ^
Fixed all so it more suit for Easy diff

Normal

Remove this timing point 19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0,
00:08:017 (2,3) – Change to 1/1 Slider, No look fine if I change to slider this will be too easy
00:11:573 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:15:128 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:24:017 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:27:573 (4,5) - ^, ^
00:33:351 (2,3) OR 00:33:795 (3,4) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:36:017 (1,2) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:39:573 (1,2) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:47:795 (3,4) – Change to ½ slider, Hmm..I'm thinking about change this to 1/2 slider but I want the player to try listen and tap with the music so I will not change this to 1/2 slider
00:50:684 (3) – Change to 1/1 slider, How? xD
00:54:684 (3,4) - ^, No too easy for Normal
01:04:017 (1,2) - ^, ^
01:08:240 (2) – Move this to 01:08:128, Hmm..blue line maybe too hard for Normal so I decided to follow the instrument instead
01:11:573 (3) – Change to 1/1 slider, How to change 1 note to a slider? xD
01:18:240 (1,2) & 01:19:128 (3,4) – Change them to 1/1 slider. Okay since I think squre might be too hard

Hard

Suggestion : Change AR to 5, No too low for Hard diff
Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0, As I said before “What’s the function” 
00:07:351 (2,3) – Change to 1/1 slider, No too easy for Hard
00:09:128 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:10:906 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:14:462 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:18:240 (2,3) & 00:18:684 (4,5) - ^, ^
01:00:906 (2,3) - ^, ^
01:18:462 (2,3) - ^. ^

Insane

Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0 Again xD,
Your chart was great.. No mistakes on placing notes 

Additional : Reduce circle, by changing them to a slider ,
Re-check your timing . I want the players to try to listen to the music and read the map so putting too much slider may make this map a bit to easy to read except Easy which is the diff for player who learn to read the map , that's just my thought
Edited: Hmmm..I find my timing point to be Okay since some look like the same but they're for changing SV, starting kiai time, ending kiai,changing in volume
That’s All CelsiusLK ! Good luck !
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1. You forgot to use DS (Distance Snap) please use DS ~
2. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

1. 00:32:017 (1) - The shape kinda looks weird, try to make it a normal curve slider ~
2. 00:50:684 (3,6) - Make them more curve ?
3. 01:02:684 (5) - NC here like what you did in 00:48:462 (1)
4. 01:09:351 (1,2) - Really awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1) - Move to x:152 y:24 for a better flow with (4) and (5)
2. 00:44:684 (3) - Move to x:364 y:80 ? I think it would be a better flow with (1) and (2)
3. 00:53:573 (1) - More curve ?
4. 00:55:573 (5,6,1) - How about you make something like this? Because (1)'s shape looks weird:

SPOILER

1. 01:12:017 (1) - Move to x:276 y:60 to avoid the overlap with (1) and then make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (1)'s head ~ (If you didn't understand please tell me)
2. 01:20:017 (3) - Make it a little bit curve for a good flow with (1) and (2)

1. 00:20:684 (6,1) - Try to improve the flow here, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:22:684 (1) - Make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (2)'s head ~
2. 01:01:351 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:02:017 (6) for a perfect flow ~

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Only add whistle at the head and the tail of the slider, cause adding it at the slider is weird ~
2. 00:34:684 (7) - Move to x:388 y:300 ?
3. 01:22:462 (4) - Move to x:360 y:136 ?

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my modding queue ~ :3
[Easy]

1. You forgot to use DS (Distance Snap) please use DS ~ Do you mean spacing? because I check the DS and it is 1.00x anyway I increase SV to 0.8
2. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

1. 00:32:017 (1) - The shape kinda looks weird, try to make it a normal curve slider ~
2. 00:50:684 (3,6) - Make them more curve ?
3. 01:02:684 (5) - NC here like what you did in 00:48:462 (1)
4. 01:09:351 (1,2) - Really awkward flow, try to use something like this:
   Since I changed SV so most of my notes are all changed in pattern now

SPOILER

[Normal]

1. 00:14:240 (1) - Move to x:152 y:24 for a better flow with (4) and (5) Okay
2. 00:44:684 (3) - Move to x:364 y:80 ? I think it would be a better flow with (1) and (2) Okay
3. 00:53:573 (1) - More curve ? No
4. 00:55:573 (5,6,1) - How about you make something like this? Because (1)'s shape looks weird:

SPOILER

Ohh xD I decided to keep (1) like that also fixed (1) so it not too weird https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883131

1. 01:12:017 (1) - Move to x:276 y:60 to avoid the overlap with (1) and then make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (1)'s head ~ (If you didn't understand please tell me) Okay I understand what you said :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883145
2. 01:20:017 (3) - Make it a little bit curve for a good flow with (1) and (2)

Like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883160
[Hard]

1. 00:20:684 (6,1) - Try to improve the flow here, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

Okay

1. 00:22:684 (1) - Make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (2)'s head ~ Okay a little curve
2. 01:01:351 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:02:017 (6) for a perfect flow ~ Okay

[Insane]

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Only add whistle at the head and the tail of the slider, cause adding it at the slider is weird ~ Forgot to delete whistle way
2. 00:34:684 (7) - Move to x:388 y:300 ? Hmm..Okay
3. 01:22:462 (4) - Move to x:360 y:136 ? Alright

Nice song ~ <3 Good luck ~ !
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Gaia wrote:

Hey from my queue

[General]
W-wait what where'd that video come from wtf it wasnt there when I checked this morning lol

re: spinners

Since Easy/Normal aren't far off from eachother so they can somewhat use the same concepts.. what the wiki said:

Spinners should be used sparingly in Easy difficulties - generally ends of mapped parts before a break and the entire song. When using a spinner, make sure the length is fairly long. 2-4 measures is a good guide.
The reasoning is because most new players are going to react slowly to a spinner, so there's a delay in starting them. Then they will also spin wildly, usually drawing along the perimeter of the screen. Once the spinner is complete, they will be most probably disoriented and wondering where their cursor is. This is the reason why if you have a spinner in the middle of a mapped phrase, you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM.
taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy#Spinners

[Easy]
ic u ended up 0.96 sv
if u already fixed it to 0.8 from 0.6 why did u change it again lol I would be too lazy
so much love for this map ic #dedication

00:12:462 (1,2,1) - line them up so it flows better i guess, cuz right now it has a "(" shape Okay
00:13:795 (2,2) - should be lined up? same y coordinate Okay
00:32:017 (1) - i feel like this slider has received a lot of hate already lol >: but ya its not very appealing imo xD I didn't know that anyway I fixed it a little
00:36:017 (1,2) - double reverses aren't suitable for easys imo but it's not something u can fix easily or that it matters too much so keep in mind next time i guess Will try to fix that later
00:46:240 (4) - hmm this shape is... no idea what the heck this is lol lol I don't know either but I find this to be suit with the music
00:54:240 (1,3) - line up (same y coordinate) Okay
01:16:462 (1) - too short :s (see general for more info) as for a fix i think just leaving it blank is fine tbh lol. if u do leave it blank then add a break! :3 idk why i like mini breaks like these lol http://puu.sh/aCzCb/9bf1c22e62.jpg Yeah I guess I gonna add a break here

[Normal]
00:08:017 (2,4) - should line up imo Okay
00:08:462 (3) - (232, 96) better triangle Okay
00:08:906 (4,5,1) - blanketing could be better Hmm..I think it fine now
00:11:573 (2,3,4) - i dont wanna move too much but this triangle could be better too Fixed
00:14:240 (6) - nc Okay
00:19:573 (1,1) - this spinner MAYBE. But the time u have allowing players to react to the 1st circle is super small (see General) Delete (1) and end slider at 00:21:351 -
00:34:240 (1,1) - so, same thing. Fixed by replace spinner with some notes
00:54:240 (2,4) - should line up and 00:54:684 (3,5) - should line up Okay
00:58:462 (1) - up more so better flow i guess http://puu.sh/aCAmb/5439b1efc1.jpg Okay
01:04:017 (1,3) - line up? Okay
01:11:128 (2,3,1) - this can have a more even descent.. if u know what i mean lol. ill draw a diagram.. Okay it should line up better now

SPOILER

an even slope as opposed to an uneven slope u have here

ok its not perfect im not amazing artest T^T

01:16:462 (1) - same suggestion as easy Add a short break
01:20:017 (3) - up a teeny bit to avoid overlap Okay

[Hard]
00:07:128 (1,3,5) - u almost have it lined up perfectly, (y = 192 pls) Okay
00:08:906 (1,3) - ^ u have to watch out for small details like this Okay I will becareful
00:10:684 (1,3) - ^ Okay
00:10:906 (2,4) - u probably didnt line this up on purpose but just putting it out there lol Lined up now
00:46:240 (1,2) - they should have same # of reverses imo, maybe try this? http://puu.sh/aCBim/2c72da2549.jpg Okay fixed
01:18:240 (1,3) - yeah Fixed
01:19:573 (6) - begin this slider at (x=52) and end at (x=120) Okay

[Insane]
00:16:017 (1) - 00:17:795 (1) - stack? Okay
00:46:906 (4) - it's good as long as (y=304) Okay
01:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - looks like a weird square I find DS not consistent here fixed a little tho
01:22:240 (3) - personally since it slows down u should simplify the rhythm too, so removing this would sound better Okay sound better
01:20:240 (2) - 01:22:017 (2) - y is off by 1 pixel lel. (y=346 pls) Okay


K sorry I promised earlier up but i slept like a pig lel
good luck with the map!~
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1. 00:54:240 (2) - Just place another slider along this slider like below so you can check whether it's straight or not. Just go to and move over a beat on the timeline so you don't delete the actual slider.
   
   this is what i mean

   
2. 00:56:684 - I feel like you're really missing out on a beat here. I feel like you could make 00:56:462 (1) a short, slower slider, placed however you like, just so that you can hit that missing beat.
3. 01:01:795 (3,4) - I think you should move these so that they are right in the center between 2 and 5.
   
   See how they are kind of off center?

   
4. 01:10:017 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:10:684 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:12:017 (1) - remove NC

1. 00:36:906 (3,1) - This was literally the ONLY thing that bugged me with this difficulty. It doesn't seem like breaking the distance spacing for a new combo would hurt here. In my opinion, it looks odd that these two sliders are on top of each other.

1. 00:14:240 (1) - blanket this better with 5 from the previous combo
2. 00:32:240 (1) - I know you're kind of out of room here, but the amount of spacing between this and the slider 3 from the previous combo isn't enough to indicate that there is an extra half beat between 3 and 1 compared to the other objects.
3. 00:35:128 (5) - perhaps move to x=92 to line up with 4?
4. 00:40:906 (4,5) - blanket better
5. 00:55:972 (6) - move to x=68 y=148 and look how much nicer it looks <3
6. 01:16:240 - I think you should either get rid of the break and leave it, or map this part with some repeat-sliders or something. It looks cleaner if the break isn't there overall.

1. 00:13:795 (2) - move to x=272 y=208 for neater look
2. 01:16:240 - Same here, with the break time, it looks neater without it, or if it were mapped.

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~! I've replied to your mod of my map! /t/231620

Now to mod your map!

[Insane]

1. 00:54:240 (2) - Just place another slider along this slider like below so you can check whether it's straight or not. Just go to and move over a beat on the timeline so you don't delete the actual slider. Thanks for advice but I really like to make the slider look art like that xD
   
   this is what i mean

   
2. 00:56:684 - I feel like you're really missing out on a beat here. I feel like you could make 00:56:462 (1) a short, slower slider, placed however you like, just so that you can hit that missing beat. Emphasis on white line so no
3. 01:01:795 (3,4) - I think you should move these so that they are right in the center between 2 and 5. Hmm..looks fine to me
   
   See how they are kind of off center?

   
4. 01:10:017 (1) - remove NC Okay
5. 01:10:684 (1) - remove NC ^
6. 01:12:017 (1) - remove NC ^

[Hard]
You're hard seems pretty solid to me (see what i did there lol)

1. 00:36:906 (3,1) - This was literally the ONLY thing that bugged me with this difficulty. It doesn't seem like breaking the distance spacing for a new combo would hurt here. In my opinion, it looks odd that these two sliders are on top of each other. What I was thinking that I might ruin the DS if I put it far each other and I waiting someone to pinpoint this lol okay fixed as you said

[Normal]
Fufufufu i see some blanketing problems xD

1. 00:14:240 (1) - blanket this better with 5 from the previous combo Fixed, also you forgot to mention (4) blanket lol
2. 00:32:240 (1) - I know you're kind of out of room here, but the amount of spacing between this and the slider 3 from the previous combo isn't enough to indicate that there is an extra half beat between 3 and 1 compared to the other objects. It's Okay because these notes was put on red line and (1) follow the vocal
3. 00:35:128 (5) - perhaps move to x=92 to line up with 4? Oh yes fixed xD
4. 00:40:906 (4,5) - blanket better Fixed
5. 00:55:972 (6) - move to x=68 y=148 and look how much nicer it looks <3 Okay
6. 01:16:240 - I think you should either get rid of the break and leave it, or map this part with some repeat-sliders or something. It looks cleaner if the break isn't there overall. Alright fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:13:795 (2) - move to x=272 y=208 for neater look Okay
2. 01:16:240 - Same here, with the break time, it looks neater without it, or if it were mapped. Alright

Nice job hitsounding and stuff. It's a cute song! Good luck~<3

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skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi there! Here's the mod from my queue

[Insane]

00:22:240 (3) - move this slider to 272, 328 and angle it so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904583 I think this looks a little better Okay

00:22:684 (1) - Move to 432, 96 | 00:22:906 (2) - Move to 496, 44 | 00:23:128 (3) - Move to 328, 60 | 00:23:573 (5) -Make this a circle, Move to 408, 12 |
Changed by stacked (4) and (2)
00:23:795 (6) - Make this a 1/4 Slider and move to 336, 160 No and I don't really like how circles are so close like that I prefer my style more

and you get this really nice pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904601

01:02:684 (1) - Move this to 324, 324 and angle it so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904639 No because the default already has okay flow since when I finished (1) slider my cursor always end up at (1) circle which make this easy to navigate

Well that's it for my mod! I couldn't really find much to take issue with

Hopefully this helped you a little bit

Really catchy song, I love it! GL <3
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Rokkea wrote:

Hey, I'm here for some tryhard modding.

Oh yeah, welcome to the 1st mod of my entire life!

Easy

• 00:22:240 (1,2,3,4) - Looks totally weird for some reason. Sorry I can't think of anything, you'll have to make it better somehow. It looks fine my cursor moved to the next notes without realize everytime
  
  00:32:017 (1) - This slider is still pretty jarring! Think of something else that might fit that isn't an "L" shape. Even this could work, rly
  Bye bye my L slider ;^;
  
  00:52:906 (6) - As you can guess, I hate "L" shaped sliders. If I were you I would banish this accursed "not-even-a-90-degree" slider and change it to something else. You could keep it if you want though. Okay first I can't blanket this note with (1) but for now I don't know why I can blanket this with (1) xD
  
  01:04:017 (6) - Move to (136,168) for a slightly better-looking blanket. I fixed slider instead lol
  
  01:06:684 (2,3) - Move 2 to (432,264) and 3 to (364,196) for again, a better-looking blanket. Yep fixed slider instead
  
  01:21:795 (1,2) - Move everything to (300,144) for a decent imaginary line between circle and slider. Moved only (1)

Normal

• 00:10:240 (5,1,2) - Move 5 to (440,212), 1 to (424,332) and 2 to (220,216) as we need symmetry. Okay
  
  00:34:240 (4,5) - I would suggest cloning 4, ctrl+H the new slider placing it at maybe (88,268) because symmetry. However that would mean you will have to bring everything down for the 1.00 distance snap. You can choose to ignore this, I just find slider 5 weird. Looks fine I just want the flow to go circular like that didn't intend to symmetry
  
  00:44:684 (3,1) - Replace slider 1 with a cloned slider 3 with ctrl+H and ctrl+G for the sake of symmetry. Lazy take role here xD good job on finding this lol
  
  01:21:795 (1,2,3) - Move everything to (360,208) for a better-looking blanket. Okay some mod already mentioned this but I think it looks fine now I fixed a little bit

Hard

• It's so smooth, my newb instincts tells me it's perfect.
  
  ...nah jk it has only tiny problems. (but it still looks really good)
  
  00:53:573 (1,2) - Move slider 2 to (372,340) then rotate the whole thing by 3 degrees, with it's origin at the selection centre. Straight curve. Okay
  
  00:59:795 (4,1) - Only pointing out that it looks a little weird. Okay curved (4) xD

Insane

3.29 stars? I think I can mod this.

• 00:08:462 (6) - Rotate it by 4 degrees, then place it at (204,292) for a better looking "blanket". Okay
  
  00:20:462 (7,8) - Rotate slider 7 by 15 degrees , with it's origin at the selection centre (this is optional) and drag it to (328,248). Afterwards, move circle 8 to (332,112). That should probably make the pattern look cleaner. Okay
  
  00:23:128 (3,4) - Move 3 to (332,68) and 4 to (484,124) for a cleaner looking pattern. I changed to new pattern

Overall, it's really nice to play, though the insane might be too easy, but that's fine.

I hope I helped (even just a little) and good luck!
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PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!
My English is very poor, sorry

[General]

1. This song is TV Size? Yes but I don't include tv size at title
2. Add soft-sliderslide2.wav I use soft-sliderslide9.wav because it only use for Easy and I don't to make it conflict with others diff
3. 01:23:351 (1) - - I think spinner end 01:23:351 (1) the best.
   If you remove finish, spinner end is good now. No I like it like this but maybe I will want more mods about this spinner end so I can determine what to do with this

[Insane]

1. 00:10:462 (4) - Clap Whistle instead because it sound better than clap
2. 00:14:017 (2) - Clap No, that will make HS inconsistent, I think
3. 00:20:906 (7) - Finish No, I didn't intend to emphasis here like this one 00:28:462 (1) - so no need to add finish HS here
4. 00:50:462 (1) - remove NC Okay since it doesn't ruin the waypoint for the jump

[Hard]

1. 00:10:240 (5) - Clap Whistle at tail so it will consistent with Insane's one
2. 00:14:017 (2) - Clap ^
3. 00:20:351 (4) - remove whistle No , I want HS to consistent with Insane's one
4. 01:17:573 (4) - Clap No, that will make HS inconsistent, I think

[Normal]

1. 00:48:462 (6) - NC No, don't want to confuse Normal player with NC
2. 01:02:684 (6) - NC ^

[Easy]

none

Go go ranked If it good enough I will.
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The Girls wrote:

OMG this is the cutest song ever

This is Nana from Nana's queue

[General]
- You probably want to change the filename for the mp3. mp3clan doesn't exactly hide the fact you got this music somewhere not quite as legal. Lol. derp. Hah hah Okay xD
- You can remove "of" from tags. lol No the anime is name arpeggio of blue steel

[Easy]

SPOILER

[spoilerbox]- I love the hitsounds!
00:10:684 (5) - Blanket: It's just off a little bit. You want to make sure it's surrounding the circle perfectly. Like this.
Okay it's a bad blanket
00:35:128 (4) - Cosmetics: It's just a little below Slider 2, Move it up a little. Try copying Slider 2, Ctrl + H, then Ctrl + G for change in direction. Otherwise it looks lopsided. No need it play fine and I want to blanket 00:37:351 (2,3) - and stack 00:37:351 (2,4) - by not overlap too mcuh
00:41:795 (3) - Blanket: Same as before. Make sure to do it consistently. No this is perfect now http://puu.sh/b8Frj/76dad15ef3.jpg
00:46:240 (4) - Song: I feel like a spinner would be more appropriate for this section. If you don't want to put a spinner here, you can try this? Maybe this can be an alternative. (Sorry its so sloppy, I wasn't doing it in a hurry.) A spinner would fit but the player will have to tap 00:48:462 (1) - quickly so I don't put the spinner anyway changed slider but not like want you suggested

00:50:684 (3) - Blanket: YESSS! THIS is the sort of blanket you should strive for the previous two blankets i mentioned. Yeah
01:00:462 (4) - Cosmetics: The slider you have now doesn't flow aesthetically from Slider 2. Try this. (Ctrl + H) No I want this straight flow 00:58:684 (2,3,4) -

01:15:128 (3) - Blanket: Yeah, you are blanketing inside the curve. Refer to 00:50:684 (3).http://puu.sh/b8FUI/f400da04cd.jpg

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00:07:128 (1, 2, 3) - Flow: Its choppy. Not circular or alternating or dynamic. I think you should reverse the curve of the sliders on 1 and 3. Like this.
No I like this flow do you see the change in angle of (1) to (2) and to (3)
00:16:017 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Cosmetics: Either make this into a diamond, or create a pentagon using points off the end of Slider 2 to 6. Like this?
00:16:017 (3) - is where new chorus started and I emphasised how the music goes like tuh-tuh-tuh-tuh that why I use square
00:18:684 (2, 1) - Flow: I think you should try reversing both slider's curves. It flows better. No looks fine as it is ( I like flow like this)
00:29:351 (2) - Cosmetics: Symmetry with Slider 1. Ctrl + H the copied and pasted version. Already symmetry
00:30:240 (4) - Cosmetics: Looks bad following the Slider 2. Can you not try something like this? Okay looks nice

00:41:351 (5, 6) - Flow & Cosmetics: It looks choppy and doesn't well. How's this? Mine looks fine as it is also fix (5) curve a little bit I like flow like this

01:15:124 (1, 2) - Cosmetics: Looks better when centered along the Y-axis. Okay but I don't know is it the same as yours
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[Hard]

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I like fall in love with this song more with every new difficulty xD
00:14:240 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Cosmetics: Make square. Think Dear Rei diff of Dear You. Lol. It already square for me xD

00:22:684 (1) - Flow: Alternate the slider for better flow. Copy and paste Slider 2 and Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J Okay I like your flow

00:36:017 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3) - Originality: I feel like you could do more with this. It doesn't come off as original or inspired. Maybe this? Idk, is this confusing? Ask me about this if you can't tell what I'm doing. Its two-point windmill. I would gonna consider this because if I change this I have to change a lots after this but your style seem fine but the flow is not the same as mine since I want to emphasis in instrument for the flow
00:36:017 (1, 2)
00:36:906 (3, 1 )
00:37:795 (2, 3)
01:07:795 (1, 2) Flow & Cosmetics: THis? Okay but I don't know is it the same as yours

[Insane]

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00:26:684 (3, 4, 5) - Cosmetics: Less hrash of a turn. Okay

01:04:017 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Cosmetics: Make a star with this? Feels right for the song. And it doesn't add too much artificial structure to the song if you like the big jumps. No, well I don't care about shape here I just want it a bit challenge to fit Insane diff
01:12:684 (6) - BlanketAlready blanketed http://puu.sh/ba3vJ/026843f92f.jpg
01:15:351 (3) - Flow: Stack on top of Circle 2. You undermine the two surrounding sliders by moving the focus of the song away from what you're spinning around. Okay you're right

Yay, good luck ^^ Can't wait for you get to this ranked. Honestly I still think this is not enough to get ranked but I will try my luck xD
Your mod seems to be nice but I reject because of my intention for mapping like this xD

red means change
blue means no change

1. 00:27:573 (3) - change the sharp to this http://puu.sh/bfb5x/9cdac47b7e.png will be better

1. 01:12:017 (1) - change the sharp to this http://puu.sh/bfbv5/f49ed08148.png0.0
2. 01:16:462 (1) - the spinner should be end at 01:18:237 - I think

1. 00:12:017 (5) - changing to a straight slider will be better
2. 00:15:573 (5) - the same to ↑
3. 00:52:240 (3) - flow looks unsightly ,I think 0.0

1. It will be better to stack it with the next slider's haed

FlobuFlobs wrote:

highly recommended
Suggestion
Normal stuff


Red mean change
Blue mean no change

[General]Disable Letterbox during Breaks, there are no breaks lol

Ohh yeah lmao xD

[Hard]00:19:128 (6) - this HS q______q it doesnt fit, it has the same HS problems like the Insane so i wont mention them again But I think it fit <_< Change AR and OD to 6? its a rly slow map without spacing or hard pattern, AR6 would fit and OD5 seems to low for a hard
5= middle = normal, you know xD

Okay

[Insane]00:15:573 - how about adding here 2 circles instead of a slider? 00:15:573 - and 00:15:795 - are relativly important loud beats Okay you're right00:16:906 (3,4) - not a fan of these extrem curved slider, you keep it but i dont like them I like them00:19:128 (3) - this finish sound wrong lol remov it ? I think it fit for ending this rhythm00:28:462 (1,1) - these hitsounds are way to loud, keep 45% here please or just a tiny bit louder like 55%
80% scares the shit out of the player >_> Okay but I like to scare people xD00:35:573 (1) - meeeeh it doesnt fit, S:C1 would fit here better and its again so loud, 50% would be fine But I think it fit00:44:684 (3,4) - ctrl+g them? theres no reason to emphasize here[/colour] 00:56:684 (1) - ctrl+g would flow a bit better Okay I agree00:57:573 (4) - stack this one behind 00:57:795 (1) - it would emphasize the vocals really nice Okay nice flow too01:14:684 - the HS volume change doesnt fit here Delete this inherit point01:23:351 - add here note and move spinner to 01:23:573 - ? No ,I want the last rhythm to consist with the others diffs's last rhythm

i cant mod normal/easy so only those both diffs
gl with the map, its nice

jonathanlfj wrote:

lets see...

Red mean change
Blue mean no change

[General]
offset +6ms feels much better for me, don't forget to adjust green lines and preview time as well Sorry but I might not change offset now
the video aspect ratios are off, i found you a better quality one with higher res: http://puu.sh/biYl9.avi Thank you very much
make sure your kiai time settings on each diff is the same, since kiai times have to be consistent if you mapped all the diffs yourself

[Easy]
unsnapped green lines at 00:11:121 and 01:08:013 Fixed
00:10:684 (5) - NC should go here instead of 00:12:462 (1) Okay I think this will give more consistent in pattern
00:20:462 (2) - this would play better if you shorten it to 00:21:351 to catch the down beat, and then you can add a note at 00:21:795 I shortened it but I will not add note here 00:21:795 - I want a good break for beginner
00:32:017 (1) - this slider looks a bit unfitting, for the purpose of vocals here i would use a straight edge instead. example:

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I will try
00:46:240 (4) - for aesthetic reasons you can give this slider more jagged movement, and make the turns land on ticks. I will try example:

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01:00:462 (4) - try making this the same shape as 00:58:684 (2), would look alot better imo Yeah you're right
01:09:351 (1) - remove NC Okay
01:16:462 (1) - the normal sample on the end doesnt really fit since music goes completely silent here, would recommend just the hitnormal Alright I really curious about this but I finally found the answer
01:18:240 (3) - NC here instead of 01:18:684 (1) Okay this will consistent with the beginner of this diff

[Normal]
00:19:573 (1,2,3) - due to the nature of the rhythm here i would map it like this (notice the NC is now on 00:21:351):

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Nice, I see
00:25:351 - clap tick? same applies for all the other missing ones like 00:30:240 (4), 00:32:240 (1) etc. Guess I'm forgot about that
00:27:795 - this place felt a bit empty, you might want to use the same rhythm as 00:24:240 (5) Okay for consistency
00:41:351 (5) - consider lowering this a bit so the angle of flow feels more natural, and adjust 00:42:240 (6) accordingly Okay
00:48:462 (6) - NC here for the transition like the other diffs Okay
00:51:128 (1) - remove NC, also this rhythm is way to complex for a Normal, try something like this:

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Alright it better than mine
01:04:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try a similar pattern here since the one you have is rather too simple I will try
01:08:013 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:08:017
01:15:128 (1,2) - for better flow consider arranging it like this:

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I will try
01:16:462 (1) - this spinner plays much more natural if you ended it at 01:18:240, and start mapping at 01:19:128 instead Oh yeah why I 'm not knowing about this

[Hard]
00:14:684 (3,4,5) - these blankets can look better Fixed, blame my blanket skill
00:18:906 (5) - maybe a whistle here to rich up the hitsounds on this combo Okay
00:21:573 (2,3,4) - i would try to not overlap this with 00:20:684 (6), you can lower it to x:328 y:216 Okay the overlap looks bad
00:26:684 (2,3) - this spacing should appear so 00:26:684 (2,3,4,5,6) forms a more natural curve I don't understand this consistent DS?
00:32:240 (1) - i dont quite understand why this is a slow down slider...the vocal strength kinda imply a faster pace instead. Maybe a circle jump pattern instead? Okay I understand this, this Hard is a bit old to me ,fixed
00:40:906 (4) - NC should me here referencing 00:37:351 (1), you might want to rearrange its position so it breaks up with 00:39:573 (1,2,3) Okay
00:45:573 (5) - this slow down was a bit sudden, you can reduce the sv gradually starting from 00:44:240 (2) to smoothen the transition Wrong place for slowdown my bad it should be here 00:46:240 -
00:47:795 (4) - and similarly this one should be faster, and i do not recommend stacking sliders under repeats since that causes reading difficulty Okay, fixed
01:10:684 (5,1) - this jump felt a bit difficult to reach, maybe move 01:10:906 (1) to x:152 y:88 Okay
01:16:684 (2) - again, the clap sounds really out of place so i would suggest removing it Okay
01:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - the flow here can be adjusted to be smoother I will try

[Insane]
00:09:351 (2) - clap on start Okay, I forgot
00:13:795 (1) - remove NC, not really needed here Yeah I think no need to NC there
00:16:906 (3,4) - i would avoid using these kind of sliders since they kind of lean toward burai sliders, try something like this:

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I didn't know about burai sliders okay , fixed
00:19:573 (1) - if you listen carefully, the correct rhythm here should be like this:

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Ohh this part it so hard to map this part anyway ,fixed
00:22:240 (1) - remove NC Okay realized I didn't emphasis or change anything here
00:24:906 (1,2,1,2) - this pattern doesnt play very well, i would use a normal spacing or jump pattern here to contrast the anti jump after it Try to fix it
00:26:684 (3) - there should be NC here to indicate the anti jump like 00:18:684 (1) Ohh lord I forgot about this thing ***
00:29:351 (1) - remove NC Okay realized I didn't emphasis or change anything here
00:32:017 (2) - NC here instead of 00:31:351 (1) Okay for consistent in pattern
00:36:017 (1) - unnecessarily NC Don't know why but okay , fixed
00:46:684 (3) - try placing this at x:248 y:252, makes the jump more interesting imo Ohh I see yeah I like your jump pattern
00:53:573 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern played really confusing for me, since you used 1/2 anti jumps right after 1/4 normal spaced patterns. Consider changing 00:54:462 (5,6) to a jump instead I'm a bit out of idea here anyway , fixed
01:00:240 (3,4,5) - again a rather confusing anti jump, try something like this:

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This is confusing? not for me but anyway , fixed because I'm not the only player who play this map
01:07:795 (1,2,3,4) - not sure why you did this, it kills the distinction between the vocal and instruments which makes 01:08:795 (1,2) really hard to play. Suggesting you use the same pattern as before or modify 01:08:795 (1,2) to emphasis the instruments:

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Fixed another hard part of the music to map
01:08:013 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:08:017 Fixed
01:14:684 (3,4) - if you are trying to follow vocals, then the circle should be before the slider here Ohh yeah you're right
01:16:906 (4) - remove clap Okay
01:20:906 (1) - remove NC Okay

The diffs are quite nice to play, they just need more polishing, especially on NC consistencies. Get a few more mods then you can call me back to recheck

kakifly wrote:

m4m from my queue ^o^ love this song ;D
Red mean change
Blue mean no change

Easy

- I would suggest CS 2.5 for better diff spread;; No I hate using precise adjustment
- 00:20:462 (2) - you end this note on a strong down beat; i suggest starting a 1/1 slider at 00:21:351 so it also covers the beat in the music and maybe 2 circles at 00:20:462 & 00:20:906 to fill the gap

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First I do it like what you do but I think it might be too hard for beginner anyway fixed
- 00:32:017 (1) - this slider shape is a bit random imo where you trying to follow the vocal or something? Instrument+vocal no changed
- 00:37:351 (2,3,4) - not sure if this will confuse beginners or not I think it not
- 00:40:017 (1) - i suggest moving this down a bit; its very high up on the screen It didn't cover HP bar in realplay so that fine
- 00:43:128 (4,1) - if you did something like this i think it will have better flow and you can still blanket

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I care about this symmetry 00:41:795 (3,1) - more than blanket and the flow seems to be fine since I already NC to let the player know the flow is going to change
- 00:49:795 (1) - add clap? same with every other note that starts on this 'cannon fire' sound like 01:04:017 (1) - I want finish HS to emphasis the hard beat there
- 00:54:240 (1,2,3) - arrange like this; better flow

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Yours seems to be too generic so I prefer mine
- 01:16:462 (1) - line this up with prev slider; move to x260 x264 although personally i dont think you need to map this part; it feels very empty; do what you did in normal with the spinner Didn't intend to line up slider end since it so hard to do that lol Hmm..I will replace this with spinner so it consistent with Normal

Normal

- 00:18:684 (2,1) - nazi blanket >o< Okay I'm just suck at blanketing ;^;
- 00:22:240 (1) - remove nc Okay I think it no need to NC here
- 00:35:128 (6,1) - stack is a tiny bit off; please recheck I tried, It would be easier to do if you include x=? y=? for this too
- 00:40:906 (4,5) - create better flow This is what I intend to do http://puu.sh/bmw8r/80ffe7fec7.jpg a curvy flow
- 00:49:795 (1) - same as easy Same reason as Easy xD
- 00:52:240 (6,7) - i dont think you should map the vocals here; remove the 1/2 slider and put a circle on the downbeat But the vocal sound so strong
- 01:02:240 (5,6) - improve flow a bit Okay xD lined up
- 01:11:351 (5) - remove? imo i think its a bit hard for easy and 01:11:351 (5) - isnt really a beat needed to be mapped by a circle Okay I just feel a bit sleepy when I mapping this part xD
- 01:15:128 (1,2) - arrange like this so it overlaps less and is more readable

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Intend to overlap

Hard

- 00:10:240 (5) - arrange like this? i think it flows better

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Oh yeah symmetry
- 00:14:906 (4,5) - im not sure if these are blanketed correctly I'm also not sure lmao http://puu.sh/bmwvk/f58268fac6.png
- 00:21:573 (2,3,4) - these are not needed; i dont see what you are following in the music Listen closely there is a hidden beat at blue line, I think
- 00:28:240 (1) - this curvy slider is kinda random.. also you ended it on a strong downbeat; slider tails dont work well when emphasizing strong beats Fixed and note taken
- 00:32:906 (3,4) - i think its better if you stack these I guess you're right
- 00:42:462 (5) - this slider goes over a downbeat which sounds weird imo Tried to fix
- 00:47:795 (4) - at least have a hitsound on its tail Dx Wat? http://puu.sh/bmxdn/5691537cf3.jpg
- 00:51:573 (1,2) - blanket? Improved a bit
- 01:14:906 (1,2) - imo these notes are a bit hard to read at first since you have jumps all over the map if that makes sense.. Added a note here 01:15:351 - so this will create this jump 01:15:351 (2,3) - xD
- 01:16:240 (1,2,3) - maybe remove these; you can also stack 01:17:573 (4) - onto 01:16:017 (3) - No, it's fine to me

Insane

- 00:07:795 (4) - a 1/1 slider doesnt seem to fit here Fine to me
- 00:09:795 (3) - ^ ^
- 00:10:462 (4,1,2,3,4) - i suggest you arrange these nicely into a star shape or whatever; Move 00:10:462 (4) - away I want this shape http://puu.sh/bmxHQ/078307715e.png
- 00:13:128 (4) - same as first suggestion Same reason
- 00:20:906 (8) - i think it would make the map more fun if you stacked it onto 00:21:351 (1) - No I not think so
- 00:34:684 (3,1) - recheck stack Tried would be nice if you include x=? y=?
- 00:51:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally i dislike these jumps; a simple star or circle would work But I like it


thats all; hope it helped and good luck !

EDIT: i noticed the ranked version has a better audio? If you want you can try and find a better audio it would greatly improve your maps quality ^o^

1. In general, try to have something clickable every downbeat (big white tick) and place ur NCing to every downbeat. it works, and it's consistent.

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Kibbleru wrote:

[General]

1. In general, try to have something clickable every downbeat (big white tick) and place ur NCing to every downbeat. it works, and it's consistent.

[Nsane]

1. 00:18:684 (1,2,3) - there is no reason why you should have an antijump here, no changes in the music whatsoever. this here is just misleading Okay will try to fix this
   00:26:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
2. 00:19:684 (2,3) - instead of 2 circles, try placing a slider, that makes it nicer to play, this is more optional though. Okay I want this to be a bit more nice to play
3. 00:22:017 - why not map this note? Hmm...sound nice when add a note there Okay
   00:29:128 - ^ ^
4. 00:23:573 (4,5,6) - the jump from 4-5 is oddly large and from 5-6 is oddly small, make the ds here a bit more consistent pls Okay I will try
5. 00:25:573 (1,1) - both NC unecessary Fixed
6. 00:28:462 (1,2) - the finishes don't really follow the music, make sure ur only putting a finish when there is one in the music How about I only finish on (1) does it necessary to emphasis vocal here by HS?
7. 00:30:684 (3,4) - space this out a little more, the sudden decrease in spacing again, makes no sense Okay I thought this would goes with the music
8. 00:38:684 (3,1) - ctrl g this, the downbeat should have something clickable. use a different placement but the rhythm is really much better if u ctrl g Okay well I have no idea what is this downbeat clickable mechanic? It's necessary for downbeat?
9. 00:40:906 - again, try to have something clickable on every downbeat as it is usually a strong note. Okay but I still don't understand this downbeat thingy I know it a white line but what happen if it not clickable?
10. 00:45:573 (1) - NC gets abit inconsistent here. Fixed
11. 01:23:351 - how bout add a note and drag the spinner back? spinner heads are poor emphasis for such a strong sound

[Hard]

1. 01:23:351 - tbh alot better flow if u ctrl g Ctrl+G spinner?
2. 00:21:573 (2,3,4) - a bit overmapped for a hard diff, the triplet is barely audible. Alright I fixed it, 2 mods about this so far
3. 00:29:351 (5,6) - space this out normaly. the jump from 4-5 makes sense cuz 5 has a strong finish sound but 6 isn't really anything noticeable Okay make sense
4. 00:32:017 (6) - put nc on downbeat instead of 00:32:240 (1) - Okay, Oh lord I think I got problems with this downbeat thing
5. 00:43:351 (8,1) - bigger jump should be here instead of 00:43:128 (7,8) - also, sliders are easier to receive jumps with Okay make sense
6. 00:47:795 (4) - speed up way too much, do 1.25 instead for consistency also nc these too 00:46:906 (2,4) - to indicate speed up Okay make sense
7. 00:46:906 (2,4) - ctrl g the rhythm here Why?
8. 01:23:351 - same suggestion as for insane (may also apply to easy and normal) Okay

[Normal]

1. U can use more 1/2 rhythms for a normal, especially for this low bpm and u also have an easy
2. 00:53:128 (7,1) - this is abit too close, maybe try this Fixed
   
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3. u have a bunch of useless green lines u should really delete same with easy too. I will try

[Easy]

1. 00:32:017 (1,2) - make blanket better ? Should be okay now
2. delete useless green lines Alright
   pretty solid

rly impressive for a first map.

have a star cuz it brings me nostalgia for my first map q:

btw a tip to easily change offset;
-press f6
-check the boxes below

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-select all the timing points by either holding ctrl while clicking or just ctrl a to select all AFTER youve clicked at least one of the timing points

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-now it will give u an option to move the selected offsets, type in ur number, and click move

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i'm not sure if you know this already or not, sorry if you already did know. I just thought maybe the reason u refused to change offset from jonathan's mod was cuz it was too much work so i posted a simple method.

Kibbleru wrote:

00:15:573 (5) - for first suggestion in hard i actually meant this note lol Oh Okay xD better flow

and for the other one i again, posted the wrong time stamp lol

actually meant here 01:04:684 (4,5) - so that the slider will start on the stronger beat rather than the weaker beat Well I understand what you talking about now

i don't know what i did but i posted the wrong timestamps so thats why u got confused lol.

Kenterz wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue :3
Red mean change
Blue mean no change

Easy

1. 00:18:690 (2) - As you made for every pattern, you should hit the beat at 00:19:134 instead of 00:18:690, like you did for 00:13:801 (4), since there's an emphasized beat here, and it'll follow the previous patterns, so I suggest this exemple : Okay well yeah I need a strong feeling here 00:19:134 -
   
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2. 00:26:690 - This beat should be a new object since it's on a white tick, and there's an emphasized beat, so try this : http://puu.sh/bp84r.jpg Yeah that downbeat need clickable note
3. 00:28:468 (1) - This slider ends on a finish. There's a finish because it's an emphasized beat, so it should be hit. Delete finish
4. 00:30:246 (3) - Maybe you can try to make a curved slider ? It'll increase the flow a bit : http://puu.sh/bp8K3.jpg OK gonna make this a bit more intresting
5. 00:36:023 (2,3) - The transition between these 2 sliders is horrible. Also, 00:38:690 (5) is hidden by (3), so I suggest this exemple of pattern : How about I curved (2) and unstack (5)
   
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6. 00:48:468 (1) - I suggest to remove this NC, there's no reason to add a new combo here I think Thank you I won't NC this anymore \o/
7. 00:52:912 (1) - All the NC must start on a white tick, so this one must start on 00:53:357. I suggest to add a circle at 00:52:912 and add a 1/1 slider at
8. 00:53:357 (with the NC) All right I'm waiting for this so I can confirm to add note at downbeat there
9. 01:02:690 (4) - I think the finish on this slider's tail is a bad idea : the beat isn't emphasized, so it's not needed But I think the finish HS sound nice there
10. 01:07:579 (1,2) - The transition between these 2 objects is a bit annoying, I think you can try to move 01:08:912 (2) around x276|y172 to make a better transition and increase the flow. Okay
11. 01:09:357 (3) - You played the beat at 01:09:801 with the slidertick, it's quite "unlogical", maybe you can try to add an object here, then it'll be playable ? Changed rhythm
12. 01:11:134 - As I said above, this should be a NC, so you can add an object here Changed rhythm
13. 01:14:690 (3) - If you want to follow the combo pattern, this must be a new combo (then delete the NC at 01:16:468 (1) - ) Okay
14. 01:18:690 - Maybe you can add a circle here ? (I suggest around x292|y116) Hmm..Okay
15. 01:22:468 (2,3) - These 2 circles on a red tick are a bit hard for beginners, so laybe try this pattern : http://puu.sh/bp8yZ.jpg Okay if that hard for beginner

Normal

Try maybe to increase the AR a bit ? AR5 fits better imo Okay

1. 00:08:912 (3) - I suggest to reverse the curve of this slider to make a blanket with 00:08:023 (2) Hmm..alright better cosmetic and flow
2. 00:26:690 (3,4) - I think the overlap is a bad idea =/ Fixed also realized DS is a bit wrong there
3. 00:38:690 (7,2) - Same as above for the overlap, maybe you can try to fix it by stacking (2) with (7)'s head ? I'm thinking of doing bow pattern but if that overlap bad okay , fixed
4. 00:41:357 (5) - Try to reverse the curve to increase the flow Okay realized it flow a bit weird
5. 00:42:246 (1) - This NC shouldn't be here, it should be at 00:42:690, so add a slider here, and maybe a circle for 00:42:246 ? Yep yep downbeat xD
6. 00:48:468 (1) - Try to reverse the curve to make a blanket with 00:49:801 (1) ? It'll increase the flow for 00:46:246 (1,2,3,1) Woah this will be too much work I think I will consider this
7. 00:53:357 (7) - There should be a NC here, not at 00:53:801 Yeah
8. 01:02:690 (6) - The finish at the head of this slider is probably a bad idea imo Like Easy it sound nice to me
9. 01:04:912 (2,4) - Same thing about the overlap, try to stack it with (2)'s head Fixed
10. 01:08:023 (2) - I think you should add the clap on the head, it feels weird without it =/ Try to make HS consistent on all diffs
11. 01:09:357 (4) - Try to reverse the curve and blanket with 01:10:690 (5) ? Okay
12. 01:14:690 (7) - The NC should start here because it's on a big white tick Yeah
13. 01:16:023 - You missed an emphasized beat here =/ Okay I don't think this will confuse the player
14. 01:16:468 (3) - Try to use 2 construction points for the curve, it'll be prettier : I will try
    
    SPOILER

    

Hard

I really suggest AR7 or 7,5 for this diff, AR6 seems VERY slow =/ AR=7 so this will balance with Normal

1. 00:12:023 (5) - You forget a clap on this slider's head My bad
2. 00:17:357 (4) - Same as above ^
3. 00:22:246 - This emphasized bheat should be hit, so I suggest to move 00:22:023 (4) here. Okay fixed
4. 00:25:579 (4) - Same as above ^
5. 00:30:912 (3) - ^ ^
6. 00:33:357 (5,6,1) - The distance between these 3 objects isn't the same and should be to make the pattern prettier. Fixed
7. 00:38:912 (1) - The NC is wrong, it should be at 00:39:134. will try to fix
8. 00:43:134 (2,3,4) - Try to use the same distance for these one Okay fixed
9. 00:46:912 (1) - This NC isn't needed, I really suggest to remove it since there's no reason to add a NC here Ohh I guess I forgot to change this it was NC for change in SV before
10. 00:47:357 (3,4,1) - The distance between these 2 objects is (quite) the same, but not the distance in the timeline, so I suggest to move 00:48:023 (4) at x256|y356. Okay
11. 00:48:468 (1) - The NC shouldn't be here, it should be at 00:48:023. Okay I shall NC on downbeat
12. 00:53:357 (5) - The NC should be here Fixed
13. 00:54:912 (1) - The NC is also wrong for this one, it should be on the big white tick Okay try to fix
14. 01:02:690 (1) - This NC should be moved at 01:02:246 (also the finish on the head is probably a bad idea, like for the Easy and the Normal) Like I said finish sound nice to me so fixed only NC
15. 01:07:579 (5) - The NC should be here Yep
16. 01:07:801 (1) - I think you should add the clap on its tail, it's strange without any clap here Try to make HS consistent on all diffs
17. 01:18:912 (4) - You don't hit the emphasized beat at 01:19:134 with this slider, it's annoying =/ Fixed
18. 01:20:690 (4) - ^ Fixed
19. 01:23:579 (1) - Mabye you can add a finish ? Like you made on the Normal and the Easy

Forgot to add

Insane

I suggest AR9 for this one, since there's many jumps. It'll be better to play.
I also suggest 7 for the HP Drain Rate, it'll be as hard as an Insane then. But this is a slow song

1. 00:12:468 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can try to move these circles a little bit ? Like making some jumps, etc... Because at the moment, this pattern is quite boring to play =/ Okay gonna make it intresting
2. 00:13:134 (4) - With this slider, you don't hit the emphasized beat at 00:13:357, and it's annoying =/ Okay try to fix
3. 00:19:134 (7) - The finish on the tail is tottaly not needed, I think you must delete it since it doesn't follow anything on the song. I think it follow instrument on red line
4. 00:22:912 (1) - The NC is wrong, it should be mvoed at 00:23:134. Fixed
5. 00:25:579 (3,4) - This doesn't follow the previous pattern 00:24:912 (1,2). For the previous pattern, the circle is on a white tick and the slider on a red tick, but for this one, the circle is on a red tick and the slider on a white tick. Then I suggest this pattern :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Also, the NC should be at 00:26:690, like in the picture. Fixed
6. 00:27:357 (4,5) - What is this ? There's no reason to have a short distance here O.o Maybe you can create a pattern with adding a circle at 00:28:246 (because there's some vocal for this beat). Here is my exemple (but you might do the same thing) :http://puu.sh/bpdct.jpg Fixed
7. 00:29:357 (3,4) - Same as above, the short distance isn't needed here. Also there's no reason to add a finish on (3)'s head Fixed
8. 00:30:912 (4) - With placing this slider on a red tick, you don't hit the beat at 00:31:134, and it's quite annoying =/ Guess I'm abusing slider
9. 00:31:357 (5) - Same as above Oh lord this combo only has circles since there is no good place for slider is this okay?
10. 00:32:246 (2) - Same as above (also why did you use 0,75 for the silder velocity multiplier ? O.o) I messed it up
11. 00:39:357 (2) - This shouldn't be a slider if you want to follow the previous patterns (there's no reason to add a slider here). But you can add one at 00:40:468 since there's a beat at 00:40:690 which is not emphasized, so not needed to be hit. I started to understand this slider theory now
12. 00:43:579 (5) - Wow... This slider's construction is quite strange... I suggest this exemple (it'll be prettier) : http://puu.sh/bpdwI.jpg Fixed
13. 00:44:690 (2,3) - Same abuot the sliders on red ticks. Fixed
14. 00:48:468 (1) - The NC should be moved at 00:48:023. Fixed
15. 00:52:246 (1,1) - There's no reason to add these 2 NCs here, but one NC should be add at 00:53:357. Okay
16. 00:56:690 (1,2) - Same about the short distance, and the NC should be moved on (2). Fixed
17. 00:57:801 (3,4) - Same about the short distance, it breaks tottaly the flow and it's really bad to play. To tell the truth I got this short spacing from some ranked maps
18. 01:03:134 (1) - There's no need to add a NC here Okay
19. 01:06:468 (1) - ^ ^
20. 01:07:801 (1) - This NC should be moved at 01:07:579. Okay
21. 01:07:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - All of these sliders are overmapped, there's no 1/4 in the song. Hmm..Okay fixed
22. 01:12:690 (1) - The NC is wrong, it should be at 01:12:912, so you need to remove the slider, and to change the pattern. Fixed
23. 01:14:246 (1) - This NC should be moved at 01:14:690 Okay
24. 01:23:579 (1) - Maybe you can add a finish for this spinner ?

Forgot to add

Good luck for rank \:D/

1. Remove the word blue from the tags, as it is already mentioned in the title, there is absolutely no need to keep it as a tag.

1. Reduce OD to 2. Lowered OD would match btter and make more sense with the difficulty of the map. Besides, it's quite comon to have OD set to 2 and the song is not asking for anything special.
2. 00:25:357 - Both music and vocals are really strong here and that is why finishing the slider here is a better ideal. Don't froget to place a circle at 00:25:801 - afterwards. Example
   Note: same happens with 00:28:468 (1,2) - 2/1 slider just does not really fit here. Try a rhythm like this insntead. Same happens a few more times.
3. 00:48:468 (3) - I would place a new combo. Althout it breaks your comboing, it actually makes sense with the song and your patterns. You've already had an irregular new combo at 00:19:579 (1) - why not do it again?
4. 01:16:023 - an ignored beat and vocals here. I feel like having the beat mapped with a circle would be nice. Alternatively, you can try this rhythm.
5. 01:14:690 (1,2) - the tail of (2) is too close to (1). Some players may mistakenly hit it. Moreover, even "flow" tells beginners to hit the tail of (2). I'd try to make the pattern more understandable and, probably, reverse (Ctrl+G) it.
6. 01:19:134 (3) - a bad idea forthe easiest diff. the overlap may bug beginners, and doesnot look readable enough. Try to do something else here? Example.
   
   I did not really like the way how you've mapped the claps in the beginning 00:07:579 - 00:09:357 - and I feel like your rhythm in this diff may get better. Also, the flow was not perfect, but I think it's fine for a beginner-mapper.

1. Consider using Circle Size 3,5 to make the spread better balanced. Not to mention, CS 3,5 is better looking and a bit more challenging, so, players will love it!
2. 00:19:579 (1,2) - minor - you've had some cute blankets previously, why not make one more here? Example
3. 00:24:912 (1) - the slider does not fit with the vocals and having the clap at . tl;dr, just try to use an 1/1 s ldier + a circle to fit beetter with the music. Example
4. 00:30:690 - please, do not ignore these claps. The rhythm in the diff is too similar with the Easy and at leaast mapping the 1/1 beats would make the diff llightly harder.
   Note: 00:46:246 (1,2) - try to use 1/2 patterns when it is possible, too! It will give some more challenge to players and make the diff spread more balanced.
5. 00:48:023 (1,2) - try to move the new combo from (1) to (2). It will represent the music better, try it!
6. 00:52:690 - there're some vocals. Making the slider end here and then adding an 1/2 slider from 00:52:912 - is a nice idea as it sounds better and makes the diff slightly harder, which is a good thing since your Normal is too easy as it is. Example
   Note: 00:56:912 (1) - same. Just try to work more on your rhythm or get more opinions, I just really don't like those sliders and I think that they are off music.
7. 01:04:912 (2,4) - not a fan of such stacks in E-N diffs. Moreover, this is like the only stack like this in the whole diff, that is why it looks random and out of place.
   
   I feel unsure about your rhythm as it may get more complicated/intense. The diff itself feels too easy for a Normal. Generally, it lacks 1/2 beats and I think it'd get MUCh better without those 2/1 sliders.

1. You have quite a few jumps, AR 7,5 should look better and make patterns more readable.
2. Please, try OD 5,5 as there're some tricky 1/4 sliders. Also, set HP Drain to 6, your rhythm is intense and 6 should be more interesting/challenging for players.
3. 00:24:690 (5,1) - try to have a jump from (1) to (2) not from (5) to (1). as it is, (5) is the object that is emphasized and it does not play well. Example.
4. 00:28:690 (2,3) - please, Ctrl+G them. It will swap them on the timeline and give you better rhythm. Do not forget to fix the placement, afterwards.
   Note: if you'd like to know why, read this.
5. 00:46:246 - personally, I feel like this slowdown is kinda extra here. Do you really need it? Just a normal-speed slider would work fine, too. This is a hard diff, I suggest to avoid too many SV-changes here.
6. 01:10:023 (3,4) - try to Ctrl_G them. I've already explained why in the Normal diff, this time it's exactly the same reason.
   
   Generally, it looks a bit untidy but that's fine for a beginner. Try to clean it up a bit more if you have a chance to do so, but don't get too obsessed with it, the diff is quite alright even as it is.

1. I am sure that you've overused the jumps. A lot. Did you use distance snap? I'd recommend you to think again about the way you've mapped the diff and get more opinions on it. Most of the jumps seem quite randomly placed and follow nothing in music, besides, they don't really flow and it makes them even more uncomfortable to play.
   
   I disagree with this diff. Try to get more opinions or try to make your jumps more balanced and reasonable (which probably means respacing most of the diff).

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.
Red mean change
Blue mean no change
[General]

1. Remove the word blue from the tags, as it is already mentioned in the title, there is absolutely no need to keep it as a tag. Oh yeah I didn't notice this

[Easy]

1. Reduce OD to 2. Lowered OD would match btter and make more sense with the difficulty of the map. Besides, it's quite comon to have OD set to 2 and the song is not asking for anything special. Hmm..I see alright
2. 00:25:357 - Both music and vocals are really strong here and that is why finishing the slider here is a better ideal. Don't froget to place a circle at 00:25:801 - afterwards. ExampleWhen I recheck this it looks weird , fixed
   Note: same happens with 00:28:468 (1,2) - 2/1 slider just does not really fit here. Try a rhythm like this insntead. Same happens a few more times.
3. 00:48:468 (3) - I would place a new combo. Althout it breaks your comboing, it actually makes sense with the song and your patterns. You've already had an irregular new combo at 00:19:579 (1) - why not do it again? Actually I NC at evert downbeat ( Big white line) so I don't want to mess the combo
4. 01:16:023 - an ignored beat and vocals here. I feel like having the beat mapped with a circle would be nice. Alternatively, you can try this rhythm. Added circle, why I forgot to add a note for a beat here? *blame my old mapping skill*
5. 01:14:690 (1,2) - the tail of (2) is too close to (1). Some players may mistakenly hit it. Moreover, even "flow" tells beginners to hit the tail of (2). I'd try to make the pattern more understandable and, probably, reverse (Ctrl+G) it. I added a circle for a previous mod so it should have a note to navigate to (2) head now , I think
6. 01:19:134 (3) - a bad idea forthe easiest diff. the overlap may bug beginners, and doesnot look readable enough. Try to do something else here? Example. Hah hah I just feel a bit boring here so I try overlap pattern for Easy anyway fixed
   
   I did not really like the way how you've mapped the claps in the beginning 00:07:579 - 00:09:357 - and I feel like your rhythm in this diff may get better. Also, the flow was not perfect, but I think it's fine for a beginner-mapper.

This map pretty old now I'm lazy to remap this now if it doesn't have many inconsistent problems I wouldn't remap this

[Normal]

1. Consider using Circle Size 3,5 to make the spread better balanced. Not to mention, CS 3,5 is better looking and a bit more challenging, so, players will love it! Okay , Good that you don't suggest stuff like .1 .2 .8 .9 because I don't like too much precise for this stuffs xD
   I think .0 and .5 are really reasonable number
2. 00:19:579 (1,2) - minor - you've had some cute blankets previously, why not make one more here? Example I tried but I don't feel like it's a cute blanket because (2) has very small curve(it looks fine it just not my taste ) but I made change this for the sake of better flow
3. 00:24:912 (1) - the slider does not fit with the vocals and having the clap at . tl;dr, just try to use an 1/1 s ldier + a circle to fit beetter with the music. Example Yeah, I guess so
4. 00:30:690 - please, do not ignore these claps. The rhythm in the diff is too similar with the Easy and at leaast mapping the 1/1 beats would make the diff llightly harder. I'm too scare that it would hard for normal players
   Note: 00:46:246 (1,2) - try to use 1/2 patterns when it is possible, too! It will give some more challenge to players and make the diff spread more balanced. Okay
5. 00:48:023 (1,2) - try to move the new combo from (1) to (2). It will represent the music better, try it! But it might destroy NC consistent
6. 00:52:690 - there're some vocals. Making the slider end here and then adding an 1/2 slider from 00:52:912 - is a nice idea as it sounds better and makes the diff slightly harder, which is a good thing since your Normal is too easy as it is. Example Okay I should make Normal harder than Easy by adding some 1/2 notes
   Note: 00:56:912 (1) - same. Just try to work more on your rhythm or get more opinions, I just really don't like those sliders and I think that they are off music. I just don't know how make this reasonable for Normal player at that time
7. 01:04:912 (2,4) - not a fan of such stacks in E-N diffs. Moreover, this is like the only stack like this in the whole diff, that is why it looks random and out of place. This is also stack 00:38:690 (7,2) -
   
   I feel unsure about your rhythm as it may get more complicated/intense. The diff itself feels too easy for a Normal. Generally, it lacks 1/2 beats and I think it'd get MUCh better without those 2/1 sliders.

[Hard]

1. You have quite a few jumps, AR 7,5 should look better and make patterns more readable. Okay
2. Please, try OD 5,5 as there're some tricky 1/4 sliders. Also, set HP Drain to 6, your rhythm is intense and 6 should be more interesting/challenging for players. I just don't have any ideas about these things
3. 00:24:690 (5,1) - try to have a jump from (1) to (2) not from (5) to (1). as it is, (5) is the object that is emphasized and it does not play well. Example. And I don't have any ideas about how these emphasize things work
4. 00:28:690 (2,3) - please, Ctrl+G them. It will swap them on the timeline and give you better rhythm. Do not forget to fix the placement, afterwards.
   Note: if you'd like to know why, read this. Ohh I readed that before but I'm a don't understand about that I should go read it again
5. 00:46:246 - personally, I feel like this slowdown is kinda extra here. Do you really need it? Just a normal-speed slider would work fine, too. This is a hard diff, I suggest to avoid too many SV-changes here. This is the only SV-change for this diff
6. 01:10:023 (3,4) - try to Ctrl_G them. I've already explained why in the Normal diff, this time it's exactly the same reason. Okay
   
   Generally, it looks a bit untidy but that's fine for a beginner. Try to clean it up a bit more if you have a chance to do so, but don't get too obsessed with it, the diff is quite alright even as it is.

[Insane]

1. I am sure that you've overused the jumps. A lot. Did you use distance snap? I'd recommend you to think again about the way you've mapped the diff and get more opinions on it. Most of the jumps seem quite randomly placed and follow nothing in music, besides, they don't really flow and it makes them even more uncomfortable to play.
   
   I disagree with this diff. Try to get more opinions or try to make your jumps more balanced and reasonable (which probably means respacing most of the diff).

For this diff I mess it and it gave me a headache

Normal and Hard were quite fine but Easy and Insane definitely need more attention and work. Feel free to ask me for help, if something is unclear or you are not sure about something, I'll be glad to help! This is really help but some I'm still unsure about them

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Best of luck! [/list]

1. make harder, add variation
2. 00:08:357 - add note
3. 00:08:690 - 00:09:134 - add slider, remove 00:08:912 (1) -
4. 00:12:246 - ↑
5. 00:14:134 - add note
6. 00:24:023 (3) - remove. try long slider from (2)
7. 00:28:468 (1) - extend to white tick
8. 00:35:357 - need more notes. try suggestion ↓
9. 00:35:246 - to 00:35:579 - stream
10. 00:35:579 (1) - slider until (2)
11. 00:37:357 - let white tick free
12. 00:37:801 - add note
13. 00:42:023 - add note
14. 00:43:468 - add note
15. 00:43:579 (5) - half size repeat slider
16. 00:44:801 - add note
17. 00:49:801 (1) - extend to white tick
18. 00:57:134 (2) - remove
19. 00:59:579 - let white tick free
20. 01:08:134 (3) - remove. maybe add here 01:07:912 -

okdesu wrote:

from Endless modding queue~

suggestion
should fix
must fix
Red mean change
Blue mean no change
[Insane]

1. make harder, add variation
2. 00:08:357 - add note No ,it looks overmapped
3. 00:08:690 - 00:09:134 - add slider, remove 00:08:912 (1) - No (1) is a strong beat that need to emphasis by clicking it I called it downbeat
4. 00:12:246 - ↑ ^
5. 00:14:134 - add note No ,rhythm looks weird to me
6. 00:24:023 (3) - remove. try long slider from (2) No (3) also a downbeat that need to emphasis according to this http://puu.sh/bBfJg/166957e911.png
7. 00:28:468 (1) - extend to white tick Not necessary, I guess
8. 00:35:357 - need more notes. try suggestion ↓:arrow: Not necessary, I guess
9. 00:35:246 - to 00:35:579 - stream:arrow: Not necessary, I guess
10. 00:35:579 (1) - slider until (2):arrow: Not necessary, I guess
11. 00:37:357 - let white tick free No that emphasized beat I don't want to ignore it
12. 00:37:801 - add note 2nd and 4th white line really fit for slider end,I guess
13. 00:42:023 - add note Weird rhythm since red line doesn't looks like need to map at all
14. 00:43:468 - add note Why? I couldn't hear any beat there If I mapped that blue line this would be overmapped note
15. 00:43:579 (5) - half size repeat slider Red line doesn't really sound so strong that why I ignored it
16. 00:44:801 - add note Result in overmapped
17. 00:49:801 (1) - extend to white tick Some how white tick here sound so strong I would prefer to put something clikable there
18. 00:57:134 (2) - remove No, that will destroy rhythm
19. 00:59:579 - let white tick free No, white tick is a strong beat I can't ignore that
20. 01:08:134 (3) - remove. maybe add here 01:07:912 - The blue tick that I mapped sound stronger than your so no change

gl (｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright quick recheck no kd Yay \o/
Red mean change
Blue mean no change
[General]
after discussion with a few other BATs, its confirmed that your map needs a +7 on the offset (so offset 7142). Please resnap all notes timing sections and preview point afterwards Okay

[Easy]
00:35:579 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing inconsistency here Alright just realized
00:51:357 (3) - a rhythm like this is quite challenging for newbies, i would suggest you remove this note Hmm..not that much I guess since (3) is a strong beat might be good for the newbies to follow the strong beat vocal here
01:11:579 (2) - spacing (use grid size 4 to fix these small inconsistencies) Okay fixed
01:16:468 (1) - i would end this at 01:18:246 since thats the heavy down beat Okay I just realized I can use finish HS there too emphasis that heavy beat

[Normal]
Normal feels slightly too easy for a Normal, Here are some places where you can consider adding circles to spice it up a bit: I thought 1.85 star would be enough now anyway I will select it
00:08:690 - Added
00:10:468 - No , sound not so strong for me
00:12:246 - Added
00:15:801 - Added
00:17:579 - No , sound not so strong for me
00:20:246 - Added, this is a stream part for Insane and hard so I gonna add a note here
00:25:579 - Added
00:29:134 - Added
00:34:690 (2) - start this slider at 00:34:468 instead to follow vocals Well I think it better to follow downbeat here ( that why I NC here )
00:47:579 (4) - would be cool if you could place the slider here:

SPOILER

Okay better cosmetic
00:58:246 (3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

I prefer to place notes on white line instead since the beat there sound strong http://puu.sh/bCBY0/a3bbdd819d.png
01:14:690 (1,2,3,4) - following vocals here would be much easier:

SPOILER

Is this okay? http://puu.sh/bCC4N/be165fa77e.png
01:19:801 - circle Added

[Hard]
01:17:579 (4) - clap? Sound better without HS for me
01:22:468 (2,3,4) - i think this rhythm represent the music much better:

SPOILER

Okay sound much better

[Insane]
Try AR8.5, makes the jumps much easier to follow Come to think this again I think AR8.5 is alright for this xD
00:48:023 (1) - instead of having two repeats, breaking this up into a circle then a repeat slider at 00:48:468 seems a much better option. You can have the new circle at the bottom left corner of the screen to avoid reading confusions Alright I just thinking about stack notes here
01:02:246 (1) - similar suggestion here, i will let you decided where to put the new circle I stacked
01:22:468 (2,3,4) - same as Hard Changed

Well thats all, just make sure your Normal has a proper difficulty between the Easy and Hard, and you can let me know afterwards

After I made changed to Normal it still looks fine since the star diff doesn't >2.25

1. source: 蒼き鋼のアルペジオ -アルス・ノヴァ-
   [quote="wikipedia":1337]2013年5月30日にアニメ化が発表され、『蒼き鋼のアルペジオ -アルス・ノヴァ-』（あおきはがねのアルペジオ アルス・ノヴァ）のタイトルで同年10月から12月まで放送された。全12話。its mean "the anime have broadcasted as 蒼き鋼のアルペジオ -アルス・ノヴァ- (Aoki Hagane no Arpeggio: Ars Nova)". so you should also add -アルス・ノヴァ-
   http://anidb.net/perl-bin/animedb.pl?sh ... e&aid=9905 see also
   
2. add "Aoki Hagane no Arpeggio: Ars Nova" to tags for searching.
   some people use romanized name, so would be better to add.
3. soft-sliderslide9.wav is unused, so you must remove one.