Samah wrote:

Righto.
So you fixed the offset/bpm, but the notes didn't snap to the right positions. I've taken a guess as to the positions you wanted them.
For now I'll just give some very generic pointers. That weird Aimod didn't tell me the notes didn't snap
Also, don't kudosu this post. Modders are only supposed to receive kudosu once per map, and you've already given me some.

[General]
You need to go through all your difficulties and add some interesting hitsounds!
Try to keep the rhythm and new combos falling exactly on the start of every other bar. For a song like this you probably need to aim for 2 bars (8 beats) per combo. OK
You might want to change the combo colours too. To me, using the default ones tends to leave a map feeling... unfinished.I added two more colour.Is it OK now?
If you're going to put "arpeggio of blue steel" in the tags, change the source to be the Japanese title.Changed it
Aim for perfect distance snap everywhere unless you want to accentuate the eccentric flow of a certain part of the song.I will
If an average player can play your map and full combo it first shot, you know you have your spacing right.OK

[Easy]
00:19:351 (1) - 00:19:573 to 00:21:351.Done
00:22:017 (1) - Move to 00:22:240.Done
00:23:795 (2,3) - Move to 00:23:573 and 00:24:017.Done
00:49:795 - Add a note here.Done
01:02:684 (1) - Extend this to 01:03:573.Done
01:08:462 (1) - Shrink this to 01:09:351.Done
01:10:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bring these all back one beat to start on 01:10:240.Done
01:18:906 (1) - Change this to be 01:19:1278 to 01:20:906.Done
01:21:128 (2) - Move to 01:21:351.Done
01:22:017 (3) - Move to 01:21:795.Done
01:22:462 - Add a note here.Done
01:23:351 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240. Keep the final spinner the same on all difficulties.OK

[Normal]
00:19:461 (1) - 00:19:573 to 00:20:906.Done
00:23:573 (5,1) - Try to avoid small slider overlaps like this unless it's intentional and makes the map more fun.I put too much emphasis on spacing too much so I forget about overlap thing
00:24:906 (1,2) - This is bad for a Normal difficulty.Changed (2) to slider
00:27:129 (5,6) - Also bad for Normal. You could do it for a harder difficulty, but you would need to make sure the (6) is perfectly stacked on the end of the slider. At the moment it's slightly below it.Moved (6) away from end of slider
00:31:129 (5,1) - Bad overlap for Normal.Moved it
00:32:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - This half beat offset doesn't fit the rhythm of the song. Bring them all back half a beat to start at 00:32:017.Done
00:34:683 (5) - After moving it, shrink this to be one beat (end on 00:35:128).Done
00:35:573 - Add a note here.Done
00:56:906 (2,3) - Bad overlap for Normal.Moved it
01:07:129 (7,1) - ^Moved it
01:12:906 (3,5) - ^Moved it
01:20:906 (4,5,6) - Bad overlap for any difficulty. Also try to keep the rhythm of this section consistent.Moved it
01:23:573 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

[Hard]
00:13:351 (6,1) - This doesn't play well.(6) should end here 00:13:573 - my bad
00:19:351 (6,1) - Too many repeats, and the overlap with (1) is bad.Fixed it
00:27:795 (9) - Starting a bar on the end of a slider doesn't always work, especially if it's a repeat slider. It fits some songs and styles, but not this one, I think.I shortened this slider 00:27:573 (9) - and added a note here 00:28:240 -
00:34:795 (1) - Starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad (and probably unrankable). Bring it back 1/4 of a beat to 00:34:684.I didn't know that anyway moved it
00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is ok, but you need to make sure the slider notes are perfectly stacked or it looks messy.Fixed it.Now it look perfectly stacked now , I think
00:38:684 (5,6) - Slider is too close to (5). Bend it out a bit more.Done
00:46:017 (1) - Move this to 00:46:240 and make it shorter so it doesn't bounce off the blue tick, then add a note here at 00:46:017.Done
00:49:795 (1) - This combo is way too long!Oh my bad
00:52:240 (9) - New combo here.Done
00:52:240 (9,10) - Bad overlap.I put too much emphasis on spacing
00:57:795 (1,3) - Move (1) down a bit and (3) up a bit.Done
01:02:684 (4,5) - Don't overlap these.Fixed it
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^Fixed it
01:10:906 (4) - Too many repeats.I shortened it by two notes and add a note here 01:11:573 -
01:16:017 (3) - Get rid of one of the control points on this slider to make it a nicer curve.Done
01:22:906 (10) - Change from a slider to a note.OK
01:23:462 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

[Insane]
00:13:351 (5,1) - Don't overlap these.Changed this slider 00:13:351 (5) - position
00:19:573 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - New combo, and make this a nicer curve.Done I think it look nice now
00:24:017 (9) - Delete this.OK
00:24:128 (10) - Don't start a slider on a blue tick. Change it to be 00:24:017 to 00:24:462.I guess blue tick is a bad tick for mapping XD anyway done
00:27:128 (5,6) - Too close together.Moved it
00:30:462 (4,5) - Don't overlap.Moved this slider 00:30:462 (4) - away
00:32:240 (1) - This looks bad. Just make it a nice 3-point arc instead.Fixed it
00:34:795 (1) - Change to 00:34:684 to 00:35:573.Done
00:36:906 (5,6,7,8) - See my comments in [Hard] about stacking sliders like this.Made it look perfectly now,I think
00:49:573 (1) - Delete this note, and move the next one down and away from the previous slider 00:48:462 (8).OK
00:51:573 (1) - New combo.Done
00:58:240 (8,9,10,11) - The notes are too close together for this pattern.Moved them a little.I scared that it may be too hard
01:02:684 (11) - New combo.Done. So I need to make a new combo when I start a stream
01:03:684 (20,22) - Delete these and move (21) and (23) somewhere else.OK
01:04:462 (2,3,4,5) - Again, these need to be stacked perfectly, and shouldn't overlap with 01:04:240 (1).Moved (1) .I think the stacks look perfect now
01:12:684 (5) - Move this so it's not in the middle of that square (1-4).Moved it
01:18:240 (7,8) - ^Moved them
01:21:795 (6,7,8,9,1) - Try to keep the rhythm of this the same in all difficulties.OK
01:22:684 (9) - Remove the repeats so this ends at 01:22:906.Done
01:23:684 (1) - Change to 01:23:351 to 01:26:240.Done

がんばって！

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
すごくいいの歌だ！
from my modding queue
[General]

Add "Anime" to the Tag~

Added
[Easy]

1. 00:12:462 (4) - Move this to x :276 , y : 104 Moved
2. 00:16:906 (3) - This slider is too far away from the previous object. I suggest to make it like this : http://puu.sh/8WQU9.PNG OK
3. 00:22:240 (1,2,3) - The spacing is really messy at here. I really suggest you to remapping this part.Accepted
4. 00:24:906 (1,2,3,4) - Same like the above~Accepted
5. 00:30:240 (2,3,4) - Use 1.0x Distance Snap~ . Recommended Pattern : http://puu.sh/8WQX6.PNGFixed
6. 00:42:684 (3) - Move this to x:292 , y:244 , following the next slider 00:44:462 (1) - to x:268 , y:116Moved
7. 00:48:462 (1) - Changing SV Speed (Using SV's Multiplier) is really not recommended for easy. OK changed back to x1.00 SV
8. 00:48:462 (1,2,3,4) - The Spacing is really messy here too. (Remapping this with 1.0x Distance snap would be better)Fixed
9. 01:00:462 (3,1,2,3) - Same like above~Fixed
10. 01:10:240 (2) - Move this too x:348 , y:212Moved
11. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, The spacing really messy (Remapping with 1.0x distance snap)Fixed
12. Did you put "finish" on all objects? It's not good in my opinion~I will try to not overuse it
    
    Use distance snap for mapping an "Easy" diff. (Recommended is 1.0x for me)

[Normal]

1. 00:21:795 (2) - Move this to x:268, y:196, and rearrange the slider position, so it would be looks like this : http://puu.sh/8WSFI.PNG Fixed
2. 00:23:128 (4) - Object is too far away from the previous one~Fixed
3. 00:25:795 (2) - Move this too x:152 , y:60.Moved
4. 00:27:129 (4) - ^^^ x:104 , y :276Moved
5. 00:49:795 (1) - ^^^ x:412 , y:92Moved
6. 00:58:240 (3,4,5) - Fix the spacing here~Fixed
7. 01:03:129 (2,1) - ^^^Fixed
8. 01:07:129 (5) - ^^^, move this to x:316 , y:272Moved
9. 01:20:017 (2) - ^^^, to x:96 , y:176Moved
10. 01:22:240 (5) - This object is too far away from the previous one~Moved
11. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" one, don't overuse hit sounding please~

[Hard]

1. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Overuse of "Clap" I will try to fix that
2. 00:08:906 (1,2,3,4) - Overuse of "Finish" I will try to fix that
3. 00:13:795 (1) - to x:204 , y:156 for better spacing.Moved
4. 00:14:684 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/8WSIS.PNG , for make this better.OK
5. 00:19:129 (6) - This one should be changed. Using a repeat slider like that is just....It look weird now for me XD OK fixed
6. 00:34:351 (1) - Spinner should start from here.Changed to 00:34:462 - to 00:35:573 -
7. 00:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - Consider remapping this part. looks bad in my opinion.Hmm..OK removed (4) slider
8. 00:42:017 (5) - This long slider didn't fit the song~OK Changed
9. 00:53:573 (4) - http://puu.sh/8WSKU.PNG , looks betterFixed
10. 00:59:351 (6) - This repeat should be changed~Fixed
11. 01:03:351 (5) - Didn't fit with the song.Fixed
12. 01:05:128 (3) - Ctrl + G OK
13. 01:05:795 (4) - ^^^ OK
14. 01:16:017 (3) - Didn't fit with the song in my opinion.My bad I forgot to follow the vocal
15. 01:18:017 (3) - This repeat slider should be changed too~Fixed
16. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" and "Normal" diff. Don't overuse it~

[Insane]

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Didn't fit with the song I follow the vocal but fixed a little
2. 00:36:906 (5) - New ComboOK
3. 00:42:240 (8) - Didn't fit with the songFixed
4. Same Hit sounding problem with "Easy" , "Normal" and "Hard" diff. I suggest to remap this.

Just wanted to remind you, player may won't able to listen to the song because you covered the entire map with Hitsound. You shouldn't use too many hitsound.
Consider to remapping all diff so it will more enjoyable to play.
Hope this help and good luck!

1. in whole, straight sliders are too many. it's better to use curved sliders more
2. mp3 volume sounds small, doesn't it?
3. I suggest to end kiai-time at 01:16:017-

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing). I recommend to set DistanceSnap consistently
2. 00:32:017 (1) - the whistle at the middle of slider is not good
3. 00:38:240 (2,1) - for easy-diff, the stack like this should be avoided
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - swap NC
5. 01:00:462 (3,1) - this overlap is not good. rotate more~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:02:684 (1,2) - swap NC
7. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for beginner. just a suggetion
   
8. 01:23:351 (1) - soft-hitsound is better (applied to all-diff)

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible. for example, 00:10:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - is hard to find rhythm
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - in this case, symmetric position is better (Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:906 (2) - for normal, you sould not change SV(Slider Velocity)
4. 00:58:684 (4,1) - in this case, stack is better for good looking
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:462 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this
6. 01:05:795 (2,5) - ^
7. 01:20:906 (4,5,6,7,1) - rhythm suggetion~
   

1. decrease SV less than insane-diff
2. 00:08:017 (3) - it is better not to use reverse more than twice like this as far as possible. that's confusing to play
3. 00:13:795 (1,2) - in this case, it is better to blanket each other (Ctrl+< or > x2)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:018 (1) - awkward shape...
5. 01:18:017 (3) - I prefer to delete

1. 00:14:017- add a note
2. 00:14:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in this case, "create poligon circles" is useful (Ctrl+Shift+D). for example, how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   211,170,14240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   301,170,14462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,255,14684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   255,309,14906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15128,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15240,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15351,1,10,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:23:573 (5,6,7,8) - stream is not suitable. 1/2 rhythm is better, imo

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]

1. in whole, straight sliders are too many. it's better to use curved sliders moreI will try to make more
2. mp3 volume sounds small, doesn't it?I will consider it
3. I suggest to end kiai-time at 01:16:017-

I will go retiming to make my map more enjoyable
[Easy]

1. for easy-diff, you should conform DS(Distance Spacing). I recommend to set DistanceSnap consistently OK used x1.00 DS on all notes in easy
2. 00:32:017 (1) - the whistle at the middle of slider is not good Removed
3. 00:38:240 (2,1) - for easy-diff, the stack like this should be avoided Moved (1)
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - swap NC Swaped
5. 01:00:462 (3,1) - this overlap is not good. rotate more~
   
   SPOILER

   
   Okay
6. 01:02:684 (1,2) - swap NC Swap
7. 01:20:017 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for beginner. just a suggetionFixed
   
8. 01:23:351 (1) - soft-hitsound is better (applied to all-diff)

I will retiming
[Normal]

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possible. for example, 00:10:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - is hard to find rhythm Fixed(4)
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - in this case, symmetric position is better (Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G) Considered it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:906 (2) - for normal, you sould not change SV(Slider Velocity)I will retiming
4. 00:58:684 (4,1) - in this case, stack is better for good looking (1) stacked with (4)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:462 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this Fixed
6. 01:05:795 (2,5) - ^ (5) stacked with (2)
7. 01:20:906 (4,5,6,7,1) - rhythm suggetion~Fixed the slider
   

[Hard]

1. decrease SV less than insane-diffI will retiming
2. 00:08:017 (3) - it is better not to use reverse more than twice like this as far as possible. that's confusing to playFixed
3. 00:13:795 (1,2) - in this case, it is better to blanket each other (Ctrl+< or > x2)Considered it
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:018 (1) - awkward shape...Fixed
5. 01:18:017 (3) - I prefer to delete

Considered it
[Insane]

1. 00:14:017- add a noteAdded
2. 00:14:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - in this case, "create poligon circles" is useful (Ctrl+Shift+D). for example, how about regular pentagon?Thanks but I remapped this part awhile ago
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   211,170,14240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   301,170,14462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,255,14684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   255,309,14906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15128,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15240,1,10,0:0:0:0:
   183,256,15351,1,10,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:23:573 (5,6,7,8) - stream is not suitable. 1/2 rhythm is better, imo

Deleted (6) and(7)

you can make hitsound more organized. let's try!Thank you I'm gonna do it
~Good Luck~

TheForgotten5 wrote:

Hi there! From modding queue! Please keep in mind that these are just suggestions, and that you don't need to follow them!

Anyways, let's get started.

[Easy]
01:20:017 (1) - Move this repeater to avoid the stack from 1~2 No I try to keep spacing

[Normal]
00:36:462 (2) - Consider moving this note to X=160 Y=232 for consistent spacing. Example: http://gyazo.com/a268bb0e3cdb5daa44a42686c406864b
No I want to keep the spacing so it not too hard for beginner
00:39:573 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern here. Example: http://gyazo.com/baf22012eca8e2aa6d0838cea079f774 It's already triangle but smaller
01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - Make a rhombus shape here. Exmaple: http://gyazo.com/52fa6445b92d2a227297b0ece541940a Nice suggestion accetped

[Hard]
Seems ok.

[Insane]
00:32:240 (8) - New combo I Forgot to new combo there XD thanks
00:32:906 (9,10,11,12) - Make it look like this: http://gyazo.com/aee224aca6565ac9e67e43a34a77df75 It's a triangle shape of (9) (10) (11) then jump to (12) so no

That's it from me. Good luck!

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
2. Recommend this Image for Background image. http://www.zerochan.net/1650014 Or http://www.anime-desu.com/wp-content/up ... 0x1920.jpg
3. Remove Checking on Count-Down, Widescreen support(You don't used SB), Letterbox during breaks(You don't have break time).
4. you used Normal, soft, drum hitsound. it's not have consistency. Please use one hitsound. At least, Using drum hitsound is not feat!
5. Recommend this KiAi formation First KiAi 00:49:795 ~ 01:02:240 Second KiAi01:04:017 ~ 01:16:240

1. 00:18:684 (4) - Finish sound is not good. remove it.
2. 00:35:573 (1) - finish on head of slider
3. 00:41:795 (2,3) - blanket and add NC (3)
4. 00:44:462 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:23:351 (1) - decrease volume on end.

1. 00:33:794 (3,1) - stack perfectly
2. 00:35:573 (6) - finish than clap
3. 00:46:240 (5) - NC
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - remove finish. it just loud.
5. 00:49:795 (1) - finish.
6. 01:00:462 (1) - this too. remove finish
7. 01:23:573 (1) - same to Easy mod

1. 00:09:128 (2) - make one repeat. and add note on 00:09:795
2. 00:11:573 (2) - ^
3. 00:50:684 (3,4) - placing on arrow slider may make hard.
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC

TaMul wrote:

hi~ From My M4M Queue!

[General]

1. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
2. Recommend this Image for Background image. http://www.zerochan.net/1650014 Or http://www.anime-desu.com/wp-content/up ... 0x1920.jpgI will take the first one thanks
3. Remove Checking on Count-Down, Widescreen support(You don't used SB), Letterbox during breaks(You don't have break time).Removed
4. you used Normal, soft, drum hitsound. it's not have consistency. Please use one hitsound. At least, Using drum hitsound is not feat!OK I will reconsider it
5. Recommend this KiAi formation First KiAi 00:49:795 ~ 01:02:240 Second KiAi01:04:017 ~ 01:16:240

Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:18:684 (4) - Finish sound is not good. remove it.Removed
2. 00:35:573 (1) - finish on head of slider OK
3. 00:41:795 (2,3) - blanket and add NC (3) NC(3) but no blanket
4. 00:44:462 (1) - remove NC Accepted
5. 01:23:351 (1) - decrease volume on end.

Accepted

[Normal]

1. 00:33:794 (3,1) - stack perfectlyOK
2. 00:35:573 (6) - finish than clap Accepted
3. 00:46:240 (5) - NC Accepted
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - remove finish. it just loud.Removed
5. 00:49:795 (1) - finish. Accepted
6. 01:00:462 (1) - this too. remove finish Removed
7. 01:23:573 (1) - same to Easy mod

OK

[Hard]
You almost used white, red line. it's so boring. try to make more blue line Blue line will make some notes look awkward so I try to avoid blue line as much as possible

1. 00:09:128 (2) - make one repeat. and add note on 00:09:795 Accepted
2. 00:11:573 (2) - ^ Accepted
3. 00:50:684 (3,4) - placing on arrow slider may make hard.OK moved
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC

Accepted

You really need lots of mod! Good Luck!

1. hitsounds isnt good i think,this song not suit for that hitsound,maybe you'd better find another hitsounds.wav(search your beatmaps,there is so many)
2. there is two .osb files in you map,you may changed your map's artist or something makes that happen,one of them may useless,delete it
3. the rhythm is too simple,too few rhythm changes

1. 00:07:128 (1) - if there just is a slider,this is ok,but if seeing with followings,its bad look 00:07:128 (1,2) - this is better looking
   
2. 00:16:906 (3) - too casual，makes it look like this
   
3. 00:26:684 (2,3,4) - dont useing this 3circles too many with this rhythm,you can change some of it with this
4. 00:32:017 (1,2) - not good looking,blanket like this
   
5. 00:35:573 (1) - stack00:33:795 (2) - perfect
6. 00:41:795 (2,1) - blanket like this
   
7. 00:47:128 (2) - too ugly
   
8. 00:58:684 (2) - ^

1. 00:08:906 (4) -
   here is yours,if the angle of 00:08:906 (4) - more small，like this,the flow and looking will be better
2. 00:10:684 (1) - try to make it flw more suit with 00:10:239 (6) - and 00:11:572 (2) -
3. 00:41:351 (4) - try stack 00:39:573 (1) - ,and make 00:41:795 (5) - Symmetric with 00:40:462 (3) -
4. 00:23:128 (4,5) - what about this rhythm
5. 00:26:684 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:30:240 (3,4) - change use this
7. 00:31:795 - add a circle
8. 00:34:239 (4,5) - better follow voice like this
9. 00:46:240 (1,2) - this is more suit the rhythm
10. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^
11. 00:52:462 (4,1) -
    and many like this in KIAI time, find them and change them more suit
12. 01:08:462 (1) - bad look
13. 01:12:906 (3,4) - blanket
14. 01:15:573 (2) -
    
15. 01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - make it different feeling with kiaitime such as[img]puu.sh/91XMH.jpg[/img]

1. 00:10:240 (5) - i think its not so suit,miss a beat here 00:10:462 -
2. 00:10:906 (1) - ^
3. 00:14:795 - this circle better using in this time 00:14:573 -
4. 00:17:018 (6) - move it time to 00:16:351 -
5. 00:18:128 - add a circle if you feel good
6. 00:19:906 - ^
7. 00:23:351 (5) - this is better
8. 00:27:351 (4,5) - ctrl+G ,then fix the ds
9. 00:30:240 (2) - make this slider only one return then,delete 00:31:129 (3,4) - ,new slider start at 00:30:906 - ,end at 00:31:351 -
10. 00:32:018 (1) - end at 00:32:462 - ,add a circle at 00:32:684 -
11. 00:33:572 (5,6,7) - what about this
12. 00:48:462 (7) - nc,to show this slider is faster
    the same with normal,the rhythm isnt good enough

1. 00:13:351 (5) - make the end of this slider stack 00:12:684 (2) -
   
2. 00:27:573 (6) - stack 00:26:462 (2) -
3. 00:31:128 (5) - stack 00:30:017 (2) -
4. 00:26:462 (2,6,2) - make this stack one place
5. 00:48:462 (8) - NC,same reason with hard diff
   .....

LZCSC wrote:

( ^0^)/from BMT\(^0^ )
my english isnt good enogh, so i useing more pic to show what i mean,sorry;w;
General

1. hitsounds isnt good i think,this song not suit for that hitsound,maybe you'd better find another hitsounds.wav(search your beatmaps,there is so many)OK
2. there is two .osb files in you map,you may changed your map's artist or something makes that happen,one of them may useless,delete it OK
3. the rhythm is too simple,too few rhythm changes

Easy

1. 00:07:128 (1) - if there just is a slider,this is ok,but if seeing with followings,its bad look 00:07:128 (1,2) - this is better looking
   
   Fixed
2. 00:16:906 (3) - too casual，makes it look like this
   
   Fixed
3. 00:26:684 (2,3,4) - dont useing this 3circles too many with this rhythm,you can change some of it with thisFixed
4. 00:32:017 (1,2) - not good looking,blanket like this
   
   OK
5. 00:35:573 (1) - stack00:33:795 (2) - perfectStacked
6. 00:41:795 (2,1) - blanket like this
   
   Fixed
7. 00:47:128 (2) - too ugly
   
   Moved (1) a little
8. 00:58:684 (2) - ^

Maked it better now

Normal

1. 00:08:906 (4) -
   here is yours,if the angle of 00:08:906 (4) - more small，like this,the flow and looking will be better
   Fixed
2. 00:10:684 (1) - try to make it flw more suit with 00:10:239 (6) - and 00:11:572 (2) - Fixed
3. 00:41:351 (4) - try stack 00:39:573 (1) - ,and make 00:41:795 (5) - Symmetric with 00:40:462 (3) - OK
4. 00:23:128 (4,5) - what about this rhythm Fixed
5. 00:26:684 (3,4) - ^Fixed
6. 00:30:240 (3,4) - change use this No
7. 00:31:795 - add a circleAdded
8. 00:34:239 (4,5) - better follow voice like this Fixed
9. 00:46:240 (1,2) - this is more suit the rhythm Chaged only (2)
10. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
11. 00:52:462 (4,1) - Fixed
    and many like this in KIAI time, find them and change them more suit
12. 01:08:462 (1) - bad look Fixed
13. 01:12:906 (3,4) - blanket Fixed
14. 01:15:573 (2) -
    
    Fixed
15. 01:18:684 (1,2,3,4) - make it different feeling with kiaitime such as[img]puu.sh/91XMH.jpg[/img]

Fixed

Hard

1. 00:10:240 (5) - i think its not so suit,miss a beat here 00:10:462 - Changed to repeat slider
2. 00:10:906 (1) - ^Changed to repeat slider
3. 00:14:795 - this circle better using in this time 00:14:573 - No
4. 00:17:018 (6) - move it time to 00:16:351 - Moved
5. 00:18:128 - add a circle if you feel goodConsidered
6. 00:19:906 - ^Added
7. 00:23:351 (5) - this is better Fixed
8. 00:27:351 (4,5) - ctrl+G ,then fix the dsFixed
9. 00:30:240 (2) - make this slider only one return then,delete 00:31:129 (3,4) - ,new slider start at 00:30:906 - ,end at 00:31:351 - Fixed
10. 00:32:018 (1) - end at 00:32:462 - ,add a circle at 00:32:684 - Fixed
11. 00:33:572 (5,6,7) - what about this Fixed
12. 00:48:462 (7) - nc,to show this slider is fasterFixed
    the same with normal,the rhythm isnt good enough

Insane

1. 00:13:351 (5) - make the end of this slider stack 00:12:684 (2) - Stacked
   
2. 00:27:573 (6) - stack 00:26:462 (2) - Stacked
3. 00:31:128 (5) - stack 00:30:017 (2) -Stacked
4. 00:26:462 (2,6,2) - make this stack one placeStacked
5. 00:48:462 (8) - NC,same reason with hard diffFixed
   .....

you need more mod
Good Luck!

1. 00:41:795 (2,1) - you can improve blanket here so that every point on the slider is equidistant from the circle
2. 00:54:240 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:12:462 (1,2) - ^
2. 00:16:017 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:14:240 (4,1) - ^
4. 00:23:128 (2,3) - never break time-distance spacing rule in easy/normals
5. 00:26:684 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:33:350 (1,2) - swap new combos so it can be on long white tick
7. 00:35:573 (5,1) - ^

1. 00:13:795 (1,2) - swap new combo to stay consistent and start new combo at long white ticks
2. 00:15:573 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:17:351 (1) - remove this new combo
4. 00:22:017 (1) - remove this new combo and add NC to 00:22:684 (3) and add new combo 00:24:906 (3)
5. 00:23:128 (4) - blanket 00:22:684 (1,2,3) better and
6. 00:23:573 (5) - blanket 00:23:128 (4)
7. 00:28:239 (1,2) - blanket better
8. 00:30:906 (3) - extend to 1/2 slider
9. 00:31:573 (6) - blanket something; just don't make it so short like that
10. 00:48:462 (1,1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one.
11. 01:02:684 (1) - ^
12. 01:06:018 (5) - add NC here and remove from 01:07:128 (1) -

1. 00:23:573 (5,6,7) - looks like 1/4 hits; either stack them or space them as far as the previous notes
2. 00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - possibly overmapped; i turned playback speed to 25% and can't hear any drums or other instruments playing this fast at this time.
3. 00:33:795 (6,7) - make these the exact same by copying/pasting one of them and rotating/flipping it.
4. 00:48:462 (1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one.
5. 00:50:462 (3,4,5,6,7) - same thing i mentioned earlier; i mean it's fun but not part of the music.
6. 00:52:240 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
7. 00:53:906 (2) - 1/2 beat before and after; space accordingly
8. 00:57:795 (2,3) - new combo is unnecessary
9. 00:59:795 (1) - dont' need new combo here
   

xxdeathx wrote:

hi, from my m4m queue:

[Easy]

1. 00:41:795 (2,1) - you can improve blanket here so that every point on the slider is equidistant from the circle Fixed
2. 00:54:240 (1,2) - ^

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:12:462 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
2. 00:16:017 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:14:240 (4,1) - ^ Improved
4. 00:23:128 (2,3) - never break time-distance spacing rule in easy/normals OK
5. 00:26:684 (1,2) - ^ OK
6. 00:33:350 (1,2) - swap new combos so it can be on long white tick Done
7. 00:35:573 (5,1) - ^

Done

[Hard]

1. 00:13:795 (1,2) - swap new combo to stay consistent and start new combo at long white ticks Done
2. 00:15:573 (1,2) - ^ Done
3. 00:17:351 (1) - remove this new combo Done
4. 00:22:017 (1) - remove this new combo and add NC to 00:22:684 (3) and add new combo 00:24:906 (3) Done
5. 00:23:128 (4) - blanket 00:22:684 (1,2,3) better and Done
6. 00:23:573 (5) - blanket 00:23:128 (4) Done
7. 00:28:239 (1,2) - blanket better Done
8. 00:30:906 (3) - extend to 1/2 slider Done
9. 00:31:573 (6) - blanket something; just don't make it so short like that OK extended
10. 00:48:462 (1,1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one. Made it slow a little bit
11. 01:02:684 (1) - ^ Made it slow a little bit
12. 01:06:018 (5) - add NC here and remove from 01:07:128 (1) -

Done

[Insane]

1. 00:23:573 (5,6,7) - looks like 1/4 hits; either stack them or space them as far as the previous notes Fixed
2. 00:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - possibly overmapped; i turned playback speed to 25% and can't hear any drums or other instruments playing this fast at this time. They overmapped
3. 00:33:795 (6,7) - make these the exact same by copying/pasting one of them and rotating/flipping it. Done
4. 00:48:462 (1) - in a lot of ranked beatmaps i've played, the 1 beat per syllable line that leads into the chorus is mapped by a really slow slider rather than a fast one. Fixed
5. 00:50:462 (3,4,5,6,7) - same thing i mentioned earlier; i mean it's fun but not part of the music. Yes I want my map to be fun
6. 00:52:240 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I want my map to be fun
7. 00:53:906 (2) - 1/2 beat before and after; space accordingly Fixed
8. 00:57:795 (2,3) - new combo is unnecessary Fixed
9. 00:59:795 (1) - dont' need new combo here Fixed

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q
As this is your first map, I'll explain some basic structure more instead of blindly pointing out mistakes like you'd do with more experienced mappers

[General]

1. Holy shit this bg <3
2. Do you really need 7 combo colours? 4 are usually enough Try to follow the colour of ships in this anime Use only 5 colours now

[Easy]

1. 00:12:462 (4) - Either curve this one or move 00:14:240 (1) - to X400. OR: move to 456/204 and 00:15:128 (2) - somewhere where it'd fit to the small curve the cursor will make. You can also curve 00:15:128 (2) - a little bit (not too much!) while you're at it (http://puu.sh/9aspI/34ce81330a.jpg). DOnt forget to fix the combo after it! Curved (4) ,moved (1) to x=400,curved (2)
2. 00:28:462 (1) - I'd say that you keep your hands off such "extremely" curved sliders. Sliders with a slight curve have a better effect and a better flow in lower difficulties as Easy and Normal. Sliders like this can feel chunky, which should not happen Fixed
3. 00:30:684 (3) - move this one either up or down to have a nicer flow (your mouse has to aim up or down with it, not just straight right, which can be boring) Moved up
4. 00:33:795 (2) - Try to make a blanket out of this (Have the slider "hug" the circle (quick example: http://puu.sh/9asGF/ce9890fc24.jpg&#41; To do that, you can use the approach circle of the circle to see, if it fits into the slider's trail (the white in the picture) Fixed
5. 00:38:240 (2,1) - Here you can either: Have both sliders on the same x coord or have each other be a blanket for the other one.
   For the first: you can use ctrl+g to see where the exact endtick for a slider is (hover your mouse over the last tick and check the coords on the top right) Then basically move the other slider to the same x or y coord. (click on the coors in the top right to place them even without the grid) I chose blanket
   For the second: It should look somewhere like this http://puu.sh/9asUA/5676e77856.jpg
6. 00:42:351 (2,1) - Try to make a better blanket out of this. The Sliderhead is slightly off (http://puu.sh/9asXV/4d001e0c80.jpg). Dont be scared of turning off grid snap for this, just make sure that you place everything correct later on agsin Blanketed
7. 00:44:462 (2) - curve this one slightly

Done

[Normal]

1. 00:08:906 (1) - missing clap on tail Fixed
2. 00:14:240 (1) - from here on, claps seem to be off. I think continuing them like you did before is a better idea Fixed
3. 00:33:350 (1) - remove this NC (while we're at it, I think this sounds better, as the "Na" starts 1/2 tick later as your slider does http://puu.sh/9atuP/ceddba6de9.jpg&#41; Fixed
4. 00:35:573 (1) - remove NC Fixed
5. 00:38:240 (5) - try to keep a constand spacing. the nest slider is .10 more away than the rest OK
6. 00:42:684 (1) - NC, remove 00:43:573 (3) - Fixed
7. 01:10:240 (3) - This overlap is wrong, move it to y 123

Moved

[Hard]

1. 00:10:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have alot of space towards the upper left corner, yet you go back towards where the combe before came from. This can be messy and difficult to read if the player uses hitburst (50, 100, 300 blah). You have alot of space there, try to make use of it :> Fixed
2. 00:27:128 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved Litltle fixed
3. 00:32:017 (7) - This jump seems kinda random and it's only there for the overlap. Either adjust the slider before or move this one Moved
4. 00:43:351 (3) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:55:129 (3) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:34:240 (6) - same here, but the other way around. The player would think that this is a 1/2 hitr as well, but its a 1/1 actually. Miss incoming. Try to avoid stuff like this Fixed
7. 00:38:906 (6) - this slidertick sounds very random, dont do that :< Fixed
8. 00:45:351 (4) - snapped incorrectly, ends on a blue tick. fix this one Fixed
9. 00:49:462 (2) - remove this one, as the sound's only on the first circle Fixed
10. 00:54:018 (1) - Wrong overlap, the end should be on x220 I saw space at NW so I moved to there
11. 00:56:684 (2,2) - Wrong overlap as well. 00:57:795 (2) - 's end should be on 280/68 Fixed overlap , end of 00:57:795 (2) - already x=280 y=68
12. 01:07:684 (1) - The actual tick stars at the tail of this slider, so a simple circle on 01:07:795 (1) - Same goes for the slider after that Fixed
13. 01:08:462 (3) - starts at 01:08:462 (3) - and ends either one tick after or before, depending where you'd like to have it

Fixed

[Insane ]

1. 00:12:684 (2,5) - Overlap is off. find the correct coords by ctrl+g'ing :> Fixed
2. 00:22:684 (1,2,3,4) - Spread those a bit so that they dont touch each other as much (1 and 3, 2 and 4) Fixed
3. 01:09:128 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:38:906 (4) - remove the slidertick here Fixed
5. 00:55:795 (4) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:48:462 (1) - I like that slowdown :3 Thank you

In general, there's still a lot to learn (obviously, as this is your first map) so I'd recommend you to check other (ranked) maps to see what they're doing, so maybe you'll be able to pick up something from there. Try to use a set spacing as well. It might not be the most difficult map to play then (if you're aiming for this) but it'll be a smooth map - and that's more fun than random stuffs everywhere :>

Gl with your mapset!

neonat wrote:

General

The hitsounds are different, very different on all difficulties, that is not good and shows inconsistency in the mapset. The use of the hitsounds seem random as well and doesn't follow any pattern and doesn't fit I will fix it

Normal

Hitsounds are very random and inconsistent

00:12:462 (1) - make it consistent with the start, whistle on the start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:13:794 (3) - remove whistle Done
00:14:239 (1) - remove clap Done
00:14:683 (2) - clap on start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:15:572 (3) - clap Done
00:16:017 (1) - whistle on start of slider and remove clap on end of slider Done
00:16:905 (2) - whistle Done
00:17:350 (3) - remove clap Done
00:24:906 (1) - remove whistle on start of slider and put whistle on end of slider Done
00:25:795 (2) - remove whistle on start of slider Done
00:35:573 (1) - position it nicer Done

SPOILER

00:52:462 (4) - ^ Fixed

SPOILER

01:14:240 (4,1) - blanket nicely Fixed
01:20:906 (4) - that clap was very sudden and out-of-the-blue Fixed

Hard

The claps and whistles are very random, why isn't consistent with the other difficulties anyway? Sorry I try to follow hitsounds with the music too much

00:14:240 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done
00:17:129 (6) - remove whistle Done
00:17:351 (7) - add clap on start of slider Done
00:17:795 (1) - remove clap Done
00:18:240 (2) - clap Done
00:26:683 (2) - remove clap on end of slider Done
00:27:128 (3,4) - blanket nicely Fixed
00:45:351 (4) - end slider at 00:45:573 as that's where the vocal is Fixed
00:54:018 (1) - the repeat arrow is quite hidden, you should shift the slider away so the they don't overlap Fixed
00:58:907 (4,6) - don't overlap Fixed
01:06:905 (3) - object end not snapped Fixed
01:08:351 (3) - slider should start at 01:08:462 - it's currently too early Fixed
01:12:906 (1) - remove clap on start of slider, add clap on end of slider Done
01:19:573 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done

Insane

00:13:351 (5) - remove clap on end of slider Done
00:24:017 (7) - remove whistle on start of slider Done
00:30:017 (2,3,4,5,1) - suddenly empty of whistles, unlike the previous part, this is an example of why your hitsounds are very inconsistent and doesn't follow any pattern or music properly Fixed
00:56:462 (1) - remove whistle on end of slider Done
00:56:906 (2) - remove whistle, use clap Done
00:56:906 (2,3) - remove clap on start of slider, if you really want clap, it should be on the end of slider, where it fits better Fixed
00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - why the sudden emptiness of hitsounds, another example of inconsistency without really any notice or feel of music which would require it Fixed
01:21:351 (5) - clap on start of slider Done
01:21:795 (6) - remove clap Done

Please do something about the hitsounds, good luck

• 
  • 00:08:906(2) — You could curve it more to make more flow
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:16:906(3) — Could be a bit higher than where it is currently (like 80,268 for instance)
  • 00:24:906(1) — Could be shaped differently.
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:26:684(2) — You should imo either curve it more, or not curve it at all because we can barely see it is curved.
  • 00:30:240(2,3,4) — Try to be more symmetrical by putting them below the middle of 1 :
  
  Like so for instance

  
  -> 00:33:795(2) — If you followed the previous •, don't forget to overlap 4 of previous combo.
  • 00:35:573(1) — So close from being at the center !
  • 00:42:684(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.
  • 00:47:128(2) — ^
  • 00:48:462(1) — ^
  • 00:48:462(1) — You can place it at (380,292) for a better flow
  • 01:02:684(1) — (396,204) for a better flow.
  • 01:04:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.
  • 01:07:573(3) — You can make a triangle with 1 and 2.
  • 01:08:462(1) — The tail can overlap 1 of the previous combo.
  • 01:12:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick.

• 
  • 00:08:906(1) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (340,288) for a better lining.
  • 00:12:462(1) — You can rotate it by +12° for a better lining (don't forget to replace 2 then).
  • 00:16:017(1) — ^
  • 00:16:017(1) — Same with -12°
  • 00:23:128(2) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (256,282) for a better lining.
  • 00:42:684(1) — Why is it not snapped ?
  • 00:44:462(4,5,6,1) — Try to make a perfect square.
  • 00:54:684(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle here to have (3,4,5,1) making a diamond.
  • 01:02:240(3,1,2) — Try to make a perfect triangle here.
  • 01:04:462(1,2,3) — ^
  • 01:12:462(2,3) — Try to make a perfect triangle with 2 and Head&Tail of 3 .
  • 01:21:795(5) — Consider moving to (352,272) for a better lining.

• 
  • 00:08:017(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:10:240(5) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 2.
  • 00:10:906(6) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 3.
  • 00:15:573(1) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider.
  • 00:20:240(4) — The snapping from 3 and 5 is not the same.
  • 00:20:240(4,5,6) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:27:351(4) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider.
  • 00:34:240(6) — Isn't the symmetrical of 5.
  • 00:42:906(2) — Consider moving it to (216,308) for a better lining.
  • 00:50:906(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 00:54:017(1) — Try not to overlap 5.
  • 01:05:128(3) — Make it aligned and having the same shape direction as 2.
  • 01:08:017(2,3,4) — Try to make a perfect triangle.
  • 01:20:017(2) — You can move it at (416,144) for a better flow.

Gunsillie wrote:

Hello, from my mod queue.
I am sorry for being that late, long story short I had issues with my computer...

• = Important
• = Recommended
• = Suggestion

_______

[Easy]

• 
  • 00:08:906(2) — You could curve it more to make more flow Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:16:906(3) — Could be a bit higher than where it is currently (like 80,268 for instance) Fixed
  • 00:24:906(1) — Could be shaped differently. Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  • 00:26:684(2) — You should imo either curve it more, or not curve it at all because we can barely see it is curved. Fixed
  • 00:30:240(2,3,4) — Try to be more symmetrical by putting them below the middle of 1 : Fixed
  
  Like so for instance

  
  -> 00:33:795(2) — If you followed the previous •, don't forget to overlap 4 of previous combo. No I keep spacing
  • 00:35:573(1) — So close from being at the center ! Little fixed
  • 00:42:684(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed
  • 00:47:128(2) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:48:462(1) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:48:462(1) — You can place it at (380,292) for a better flow Fixed
  • 01:02:684(1) — (396,204) for a better flow. Fixed
  • 01:04:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed
  • 01:07:573(3) — You can make a triangle with 1 and 2. Triangle shape (3),end of (1),(2)
  • 01:08:462(1) — The tail can overlap 1 of the previous combo. No
  • 01:12:017(1) — The shape dot is not at the same place than the slider tick. Fixed

[Normal]

• 
  • 00:08:906(1) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (340,288) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:12:462(1) — You can rotate it by +12° for a better lining (don't forget to replace 2 then). Fixed
  • 00:16:017(1) — ^ Fixed
  • 00:16:017(1) — Same with -12° OK
  • 00:23:128(2) — You could move the shape dot on the tail to (256,282) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:42:684(1) — Why is it not snapped ? Fixed
  • 00:44:462(4,5,6,1) — Try to make a perfect square. Fixed
  • 00:54:684(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle here to have (3,4,5,1) making a diamond. Fixed
  • 01:02:240(3,1,2) — Try to make a perfect triangle here. Fixed
  • 01:04:462(1,2,3) — ^ Fixed
  • 01:12:462(2,3) — Try to make a perfect triangle with 2 and Head&Tail of 3 . I blanketed them
  • 01:21:795(5) — Consider moving to (352,272) for a better lining. No I want to keep spacing

[Hard]

• 
  • 00:08:017(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:10:240(5) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 2. Fixed
  • 00:10:906(6) — Move it just a bit to avoid overlapping 3. Fixed
  • 00:15:573(1) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider. I don't see shaping dot
  • 00:20:240(4) — The snapping from 3 and 5 is not the same. Fixed
  • 00:20:240(4,5,6) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:27:351(4) — The shaping dot is not exactly at the middle of the slider. Fixed
  • 00:34:240(6) — Isn't the symmetrical of 5. Fixed
  • 00:42:906(2) — Consider moving it to (216,308) for a better lining. Fixed
  • 00:50:906(3,4,5) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 00:54:017(1) — Try not to overlap 5. Fixed
  • 01:05:128(3) — Make it aligned and having the same shape direction as 2. Fixed
  • 01:08:017(2,3,4) — Try to make a perfect triangle. Fixed
  • 01:20:017(2) — You can move it at (416,144) for a better flow. Fixed

[Conclusion]

As you may have noticed, I focused only on shapes for your maps because they are already well polished thanks to all the previous mods. I hope you will find some help in my advices. I wish you the best of luck for getting ranked !
~Gunsillie

P.S. : I apologize for the boycott of the Insane diff^^

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue! Sorry for late mod..

[Easy]

1. 00:22:240 (1) - Make this slider smoothly like the slider on 00:24:906 (1) - , for better flow. Fixed
2. 00:26:684 (2) - Instead of making this straight slider just for the rhythm, try curving it like this > http://puu.sh/9eGmj/d9164cd860.png Fixed
3. 00:30:240 (2,3,4) - Not a great pattern for circle just to make a blanket, try balancing it with 00:28:462 (1) - for a better one > http://puu.sh/9eGzq/0f15ab71c1.png Fixed
4. 00:39:351 - Unused Inherit point, Remove it Removed
5. 00:48:462 (1,1) - DS looks wrong. Fixed
6. 01:02:684 (1) - Since the HP of this diff is at ease, remove this slider's NC. Fixed
7. 01:16:017 - Same as 00:39:351 - Fixed
   
8. - Nothing to say in this diff...

[Normal]

1. 00:14:683 (2) - Move this slider to x:176|y:324 for a diamond formation > http://puu.sh/9eH4C/d0d07a6ded.png Fixed
2. 00:17:795 (1) - Curve this slider for symmetry > http://puu.sh/9eHaR/311f636b5d.png Fixed
3. 00:24:906 (1,2) - These two sliders are almost nearby the healthbar, which is unrankable, change its placement. Fixed
4. 00:31:129 (4,5,1) - Looks ungrateful to me, Try this at least > http://puu.sh/9eHuM/bbc516e691.png Fixed
5. 00:35:573 (1) - Remove NC, same reason in Easy. Fixed
6. 00:40:462 (3,5) - Make these two curvy for better flow > http://puu.sh/9eHGH/88527d0b11.png Fixed
7. 00:56:906 (2) - Make this slider blanketing on 00:56:462 (1,1) - Fixed
   
8. - This diff needs a little improvement somehow...

[Hard]

1. 00:22:795 (2) - Remove note, it doesn't sound good with the song track. Or you're trying to make on your own track?
2. 00:36:017 (1,2,3) - It looks boring when it's stacked like that, Give space a little.
3. 00:40:906 (3,4) - Fix DS.
4. 00:42:462 (1) - Make a blanket on 00:42:239 (5) - for better pattern, and better flow with 00:42:906 (2) -
5. 01:21:795 (7) - Add NC, New track.
   All fixed
6. - Same as Normal, but just fix the DS where they're too far and close. Or it may not be a "Hard" diff.

Cannot mod Insane diff due to a little... overmapped, Sorry...

But this is all i can find in your map, Nice CHs btw. GL ~

• Easy

  00:23:573 (2,3) - combine into a slider. i'm not suggest this rhythm on Easy
  00:30:240 (2,3) - ^
  00:31:128 (3,2) - try overlap
  00:44:462 (2,1) - blanket better
  00:49:795 (1,2) - combine into a slider
  
  
  

  • Normal

    00:28:906 (2,1) - blanket?
    00:31:795 (5,1) - Ctrl + G
    00:37:351 (4,6) - make to same shape
    00:50:684 (2) - confuse. move to other side
    01:00:017 - add circle
    01:08:459 (1,3) - better overlap
    
    Hard & Insane is good to me

From my queue!

Easy
00:23:573 (2,3) - combine into a slider. i'm not suggest this rhythm on Easy Fixed
00:30:240 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:31:128 (3,2) - try overlap No
00:44:462 (2,1) - blanket better Fixed
00:49:795 (1,2) - combine into a slider Fixed

Normal
00:28:906 (2,1) - blanket? Blanket
00:31:795 (5,1) - Ctrl + G Fixed
00:37:351 (4,6) - make to same shape Fixed
00:50:684 (2) - confuse. move to other side Fixed
01:00:017 - add circle Added
01:08:459 (1,3) - better overlap Fixed

Hard & Insane is good to me

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take?
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle?
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather?
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward.

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following.
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) -
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle?
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle.
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish.
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
N/A

[Insane]
Feel that many sliders are curved a bit too much. I would suggest that you standardize the curved sliders a bit, looks a bit too inconsistent atm. Just personal opinion though. Maybe I will take some times to fix all slider dots cause I was still newbie at that time

00:07:573 (3,6) - avoid overlapping? Curved (6)
00:09:128 (2,3) - Not a fan over such stacking, as the music is progressing smoothly and there is no sensible pause. Moved
00:10:240 (5) - missing clap? Whistle looks good to me
00:11:573 (4) - Less curvature? And maybe ctrl+G Fixed
00:13:351 (5) - There are four notes in the duration of this slider so this plays a bit too awkwardly for me. (Could try a 3/4 slider follow by a 1/2 one) I think like you too,fixed
00:15:128 (4,5,6) - personally I prefered a triplet after 3 instead of 4 No this rhythm look good to me
00:19:128 (5) - too curved Fixed
00:19:573 (1,2,3,4) - these are really confusing. would suggest decrease spacing or simply stacking Stacked
00:21:795 (3) - move this to the left a bit Fixed
00:23:573 (5,6) - fix blanket Fixed
00:28:684 (2,3,4) - ^ and perhaps making a triangle Fixed
00:39:573 (1,2,3) - why not centering this? Also better blanket for 2 and 3 with 1 Fixed
00:42:240 (7) - missing a vocal on the red line makes it werid Fixed
00:44:240 (4) - ctrl + g? Okay
00:45:128 (6,7,1) - fix spacing Fixed
00:46:906 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing gradually to fit the music? Changed pattern
00:53:128 (7) - move this to the left Moved (6) instead
00:53:573 (8) - make this a slider until the white line. Otherwise 9 is really confusing to read Okay
00:54:240 (3,1) -

SPOILER

Fixed
00:57:795 (5,6) - blanket Fixed
01:02:462 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:04:017 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
01:07:795 (2,3,4,5) - doesn't play well Fixed , I shouldn't mess with blue line too much
01:21:351 (5,6,7,8,9) - consider follow this part of the music?

SPOILER

I listen to music at 25% speed but didn't hear any instrument on 01:22:684 - and 01:23:128 - so fixed

Well many spacing looks random... Try to make things a bit more consistent unless you are making some patterns out of it.

Guess I will skip other diffs. Fell free to ask me to recheck them when it's a bit more polished

eINess wrote:

From my Queue.

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.

[General]

1. cheak please. http://puu.sh/9nbTw/e423e08a48.png

I don't have break time XD

[Insane]

1. cheak DS. all different. circles ~ Personally array of circles and not good slider.
   Dont work in conformity with the song's tempo.
   00:07:128 (1,2,3,4) - DS is a constant indication why not take? 1.5x DS on 1,2,4 x2.0 DS for 3
   00:14:017 (6) - add circle? No
   00:34:240 (7) - ctrl + G No It's jump between end of (6) and head of (7)
   00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - Would not it be nice to be more wide-open interval rather? No I prefer this
   00:42:240 (7,8) - change. http://puu.sh/9nc2a/b88dde5f75.jpg Fixed
   01:16:240 (1) - DS is awkward. Fixed

[Hard]

• 
  00:18:240 (2,3) - sama here. 00:16:906 (4,5) - more natural following. Fixed
  00:24:906 (1,2,3) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/9ncie/5fd9268ca5.jpg Accetped
  01:05:795 (1,2,3) - change shape. http://puu.sh/9ncoe/ef7179b7cc.jpg No

[Normal]

• 
  00:11:572 (2,3) - same. here. 00:13:351 (2) - Little fixed
  00:50:462 (2) - add circle? Added
  00:52:462 (4) - change. like this. http://puu.sh/9ncyV/56d8608caa.jpg Fixed

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:462 (2) - add cicle. No
  00:12:462 (6,7) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncEJ/41ec0dc08a.jpg Fixed
  00:19:573 (1) - add finish. Whistle look fine and soft to me
  01:20:017 (2) - change. http://puu.sh/9ncMo/9ed92113a7.jpg Fixed

GL ~

1. You have to remove "anime" in tags since it doesn't need.
2. Please add "aoki hagane no" to tags. As you know, it's a title of this anime.also how about adding "ARS NOVA" to tags ? It's a subtitle.
   

1. Overall Difficulty -1 or 2. It's too hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:10:684 (4) - add a new combo, These patterns are too long for this difficulty.
3. 00:12:017 (5) - hmm ... I think this note doesn't need here. Please remove it
4. 00:16:906 - ,00:18:684 (4) - It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners. So you should consider adding a clap same as your patterns 00:07:128 (1,2) -
5. 00:26:684 (2) - flow suggestion : Please try to make a repeat slider like this image. It would be better for the flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:48:462 (1) - These claps doesn't fit well with this kind of music. It's enough to use only whistle.
7. 00:49:795 - add a finish.
8. 00:51:573 - ,00:52:462 - ,00:53:351 - clap
9. 00:55:795 - Please remove this section. I feel this sliderslide is a bit loud
10. 01:19:128 (1) - In my opinion, it's better to put a note near center for beginners after a spinner. So Please remake this note like this
    
    SPOILER

    

1. Overall Difficulty -1.
2. 00:19:128 (2) - It's unnatural for the flow and visual. Please try to move it up and make a triangle
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:462 (3) - add a clap to the tail of the slider.
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff.
5. 00:49:795 - add a finish for kiai time.
6. 00:59:128 (3) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:13:573 - add a whistle here ? I agree your previous patterns at here 00:10:017 (4,5) -
2. 00:16:018 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, i prefer to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going anput ~ x1.20
3. 00:17:351 (6) - flow suggestion : try to rotate this slider about 90°for example :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:684 (1) - I think this spinner is too short for this difficulty. Please remake this part to some circles or sliders.
5. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff.
6. 00:49:796 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
7. 00:55:351 (4,5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this overlap. If you make like this image, it would look better to me.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:240 - ,00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here.
9. 01:04:017 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
10. 01:07:128 (4,5) - Same opinion as above. 00:55:351 (4,5) -

1. 00:08:462 - missing a clap
2. 00:13:573 - ~ 00:14:017 - Again, Please use whistles same your patterns at here. 00:10:017 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:15:240 (5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this 3 hits 00:15:128 (4,5,6) - . I feel this note (5) follows nothing. So consider removing it.
4. 00:20:906 - How about add a clap to the tail of the slider ?
5. 00:48:462 (1) - Same as Easy diff.
6. 00:28:684 (2) - I prefer to stack on here 00:27:573 (5) - It would be better for visual.
7. 00:32:906 (2,3,4,5) - I don't agree these big jumps at here. These doesn't fit well with this kind of music. So you should consider reducing these spacing at here.
8. 00:49:795 (1) - add a finish
9. 00:57:573 - ~00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here.
10. 01:16:240 - Why don't you turn down the volume at here ? it would fit well with this kind of music.

alacat wrote:

Hi, from my queue : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86607/

[General]

1. You have to remove "anime" in tags since it doesn't need. Okay
2. Please add "aoki hagane no" to tags. As you know, it's a title of this anime.also how about adding "ARS NOVA" to tags ? It's a subtitle.
   [img]http://puu.sh/9qiBu/35e4b103d4.jpg%20%20I%20will%20add%20ars%20nova[/img]

[Easy]

1. Overall Difficulty -1 or 2. It's too hard for this difficulty. Okay
2. 00:10:684 (4) - add a new combo, These patterns are too long for this difficulty. NC
3. 00:12:017 (5) - hmm ... I think this note doesn't need here. Please remove it I think so,fixed
4. 00:16:906 - ,00:18:684 (4) - It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners. So you should consider adding a clap same as your patterns 00:07:128 (1,2) - Okay
5. 00:26:684 (2) - flow suggestion : Please try to make a repeat slider like this image. It would be better for the flow. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:48:462 (1) - These claps doesn't fit well with this kind of music. It's enough to use only whistle. Fixed
7. 00:49:795 - add a finish. Okay
8. 00:51:573 - ,00:52:462 - ,00:53:351 - clap Okay
9. 00:55:795 - Please remove this section. I feel this sliderslide is a bit loud Decreased the volume
10. 01:19:128 (1) - In my opinion, it's better to put a note near center for beginners after a spinner. So Please remake this note like this Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. Overall Difficulty -1. Okay
2. 00:19:128 (2) - It's unnatural for the flow and visual. Please try to move it up and make a triangle I forgot this is normal XD,my bad
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:462 (3) - add a clap to the tail of the slider. Okay
4. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
5. 00:49:795 - add a finish for kiai time. Okay
6. 00:59:128 (3) - Try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:13:573 - add a whistle here ? I agree your previous patterns at here 00:10:017 (4,5) - Fixed
2. 00:16:018 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, i prefer to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going anput ~ x1.20 If you say so Okay
3. 00:17:351 (6) - flow suggestion : try to rotate this slider about 90°for example : I will consider it
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:34:684 (1) - I think this spinner is too short for this difficulty. Please remake this part to some circles or sliders. Okay
5. 00:48:462 (1,2) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
6. 00:49:796 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. Okay
7. 00:55:351 (4,5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this overlap. If you make like this image, it would look better to me. I think so , fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:58:240 - ,00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here. Removed some
9. 01:04:017 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. Finish at Kiai time start Okay
10. 01:07:128 (4,5) - Same opinion as above. 00:55:351 (4,5) - Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:08:462 - missing a clap Oops
2. 00:13:573 - ~ 00:14:017 - Again, Please use whistles same your patterns at here. 00:10:017 (4,5,6) - Okay
3. 00:15:240 (5) - I have a sense of discomfort with this 3 hits 00:15:128 (4,5,6) - . I feel this note (5) follows nothing. So consider removing it. Hmm..I didn't hear instrument at (5) so fixed
4. 00:20:906 - How about add a clap to the tail of the slider ? No,thanks
5. 00:48:462 (1) - Same as Easy diff. Fixed
6. 00:28:684 (2) - I prefer to stack on here 00:27:573 (5) - It would be better for visual. Okay
7. 00:32:906 (2,3,4,5) - I don't agree these big jumps at here. These doesn't fit well with this kind of music. So you should consider reducing these spacing at here. Fixed
8. 00:49:795 (1) - add a finish Okay
9. 00:57:573 - ~00:59:351 - I feel all whistles are too loud. Please remove some whistles at here. Fixed
10. 01:16:240 - Why don't you turn down the volume at here ? it would fit well with this kind of music.Decrease volume to 50%

that's all for now~ honestly this map needs more works quality on flow and aesthetic for bubble. well, Good luck

1. 00:16:906 (3) - clap at beginning, remove clap at end
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - change (1) to note, add slider from 00:25:795 - to 00:26:240 - (back-and-forth slider is fine where it is). This makes beat consistent with 00:21:351 - to 00:24:017 - (see screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751601 ; just focus on bar on top)
3. 00:28:462 (1,2,1) - nothing really "wrong" here, but I feel that three sliders in a row like this is a bit boring. You can try something like add a note at 00:31:573 - .
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC (just like 00:48:462 (1) - )

1. 00:14:239 (1) - to 00:19:128 (2) - Awkward change in clap placement. Keep it consistent by removing clap from 00:14:239 (1) - , placing clap on 00:14:683 (2) - , and continue alternating from there. (nenoat's mod brought this up before, but it still hasn't been fixed :\ )
2. 00:21:795 (2) - (being very picky here): slight alignment issue. Move the three points to (304,120), (258,96), and (211,107) (adjust however you want) (screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751617 )
3. 00:22:684 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:23:128 (4) - add NC
5. 00:29:795 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:30:240 (4) - add NC
7. 00:31:795 (7) - add NC, 00:32:905 (1) - remove NC (I'm actually not too sure about these two. It's up to you)
8. 00:56:462 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:56:906 (2) - add NC
10. 00:58:240 (1) - remove NC
11. 01:14:684 (5) - add NC

1. 00:15:573 (5) - add clap
2. 00:23:573 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:51:462 (6) - unnecessary note; music doesn't quite match this triplet. You'll probably have to change surroundings notes as well, but how you do that is up to you.
4. 00:53:573 (5) - add NC
5. 00:54:018 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:56:906 (7) - clap on slider end
7. 01:07:795 (6) - add NC, remove NC at 01:09:128 (1) -

1. 00:13:351 (5) - cursor stays in this corner of the screen a bit too long for my liking. Shorter back-and-forth slider, then add a note somewhere.
2. 00:15:128 (4,5) - The double stacked notes, in and of themselves, are not "bad", but throughout the song they're a bit excessive and break the flow. In particular, the double stacked notes in the intro should occur at the end of every other measure, so this one is out of place. Another example of these notes is 00:51:351 (2,3) - . Overall I would suggest cutting down on these and replace with other patterns.
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is an insane diff, but the spacing for these sliders is too small and feels "cramped". (Instead, something like 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is an improvement as there is flow/decent pattern, so you can use that as an example)
4. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (screenshot for reference: http://postimg.org/image/gauls7y9l/ ) So I'm playtesed this and I hit (1), (2), (3), and (4). (4) is about to curve downward and the slider direction is going to the left, so the next note is down and to the left? Nope, it makes a switchback to (1). Furthermore, I now have to make a sharp angle back up and to the right to hit the next combo. I think if 00:51:128 (1) - were a 180-degree image of 00:50:684 (4) - I would be happier (combo colors are a bit off; I was experimenting, sorry)
5. 00:53:906 (2) - Try making this a slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1754518 (or something like that)
6. 01:08:128 (3) - ^
7. 00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the speed up; music isn't changing in intensity/volume.

Narwhal Prime wrote:

Hi Celsius; terribly sorry for this late mod, but I haven't forgotten about your map! That's Okay

[General]
Excess timing sections in all diffs (for instance, in normal the sections starting at 00:38:906 - , 00:39:351 - , 00:39:462 - , and 00:42:240 - can be removed). Though I point out some hitsound issues below, I highly suggest checking each diff thoroughly and making sure your hitsounds are as consistent as possible. Same advice goes for NCs (and it would be nice if the NCs occur at the beginning of measures, since this song has a steady beat) Thanks for pinpoint at timing section

[Easy]

1. 00:16:906 (3) - clap at beginning, remove clap at end Okay
2. 00:24:906 (1,2) - change (1) to note, add slider from 00:25:795 - to 00:26:240 - (back-and-forth slider is fine where it is). This makes beat consistent with 00:21:351 - to 00:24:017 - (see screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751601 ; just focus on bar on top) Good idea
3. 00:28:462 (1,2,1) - nothing really "wrong" here, but I feel that three sliders in a row like this is a bit boring. You can try something like add a note at 00:31:573 - . Good idea
4. 01:02:684 (4) - NC (just like 00:48:462 (1) - ) Okay

[Normal]

1. 00:14:239 (1) - to 00:19:128 (2) - Awkward change in clap placement. Keep it consistent by removing clap from 00:14:239 (1) - , placing clap on 00:14:683 (2) - , and continue alternating from there. (nenoat's mod brought this up before, but it still hasn't been fixed :\ ) I fixed it and I shall remain it like that :^:
2. 00:21:795 (2) - (being very picky here): slight alignment issue. Move the three points to (304,120), (258,96), and (211,107) (adjust however you want) (screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1751617 ) Fixed
3. 00:22:684 (1) - remove NC Removed
4. 00:23:128 (4) - add NC Added
5. 00:29:795 (1) - remove NC Removed
6. 00:30:240 (4) - add NC Added
7. 00:31:795 (7) - add NC, 00:32:905 (1) - remove NC (I'm actually not too sure about these two. It's up to you) No
8. 00:56:462 (1) - remove NC Removed
9. 00:56:906 (2) - add NC Added
10. 00:58:240 (1) - remove NC Removed
11. 01:14:684 (5) - add NC Added

[Hard]

1. 00:15:573 (5) - add clap Okay
2. 00:23:573 (1) - remove NC Removed
3. 00:51:462 (6) - unnecessary note; music doesn't quite match this triplet. You'll probably have to change surroundings notes as well, but how you do that is up to you. Looks like I overmapped that part.Delete 00:51:240 (5) -
4. 00:53:573 (5) - add NC Added
5. 00:54:018 (1) - remove NC Removed
6. 00:56:906 (7) - clap on slider end Added
7. 01:07:795 (6) - add NC, remove NC at 01:09:128 (1) - Okay

[Insane]
I'll be blunt; I feel like this diff needs more polishing in terms of spacing and flow. I will point out some things that need work and why, and what can be done to fix it (I admit I'm not an expert on "fixing" things, but I'll try ._.' ). After you've done that, send a message to me and I can take a quick look. Lots of mods mention about flow and spacing. I should double check this diff.

1. 00:13:351 (5) - cursor stays in this corner of the screen a bit too long for my liking. Shorter back-and-forth slider, then add a note somewhere. Okay
2. 00:15:128 (4,5) - The double stacked notes, in and of themselves, are not "bad", but throughout the song they're a bit excessive and break the flow. In particular, the double stacked notes in the intro should occur at the end of every other measure, so this one is out of place. Another example of these notes is 00:51:351 (2,3) - . Overall I would suggest cutting down on these and replace with other patterns. I made jumps
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - This is an insane diff, but the spacing for these sliders is too small and feels "cramped". (Instead, something like 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is an improvement as there is flow/decent pattern, so you can use that as an example) Okay I fixed it . I see that no one mention about this part so I let it stay like that
4. 00:49:795 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - (screenshot for reference: http://postimg.org/image/gauls7y9l/ ) So I'm playtesed this and I hit (1), (2), (3), and (4). (4) is about to curve downward and the slider direction is going to the left, so the next note is down and to the left? Nope, it makes a switchback to (1). Furthermore, I now have to make a sharp angle back up and to the right to hit the next combo. I think if 00:51:128 (1) - were a 180-degree image of 00:50:684 (4) - I would be happier (combo colors are a bit off; I was experimenting, sorry) How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1755766
5. 00:53:906 (2) - Try making this a slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1754518 (or something like that) Okay
6. 01:08:128 (3) - ^ Okay
7. 00:57:573 (4,5,6,7) - Remove the speed up; music isn't changing in intensity/volume. Okay

That's my mod; hope you find this useful, and please let me know if you have criticisms/questions!

Regards,
NP

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


*BG - OK

*Mp3 - OK

Nyan~MOD

" Let me just clean your Map "

[Normal]
01:04:462 Blanket? No,thanks
01:07:129 ^ ^

[Hard]
00:10:240 Blanket? No,thanks
00:19:218 > copy the long note in 00:18:684 then move just below it > ctrl+g > then put a repeat . . like this? No


00:38:017 (4) Change placement? like this . . Okay


00:38:906 (7) End here - 00:39:128 Okay
00:39:351 Add a note ^


00:43:573 (4) Blanket? No,thanks
00:46:906 (3) ^ ^
00:48:240 (1) Remove Okay
00:49:128 Add a note No
00:49:240 ^ No
00:49:573 ^ No


^ This pattern is much better for Hard . . I don't think so,sorry

00:54:017 like this? Nice


01:17:351 try this. . Nice


01:18:461 Remove Blanket? Yes


01:23:128 Add a note No

Sorry can't MOD Insane . . though it needs more polishing . . ( >_< )

Great Map . . Hope my MOD helps . .
Good Luck~

sheela901 wrote:

Yo. I'm returning a favor.Thank you

Easy

1. 00:08:906 (2) - Copy and paste 00:10:684 (1) , do Ctrl + H and Ctrl + G, then move it to x:288 y:292. This way, 00:08:906 (2,3,1) can make a mirror pattern. Also, you have to move 00:07:128 (1) to x:231 y:115. Okay
2. 00:15:128 (2) - Move the second point to x:298 y:251, and the last point to x:241 y:229, so it could have a same aspect as 00:13:351 (3) . Okay
3. 00:32:017 (1) - Perfect the blanket by moving the second point to x:392 y:220, and the last point to x:391 y:107, with the Grid Snap disable. second point x=399 y=153 last point x=374 y=95
4. 00:40:017 (1) - It could have the same aspect as 00:38:240 (2) . Which means that, move the slider to x:217 y:168, the second point to x:273 y:152, and the last point to x:332 y:164. Okay
5. 00:47:128 (2) - Perfect the blanket by moving the last point to x:338 y:328. Okay
6. 00:58:684 (2) - Move the second point to x:356 y:313, and the last point to x:403 y:317. That way, it could have a better flow. Fixed

Normal

1. 00:07:128 (1) - Move this to x:16 y:318, so it could improve the flow? Yes,it is
2. 00:56:906 (1) - Move the second point to x:332 y:258, so it could flow with 00:58:240 (2) ? Nice
3. 01:07:129 (5) - Make a blanket combo with 01:06:240 (3) ? Hmm..Okay

Hard

1. 00:09:128 (2) - Add a point at x:290 y:310, by holding Ctrl and click on the slider, to add a point. It'll curve the slider. Okay
2. 00:38:017 (4) - Ugly overlap. Move this to x:269 y:308. But you have to modify the slider. Fixed
3. 00:56:906 (8) - Improve the blanket, by moving the second point to x:342 y:82, and the last point to x:277 y:62. Okay
4. 00:57:795 (2) - Same here, but move the slider to x:291 y:250. Move the second point to x:227 y:225, and the last point to x:196 y:164. Okay
5. 01:07:795 (1) - Try to improve the blanket with the approach circle of 01:07:573 (5) . Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane

1. 01:13:351 (1) - Move the note to x:276 y:159. No

Well, that's all. Good Luck on ranking this map. If you have any question, PM or poke me in-game.

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.

General

1. Delete the .osb file in the song folder since your map doesn't have a storyboard. Okay
2. Make sure the video offset of each diff is consistent, I saw E and N have a video offset of 0 while that of H and I is -90. Okay
   
   SPOILER

   Video,-90,"ccc.avi"

3. 00:19:573 - You are using S:C4 here but I can't find it in the folder. Is it being deleted accidentally? Forgot to change
4. Your preview time isn't snapped. Snap it to 00:48:128. Okay

Insane

1. 00:17:128 (5) - Add whistle on head and tail, like what you did on 00:13:351 (5). Music sounds similar imo. Okay
2. 00:18:684 (3) - This clap sounds a little bit noisy to me, coz it kinda breaks the pattern and the music is not that strong. Remove it? Changed to whistle
3. 00:22:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - these whistles are quite loud to me too, perhaps you can add them only on 00:22:684 (1,3) and head of 00:23:573 (5) coz these are the high pitches which need to be emphasized. Similar for other places using this whistle pattern. Okay
4. 00:35:128 (8,9,10) - I'm pretty sure these are overmapped without any solid beats on (9) and (10). Consider replacing them by a slider. I think so
5. 00:35:128 (8) - Add a normal-clap as you can hear something similar in the music. Okay
6. 00:43:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm is quite interesting, frequently switching from vocals to drums, like 00:43:351 (1) to 00:43:795 (2) (vocal --> drum) and 00:44:462 (4) to 00:44:684 (5) (drum --> vocal). Try this and it would be more consistent: Nice
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:128 (6) - Remove clap on tail, also clap on tail of 00:52:240 (8). The music isn't that strong imo. Okay
8. 01:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - Something similar to above: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:08:684 (3,4,5) - Suddenly switching from vocals to instruments bothers me :c Keep track on the vocal would be great: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:17:128 (3) - Normal sampleset clap as for resonance with background music. Okay
11. 01:23:351 (1) - The music is fading out and the whistle you put is somehow too loud. I'd suggest reducing the volume or removing it. Reduced volume

Hard

1. 00:19:129 (5,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is misplaced, try this or something which matches the beats: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:240 (3,4) - Again, same like in Insane. Okay
3. 00:36:017 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here is also weird. I don't know what u are intended to follow. No matter your aim is vocal or drums, rhythm should be something like this, with every stress lying on a slider head: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:38:017 (4) - This sudden dwindle in DS with steady music feels misleading, use a consistent DS please. Fixed
6. 01:12:017 (2,3,4) - The stresses are mistakenly captured too. 01:12:240 isn't a stress, so don't place a slider head there. Instead, stresses are on 01:12:017 and 01:12:462. Therefore, do it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. Hitsound suggestions are the same as Insane. I am too lazy to type them out again.

Normal

1. Delete these redundant green lines. All deleted
   
   SPOILER

   00:08:906 -
   00:10:684 -
   00:57:573 -
   01:22:240 -
2. 00:51:573 (4,5,6,7) - Difficulty suddenly increases a lot for this part because u suddenly follow vocal here, simplification of rhythm is highly recommended: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Why does the clap pattern suddenly change from 2-4 clap to 1-3 clap in the second kiai till the end?
4. 01:10:684 (4,1) - Improve the blanket. Okay

Easy

1. OD is too high for an Easy diff, decrease it by 1 please. Decreased
2. The clap pattern is very weird, they don't lie on downbeats but upbeats. Use slider tick to place claps on 2nd and 4th white ticks like I and H please. Poke me in-game if you don't understand what I mean. I will fix it
3. 00:24:906 (3) - NC, the combo seems too long for three big white ticks. Okay
4. 01:21:795 (3) - NC too. Okay

Good luck!

-Chata- wrote:

Hi. From -Chata- & K.P's Modding Queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

1. Clear

[Easy]

1. 00:32:017 (5) - suggest two kinds of here. delete this circle. or 00:32:240 (1) - stack on (5)'s space Stacked
2. 00:34:240 (1,1) - These spin are doesn't fit Easy diffculty. they are make sudden jump for Easy players Fixed
3. 01:21:795 (1,2) - delete circle. You should do make 1/1 beat here. it doesn't fit Easy Okay

[Normal]

1. 00:46:017 (5,1) - swap NC. acording to Insane NC (1) and delete NC this note 00:47:795 -
2. 00:52:240 (6,5) - remove the body of the slider on whistle. is not fit background muzic Okay
3. 01:10:017 (1,1) - Same as just above. you don't used it other diffs Okay
4. 01:20:017 (5) - New combo. same as others diffs Okay

[Hard]

1. 00:23:351 (2,3,4) - You can make blanket this better Improved blanket
2. 00:31:351 (5,6,1) - What's strange distance. don't use 0.75x section here. It so strange Fixed
3. 00:45:128 (1,4) - swap NC Okay
4. 01:16:684 (2) - I feel so strange this clap sound. you can try replace whitle sound here. Okay I find whistle more fit for this note

[Insane]

1. 00:51:795 (7) - New combo. same as Hard's pattern Okay
2. 00:52:906 - add clap Okay
3. 00:53:795 - Why you don't put in clap sound here? It's easier than Hard's pattern. how about this? http://puu.sh/a81M8/5b9ace95cb.jpg Change rhythm to http://puu.sh/a96au/7d5e8a49b7.jpg to match the instrument
4. 00:56:017 - 00:56:462 (1) - swap hitsound. clap's place wrong now Fixed
5. 01:07:795 (1) - same as 00:53:795 - 's suggetion Change rhythm to http://puu.sh/a973j/3c114b0557.jpg
6. 01:08:462 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/a81Xw/299a7015c4.jpg and don't forget put in clap sound ^
7. 01:17:128 (3) - turn down the volume a little Okay

it' over

good luck!

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there! here for a mod
Blue means personal opinion

[Easy]

1. I don't think it is necessary to have so many NCs at the starting part, but that's up to you Because Easy has low notes so that each combo are a small number
2. 00:12:462 (1) - Nazi-ish flow mod: Move to x:84 y:228 (it bugs me lol) (readjust 2) Okay
3. 00:32:240 (1) - End this 1 white tick earlier and put a circle at where the end used to be. Fits the rhythm better No
4. 00:50:684 (3) - Nazi-ish flow mod: Move to x:284 y:80 (readjust 1 and 2 after that) Okay
5. 00:54:240 (1) - ^ (x:300 y:196) Okay
6. 00:54:684 (2) - ^ (x:348 y:184) Okay
7. 00:57:351 (3) - ^ (x:384 y:76) Okay
8. 01:04:906 (3) - ^ (x:372 y:260) No
9. 01:12:017 (1) - ^ (x:292 y:72) Okay
10. 01:14:240 (2) - ^ (x:240 y:100) (Might need to adjust DS of note 3) Okay

Sorry for all the nazi mods, but apart from the sort-of jerky flows with the hitcircles, this diff is almost free from mistakes. Good job! (If having this "jerky" flow is your intention then ignore this mod lol) The problem is I made this diff too rushed

[Normal]

1. 00:15:128 (2) - Move to x:376 y:196 Okay
2. 00:15:573 (3) - ^ x:344 y:292 No
3. 00:48:462 (1) - ^ x:380 y:248 Okay
4. 01:08:240 (2) - ^ x:336 y:312(readjust 3. maybe 4 also) Okay
5. 01:12:017 (1) - ^ x:312 y:120 Okay

Same as before, couldn't find many errors so I just modded the placements

[Hard]

1. 00:11:128 (3,4) - This blanket could be improved a little bit Okay a little bit improve
2. 00:13:351 (3) - x:260 y:132 No
3. 00:54:906 (1) - x:156 y:160 (readjust 2 and 3) No
4. 01:01:795 (5,6) - Blanket them? No
5. 01:09:128 (1) - x:248 y:236 No
6. 01:15:573 (2) - x:428 y:168 Okay
7. 01:21:128 (5) - Super nazi mod: y-1 to stack perfectly with 3 Okay

^^

[Insane]

1. 00:10:684 (7) - Nazi mod: y-1 Okay
2. 00:11:351 (3) - Why does this move back in? wouldn't it flow better somewhere like x:72 y:256? I try to experiment some back jump pattern but if it doesn't flow good okay fixed
3. 00:12:906 (3) - x:340 y:340 (Better square IMO) Okay
4. 00:13:128 (4) - x:241 y:248 ^(Also move 6 to the same position) Okay
5. 00:19:128 (5) - x:212 y:100 (Lines up better) Okay
6. 00:19:573 (1,2) - x:12 y:200 Okay
7. 00:27:128 (4) - Line 4 up to 5 and 6 please Changed a little bit
8. 00:58:906 (2) - Nazi mod: x+1 to stack perfectly with 3(blue) Okay
9. 01:01:351 (2) - Nazi mod: y-1 Okay
10. 01:05:795 (1) - Nazi mod: x-1, y+1Okay

^^

Sorry once again for all the nazi-ish placement mods, but those are really all I could find. I try not to pick out smaller ones and only those I could see obviously
That's all I could find, very good mapset overall. Good luck getting it ranked soon!~

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Insane video offset is different (Video,-193,"ccc.avi") from Easy, Normal, and Hard. Video, 0,"ccc.avi" I thought I fixed that from IamKwan's mod already xD Okay fixed it for real this time


00:13:351 (5) – rotate -60 for better flow Okay
00:17:795 (1) - rotate 40 for better flowOkay
00:20:240 (5,6,7,8,1) -

picture

Okay
00:22:017 (2,3) -

picture

Changed in my way
00:46:906 (4) -

picture

Okay
00:59:795 (4) – move to x:424 y:164 for better alignment with 00:58:906 (2,6) – Okay
01:06:462 (4) – stack slider tail on top of slider tail of 01:05:351 (6) – Okay
01:08:128 (2) – move up a bit to align with 01:07:795 (1) – Okay

01:13:128 (4) – move to x:72 y:136 Okay
01:13:351 (5) – stack on slider tail of 01:12:017 (2) –Okay
01:14:017 (7,8) – move to x:176 y:36
Adjust slider tail to stack on 01:13:128 (4) Okay

picture

00:12:017 (5) - blanket on 00:11:128 (3) -

picture

How about stack (5) and (3) ?
00:12:462 (1,2,3) - Adjust like so -

picture

Okay
00:16:906 (3) – ctrl+h and ctrl+g. I think it looks better grouped with 00:16:017 (1) as a set - -

picture

Okay
00:18:462 (3,4,5,6) – inconsistent spacing Fixed
00:19:128 (6) – adjust slider head and tail to fit accordingly to 00:18:240 (2,3,4,5) -

picture

(5) and (6) are blanket
00:34:240 (2) – could be blanketed better Fixed

00:38:684 (4) – move to x:136 y:88 Okay
00:38:906 (5) – move to x:64 y:132 Okay

picture

00:39:573 (1) – stack slider head on 00:38:684 (4,1,2) - and adjust rest accordingly Okay

picture

00:53:906 (2) – move down for better alignment with 00:53:573 (1) – Okay


00:28:017 (5) – move to x:332 y:164 I like your flow okay fixed
00:28:462 (1) – blanket on 00:27:573 (4) – Okay
00:31:128 (2) – stack on 00:27:573 (4) – Okay
00:29:795 (1) – blanket on 00:31:128 (2) –Okay
00:37:351 (4) – adjust slider tail up a bit so it forms a perfect star with 00:36:017 (1,2,3) – Okay
00:38:684 (5) – adjust to be vertically aligned with 00:36:462 (2) – while being blanketed by 00:37:351 (4) – I don't understand you mean make slider tail verticallly aligned with (2) ?

01:20:017 (1) – blanket on 01:18:240 (1) – Changed in my way
01:21:795 (1) – stack slider head on 01:18:240 (1) – and blanket 01:20:017 (1) Okay

Nice song, good luck with your map!~
Red mean change
Blue mean no change

1. ทุกดิฟตัวแรกสุดใส่ finish
   [Easy]
2. 00:17:795(1) - ย้ายไปที่ x436 y212
3. 00:19:128(2) - ต่อจากอันบน ย้ายไปที่ x300 y156 จะวนครบรอบพอดี
4. 00:33:795(2) - ลบ clap ตรงนี้เส้นขาวใหญ่ ใส่ whistle แทน
5. 00:34:684(4) - ลบ clap
6. 00:35:128(5) - ใส่ finish ปลายสไลด์
7. 01:03:573 - http://puu.sh/asY7f/d50f58da88.jpg แนะนำแบบนี้ flow กว่า
8. 01:18:240(1) - ลบโน๊ตออก คนเล่นใหม่ๆลากเมาส์ไม่ทัน
9. 01:22:462(2,3) - แนะนำทำเป็นสไลด์
   
   [normal]
10. 00:07:128(1) - add finish
11. 00:10:240(2) - ลบ whistle ย้ายไปใส่ตัวต่อไป 00:10:684(1) -
12. 00:13:795(2) - ^
13. 00:17:351(2) - ^
14. 00:33:351(2) - ใส่ clap
15. 00:34:240 - ลบโน๊ต สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ แก้เสียง spin เป็น finish สปินจบที่ 00:35:573 -
16. 00:36:017(1) - clap เริ่มตรงนี้ ใส่เส้นเว้นเส้น แก้ใหม่หมด
17. 00:44:684(3) - ลบ clap
18. 00:46:906 - ลบ clap
19. 00:48:017(3) - ลบclap
20. 00:48:462(1) - whistle ตัวหน้าตัวเดียวก็พอ
21. 00:54:017 - ลบ clap
22. 00:54:684(3) - ใส่ clap ตรงนี้ แก้ทั้งท่อน
23. 00:58:906 - ลบ clap
24. 01:00:017(4) - ลบ whistle ใส่ clap
25. 01:02:684 - ^
26. 01:03:573 - ^
27. 01:07:795(1) - ลบ clap
28. 01:08:906 - ใส่ clap
29. 01:09:795(5) - ^
30. 01:13:351 - ^
31. 01:16:462 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้
32. 01:18:240(1) - finish
33. 01:23:351 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้
    
    [Hard]
34. Ar=7 HP=5 OD=5
    -----------------
35. 00:21:684 - ตรงนี้รัว
36. 00:32:240(1) - Improve spacing
    
    [Insane]
37. HP=6 OD=7
    -----------------
38. 01:16:906(2) - remove clap
39. 01:17:128 - soft hs
40. 01:18:240(1) - add finish

- N a n a k a - wrote:

From M4M #thai lang

1. ทุกดิฟตัวแรกสุดใส่ finish ก็เข้าท่าดี
   [Easy]
2. 00:17:795(1) - ย้ายไปที่ x436 y212 Okay โน้ตเรียงสวยขึ้น
3. 00:19:128(2) - ต่อจากอันบน ย้ายไปที่ x300 y156 จะวนครบรอบพอดี Okay
4. 00:33:795(2) - ลบ clap ตรงนี้เส้นขาวใหญ่ ใส่ whistle แทน แก้ละ เราใส่ clap เกิน
5. 00:34:684(4) - ลบ clapสงสัยกำลังเบลอ ใส่ clap เกินมาได้ไงเนี่ย เรา
6. 00:35:128(5) - ใส่ finish ปลายสไลด์ Okay ใส่แล้วมันเน้นตรงทำนองดี
7. 01:03:573 - http://puu.sh/asY7f/d50f58da88.jpg แนะนำแบบนี้ flow กว่า ขอเวลาตัดสินใจดู เพราะ เราอยากให flow มันโค้งลงมาข้างล่าง
8. 01:18:240(1) - ลบโน๊ตออก คนเล่นใหม่ๆลากเมาส์ไม่ทัน Okay ไม่ใช่ downbeat ก็ลบได้ xD
9. 01:22:462(2,3) - แนะนำทำเป็นสไลด์ Okay ดูง่ายสมกับ easy ขึ้น
   
   [normal]
10. 00:07:128(1) - add finish Okay
11. 00:10:240(2) - ลบ whistle ย้ายไปใส่ตัวต่อไป 00:10:684(1) - Okay พอมันปนกับ clap แล้วฟังดูยังไงๆอยู่
12. 00:13:795(2) - ^ ู^
13. 00:17:351(2) - ^ ^
14. 00:33:351(2) - ใส่ clap อ่า ลืมใส่ clap ตรงนี้
15. 00:34:240 - ลบโน๊ต สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ แก้เสียง spin เป็น finish สปินจบที่ 00:35:573 - Okay ก็เข้าท่าดี
16. 00:36:017(1) - clap เริ่มตรงนี้ ใส่เส้นเว้นเส้น แก้ใหม่หมด สงสัยเราจะเบลอจริงๆ แล้วมอดก่อนหน้านี้ ก็ไม่บอก xD 555
17. 00:44:684(3) - ลบ clap Okay ใส่ whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
18. 00:46:906 - ลบ clap ^
19. 00:48:017(3) - ลบclap ^
20. 00:48:462(1) - whistle ตัวหน้าตัวเดียวก็พอ Okay เสียง beat เน้นแค่ตรงพยางค์แรกของเสียงร้อง
21. 00:54:017 - ลบ clap Okay whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
22. 00:54:684(3) - ใส่ clap ตรงนี้ แก้ทั้งท่อน แล้วเราก็ใส่ผิด HS ที่อีกแล้ว xD
23. 00:58:906 - ลบ clap Okay whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
24. 01:00:017(4) - ลบ whistle ใส่ clap Okay
25. 01:02:684 - ^ ^
26. 01:03:573 - ^ ^
27. 01:07:795(1) - ลบ clap Whistle แทน edited:ไม่ใส่ไรเลยนี่แหละดีแล้ว
28. 01:08:906 - ใส่ clap Okay ใส่ clap ผิดที่อีกละ xD
29. 01:09:795(5) - ^ ^
30. 01:13:351 - ^ ^
31. 01:16:462 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ Okay ก็เข้าท่าดี
32. 01:18:240(1) - finish Okay จะได้เหมือนตอนเริ่มเพลง
33. 01:23:351 - สปินเริ่มตรงนี้ Okay diff นี้ เราเน่ามาก xD
    
    [Hard]
34. Ar=7 HP=5 OD=5 Okay
    -----------------
35. 00:21:684 - ตรงนี้รัว Hmm.. ใส่เป็น slider 1/2 วน 1 รอบ ละกัน
36. 00:32:240(1) - Improve spacing DS ก็ 1.2 เท่ากันนะ เดียวเราย้ายให้มันเรียงตรงกับ (6) ขึ้น
    
    [Insane]
37. HP=6 OD=7 Okay
    -----------------
38. 01:16:906(2) - remove clap Okay ใส่ whistle กับลบ whistle ตรงท้าย (1) กับ (3) แทนจะได้เหมือน hard
39. 01:17:128 - soft hs Okay xD
40. 01:18:240(1) - add finish Okay จะได้เหมือนตอนเพลงเริ่ม

comment : ต้องปรับปรุงเรื่อง HS นะ
ปล. เผื่อให้คนอื่นม็อดบ้างเนอะ :3 อ่าๆ xD
แดงคือ เปลี่ยน
น้ำเงินคือ ไม่เปลี่ยน

[Colours]
Combo1 : 234,234,234
Combo2 : 228,148,192
Combo3 : 191,191,255
Combo4 : 0,128,64
Combo5 : 176,255,176
Combo6 : 13,104,138

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my Modding Queues.

[General]

The background has beautiful colors. I suggest to replace to you colors of new combos, because these colors very bright and unpleasant to an eye.

try these: http://puu.sh/ayzgD/60dc7e040e.png

[Colours]
Combo1 : 234,234,234
Combo2 : 228,148,192
Combo3 : 191,191,255
Combo4 : 0,128,64
Combo5 : 176,255,176
Combo6 : 13,104,138

I agree with your suggestion

Preview Point move here 00:48:462, because the text before Kiai here begins. Okay

[Easy]

- 00:54:240 (1,2) - place 2 combos further from 1 on a grid. because it looks here so http://puu.sh/ayzBi/5c074c23d9.jpg but has to be here so http://puu.sh/ayzE5/102b7a8837.jpg Okay I noticed that DS was wrong there
- 00:08:906 (1,1,1) - delete new combo, it is spam new combos, because music and speed not so often changes. Okay I just thought I would NC them just like in the others diff
- 00:08:906 (1) - place a slider here x:396 y:56, that 00:07:128 (1) and 00:08:906 (1) they served as a blanket each other Okay
- 00:12:462 (1) - make a copypaste of this slider 00:10:684 (1) then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G and and turn it on 10 degrees. further place it into place where there was a slider. is so http://puu.sh/ayAqi/74c62c3853.jpg Okay good suggestion better flow
- 00:32:240 (1) - it is inadmissible in the easiest complexity in your map. move it here and finish here 00:33:351. AND 00:32:017 (5,1) - remove imposing of objects at each other Hmm.. where to move ? I deleted (5) and stretched (1) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1876172
- 00:52:017 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - delete new combo, it is spam new combos, because music and speed not so often changes. Okay I just thought I would NC them just like in the others diff

[Normal]

do the same with new combos. Fixed some NC

- 00:28:462 (1,2) - spacing, 2 combo closer to 2 combo Okay
- 00:31:128 (2,3) - spacing, 3 combo closer to 2. Okay DS wrong here
- 00:56:684 (1) - move here 00:56:906 No If I move there I will lose the downbeat at 00:57:351 - maybe I will shorten it

[Hard]

- 00:22:462 (4) - add note, because here 00:26:017 (5) and 00:29:573 (5) and 00:31:795 (6) - there is a note. but rhythm identical. means and objects have to or be present or absent. Okay
- 00:32:017 (6,1) - spacing. Stack at head of (1)
- 00:45:128 (4,5,6,1) - ^ Fixed
- 01:02:462 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
^^^^^^ even if your of down speed you shouldn't place them so close
- 00:39:573 (1,2,3,4) - make identical transition http://puu.sh/ayDx1/0be841627d.jpg Okay

[Insane]

00:25:573 (3) - Ctrl+G No, it looks fine
00:56:684 (2) - move here 00:56:906 and finish here 00:57:351 Okay better rhythm

Good luck!
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Blue means no change

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, CelsiusLK !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Easy

Suggestion : Change HD & OD to 2,5, Changed only HP your OD is too high for Easy diff
Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0 , What’s the function ? Okay
00:24:017 (4,5) – Change to 1/1 Slider, Okay
00:27:573 (3,4) - ^, ^
00:33:795 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:45:351 (3,4) - ^, ^
00:56:462 (1,2) OR 00:56:906 (2,3) - ^, Chose 00:56:906 (2,3) -
01:04:017 (1,2) - ^, ^
01:14:240 (2,3) - ^. ^
Fixed all so it more suit for Easy diff

Normal

Remove this timing point 19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0,
00:08:017 (2,3) – Change to 1/1 Slider, No look fine if I change to slider this will be too easy
00:11:573 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:15:128 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:24:017 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:27:573 (4,5) - ^, ^
00:33:351 (2,3) OR 00:33:795 (3,4) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:36:017 (1,2) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:39:573 (1,2) - ^,:arrow: ^
00:47:795 (3,4) – Change to ½ slider, Hmm..I'm thinking about change this to 1/2 slider but I want the player to try listen and tap with the music so I will not change this to 1/2 slider
00:50:684 (3) – Change to 1/1 slider, How? xD
00:54:684 (3,4) - ^, No too easy for Normal
01:04:017 (1,2) - ^, ^
01:08:240 (2) – Move this to 01:08:128, Hmm..blue line maybe too hard for Normal so I decided to follow the instrument instead
01:11:573 (3) – Change to 1/1 slider, How to change 1 note to a slider? xD
01:18:240 (1,2) & 01:19:128 (3,4) – Change them to 1/1 slider. Okay since I think squre might be too hard

Hard

Suggestion : Change AR to 5, No too low for Hard diff
Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0, As I said before “What’s the function” 
00:07:351 (2,3) – Change to 1/1 slider, No too easy for Hard
00:09:128 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:10:906 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:14:462 (2,3) - ^, ^
00:18:240 (2,3) & 00:18:684 (4,5) - ^, ^
01:00:906 (2,3) - ^, ^
01:18:462 (2,3) - ^. ^

Insane

Remove those timing points 8906,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
10684,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0;
19573,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0 Again xD,
Your chart was great.. No mistakes on placing notes 

Additional : Reduce circle, by changing them to a slider ,
Re-check your timing . I want the players to try to listen to the music and read the map so putting too much slider may make this map a bit to easy to read except Easy which is the diff for player who learn to read the map , that's just my thought
Edited: Hmmm..I find my timing point to be Okay since some look like the same but they're for changing SV, starting kiai time, ending kiai,changing in volume
That’s All CelsiusLK ! Good luck !
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1. You forgot to use DS (Distance Snap) please use DS ~
2. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

1. 00:32:017 (1) - The shape kinda looks weird, try to make it a normal curve slider ~
2. 00:50:684 (3,6) - Make them more curve ?
3. 01:02:684 (5) - NC here like what you did in 00:48:462 (1)
4. 01:09:351 (1,2) - Really awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1) - Move to x:152 y:24 for a better flow with (4) and (5)
2. 00:44:684 (3) - Move to x:364 y:80 ? I think it would be a better flow with (1) and (2)
3. 00:53:573 (1) - More curve ?
4. 00:55:573 (5,6,1) - How about you make something like this? Because (1)'s shape looks weird:

SPOILER

1. 01:12:017 (1) - Move to x:276 y:60 to avoid the overlap with (1) and then make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (1)'s head ~ (If you didn't understand please tell me)
2. 01:20:017 (3) - Make it a little bit curve for a good flow with (1) and (2)

1. 00:20:684 (6,1) - Try to improve the flow here, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:22:684 (1) - Make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (2)'s head ~
2. 01:01:351 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:02:017 (6) for a perfect flow ~

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Only add whistle at the head and the tail of the slider, cause adding it at the slider is weird ~
2. 00:34:684 (7) - Move to x:388 y:300 ?
3. 01:22:462 (4) - Move to x:360 y:136 ?

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my modding queue ~ :3
[Easy]

1. You forgot to use DS (Distance Snap) please use DS ~ Do you mean spacing? because I check the DS and it is 1.00x anyway I increase SV to 0.8
2. 00:07:128 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 00:14:240 (1,2,3) - ^

SPOILER

1. 00:32:017 (1) - The shape kinda looks weird, try to make it a normal curve slider ~
2. 00:50:684 (3,6) - Make them more curve ?
3. 01:02:684 (5) - NC here like what you did in 00:48:462 (1)
4. 01:09:351 (1,2) - Really awkward flow, try to use something like this:
   Since I changed SV so most of my notes are all changed in pattern now

SPOILER

[Normal]

1. 00:14:240 (1) - Move to x:152 y:24 for a better flow with (4) and (5) Okay
2. 00:44:684 (3) - Move to x:364 y:80 ? I think it would be a better flow with (1) and (2) Okay
3. 00:53:573 (1) - More curve ? No
4. 00:55:573 (5,6,1) - How about you make something like this? Because (1)'s shape looks weird:

SPOILER

Ohh xD I decided to keep (1) like that also fixed (1) so it not too weird https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883131

1. 01:12:017 (1) - Move to x:276 y:60 to avoid the overlap with (1) and then make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (1)'s head ~ (If you didn't understand please tell me) Okay I understand what you said :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883145
2. 01:20:017 (3) - Make it a little bit curve for a good flow with (1) and (2)

Like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1883160
[Hard]

1. 00:20:684 (6,1) - Try to improve the flow here, try to use something like this:

SPOILER

Okay

1. 00:22:684 (1) - Make it a little bit curve for a perfect blanket with (2)'s head ~ Okay a little curve
2. 01:01:351 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:02:017 (6) for a perfect flow ~ Okay

[Insane]

1. 00:32:240 (1) - Only add whistle at the head and the tail of the slider, cause adding it at the slider is weird ~ Forgot to delete whistle way
2. 00:34:684 (7) - Move to x:388 y:300 ? Hmm..Okay
3. 01:22:462 (4) - Move to x:360 y:136 ? Alright

Nice song ~ <3 Good luck ~ !
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Gaia wrote:

Hey from my queue

[General]
W-wait what where'd that video come from wtf it wasnt there when I checked this morning lol

re: spinners

Since Easy/Normal aren't far off from eachother so they can somewhat use the same concepts.. what the wiki said:

Spinners should be used sparingly in Easy difficulties - generally ends of mapped parts before a break and the entire song. When using a spinner, make sure the length is fairly long. 2-4 measures is a good guide.
The reasoning is because most new players are going to react slowly to a spinner, so there's a delay in starting them. Then they will also spin wildly, usually drawing along the perimeter of the screen. Once the spinner is complete, they will be most probably disoriented and wondering where their cursor is. This is the reason why if you have a spinner in the middle of a mapped phrase, you should allow for as much time as possible for recovery. A good rule of thumb is 3-4 beats after a spinner, but this can vary depending on BPM.
taken from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy#Spinners

[Easy]
ic u ended up 0.96 sv
if u already fixed it to 0.8 from 0.6 why did u change it again lol I would be too lazy
so much love for this map ic #dedication

00:12:462 (1,2,1) - line them up so it flows better i guess, cuz right now it has a "(" shape Okay
00:13:795 (2,2) - should be lined up? same y coordinate Okay
00:32:017 (1) - i feel like this slider has received a lot of hate already lol >: but ya its not very appealing imo xD I didn't know that anyway I fixed it a little
00:36:017 (1,2) - double reverses aren't suitable for easys imo but it's not something u can fix easily or that it matters too much so keep in mind next time i guess Will try to fix that later
00:46:240 (4) - hmm this shape is... no idea what the heck this is lol lol I don't know either but I find this to be suit with the music
00:54:240 (1,3) - line up (same y coordinate) Okay
01:16:462 (1) - too short :s (see general for more info) as for a fix i think just leaving it blank is fine tbh lol. if u do leave it blank then add a break! :3 idk why i like mini breaks like these lol http://puu.sh/aCzCb/9bf1c22e62.jpg Yeah I guess I gonna add a break here

[Normal]
00:08:017 (2,4) - should line up imo Okay
00:08:462 (3) - (232, 96) better triangle Okay
00:08:906 (4,5,1) - blanketing could be better Hmm..I think it fine now
00:11:573 (2,3,4) - i dont wanna move too much but this triangle could be better too Fixed
00:14:240 (6) - nc Okay
00:19:573 (1,1) - this spinner MAYBE. But the time u have allowing players to react to the 1st circle is super small (see General) Delete (1) and end slider at 00:21:351 -
00:34:240 (1,1) - so, same thing. Fixed by replace spinner with some notes
00:54:240 (2,4) - should line up and 00:54:684 (3,5) - should line up Okay
00:58:462 (1) - up more so better flow i guess http://puu.sh/aCAmb/5439b1efc1.jpg Okay
01:04:017 (1,3) - line up? Okay
01:11:128 (2,3,1) - this can have a more even descent.. if u know what i mean lol. ill draw a diagram.. Okay it should line up better now

SPOILER

an even slope as opposed to an uneven slope u have here

ok its not perfect im not amazing artest T^T

01:16:462 (1) - same suggestion as easy Add a short break
01:20:017 (3) - up a teeny bit to avoid overlap Okay

[Hard]
00:07:128 (1,3,5) - u almost have it lined up perfectly, (y = 192 pls) Okay
00:08:906 (1,3) - ^ u have to watch out for small details like this Okay I will becareful
00:10:684 (1,3) - ^ Okay
00:10:906 (2,4) - u probably didnt line this up on purpose but just putting it out there lol Lined up now
00:46:240 (1,2) - they should have same # of reverses imo, maybe try this? http://puu.sh/aCBim/2c72da2549.jpg Okay fixed
01:18:240 (1,3) - yeah Fixed
01:19:573 (6) - begin this slider at (x=52) and end at (x=120) Okay

[Insane]
00:16:017 (1) - 00:17:795 (1) - stack? Okay
00:46:906 (4) - it's good as long as (y=304) Okay
01:20:017 (1,2,3,4) - looks like a weird square I find DS not consistent here fixed a little tho
01:22:240 (3) - personally since it slows down u should simplify the rhythm too, so removing this would sound better Okay sound better
01:20:240 (2) - 01:22:017 (2) - y is off by 1 pixel lel. (y=346 pls) Okay


K sorry I promised earlier up but i slept like a pig lel
good luck with the map!~
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1. 00:54:240 (2) - Just place another slider along this slider like below so you can check whether it's straight or not. Just go to and move over a beat on the timeline so you don't delete the actual slider.
   
   this is what i mean

   
2. 00:56:684 - I feel like you're really missing out on a beat here. I feel like you could make 00:56:462 (1) a short, slower slider, placed however you like, just so that you can hit that missing beat.
3. 01:01:795 (3,4) - I think you should move these so that they are right in the center between 2 and 5.
   
   See how they are kind of off center?

   
4. 01:10:017 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:10:684 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:12:017 (1) - remove NC

1. 00:36:906 (3,1) - This was literally the ONLY thing that bugged me with this difficulty. It doesn't seem like breaking the distance spacing for a new combo would hurt here. In my opinion, it looks odd that these two sliders are on top of each other.

1. 00:14:240 (1) - blanket this better with 5 from the previous combo
2. 00:32:240 (1) - I know you're kind of out of room here, but the amount of spacing between this and the slider 3 from the previous combo isn't enough to indicate that there is an extra half beat between 3 and 1 compared to the other objects.
3. 00:35:128 (5) - perhaps move to x=92 to line up with 4?
4. 00:40:906 (4,5) - blanket better
5. 00:55:972 (6) - move to x=68 y=148 and look how much nicer it looks <3
6. 01:16:240 - I think you should either get rid of the break and leave it, or map this part with some repeat-sliders or something. It looks cleaner if the break isn't there overall.

1. 00:13:795 (2) - move to x=272 y=208 for neater look
2. 01:16:240 - Same here, with the break time, it looks neater without it, or if it were mapped.

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Yahello~! I've replied to your mod of my map! /t/231620

Now to mod your map!

[Insane]

1. 00:54:240 (2) - Just place another slider along this slider like below so you can check whether it's straight or not. Just go to and move over a beat on the timeline so you don't delete the actual slider. Thanks for advice but I really like to make the slider look art like that xD
   
   this is what i mean

   
2. 00:56:684 - I feel like you're really missing out on a beat here. I feel like you could make 00:56:462 (1) a short, slower slider, placed however you like, just so that you can hit that missing beat. Emphasis on white line so no
3. 01:01:795 (3,4) - I think you should move these so that they are right in the center between 2 and 5. Hmm..looks fine to me
   
   See how they are kind of off center?

   
4. 01:10:017 (1) - remove NC Okay
5. 01:10:684 (1) - remove NC ^
6. 01:12:017 (1) - remove NC ^

[Hard]
You're hard seems pretty solid to me (see what i did there lol)

1. 00:36:906 (3,1) - This was literally the ONLY thing that bugged me with this difficulty. It doesn't seem like breaking the distance spacing for a new combo would hurt here. In my opinion, it looks odd that these two sliders are on top of each other. What I was thinking that I might ruin the DS if I put it far each other and I waiting someone to pinpoint this lol okay fixed as you said

[Normal]
Fufufufu i see some blanketing problems xD

1. 00:14:240 (1) - blanket this better with 5 from the previous combo Fixed, also you forgot to mention (4) blanket lol
2. 00:32:240 (1) - I know you're kind of out of room here, but the amount of spacing between this and the slider 3 from the previous combo isn't enough to indicate that there is an extra half beat between 3 and 1 compared to the other objects. It's Okay because these notes was put on red line and (1) follow the vocal
3. 00:35:128 (5) - perhaps move to x=92 to line up with 4? Oh yes fixed xD
4. 00:40:906 (4,5) - blanket better Fixed
5. 00:55:972 (6) - move to x=68 y=148 and look how much nicer it looks <3 Okay
6. 01:16:240 - I think you should either get rid of the break and leave it, or map this part with some repeat-sliders or something. It looks cleaner if the break isn't there overall. Alright fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:13:795 (2) - move to x=272 y=208 for neater look Okay
2. 01:16:240 - Same here, with the break time, it looks neater without it, or if it were mapped. Alright

Nice job hitsounding and stuff. It's a cute song! Good luck~<3

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skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi there! Here's the mod from my queue

[Insane]

00:22:240 (3) - move this slider to 272, 328 and angle it so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904583 I think this looks a little better Okay

00:22:684 (1) - Move to 432, 96 | 00:22:906 (2) - Move to 496, 44 | 00:23:128 (3) - Move to 328, 60 | 00:23:573 (5) -Make this a circle, Move to 408, 12 |
Changed by stacked (4) and (2)
00:23:795 (6) - Make this a 1/4 Slider and move to 336, 160 No and I don't really like how circles are so close like that I prefer my style more

and you get this really nice pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904601

01:02:684 (1) - Move this to 324, 324 and angle it so it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1904639 No because the default already has okay flow since when I finished (1) slider my cursor always end up at (1) circle which make this easy to navigate

Well that's it for my mod! I couldn't really find much to take issue with

Hopefully this helped you a little bit

Really catchy song, I love it! GL <3
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blue means no change

Rokkea wrote:

Hey, I'm here for some tryhard modding.

Oh yeah, welcome to the 1st mod of my entire life!

Easy

• 00:22:240 (1,2,3,4) - Looks totally weird for some reason. Sorry I can't think of anything, you'll have to make it better somehow. It looks fine my cursor moved to the next notes without realize everytime
  
  00:32:017 (1) - This slider is still pretty jarring! Think of something else that might fit that isn't an "L" shape. Even this could work, rly
  Bye bye my L slider ;^;
  
  00:52:906 (6) - As you can guess, I hate "L" shaped sliders. If I were you I would banish this accursed "not-even-a-90-degree" slider and change it to something else. You could keep it if you want though. Okay first I can't blanket this note with (1) but for now I don't know why I can blanket this with (1) xD
  
  01:04:017 (6) - Move to (136,168) for a slightly better-looking blanket. I fixed slider instead lol
  
  01:06:684 (2,3) - Move 2 to (432,264) and 3 to (364,196) for again, a better-looking blanket. Yep fixed slider instead
  
  01:21:795 (1,2) - Move everything to (300,144) for a decent imaginary line between circle and slider. Moved only (1)

Normal

• 00:10:240 (5,1,2) - Move 5 to (440,212), 1 to (424,332) and 2 to (220,216) as we need symmetry. Okay
  
  00:34:240 (4,5) - I would suggest cloning 4, ctrl+H the new slider placing it at maybe (88,268) because symmetry. However that would mean you will have to bring everything down for the 1.00 distance snap. You can choose to ignore this, I just find slider 5 weird. Looks fine I just want the flow to go circular like that didn't intend to symmetry
  
  00:44:684 (3,1) - Replace slider 1 with a cloned slider 3 with ctrl+H and ctrl+G for the sake of symmetry. Lazy take role here xD good job on finding this lol
  
  01:21:795 (1,2,3) - Move everything to (360,208) for a better-looking blanket. Okay some mod already mentioned this but I think it looks fine now I fixed a little bit

Hard

• It's so smooth, my newb instincts tells me it's perfect.
  
  ...nah jk it has only tiny problems. (but it still looks really good)
  
  00:53:573 (1,2) - Move slider 2 to (372,340) then rotate the whole thing by 3 degrees, with it's origin at the selection centre. Straight curve. Okay
  
  00:59:795 (4,1) - Only pointing out that it looks a little weird. Okay curved (4) xD

Insane

3.29 stars? I think I can mod this.

• 00:08:462 (6) - Rotate it by 4 degrees, then place it at (204,292) for a better looking "blanket". Okay
  
  00:20:462 (7,8) - Rotate slider 7 by 15 degrees , with it's origin at the selection centre (this is optional) and drag it to (328,248). Afterwards, move circle 8 to (332,112). That should probably make the pattern look cleaner. Okay
  
  00:23:128 (3,4) - Move 3 to (332,68) and 4 to (484,124) for a cleaner looking pattern. I changed to new pattern

Overall, it's really nice to play, though the insane might be too easy, but that's fine.

I hope I helped (even just a little) and good luck!
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PuttyoU wrote:

Hello , from my modding queues!
My English is very poor, sorry

[General]

1. This song is TV Size? Yes but I don't include tv size at title
2. Add soft-sliderslide2.wav I use soft-sliderslide9.wav because it only use for Easy and I don't to make it conflict with others diff
3. 01:23:351 (1) - - I think spinner end 01:23:351 (1) the best.
   If you remove finish, spinner end is good now. No I like it like this but maybe I will want more mods about this spinner end so I can determine what to do with this

[Insane]

1. 00:10:462 (4) - Clap Whistle instead because it sound better than clap
2. 00:14:017 (2) - Clap No, that will make HS inconsistent, I think
3. 00:20:906 (7) - Finish No, I didn't intend to emphasis here like this one 00:28:462 (1) - so no need to add finish HS here
4. 00:50:462 (1) - remove NC Okay since it doesn't ruin the waypoint for the jump

[Hard]

1. 00:10:240 (5) - Clap Whistle at tail so it will consistent with Insane's one
2. 00:14:017 (2) - Clap ^
3. 00:20:351 (4) - remove whistle No , I want HS to consistent with Insane's one
4. 01:17:573 (4) - Clap No, that will make HS inconsistent, I think

[Normal]

1. 00:48:462 (6) - NC No, don't want to confuse Normal player with NC
2. 01:02:684 (6) - NC ^

[Easy]

none

Go go ranked If it good enough I will.
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