pochamin wrote:

M4M

this map's really perfect, I don't know what to mod... ; _ ;
I'm out of kudosu, when I get some will star this map instead.

easy -
00:24:541 - add finish

1. 00:21:310 (1) - 00:23:157 (3) - remove NC from (1) and add NC on the (3)

1. 00:11:157 (5,1,2) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!
   How about in this way?
   
   Placement

   
   
   

1. 00:28:695 (4) - I think that some form of the slider are strange.How about in this way?
   
   Form

   

1. 00:31:003 (2,3,4) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!

1. 01:17:618 (2,3,4) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!
   How about in this way?
   
   Placement

   

1. 01:31:464 (2) - You should stack it on 01:29:618 (3) perfectly.

1. You get a wrong a lot of points adding NC.
   
   NC List

   00:03:772 (1) - remove
   00:04:695 (1) - add
   00:05:157 (2) - remove
   00:07:926 (1) - remove
   00:08:387 (1) - add
   00:10:695 (1) - remove
   00:11:618 (7) - add
   00:13:003 (2) - remove
   00:19:003 (5) - add
   00:20:387 (1) - remove
   00:25:926 (1) - remove
   00:26:387 (2) - add
   00:33:310 (5) - remove
   00:33:772 (1) - add
   00:36:080 (1) - remove
   00:37:464 (3) - add
   00:38:849 (1) - remove
   00:43:464 (5) - add
   00:43:926 (1) - remove
   00:49:464 (1) - remove
   00:50:849 (3) - add
   00:52:233 (1) - remove
   00:54:080 (6) - add
   00:55:003 (2) - remove
   01:11:156 (1) - remove
   01:13:003 (8) - add
   01:13:926 (1) - remove
   01:14:849 (2) - remove
   01:22:695 (1) - remove
   01:24:080 (2) - add
   01:25:464 (1) - remove
   01:30:080 (1) - remove
   01:36:541 (1) - remove
   01:37:003 (1) - add
   01:47:618 (1) - remove
   01:48:080 (2) - add
   
   I think that there is a point different in a number, but, please judge it from time.

1. 00:13:926 (4,1) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!
   How about in this way?
   
   Placement

   move 00:13:926 (4) to x=160 y=224
   
   

1. 00:57:310 (1,2) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!
   How about in this way?
   
   Placement

   move 00:57:310 (1) to x=240 y=240 and fix the form(blanket perfectly)
   
   

1. 01:31:926 (3,1) - Spacing is different from others! It is necessary for you to fix this!

1. 00:13:464 (2,3) - Distance is very near.I think that you should separate distance.

1. 00:16:233 (4,6) - Let's make a symmetry.

1. 00:30:541 ~ 00:33:310 - Rhythm becomes slow suddenly,and distance shortens suddenly.This confuses a player very much, and it will become the cause that it is hard to play.

1. 01:16:464 - Why did you lower Slider velocity?

1. 01:15:195 (4,5) - I think that you should separate distance

1. 01:19:926 (1,2,3,4) - Though most of the distance is the same, rhythm is totally different.It will become easy to play for a player when you greatly change distance.

1. 01:23:387 (1,2,3) - 01:25:233 (1,2,3) - ^

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ hi!! :3

[EruJazz's Insane]
Rhythm is a bit messy in this diff, will give you some suggestions that will help you to improve it in the rest of the map well ... It was my first maps. but you're right.
00:03:656 (3) - Remove this note and 00:04:118 - Add one here fix
00:05:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this: http://puu.sh/60VB3.jpg (Note that I only used notes, because I'm mainly showing you a better rhythm to it) fix
00:10:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - this really feels overmapped, try this: http://puu.sh/60VSz.jpg fix
00:11:618 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/60VXO.jpg fix
00:30:541 (1) - This sounds off, what are you following? fix... I do not remember that was following HAHAH
00:36:541 (2) - This wasnt really readable, to be honest Sorry, but do not change it.
00:50:618 (4) - The reverse arrow is partially hidden fix
00:56:387 (1) - End slider here 00:56:387 (1) - and add a note here 00:56:849 - (sounds better to me) fix
01:15:541 (5) - Wrong spacing (If is an anti-jump, doesn't work and looks more like a mistake) fix, was a mistake xD
01:15:541 (5) - Try to follow the music better, like the examples I pointed above yep.
01:19:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wrong spacing from 1 to 2
You have this 01:23:387 (1,2,3) - and this 01:25:233 (1,2,3) - with the same spacing, was confusing fix
01:45:541 (4,5,6) - This is overmapped too does not sound overmapped, and I really think it's not a difficult pattern to follow.
01:49:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong spacing on this combo fix
Spacing is kinda messy on this diff, try to keep it even among the map. Try to apply rhythm suggestions I gave you, and check in the whole map, because I didn't pointed all.
Diff needs some work, get more mods, that will help you

Lissette wrote:

Edited my post to add the rest of the mod. Sorry for the delay. ~

baraatje123 wrote:

Good map

Testplays
I did a good job, if I do say so myself

Easy

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/esu4ozjrklsb9ee/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Easy]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]

Normal

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/d5k2f85lpzge9m6/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Normal]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]

Hard

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/hpp6u59870cdc55/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Hard]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]

EruJazz's Insane

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/7hn0sfwp3zrecba/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[EruJazz's_Insane]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]

Good Lcuk getting this ranked, but you will probably not need it

baraatje123 wrote:

Sprry about the dl Links. Because of the double ] and [ the DL pink doesn't work.
To dl the .osr files, copy the link, from url= to the image
Sorry about this

1. 00:09:310 (2) - elimina ese circulo, y corre el slider de adelante. Rellenando el espacio que queda con un circulo.
   
   La razón detras de esto es que dos sliders de la misma logitud seguidos, son menos extenuantes de jugar. Además que va bien con la canción.
2. 00:11:157 (5,1,2) - haciendo el cambio anterior, a estos deberías hacerles un flip horizontal (Ctrl+H), y hacer algo como esto: http://puu.sh/7f3K3.jpg http://puu.sh/7f3LT.jpg
3. 00:18:541 (4) - el primer lugar donde se puede simplificar la cosa. Cambia el slider por un circulo. Le dará un descanso al jugador, y de nuevo, el espacio sin mapear no queda mal.
4. 00:19:464 (1,2) - Sugiero que de verdad cambies estos dos por un slider. tantos circulo seguidos, y tan juntos, pueden ser dificiles de seguir.
5. 00:25:464 (6,7) - estos podrias simplificarlos eliminando (6) y coriendo (7) a antes. No olvides poner los finish.
6. 00:23:157 (3,4,5,6) - a todos estos deberías hacerles un flip vertical (Ctrl+J). Lo que pasa es que todos los patrones anteriores estuvieron en esa esquina del mapa... y al devolverte por el mismo lugar, aunque no sea dificil de leer, no es... mmm... ¿muy profesional?, algo así xD, el caso es que este patron podrías ponerlo como http://puu.sh/7f4rO.jpg, aunque te implicará algo más...
7. 00:26:849 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/7f4vF.jpg
8. 00:37:926 (1,4) - vi que a este le hiciste un arreglo en el sonido y eso, pero, en pro de lo espacio de descanso, podrías hacer algo así: http://puu.sh/7f5Uf.jpg
9. 01:12:541 (5) - Podrías quitarlo sin problemas.
10. 01:15:772 (3,2) - uggg, eso si está mal. Ese overlap aunque sea interesante, le van a poner problemas los bat. Podrías poner ésta parte así:
    
11. 01:23:618 (2) - Podrías eliminarlo sin problemas.
12. 01:27:772 (3) - Podrías cambiarlo po un circulo.
13. 01:53:618 (3) - Podrías eliminarlo sin problemas.

1. 00:07:926 (5) - hay muchos sliders juntos, puedes convertir esto en dos circulos.
2. 00:40:233 (4) - Cambiale la concavidad al otro lado. Cuida el flow. http://puu.sh/7f7qO.jpg
3. 00:47:156 (1,3,1) - No lo se... esto no se ve tan bien, http://puu.sh/7f7tK.jpg da la impresión de ser un poco desordenado.
   Me gustaría que quedaran unos encima de otros:
   , aunque a 00:46:233 (4) - le deberías hacer algo como http://puu.sh/7f7EG.jpg para mantener el espaciado.
   Y el que queden sobrepuestos no es problema, el patron es muy facil de seguir.

1. 00:05:387 (3,1) - esos dos deberían quedar sobre puestos, así como está se ve desordenado.
2. 00:13:926 (3) - en el easy está sin mapear, en el normal es un slider, y en el mio es un spinner. no creo que sea tan buena idea hacer un slider que se repite... ya sabes, siempre le ponen 'peros'. podrias hacer lo mismo que el insane, o tambien algo así:
   Con eso no quedará nada aburrido ni monotono. y para un hard, es aceptable.
   00:17:157 (6) - Cambia este slider por dos circulos, y has algo como este patron:
   
3. 00:19:926 (4) - Cambiale la concavidad.
4. 00:26:733 - agrega un circulo aquí.
5. 00:27:310 (5,1,2,3,4) - de la suggerencia que me dió lisste hace tiempo, hago la misma aquí. Obviamente te va a implicar ordenar las cosas ahí, pero bueno.
   (5) sin repetir. (1,2,3) mas separados,
   
   y cambias (4), así:
   Ahí, (4,5) están con el snap a 1/3. (6) a 1/2.
6. 00:32:157 (3) - lol, el slider no está haciendo bien la curva. ponlo recto, y lo vuelves a curvear
7. 00:37:233 - Agrega una nota aquí, y para hacerlo más interesante, colocala así. http://puu.sh/7fbdo.jpg Ese tipo de patrones es comun en los hard.
8. 00:43:233 (3) - Ctrl+G para mejorar el flow.
9. 00:49:925 (3,4,5) - Ese overlap se ve raro ahí... mejor organizalos así:
10. 00:53:964 (8) - y si agregas una nota ahí con un clap?, ya sé que probablemente quede como overmapeado, pero no suena nada mal.
11. 01:13:695 (4,5,6) - el rimo no se siente bien. Colocalo así, espaciando adecuadamente y eso:
    Preferiría también que no las sobre pongas. No tengas miedo de un pequeño jumo entre 01:14:617 (6,1) -
12. 01:29:387 (7) - El anterior ya estuvo arriba, p q no pones este abajo? http://puu.sh/7fbW1.jpg
13. 01:35:387 (5) - 01:40:464 (1) - no lo se... esos finish ahí no me cuadran mucho con la canción...
14. 01:38:618 (4) - en cambio aquí si va un finish, pero del sample normal..
15. 01:42:310 (5) - aquí iría un triple circulo, no?
16. 01:46:926 (3) - ^
17. 01:49:233 (5) - ^? http://puu.sh/7fcj2.jpg

1. First check the AI mod
2. 00:19:003 (5) - this slider's distance should be same with 00:18:080 (3,4) - these
3. 01:26:387 (1) - same problem here
4. 01:49:003 (5) - NC here
5. 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner.
6. Map is fine but you'd better use all same distance on Easy diff

1. Check AI mod too
2. 00:09:772 (2) - better move to 288, 104 to make same distance with 00:08:849 (1,3) -
3. 00:15:310 (1) - ^ 184, 56
4. 00:17:618 (4,1) - ah.. i think this is too far for normal diff. better change slider's shape or something to make distance 1.0x
5. 00:58:233 (4) - same problem with first one 216, 160
6. 01:03:772 (4) - why don't you use same location with 01:01:926 (2) - 256, 296 will be best i think
7. 01:17:156 (4) - NC here
8. 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner.

1. 00:10:233 (6,1) - Swap NC
2. 00:12:080 (3,1) - ^
3. 00:55:002 (3,5) - better make slider watching each other it's not that good flow now
4. 00:58:002 (2,3) - ^
5. 01:01:926 (3,1) - Distance shorter plz. it can be confused with 01:01:233 (1,2) - this beat
6. 01:19:695 (2,3) - make this overlap will be nice
7. 01:35:387 (5) - i don't think here needs finish it doesn't sound natural
8. 01:47:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - better use all same distance
9. 01:53:849 (1) - volume down this spinner.

Silver Crow wrote:

hi~come from my que ;3

Insane:
00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice shape xD thx
00:36:541 (2) - feel a little hard to play here, maybe just stack with 1 done
00:51:772 - make 1 to be a short slider? em.. nope, i following drums, no piano.
00:59:503 - here is a sound, think this part 00:59:157 (2,3,4) - again maybe? ^
01:01:926 (2,3) - del 2 of the notes, use a slider? hhehe, sorry, dont agree.
01:38:272 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1577603 im a little weird about the green slider 2,its on 1/8? Is 1/3
01:42:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG, why so jump haha, you are right, i did improve this pattern, now the jumps have sense.
01:50:849 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1577612 double triangle? good idea

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[EruJazz's Insane]

I recommend a slider velocity of 1.8-2.0 which goes well in accordance to the spacing you use. It is important to see from a players perspective the average cursor speed throughout the map which stems from the slider velocity and distance of jumps. The player doesn't want to constantly slow down his cursor for sliders and speed up for jumps, this all counts towards the flow of a map.

When we created the mapset, there was another insane, which after a few months decided to remove, because the Maper had no time to be applying their mods (MuseCaliope).
The map itself had the SV 2.0. My insane was insanely easy and fun to play.
For that reason it is slower, and the circles are smaller.
So.. I dont change this.

00:15:772 (1,2) - I suggest neatening the blanket between these two notes using the approach circle as guide (http://puu.sh/8I7z1.jpg). done

00:19:926 (1,2) - Here too (http://puu.sh/8I7BB.jpg). done

01:38:618 (2) - For perfect 1/3 timing, start on the red tick and end on the white tick like so (http://puu.sh/8I7YP.jpg). sorry, im following guitar to start, but change to drums at end. This slider is fine.

00:41:387 until 00:46:233 - There is really no need for slower slider velocity, in fact due to the whistles in the background you have a chance to play around with long sliders which would fun up the map and look great too. well... i really want slow sliders here, but, you are right, this can be more funny. I change a bit the sliders and add more notes.

neonat wrote:

Insane

00:06:541 (5) - remove the whistle sorry, i dont agree
00:06:887 (1) - whistle ^
00:07:233 (2) - remove whistle ^
00:10:233 (1) - whistle done
00:13:003 (3) - ^ done
00:16:695 (5) - ugly and cuts down, causing the flow to be bad (eg. 00:16:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is not good flow/shape) sorry, but but flow is fine. Yes, is a bit ugly, but this no afect the flow.
00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - no music here, this is extra yep, but is kawaii ^^
00:30:388 (3,1) - unlike the rest, these 2 overlap, don't let them do so hehe, fix
00:33:541 (6,1) - don't let them touch, 00:34:003 (1) should be placed elsewhere for better movement mm.. sorry, i dont change this
00:41:387 (4) - remove clap from start of slider done
00:45:080 (2) - bad shape, and the least it should be is ctrl-G ctrl-H ctrl-J for better flow sorry, i love this misshape slider u.u
00:47:157 - onwards: use the similar whistle pattern I highlighted in Hard lol, Hard no have whistles here xD
00:53:618 (3,4) - 00:53:849 (4) ctrl - H the slider i change the pattern a bit.
00:56:387 (1) - ctrl g h j this slider as well sorry, but not.
00:57:080 (3,5,6,7) - make it a more equal spacing pattern shape DS vs shape.. i dont change nothing
01:09:195 - add a note done xD
01:23:041 (8) - remove clap from end of slider done
01:25:464 (3,4) - stacking this is not good, space them apart for better playing sorry, i dont agree.
01:33:310 (1) - the sharp curves are not pretty tastes
01:38:272 (1) - the finish is not need, unexpected/out-of-place mm.. i think is fine, because is a blue tick note... so gives a bit surprise, if something stronger not is heard
01:45:541 (3) - NC here instead fix

Good luck

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Hi :3 From my queue

EruJazz's Insane

Hitsounds

• I see there's very inconsistent in your diff.In general, It feels very random.

Arrangement & Design

1. 01:28:233 (4,1) - The only issue I can see in your diff is here.. It's hard to read the rhythm when first play. And music here provides no reason for a big jump.

Good luck~

Ilfri wrote:

INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.

1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.

00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.


00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.

I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.

I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Ilfri wrote:

INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.

1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.

00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.


00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.

I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.

I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Ilfri wrote:

INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.

1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.

00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.


00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.

I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.

I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws

thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U

No Dap wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U

This isn't very nice...

Anyway here is my mod.

[Easy]

1. 00:06:541 (3,4) - pretty nazi, but a bit inconsistent spacing here.ok
2. 00:11:157 (5,1) - check spacing. It's not the best idea to have random spacing in the easiest diff ok
3. 00:28:695 (4) - Consider ending this slider at 00:30:541 - because the melody is still there between this slider and 00:30:541 (1) - no, because there a another note here
4. 00:31:003 (2,3,4) - Check spacing.I know about the spacing here, but I want give some aesthetic
5. 01:06:080 (5) - Is this tick clap on purpose? I don't think it belongs here clap, there is not ever clap
6. 01:52:233 (2) - How about this? ??
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:03:541 (2,3) - Stack error, and check distance. ok, stack fix
2. 00:13:003 (2,4) - stack error ok
3. 00:18:772 (6,1) -How about this? I think the stack might be a bit hard for beginners especially after 1/2 reverse.ok
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:41:157 (5) - NC here? it's really long and not following your pattern ok, you right
5. 00:43:464 (7,8) - Why don't you keep the spacing consistent? you can still do blanket with 1.0 spacing ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:08:387 (1,3) - I'm not really liking this overlap., you could fix it ok
7. 01:14:849 (3,4) - The jump here makes sense, but you could always use consistent spacing Ok, I changed the slider orientation
8. 01:37:464 (3) - shouldn't the NC start here? every 2 stanza ok
9. 01:46:233 (4,2) - This overlap isn't pretty imo

ok

[Hard]

1. OD 4 on Hard is really silly. Consider at least +1. But I'd recommend +2 ok
2. 00:02:157 (7,8) - you should let players click the dominant sound because it's much more intuitive to play I don't understand you here
3. 00:03:772 (3) - Extend by 1/4 ? since the melody is at 00:04:118 - ok
4. 00:06:887 - you should map this melody. 00:06:772 (4) - this is a wrongly snapped note ok
5. 00:07:233 (6,7,1) - This inconsistent spacing is really hard to read. you should really consider fixing this. ok
6. 00:25:464 (5) - crtl+g would play better imo ok
7. 00:28:695 (7) - The melody definitely keeps going, and the slider ends in a very weird place.. Consider reammping this part. ok
8. 01:00:195 (1,1) - I hope you realize how hard this is to play :3 ok
9. 01:10:464 (7,1) - What happened to the spacing here? ok
10. 01:13:002 (3,4,6) - this stack is very confusing to read, as it's in 3/4 rhythm. Maybe delete 4 and add reverse to 3? This is a good idea, but I want keep some the map a bit more hard
11. 01:45:080 (4,1) - Not really liking the overlap and blanket here. oh man, relax
12. 01:49:695 - you're not going to map this beat? ok, there, I put a new note
13. 01:50:849 (3,5) - Not liking this overlap either. ok

[EruJazz's Insane]

Don't really want to mod this. I'm sorry, but I'll tell you why : too many rhythm problem, random spacing, etc.

1. AR-1 please. this is BPM 130 and the note density is too small for AR9

pife1 wrote:

No Dap wrote:

1. 01:52:233 (2) - How about this? ??
   
   SPOILER

   

LizeKotze wrote:

Overall, it's an excellent map!
Sorry for not being able to mod the insane; I'm just not on that level yet.
Good Luck!

[-Sophie-] wrote:

From my moe queue
[Insane]

AIMod

00:21:426 - Move this stream further away from the slider because it dosen't flow well
Please look at AIMod first.

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438,323,89849,2,0,P|467:294|472:256,2,75.000000298023,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,90541,5,2,3:2:0:0:
256,192,90772,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,120,91003,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,54,91233,38,2,B|256:94|256:94|280:118|280:118|232:142|232:142|256:166|256:166|256:206,1,187.500000745057
368,304,92618,5,10,0:0:0:0:
144,304,92849,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,304,93080,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,304,93310,6,2,B|96:304|80:256|80:256|96:208|144:224|160:176|160:176|144:128|96:144|82:92|104:76,1,330.000011382102,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,16,94464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,16,94580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,16,94695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,16,94926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,95157,6,0,B|408:148|424:196|424:196|464:184|476:136,1,165.000005691051
376,68,95849,2,0,P|336:72|302:113,1,82.5000028455256
220,192,96310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,304,96541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,96772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,97003,6,2,P|192:92|128:144,1,165.000005691051
220,192,97695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,97810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,97926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,280,98272,5,6,0:0:0:0:
384,280,98541,2,2,P|257:323|128:280,1,275.000009485085
128,116,99541,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,96,99657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,132,99772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,208,100003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,100233,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,76,100464,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,176,100695,1,2,3:2:0:0:
385,352,100926,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,264,101157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,101387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,88,101618,2,2,P|476:48|456:8,2,82.5000028455256,2|2|2,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,64,102310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,64,102426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,64,102541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102772,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,71,103464,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,312,103926,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
379,192,104387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,192,104618,2,2,P|488:240|460:264,1,82.5000028455256,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,260,105080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,120,105310,1,4,0:0:0:0:
117,245,105541,6,0,P|101:229|101:197,1,41.2500014227628,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,105772,2,0,P|128:168|104:152,1,41.2500014227628,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,176,106003,2,0,P|64:160|64:128,1,41.2500014227628,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,113,106233,2,2,P|121:57|217:33,1,165.000005691051,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,112,106926,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,152,107041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,107157,2,0,P|256:200|304:192,1,82.5000028455256
432,176,107618,1,4,3:0:0:0:
80,176,107849,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,312,108080,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,108541,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,240,109003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,109233,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,132,109349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,120,109464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,120,109926,2,0,B|388:116|388:116|428:104,1,75.000000298023
368,24,110387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,20,110503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,110618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,128,110849,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,168,111003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,188,111157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,248,111310,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,264,111464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,308,111618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,340,111772,6,2,B|118:360|165:275|68:270,1,150.000000596046
24,248,112387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,112541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,136,112695,2,0,P|56:100|296:36,1,300.000001192092
288,106,113849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,159,114080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,106,114310,2,0,P|448:152|416:224,1,150.000000596046
368,268,115003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,115464,12,2,117310,0:0:0:0:

[-Sophie-] wrote:

From my moe queue
[Hard]

AIMod

00:04:118 (4) - Don't add a hit sound here because of the small slider. Sounds off OK
01:29:849 - Reverse arrow here Good

The AIMod is very good when we are talking in Easy and Normal, but when we are talking hard or above it, the AIMod become some bit useful, because the AIMod limited at the mapper.

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~
Hi ^^

EruJazz's Insane:

1. 00:19:233 (3,4,5) - Could be placed differently How? Why? I do not really see a problem with the shape of the circles.
2. 00:35:387 (4) - Move up slightly. It's too close to the bottom
   
   I think not

   
3. 01:12:772 (1,2,3) - Place differently ^
4. 01:39:541 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

All I see~

Good luck

1. 00:05:157 (2) El sampleset normal que pusiste en la flecha de reversa de este slider , suena mal . Además por lo que noté andas poniendo el sampleset normal siguiendo la música y aqui
   no se necesario . Asi que remuevalo porfavor
2. 00:11:157 (5) Yo siento que el NC debería ir aqui , ya que se siente claramente un leve cambio de ritmo desde aquí. Consideralo
3. 00:15:772 ¿Porqué dejaste de usar los hitsounds(sampleset normal) , se siente muy muerto sin hitsounds , intenta agregar algunos siguiendo la música como lo estabas haciendo y talvez usar algunos whistles.
4. 00:47:157 (1) ¿Que opinas de un Finish aqui? , le da un mejor toque a esta parte , ademas que aqui comienza el kiai time.
5. 00:52:695 (3) Invierte este slider hacia la derecha , el flow se siente raro . Esto mejorara el movimiento del cursor al jugarlo
   Ejemplo:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:55:926 (2,3,4) Poner tres circles alineados , se siente muy aburrido de jugar . Podrías intentar hacer algo mejor con estos tres circles.
   Talvez algo como esto , o depende de ti:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:17:157 (1) Este slider recto juega mal con respecto al siguiente slider. SLIDER RECTO > SLIDER CIRCULAR (BAD IDEA) . Podrías intentar algo como esto :
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:24:080 (3) La cola de este slider está sobre (1) , intenta mover este slider , ya que podría crear algo de confusion con un jugador principiante.
9. 01:33:310 (1) Finish aqui

1. 00:03:541 (2) Es una mala idea hacer un jump en una dificultad normal , arregla el (2) con el spacing correcto.
2. 00:05:618 (1) Lo mismo que dije en la easy , con respecto al sampleset normal
3. 00:11:618 (4) Sampleset normal al comienzo del slider , sigue bien la música
4. 00:15:310 Lo mismo que dije en la Easy , con respecto a los hitsounds
5. 00:47:156 (1) Finish aqui porfavor
6. 01:09:080 (x) Yo siento que una nota aqui es realmente muy necesaria
7. 01:21:310 (2,3,4) El mismo consejo , intenta crear algo un poco más divertido en vez de algo lineal.
8. 01:29:618 (6) |Nazi| Para que hagas un blanket como este al menos , centralo adecuadamente
9. 01:33:310 (1) Finish
10. 01:36:541 (5) Estoy seguro que olvidaste poner un NC aqui
11. 01:49:003 (3) 1 grid a la derecha , o al menos que esté bien centrado (x:256 y:160)

1. 00:04:118 (4) Olvidaste un sampleset normal en la cola de este slider
2. 00:13:926 (4) Arregla el spacing de este slider con (3) , están demasiado apegados
3. 00:22:464 (7,1) No deberías poner Claps en estos dos circles ? . Por consistencia con los otros lugares
4. 00:42:772 (2,3) Arregla el spacing entre estas dos notas
5. 00:47:157 (4) En mi opinion un NC aqui es necesario , por el cambio de ritmo
6. 01:04:695 (4) Este slider recto no fluye nada pero nada bien , que opinas de algo como esto ? :
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:25:926 (4) Cuando jugué la diff. , esta parte no se siente nada bien . Este slider no fluye bien con el anterior . En mi opinión deberías intentar algo como esto , luce bien y fluyerealmente mucho mejor :
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:28:926 (2,3) Lo mismo que 00:42:772 (2,3)
9. 01:45:080 (4,5,1,2) Honestamente este patrón se siente muy random , en si , muy malo . Mi recomendación sería que rehagas este patrón , será mejor

1. 00:00:310 (1,2,3) ¿Qué opinas de usar unos whistles aqui?. Se oirá muy bien con la música
2. 00:02:387 (1) Este NC es totalmente innecesario . Podrías removerlo
3. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) Yo siento que las notas que estan en las lineas azules se sientes overmapped claramente . Recomendaría removerlas , pero es tu decisión

XinCrin wrote:

Hola . El primer mod de mi queue .Veo que mejoraste mucho el mapa , asi que a darle una revisadita. #spanish mod

EruJazz's Insane

1. 00:00:310 (1,2,3) ¿Qué opinas de usar unos whistles aqui?. Se oirá muy bien con la música done
2. 00:02:387 (1) Este NC es totalmente innecesario . Podrías removerlo La razón de que lo puse así es porque la distancia de notas es un poco amplia, y quería separar los dos pedasos para que no se vieran como una masa del mismo combo que dura por un montón de tiempo. Se podría queitar, pero dejandolo no se vema. (de hecho, si lo quito me parece que queda un poco feo todo del mismo color).
3. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) Yo siento que las notas que estan en las lineas azules se sientes overmapped claramente . Recomendaría removerlas , pero es tu decisión Habrá algun stream que no tenga algo de overmap? , quiero dejarlo así.

La diff es buena , pero creo que podrías mejorar el modo en que sigues el ritmo , ya que es una insane y solo andas siguiendo en gran parte de la canción ese sonido agudo , y asi estás
ignorado buena parte de la música . Con el resto , está bien .

Aleks719 wrote:

let's give it a try

General
inconsistency in combo colour in diffs. specially? i ask cuz pink colour looks bad on this bg without making it darker.
Few of your custom hitsounds are not used. as example, soft-slidertick5.wav and soft-sliderslide5.wav. Check all of them twice.
Also couple of your sliderticks and sliderslides are noiseless.And both of them can't be noiseless. that's a rule. btw, you did it, as example here: 00:41:618 (5) - Hard diff. long slider, no sliderslide, silent tick.

EruJazz's Insane
last kiai section starts in another time. that's fine since it's guest diff, but start of kiai in another diffs fits better, just saying. i will speak this with pife ok, fixed
00:04:233 (5) - same thing about 1/6 beat here as in hard, add note maybe? ok, done. Move to 00:04:157 (4) - (lol.. this will be ugly, but follow the song @_@)
00:14:041 (1) - i'd make it 1/2 shorter and add soft whistle, after that you can add note+soft whistle before next pattern and it should be better: http://puu.sh/apvxu/67c49195aa.jpg done
00:26:617 (2,3,4) - move it away from (2)? now it looks tricky, like a bad-shape stream. additional spacing will not hurt ok, i spacing this to 2.0x
00:45:080 (2) - shapes like that can be easily improved. i believe in your skills orz.. ok, i made a wave xD
00:46:464 (6) - better add nc for these jumps done
00:50:272 - i'd add note here, maybe you agree Orz, listen fine, but i dont want chage this patter.
00:56:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why so close to previous pattern? ctrl+j maybe? hahah, you are right. done
00:58:233 (7) - toooo close to (6). and without any reason, more it farer fixed
01:02:849 (4) - i think nc should be here fixed
01:07:464 (4,1) - hard to feel that it's 1/3. better fix spacing for making it more readable for me, the way it is now, it is easy to read. anyway I will make him more spacing.
mmm, and i think that's it for Insane, quite good!

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi, I'm here from Moo-chan's modding queue I'm her friend who used it to find maps~
[Insane]
00:15:772 (1) - This could blanket the 2 better fixed
00:19:926 (1) - could blanket a lil better fixed
00:28:118 (3) - this might overlap 00:29:003 (3) - which could be ugly idont agree. btw, i want a lineal flow 00:27:772 (2,3) -
00:35:387 (4) - I think the curve on this is a little harsh idont agree... is kawaii.
00:45:080 (2) - this looks ugly imo fix with a wave
00:47:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think have this random jump pattern doesn't really fit what's going on with the music very welll are not random. Claps are in rigth ever, and shape have a nice flow.
00:59:618 (3,1) - this overlap is meh xD, sorry, idont change thi, bc the flow in 01:00:541 (2,3,1) - and symetry.
00:59:849 (4,2) - ^
01:30:772 (2,3) - I dun like notes going over sliders like this muich cicles are fine.
01:33:310 (1) -the curves on this are kinda pointy haha, you are right. Fixed
01:39:541 (1,2,3) - triplets like this are meh to play, look ugly and aren't really used anymore. It also feels out of place since it's the only time that you use them ever in the map emm... i use this in 00:19:233 (3,4,5) -

(I can only mod insanes really)

That's what I saw at least, remember that everything here is a suggestion so don't hate me for making them xd Good luck getting this ranked <3

1. The red point should be here 00:01:003 - . Fix it in all diffs.
2. Make the Kiai time the same in all diffs! It's necessary.

1. 00:09:772 (3,4,1) - Spacing between (3,4) and (4,1) is different, fix it please.
2. 00:31:003 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:16:695 (2) - It would be better if you make this way, IMO:
   
   
4. 00:19:464 (5) - Add NC here to make your comboing more consistant.
5. 00:25:464 (4,1) - The spacing is right in this moment, but beginners can be confused. I suggest to make this way:
   
   
6. 00:28:695 (4,1) - This blanket could be better.
7. 00:39:310 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:42:541 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:47:618 (2) - ctrl+j this slider pls
10. 00:52:695 (3) - I suggest to make smth like this, because beginners can click on the reverse arrow instead of slider's beginning. If you apply it, check the distance with 00:54:541 (1) - :
    
    
11. 01:00:080 (2) - Move it to x:300 y:256
    OR
    start a spinner here and end it on 01:01:926 -
12. 01:17:157 (1,2) - Blanket
13. 01:20:387 (4) - Add NC here, delete it here 01:22:233 (1) - , add it here 01:24:080 - , delete here 01:26:387 (1) - , add here 01:27:772 - and delete here 01:28:233 (1) - . Comboing should be more consistant!

1. 00:06:541 (2,3) - Blanket could be a bit better.
2. 00:13:464 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:20:849 (4,1) - You HAVE TO USE distance snap here, fix it.
4. 00:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - If you wanted to make this patter symmetrical, make it better pls
   
   
5. 01:24:541 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:19:003 (3,4) - Smth like this:
   
   
7. 01:48:080 (2,4) - Make these sliders the same?

1. Move 00:06:887 (4) - to make this?
   
   
2. 00:28:695 (7) - I suggest to add one more reverse and fix the spacing with (1)
3. 00:45:310 (7,1) - This overlap could be fixed. 00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Also make a perfect triangle.
4. 00:51:310 (2,3) - Blanket
5. 01:31:464 (7) - Maybe add a reverse? This place is so empty

1. 00:06:541 (2,3) - Blanket could be a bit better. I can't, because of distance
2. 00:13:464 (3,4) - ^ Blanket already here
3. 00:20:849 (4,1) - You HAVE TO USE distance snap here, fix it.
4. 00:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - If you wanted to make this patter symmetrical, make it better pls The image is not very clearly
   
   
5. 01:24:541 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:19:003 (3,4) - Smth like this: OK
   
   
7. 01:48:080 (2,4) - Make these sliders the same?

1. Move 00:06:887 (4) - to make this? OK
   
   
2. 00:28:695 (7) - I suggest to add one more reverse and fix the spacing with (1) No, because if add a reverse more it will be difficult to read
3. 00:45:310 (7,1) - This overlap could be fixed. 00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Also make a perfect triangle. I don't know how I can do a perfect triangule here, sorry
4. 00:51:310 (2,3) - Blanket
5. 01:31:464 (7) - Maybe add a reverse? This place is so empty

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi, here's the mod from my queue! Wow this has a lot of stars, so I hope this can help you in some way hi n.n

[EruJazz's Insane]

00:10:926 (3) - If you delete this note, you can hear that there is no double rhythm at that part, if that makes sense, so maybe take this note out? It plays fine the way it is, so its your call this was because polarity, so, i think is fine (and playlable).

00:16:464 (4,5,6,7,8) - select this whole combo and move it to 76, 196 I think it looks a little bit better there nice, ty

00:41:156 (3) - consider moving this to 172, 320 just to add a little more flavor to the pattern, just a straight line of notes is kind of boring sorry, i want a lineal flow.

01:38:541 (2) - Maybe move this to a spot other can on top of 1, just to make a little easier to read, because it comes at an awkward timing on the timeline ooook, done

Well, that's it for my mod. Sorry it's so short, but there's a reason this has 108 SP

Hopefully this helped you a little bit

It's a very nice and catchy song, I really like it

This will get ranked for sure

Xanandra wrote:

>:( Lol, +110 already... let's see what I have to offer...

[Erunamo]

00:06:310 (4,5) - I know that it follows perfectly the DS, but Id like it to have the DS reduced a bit, to make it more obvious.1.0x should be enough humm.. just try it, but I do not like how it feels...
00:12:541 - Somehow I feel like it is missing a clap in here. ups... done ^^
00:22:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, it would play better if you were to delete this note 00:22:580 (4) - youd have to remap it a bit to make it look good of course. oook, i delete (4) and remap a bit ir (with a litte jump, etc..)
00:26:617 - 00:30:541 - this whole part played so wrong for me, mainly because of the spacing, and Ill blame it to the fact that 00:27:772 (2) - is touching the slider. oh, sorry. La verdad no quiero cambiar esto por muchas razones (la mayoría de orden sentimental), además, para mí es más importante mantener el spacing en la parte que hay un pequeño overlap, porque es justo el efecto que quiero causar.
00:37:695 (3) - Make it just a circle, for sake of consistency with 00:34:003 (1) - and sounds better this way anyways oooks
00:49:464 - Was expecting a whistle here ok?
01:05:387 (7) - Dont you think spacing is a bit too much? Id put it somewhere more like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1905711 nahh, is fine for me.
01:07:464 (4) - This note should be part of the next combo, and as thus, should be part of the next pattern.okay, i improve combo colous here.
01:25:464 (3,4) - This notes stacked plays bad imo. for me this play fine... only need consentration
01:27:772 (3) - Delete this circle? no bc drum
01:28:233 (4) - NC should be here, and not next note humm.. no, idont like.
01:37:926 (4,1) - Maybe make these two notes into a slider? mm.. i think is will make less readable.
01:50:387 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole part sounds as if its wrongly timed... Or better said, guitars are offbeat, so Id strongly advise against mapping to the guitars. i know, but, drums help to folow the rythm, so, i think is acceptable.

1. 00:08:387 - remove Inherited points? i don't think it's necessary
2. 00:15:772 (1) - add whistle at start ?
3. 00:28:695 (4) - add finish at start?
   01:33:310 (1) - ^

1. 00:16:695 (5) - add NC?
2. 00:40:926 (3,4) - add clap_?
3. 00:55:464 (3) - remove finish at start and use sampleset Normal?

1. 00:02:387 (1) - I think this NC is not necessary
2. 00:26:617 (2,3,4) - strange spacing... I was hard to read
3. 00:06:541 (5,1) - better swap NC
4. 00:31:233 (2) - hmm do you picked up any sounds?
   
   add a reverse is good idea

   
5. 00:40:003 (6) - ctrl + G ?
6. 00:41:156 (3) - move to x168,y324?
7. 00:42:310 (5,1) - add NC?
8. 00:58:233 (7) - stuck on 00:58:695 (1) ? more jump
9. 01:07:464 - 01:08:233 control the volume 40% of this place. It is too loud as it stands
10. 01:25:349 (2) - delete note?
11. 01:51:310 (4) - add NC?

ShiraKai wrote:

[EruJazz's Insane]

1. 00:02:387 (1) - I think this NC is not necessary idont agree ^^u
2. 00:26:617 (2,3,4) - strange spacing... I was hard to read >insane desu
3. 00:06:541 (5,1) - better swap NC yeah, fix
4. 00:31:233 (2) - hmm do you picked up any sounds? following the bass.
5. 00:40:003 (6) - ctrl + G ? Okay!!
6. 00:41:156 (3) - move to x168,y324? no, i want lineal flow
7. 00:42:310 (5,1) - add NC? ~~
8. 00:58:233 (7) - stuck on 00:58:695 (1) ? more jump hummm...mmmm... o....k...
9. 01:07:464 - 01:08:233 control the volume 40% of this place. It is too loud as it stands 55%
10. 01:25:349 (2) - delete note? nope.
11. 01:51:310 (4) - add NC? nahh

Good luck

[Insane]
od8 maybe too hard for a ar8, od7 is nice
00:26:617 (2,3,4) , 00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) so why not cs4?
01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not same ds
01:16:695 (1) - wip, just i don't like it
01:45:541 (1,2,3) - it dosent looks well
[Hard]
wow, green master
00:52:464 (5,6) - do a blanket maybe?
[Normal]
ctlr shit a and check ds prob
[Easy]
^ same normal

Alex Li wrote:

From modding Team

[Hard]
wow, green master ?
00:52:464 (5,6) - do a blanket maybe? OK
[Normal]
ctlr shit a and check ds prob I couldn't do it
[Easy]
^ same normal I couldn't do it

im lazy nice map, gl on ranking

Hi From SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

1. Set AudioLeadin to 2000ms
   

[Easy]

1. 00:04:233 (1) - Clap?
2. 00:07:464 (4) - ^
3. 00:09:310 (2) - ^
4. 00:12:541 (2) - ^
   
   Fine

[Hardl]

1. 00:38:387 (3) - Finish
2. 00:40:233 (1) - ^
3. 01:24:541 (3) - ^(Up to u
4. 01:26:387 (1) - ^
5. 00:04:176 (4) - AiMod Check !
   
   

Sry for this useless Mod ._.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~ :3

[Insane]
CS4. CS5 no soporta muy bien mapas con jumps, si acaso CS 4.5 como máximo Bueno, creo que necesito una explicación más detallada de esto xD. Realmente creo que el CS5 esta bien por lo lento del mapa, y aunque hay jumps, debido al BPM bajo, no lo veo tan terrible, estoy convensido que los jugadores experimentados podran sacarle el DT en algunos pocos intentos.
00:05:156 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Aunque el spacing es consistente, puede ser algo confuso, te recomendaría usar sliders para introducir este ritmo en 3/4. mm... justamente por el spacing consistente es que se minimiza la posible confución, pero es un insane, pienso que quienes lo jueguen ya vana tener suficientes skills de lectura como para no confundirsen al punto de perder el combo
00:19:233 (3,4,5) - Te recomendaría algo más lineal, este tipo de triples no suelen ser agradables de jugar. Lineal no porque no hace el flow que quiero, mas bien un stack.
00:21:426 (2) - Un quíntuple aquí se siente algo cargado para esta parte, borra esta nota, un triple sería suficiente. ok ~_~
00:22:464 (3,4,1) - Reduce el spacing acá, tal como lo tienes en 00:24:541 (3,4,5,6). mm.. mm... hice otra cosa.
00:25:926 (7,1,2,3,4) - El spacing aquí es algo extremo Blame Aleks
00:27:195 (1,2,3,4) - Y acá es muy pequeño. fix, lo puse a 1.2x, así la parte a 1/3 va a ser mucho más obvia.
00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Te recomendaría usar sliders para introducir el 1/3, a simple vista puede parecer un 1/4, ya que usas un triple con un spacing mayor anteriormente. ^
00:29:156 (1) - Remueve el NC OK
00:30:080 (1) - ^ ya vi p q.. en DT estos combos pueden ser matadores al fallarlos xD
00:32:849 (3) - Apilalo con (4), la intensidad indica que el jump debería estar para esta nota. done
00:36:541 (2) - Personalmente no me gusta este tipo de reducciones drásticas de velocidad, en este caso tiende a romper el flujo debido a que viene de una parte rápida y se dirige a otra igual de rápida. Lo uso en muchas partes del mapa, y la verdad, siento que son lo suficientemente intuitivos.
00:37:695 (3,4,1) - Si pudieras incrementar el spacing de (4,1) sería bueno, actualmente son algo similares, lo cual puede causar algo de confusión. el spacing actual no es tan cercano como para inducir a errores (a menos que el jugador este demasiado distraido y juegue en "modo automatico" xD)
00:41:387 (4) - Lo mismo sobre los sliders lentos ^
00:43:233 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:45:080 (2) - ^ ^
01:03:772 (4) - Noté que algunos sliders tienen el whistle en todo el cuerpo, no suena muy bien que digamos, sería mejor poner el whistle manualmente en cada punto. Algunos si los quite, otros no.
01:07:464 (1,2,3,4) - Podrías usar un spacing más amigable acá, y usar slider-circulo, es algo más natural imo. mm.. pero esto dañaría el que los sonidos fuertes vayan con los circulos. Aunque tienes razón, prefiero dejarlo así.
01:28:233 (4,1) - Este spacing no es muy intuitivo, ya que el anterior es parecido y es 1/1 beat, al contrario de este. Este es un poco más largo.. por algo son jumps; xD
01:29:618 (2) - Esta nota es algo intrusiva en el ritmo que estás siguiendo, sería mejor removerla. Por consistencia con el ritmo, prefiero dejarla.
01:35:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hacen falta unos hitsounds aquí. fix
01:37:926 (4,1,1) - Este ritmo no es muy intuitivo, podrías usar un slider de (4) a (1). La idea es que sea soprendente. Ya lo hablaré con pife a ver que opina él.
01:39:541 (1,2,3) - Creo que ya había mencionado algo acerca de streams de esta forma. Aquí si no lo quito... tal y como está, lleva el flow que espero, y aunque si se ve un poco raro para los standares actuales, no veo la necesidad de cambiarlo.
01:44:387 (5,6,7,8) - Un spacing algo un poco más consistente aquí no caería mal. ok
01:45:541 (1,2,3) - Estos sliders rompen en cierta manera el estilo que has llevado en el mapa, sería mejor usar círculos en su lugar (no un stream, solo círculos en 1/2) Quiero dejarlo, sorry

La verdad no veo necesarios más mods, pero la Insane aun requiere algo de trabajo, con lo que señale debería ser suficiente, ya que especialmente sufre mucho de algunos spacings no intuitivos y de igual manera con el 1/3. Sientete libre de buscar más mods, mandame un PM cuando sientas que estás listo para seguir adelante con el mapa :p

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~ :3

[General]
Unicode Title: 수경농장
¿En Source no debería ser "La Tale"? Al principio del mapa tenia pensando pornerlo asi, pero cuando buscas por latale aqui en osu el buscador te da resultado erroneos
Podrías añadir "HyunTaek Yun" a los tags, que es el nombre real de DINY. Ok,

[Easy]
00:22:695 (1) - Se vería mejor si este slider fuera similar a 00:24:541 (3), solo copia ese y pégalo aquí, después hazle Ctrl+H y Ctrl+G y listo. No olvides el NC. OK
00:23:618 (4) - Después que hagas lo de arriba, mueve este un poco al centro y a la derecha. Ok
00:28:695 (4) - Un whistle en el final no sonaría mal.OK
00:45:310 (4) - Podrías hacer que este slider solo dure 1 beat, teniendo el final en un sonido más fuerte queda mejor. Disculpa mi ignorancia pero aqui si no te entendi
00:56:849 (4) - Mueve este un poco hacia arriba para alinearlo con la nota anterior. Ok,
01:31:926 (6) - No te equivocaste de hitsound para el slidertick? Ohh,asi es
01:33:310 (1) - Finish al inicio Ok,
01:54:080 (1) - El spinner quedaría mejor iniciando en 01:54:541 junto con el hold en la guitarra. Ok,

Algunos whistles más no vendrían mal y ayudarían a que la diff no suene tan monótona, como en la Hard. Buena diff.

[Normal]
00:07:926 (4) - Podrías eliminar el slider y poner un círculo en 00:08:387, la pequeña pausa da énfasis a el final de 00:07:003 (3) y permite golpear en un beat fuerte. no me gusta como queda, pero, creo que te equivocaste dandeme la descripcion
00:20:849 (4) - Remueve la repetición, asi el sonido de 00:21:310 se enfatiza mejor.Ok,
00:26:387 (1) - Podrías eliminar esta por la misma razón.Ok,
00:28:695 (1) - Este spinner tiene muy poco tiempo de recuperación antes de la siguiente nota, prueba con un slider de 00:28:695 a 00:30:080 y un círculo en 00:30:541. OK
00:42:080 (2,3) - Podrías intentar hacer un ritmo similar a este, haría la diff más interesante aun.OK

01:05:157 (1) - Algo similar a lo que mencioné en 00:07:926 (4). lo mismo de arriba no te entendi bien
01:08:387 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:695 (3) - Este slider se va fuera del grid, si pudieras arreglarlo estaría muy bien. Ok,

Misma sugerencia sobre algunos soft whistles para los hitsounds.

[Hard]
Te recomendaría subir el HP a 6. OK
00:01:003 (4) - Esta nota esta algo fuera del grid, muévela a la derecha un poco Ok
00:04:176 (4) - Unsnapped. Aqui en realidad esta a 1/6
00:24:310 (1) - Podrías eliiminar el slider y poner un círculo en 00:24:541, ritmicamente enfatizaría mejor esta parte de la música, y podrías hacer algo similar a lo que muestro en la imagen, tal vez con unos pentagonos más regulares o3o Ya, no me habia fijado bien en esta parte ya lo aregle aunque no hize un pentagono hice algo mas simple

SPOILER

01:13:003 (3,4) - Te recomendaría remover el círculo y añadir una repetición al slider, los 3/4 son algo impredecibles cuando hay un stack. Perdon pero no quiero, al menos quiero mantener una pizca de dificultad en el mapa
01:14:849 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:31:464 (7) - Finish en el final? Ok

Ya acercandose al final esta diff se ve muy bien.

La verdad no veo necesarios más mods, pero la Insane aun requiere algo de trabajo, con lo que señale debería ser suficiente, ya que especialmente sufre mucho de algunos spacings no intuitivos y de igual manera con el 1/3. Sientete libre de buscar más mods, mandame un PM cuando sientas que estás listo para seguir adelante con el mapa :p

DakeDekaane wrote:

Recheck, no kds.
[ Insane]
Acerca del CS 5, es que se fuerzas a los jugadores a ser más precisos, lo cual aumenta la dificultad, y teniendo en cuenta que la Hard no es muy compleja, el spread se siente algo fuera de lugar, por eso recomiendo el cambio de CS.
00:10:926 (4,5) - Hay veces que los jumps simétricos quedan muy bien, pero hay otras veces que no
00:26:618 (2,3,4) - Blame Aleks... a mi me gusta... además, sirve para despertarlos, y aun más porque luego de esto viene la parte a 1/3.
00:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sigo insisntiendo que debes meter algunos sliders aquí para introducir el 1/3 mejor De verdad creo que el spacing da el suficiente aviso para saber que ese stream no es natural... es cierto que con tu sugerencia tampoco queda mal, pero, no lo veo tan necesario ademá que es el insane, esto es casi que lo unico "retador" (y eso que es muy facil xD) en cuanto a lectura.
00:53:618 (3,4,5) - Spacing más consistente aquí se vería mejor con la simetría, podrías intentar un triangulo más regular.
00:54:310 (5,1) - Intenta reducir este jump.
01:00:080 (1,2,3) - Spacing más consistente aquí se vería mejor con la simetría.
01:04:926 (6,7,1) - El flujo acá es demasiado malo, podrías intentar algo similar -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2036487
01:07:464 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing más consistente aquí se vería mejor y haría el 1/3 más notorio.
01:12:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Podrías hacer esto simétrico -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2036499
01:16:003 (1) - Podría hacer un stack con el final de 01:16:695 (1) y arreglar (2,3) para mejor simetría.
01:27:772 (3,4,1) - Puede ser un jump, pero precisamente, por el spacing pareciera que las tres notas están en 1/1. Otra manera de verlo es porque el spacing de 1/2 se ve más grande que el de 1/1? Si lo ves de esa manera verás a que me refiero. Una solución sería aumentar el spacing en (3,4) moviendo (3) hacia arriba, alrededor de 256,100.
01:45:541 (1,2,3) - Y voy a repetir lo mismo, podrá jugarse bien, pero no queda con el estilo del resto del mapa, lo cual se siente algo raro al jugarlo.
01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Algo un poco más curvo para el stream ayudaría al flujo aquí, ya que este tipo de movimiento angular siempre trae algunos problemas, sumando el 1/3 x.x

\o/

1. 00:00:080 this line is not even necessary if you want to change the volume use the first red line
2. 00:01:003 (4) - whistle at this point doesn't really fit the song, try a clap or normal sampleset, since is clearly audible how different the music is to 00:00:310 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:02:387 (1) - this NC is not even necessary, spamming NC just mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff, also 00:02:387 (1,2) - is part of the symmetrical pattern at 00:01:464 (1,2) - keeping them as a single combo make more sense to me
4. 00:07:695 (5) - this circle doesn't fit what you was doing before by mapping just the prominet beats, I guess is better if you remove this one
5. 00:07:926 (1) - ending sliders in stanzas, doesn't represent the song nicely IMO, remove the repeat of 00:07:926 (1) - and add a circle in 00:08:387 - there is the place where your NC should be
6. 00:08:849 (2,4) - I guess you are missing whistles in both places
7. 00:10:695 (3,4) - the spacing here is too short compared to 00:10:926 (4,5) - , plus the weird rhythm at this part make the gameplay really not comfortable, I highly suggest you to use consistent spacing here.
8. 00:11:503 (1) - remove NC following your 1 stanza pattern?
9. 00:12:080 (3) - this is the place where your NC should be, but not in 00:12:310 (1) -
10. 00:12:310 (1) - this passive slider play really weird, since you are starting it in a really weak beat and ending it in a really strong one
11. 00:15:541 (1,2) - there are some bad blankets like that one, when you do a blanket make sure that it is perfect by using the aproach circle of the next or previous circle
12. 00:18:080 (3) - missing clap?
13. 00:18:426 (5) - there is almost nothing in the music, since what are you mapping is a tiny and almost inaudible sound, is not better to remove it?
14. 00:19:926 (1,2) - for cases like this one I don't understand what are your combos following, is not the song or stanzas >:
15. 00:20:849 (1) - same as 00:07:926
16. 00:23:618 (1,2,1) - yeah I kinda dont agree witht his combo spam
17. 00:26:617 (2,3,4) - why this suddenly spacing increasing? is not comfortable to play, take in consideration that you also have 1/3 patterns and can be easily confused with this
18. 00:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try to add some slider to introduce the 1/3 rhythm, since a player will get a lot of 100 or even fail at this part (personally I broke combo here), and no the spacing doesn't work to predict this
19. 00:40:003 (6) - similar to 00:12:310
20. 00:53:618 (3,4) - spacing? this doesn't play nice since you suddenly change spacing in the same combo >:
21. 01:07:464 (1,2,3,4,1) - try to keep the same spacing between them, since 1/3 is kinda hard to play plus the spacing here is different make the gameplay not nice, atleast for me
22. 01:20:387 add a circle here? will follow better the melody IMO
23. 01:33:310 (1) - nazi, this slider can be improve a lot, my issue with this is that the curves look really forced and not natural D:
24. 01:38:272 (1,1) - why the combo spam?
25. 01:50:387 (5,6,7) - 01:50:849 (1,2,3) - 1/4 stream and 1/3 stream at the same part can be really confuse, can you consider to use sliders in the 1/3 part? or in the 1/4? to not make the player lose the rhythm

1. Remove ErunamoJAZZ from the tags if you are not keeping his diff anymore.
2. Your kiais are inconsistent, which is not allowed by the rules. Example
3. Try to add 1300ms of lead in, to give players some time to get ready. Just oprn your .osu files and set AudioLeadIn: to 1300
4. Your colours are too bright and don't seem to fit well with the BG. Try something else, maybe?
   
   Alternative set

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 170,196,102
   Combo2 : 159,227,205
   Combo3 : 129,183,125
   Combo4 : 202,136,138

1. Try to drop your HP Drain to make the long gaps like 00:22:003 - less stressful for the beginners, please!
2. 00:09:772 (3,4) - the doenbeat here is unstressed, which makes your rhythm sorta hard to catch. Try to select the notes and hit Ctrl+G, it will swap them on the timeline and give you better rhythm. Do not forget to fix the spacing, afterwards. Example
   Note: This might be helpful. Please, take into consideration the things explained here!
3. 00:56:849 (4,5) - same as above. exactly the same as above. A simple Ctrl+G would help ou to resolve the prroblem. Of course, you'll have to fix the spacing afterwards.
4. 01:29:618 (5) - pretty sure you've missed a new combo here. it would match with your pattern and with the song.
   Note: speaking about comboing, it gets sorta inconsistent in the end of the diff, 01:36:080 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these combos are also waaay too long. So, try to re-consider your comboing at that part.
   
   Not bad, but comboing gets a bit weird in the end and your rhythm could use a bit more work.

1. As you use a lot of 3/4 beats, i strogly suggest you to lower OD and think about some ways to simplify the rhythm.
2. 00:05:618 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 sliders. Givve them a chance, they seem to fit prefectly with the rhythm. Example. They are much easier to hit and to undersand _ they fit better in terms of rhythm.
3. 00:28:695 (5) - you've probably missed a new combo here, I think it really needs a new combo as thmusic changes significantly.
   Note: 01:29:618 (6) - same here, I guess.
4. 01:05:157 (1) - the slider does not really fit. First of all, its head hits practuacally nothing and secondly the doenbeat remains unstressed.
   
   Not bad but you can improve the appearance and work with the rhythm more.

1. Please, take a look at the polarity guide and see how you can improve your own map according to the guide.
2. 00:08:618 (2) - exactly the same thng about unstressing beats. I've already pointed out a few examples on Easy and Normal. The slider begins on a red (mnor) beat, and ends on the strong (white). It makes the slider kinda unfitting and leaves the main beat unsressed. It happens a lot and this seriously needs your attention.
   
   Apart from the listed rhythm issues, it is fine. Just, try to work on your rhythm more attentively, please!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Remove ErunamoJAZZ from the tags if you are not keeping his diff anymore. OK
2. Your kiais are inconsistent, which is not allowed by the rules. [url=http://puu.sh/cgJMd.png]Example
3. Try to add 1300ms of lead in, to give players some time to get ready. Just oprn your .osu files and set AudioLeadIn: to 1300 OK
4. Your colours are too bright and don't seem to fit well with the BG. Try something else, maybe? OK
   
   Alternative set

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 170,196,102
   Combo2 : 159,227,205
   Combo3 : 129,183,125
   Combo4 : 202,136,138

[Easy]

1. Try to drop your HP Drain to make the long gaps like 00:22:003 - less stressful for the beginners, please! OK
2. 00:09:772 (3,4) - the doenbeat here is unstressed, which makes your rhythm sorta hard to catch. Try to select the notes and hit Ctrl+G, it will swap OKthem on the timeline and give you better rhythm. Do not forget to fix the spacing, afterwards. Example
   Note: This might be helpful. Please, take into consideration the things explained here! OK
3. 00:56:849 (4,5) - same as above. exactly the same as above. A simple Ctrl+G would help ou to resolve the prroblem. Of course, you'll have to fix the spacing afterwards.OK
4. 01:29:618 (5) - pretty sure you've missed a new combo here. it would match with your pattern and with the song. OK
   Note: speaking about comboing, it gets sorta inconsistent in the end of the diff, 01:36:080 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these combos are also waaay too OKlong. So, try to re-consider your comboing at that part.
   
   Not bad, but comboing gets a bit weird in the end and your rhythm could use a bit more work.

[Normal]

1. As you use a lot of 3/4 beats, i strogly suggest you to lower OD and think about some ways to simplify the rhythm. No, because a lot of people say me that my map should be more interesting although this part can be a bit hard, they can learn a bit to bit, but I will try
2. 00:05:618 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 sliders. Givve them a chance, they seem to fit prefectly with the rhythm. Example. They are much easier to hit and to undersand _ they fit better in terms of rhythm.
3. 00:28:695 (5) - you've probably missed a new combo here, I think it really needs a new combo as thmusic changes significantly. No, becasue I don't feel that this part be a change so significant
   Note: 01:29:618 (6) - same here, I guess. ^
4. 01:05:157 (1) - the slider does not really fit. First of all, its head hits practuacally nothing and secondly the doenbeat remains unstressed. OK
   
   Not bad but you can improve the appearance and work with the rhythm more.

[Hard]

1. Please, take a look at the polarity guide and see how you can improve your own map according to the guide.
2. 00:08:618 (2) - exactly the same thng about unstressing beats. I've already pointed out a few examples on Easy and Normal. The slider begins on a red (mnor) beat, and ends on the strong (white). It makes the slider kinda unfitting and leaves the main beat unsressed. It happens a lot and this seriously needs your attention. Thank you a lot I didn't know that
   
   Apart from the listed rhythm issues, it is fine. Just, try to work on your rhythm more attentively, please!

I have a feeling that your mapping goes slightly off the actual music because of the rhythm you use, in some parts. It can also get slightly better visually.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Shiro wrote:

Hello pife1,

your map has undergone a session of Community Modding !
Special thanks to the modders who participated in this collaborative effort:
ursa
Kaguya Hourain
Estellia-
Sieg

Here is the mod. Consider this to be a summary of how the modding community recieves your map. Please take the time to go through all these points and reply to them properly, whether or not you agree with them.

General

mod

normal-sliderslide2.wav and drum-hitslidertick.wav are unused files, delete them. | Sieg OK
soft-sliderslide.wav is not a valid blank file, you must use http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav instead. Same goes for drum-sliderslide.wav soft-sliderslide3.wav soft-sliderslide4.wav soft-sliderslide5.wav and soft-sliderslide6.wav | Sieg OK
Offset should be 1003 so the first downbeat will be on the right spot, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anacrusis | Sieg OK
Check you kiai times for consistency, I don’t see a point why they differ across diffs. | Sieg

OK


Easy

mod

CS2 feels a bit too high. I would suggest to use cs 2.5 or even 3 to make the circles a bit smaller and make the map visually more appealing! Also it will make for better spread, also will increase player experience overall for this difficulty - Kaguya, Sieg OK
OD + 1 would be preferred, as OD<AR can lead to confusing situations, and those ODs are very low already- Kaguya OK
00:01:003 (1,2,3) - Consider blanketing \ redesign this, atm looks way too clunky | Sieg OK
01:29:618 (1,2) - The flow here could be done better if you followed the sliderpath from 1. The problem is this: http://media.tumblr.com/f9d97bfa3e85d22 ... qz4rgp.png the flow is visually inconsistent (although it’s playable), and fixing that would make the map look better.- Kaguya I could catch well the idea but I did something
01:31:926 (2,1) - This blanket looks pretty bad, the end of (2) is too close to (1), you can drag (1) earlier in the timeline to use its approach circle as help! - Kaguya OK
01:37:464 (2,3) - The blanket is also imperfect here, you can do the same to improve it - Kaguya OK
01:38:387 (3,4) - Same. - Kaguya OK
Overall I don’t like the slidertick hitsounds. They feel confusing. Refer to Sieg’s comment in Hard. - Kaguya

I don't feel any confunsing


Normal

mod

OD2 is way too low for this difficulty, especially considering it is AR5. Never use such drastic differences in AR and OD, as they lead to numerous problems while playing. - Kaguya OK
Generally I don’t enjoy the useage of sliders here. Symmetry is also being done wrong, this could use a lot of fine tuning. - Kaguya sorry but I am very noob
00:07:926 (4,1,2) - Sliders feel wrong. Circle should be placed on the first tick of the combo and sliders should start on the big white tick and the and the third tick. Replace 00:07:926 (4,1,2) - with circle slider slider and add a new combo on the first slider. - Kaguya Sorry, But I don't want like this idea
00:08:849 (1,2,3) - Try blanket with (2)? | Estellia- OK
00:10:233 (3,4) - This feels and plays bad. It’s bound to confuse the player into a sliderbreak. I would suggest a reverse ¾ slider and a circle on the white tick. - Kaguya Sorry I don't like it
00:13:464 (3,4) - Fix blanket | Estellia-Good
00:16:695 (3,4) - 01:02:387 (3,4) - Better replace this with repeat slider because it will be hard to normal level players hit 3\4 rhythm accurate. | Sieg Yes, Sir but I don'tuse reverse
00:23:618 (3,4) - Flow slightly thrown off visually,(4) should look like it comes from (1). Just move it down a bit and rotate it clockwise to fix that | Estellia- No, because I want let it like is
00:24:541 (4,5) - Circle > slider > circle would work better here instead of 2 sliders, it is the same problem as 00:07:926 (4,1,2) - and you can fix the comboing - Kaguya Same above
00:27:310 (3,4,5) - Fix blanket on 3&4 and stack 5’s head on 3 after fix | Estellia-OK
00:31:464 (2,3,4) - Flow is a bit messy here, try making sliders lead into other sliders better | Estellia-Yes
00:31:464 (2,3) - Hitsounds missed on head of each slider | Sieg No, both Easy and Normal have a conduct same in hitsounds
00:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - Try having 1&2 parallel, 3&4 parallel, 1-2 and 3-4 direct horizontal flip | Estellia- Yes, Sir
00:37:926 (1,2) - Centralize | Estellia-Yes
00:40:233 (4,1) - You could continue the cursorpath here better if you move 1 a bit lower. Also same rhythm issue as pointed out before - Kaguya
Sorry, but I don't undestand you
00:41:157 (1,2,3) - Fix double blanket and stack head of 3 with head of 1 | Estellia-, Sieg Yes Sir
00:50:849 (3,1) - Make sliders parallel? At least the first part of (1) | Estellia- Good
00:56:387 (1,2) - Same suggestion as 00:10:233 (3,4) - . - Kaguya Sorry
01:02:387 (3,4) - You should make slider 3 a circle and start ¾ reverse slider where 3 currently ends, otherwise this would be a bit too confusing to play. - Kaguya Ok, but with 3 circles doesn't work well in my opinion
01:33:772 (2,3) - If you intended a blanket here, fix it. Use the sliderball followcircle for help. - Kaguya, Sieg This is not blanket
01:41:157 (2,4) - I don’t fancy this overlap here. Try to stack them properly - Kaguya OK

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01:41:618 (4) - As example, this applies for all such sliders with slidertick high volume on all difficulties
Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.
Guide line from https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria | Sieg I will try
Pretty much the kiai is boring with unintuitive and bad-looking patterns. I suggest a full remap with more interesting rhythm - Kaguya Ushh, I can't sorry

OD +1, here again ideally OD=AR - Kaguya Sorry, But this difficulty have had many changes with AR and OR
00:04:157 (4) - i think use a circle would be nicer instead of slider - ursa Yes, Sir
00:06:310 (3,4) - The slider fits more on the downbeat. Place circle on red tick it would work better. - Kaguya I don't see neccesary
00:06:310 (3,5) - make those the same slider! Just copy (3), then paste and rotate it | Estellia- OK
00:10:695 (6) - This goes to the blue tick before it. It lands on nothing there. You will need to fix t he spacing 00:10:233 (5,6,7) - - Kaguya Yes,Sir
00:12:080 (3,4) - Try to blanket with (4)? | Estellia-Yes
00:13:926 (4) - This feels unintuitive and boring, you could just map it the same way you’ve mapped the whole thing. - Kaguya No, I like this part
00:15:310 (2) - Try to fix the symmetry on this slider. Refer to t/37194 for more information. | Estellia-Yes,Sir
00:19:003 (2,3,4) - This sliders interact really bad with each other. This can be fixed by blanketing them or making good flow between them.| Sieg Yes,Sir
00:20:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This isn’t very enticing to play because of how square the movement is. Try to make a different pattern! | Estellia- Yes,Sir
00:25:464 (5) - Removing the reverse and adding a circle instead works better with the hitfinish imo. Also current spacing is confusing as it implies this slider has two repeats, not one, since everything so far has been properly spaced. - Kaguya Yes,Yes
00:28:695 (7) - Just like for Normal, this is not very interesting to play. At least split it into several shorter repeat sliders (with only one repeat for example). - Kaguya I amo sorry for be so predictable
00:28:695 (7) - One more repeat to follow this 1\6 sound, or make sure not to overlook it if you redo this part | Sieg Good
00:38:849 (4,5) - Fix that blanket | Estellia- Yes
00:44:618 (5,6,7) - fix the blankets between (5,7) and (6) | Estellia-, Sieg Oh Good
00:47:618 (2,3,4) - Continue the sliders on the white ticks they really don’t fit on the red ticks. - KaguyaI don't see a really problem here
00:50:387 (3) - http://puu.sh/dkJh5/e2113e33a7.jpg to avoid overlap with 00:49:464 (1) , minor thing | SiegYes,Sir
00:52:464 (5,6) - Fix the blanket | Estellia-Yes,Sir
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you are going to use drum samples, make sure they are audible. Reducing the volume on those makes no sense and goes entirely against the song. At this level, the drum samples are basically muted and that is unrankable. This goes for the kiai as well. | Shiro Oh,god, you are right
00:58:464 (3,4) - Make 4 further away? The way they touch feel so ugly | Estellia-??
01:10:233 (6,7) - Make this two sliders instead of circle + reverse. - Kaguya ??
01:14:849 (3,5) - Are these even symmetrical? | Estellia-Yes
01:23:618 (1,2) - Blanket those | Estellia-, Sieg Yes
01:23:618 (1,2) - Blanket those | Estellia- Yes
01:31:233 (6,7) - Blanket those | Estellia- Yes
01:39:310 (5) - move this beat to x :144 y:104 ? to make sure it’ll not overlap with the previous slider - ursa Yes
Can’t say much, generally looks like a super old map but has areas which have perfectly nice flow like 01:16:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:16:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:43:464 (1,2,3) - . Try have the map mimic flow with the above mentioned parts. | Estellia-

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13:59 pife1: Erunamo!!
14:03 ErunamoJAZZ: eo
14:03 pife1: I need your mod!
14:19 ErunamoJAZZ: mandeme msg a las 3
14:19 ErunamoJAZZ: es que quiero calentar, no he jugado nada xD
14:20 ErunamoJAZZ: me levanté como a las 9am, y apenas me conecté, me pidieron mod también xD
14:20 pife1: quiero mapear una cancion pero nose si me equivoco en el offset o en el BPM
14:20 pife1: cuanto me cobras por el mod!!!
14:20 ErunamoJAZZ: lol
14:21 ErunamoJAZZ: nada, pero ya a las 3 lo atiendo (?
14:22 pife1: dale
15:00 ErunamoJAZZ: asdf
15:00 pife1: ?
15:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 3pm
15:02 pife1: dale
15:05 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/284734 DINY - Always be myself [Easy]]
15:06 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:09:772 (2,3) - corra el 2 un poco hacia la derecha arriba. la idea es que quede con stack al final del slider largo: http://puu.sh/ihoHw/971d870785.jpg
15:09 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:47:157 (1,2,3,4) - mueva estos de forma que se haga un "triangulo" entre los 3 primeros: http://puu.sh/ihoX9/5d99a4b8cc.jpg
15:09 ErunamoJAZZ: (recuerde que luego de mover esas cosas, cuidar que el espaciado quede correcto con las cosas que quedan cerca)
15:10 pife1: triangulo!! iluminati
15:11 ErunamoJAZZ: hahahah
15:11 ErunamoJAZZ: (?)
15:11 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:44:849 (1,3) - es chistoso que estos dos no hayan quedado simetricos... tampoco es que sea indispensable moverlos, pero en fin
15:12 ErunamoJAZZ: y ese sería del easy.
15:12 ErunamoJAZZ: está bastante bien, excepto por esas bobaditas que le dije.
15:12 ErunamoJAZZ: me avisa para ir por el normal;
15:16 pife1: yap
15:19 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/273004 DINY - Always be myself [Normal]]
15:19 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a ir paso por paso
15:19 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:26:387 (1) - muevalo de forma que haga el stack perfecto con 00:24:541 (4) -
15:20 ErunamoJAZZ: Al editor me mejoraron eso de los stacks, simplemente seleccionelo, y se mueve de forma que aparezca el (4), y casi que se acomoda solo http://puu.sh/ihpPr/f58137ec45.jpg
15:21 pife1: si eso lo note
15:23 ErunamoJAZZ: la idea es mover a 00:28:695 (5) - para que quede simetrico. Entonces, pienso que se puede hacer lo siguiente
15:24 ErunamoJAZZ: sacar a 00:27:310 (3) - más para arriba-izquierda, sin olvidar acomodar a (2)
15:25 ErunamoJAZZ: y rotar 00:27:772 (4) - , algo así: http://puu.sh/ihqdZ/6219b9daae.jpg
15:25 ErunamoJAZZ: luego...
15:25 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:28:695 (5,1) - mover estos dos, de tal forma que 00:31:003 (1) - haga stack con el final de 00:27:772 (4) -
15:26 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/ihqjf/fc127ac433.jpg
15:27 ErunamoJAZZ: y al final, acomodar lo que sigue para que espaciado quede bien.
15:27 pife1: ya
15:28 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:42:080 (2) - no es indispensable, pero, el blanket no quedó perfecto acá
15:29 ErunamoJAZZ: y el espaciado tampoco, está a 0.9 xD
15:29 pife1: es por tratar ese blanket
15:29 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/ihqCN/32c084b637.jpg
15:29 pife1: por ese blanket si ha habido traba
15:30 pife1: creo que ya
15:31 pife1: por esas partes nadie se pone de acurdo
15:31 ErunamoJAZZ: lol, cómo así?
15:32 pife1: recuerdo que algunos me decian que el blanket no estaba bien otros que si, nadie practicamente tenia la razon
15:32 pife1: yo creo que es por el angulo que hace creer que para algunos esta bien y para otros no
15:33 ErunamoJAZZ: el unico que tiene razón ahí, es el circulito que muestra si está bueno no xD
15:33 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:56:387 (1) - esta si es una bobada xD, si lo pudiera correr un cuadrito a la izquiera para no hacer el overlap... xD
15:34 pife1: overlap con quien?
15:34 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:55:003 (2) -
15:34 ErunamoJAZZ: con ese
15:35 pife1: de verdad es una bobada
15:35 ErunamoJAZZ: sisas
15:39 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:34:695 (3,4) - blanket: http://puu.sh/ihrnb/cc285b01c4.jpg
15:41 pife1: ahora si entido lo del circulo
15:42 ErunamoJAZZ:
15:42 pife1: no puedo dejarlo con el circulo el espaciado se dañaria
15:43 pife1: ya alli hice algo mas o menos
15:44 ErunamoJAZZ: fijese el punto de inicio y final del slider en la imagen
15:44 ErunamoJAZZ: y fijese también en donde quedó el circulo (4)
15:44 ErunamoJAZZ: se mueve un poquito para que el espaciado quede bien
15:44 pife1: ya lo aregle
15:45 ErunamoJAZZ: y por ultimo... 01:48:080 (2,4) -
15:45 ErunamoJAZZ: no sé...
15:45 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
15:45 ErunamoJAZZ: como no son simetricos los sliders se ven como raros
15:46 ErunamoJAZZ: no sé si quiera copiar/pegar uno de los dos, y con el Ctrl+h hacer la simetría y eso
15:46 pife1: iva a ser algo como ondas simetricas pero, como la dificultad es normal no podia forzar el espaciado
15:46 pife1: en eso pense la primera vez
15:46 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... pero no creo que quede forzado
15:47 pife1: se ve raro
15:47 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/ihs4U/b656f708d7.jpg
15:48 pife1: asi estaba antes
15:49 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, esa es la cosa, vos sos el mapper y tenés que decidir qué hacer n.n
15:49 ErunamoJAZZ: apenas lo tenga, dele una updateada para ver cómo le quedaron los blanket esos
15:51 pife1: mas tarde miro que se me ocurre
15:52 ErunamoJAZZ: oks, me avisa cuando lo actualice
15:52 pife1: no falta el hard?
15:54 ErunamoJAZZ: si, pero mejor dejar lo otros dos listos
15:55 ErunamoJAZZ: así le pregunto a un amigo que en BN
15:56 pife1: para uno rankear un mapa es muy sufrido
15:57 pife1: ya
15:57 pife1: ve erunamo los kudos sirve para algo ahora?
15:58 ErunamoJAZZ: pues... sí
15:58 pife1: si para que
15:58 ErunamoJAZZ: para las estrellas y eso... y también para el sistema de puntaje de los BN
15:58 pife1: se cambian con dinero?
15:59 ErunamoJAZZ: los que quieren ser BN ahora sí les sirven los kudosus
15:59 pife1: tengo 42 kudos
15:59 pife1: libres
16:03 pife1: Erunamo aveces no te pasas que cada vez que sientes que tu mapa ya esta bien y sientes por dentro que se puede ser mejor, pero a la vez no lo puedes mejorar mas?
16:03 ErunamoJAZZ: todo el tiempo
16:03 ErunamoJAZZ: D:
16:04 pife1: estoy seguro que todos los mappers sienten lo mismo
16:04 pife1: esa frustaccion "mi mapa de aqui no se puede mejorar mas, pero hay algo que le falta nose que"
16:06 ErunamoJAZZ: relajado
16:06 ErunamoJAZZ: ud ya pasó la parte dura es que cuando uno mapea sin saber bien qué está haciendo
16:07 ErunamoJAZZ: (o eso creo yo xD)
16:07 pife1: parc
16:07 pife1: mas facil es ganar calculo que rankear esto lol
16:08 ErunamoJAZZ: que va
16:08 ErunamoJAZZ: es más dificil rankear erasus qe esto
16:08 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
16:08 pife1: ajajjaa
16:08 pife1: verdad como va tu erasus
16:08 pife1: veo los foros y dice burbuja y burbuja
16:09 ErunamoJAZZ: meh... me da piedra pensar en eso
16:09 ErunamoJAZZ: es que quieren que le cambie unas cosas al normal
16:10 ErunamoJAZZ: cosas que de verdad pienso que están bien y son más que aceptables para un normal, pero no
16:10 pife1: esa es la cosa, y despues si cambias algo resulta que eso, daña al mapa
16:10 ErunamoJAZZ: quien me va a dar la bubble es un BN de ctb, pero el dice "hasta que los BN de std no se pongan deacuerdo, no te puedo dar la bubble"
16:11 ErunamoJAZZ: y está bien, porque el no sabe mucho de std
16:11 ErunamoJAZZ: pero mehh
16:11 ErunamoJAZZ: ud tiene la versión vieja del mapa?
16:11 ErunamoJAZZ: no vaya a actualizar todavía xD
16:12 ErunamoJAZZ: del mapa= erasus*
16:12 pife1: ahhh que canson
16:13 pife1: erunamo si logras rankear el mapa
16:13 pife1: continuaras con otro?
16:13 pife1: porque hermano
16:13 ErunamoJAZZ: ya tengo como 4 en cola pa subir
16:13 pife1: esta muy sufrido esto
16:13 ErunamoJAZZ: hahaha
16:13 ErunamoJAZZ: sisas, yo no sé uno por qué es tan masoquista xD
16:14 pife1: honestamente pienso que el sistema esta mal
16:14 ErunamoJAZZ: en parte sí
16:14 ErunamoJAZZ: pero el sistema es la gente
16:14 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
16:15 pife1: nose se pierde mucho tiempo
16:15 pife1: esfuerzo
16:15 pife1: o somos nosotros los malos mappers lol
16:16 ErunamoJAZZ: oe
16:16 pife1: sabes
16:16 ErunamoJAZZ: suba pues el mapa
16:16 ErunamoJAZZ: pa poder revisar los blankets
16:16 pife1: ya lo subi
16:17 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:09:772 (2,1) -
16:18 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, no es como lo esperaba, pero almenos se ve más organizado
16:18 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
16:19 pife1: ni me imagino como lo esperabas, porque me base en la imagen lol
16:19 ErunamoJAZZ: en la imagen, el circulo estaba completamente debajo del final del slider
16:19 ErunamoJAZZ: pero fresco, así tampoco queda mal
16:21 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/273004 DINY - Always be myself [Normal]]
16:21 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:20:387 (3,1) - (bobada) el stack entre estos dos xD
16:22 pife1: ya
16:22 pife1: santa bobada
16:22 ErunamoJAZZ: se acuerda la forma para ver si algo había quedado simetrico? (que mamon yo tan jodón con la simetría D:)
16:22 ErunamoJAZZ: de usar el Ctrl+H para ver si sí?
16:23 pife1: la de la parte de las guitarras?
16:23 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:28:695 (5) -
16:24 pife1: la de alli
16:25 pife1: no lo puse tan a la derecha porque queria que tuviera un stack con el 4
16:26 pife1: http://puu.sh/ihuSD/db44559e14.jpg
16:28 ErunamoJAZZ: mm..
16:28 ErunamoJAZZ: en ese que me acaba de mostrar,le hace falta un Ctrl+G al 4
16:28 ErunamoJAZZ: si lo deja así, eso queda mero jump
16:28 ErunamoJAZZ: y eso no lo dejan rankear en un normal xD
16:28 pife1: pero es un normal
16:29 pife1: y el espaciado y todo eso
16:34 pife1: http://www.intercambiosvirtuales.org/ju ... on-pc-game
16:35 pife1: echale un ojo a la descripcion
16:35 ErunamoJAZZ: aver
16:35 ErunamoJAZZ: LOL
16:36 pife1: ya hay hasta simulador de rocas
16:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:42:080 (2) - aun no quedó perfecto, pero mehh
16:43 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
16:44 pife1: si lo muevo no solo se dañara algo con su espaciado sino que afectara el stack con la nota anterior
16:46 ErunamoJAZZ: hagamos una cosa....
16:46 ErunamoJAZZ: yo le reglo los blankets, y se lo mando
16:47 pife1: no, no te molestes con eso
16:48 ErunamoJAZZ: no es para nada una molestia
16:48 pife1: mejor si ves algun error critico
16:48 pife1: me avisas
16:48 ErunamoJAZZ: el mapa no tiene errores criticos
16:48 pife1: erunamo
16:48 pife1: llegados a este punto
16:48 ErunamoJAZZ: ?
16:48 pife1: no quiero que mi bebe lo toquen, se muy bien que me entiendes en ese sentido
16:49 ErunamoJAZZ: bueeeno
16:49 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
16:49 pife1: gracias pero no mejor
16:49 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje, yo lo entiendo, n.n
16:50 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/273001 DINY - Always be myself [Hard]]
16:50 ErunamoJAZZ: sigamos con este
16:50 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:04:233 (4,5) - pienso que es mejor slider-circulo
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: por el tema del golpe fuerte en 00:04:695 -
16:51 pife1: ya se probo esa del slider circulo y los bat si me lo criticaron
16:52 pife1: esa parte tiene un normal en la cola
16:52 pife1: uno no muy fuerte para no salir de tono
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: es que en los normales se suelen pasar, pero en este, ps... insisto en que sería mejor
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: igual no es un cambio demasiado drástico
16:53 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:11:849 (2) - en un lado está a 0.9, pilas
16:54 pife1: como asi?!!!
16:54 pife1: no te entiendo bien
16:54 ErunamoJAZZ: del circulo a 0.9?
16:55 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/ihx1R/7281788e6a.jpg
16:55 pife1: 0.9
16:55 ErunamoJAZZ: debería estar a 1.0
16:56 pife1: ahh
16:56 pife1: ya
16:56 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:15:310 (2) - (nazi) esto no está 100% simetrico
16:56 pife1: no me sabia esa
16:57 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:19:003 (2,3,4,5) - cojalos todos, y muevalos un cuadrito a la izquierda, para que 4 y 6 queden en toda la linea del centro
16:58 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:19:003 (2,3,4,5,6) - ***
17:00 ErunamoJAZZ: y...
17:00 ErunamoJAZZ: hace falta agregar una nota después
17:00 ErunamoJAZZ: tal y como está ahora, se siente muy raro
17:01 pife1: ps alli hay un buen espacio
17:01 ErunamoJAZZ: en 00:22:233 - agrege un circulo, lo puede poner aquí (fijese las coordenadas): http://puu.sh/ihxtC/e74d90e655.jpg
17:02 ErunamoJAZZ: me avisa cuando ya.
17:03 pife1: ya
17:04 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:28:695 (7) - lo primero, es que creo que debería ir un NC ahí
17:04 ErunamoJAZZ: y, creo que separandolo en dos sliders, sale mejor. pille
17:05 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/ihxKH/deb24d5c6c.jpg
17:06 ErunamoJAZZ: aunque queda un salto de 1.9x después, se siente genial
17:06 ErunamoJAZZ: y no es exagerado
17:07 pife1: eso te iva a decir a un gran salto de olimpiada
17:07 ErunamoJAZZ: saltos los que se pega la muchacha esa que estuvo en las olimpiadas
17:07 ErunamoJAZZ: dizque 15m xD
17:07 pife1: a mi tambien me gusta
17:08 pife1: le agrega algo mas interesante al mapa
17:08 pife1: ojala no pongan traba por eso
17:09 ErunamoJAZZ: muestre
17:09 pife1: muestro?
17:10 ErunamoJAZZ: si. ya sabes, con Shif+F12 sube pantallasos
17:10 ErunamoJAZZ: sabés*
17:13 pife1: no le agregue el NC porque el ya estaba terminando esa seccion de la cancion
17:13 pife1: http://puu.sh/ihyb6/7e2619740c.jpg
17:15 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, sí si separó el slider en dos?
17:15 ErunamoJAZZ: de forma que un slider quede en 00:28:695 -
17:15 ErunamoJAZZ: y el otro en 00:29:618 - ?
17:19 pife1: no le veo necesidad de separar
17:20 ErunamoJAZZ: yo si le veo la necesidad por dos razones:
17:20 pife1: erunamo disculpa ya vamos a acabar? aun no he almorzado
17:21 ErunamoJAZZ: cómo así ome
17:21 ErunamoJAZZ: vaya y almuerce!
17:21 ErunamoJAZZ: yo le dejo escrito esto, y lo subo ya mismo
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: 1) actualmente el slider termina ahí 00:30:233 - , pero debería seguir un beat más.
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: 2)00:29:618 - aquí comieza otro sonido, así que lo más logico sería que hubiera algo para presionar ahí
17:23 ErunamoJAZZ: y ya, vaya almuerce. Lo demás se lo dejo escrito en un post

1. 00:47:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:233 (4,5,6,7) - 00:56:618 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Estos todos tienen una particularidad. Es que hay un circulo que hace que tengás que empezar los sliders en los tick rojos, y al momento de jugar, eso se siente super incómodo. La solución a eso es hacer que siempre hayan dos circulos juntos (como por ejemplo lo que hizo en 00:50:387 (3,4) - eso queda bien). La cosa es que, cuando uno presiona un slider en un sitio donde no suena nada fuerte (Como en 00:47:849 - ) eso se siente inconsistente.
   
   Lo maluco es que a lo mejor tenga que mover muchas cosas, pero si lo hace, va a quedar listo esto.
   
2. 00:41:387 (5) - 01:27:541 (5) - Aunque quizas no sea muy terrible, es un poco caro que el slider termine ahí como a mitad de camino del sonido que está siguiendo... digamos que lo más natural sería que siguienta hasta el tick blanco que sigue, ya que almenos allí suena un beat.