Hey, mod from my "non-japanese" queue.
General
01:01:926 - , 01:33:310 - , 01:41:157 - This kiai isn't really needed. It is too much and the main part already has kiai. It's a little abusive to have so much kiai for a short song.
Easy
- 00:21:310 (1,2) - Mentioning for the next time; the flow is bad here because the slider is curved and the next element is upwards, so you have to change the way your natrual movements go. This is especially important for new players so they can practice the clicking better at first and then focus on movments.
00:20:849 (4,1) - Almost 1,1x spacing when your spacing is 1,0x. Easy fix
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - You could blanket this better
Normal
00:03:772 (1) - Here is a spacing difference of 0,9 to the normal spacing, so you have 0,9 to much. Easy fix again.
00:07:003 (3) - , 00:13:003 (1) - , 00:18:541 (1) - , 00:45:310 (4,5) - Here is also a small spacing change.
00:58:695 (2,3,4) - This is very clustered and hard to play imo. You should keep each element a little more space so its more playable. Also the spacing 00:58:695 (2,3) - here is wrong.
01:49:003 (3,4) - Spacing
Hard
- I really think the slider speed changes are not needed. Its very confusing to notice and play. you have 0,8 which is totally unneeded. Best to remove them.
00:04:233 (4,5) - , 00:05:387 (7,1) - Spacing doesn't fit to the others. You should keep consistant spacing.
00:06:772 (4,5) - Spacing. You should keep it normal or else it's played as 1/4, since it looks like it.
00:07:926 (6) - Too close to previous element.
00:25:464 (5,1,2) - Make normal spacing between
00:28:003 (1,2,3) - Keep this normal spacing
00:39:310 (1,2) - Spacing doesn't fit to previous and following spacing, make it normal.
00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistant
00:46:926 (3,4) - , 00:47:617 (5,1) - Spacing mistake
00:48:310 (2,3) - , 00:49:233 (1,2) - , 00:51:541 (1,2) - You should make it 1,5x spacing like you did here too 00:47:617 (5) - . Don't use such random spacing please. You can make jumps but then make them readable and consistant to other spacing.
00:49:925 (3,4,5) - Spacing is above 1,1x, almost 1,2x. Fix this please.
00:53:157 (6,7) - Spacing is 2,5x. This is a lot for a Hard difficultie.
Your combo pattern is really messed up. In the middle of each part you start using NC, which is wrong.
00:01:925 (2) - , 00:02:849 - , ... 00:17:618 - , 00:19:464 - , 00:21:310 - , 00:23:157 - NC should be here
I'd say you make longer combos. It fits the song better. For example: http://puu.sh/4XqFG.jpg (00:05:618 (4) - starting point)
A lot contradictions with your spacing here, try to improve them more and accept my mentioned ones. It will help you. Some don't make sense at all and are really random placed.
Insane
- Comboing is random, you should recombo them (long or short combos).
- Kiai isn't the same as the other difficulties.
00:01:003 (4,1) - The spacing is almost the same as 00:00:772 (3,4) - , which might lead to confusion while playing. The usage of same spacing from a 1/2 pattern for a 1/1 pattern is not good. You could simply just move the first combo pattern lower.
00:01:926 (2,1) - This big jump with 2x spacing and then 00:02:849 (2,1) - this spacing which doesn't fit to your others.
00:03:310 (1,2) - Same mistake as above. The almost same spacing (00:02:849 (2,1) - which is normal spacing) is used and can lead to confusion.
00:03:772 (4,5) - Again.
Try to fix up the spacing which is really werid at places. Especially at the beginning it doesn't make sense at all and doesn't fit to the soft song.
If you need further help on how to fix things, contact me.
General
01:01:926 - , 01:33:310 - , 01:41:157 - This kiai isn't really needed. It is too much and the main part already has kiai. It's a little abusive to have so much kiai for a short song.
Easy
- 00:21:310 (1,2) - Mentioning for the next time; the flow is bad here because the slider is curved and the next element is upwards, so you have to change the way your natrual movements go. This is especially important for new players so they can practice the clicking better at first and then focus on movments.
00:20:849 (4,1) - Almost 1,1x spacing when your spacing is 1,0x. Easy fix
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - You could blanket this better
Normal
00:03:772 (1) - Here is a spacing difference of 0,9 to the normal spacing, so you have 0,9 to much. Easy fix again.
00:07:003 (3) - , 00:13:003 (1) - , 00:18:541 (1) - , 00:45:310 (4,5) - Here is also a small spacing change.
00:58:695 (2,3,4) - This is very clustered and hard to play imo. You should keep each element a little more space so its more playable. Also the spacing 00:58:695 (2,3) - here is wrong.
01:49:003 (3,4) - Spacing
Hard
- I really think the slider speed changes are not needed. Its very confusing to notice and play. you have 0,8 which is totally unneeded. Best to remove them.
00:04:233 (4,5) - , 00:05:387 (7,1) - Spacing doesn't fit to the others. You should keep consistant spacing.
00:06:772 (4,5) - Spacing. You should keep it normal or else it's played as 1/4, since it looks like it.
00:07:926 (6) - Too close to previous element.
00:25:464 (5,1,2) - Make normal spacing between
00:28:003 (1,2,3) - Keep this normal spacing
00:39:310 (1,2) - Spacing doesn't fit to previous and following spacing, make it normal.
00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistant
00:46:926 (3,4) - , 00:47:617 (5,1) - Spacing mistake
00:48:310 (2,3) - , 00:49:233 (1,2) - , 00:51:541 (1,2) - You should make it 1,5x spacing like you did here too 00:47:617 (5) - . Don't use such random spacing please. You can make jumps but then make them readable and consistant to other spacing.
00:49:925 (3,4,5) - Spacing is above 1,1x, almost 1,2x. Fix this please.
00:53:157 (6,7) - Spacing is 2,5x. This is a lot for a Hard difficultie.
Your combo pattern is really messed up. In the middle of each part you start using NC, which is wrong.
00:01:925 (2) - , 00:02:849 - , ... 00:17:618 - , 00:19:464 - , 00:21:310 - , 00:23:157 - NC should be here
I'd say you make longer combos. It fits the song better. For example: http://puu.sh/4XqFG.jpg (00:05:618 (4) - starting point)
A lot contradictions with your spacing here, try to improve them more and accept my mentioned ones. It will help you. Some don't make sense at all and are really random placed.
Insane
- Comboing is random, you should recombo them (long or short combos).
- Kiai isn't the same as the other difficulties.
00:01:003 (4,1) - The spacing is almost the same as 00:00:772 (3,4) - , which might lead to confusion while playing. The usage of same spacing from a 1/2 pattern for a 1/1 pattern is not good. You could simply just move the first combo pattern lower.
00:01:926 (2,1) - This big jump with 2x spacing and then 00:02:849 (2,1) - this spacing which doesn't fit to your others.
00:03:310 (1,2) - Same mistake as above. The almost same spacing (00:02:849 (2,1) - which is normal spacing) is used and can lead to confusion.
00:03:772 (4,5) - Again.
Try to fix up the spacing which is really werid at places. Especially at the beginning it doesn't make sense at all and doesn't fit to the soft song.
If you need further help on how to fix things, contact me.