Thank you, I took the necessary
Very thx Lissette-chwan~~Lissette wrote:
Hi~ hi!! :3
[EruJazz's Insane]
Rhythm is a bit messy in this diff, will give you some suggestions that will help you to improve it in the rest of the map well ... It was my first maps. but you're right.
00:03:656 (3) - Remove this note and 00:04:118 - Add one here fix
00:05:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try this: http://puu.sh/60VB3.jpg (Note that I only used notes, because I'm mainly showing you a better rhythm to it) fix
00:10:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - this really feels overmapped, try this: http://puu.sh/60VSz.jpg fix
00:11:618 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/60VXO.jpg fix
00:30:541 (1) - This sounds off, what are you following? fix... I do not remember that was following HAHAH
00:36:541 (2) - This wasnt really readable, to be honest Sorry, but do not change it.
00:50:618 (4) - The reverse arrow is partially hidden fix
00:56:387 (1) - End slider here 00:56:387 (1) - and add a note here 00:56:849 - (sounds better to me) fix
01:15:541 (5) - Wrong spacing (If is an anti-jump, doesn't work and looks more like a mistake) fix, was a mistake xD
01:15:541 (5) - Try to follow the music better, like the examples I pointed above yep.
01:19:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wrong spacing from 1 to 2
You have this 01:23:387 (1,2,3) - and this 01:25:233 (1,2,3) - with the same spacing, was confusing fix
01:45:541 (4,5,6) - This is overmapped too does not sound overmapped, and I really think it's not a difficult pattern to follow.
01:49:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong spacing on this combo fix
Spacing is kinda messy on this diff, try to keep it even among the map. Try to apply rhythm suggestions I gave you, and check in the whole map, because I didn't pointed all.
Diff needs some work, get more mods, that will help you
Good, Thank youLissette wrote:
Edited my post to add the rest of the mod. Sorry for the delay. ~
Avishay wrote:
From my queue, M4M, sorry for the delay, I was busy a bit in the last few days.
[Insane]
00:05:156 (1,2,3) - It may be on purpose, but I'll say it anyway, the DS from 2 to 3 is confusing a bit, perhaps make it just a bit a bit closer.
00:33:541 (5,1) - I suggest move 1 from 5, make a nice flow and don't stack, I don't think you are lazy
00:36:541 (2) - Is the slow slider necessary? One moment ago (4) was in the same length but in an other speed, I don't think slider velocity should be changed.
00:37:695 (3) - Make it a reverse slider, it fits. (don't change the position or the length of the slider)
00:39:541 (5) - I think splitting this into 2 sliders and making a nice pattern is much nicer, maybe something like this:
01:07:464 - Why did you competely ignore the beats here? That's really nice and it is Insane, so I don't think it should be ignored, I added this pattern here and it is really fun:
01:32:849 (2) - Move this circle just a bit left, it makes the pattern a bit more interesting and less confusing (x:352 y:304)
01:38:503 (2) - This slider isn't timed right, it is too early, change the snap divisor to 1/3 here and put it on 01:38:541 and end on 01:39:310
[Hard]
Add a note at 01:13:464 and change the positioning of 01:13:695 (5,6,7) - to a more interesting pattern (that will confuse less too)
Add one here too 01:15:310, this map isn't too fast and it won't be harmful for a hard
Add a note here 01:39:310, the spacing with the next note is confusing, I was sure at first that the slider is at 01:39:310 because of the spacing and the song, but well..
[Normal]
Couldn't find anything wrong
[Easy]
00:02:387 (2) - Add a whistle / clap here (to your choice)
Very nice map, good luck!
deejaydray wrote:
Hello, NM here from my queue ~
EASY:
00:16:695 (2) - I think this would look better if you flipped it horizontally
00:18:541 (4) - ^ same
01:20:849 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:22:233 (1)
01:24:080 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:26:387 (1)
01:27:772 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:30:080 (1)
NORMAL:
00:12:541 (5) - NC here
00:58:695 (2,3) - I suggest you finding another place for these 2 sliders (they are on the left edge, so some players might not see the entire slider)
Everything else is good ^^
HARD:
00:51:080 (7) - NC here instead of here 00:51:541 (1)
00:52:925 (6) - NC here
01:14:157 (6) - I would search another place for this circle, but it's just my opinion
That's all, nice map! ^^ Didn't have very much to mod, good luck!
baraatje123 wrote:
Good map
Testplays
I did a good job, if I do say so myselfEasy[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/esu4ozjrklsb9ee/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Easy]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]Normal[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/d5k2f85lpzge9m6/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Normal]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]Hard[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/hpp6u59870cdc55/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[Hard]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]EruJazz's Insane[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/7hn0sfwp3zrecba/baraatje123_-_DINY_-_Always_be_myself_[EruJazz's_Insane]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]
Good Lcuk getting this ranked, but you will probably not need it
Don't worry for this , I could do it without problembaraatje123 wrote:
Sprry about the dl Links. Because of the double ] and [ the DL pink doesn't work.
To dl the .osr files, copy the link, from url= to the image
Sorry about this
Neta wrote:
hi from my modding queue
sorry for long delay.. too many mod reqs
is this beatmap alive? where's BATs lol
[Easy]ok
- First check the AI mod
- 00:19:003 (5) - this slider's distance should be same with 00:18:080 (3,4) - these ok
- 01:26:387 (1) - same problem here ok
- 01:49:003 (5) - NC here ok
- 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner. ok
- Map is fine but you'd better use all same distance on Easy diff
[Normal]ok
- Check AI mod too
- 00:09:772 (2) - better move to 288, 104 to make same distance with 00:08:849 (1,3) - ok
- 00:15:310 (1) - ^ 184, 56 it will too far with previous object
- 00:17:618 (4,1) - ah.. i think this is too far for normal diff. better change slider's shape or something to make distance 1.0x ok
- 00:58:233 (4) - same problem with first one 216, 160 [color=#00BF00it will too far with previous objec][/color]
- 01:03:772 (4) - why don't you use same location with 01:01:926 (2) - 256, 296 will be best i think ok
- 01:17:156 (4) - NC here
- 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner.
[Hard]ok
- 00:10:233 (6,1) - Swap NC ok
- 00:12:080 (3,1) - ^ better no
- 00:55:002 (3,5) - better make slider watching each other it's not that good flow now ok
- 00:58:002 (2,3) - ^ better no
- 01:01:926 (3,1) - Distance shorter plz. it can be confused with 01:01:233 (1,2) - this beat I think better because I need that be a little of difficult
- 01:19:695 (2,3) - make this overlap will be nice ok
- 01:35:387 (5) - i don't think here needs finish it doesn't sound natural ok
- 01:47:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - better use all same distance no,better no I like this
- 01:53:849 (1) - volume down this spinner.
GL!
Very thx for mod.Silver Crow wrote:
hi~come from my que ;3
Insane:
00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice shape xD thx
00:36:541 (2) - feel a little hard to play here, maybe just stack with 1 done
00:51:772 - make 1 to be a short slider? em.. nope, i following drums, no piano.
00:59:503 - here is a sound, think this part 00:59:157 (2,3,4) - again maybe? ^
01:01:926 (2,3) - del 2 of the notes, use a slider? hhehe, sorry, dont agree.
01:38:272 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1577603 im a little weird about the green slider 2,its on 1/8? Is 1/3
01:42:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG, why so jump haha, you are right, i did improve this pattern, now the jumps have sense.
01:50:849 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1577612 double triangle? good idea
Very thx raikuRaiku wrote:
Raiku mod!
[EruJazz's Insane]
I recommend a slider velocity of 1.8-2.0 which goes well in accordance to the spacing you use. It is important to see from a players perspective the average cursor speed throughout the map which stems from the slider velocity and distance of jumps. The player doesn't want to constantly slow down his cursor for sliders and speed up for jumps, this all counts towards the flow of a map.
When we created the mapset, there was another insane, which after a few months decided to remove, because the Maper had no time to be applying their mods (MuseCaliope).
The map itself had the SV 2.0. My insane was insanely easy and fun to play.
For that reason it is slower, and the circles are smaller.
So.. I dont change this.
00:15:772 (1,2) - I suggest neatening the blanket between these two notes using the approach circle as guide (http://puu.sh/8I7z1.jpg). done
00:19:926 (1,2) - Here too (http://puu.sh/8I7BB.jpg). done
01:38:618 (2) - For perfect 1/3 timing, start on the red tick and end on the white tick like so (http://puu.sh/8I7YP.jpg). sorry, im following guitar to start, but change to drums at end. This slider is fine.
00:41:387 until 00:46:233 - There is really no need for slower slider velocity, in fact due to the whistles in the background you have a chance to play around with long sliders which would fun up the map and look great too. well... i really want slow sliders here, but, you are right, this can be more funny. I change a bit the sliders and add more notes.
very thx ^^neonat wrote:
Insane
00:06:541 (5) - remove the whistle sorry, i dont agree
00:06:887 (1) - whistle ^
00:07:233 (2) - remove whistle ^
00:10:233 (1) - whistle done
00:13:003 (3) - ^ done
00:16:695 (5) - ugly and cuts down, causing the flow to be bad (eg. 00:16:464 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is not good flow/shape) sorry, but but flow is fine. Yes, is a bit ugly, but this no afect the flow.
00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - no music here, this is extra yep, but is kawaii ^^
00:30:388 (3,1) - unlike the rest, these 2 overlap, don't let them do so hehe, fix
00:33:541 (6,1) - don't let them touch, 00:34:003 (1) should be placed elsewhere for better movement mm.. sorry, i dont change this
00:41:387 (4) - remove clap from start of slider done
00:45:080 (2) - bad shape, and the least it should be is ctrl-G ctrl-H ctrl-J for better flow sorry, i love this misshape slider u.u
00:47:157 - onwards: use the similar whistle pattern I highlighted in Hard lol, Hard no have whistles here xD
00:53:618 (3,4) - 00:53:849 (4) ctrl - H the slider i change the pattern a bit.
00:56:387 (1) - ctrl g h j this slider as well sorry, but not.
00:57:080 (3,5,6,7) - make it a more equal spacing pattern shape DS vs shape.. i dont change nothing
01:09:195 - add a note done xD
01:23:041 (8) - remove clap from end of slider done
01:25:464 (3,4) - stacking this is not good, space them apart for better playing sorry, i dont agree.
01:33:310 (1) - the sharp curves are not pretty tastes
01:38:272 (1) - the finish is not need, unexpected/out-of-place mm.. i think is fine, because is a blue tick note... so gives a bit surprise, if something stronger not is heard
01:45:541 (3) - NC here instead fix
Good luck
fix spacing.fanzhen0019 wrote:
Hi :3 From my queueEruJazz's Insane
HitsoundsArrangement & Design
- I see there's very inconsistent in your diff.In general, It feels very random.
- 01:28:233 (4,1) - The only issue I can see in your diff is here.. It's hard to read the rhythm when first play. And music here provides no reason for a big jump.
Good luck~
thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^UIlfri wrote:
INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.
1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.
00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.
00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.
I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.
I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^UIlfri wrote:
INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.
1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.
00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.
00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.
I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.
I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
This isn't very nice...ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U
He does give some good points though. the triplets are extremely awkward and annoying to tap out, if you play any interments, you may also relate to how annoying triplets are to play.ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^UIlfri wrote:
INSANE:
01:31:233 (1) - Slider overlaps the circles prior to it.. Overlapping isn't too good. Technically not bad because the way the slider is clearly visible. Besides, I like, and go with the music. Sorry.
1/6th notes are confusing... 00:28:695 (1,3) - 01:50:849 (1,6) - This 1/6 timing is killer...
A good alternative is using slider like you had here 01:00:080 (1,2) -
1/3* , and nope, the best alternative is follow the music. The sliders may be more comfortable for many people, but for an insane, put circles is acceptable.
00:44:850 (1) - Try to space away from the slider. sorry, idont agree. For me, it is not difficult to read, becouse is very slow.
00:05:618 (3,4) - The change of polarity, you should consider making these notes
a slider. Make like this: http://gyazo.com/148cdc431e5f8752a57d52ceca2e727d
hehe, well, this pattern was a suggestion from a bat... idont change it.
btw... this is a Insane!, no a Hard or Normal.
I recommend fixing the polarity on your mapsets. It's noticeable in all difficulties. all?, only in Hard and insane... and.. in Hard is only on sliders... so... i think we should not change anything.
I recommend this video to help out with the polarity.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
Thank you a lot for the modNo Dap wrote:
This isn't very nice...ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
thx for mod... but, you have free kudos from a "poor" mod. You need improve modding-skills, i think ^^U
Anyway here is my mod.
[Easy]
- 00:06:541 (3,4) - pretty nazi, but a bit inconsistent spacing here.ok
- 00:11:157 (5,1) - check spacing. It's not the best idea to have random spacing in the easiest diff ok
- 00:28:695 (4) - Consider ending this slider at 00:30:541 - because the melody is still there between this slider and 00:30:541 (1) - no, because there a another note here
- 00:31:003 (2,3,4) - Check spacing.I know about the spacing here, but I want give some aesthetic
- 01:06:080 (5) - Is this tick clap on purpose? I don't think it belongs here clap, there is not ever clap
- 01:52:233 (2) - How about this? ??
[Normal]ok
- 00:03:541 (2,3) - Stack error, and check distance. ok, stack fix
- 00:13:003 (2,4) - stack error ok
- 00:18:772 (6,1) -How about this? I think the stack might be a bit hard for beginners especially after 1/2 reverse.ok
- 00:41:157 (5) - NC here? it's really long and not following your pattern ok, you right
- 00:43:464 (7,8) - Why don't you keep the spacing consistent? you can still do blanket with 1.0 spacing ok
- 01:08:387 (1,3) - I'm not really liking this overlap., you could fix it ok
- 01:14:849 (3,4) - The jump here makes sense, but you could always use consistent spacing Ok, I changed the slider orientation
- 01:37:464 (3) - shouldn't the NC start here? every 2 stanza ok
- 01:46:233 (4,2) - This overlap isn't pretty imo
[Hard]
- OD 4 on Hard is really silly. Consider at least +1. But I'd recommend +2 ok
- 00:02:157 (7,8) - you should let players click the dominant sound because it's much more intuitive to play I don't understand you here
- 00:03:772 (3) - Extend by 1/4 ? since the melody is at 00:04:118 - ok
- 00:06:887 - you should map this melody. 00:06:772 (4) - this is a wrongly snapped note ok
- 00:07:233 (6,7,1) - This inconsistent spacing is really hard to read. you should really consider fixing this. ok
- 00:25:464 (5) - crtl+g would play better imo ok
- 00:28:695 (7) - The melody definitely keeps going, and the slider ends in a very weird place.. Consider reammping this part. ok
- 01:00:195 (1,1) - I hope you realize how hard this is to play :3 ok
- 01:10:464 (7,1) - What happened to the spacing here? ok
- 01:13:002 (3,4,6) - this stack is very confusing to read, as it's in 3/4 rhythm. Maybe delete 4 and add reverse to 3? This is a good idea, but I want keep some the map a bit more hard
- 01:45:080 (4,1) - Not really liking the overlap and blanket here. oh man, relax
- 01:49:695 - you're not going to map this beat? ok, there, I put a new note
- 01:50:849 (3,5) - Not liking this overlap either. ok
[EruJazz's Insane]Don't really want to mod this. I'm sorry, but I'll tell you why : too many rhythm problem, random spacing, etc.
- AR-1 please. this is BPM 130 and the note density is too small for AR9
Mine is a blanket, your current one is not a blanket.pife1 wrote:
No Dap wrote:
- 01:52:233 (2) - How about this? ??
Dont worryLizeKotze wrote:
Overall, it's an excellent map!
Sorry for not being able to mod the insane; I'm just not on that level yet.
Good Luck!