Hi, from my M4M queue. Sry for delay. was very busy
General:
~I think the volume of notes are slightly loud. Maybe decrease it by 5% or 10% if necessary.
Easy:
~00:19:464 (1,2,3,4) - Don't put them in straight lines, they are boring. Try this --> http://puu.sh/56iVW.jpg
~00:30:541 (1) - Since you've made a hook slider, use the hook to blanket the circle. http://puu.sh/56iZd.jpg
~00:31:003 (2,3,4) - Blanket properly. http://puu.sh/56j3I.jpg
~01:19:464 (4) - Make this 1.15x distance snapped to keep it symmetrical and move the slider to the left a bit. Switch off grid and distance snap for this.
~01:23:619 (3) - Doesn't really follow anything, try circle than slider.http://puu.sh/56jez.jpg
~01:24:080 (4) - NC here.
Normal:
~00:13:003 (1) - Stack on top of 00:11:157 (2) .
~00:17:618 (4) - Move this up a bit for better flow.
~00:54:080 (1) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~01:46:233 (4) - Move this down a bit for better flow.
~01:54:080 (1) - Why does this slider end in a different spot than the other diffs. End in 01:55:464 and add finish like Easy.
Hard:
~01:25:233 (3) - Delete this note since you've slowed the pace in front. Keep the rhythm consistent.
~01:25:926 - Missed a downbeat, stack a note on 01:25:463 (3,4) - and add NC.
~01:29:156 (3,4) - Move to X:276 Y:188.
~01:29:156 (3,4) - Inconsistent rhythm, as you've placed fast paced notes in front and then now you've inserted a small break that breaks the flow, pls fill in the gaps.
~01:53:733 (1) - Same problem as the prev diff.
EruJazz's Insane:
~00:07:003 (2,3,4) - This triplet doesn't flow, as the notes b4 were going in a smooth circle then suddenly there was a sharp turn. Try http://puu.sh/56kX3.jpg
~00:10:464 (2,3,4) - ^
~00:17:618 (1,2,3) - This confused me as the pattern b4 was sparse 00:16:695 (5,6,7) - therefore try keeping patterns consistent to play or it'll feel uncomfortable.
~00:18:310 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent triplet spacing. Spave the triplets like b4, dun space them in a different way.
~00:27:772 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/56l3v.jpg Sounds better and readies you for the next pattern.
~00:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove the NCs in the stream (apart from the 1st one.) to keep the pattern easy to read.
~00:36:310 (6) - DS problem.
~00:36:541 (7) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~00:40:695 (1,2,3) - Jumps dun really flow well here. Space the jumps (and 00:41:387 (1) - )to 2.5x Try this --> http://puu.sh/56wO4.jpg
~00:41:387 (1) - NC to emphasis SV change.
~00:49:464 (1,2,3,4) - Wat is this? 0.o So many overlaps..
~01:04:695 (4) - Unnecessary note delete it, doesn't follow anything.
~01:23:387 (1,2,3) - I thought they were triplets.. Pls space 1/2 beats closer.
~01:38:503 (2) - It's overlapping.
~01:39:541 (1,2,3) - Same triplet problem as beginning.
~01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dun put them in zig zags, it doesn't flow well while playing.
This diff needs to be tidied. Wat I mean is search for overlaps and try to fix them with the correct spacing or blanket.
That's all from me! Good luck!~
General:
~I think the volume of notes are slightly loud. Maybe decrease it by 5% or 10% if necessary.
Easy:
~00:19:464 (1,2,3,4) - Don't put them in straight lines, they are boring. Try this --> http://puu.sh/56iVW.jpg
~00:30:541 (1) - Since you've made a hook slider, use the hook to blanket the circle. http://puu.sh/56iZd.jpg
~00:31:003 (2,3,4) - Blanket properly. http://puu.sh/56j3I.jpg
~01:19:464 (4) - Make this 1.15x distance snapped to keep it symmetrical and move the slider to the left a bit. Switch off grid and distance snap for this.
~01:23:619 (3) - Doesn't really follow anything, try circle than slider.http://puu.sh/56jez.jpg
~01:24:080 (4) - NC here.
Normal:
~00:13:003 (1) - Stack on top of 00:11:157 (2) .
~00:17:618 (4) - Move this up a bit for better flow.
~00:54:080 (1) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~01:46:233 (4) - Move this down a bit for better flow.
~01:54:080 (1) - Why does this slider end in a different spot than the other diffs. End in 01:55:464 and add finish like Easy.
Hard:
~01:25:233 (3) - Delete this note since you've slowed the pace in front. Keep the rhythm consistent.
~01:25:926 - Missed a downbeat, stack a note on 01:25:463 (3,4) - and add NC.
~01:29:156 (3,4) - Move to X:276 Y:188.
~01:29:156 (3,4) - Inconsistent rhythm, as you've placed fast paced notes in front and then now you've inserted a small break that breaks the flow, pls fill in the gaps.
~01:53:733 (1) - Same problem as the prev diff.
EruJazz's Insane:
~00:07:003 (2,3,4) - This triplet doesn't flow, as the notes b4 were going in a smooth circle then suddenly there was a sharp turn. Try http://puu.sh/56kX3.jpg
~00:10:464 (2,3,4) - ^
~00:17:618 (1,2,3) - This confused me as the pattern b4 was sparse 00:16:695 (5,6,7) - therefore try keeping patterns consistent to play or it'll feel uncomfortable.
~00:18:310 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent triplet spacing. Spave the triplets like b4, dun space them in a different way.
~00:27:772 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/56l3v.jpg Sounds better and readies you for the next pattern.
~00:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove the NCs in the stream (apart from the 1st one.) to keep the pattern easy to read.
~00:36:310 (6) - DS problem.
~00:36:541 (7) - NC to emphasis velocity change.
~00:40:695 (1,2,3) - Jumps dun really flow well here. Space the jumps (and 00:41:387 (1) - )to 2.5x Try this --> http://puu.sh/56wO4.jpg
~00:41:387 (1) - NC to emphasis SV change.
~00:49:464 (1,2,3,4) - Wat is this? 0.o So many overlaps..
~01:04:695 (4) - Unnecessary note delete it, doesn't follow anything.
~01:23:387 (1,2,3) - I thought they were triplets.. Pls space 1/2 beats closer.
~01:38:503 (2) - It's overlapping.
~01:39:541 (1,2,3) - Same triplet problem as beginning.
~01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dun put them in zig zags, it doesn't flow well while playing.
This diff needs to be tidied. Wat I mean is search for overlaps and try to fix them with the correct spacing or blanket.
That's all from me! Good luck!~
Thank you for the mod