Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
Please enable Distance Snap and set 1.0x as its value.
00:00:310 (1,2,3) - Could make them like these ? → http://puu.sh/3LrGc.jpg
00:02:387 (4,5) - ...and like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrHa.jpg
00:02:849 (5) - NC
00:05:156 (1) - remove NC
00:04:233 (2,1,2) - could make them like these? → http://puu.sh/3LrRA.jpg
00:05:618 (1,2) - ...and these ones like → http://puu.sh/3LrVN.jpg ← ?
00:08:387 (4) - NC
00:09:772 (4) - Could make it like this → http://puu.sh/3Ls0d.jpg ← ?
00:12:080 (4) - NC
00:15:310 (7) - NC
00:17:618 (4,1) - JUMP! Unrankable on Normal/Easy diffs. Tip: remove the jump making them like → http://puu.sh/3LsbE.jpg → and making 00:19:464 (2) - like → http://puu.sh/3Lsec.jpg
00:20:849 (4,5,6) - IRREGULAR spacing (peppyspacing?). Try avoid this on Normal/Easy diffs. They feel better like → http://puu.sh/3Lskl.jpg
00:22:695 (1) - NC
00:22:695 (1,2) - JUMP! Fix this by making 00:22:695 (1,2,3) like http://puu.sh/3Lsu7.jpg
00:25:003 (4,5,6) - Make them like http://puu.sh/3Lsxy.jpg --- and 00:26:387 (1) - make it like http://puu.sh/3LsyI.jpg -- to avoid a JUMP here too.
00:31:464 (1) - move to x:112 y:64 and 00:32:387 (2) - to x:168 y:152
00:33:310 (3) - move to x:360 y:96 and 00:33:772 (4) - to x:432 y:160
00:34:695 (5,6) - Change these two notes into a slider from (5)'s place to (6)'s place on timeline and screen.
00:37:464 (2) - Why not snap it on next white tick ( at 00:37:296 ) and add a 1/1 slider at 00:37:003 ? Like http://puu.sh/3LsLY.jpg ?
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:38:849 (2) - Move to x:280 y:160.
00:39:310 (3) - Move to x:184 y:120
00:39:772 - add note at x:280 y:160 and add NC to it.
00:41:618 (3) - NC
00:43:003 (1) - remove NC
00:43:464 (5) - NC
00:43:003 (4,1,2) - IRREGULAR spacing with variable JUMPs >< Please try avoid them at Normal/Easy diffs.
01:05:156 (2,3) - JUMP!
01:09:310 (2,3) - Little jump/spacing error.
01:15:772 (6) - Too far from prior note!
01:16:695 (7) - ^
01:18:080 (2) - ^
01:18:080 (2,3,4) - This feels and fits well on Insane, not on Normal/Easy diffs.
01:24:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Irregular spacing.

[Hard]
00:22:464 (9) - Remove note for better flow and rhythm.
00:22:695 (9) - NC
00:23:272 (2) - Move to 00:23:157 and add a repeat.
00:27:771 (5) - Better if remove this note and add a repeat on 00:27:195 (4) .

[Insane]
00:02:849 (8) - NC
00:03:541 (1) - remove NC
00:09:772 (1) - ^
00:10:233 (10) - NC
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read >_< try arranging them in a more readable way (can be stacking some notes)
01:19:926 (6) - Feels better and pretty if stacked with 01:19:003 (4)

Aaaand that's it ^^

Well, this is just the beginning (: Wishing good work on further days and good luck for getting more mods (Many people makes so many restrictions >< as if they were afraid of request spamming on their queues ><).
If no queue seems open or no one feels saying 'welcome' to your modding requests, try #modreqs and, lately, making M4M* (mod for mod) with jonathanlfj / pimpG / someone else.

Att.

* M4M is when you mod someone's map and then he/she mods the yours.

And of course, good luck on Ranking the map! Nice song too.

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod solicitado en Cloud's modding queue :3/

Te voy a ayudar y dar consejos para que mejores este mapa =w=b osu! needs more spanish mappers~

General

Tienes que mappear al menos el 80% de la canción para que sea rankeable
Coloca un preview point en algún lugar como el coro para escuchar la 'pre' de la canción. timing>set current position as preview point.
Hay algunas notas e inherits points no snappeadas
Hay algunas inconsistencias de source en Normal diff
Trata de mantener una misma duración para todos los kiai de todas las diffs, no es obligación pero sería mejor.

Sólo daré sugerencias de spacing, estética, hitsounds y New combos.

EruJazz's Insane

1. Cambia el nombre de la diff a EruJazz' Insane, cuando una palabra en inglés termina con Z o S no se debe agregar apostrofe S ya que sonaría rebundante, simplemente agrega el ' al final de nombre.
2. Otra sugerencia, trata de usar una distancia constante para todas las notas, pero eso no significa que no puedas hacer una variación de ella pero obviamente tiene que ser lógica y legible.
3. AR+1 OD-1
4. 00:01:464 (5) - New combo
5. 00:02:387 (1) - ^
6. 00:03:541 (4) - ^
7. 00:03:541 (1,2) - remove whistle
8. 00:04:003 - agrega una nota acá.
9. 00:05:156 (1) - new combo
10. 00:05:156 (1) - whistle
11. 00:05:387 (2) - Suena raro para mi, sonaría mejor como circle.
12. 00:05:849 (3,4) - remueve los whistles
13. 00:07:003 (1) - sonaría mejor con whistle, ¿crees tú?
14. 00:08:849 (1) - new combo
15. 00:11:849 (1) - new combo
16. 00:15:772 (1) - No hagas sliders con tantos ticks, la belleza de los sliders es muy importante! con pocos ticks (3 como sugerencia) podrías hacer un slider limpio. Se utiliza más que nada más de 3 ticks para hacer sliders con forma ya más distinta. te sugiero que hagas algo así:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Te recomiendo que uses este concepto para todos los sliders que hagas ahora en el futuro. o3o Ejemplos: 00:16:695 (5) - y 00:17:618 (1) -
17. 00:17:041 (6) - arregla la distancia entre (6) y (5), la distancia de (6) debería ser igual a la de (4) y (3)
18. 00:17:618 (1,2) - ^
19. 00:18:772 (1) - new combo
20. 00:20:849 (1) - ^
21. 00:20:387 (2) - whistle
22. 00:21:426 (2,3,4,5) - la distancia de estas notas es mucho para un stream, reducelo por favor.
23. 00:22:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
24. 00:24:080 (1) - new combo
25. 00:24:541 (2) - remueve new combo
26. 00:25:233 (5) - new combo
27. 00:25:233 (5) - no es necesario utilizar normal sampleset aquí, agrega whistles en cada círculo, es decir, en el inicio, en el reverse y en el final.
28. 00:26:617 (1) - new combo
29. 00:30:541 (1) - ^
30. 00:33:541 (1) - new combo
31. 00:33:310 - agrega una nota y si es así, agrégale new combo.
32. 00:33:541 (2) - remueve new combo si hiciste el punto anterior.
33. 00:34:464 (3) - arregla la distancia de esta nota.
34. 00:38:387 (1) - NC?
35. 00:40:695 (1) - NC
36. 00:40:926 (1) - Remov NC
37. 00:42:772 (1) - NC
38. 00:41:387 (4) - embellece este slider, por favor ;w;
39. 00:45:080 (2) - ^
40. 00:58:233 (9) - cambia esta nota a otra posición, de ve feo que esté tocando al slider
41. 01:14:618 (1) - new combo, ya que cambia el ritmo de la canción
42. 01:18:080 (1) - NC
43. 01:19:926 (1) - NC
    eso es todo por ahora.

Normal

1. El AR promedio y muy acertado es AR5 para una normal, AR7 es muy rápido para un iniciante. OD3 y HP3
   Utiliza siempre una distance snap constante, los cambios bruscos de distance suelen ser complejos de leer para un iniciante, a demás que son recomendados para diffs como hard e insanes.

Creo que con esto es suficiente por ahora, voy a seguir moddeando luego pero esta vez será un IR C mod para que podamos conversar y mejorar el mapset completo. esto va para todos los integrantes de este proyecto. Okay? pife1, ErunamoJAZZ y MuseCaliope? :3 cuando quieran me hablan por in-game pero 1 a la vez. Mucha suerte y espero a que sigas buscando mod. Si necesitas ayuda, consejos etc etc solo pm in-game =w=!

snlrocks wrote:

[General]
Set your preview point.the preview point is the sample of what a person hear when they hover pf your song in the beatmap selection menu.
you usually set them at the beginning of a chorus.
To set one:
Go to timing on the upper part of the editor
The last option is set current position at preview point

check your sources in all of your map's including guest map's
the sources should be the same in each

[normal]
00:18:772 (5) - NC
00:24:541 (5) - ^
01:14:849 (5) - ^

[hard]
00:03:310 (4) - NC
00:04:233 (1) - remove NC
00:05:157 (2) - NC
00:06:887 (1) - remove NC
00:08:386 (3) - NC
00:10:579 (7) - ^
00:10:925 (1) - remove NC
00:15:080 (1) - this slider sounds off, extend the end of this slider so that it reaches ends 00:15:772 - .(its only a very small amount but the slider wont sound off if you do it)
00:17:272 (5) - this slider also sounds off. change the beat snap divisor to 1/6 and move the slider to the very next red notch, then change the divisor back to 1/4
00:20:849 (4) - sounds off again, this time, make it a timy bit shorter to that it ends at 00:21:080 -
00:33:772 (7) - NC
00:35:848 (1) - remove NC
00:37:233 (2) - NC
00:39:310 (7) - ^
01:03:195 (6) - ^
01:04:118 (1) - remove NC
01:05:617 (4) - NC
01:16:694 (6) - ^
01:18:079 (1) - remove nc
01:19:002 (2) - slider sounds off. extend the end by a little bit so it ends here 01:19:464 -
01:19:926 (3) - NC
01:21:772 (1) - sounds off, decrease the end so it ends here 01:22:464 -
01:22:695 - add a regular hit circle at x:240 y:268
01:24:541 (5) - NC
01:29:618 (5) - slider sounds off by a little bit, extend the end so it ends at 01:30:541 -


[erujazz's insane]
00:02:849 (1) - remove nc
00:03:310 (2) - NC
00:05:156 (7) - ^
00:08:849 (7) - ^
00:10:233 (1) - remove nc
00:10:464 (2) - nc
00:11:618 (6) - ^
00:18:772 (6) - ^
00:21:426 (4) - ^
00:24:541 (9) - ^
00:25:233 (1) - remove nc
00:26:617 (3) - nc
00:30:541 (4) - ^
00:38:849 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - ^
00:44:850 (1) - remove nc
00:46:464 (3) - nc
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (10) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:14:618 (7) - ^
01:20:156 (7) - ^
01:25:233 (5) - ^

[muse's insane]
00:22:464 (7) - nc
00:26:156 (10) - ^
00:26:618 (1) - ^
00:26:849 (3) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:33:541 (7) - ^
00:37:233 (1) - ^
00:37:695 (4) - ^
00:40:926 (4) - ^
00:41:387 (7) - ^
00:52:926 (7) - ^
00:53:387 (10) - ^
01:04:003 (9) - ^
01:04:464 (12) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:13:003 (3) - ^
01:14:156 (5) - ^
01:14:618 (8) - ^
01:14:849 (10) - ^
01:20:156 (4) - ^
01:27:080 (3) - ^
01:27:541 (6) - ^
01:30:772 (5) - ^
01:31:233 (8) - ^






HOLY CRAPPP IM FINALLY DONEEEEEE!!! i sat here for 1 hour and 30 mins doing this mod.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE BRIGHTNESS OF MY COMPUTERZZZ!!!!

snlrocks wrote:

[erujazz's insane]
00:02:849 (1) - remove nc
00:03:310 (2) - NC
00:05:156 (7) - ^
00:08:849 (7) - ^
00:10:233 (1) - remove nc
00:10:464 (2) - nc
00:11:618 (6) - ^
00:18:772 (6) - ^
00:21:426 (4) - ^
00:24:541 (9) - ^
00:25:233 (1) - remove nc
00:26:617 (3) - nc
00:30:541 (4) - ^
00:38:849 (7) - ^
00:43:233 (5) - ^
00:44:850 (1) - remove nc
00:46:464 (3) - nc
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (10) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:12:772 (1) - ^
01:14:618 (7) - ^
01:20:156 (7) - ^
01:25:233 (5) - ^

HOLY CRAPPP IM FINALLY DONEEEEEE!!! i sat here for 1 hour and 30 mins doing this mod.
MY EYES BURN FROM THE BRIGHTNESS OF MY COMPUTERZZZ!!!!
hahaha, very thx for you time ^^

Hinsvar wrote:

Randomly stumbled around this map.
....

In EruJazz's diff, you (Eru) badly overmapped at 00:10:464 (1) and 00:10:810, so avoid mapping these spots... And just saying, 00:34:233 | 00:34:695 and 00:35:157 are supposed to be mapped because the instruments are loud enough that they can make the players feel awkward while playing the diff if the sounds are unmapped. ...well ... I really do not change. My reason: well as is, be more fun and not feel bad.

Oh, and 00:35:618 should be mapped by placing a circle or the repeat of a slider there; a slider tick just won't cut it... I really do not understand what would be wrong there :/

One minor thing (still in Eru's diff until I say otherwise): Add a clap at 00:40:926 (2) to follow the instrument. added claps

01:07:003 (2,3,4) - This kind of pattern should be avoided even in an Insane diff, as this just serves as a badly-done trap that is generally disliked by players. I know, however, this song is slow so do not think that this pattern surprise the players.

At 01:45:541 (4,5,6), nothing can be heard from the song on the blue ticks, so you should only add circles or sliders at 01:45:541, 01:45:772, and 01:46:003... You're right. I did something about it.

Sometimes overmapping is okay, but only when it doesn't make the player feel awkward while going through it. Just saying. yep ^_^

And for 01:37:695 (2)... it's not recommended for a slider to be made this curved, as it looks weird. Make it less curved ofc.hehe, Okay.


------

Looking at Muse's Insane... Why this diff doesn't show any background? It should have one, you know. <--LOL, good question, idk xD
.....

Okay, that's it. Sorry if I sounded harsh; never meant to lol

That's my words; good luck on the way (:

Hinsvar wrote:

Randomly stumbled around this map.

The spacing between all objects in a Normal (and easier) diff must be the same; else the diff's gonna be unrankable. And yes, even if the 00:04:233 (2,3,4) pattern in Normal does fit the song, it's not allowed here. It's okay in a Hard (or harder) diff, but not in a Normal (or easier) diff, and even then, it will be really confusing to players. I recommend to use 1.0x distance spacing here.

Also, it seems like pife tends to place New Combos randomly. Place them consistently every one or two stanzas at the beginning of one.

Please avoid overlaps like 00:56:849 (5,6,7), as it looks really messy and can be confusing to players.

Ah, and the correct (or probably better, anyway) kiai times are 00:47:157 - 00:54:080, 00:54:541 - 01:00:080, 01:09:310 - 01:12:541, 01:13:003 - 01:16:695, and 01:33:310 - 01:47:618. You're supposed to start and end them exactly at spots where the music begins to go stronger compared to the rest of the song.

Oh, in Hard, 00:28:695 (6) is supposed to be snapped at 1/3, from 00:28:695 - 00:30:387 (look at EruJazz's diff). Same case with 00:13:926 (3). And again, avoid overlaps like 00:33:080 (6,2) and 00:57:771 (5,6,7); they look really bad.

Plus, why 01:23:617 (4,1) in Hard looks really weird... Just end 01:23:617 (4) exactly at 01:24:080 and 01:24:541 (1) at 01:25:003. You should map 00:32:849 too, since the instrument here really "demands" to be mapped.

Nah, and the overall design here in Hard feels really messed up too. It feels like all the circles and sliders are randomly placed...

More stuff to say: You seem to overuse claps at times. For example, you used lots of claps at 01:08:848 (1,2,3,4,5) (in Hard again). Remove all the claps and add whistles to (2), (4), and (5)?

In EruJazz's diff, you (Eru) badly overmapped at 00:10:464 (1) and 00:10:810, so avoid mapping these spots... And just saying, 00:34:233 | 00:34:695 and 00:35:157 are supposed to be mapped because the instruments are loud enough that they can make the players feel awkward while playing the diff if the sounds are unmapped. Oh, and 00:35:618 should be mapped by placing a circle or the repeat of a slider there; a slider tick just won't cut it...

One minor thing (still in Eru's diff until I say otherwise): Add a clap at 00:40:926 (2) to follow the instrument.

01:07:003 (2,3,4) - This kind of pattern should be avoided even in an Insane diff, as this just serves as a badly-done trap that is generally disliked by players.

At 01:45:541 (4,5,6), nothing can be heard from the song on the blue ticks, so you should only add circles or sliders at 01:45:541, 01:45:772, and 01:46:003...

Sometimes overmapping is okay, but only when it doesn't make the player feel awkward while going through it. Just saying.

And for 01:37:695 (2)... it's not recommended for a slider to be made this curved, as it looks weird. Make it less curved ofc.

Looking at Muse's Insane... Why this diff doesn't show any background? It should have one, you know.

Most of the notes look randomly placed and touch each other, which makes the overall map looks aesthetically bad.

The combo pattern is really, really inconsistent. You should really only place an NC every one or two stanzas, at the beginning of one (like what I've said for pife's Normal diff).

Also, you seem to only place NCs at the beginning of a new pattern, which is completely wrong; you can only use NCs at the beginning of patterns sparingly, otherwise the usage should always follow how the stanza goes.

One more: You used too much straight sliders. Try using more curved sliders. And patterns like 01:02:156 (3,4) are really unfitting with the song, so please avoid this.

Overall, for the entire map: The design is still really messy, hitsound is still somewhat random, rhythm is kinda weird at places, the combo pattern is really inconsistent...

Okay, I'll assume that all of you are newcomers to the world of mapping, so I'll tolerate all these things; you guys actually seem to have some talent in this, you just need to learn more about what should and should not be done while making a map.

I really recommend to remap the entire map from scratch, and keep in mind of what have I said. Try to look at other well-made maps too (those that look good in terms of design, rhythm, and hitsound placement); they'll really help you in deciding what are you supposed to do.

Also, for the Insane mappers, 1.4-1.5 SV at this BPM is really slow... I recommend 1.8-2.0 SV. Anything might work for an Insane diff, but try to use any value in the range of 1.8-2.0 for the slider velocity.

Okay, that's it. Sorry if I sounded harsh; never meant to lol

And sorry if the entire content of this post looks really unorganized; I thought I'm just going to say a few general advices, but it turns out I have to say a lot more than that.

That's my words; good luck on the way (:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

ello! Le random mod!

Hmm, I'll try to keep my suggestions general-wise

[General]

1. Kai time at 01:01:464? Hmm, I think it would look more appealing if it started at 01:01:926
2. Kai time at 01:44:387 looks better starting at 01:48:080.
3. Remove Kai time at 01:09:310, 01:13:003, 01:33:310 now your just over-using it at the wrong times

[Easy]
00:04:695 (5) - New combo
00:07:926 (1) - I believe it should start at 00:08:387 instead, if your going to use that finish hit sound on the head. But before moving this, I suggest shifting 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4,5) all together.
00:13:003 (6) - Remove this, and try placing a try hit circle at 00:13:926 with a finish.
How it should look:
-Ignore the green hit circle on the left, I messed up on the screenshot a bit :S
00:15:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Shift all these notes one white tick to the right, so that the first slider starts at 00:15:772 now. notes would usually start on the tall white tickmark after a pause, to indicate a new rhythm.
00:19:926 (5) - NC
00:26:849 (6) - ^
00:31:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Shift these to the right, so that first green slider starts at 00:30:541.
(you may have to re-position it as well, so its in a respectable distance with the previous slider)
00:37:926 (3) - NC
00:50:849 (5) - ^
00:56:849 (4) - ^
01:04:233 (4) - ^
01:01:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move these to the right, first object starting at 01:01:926.
01:11:619 (5) - NC
01:20:387 (5) - ^
01:24:541 (8) - ^
01:30:541 (4) - ^
01:36:541 (4) - ^
01:42:541 (4) - ^
01:45:772 - 01:48:080 Spinner would fit here, but that's just imo.

Overall, I'd say this diff does look good! It's flow is really well made, and your objects look great!
However, you may need to re-check on several of your objects timing in this diff. As I've noted above, many objects are being placed either too early or a bit late from the actual beats.
And combos are jsut a bit too long :S

[Normal]
00:05:157 (5) - NC
00:10:695 (5) - ^
00:26:387 (6) - ^
00:33:310 (5) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:156 (2) - ^ First object at kai must always be a New Combo
00:49:464 (6) - ^
00:57:310 (5) - ^
01:11:156 (5) - ^
01:12:541 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:003 (4) - NC
01:36:541 (6) - ^
01:44:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (5) - ^

This one looks nice! Just that same small combo errors

[Hard]
00:17:041 (5) - NC
00:20:849 (6) - ^
00:28:695 (6) - ^
00:34:233 (6) - ^
00:39:310 (5) - ^
00:47:848 (6) - ^
00:57:771 (5) - ^

Another pretty well-made dif! Not much to suggest about here!

[EruJazz's insane]

1. Same velocity as Hard? Why not kick it up a notch to 1.80? The Bpm's pretty low, so it doesn't really make this diff look well...Insane at all! o.o
2. The distance between the objects are also another reason why this diff doesn't look Insane as well

00:21:426 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:156 (1) - ^
00:30:080 (1) - ^
00:42:772 (5) - NC
00:45:080 (2) - Just keep this slider as a simple curve, like this:

00:49:464 (5) - NC
00:50:618 (8) - Bad overlap
00:52:926 (5) - NC
00:56:387 (5) - ^
00:58:695 (6) - ^
01:03:195 (5) - ^
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:29:387 (4) - ^
01:49:926 (4,5,6) - Weird overlap

I've just listed some common issues but really I think this diff needs a lot of work The objects appearing on this map seems really scattered, there's no real path made, flow or anything.

[Muse's Insane]

1. Same suggestions as the previous Insane. Slider velocity and distance increase, would make this map look more fitting for Insane.

00:06:541 (5) - NC
00:18:310 (6) - ^
00:19:233 (10) - Remove clap.
00:24:541 (6) - NC
00:37:464 (5) - Add clap
00:43:695 (5) - NC
00:57:310 (5,6) - Bad overlap
01:03:310 (6) - NC
01:22:003 (5) - ^
01:25:695 (7) - ^
01:33:310 (7) - ^
01:36:080 - ^
01:43:003 (8) - ^

Though this map also needs some improvement, imo this diff looks more suitable for Insane

Also I've just taken note of something about your map for the last 2 diffs: The sound pattern.

Does you map actually have a sound pattern, or are hitsounds just randomly placed wherever feels right?
DUN DUN DUN~!

Well, until then, I hope this helps~!

340,292,4233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,4695,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,124,5157,6,0,P|332:78|314:32,2,100.000000596046
220,96,6541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,152,7003,2,0,P|124:208|156:256,1,100.000000596046,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,7926,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,8387,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,292,8849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,9310,1,0,1:0:0:0:

captin1 wrote:

Hey~ m4m from my queue

Add 1 second of Audio Lead-in (Song Setup>Audio) so that the first note comes in two seconds after the time starts, which is what's required for rank

[Easy]
Keep slider velocity all the same! It helps immensely with patterning, and the difference at this low of an SV will not be noticed at all. Not to mention it's unrankable
I would recommend using tiny grid snap, so that you can perfect your patterning.

00:21:310 (1,3) - These two notes aren't perfectly symmetrical around (2). The best way to fix this is to copy (1), rotate it 180 (ctrl + . twice) and then ctrl + g. This way, the two sliders will be exactly the same.
00:25:003 (5,6,1) - The increased spacing here is a big no-no. Keep it all at 1.0
00:26:849 (1,3) - Overlapping is very highly discouraged in Easy difficulties. I would fix the spacing pointed out here^ and then remake this long slider so that it fits within the boundaries and spacing without overlap
00:31:003 (2,3,4) - These should be arranged like something similar to this so that they are much more symmetrical and keep good spacing

SPOILER

00:37:003 (3,1) - minor spacing issue
00:44:849 (4) - x:208 y:260 for spacing
00:49:464 (4,1) - minor spacing issue
01:07:926 (7,1,2) - The placement here could definitely improve, with a messy overlap and poor spacing.

From this point on, the varying slider speeds are a pretty large issue in my opinion. Please change these all to 1.0 and adjust the sliders and spacing accordingly, and then continue to find mods to improve patterning. (although, you can do a lot of what I suggested on your own with simply a critical look at your own map)

[Normal]
Again, changing slider speeds are stunting this map's improvement. Please keep them consistent

00:02:849 (5) - Rotate this clockwise 21 degrees (select and hit shift+ctrl+r) and then move to x:436 y:52, for clean spacing
00:04:233 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Ok, I moved a lot of things around in this section. Here's the code for it, I think this is much cleaner.

SPOILER

340,292,4233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,4695,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,124,5157,6,0,P|332:78|314:32,2,100.000000596046
220,96,6541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,152,7003,2,0,P|124:208|156:256,1,100.000000596046,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,7926,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,8387,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,292,8849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,9310,1,0,1:0:0:0:

00:31:003 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap, moving (1) upwards would fix this easily
00:33:310 (1,3) - wouldn't recommend overlap, however if this stays then stack these two exactly, so that it looks better
From 00:47:157 - to 00:54:541 - it would be easiest on you to find one slider that looks really good ( I would recommend 00:52:695 (2) - ), copy it, and use that same slider for all of these, since they're the same general shape. Some are going in different directions, which is easily fixed with ctrl + . and ctrl + g
01:02:387 (3,4,5) - Tidy this up a bit, I would use the (5) slider for (4) (removing the repeat, of course), plus the spacing gets odd.
01:09:310 (2,1) - Nazi overlap easy fix with grid snap
01:35:157 (4,5) - minor spacing issue
01:36:541 (1,2) - same as^

[Hard]
Replay
The flow feels fine for the most part. Some spacings could use some work though.

00:02:157 (2,3,4,5) - It wouldn't be a stretch to turn these into a perfect square.
00:04:926 (5,6,7) - spacing
00:04:003 (3,4,1) - Move all three of these to x:256, y:88 so that they stack
00:07:926 (6) - x:484 y:180 for good, clear spacing
00:08:387 (1,5) - stack these
00:13:926 (7) - This repeating slider should be in 1/3 time, not 1/4
00:28:695 (8) - same as ^
00:36:080 (4,1,2) - The blanket pattern here could use some touching up. I would use the (2) slider for both, since it looks nicer
00:44:964 (1) - VERY much against this spinner, it comes in far too fast and doesn't last long enough. I would just use a longer slider to get the same effect
00:47:387 (4,5,2,3) - While these jumps do make sense with the music, the idea is continued on for the rest of the musical phrase. Keep the idea consistent, either lower these jumps or add jumps at places like 00:49:233 (1,2) - and 00:54:771 (2,3) -
01:02:848 (5,1,2,3) - I would recommend this rhythm, so that the notes on blue ticks are at the ends of sliders

SPOILER

01:06:540 (3) - x:204 y:152 for a perfect triangle
01:09:310 (3,4,5) - I like the pattern here, however move (3) to x:256 y:140, (4) to x:324 y:72, and (5) to x:372 y:148 for perfect symmetry
01:10:463 (7,1,2,3) - Not a fan of the clap spam here, remove a couple
01:41:387 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - With the way that this circles back in on itself, it looks very confusing and doesn't play well. I can't think of a good solution other than redoing these with that in mind.

My brain is fried D: I'm sorry, don't have it in me to do the last two. Here's the replays I made for both of them though
Working on the last two now! just needed a break

[EruJazz's Insane]
Replay
There's a lot of awkward breaks in the mapping that I feel disrupt the flow quite a bit. Some hard to distinguish spacing and odd beats make it unintuitive to read at points

00:05:156 (1,2) - I don't think this jump is placed well, it might be best to not have one here at all
00:11:156 (4) - This note is very hidden by (1,2) before it, I would suggest moving it farther away
00:13:695 - I would put one more 1/2 slider here and start the spinner at 00:14:041 - instead
00:19:349 (4) - (nazi) grid space left
00:26:157 - I hear two claps here that I think should be mapped
00:27:195 (4) - End this on the red tick and then add another note where it ended before, to fit the rhythm better
00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Woah! This 1/3 stream comes out of nowhere, especially since the spacing isn't drastic enough to warn the player. Increase this much more, I'd say 1.2 perhaps?
00:39:541 (5) - I'm not a fan of repeats with a higher number, since they usually feel very odd unless they're in a 1/4 stream. I think you should reduce this by one and then add a note in place of that last repeat
00:49:464 (5,6,7,8) - Bit of a messy overlap, I think moving (7,8) down and to the left would work well
01:00:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is 1/3, and yet you mapped over it with 1/4 D:
01:02:849 (4,1) - I would turn this into one slider, so (1) isn't on a blue tick
01:07:464 - Map this part as well! it feels very empty with those notes ignored
01:15:541 (5) - Again, repeating sliders with a rhythm this slow just feel odd to me. I think you could even just do 5 circles here, to go with the intensifying bass notes
01:38:272 (1,2) - I know this goes with the guitar, but man does it feel strange. Perhaps this could work?

SPOILER

01:50:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - again, the 1/3 here just isn't apparent enough, so some higher spacing is in order

[Muse's Insane]
Replay
Actually pretty nice, the symmetrical patterning works for this kind of song, and most of the spacing is pretty apparent. I'm not a fan of the huge sv slowdown near the beginnning, but other than that good job

I could sit here and nazi your patterns all day, but it wouldn't provide you with anything constructive. That's something you can easily do on your own with grid snap and using the coordinates in the top right corner to help figure out (calculator!) where each note should be to keep it symmetrical. If you would like some help on how I approach symmetry like this feel free to ask me in game, and I'll point out a few things if I'm not busy. Remember, the slightly bolded white lines in the grid are the center axes. Those are what you work off of

00:12:080 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't recommend these notes being hidden underneath the slider before them, I would try and find another pattern here to avoid that
00:14:157 (1) - This spinner is unrankable. It's too short. Please remove it
00:30:541 - As I stated earlier, I don't like how slow this part gets, especially since you keep using higher spacing. I understand that it would be a lot of work at this point to increase it, however I think that would be for the best. It can still be slow, say 0.8, it's just too low to be comfortable right now.
00:54:541 (1,2,3,4) - Make sure that the slider you copy paste from is level before you do!
01:07:580 (6) - These notes here are 1/3, not 1/4. Adjust your repeating slider accordingly, you can get to 1/3 with the Beat Snap Divisor bar in the upper right.

Keep working at it! It's a pretty cute song. Good luck!

Momochikun wrote:

Hello ~
Sorry for late T-T.. then,
As requested~

[General]

1. Remove BGM from tags ? i seen no ranked map with this tag lol..
2. Add audio lead just like the modders above said^

[Muse Insane]

1. Use HP+1, since the minimal difficullty for Insane diff is 7, it'll be more better if you add +1 on OD or AR
2. Also the placement on this diff looks too random. Even is this a instrumental sound, it's not necessary to do this. Don't know it's your mapping style or what.. but i seen many nazi things in this diff, pointing them all will be very difficult, so i'll just said anything that catch my attention
3. 00:01:003 (4) - NC here.. because the instrument is started here and ofc the long white tick that's called downbeat is also start from here
4. 00:04:695 (5) - Use 1 grid down to be linear with (3) so it'll make a better pattern, don't forget to replace (4) too
5. 00:07:695 (5) - I think the slider is better to start here 00:07:464 to follow the music
6. 00:11:156 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:11:387 (5,2) - The note is behind the slidertrack, recommend to rearrange this pattern. though +AR will be more make it readable. But rearrange pattern is more recommended
8. 00:14:157 (1) - A short time spinner here is really unpredictable, the auto is only got 1000 point bonus though. IMO this is too suddenly and can make players got 100 or worst it'll break their combo
9. 00:15:772 (3) - Add finish on the start of the slider, also would you add NC ? the new phase of the song is started here. if you want to keep consistency or what.. just let it xD
10. 00:26:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Clap missing here ? add it please..
11. 00:27:080 (4,8) - Really bad flow for me the next note is behind the slider end and this placement looks so bad.. suggest Ctrl + G will make it smoothier and better flow..
12. 00:47:157 - Kiai start here. don't forget to add NC
13. 00:50:157 (4,1) - Stack is better.. the overlap looks really bad for me. Since the (1) note is allready visible before the (4) dissapeared.
14. 00:55:464 (3,4) - Make them same symmetrical like (1) and (2) ? i think this pattern is wrong. and the slider looks fail
15. 01:02:387 - Kiai reset start here.. NC is better too

Many jumps after this.. orz. Sorry to say, but it will really need more practice

[Eru Jazz Insane]

1. The NC pattern on this diff is really unpredictable, try make it consistent please.The rhytm is not really consistent too, it'll be better if you dont use triplet when the music doesn't ask you to do it. It'll sound overmapped for me.
2. 00:13:233 (4,5) - Remove whistle from the slider body, it sounds really awkward. Just add it on the start and the end
3. 00:15:772 (1,3) - 2 grid down on (1) so they not overlapped, not really recommended for this >.<
4. 00:19:926 (1) - Why NC ? this is not unnecessary after all.. Better delete it
5. 00:22:926 (6) - Remove the reverse and add more 1/2 slider will make a better rhytm, Try it ~
6. 00:27:195 (5) - Remove whistle from slider body, same as before
7. 00:28:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Unsnapped stream.. what is this ? do you use 1/3 or what.. -_-
8. 00:36:310 (1,2) - What's with this ? really bad and it's not even make a sense.. it's really recommended to make a normal SV, but if you really don;t want to do it, just do what i told below
9. 00:37:233 (3) - NC for changed SV..
10. 00:40:926 (2) - ^

[Hard]

1. The normal hitsounds you used here seems doesn't fit, at least soft clap will fit it better, though it'll be good if you used another custom clap that fit this song
2. 00:01:695 (5,1) - Bad jump.. break the flow, Better use spacing at 5 to make jump or just fix to a normal spacing
3. 00:13:464 (6,7) - Overlapped.. orz, 1 - 2 grid up at (7)
4. 00:28:695 (8) - Silent hit ?.. unrakable lol
5. 00:47:157 - Finish on the slider end for chorus
6. 00:47:157 - Kiai start here. don't forget to add NC
7. 01:02:387 - Kiai reset start here.. NC is better too

Really.. it's need more that i got but i don't said it. Rather than a huge of detailed mod, sorry, but i recommend you to remapp this T-T

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue

EASY

00:02:849 (3) - why don't copy/paste the previous slider and make this pattern perfectly symmetric? just if you want, it's ok also as it is
00:04:233 (4,1) - make them exactly at the same high
00:28:695 (5) - it's just a suggestion but maybe it's better don't leave this stright form for this slider, maybe you can try to make the first part stight and the final part curve, and then a blancket with the next note, like this:

SPOILER

00:58:695 (1) - I think is better to move in in a way to make it stacked with 00:56:387 (3) -
01:08:387 (1,2) - make a better blancket
01:33:310 (1,2) - can you place them exactly on the y axe XD just to be precise

NORMAL

00:06:541 (2) - move it to make a blancket with 00:05:157 (1) -
00:58:695 (2) - stack it with 00:56:849 (4) - ?
01:03:772 (5) - delete this and copy/paste the form of the previous one, then ctrl+H and ctrl+G
01:07:464 (6) - maybe move it one grid down and one right, so that together with 01:06:080 (3,4,5) - will make a better form
01:08:387 (1) - and maybe it's better if you keep the distance for this slider
01:26:849 (6,2) - stack them?
01:49:003 (3) - move 1 grid right, so the pattern will be the same as 01:49:926 (4,5) -
01:54:080 (1) - for this spinner maybe it's better if you add a green line to decrease the volume of the hitsound since at the end the volume of the song also decrease. in this way there'll not be too much difference between the song and the hitsounds volumes

HARD

00:01:002 (4,5) - stack them perfectly, maybe deselect grid snapping
00:02:848 (5,2) - stack them
00:04:003 (3,1) - ^
00:13:926 (7) - change this slider inclination in a way that it won't touch 00:13:464 (6) -
00:30:541 (1,2) - stack perfectly
00:33:310 (5,1) - ^
00:36:080 (4,1) - make a better blancket
00:43:926 (3) - you can do 2 things here: or you copy/paste the previous slider and then flip it vertically. or you try to make this more symmetric with the previous one, maybe moving it 1 or 2 grids left imo
00:53:157 (6) - I think also in this case you should be more carefull of the pattern and placement. if you delete this, and then copy/paste the previous slider and then flip it orizontally, than you'll have something like this:

SPOILER

00:09:541 (4,8,1) - stack them better

well some things I would say about your map is that maybe you can try to be more carefull to patternss and notes placement. I gave you some examples of how to improve it so you can try something in base of them if you want. another thing that I noticed is that in hard diff there are quite always short sliders. try instead to change some times and make some longer sliders when the music permit it. in this way the map will have more different patterns and will be also funnyer to play

MUSE'S INSANE

00:13:233 (6) - maybe you can try to make it more symmetric to all these other notes. maybe try to disable grid snapping and place it in a better way
00:23:849 (3,4) - I think here, or you stack them with the previous notes as you did here 00:22:926 (1,5) - . or you move 00:24:310 (5) - one grid down.
00:37:233 (3,4,5) - also here you can try to make a better blancket with the previous slider, or using grid level 4, or disabling grid snapping
00:38:849 (3,1,2) - stack them perfectly
00:44:618 (5,6,7) - place it at the center of the square

that's all. good luck with this map

yachiru4 wrote:

Hi from my queue!


Pretty nice, but there was a screwed up DS somewhere in the song...I can't seem to remember where.

Didn't pass both Insane modes, but I enjoyed playing Muse's Insane more, since it's flow looked better. btw you can only have 1 Insane diff in a mapset.

Cheers!

baldrace wrote:

Hi~Hi~ from my queue
reply to m4m req >.</~~~~~~~~~~~~~

General
you need more working in your map.
you need better blanket and perfect Symmetric
when you make a blanket,turn off grid snap
you need change all illogical spacing
try to use NC more regularly
hitsound is a bit randomly placed..
I'm sure many modders before had told you about these things.

Easy
00:01:003 (1,2,3) - make them perfectly Symmetric

SPOILER

00:21:310 (1) - distance
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - make this blanket perfect
00:49:003 (3) - distance
01:35:157 (3) - ^
after this object,you have no reason to change the spacing snap.use x1.0 plz
spacing is a mess,don't change spacing snap.check all your objects.

Normal
same problems as easy.check spacing
00:55:926 (3,4,1) - you should make blanket like this perfect
00:59:157 (3,1,2) - this is ugly...try another pattern may be better
01:02:849 (4,5) -they should have same shape,you can use ctrl c and ctrl v

Hard
remember that even in hard or insane,you need to use logical spacing to make diff tidy and playable
00:46:925 (3) - the sv changed after this.. bgm don't have a big change,so I suggest you not to change sv

I personally don't like so……symmetric insane diffs...
Plz make full use of the map,don't only snap objects around the middle of the map
Muse's Insane
00:27:541 (5,6,7) - wht not delete these and ctrl c ctrl v 00:26:618 (1,2,3) - here,than ctrl J
00:36:541 (7) - do some rotate and make it Symmetric with 00:37:695 (1) - and00:37:233 (1,2,3) -
00:38:849 (3,4,5) - these 3 notes are not symmetric try to use this more

SPOILER

00:51:080 (1,2,3) - not symmetric and there are many other parts you can find out yourself

EruJazz's Insane
01:01:926 (2,3) - stack them perfectly

cute song and diffs
learning more from ranked maps is necessary
especially hit sound and patterns.
good luck~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hi ^^ just dropping by here for a re-check to see how well you've improved!

[Easy]

1. AR -1

00:01:003 (1,2,3) - Try placing these more in the center of the map, makes a better symmetry ^^
*note You may need to move a few notes after this.
00:20:387 (3) - Remove normal hitsound, it breaks the pattern
00:26:849 (2) - Change default hitsounds to Normal. 00:26:387 - After this, what happened to the Normal hitsounds pattern? D:
00:30:541 (1) - Add finish :3
00:37:003 (3) - Remove clap on the head.
00:47:157 (1) - Add finish?
01:01:926 (1) - ^ On the reverse.
01:15:772 (3) - ^ On the tail.
01:19:464 (4,1,2,3) - Try to center these more?
01:49:003 (5) - first objects appearing in Kai time should always be a NC

Stills looks good as before ^^ Only some small hitsound suggestions noted here.

[Normal]
00:13:003 (4) - NC
00:20:387 (4) - or 00:20:849 (5) - should be a NC, still trying to figure out which :S
00:21:772 (3) - Change the default hitsounds on the reverse to Normal as you have previously done like this:

00:28:695 (1) - Add whistle or finish?
01:02:387 (3) - Add whistle?
01:25:464 (4) - NC
01:30:080 (4) - ^

Nice:P

[Hard]
00:13:003 (5) - NC
00:28:003 (5) - ^
00:46:464 - 01:08:387 Continue that Normal-hitsound pattern?
01:10:463 (7) - Remove clap on the tail.
01:11:386 (2) - ^ Try not to overuse this hitsounds x.x
01:35:387 (5) - NC

Same comment as Easy

[EruJazz's Insane]
00:05:156 (1) - Not a good, jump, this note should be placed closer to 00:05:387 (2) - , since the timing between them is shorter then 00:04:233 (5,1) -
00:10:464 (1,2,3,4) - Not a very pretty flow.

00:22:926 (6) - NC
00:27:195 (5) - ^
00:41:387 (4) - The tail looks funny :3 You should just creat a curved slider with only one point.
00:49:464 (5) - NC
01:10:695 (6) - ^
01:22:003 (6) - ^
01:27:541 (7) - ^
01:33:310 (4) - ^
01:48:541 (2) - Add whistle?

Although there's a few minor issues with the flow left, and some hitsounds are questionable apart from that wow! Looks way better now Good job!

[Muse's Insane]
00:13:233 (6) - NC
00:13:233 (6,7,8) - Can you flip these objects vertically, it's really crowded :S
00:47:618 (2) - Remove clap,try not to overuse this hitsound.
00:48:541 (4) - ^
00:51:772 (3) - ^
00:53:849 (6) - If you listen carefully,y you'll hear a clap that should be on the head and tail of this slider.
00:54:541 (7) - NC
00:58:695 (2) - Remove clap
00:59:618 (4) - ^
01:05:618 (2) - NC
01:05:618 (2,4) - Add claps on their heads.
01:19:695 (5,6,7) - Add clap on these.
01:27:080 (3,4,5) - ^
01:30:772 (5,6,7) - ^

Looks okay :/ the flow's a bit questionable, but the hitsounds sounds a bit confusing, not really going in a consistent pattern. Definitely needs work for this.

Hope this helps~! ^^

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Your KIAI is wrong in my opinion =.=
And please make your KIAI same with all diffs

00:54:426 - KIAI ends here not 00:54:080 -
01:02:387 - KIAI should just end here and nothing more behind and remove those blank timings in front like 01:00:080 -
01:33:310 - KIAI starts here (remains)
01:55:464 - and ends here

[Easy]
This slider speed and placement could be a normal
IMO easy should follow almost full DS (distance snap)
00:02:849 - Whistle instead of clap
00:05:157 (2,3) - Make this place like the picture below so both sliders don't stick together

00:12:541 (1,2) - Try to make this DS
00:15:772 (1) - The DS is not enough and it's not on the flow. Try Ctrl+H / Ctrl+J
00:47:157 (1) - Stack on 00:47:618 (2) - while following DS
00:54:541 (1) - DS this if possible
00:58:695 (1) - Stack with 00:56:387 (3) - to make it more tidy
01:08:387 (1) - DS, this one is too close to previous note
01:17:157 (1) - Too far, this is likely a jump

[Normal]
Try to use small grid, the inconsistent DS is not nice here
00:05:157 (1) - DS
01:01:003 (1) - Too close, try to DS
01:02:849 (4) - Out of flow
01:26:387 (2) - Too close, remain the previous DS or this will look like 3 fast hits

[Hard]
Stack more to make it tidier
00:08:387 - There's no point slowing down the SV here and the DS is too close
00:15:310 (2) - Remain 1.0x DS
00:15:080 - There's no KIAI here but you speed it up again...
00:19:464 - Remove normal hitsound
00:20:387 - Remove normal hitsound too
00:21:772 (4) - Add hitsound
00:28:695 (4) - Stack with 00:28:233 (2) -
00:29:157 - Hitsound
00:30:080 - ^
00:31:464 (2) - Hold shift and stack perfectly
00:34:233 (1) - ^
00:34:695 (2,3) - This is a strange pattern
00:38:849 (4,1) - ^
00:44:618 - Make spinner starts here
00:52:464 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:53:849 (7) - This jump is not relating with previous DS and too far
00:56:618 (2,3) - This stack will make strange flow
01:03:541 (1) - Too close with next slider
01:14:387 - Add circle
01:21:772 (5,6) - Blanket
01:27:079 (1) - Remove this, looks like extra hit
01:33:310 - Put somemore hitsounds starts from here
01:40:464 - The DS is too close, try 0.9x or 1.0x DS (prefer 1.0)
01:46:926 (1,2,3) - Make them stack with 01:45:541 (2,3,4) -
01:48:310 (6) - Ctrl+J
01:50:387 (4) - Ctrl+G or this is just making confuse
01:51:541 (1,2) - Avoid this pattern
01:53:618 (5) - Make it placed on the middle line

[EruJazz's Insane]
Seems fine

Hope my mods help :3

Zekmer wrote:

Hi and sorry for the late mod. Well then let's start!

[Modding time!]

[General]
Nothing wrong here.


[Easy]
All good

[Normal]
All good

[Hard]
All good

[Insane]
All good


[Summary]
This is a great map, I can't point out anything major so I can't really contribute to improving this one. (I usually mod maps with lots of major issues, like WIP's ect. And this seems cleaned up by other mods so yeah I can't do much here )

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, mod from my "non-japanese" queue.

General

01:01:926 - , 01:33:310 - , 01:41:157 - This kiai isn't really needed. It is too much and the main part already has kiai. It's a little abusive to have so much kiai for a short song.

Easy

- 00:21:310 (1,2) - Mentioning for the next time; the flow is bad here because the slider is curved and the next element is upwards, so you have to change the way your natrual movements go. This is especially important for new players so they can practice the clicking better at first and then focus on movments.

00:20:849 (4,1) - Almost 1,1x spacing when your spacing is 1,0x. Easy fix
00:21:310 (1,2,3) - You could blanket this better

Normal

00:03:772 (1) - Here is a spacing difference of 0,9 to the normal spacing, so you have 0,9 to much. Easy fix again.
00:07:003 (3) - , 00:13:003 (1) - , 00:18:541 (1) - , 00:45:310 (4,5) - Here is also a small spacing change.
00:58:695 (2,3,4) - This is very clustered and hard to play imo. You should keep each element a little more space so its more playable. Also the spacing 00:58:695 (2,3) - here is wrong.
01:49:003 (3,4) - Spacing

Hard

- I really think the slider speed changes are not needed. Its very confusing to notice and play. you have 0,8 which is totally unneeded. Best to remove them.

00:04:233 (4,5) - , 00:05:387 (7,1) - Spacing doesn't fit to the others. You should keep consistant spacing.
00:06:772 (4,5) - Spacing. You should keep it normal or else it's played as 1/4, since it looks like it.
00:07:926 (6) - Too close to previous element.
00:25:464 (5,1,2) - Make normal spacing between
00:28:003 (1,2,3) - Keep this normal spacing
00:39:310 (1,2) - Spacing doesn't fit to previous and following spacing, make it normal.
00:46:464 (1,2,3) - Keep spacing consistant
00:46:926 (3,4) - , 00:47:617 (5,1) - Spacing mistake
00:48:310 (2,3) - , 00:49:233 (1,2) - , 00:51:541 (1,2) - You should make it 1,5x spacing like you did here too 00:47:617 (5) - . Don't use such random spacing please. You can make jumps but then make them readable and consistant to other spacing.
00:49:925 (3,4,5) - Spacing is above 1,1x, almost 1,2x. Fix this please.
00:53:157 (6,7) - Spacing is 2,5x. This is a lot for a Hard difficultie.

Your combo pattern is really messed up. In the middle of each part you start using NC, which is wrong.
00:01:925 (2) - , 00:02:849 - , ... 00:17:618 - , 00:19:464 - , 00:21:310 - , 00:23:157 - NC should be here
I'd say you make longer combos. It fits the song better. For example: http://puu.sh/4XqFG.jpg (00:05:618 (4) - starting point)

A lot contradictions with your spacing here, try to improve them more and accept my mentioned ones. It will help you. Some don't make sense at all and are really random placed.

Insane

- Comboing is random, you should recombo them (long or short combos).
- Kiai isn't the same as the other difficulties.

00:01:003 (4,1) - The spacing is almost the same as 00:00:772 (3,4) - , which might lead to confusion while playing. The usage of same spacing from a 1/2 pattern for a 1/1 pattern is not good. You could simply just move the first combo pattern lower.
00:01:926 (2,1) - This big jump with 2x spacing and then 00:02:849 (2,1) - this spacing which doesn't fit to your others.
00:03:310 (1,2) - Same mistake as above. The almost same spacing (00:02:849 (2,1) - which is normal spacing) is used and can lead to confusion.
00:03:772 (4,5) - Again.

Try to fix up the spacing which is really werid at places. Especially at the beginning it doesn't make sense at all and doesn't fit to the soft song.

If you need further help on how to fix things, contact me.

Avishay wrote:

From my queue, M4M, sorry for the delay, I was busy a bit in the last few days.

[Insane]
00:05:156 (1,2,3) - It may be on purpose, but I'll say it anyway, the DS from 2 to 3 is confusing a bit, perhaps make it just a bit a bit closer.
00:33:541 (5,1) - I suggest move 1 from 5, make a nice flow and don't stack, I don't think you are lazy
00:36:541 (2) - Is the slow slider necessary? One moment ago (4) was in the same length but in an other speed, I don't think slider velocity should be changed.
00:37:695 (3) - Make it a reverse slider, it fits. (don't change the position or the length of the slider)
00:39:541 (5) - I think splitting this into 2 sliders and making a nice pattern is much nicer, maybe something like this:

SPOILER

01:07:464 - Why did you competely ignore the beats here? That's really nice and it is Insane, so I don't think it should be ignored, I added this pattern here and it is really fun:

SPOILER

01:32:849 (2) - Move this circle just a bit left, it makes the pattern a bit more interesting and less confusing (x:352 y:304)
01:38:503 (2) - This slider isn't timed right, it is too early, change the snap divisor to 1/3 here and put it on 01:38:541 and end on 01:39:310

[Hard]
Add a note at 01:13:464 and change the positioning of 01:13:695 (5,6,7) - to a more interesting pattern (that will confuse less too)
Add one here too 01:15:310, this map isn't too fast and it won't be harmful for a hard
Add a note here 01:39:310, the spacing with the next note is confusing, I was sure at first that the slider is at 01:39:310 because of the spacing and the song, but well..

[Normal]
Couldn't find anything wrong

[Easy]
00:02:387 (2) - Add a whistle / clap here (to your choice)


Very nice map, good luck!

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, NM here from my queue ~

EASY:

00:16:695 (2) - I think this would look better if you flipped it horizontally
00:18:541 (4) - ^ same
01:20:849 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:22:233 (1)
01:24:080 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:26:387 (1)
01:27:772 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:30:080 (1)

NORMAL:

00:12:541 (5) - NC here
00:58:695 (2,3) - I suggest you finding another place for these 2 sliders (they are on the left edge, so some players might not see the entire slider)
Everything else is good ^^

HARD:

00:51:080 (7) - NC here instead of here 00:51:541 (1)
00:52:925 (6) - NC here
01:14:157 (6) - I would search another place for this circle, but it's just my opinion

That's all, nice map! ^^ Didn't have very much to mod, good luck!

Neta wrote:

hi from my modding queue

sorry for long delay.. too many mod reqs

is this beatmap alive? where's BATs lol

[Easy]

1. First check the AI mod
2. 00:19:003 (5) - this slider's distance should be same with 00:18:080 (3,4) - these ok
3. 01:26:387 (1) - same problem here ok
4. 01:49:003 (5) - NC here ok
5. 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner. ok
6. Map is fine but you'd better use all same distance on Easy diff

ok


[Normal]

1. Check AI mod too
2. 00:09:772 (2) - better move to 288, 104 to make same distance with 00:08:849 (1,3) - ok
3. 00:15:310 (1) - ^ 184, 56 it will too far with previous object
4. 00:17:618 (4,1) - ah.. i think this is too far for normal diff. better change slider's shape or something to make distance 1.0x ok
5. 00:58:233 (4) - same problem with first one 216, 160 [color=#00BF00it will too far with previous objec][/color]
6. 01:03:772 (4) - why don't you use same location with 01:01:926 (2) - 256, 296 will be best i think ok
7. 01:17:156 (4) - NC here
8. 01:54:080 (1) - volume down this spinner.

ok


[Hard]

1. 00:10:233 (6,1) - Swap NC ok
2. 00:12:080 (3,1) - ^ better no
3. 00:55:002 (3,5) - better make slider watching each other it's not that good flow now ok
4. 00:58:002 (2,3) - ^ better no
5. 01:01:926 (3,1) - Distance shorter plz. it can be confused with 01:01:233 (1,2) - this beat I think better because I need that be a little of difficult
6. 01:19:695 (2,3) - make this overlap will be nice ok
7. 01:35:387 (5) - i don't think here needs finish it doesn't sound natural ok
8. 01:47:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - better use all same distance no,better no I like this
9. 01:53:849 (1) - volume down this spinner.

ok


GL!