M4M ~
Yep, that's all.. not much, hope it helps anyway!
*squee* ^__^/
Normal
don't have much to say,.. :c there are just a few 'inequalities'.. like
- 00:10:051 (1,1) - the slider is in the middle a tiny bit closer to the circle than start/end of it. screen
I prefer more 'balanced' sliders, like this one . (moved 2nd anchor point to 94|316 and the end to 31|282)
some more of them (- and where you can place them to "fix" the shape):
00:36:733 (1,2) - 1st to 20|296, 2nd to 69|293, 3rd to 109|264
00:40:793 (2,3) - cirlce looks a bit too far in general, 2nd of the slider to 468|289 and 3rd to 437|238, move cirlce to 384|256
00:54:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - .. but I'm too lazy to copy all the exact positions, guess you could figure them out yourself. >-<
01:15:985 (1,2)
01:35:834 (4,5)
01:43:052 (3,4)
02:30:872 (1,1)
02:53:428 (2,3)
03:06:060 (3,4)
03:50:270 (2,3)
04:11:022 (1,2)
04:24:105 (2,3)
I know this is nitpicking, sorry, but there's not much more than this.. >-< - 00:15:301 (1,1) - maybe you want to choose a different angle for them
it's just that they seem kinda "abrupt" before a break and it'd look more smooth if they proceed diagoally - 00:30:868 (1,2,3,4) - the 'curve' here doesn't look as nice as the others before, try to round it out?
- 00:42:597 (5) and 00:44:402 (2) don't look nice together.. different angle for one of tem?
- 00:45:304 (3,4,5) - I know the movement is intentional but it's too straight imo, a more curvy one looks better
- 01:29:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - somehow there is no pattern? .o. or at least I can't see one.. xD use one maybe?
- 02:17:789 (1) - place at 160|212 to kinda follow up the polygon pattern you've been using before
- 03:53:879 (3,4) - 4 doesn't go well with the others.. but I can't think of something better..
Hard
- same as in Normal, a bit nitpicking:
00:44:402 (3) and 00:44:740 (5)
01:06:285 (3,4,5,6)
01:09:443 (2,3)
01:26:135 (1) and 01:26:699 (3)
01:44:744 (3,4)
02:52:977 (2,3)
04:11:473 (5) and 04:11:812 (7)
04:25:909 (2,3) - 01:48:240 (3,1) - maybe you wanna use one long slow slider instead of slider+spinner? it'd work well here imo
- 02:16:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - put more distance between them? it looks too crowded like this. >-<
Yep, that's all.. not much, hope it helps anyway!
*squee* ^__^/