Tari wrote:
[General][Normal]
- Add a soft-sliderslide 1 and 2 no need ><
[Hard]
- 00:02:051 (2) - I think a new combo here? so it matches with 00:06:051 (1) - I keep it, since i dont like how it looks the single note alone in a combo in the beggining
- 00:44:402 (2) - Well, the noise on the start of this slider really fits with this hitsound here : 00:44:402 (2) - Maybe you want to add it in your hitsound usage , I think it sounds great I didnt get you very well ><
- 01:32:225 (6) - Add new combo here? ok
- 02:58:842 (6) - ^ ok
- 01:40:797 (1,2) - Swap the new combo placement here? the stronger beat is usually where the new combo starts and make it sense to start a new combo at the start of a new measure. ok, removed 2 and added a reverse in the prev slider *O*
- 02:16:436 (3) - I am sure numerous people will question the readability of this slider, its the easiest diff in the set and during stuff like this make it hard to read. if your neglected to change it, then add a new combo to signal it. Changed into a 1/1 slider with one reverse
- 03:06:511 (4) - I don't really know but I think they should be stacked? honestly you put stacks courteously across the diff maybe this is a good spot? I not sure stack with what do you mean, sorry
- 03:52:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find this pattern pretty abused in the map, You really can't think of something else? mmm ok
- 04:06:511 (1,2,3) - I would prefer you move this to left a little bit , so note 3 can be in the center. Really everything just looks cleaner that way when stuff are centered. I really didn't meant to do symmetry in this map
- 04:20:496 (4) - This pattern would be way nicer if you have up and down movement, instead of one constant direction, how about you flip it by means of ctrl+G? you're the second person suggesting that, so changed
- 04:21:398 (6) - ^ same
- 04:44:857 - I think it would be better to add a note here, because as the end of the song comes closer the music makes it sound that there is more beats coming, and as to follow a progressive tone to the music, you should add a note here. Agree
- 00:02:051 (3) - Would make more sense to make the notes before the timeline separate from the one's after, and to follow Normal too. I'll keep it for the same reason
- 00:10:051 (4) - ^ well a combo here too if you were to do the above, to remain consistent.
- 00:34:477 (2) - A whistle to the middle of the slider perhaps? ok
- 00:44:740 (5) - This slider isn't following the note exactly, well the end specifically, I know the slider end is pretty empty when it comes to follow the music, but I think you should end it at the blue tick? but your choice.
- 00:56:586 (4) - New combo here to match with : 00:42:146 (1) - I have to fix some combos @.@
- 02:32:676 (3) - Fix the stacking here, I think there something wrong, like slightly unstacked. ok
- 02:33:579 (5) - ^ ok
- 02:34:706 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer the reverse slider rhythm here over the 3 circle rhythm like you did before 01:43:503 (4) - It fits really better for this part. I'll keep it
- 03:07:752 (4) - Wow, I really think the beat in the white tick in this slider should really be emphasized it sounds so unique to the song, how about you move the slider to there? I didn't understand very well, but did something there
- 04:01:323 (6) - New combo here? this jump should also have a new combo signaling it. I removed the jump
- 04:34:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it all into 3 separate combo's like you did before? 02:56:361 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
- 04:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ maybe this too
- 04:45:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Really this is all on you, but splitting this into 3 combo's really makes the color have a nice effect with the song, so one at note 8 and note 16 and note 17. I'll keep this one
Thanks both for modding, was really helpful!<3Kytoxid wrote:
Yooo!
[General]
- ArtistUnicode: 向日葵 (according to http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm10506328, at least) Added, thanks
- The link above also has a nice video you could include, or http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm_xWrMkPD4&noredirect=1. I'll keep without vid, thanks
- I would put North-T into the tags as the arranger and remove it from the title, but I'm not sure about the current rules on that. I think is ok as it is
- I think the intro section (before the first break) could also be softer, especially on Hard, since it overrides the music in some parts.
[Normal]
Hm. 2 difficulties. I guess it's because it's such a long song. I thought that an easy diff would be too similar to Normal since is a soft song, so I kept a Normal only
02:02:902 (1) - Pretty cool. =p
Not much to say about this diff; it seemed a bit boring though, as a constant 1/1 throughout. I think the parts of the map that shone out most for me were the parts that didn't follow the 1/1, and you could add a more variety throughout, especially at places like 03:23:203 (1), where the singer also does something a little unusual, a little creative. I did some changes
Otherwise it was good though.
[Hard]
Okay, looking for something really fun here.
01:47:338 (1,2,3,1) - These anti-jumps are readable, but I think it would look cool as a half-stack: http://puu.sh/4QsZC.jpg nice idea, but I didn't make them that close
02:47:789 (5,6) - Not sure if intentional, but if not, could be stacked nicer. is intentional, for some reason players thought it was 1/2 beat instead of 1/4 when was completely stacked, I now they seem to read it well
04:00:195 (1) - Maybe move this 1/4 earlier and put it into the previous combo? Don't like it ><
04:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This placement was a bit messy. I caught it on my first play-through, and missed it on my next 2. :S did something there, hope is better now
04:45:308 (1) - I think this might sound cool if you lowered the volume, and gradually raised it until the end. Done
This was definitely a lot more fun with the rhythms and jumps. One overall thing that bugged me; sometimes the notes stacked under a slider tail were 1/2 after the slider, sometimes they were 1/4 after the slider. This caught me off a couple of times when I first played it, since I wasn't familiar with the song, but it got better as it went along. Maybe consider spacing the 1/2 gap ones instead of stacking them, or adding a note in between so it forms a 1/4 triplet?
I'll see what I can do ><
Have a star for a fun map for a relaxing song!