Yooo!
[General]
- ArtistUnicode: 向日葵 (according to http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm10506328, at least)
- The link above also has a nice video you could include, or http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm_xWrMkPD4&noredirect=1.
- I would put North-T into the tags as the arranger and remove it from the title, but I'm not sure about the current rules on that.
- I think the intro section (before the first break) could also be softer, especially on Hard, since it overrides the music in some parts.
[Normal]
Hm. 2 difficulties. I guess it's because it's such a long song.
02:02:902 (1) - Pretty cool.
Not much to say about this diff; it seemed a bit boring though, as a constant 1/1 throughout. I think the parts of the map that shone out most for me were the parts that didn't follow the 1/1, and you could add a more variety throughout, especially at places like 03:23:203 (1), where the singer also does something a little unusual, a little creative.
Otherwise it was good though.
[Hard]
Okay, looking for something really fun here.
01:47:338 (1,2,3,1) - These anti-jumps are readable, but I think it would look cool as a half-stack: http://puu.sh/4QsZC.jpg
02:47:789 (5,6) - Not sure if intentional, but if not, could be stacked nicer.
04:00:195 (1) - Maybe move this 1/4 earlier and put it into the previous combo?
04:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This placement was a bit messy. I caught it on my first play-through, and missed it on my next 2. :S
04:45:308 (1) - I think this might sound cool if you lowered the volume, and gradually raised it until the end.
This was definitely a lot more fun with the rhythms and jumps. One overall thing that bugged me; sometimes the notes stacked under a slider tail were 1/2 after the slider, sometimes they were 1/4 after the slider. This caught me off a couple of times when I first played it, since I wasn't familiar with the song, but it got better as it went along. Maybe consider spacing the 1/2 gap ones instead of stacking them, or adding a note in between so it forms a 1/4 triplet?
Have a star for a fun map for a relaxing song!
[General]
- ArtistUnicode: 向日葵 (according to http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm10506328, at least)
- The link above also has a nice video you could include, or http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm_xWrMkPD4&noredirect=1.
- I would put North-T into the tags as the arranger and remove it from the title, but I'm not sure about the current rules on that.
- I think the intro section (before the first break) could also be softer, especially on Hard, since it overrides the music in some parts.
[Normal]
Hm. 2 difficulties. I guess it's because it's such a long song.
02:02:902 (1) - Pretty cool.
Not much to say about this diff; it seemed a bit boring though, as a constant 1/1 throughout. I think the parts of the map that shone out most for me were the parts that didn't follow the 1/1, and you could add a more variety throughout, especially at places like 03:23:203 (1), where the singer also does something a little unusual, a little creative.
Otherwise it was good though.
[Hard]
Okay, looking for something really fun here.
01:47:338 (1,2,3,1) - These anti-jumps are readable, but I think it would look cool as a half-stack: http://puu.sh/4QsZC.jpg
02:47:789 (5,6) - Not sure if intentional, but if not, could be stacked nicer.
04:00:195 (1) - Maybe move this 1/4 earlier and put it into the previous combo?
04:37:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This placement was a bit messy. I caught it on my first play-through, and missed it on my next 2. :S
04:45:308 (1) - I think this might sound cool if you lowered the volume, and gradually raised it until the end.
This was definitely a lot more fun with the rhythms and jumps. One overall thing that bugged me; sometimes the notes stacked under a slider tail were 1/2 after the slider, sometimes they were 1/4 after the slider. This caught me off a couple of times when I first played it, since I wasn't familiar with the song, but it got better as it went along. Maybe consider spacing the 1/2 gap ones instead of stacking them, or adding a note in between so it forms a 1/4 triplet?
Have a star for a fun map for a relaxing song!