[Liberty]
I'm a fan of OD8, but isn't it a bit too high for 157 bpm? I suggest OD-1
from 00:01:265 (1) to 00:11:853 (1) - there are a lot of sliders with whistle on sliderbody, i find it really annoying, i suggest to get rid of them all (ot at least some of them)
00:04:059 (5) - one of these 3 sounds much better http://puu.sh/4xrKI.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xrLJ.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xrML.jpg
00:06:559 (1) - there's a whistle on sliderbody, i hope it's an error
00:06:559 (1,3) - 1/8 snap? i hope it's an error too. one of the 3 choices i gave on 00:04:059 (5) could go
00:10:970 (4,5) - this http://puu.sh/4xrTW.jpg sounds and plays better
00:18:182 (1,1) - this spinner ends too close to the slider, it should end here 00:19:328
00:20:760 (5,1) - why this spacing? it's ugly and makes the pattern ugly to play, i suggest to keep the correct spacing when circles are involved in streams - here are the others:
00:22:288 (5,1) - 00:23:816 (5,1)
00:26:012 (1) - maybe this deserves the soft finish too
00:40:681 (8,9) - how about shifting these 1/2 forward? http://puu.sh/4xsui.jpg it creates an awesome antijump (7,8) and an awesome rhythm
00:43:728 (8,9) - same ^
00:45:633 - ok, from here the whistles on sliderbodies are REALLY ANNOYING, especially the ones on 1/4 sliders. you should remove them all
00:47:062 (8,1) - spacing
00:50:014 (8,9,1) - spacing, this plays bad. go for http://puu.sh/4xsCq.jpg
This part doesn't flow well at all because of the weird spacing, you really should do something to improve it, the patterns you are using would be very fun to play if only they flowed better
01:20:205 (5,1) - spacing
01:21:728 (5,1) - 01:23:252 (5,1) - ^
01:24:586 (1,1) - too close
01:25:443 (2,3,4) - way too spaced, i can make them all 300's only 1/10 or 1/15 of the times, but most times i get at least one miss.
to be honest, i didn't like this map so much, but i think it has the potential to improve a lot.
[Insane]
100% OD7
Please remove all the whistle sliderbody.. do it for my ears
00:26:203 (1) - this must start here 00:26:012 and have 5 repeats (7 beats total) http://puu.sh/4xtkw.jpg
00:26:776 (2,3,1) - 2 choices: http://puu.sh/4xtn2.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xtnU.jpg
00:27:538 (2) - and anything you choose, the object before this slider should be a little closer to it
From this point on, the map flows very well
00:31:919 (1,3) - meh
00:38:014 (1) - move to x:164 y:132
00:38:586 (2) - move to x:416 y:112
00:55:348 (3) - it could blanket 00:55:157 (2) better. i know there wasn't any intention to make a blanket, but it would be nicer
00:59:919 (3) - same ^
This diff is much better than Liberty, it still has some problems but the flow is really good
Good luck!
I'm a fan of OD8, but isn't it a bit too high for 157 bpm? I suggest OD-1
from 00:01:265 (1) to 00:11:853 (1) - there are a lot of sliders with whistle on sliderbody, i find it really annoying, i suggest to get rid of them all (ot at least some of them)
00:04:059 (5) - one of these 3 sounds much better http://puu.sh/4xrKI.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xrLJ.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xrML.jpg
00:06:559 (1) - there's a whistle on sliderbody, i hope it's an error
00:06:559 (1,3) - 1/8 snap? i hope it's an error too. one of the 3 choices i gave on 00:04:059 (5) could go
00:10:970 (4,5) - this http://puu.sh/4xrTW.jpg sounds and plays better
00:18:182 (1,1) - this spinner ends too close to the slider, it should end here 00:19:328
00:20:760 (5,1) - why this spacing? it's ugly and makes the pattern ugly to play, i suggest to keep the correct spacing when circles are involved in streams - here are the others:
00:22:288 (5,1) - 00:23:816 (5,1)
00:26:012 (1) - maybe this deserves the soft finish too
00:40:681 (8,9) - how about shifting these 1/2 forward? http://puu.sh/4xsui.jpg it creates an awesome antijump (7,8) and an awesome rhythm
00:43:728 (8,9) - same ^
00:45:633 - ok, from here the whistles on sliderbodies are REALLY ANNOYING, especially the ones on 1/4 sliders. you should remove them all
00:47:062 (8,1) - spacing
00:50:014 (8,9,1) - spacing, this plays bad. go for http://puu.sh/4xsCq.jpg
This part doesn't flow well at all because of the weird spacing, you really should do something to improve it, the patterns you are using would be very fun to play if only they flowed better
01:20:205 (5,1) - spacing
01:21:728 (5,1) - 01:23:252 (5,1) - ^
01:24:586 (1,1) - too close
01:25:443 (2,3,4) - way too spaced, i can make them all 300's only 1/10 or 1/15 of the times, but most times i get at least one miss.
to be honest, i didn't like this map so much, but i think it has the potential to improve a lot.
[Insane]
100% OD7
Please remove all the whistle sliderbody.. do it for my ears
00:26:203 (1) - this must start here 00:26:012 and have 5 repeats (7 beats total) http://puu.sh/4xtkw.jpg
00:26:776 (2,3,1) - 2 choices: http://puu.sh/4xtn2.jpg - http://puu.sh/4xtnU.jpg
00:27:538 (2) - and anything you choose, the object before this slider should be a little closer to it
From this point on, the map flows very well
00:31:919 (1,3) - meh
00:38:014 (1) - move to x:164 y:132
00:38:586 (2) - move to x:416 y:112
00:55:348 (3) - it could blanket 00:55:157 (2) better. i know there wasn't any intention to make a blanket, but it would be nicer
00:59:919 (3) - same ^
This diff is much better than Liberty, it still has some problems but the flow is really good
Good luck!