[Liberty]
I'm a fan of AR8, but isn't it a bit too high for 157 bpm? I suggest AR-1
i think you mean AR9 lol... and it used to be AR8, but then people told me they thought AR9 was better. gave it a shot and i have to say i agree.
from 00:01:265 (1) to 00:11:853 (1) - there are a lot of sliders with whistle on sliderbody, i find it really annoying, i suggest to get rid of them all (ot at least some of them)
i dunno, i was pretty selective with my slider whistle hitsounds, and i was honestly quite happy with how they turned out... nevertheless, i will give it some thought.
pretty happy with how it is now, thank you~
00:06:559 (1) - there's a whistle on sliderbody, i hope it's an error
quite deliberate.
00:06:559 (1,3) - 1/8 snap? i hope it's an error too. one of the 3 choices i gave on 00:04:059 (5) could go
also deliberate, i put it there for the flute trilling in the music, though i could use 1/6 instead, but i like 1/8 better. well i'll see if anyone else agrees with it.
again, quite happy with how it is.
00:18:182 (1,1) - this spinner ends too close to the slider, it should end here 00:19:328
this is what we call a post-spinner note and is a legitimate technique that i am quite fond of.
00:20:760 (5,1) - why this spacing? it's ugly and makes the pattern ugly to play, i suggest to keep the correct spacing when circles are involved in streams - here are the others:
00:22:288 (5,1) - 00:23:816 (5,1)
once again, i'm very happy with how it is atm. jumps are there to emphasise the "HA!" chanting bits in the song, as well as the occasional bang in the music.
00:26:012 (1) - maybe this deserves the soft finish too
the other soft finish is there because it's there in the music, otherwise this was originally going to be all soft whistles.
00:40:681 (8,9) - how about shifting these 1/2 forward?
http://puu.sh/4xsui.jpg it creates an awesome antijump (7,8) and an awesome rhythm
00:43:728 (8,9) - same ^
quite content with how it is~
00:45:633 - ok, from here the whistles on sliderbodies are REALLY ANNOYING, especially the ones on 1/4 sliders. you should remove them all
but i like them whistles :<
00:47:062 (8,1) - spacing
00:50:014 (8,9,1) - spacing, this plays bad. go for
http://puu.sh/4xsCq.jpgThis part doesn't flow well at all because of the weird spacing, you really should do something to improve it, the patterns you are using would be very fun to play if only they flowed better
01:20:205 (5,1) - spacing
01:21:728 (5,1) - 01:23:252 (5,1) - ^
01:24:586 (1,1) - too close
the mini jumps are all part of what i wanted to go for in this difficulty, so will definitely be keeping it as is, sorry.
01:25:443 (2,3,4) - way too spaced, i can make them all 300's only 1/10 or 1/15 of the times, but most times i get at least one miss.
i think i changed it since you looked at it to reduce spacing. if not, keeping as is.
to be honest, i didn't like this map so much, but i think it has the potential to improve a lot.
no problem! i'm sorry to hear you didn't like it that much.
[Insane]
100% AR7
noo, SV is already faster than the AR, if i reduce AR even more... :<
Please remove all the whistle sliderbody.. do it for my ears
nevaaaaa
oh! finally an idea that i can agree with. added two hitcircles instead, because i thought 5 repeats is a bit many and feels weird.
gonna have to disagree, those repeats come out of pretty much nowhere and will look and feel out of place in comparison to the rest of the map.
00:27:538 (2) - and anything you choose, the object before this slider should be a little closer to it
but i've got a pretty constant 1.25x distance spacing going on here D:
From this point on, the map flows very well
great to hear~
00:31:919 (1,3) - meh
00:38:014 (1) - move to x:164 y:132
00:38:586 (2) - move to x:416 y:112
00:55:348 (3) - it could blanket 00:55:157 (2) better. i know there wasn't any intention to make a blanket, but it would be nicer
00:59:919 (3) - same ^
no changes, as beat placements were very intentional. also with blanket suggestion, blanketing was never my intention.