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Autumn
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Autumn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月8日 at 10:25:24

Artist: Halou
Title: Today
Tags: alacat Hyouka Sincerity Umika AMV
BPM: 110
Filesize: 16417kb
Play Time: 02:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alacatty (1.36 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Purity (3.33 stars, 168 notes)
  3. Sincerity (4.61 stars, 242 notes)
Download: Halou - Today
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阴阳相隔情犹在 魂返红尘与君别

RIP umika

Sincerity
#1 of AKROSS CON 2012
Storyboard by me
Alacatty by alacat
Skin provided by mintong89
AMV PROJECT
二度落花暮様如 | 宛若青空 | Sincerity | Murderer | Metamorphose | Still Alive | Jao Shingen
Last edited by Autumn , edited 73 times in total.
Autumn
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Autumn
Lyrics Backup:

Today I feel surrounded
Today I am connected
Today I am a part of something more
As if every cell were singing
Still, I can't embrace it
Every silver lining has a cloud

But not so far
I keep waiting for the shoe to drop
Waiting for the axe to fall
And it will happen
This I know
Just not so far

Today I feel like dancing
I never fell like dancing
It's like even the weather suits my mood
My entire soul is ringing
Still, I can't accept it
I keep looking for the thing to bring me down

Though I can't explain my reasons to you
I think we are the same
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Feel SO HARD to map the first part of the song.
It was really a hard time for me. But finally it's time to move it to pending.

I also want a SB of lyrics for the song. Still trying to learn SB making but ._.
GL to myself.
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
irc mod~~

so lazy #2 _(:3」∠)_

SPOILER
15:05 *yanlu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/244444 Halou - Today [Sincerity]]
15:05 Autumn: 是這個?
15:05 *Autumn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257891 Halou - Today]
15:05 yanlu: 恩OAO
15:05 yanlu: 這歌好慢zz
15:05 Autumn: 我就喜歡慢歌嘛
15:06 yanlu: 恩...首先我覺得...
15:06 yanlu: 前面5~6秒可以cut去Orz
15:07 yanlu: 你的影片也是從06開始的吧:/
15:07 Autumn: 從哪兒開始呢....這是個問題 ;w;
15:08 yanlu: skin--> 300 300 OSU!
15:08 Autumn: 這樣 我在前面加個轉盤怎麼樣
15:08 yanlu: 怎麼回事=A=
15:08 yanlu: OSU!不能知道是300/100/50...
15:09 Autumn: skin?怎麼拉
15:09 Autumn: 哦哦
15:09 Autumn: 這個啊
15:09 Autumn: 好的我去問問米桶
15:09 Autumn: 這個skin是他做的
15:11 Autumn: 如果有問題我改掉的 你繼續吧ww
15:11 yanlu: 恩恩
15:12 yanlu: 剛剛在test>.<
15:12 yanlu: 我覺得...kiai段可以再多一些3連~
15:13 yanlu: 00:28:370 (5,6) - 轉個幾度讓他蓋住00:27:006 (3) - 頭?
15:13 Autumn: 嗯.好的.我儘量添加一些試試
15:14 Autumn: 好的
15:14 yanlu: 00:30:552 (2) - 簡短它 00:31:370 - 這裡家個note?
15:15 yanlu: 00:32:597 (5) - 應該結束在藍線吧
15:15 yanlu: 00:33:143 -
15:16 Autumn: 這裡我也糾結了很久..先mark一下
15:16 Autumn: 我是跟vocal的233
15:16 yanlu: 00:39:279 (3,4) - 交換節奏看看?
15:17 yanlu: 話說你前面幾乎沒單note耶......
15:17 yanlu: lol
15:17 Autumn: 是的 因為節奏太難抓,下單點不容易打准
15:18 yanlu: 反了吧=口=
15:18 Autumn: 滑條判定低嘛233
15:19 yanlu: 可是你這歌非常慢慢慢2333
15:19 yanlu: 所以大丈夫!
15:20 Autumn: 嗯..好的我會試試多一些單點
15:20 yanlu: 00:48:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成這樣? http://puu.sh/3abpK.jpg
15:22 yanlu: 00:55:097 (2,3) - 我覺得妳應該會想1包他們 _(:3」∠)_
15:23 Autumn: 好的 改進了一下
15:23 yanlu: 00:57:552 (1,2) - ctrl+j?
15:23 yanlu: 1可以再跳一些ovo
15:23 yanlu: 然後3....
15:24 yanlu: 沒有人噴嗎 _(:3」∠)_
15:24 yanlu: 01:03:279 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡應該不用減速..吧
15:25 yanlu: 01:06:552 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 這種滑是很好 可是多了會被嫌的233
15:25 Autumn: 嗯 感覺可以去掉
15:26 yanlu: 01:09:143 - 01:09:279 - 這之間距離跟其他不一樣
15:26 Autumn: 好的 從01:09:279 (1) - 開始換一種節奏
15:26 Autumn: 嗯 這裡我中心做一下
15:27 Autumn: 會換掉的
15:27 Autumn: 重新
15:27 yanlu: 01:12:552 (3) - 放在01:10:915 (4) - 的位置呢?
15:27 yanlu: 比較順~的感覺
15:28 yanlu: 01:21:279 (3) - 同 拉遠一點
15:28 Autumn: 好
15:30 yanlu: 01:24:961 (3) - 這應該結束在藍線01:25:234 -
15:30 yanlu: 然後後面自己改一下~
15:31 yanlu: 01:31:643 - add note?
15:32 yanlu: .........你有加音效嗎!?
15:32 yanlu: 01:55:915 (5) - 沒包好
15:32 Autumn: 加了 不過只有兩種
15:33 Autumn: 好的 改掉了
15:33 yanlu: 02:03:552 (1) - 包好一點
15:34 yanlu: 同為包覆控我推薦你可以這麼做
15:34 yanlu: http://puu.sh/3abHj.jpg 看著2的縮小圈弄~
15:35 yanlu: 把grid snap去掉~
15:35 yanlu: http://puu.sh/3abJ0.jpg像這樣
15:36 yanlu: 無論啥麼包覆都不是問題了!(誤
15:36 Autumn: 好 我以後包的時候也去掉GridSnap
15:36 Autumn: 看來很方便
15:36 yanlu: 02:11:188 (3) - 後面靠太近對吧
15:37 yanlu: deshyo~ >A<
15:37 Autumn: 嗯 改了
15:38 yanlu: 02:20:734 (1) - 毛毛蟲後面直到底 不盛美觀>-<;..
15:38 yanlu: 想別的形狀><?
15:38 yanlu: 應該就這樣了~
15:39 yanlu: kiai再加點三連更好w
15:39 Autumn: 這個滑條是和背景視頻適應的233
15:39 yanlu: 喔喔!
15:39 Autumn: 好的 多謝mod 我回去再整理下
15:40 Autumn: 你先po到thread裏
15:40 yanlu: 咦
15:40 *yanlu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257891 Halou - Today [Purity]]
15:40 yanlu: O-O
15:40 Autumn: 哦哦後面的啊
15:41 yanlu: xD
15:41 Autumn: 233
15:41 yanlu: 應該沒甚麼問題吧~
15:41 Autumn: 應該比較簡單 可能會有點overmap 你檢查一下
15:42 yanlu: 00:31:643 (5,6) - 感覺沒跟好拍子 怪怪的
15:42 yanlu: 其實我不是很懂overmap...
15:42 yanlu: 是甚麼意思呢....
15:42 Autumn: 沒事 這個因人而異的..就是拍子塞得太滿
15:43 yanlu: 00:39:279 (3) - 開頭應該從00:39:552 -
15:44 yanlu: 00:43:643 - ..少個音!? 把後面的slider往前 然後改改?
15:45 yanlu: 00:57:552 (3) - 換成一個note就好?
15:45 yanlu: 01:01:915 (3) - ^
15:47 yanlu: 01:10:915 (6) - 去掉然後後面的拉長~?
15:48 yanlu: 01:13:370 - 感覺後面的來回1/2都很..莫名
15:48 yanlu: 放得太順了嗎lol
15:48 yanlu: 1/2會變難耶><
15:49 Autumn: 嗯..因為節奏參考了Hard
15:49 Autumn: 看來得少放一點折返
15:50 Autumn: 沒事有Easy 這個問題我回去再想想具體怎麼解決
15:51 yanlu: 恩恩~
15:51 yanlu: 抱歉我分心了lol
15:51 Autumn: 沒事沒事233
15:52 yanlu: 後面是有些overmap...orz(?
15:53 yanlu: 01:51:279 - 為什麼其他不空這個反而沒了233
15:53 Autumn: 好 前面我去掉幾個note
15:54 yanlu: 其實....你這個diff
15:54 yanlu: 星數會這麼低
15:54 yanlu: 應該是因為你sv1.20...
15:54 yanlu: 你剛剛那個難度2.10....
15:55 Autumn: 和Easy一樣...果然
15:55 Autumn: 我等下改掉
15:55 yanlu: alacat跟你一樣用1.20
15:55 Autumn: 不過節奏應該不會變
15:55 yanlu: 恩
15:55 yanlu: ..
15:55 yanlu: 不過你要改的話
15:55 yanlu: 改sv=remap..
15:55 yanlu: ;D
15:56 Autumn: 沒事我有辦法的
15:56 yanlu: 好吧~
15:56 Autumn: 我已經有無數remap的經驗了233
15:56 yanlu: 那就這樣了OAO
15:56 yanlu: +1
15:56 Autumn: 好的看一下Easy吧
15:58 yanlu: 01:22:915 (2) - 再彎一點?
15:59 Autumn: 咦...GD也可以由我來改?..
15:59 yanlu: 233 我不知道>.<
16:00 yanlu: 她同意的話吧~
16:00 yanlu: nyancat~
16:00 Autumn: 我覺得要改動的應該不多..
16:00 Autumn: 好的你說吧
16:01 yanlu: 沒了!233

nice clam song~ GL!
popner
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popner
[Sincerity]
00:31:643 (3,4) - 这两个滑条结束在蓝线上，破坏了节奏。蓝线前后的红/白线至少要有一个下节奏的地方，不然会导致重音偏移，也就是“没拍子”。
00:36:279 (3,4,1) - 这里节奏应和后面00:39:279 (3,4,1)一致
01:04:097 (2,3) - 所有类似这里用3/4滑条+任意滑条的，都要注意节奏的一致性。

音效感觉很单薄啊，至少后半部分应该有24clap。

另：我觉得这种轻柔的曲子真心不适合用来作图啊。只有vocal只能自创节奏。
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Filesize: 23332kb

Play Time: 02:33
Autumn
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Autumn
popner's nice suggestions

popner wrote:

[Sincerity]
00:31:643 (3,4) - 这两个滑条结束在蓝线上，破坏了节奏。蓝线前后的红/白线至少要有一个下节奏的地方，不然会导致重音偏移，也就是“没拍子”。 了解.在白线上都下了节奏
00:36:279 (3,4,1) - 这里节奏应和后面00:39:279 (3,4,1)一致 OK
01:04:097 (2,3) - 所有类似这里用3/4滑条+任意滑条的，都要注意节奏的一致性。3/4和1/2的切换上我准备用跳来提醒 不知这样可不可以?

音效感觉很单薄啊，至少后半部分应该有24clap。前面的clap音我还在想办法找合适的,另外kiai部分是用了whistle,其实就是clap..有空我会改回去

另：我觉得这种轻柔的曲子真心不适合用来作图啊。只有vocal只能自创节奏。 自创就自创吧 233 喜欢这首歌就努力把它做好,适不适合作图只是相对的吧 :D 我会继续努力的

感谢你能抽空来看下我的图! Updated
Autumn
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Autumn

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Filesize: 23332kb

Play Time: 02:33
想办法再加1kb(思考
popner
osu! Alumni
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popner
因为用3/4滑条跟vocal的这种方法比较特殊，一般是在节奏单调的地方增加变化，但是用的位置需要好好考虑，随机的话会很突兀。
Autumn
501 posts
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Autumn

popner wrote:

因为用3/4滑条跟vocal的这种方法比较特殊，一般是在节奏单调的地方增加变化，但是用的位置需要好好考虑，随机的话会很突兀。
了解 我会试着减少3/4并且尽量分组放在一起处理的 :D
Thx agaiin~等这几天考完回来再忙 233
Autumn
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Autumn
7/5 New hitsounds added, Offset -10
7/7 Remapped a little. Gotta encode the video when I have spare time.
7/8 Changed Video & MP3
7/14 New offset
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Hey. Mod from my Queues



General

  1. seem fine

[Alacatty]

  1. nothing to say here

[Purity]

  1. 01:12:469 (4) - slider end is unsnap please resnap it
  2. 01:35:923 (3) - slider end is unsnap
  3. 01:41:105 (4) - slider end is unsnap
  4. 01:54:742 (4) - wrong spacing pls fix it?
  5. 01:55:832 (5) - same here
  6. 02:04:832 (3) - slider end is unsnap

[Hard]

  1. 00:24:742 (3) - may unstack this slider with the preview one?
  2. 00:59:651 (5,1) - try to make a better stack

gomen for my short mod but the map seem fine to me ><
really nice c: Good luck with rank ~
Autumn
501 posts
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Topic Starter
Autumn
Dark_Ai's mod

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey. Mod from my Queues



General

  1. seem fine

[Alacatty]

  1. nothing to say here

[Purity]

  1. 01:12:469 (4) - slider end is unsnap please resnap it
  2. 01:35:923 (3) - slider end is unsnap
  3. 01:41:105 (4) - slider end is unsnap
  4. 01:54:742 (4) - wrong spacing pls fix it?
  5. 01:55:832 (5) - same here
  6. 02:04:832 (3) - slider end is unsnap
ALL FIXED

[Hard]

  1. 00:24:742 (3) - may unstack this slider with the preview one? Umm, I'll see it later
  2. 00:59:651 (5,1) - try to make a better stack √


gomen for my short mod but the map seem fine to me ><
really nice c: Good luck with rank ~ Thanks!
Thx for mod
Updated~
NHKsFlag
40 posts
Joined January 2012
NHKsFlag
skin非常棒
当然图也很棒，要我的话一开始就不知道怎么下手了lol :) :)
Autumn
501 posts
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Topic Starter
Autumn

NHKsFlag wrote:

skin非常棒
当然图也很棒，要我的话一开始就不知道怎么下手了lol :) :)
Thx~~(捏 //
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
纯粹吐槽 no kds
一个是一开始啥节奏都没 那些note都是怎么加的？至少给点声音这样知道是自创节奏吧
一个是请不要滥用3/4（包括5/4，etc）滑条 有不少这种滑条让人很不爽
最后就是图好看 star
Autumn
501 posts
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Autumn

Flower wrote:

纯粹吐槽 no kds
一个是一开始啥节奏都没 那些note都是怎么加的？至少给点声音这样知道是自创节奏吧
开头看来还是得增加节奏感,必要的话我还会增加音效 233
一个是请不要滥用3/4（包括5/4，etc）滑条 有不少这种滑条让人很不爽
没错..目前的版本已经比1st submit好多了(汗 好像只有一处集中使用了3/4? 估计还会在mod过程中不断减少的
最后就是图好看 star :3
谢谢花花 XD
Vita-VVA
58 posts
Joined March 2013
Vita-VVA
[sincerity]

OD+1 ?

02:27:233 (2) - could use another arrange

also, one note added ,may used as a trap? :)


[purity]
01:24:742 (1,2) - one note added at any where you'd like

01:50:378 (1) - another better(?) arrange and one note added

02:27:505 (3) - uncomfortable arrange......

that's all,good luck
Autumn
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Topic Starter
Autumn
Vita-VVA's mod

Vita-VVA wrote:

[sincerity]

OD+1 ?

02:27:233 (2) - could use another arrange

also, one note added ,may used as a trap? :)

All fixed

[purity]
01:24:742 (1,2) - one note added at any where you'd like √

01:50:378 (1) - another better(?) arrange and one note added √

02:27:505 (3) - uncomfortable arrange...... DS is on ;w;

that's all,good luck
Thx for mod~ Updated
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
hi~M4M

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]
把给你做GD的人写在creator’s word里。。话说一开始看TAG里有sincerity还去搜了这个人
纯粹吐槽：转盘上深蓝色的大大的spin感觉不合歌曲氛围和note的皮肤，可以换个淡淡的柔和的

[ Sincerity]

  • AR-1? 有点快啊
    00:20:923 (5) -这样节奏来跟vocal
    00:23:105 (1) -
    00:42:742 (4) –拆成1个note+一个1/2滑条，我觉得红线上的音不能漏
    01:17:378 (5,6) –这两个交换，大白线是重音
    02:15:469 (6) –延长到蓝线02:15:878 （我觉得这块1/2下满节奏略无聊了点）
    02:05:651 (1) -^(别吐槽顺序了)
    02:04:287 (2,3,4,5,6) –做成正的五边形
    02:30:778 (2) –首whistle？

[ Purity]

  • 觉得SV和上个难度差了好多;w;
    00:27:469 (5) –前移1/2到红线，跟vocal
    00:31:560 (5) -^
    00:40:287 (4) -^
    00:53:651 (3) –缩短1/2好点，正好在人声上扬的时候
    01:02:378 (4) –结束点不变，起始点前移1/2
    01:59:651 –add note
    02:04:287 (2) –建议
    02:27:233 (3) –前移1/2
    02:28:324 –add note
    02:28:596 (5) –拉长到红线

[ alacatty]

  • Hihi~alacat^^ :D
    00:37:832 (2) –I suggest you try this rhythm
    00:40:287 (1) – move to 00:40:287 –
    01:16:832 (5) –remove head’ whistle and add whistle to slider’s end
    01:21:196 (4) -^
    01:32:105 (5) -^
    02:33:778 (2) –reduce volume because I think whistle is too noisy

That’s all I can find
最后这个曲子真慢啊，打的时候不用听音乐都可以玩;w; good luck
Autumn
501 posts
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Autumn
Fycho's mod

Fycho wrote:

hi~M4M

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]
把给你做GD的人写在creator’s word里。。话说一开始看TAG里有sincerity还去搜了这个人 会写的
纯粹吐槽：转盘上深蓝色的大大的spin感觉不合歌曲氛围和note的皮肤，可以换个淡淡的柔和的 √

[ Sincerity]

  • AR-1? 有点快啊 7我也考虑过但不太适合kiai，先保留
    00:20:923 (5) -这样节奏来跟vocal
    00:23:105 (1) - 好 换了一种改法
    00:42:742 (4) –拆成1个note+一个1/2滑条，我觉得红线上的音不能漏 这个问题不大啦
    01:17:378 (5,6) –这两个交换，大白线是重音 √
    02:15:469 (6) –延长到蓝线02:15:878 （我觉得这块1/2下满节奏略无聊了点）√
    02:05:651 (1) -^(别吐槽顺序了) 这里要重想 我太懒lol
    02:04:287 (2,3,4,5,6) –做成正的五边形 改进了一下
    02:30:778 (2) –首whistle？这个不必

[ Purity]

  • 觉得SV和上个难度差了好多;w; 其实还行，因为S难度大部分用了x0.75
    00:27:469 (5) –前移1/2到红线，跟vocal 这里考虑到Normal还是算了，自创节奏为主
    00:31:560 (5) -^ 有没有发现其实是蓝线
    00:40:287 (4) -^ 同上上
    00:53:651 (3) –缩短1/2好点，正好在人声上扬的时候√
    01:02:378 (4) –结束点不变，起始点前移1/2 √
    01:59:651 –add note √
    02:04:287 (2) –建议已改进
    02:27:233 (3) –前移1/2 这里改进了一下，包括后面的两点
    02:28:324 –add note
    02:28:596 (5) –拉长到红线

That’s all I can find
最后这个曲子真慢啊，打的时候不用听音乐都可以玩;w; good luck
Thx for mod~Updated
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
hellooooo

Sincerity
SPOILER
00:48:469 (2,3) - i feel weird this 1/4 rhythm. try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931251

00:51:469 (1,2) - delete(2) note then streach(1) slider to 00:52:014?

01:47:105 (4) - delete

01:51:196 (5,6) - (6) delete then (5) streach to 01:51:742 and add note on 01:52:014

01:55:696 - add note

02:04:560 (3) - delete

02:18:742 (7) - delete

Purity

SPOILER
00:43:560 - add note?


01:51:469 (2) - delete this then put 1/1 slider on 01:51:196

alacat
SPOILER
はなにも言うことがない　ぐっどまっぷ

thats all :D

really really good map :D
good luck!

Shia is our idol :p
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Quilt wrote:

hellooooo

Sincerity
SPOILER
00:48:469 (2,3) - i feel weird this 1/4 rhythm. try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931251
OK Tried another rhythm
00:51:469 (1,2) - delete(2) note then streach(1) slider to 00:52:014?
OK
01:47:105 (4) - delete
I know which rhythm you're trying to tell below,but it'll make quite a difference to the whole mapflow..so I decide to keep it
01:51:196 (5,6) - (6) delete then (5) streach to 01:51:742 and add note on 01:52:014
^
01:55:696 - add note
OK
02:04:560 (3) - delete
^
02:18:742 (7) - delete
^

Purity

SPOILER
00:43:560 - add note?
OK

01:51:469 (2) - delete this then put 1/1 slider on 01:51:196
OK

alacat
SPOILER
はなにも言うことがない　ぐっどまっぷ

thats all :D

really really good map :D U too ^^
good luck!

Shia is our idol :p
;)
Thx for your mod and stars! Updated~XD
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
from m4m in my queue :3
thanks 4 mod mine.. here's my mod


  • Alamoe *runs*
    00:44:378 (2) - spacing inconsistency (0,91x)
    00:51:469 (1) - remove NC for consistency?
    01:08:378 (2) - 388,208 for make diagonal?
    why so perfect ;-; , nice as usual alacat


  • Purity
    00:32:651 (6) - 108,100.. if you put in 164,64. i think newbie can't read this pattern and newbie will get miss here
    00:32:651 (6) - make like http://puu.sh/46kVb.jpg ? blue tick not fit in here imo
    00:37:832 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938072 for more neat?
    00:50:651 (6) - whistle in head?
    01:02:105 (4) - ^
    01:11:105 (3) - ^ (to follow vocal imo)
    01:20:651 (4) - ^
    01:29:378 (2) - ^
    01:46:014 (1) - add finish too?
    01:51:196 (2) - whistle in head?
    02:20:651 (3) - 60,276 for flow?


Good Luck ~ :3
alacat
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3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat

Fycho wrote:

[ alacatty]

  • Hihi~alacat^^ :D 　yo Fycho :3/ :D
    00:37:832 (2) –I suggest you try this rhythm I want to put a whistle at here. 00:38:378 -

    00:40:287 (1) – move to 00:40:287 – no change.
    01:16:832 (5) –remove head’ whistle and add whistle to slider’s end nice♪ fix all my pattern.
    01:21:196 (4) -^
    01:32:105 (5) -^
    02:33:778 (2) –reduce volume because I think whistle is too noisy changed the volume 20%

Xinely wrote:


  • Alamoe *runs* xDDDD ;) Xinely ;)
    00:44:378 (2) - spacing inconsistency (0,91x) *oops* fix :3
    00:51:469 (1) - remove NC for consistency? emm keep on now.
    01:08:378 (2) - 388,208 for make diagonal? ok!
    why so perfect ;-; , nice as usual alacat Thank you <3
Thank you for modding :D

http://puu.sh/471yY.zip
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Xinely's mod

Xinely wrote:

from m4m in my queue :3
thanks 4 mod mine.. here's my mod


  • Purity
    00:32:651 (6) - 108,100.. if you put in 164,64. i think newbie can't read this pattern and newbie will get miss here OK
    00:32:651 (6) - make like http://puu.sh/46kVb.jpg ? blue tick not fit in here imoChanged
    00:37:832 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938072 for more neat?Nice
    00:50:651 (6) - whistle in head?OK
    01:02:105 (4) - ^OK
    01:11:105 (3) - ^ (to follow vocal imo) BGM could cover it
    01:20:651 (4) - ^ ^
    01:29:378 (2) - ^ ^
    01:46:014 (1) - add finish too? Whistle is enoughXD
    01:51:196 (2) - whistle in head? OK
    02:20:651 (3) - 60,276 for flow? Nice..but current one is not bad :p


Good Luck ~ :3
Thx for mod! Updated~
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
random mod
好安静的曲子
General
大体上这么些建议：
  1. 排版：两个及以上control points的滑条是贝塞尔曲线，它并不包含圆弧，所以想要blanket多加control points比较好，比如00:29:651 (1,2) -
  2. 音效：很多3/4的滑条可以消尾音，其他有些也可以消，这个你自己看；另外soft的clap为何浪费不用捏
Sincerity
我有强迫症所以挑了点一看就感觉巨不和谐的地方：
  1. 很多地方都可以blanket，似乎有这个意思但都没做好的样子，不知道你是否想改：
    00:29:651 (1,2,3) -
    00:34:832 (2,3) -
    00:44:923 (1,2) -
    00:53:651 (1,3) -
    01:31:014 (4,1) -
    02:10:560 (2,3) -
    02:13:287 (1,2,3) -
  2. 不用确认ds光用肉眼但就可以看出这些都不是正五边形/五角星，似乎摆正五边形/五角星也没有破坏什么梗，那为何不来一发呢
    01:24:196 (1,2,3,4,5) -
    02:04:287 (2,3,4,5,6) -
    02:17:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  3. 01:06:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - 全部弄弯（咦不要想歪w
  4. 02:33:778 (2) - 这后面的滑条尾音都能消了

    看了一下前面人mod，似乎节奏方面比较拙计。从个人来说就player的角度看，除了某个蓝线开打的滑条略违和外其余均ok，当然那里似乎也可以换成其他梗的样子，这个倒不是很勉强
Purity
00:43:832 (5) - 不是跟vocal么，这个滑条怎么回事，宁可空拍换个梗
01:48:196 (1,2,3,4) - 做成一个弧度的比较好

其实个人觉得这曲子不太适合用折线滑条0.0
Alacatty
low down ur first timing point's volume to 20%, for there're few objs and hs appeared in ur diff which can be heard easily and clearly
and actually i think ur diff's hs volume are all a bit high except kiai, and lack of variety except the end, maybe u can give it a little change, it would be more vivid even it's Easy diff imo :3
02:24:196 (2) - arc or some smooth Bézier curve can be better than polygonal one here imo

others are just good
这图太安静了mod得快睡着233
good luck
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