Wolf wrote:

Hi ♫
From my Modding Queue

General
Seems really good to me, it's ready imo. Tkx~

Easy
I can't add much stuff here, it's already pretty much done.
00:57:226 (3) - Add break after this? I know you've made the same on your other diffs for a consistency, but well, it suits very well in an easy diff imo.
hmm, not neccessary, didn't change

Normal
Same here, seems pretty solid.
00:09:012 (1) - Uhh, move to the center of the grid so you can make 00:08:297 (5,1,2) - symmetric ? x:296 y:252
I tried but can't get them symmetric for the flow is just like that =.= Ok I'll reconsider about it if someone else mention it again

Hard
00:39:370 (1,2,1,1) - Looks pretty hard for me to read those, probably because of the overlap, but well, they are playable, I just don't like they way they were done. I think they're Ok
00:47:584 (3) - Not correctly stacked with 00:46:155 (1) - Fix it with manual stacking. fixed
00:52:941 (3) - Suggesting moving this and 00:55:798 (1) - to x:152 y:272 for a better stacking placement under 00:54:012 (4) - fixed
01:09:013 (2) - Not perfectly stacked with 01:07:941 (3) - fixed

Angel
00:15:084 (5) - Replacing a whistle for a clap sounds much better imo. Ok you're the second one to point out this pattern. I'll do the change if the third appears, though I love the current ones...
00:20:798 (5) - ^
00:26:155 (5) - The overlap with 00:26:869 (1) - could've been improved a bit more imo. well actually I don'tmeant to stack them, I just want slider1 to cross 6, Oh well, this point may be changed in the future.
00:39:369 (2) - Hmm, not sure what I'd do with this one, I usually don't place objects off in the grid, what do you think? really important point! I didn't even notice. fixed by making the slider curved
00:41:870 (6) - Needs a better stack with 00:40:084 (1) - fixed
01:04:727 (1,2) - Don't quite like the overlap of this two sliders. Move somewhere else? If you're fine with them it's ok. hmm nice opinion, changed the arrangement
01:17:048 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Even this being the hardest diff of your mapset, I really don't agree on hiding those notes like that, if you can consider that like a "challenge" of your map, It's alright then. yeah, I'll preserve this as the best part for my map and for myself. Let's see how far they can go.

Nice work here, I'll drop my star:
Good luck.

1. If you don't use breaks, maybe disable the letterbox?

• -- Looks good to me.

• - 00:42:583 (1) You could make this slider much better, maybe like this
  - 00:48:297 (4) - If you can hear the voice, this note needs a whistle
  - 01:20:976 (3) - I suggest to move this slider in this part because is making a overlap with (2)

• - 00:30:083 (2) - Sorry but you can't make that, this slider is hidden under the slider (3), you must to move in another place please
  - 00:40:440 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it perhaps?
  - 00:47:583 (3) - Make this slider with the new system from sliders
  - 00:55:797 (1) - Whoops, another note, you should to move it to avoid the confusion when you play

• - 00:15:083 (5) - Perhaps replace this whistle for a clap for keep the drum? Sounds good to me
  - 00:20:797 (5) - Same ^

MoodyRPG wrote:

Boo ~

General

1. If you don't use breaks, maybe disable the letterbox?

fixed

Easy

• -- Looks good to me.

thx

Normal

• - 00:42:583 (1) You could make this slider much better, maybe like this fixed, it really looks better now
  - 00:48:297 (4) - If you can hear the voice, this note needs a whistle fixed
  - 01:20:976 (3) - I suggest to move this slider in this part because is making a overlap with (2)

fixed, nice idea

Hard

• - 00:30:083 (2) - Sorry but you can't make that, this slider is hidden under the slider (3), you must to move in another place please hmm, I'll think about it, not changing it currently for I think they are fine in playtest (the body of the slider2 are clearly visiable)
  - 00:40:440 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it perhaps? fixed
  - 00:47:583 (3) - Make this slider with the new system from sliders Oh...it used to be the way you want. But some say that it didn't overlap with the slider1 well so I made it like this... If it's OK then I won't change that.
  - 00:55:797 (1) - Whoops, another note, you should to move it to avoid the confusion when you play

fixed

Angel

• - 00:15:083 (5) - Perhaps replace this whistle for a clap for keep the drum? Sounds good to me Oh finally, this point has been point out for the third time=.= fixed as most of you want
  - 00:20:797 (5) - Same ^

fixed

Good map but I don't like these sliders in Easy and Normal, you could do better something but is only a suggestion for your future map, good luck

228,356,46513,1,0,0:0:0
371,257,46869,1,0,0:0:0
199,251,47047,1,0,0:0:0
335,357,47226,1,0,0:0:0
288,192,47405,1,0,0:0:0
228,356,47583,1,0,0:0:0

Genshin wrote:

sorry for being so late with the mod

[Normal]

OD3 fixed

00:13:297 (3,4,5) - 1 grid down changed the placement
00:49:190 (1) - move the begin of this slider to 00:49:369 - no , the melody of the BGM already started at the current time

[Hard]

OD5 fixed

00:56:511 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep consistency here fine now

[Angel]

00:42:584 (7) - please NO! =.= it connects the former and the latter sliders
00:46:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - fixed pattern for best shape and space:

228,356,46513,1,0,0:0:0
371,257,46869,1,0,0:0:0
199,251,47047,1,0,0:0:0
335,357,47226,1,0,0:0:0
288,192,47405,1,0,0:0:0
228,356,47583,1,0,0:0:0

changed the placement a bit, didn't make it a star-like jump because I don't want to do the same
01:16:870 (3,1,3,4,5,1,2,3) - not sure this pattern is rankable I'm not so sure either, but let's see


Ganbatte!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~

Angel

00:05:798(1,3) - maybe make this plancet more beautiful? http://puu.sh/1LANI fixed, looks nice now
00:11:155(3,3) - overlap looks not good fixed
00:15:797 - remove nc and add on slider 3 fixed
00:15:083(5) - add clap already fixed
00:18:476 - remove NC fixed
00:20:797 - ^ ^
00:39:012 - remove NC fixed
00:42:583 - add nc bcz you change speed fixed
01:00:976 - remove this note~ Without sounds better for me sorry for not changing, for a strong beat lands here
01:11:333 - here add note no, a gap feels nice
01:13:297(4,1) - omg >.< plz fix this terrible overlab bcz slider 1 not visible 0.0 actually not so bad in play test, the former slider disappears when the latter slider slides to the right (the beginning of the latter slider is slow)
01:16:155 - remove NC fixed
01:17:226(2,3) - stack better fixed
01:18:655(2,3) - ^ fixed
01:17:940 - add nc fixed
01:19:369 - ^ fixed

Hard

00:21:869(3,4) - hm better a little change this pattern http://puu.sh/1LB0d It will be more playable Really nice suggestion!
00:39:369(1,2,1,1,2,3) - plz change this pattern bcz it overlap and very confused place for hard hmm, not changing it currently but I'll consider about this
00:52:226(2,3) - stack it better fixed
00:52:940(3,4)- overlap~ plz fix this~ Looks really ugly >.< =.= Oh I'm sorry for that
00:56:512 - unstack this notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562532 Try this~ they already gone elsewhere

Normal

Distance spacing should be 0.8-1.0 on normal diffs~ Plz fix all spasing I asked a BAT about this and he said that it doesn't matter as long as it's reasonable and acceptable

00:09:726 - This pattern very hard for Normal~ http://puu.sh/1LBhW sorry I think they're nice now. The BPM is low so that this 1/4-sliders won't seem too hard
00:13:297 - remove this note and make slider 2 double tried but failed to make the flow good while obeying tee distance snap. So... not changing
00:21:512 - http://puu.sh/1LBjX playtested, I'm feeling NG, sorry.

E.t.c you should make this diff easier bcz Notes on blue tick it very hard for normal diffs~ I set long gaps before those hard-to-catch sliders, so I think they're not that unfriendly as you thought

Easy

00:26:512(1,2) - fix overlap http://puu.sh/1LBnN fixed
00:44:369(1,2) - fix overlap fixed

P.S Map looks a little weird~ You need more work and more mods~ Good luck

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi Here My Mod From My Queue (n.n)


[General]
(*)Would you recommend looking for a new MP3 i Listen Too Low fixed and polished
(*) You should correct the images, are the correct size 1024X764 fixed

[Easy]

HP Drain +1 not neccessary

(*) 00:08:298 (5) - Not sure but I think this might be difficult to understand for new players hmm I think they're fine due to the low BPM
(*) 01:03:655 (3) - ^ ^
(*) 00:23:655 (1,2) - check the distance snap please n.n I don't want to make them overlap, actually I think it doesn't that matter, just such a bit further.
(*) 00:31:513 (1) - might suggest do more aesthetic and beautiful this slider

SPOILER

fixed
(*) 00:39:370 (6) - move this note to X: 284 Y: 220 to form a perfect blanket fixed

[Normal]

(*) 00:09:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is too difficult for a normal ;______; =.= they'll learn about this. I suppose it'll not be that hard for this is a really slow song
(*) 00:36:869 (4,1) - This sudden change of pace so may fail to make new players,
I recommend this:

SPOILER

really nice point! fixed and changed a series of placement

[Hard]

(*) 00:40:798 (1) - could you do this to maintain a clean and playable pattern

SPOILER

Really nice of you for providing the patterns but sorry I just did some of them. I love the overlap as they are now.

Good luck with the map :3!
n.n

DX5536 wrote:

I enjoy the song everytime i hear it. But to bad it is not the full version. If it a OP version then please change the title. (Your choice to change it or not).
Good map !!!

Natsu wrote:

Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours:

SPOILER

- [Angel] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 236,190,140
Combo3 : 220,86,86

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 170,208,223
Combo2 : 1,139,133
Combo3 : 143,156,171

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 198,224,184
Combo2 : 217,227,236
Combo3 : 253,238,170

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,255,142
Combo3 : 138,74,86

Zero__wind wrote:

DX5536 wrote:

I enjoy the song everytime i hear it. But to bad it is not the full version. If it a OP version then please change the title. (Your choice to change it or not).
Good map !!!

Glad th/at you like this~
I dodn't have a good full ver. mp3, so...
The title I'll decide later.
Thx for reminding me
btw, on page 4 of this thread, Wiinter has given a link of full ver. mp3 link, maybe you'll need it~

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue M4M request

SPOILER

Easy
Clear

Normal
00:09:726 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too hard for Normal diff, fix this plz? I see,Will make it easier if pointed out by others once more
00:48:298 (4) - make 1/1 slider plz fixed

Hard
00:47:583 (3) - add soft finish on end and delete whistle fixed

Angel
00:48:297 (7) - add soft finish on start and delete all the whistle same
01:15:798 (6,7) - hard to hit, reduce DS little? nope, I think it's fine acutally thee distance between 6 and 7 is shorter than the distance between 5 and 6

Good clam song lol good luck for rank!

meetmeetdee wrote:

hi - m4m requested in game.
有点来迟了的Mod 没事的 考试时间嘛 大家都忙
都是一些个人建议
Let's Start!

[General]
- 在标题加上（Short Ver.）？ 嗯 看来是要加的
- 没有video的吗？ 个人觉得video效果不太好 而且尺寸小 而且有些镜头需要被河蟹 所以就没加
- 00:05:441 - 00:11:869 + 00:32:584 - 01:23:298 - missing claps? 有点奇怪 查了 没什么问题
[Easy]
- 有些过急和密集的感觉+滑条颇短 嗯 是有点 不过因为这歌BPM很低 所以其实还好
00:07:941 - 用这个吗？ 嗯还不错 会简单一些 fixed
00:14:726（4） - 用这个吗？ fixed
00:19:013（3） - 加reverse吗？ 不加了 节奏有点密
00:21:513（2,3） - 用这个吗？ 其实还可以 不过没加 一是因为加了也和歌词不很温和 二是因为我的note3是stack在滑条1的尾巴上的 换成滑条的话往哪边都不好看
00:28:655（3） - 用滑条？]this 不改 这里要和它们前一个combo的结构保持一致性
00:32:941（2,3） - 这样放好像较好]this sorry 我喜欢现在这个样子
00:42:584（2,3,4） - 用这个吗？ 它其实原来是和你想的一样的 是一个开头用红锚点变速的滑条 不过被人说那种东西放在Easy不好 但是因为持续时间很长 所以弄成一般形状的滑条会破坏flow 所以就不打算改了
00:50:441（1,2） - 用滑条？如果用滑条的话，这样放好像较好this 其实都还好啦 我是想用3个note来配合歌词中的3个音的
- 个人认为这些reverse太短，看你换不换一下吧 嗯 明白你的意思 在E最好是不要用到1/4的没错 看看吧 有可能会改

[Normal]
- 在蓝线上放note有点奇怪 为了跟歌词才那样放的 大概还好 毕竟在那之前有足够长的准备时间
00:12:940（2,3） - 用这个或这个？ 鉴于这个点不是第一次被提出来了 就改了吧 采用了第一种 第二种的flow不好
00:17:940（2） - 用这个吗？ fixed
00:21:155 - 加note fixed
00:22:226（5） - 这样？ 没改 不太必要
00:26:155 - 00:27:047 - 这样？ fixed
00:28:297 - 加note 不加 位置很难摆
00:31:155 - 加note 加了note会被后面的滑条2的尾巴碰到 不美观
00:55:797（2） - 用直滑条 不，为了包后面的3
01:06:512 - 加note
01:06:869 - 加note
01:07:940 - 加note
01:08:297 - 加note
01:17:940 - 加note
01:18:297 - 加note
01:19:369 - 加note
01:19:726 - 加note 这些空当就是为了不让后面的蓝线开始的滑条太难才留的 所以一律不加东西
01:21:690（1） - 缩短这个由01:21:869开始 不改了 要跟vocal就跟到底
- 有点急，例如00:09:726（2,3,4,5,6），对于Normal可能有点难，但个人认为都可以接受 嗯 理解，毕竟歌比较慢 其实还好

[Hard]
AR + 1 AR已经7了 不会加了 这么慢的歌 它曾经还是AR6呢
- 不同节奏的重叠，略坑 不是很理解你的意思 应该还好吧……
00:22:227（4,5） - 这样？ 不顺
00:26:513（2,3,4,5,6,1） - 有点乱，把00:27:941（1）放到别处？ 不太打算改这个梗
00:30:797（3） - 用弯滑条 用弯滑条又包不住前一个滑条 我还是想用直的配合后面的滑条 好看些 我觉得
00:39:370（1,2,3,1） - 没叠好 fixed
00:47:583（3） - 未拉好，或许这样放？this 不动 想和1重叠
00:47:583（3,4） - 没叠好 fixed 感觉最近的osu编辑器里面note和滑条头尾重叠判定有bug
00:48:655 - 加note 有点怪
00:51:870（1） - 用note？ 关系不大吧 没改
00:52:227（2） - 未拉好 应该可以了
00:56:511（1,2,3,4,5） - 增加彼此的距离? 和00:55:797（1,2）一样有点坑 其实这对于这图整体的物件间距来讲已经不算很近了……
01:06:513（3,1） - 略坑，逆转01:06:513（3）的方向？ CTRL+G是吧？ 改了
01:11:155（4,1） - 距离略坑 换了位置
01:21:691（1） - 缩短这个由01:21:869开始 不改 跟人声


[Angel]
AR + 1 暂时没动 毕竟BPM100都不到 AR9感觉太快了
- 不善于Insane的，只是个人意见
00:15:797（7,8,1） - 距离略坑 改了排版
00:25:441（1,2,3,4,5） - 放星形？ 不 这和前面2个3连打的位置是呼应的
00:37:583（3,5） - 方向向上吗？this 不动了 我觉得这样挺好
00:49:012（1,3） - 同上
00:50:798（2,3,4,5,6） - 这星形是故意的吗？ 这里有什么很奇怪的么 是和后面的滑条位置照应的
01:15:798（6,7） - 按Ctrl + G？ 改了 好像有点意思
01:22:226（2,1） - 按Ctrl + G？ ^
01:22:762（1,2） - 按Ctrl + G？ 没啥必要 没动

第一次mod图，试试看吧。加油！！

TheVileOne wrote:

Late mod is better than no mod at all.

Datzuke-Oni wrote:

I like

TheVileOne wrote:

SPOILER

Late mod is better than no mod at all. Yeah, it's true

Easy

00:08:670 (1,2) - Should be 1.0. fixed
00:12:241 (1,2) - Align better. fixed
00:14:027 (3,4) - Bad transition. Don't be lazy now. Oh, note actually lazy, fine now imo
00:29:384 (1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't look right. 1 is higher than 3. Pattern should be level. fixed
00:47:241 (2,3) - Not the greatest looking pattern IMO. Maybe try a smoother transition? Sliders like this 00:47:955 (3) - are rough and don't make great looking patterns usually. example pattern: http://puu.sh/1QKAt You could keep in mind 00:49:026 (1,2) - which is smooth and create a symmetry pattern here. (also take note that just because I don't mention previous sliders that are rough, doesn't invalidate my response. Smooth patterns generally look better. If you wanted to convert your other pattern, that is up to you.) fixed
00:59:027 (1,2,3) - Rough looking pattern. 3 looks disproportionately farther away from the rest of the pattern. 01:10:455 (1,2,3) - looks a lot better. Use this as a template. fixed

Normal

00:26:885 (2,3,4) - Maybe have some more curve here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578744 fixed in another way
00:42:599 (4) - Curve could wrap around the note better with an extra point. http://puu.sh/1QL8j It's more polished IMO. changed without an extra point, cause I think it's not that nice-looking with your idea
00:45:814 (3) - Unsnapped Oops
00:46:171 (1,2,3,4) - all these blankets can be improved. Make each slider starts center within the previous slider's arc. make them delicate
00:59:385 (3,4) - Repeat slider fits better here IMO. want to keep consistency wth the latter one
01:17:242 (3) - finish on end? It would give focus to these parts. Ok, add in each diff
01:18:670 (2) - ^ ^

Hard
You have unsnapped notes- check aimod. fixed all

00:13:669 (4,1) - Jump feels forced to me. IMO i wouldn't have a jump here. But it could just my mouse being weird. not feel like a change
00:16:526 (5,6) - Not lined up. Move 5 up a few grids. changed 6 instead
00:19:740 (6,1) - Kind of far for the pace of the notes, and the BPM. Don't necessarily have to fix, but it's probably not the most proper way to represent the beat. not changing it currently, will reconsider
00:21:527 (2,3,4) - Fix the overlap? fixed
00:22:954 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just can't imagine the music like this. I think it's important to make sure the map is a representation of the music, and these kind of cross pattern just seem foreign and unlike the music. also i think the jump segment is here 00:23:669 (2,3) - not at 1,2. It's better to have a jump there rather than before it IMO. hmm, I made it like this for I think the vocal seems fluently so I set jumps at its either side
00:27:955 (1,2) - Normal sampleset doesn't sound right to me. Actually it's probably that fact that these are sliders instead of notes that makes it sound so bad. They seem to sound alright without the normal samplesets added. Also I think it would be better if 2 was parallel to 1. Please use the same angle for both sliders. Example; http://puu.sh/1QMbJ fixed
00:30:811 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap if possible. fixed a series of placement
00:47:597 (3) - Strange slider. I suggest something that fits better. (something with a consistent curve) fixed
00:54:027 (4) - Not sure I like overlapping a slider like this. hmm not gonna change
00:58:669 (1,2,3) - I suggest equal spacing here. It just plays a lot more intuitively. It even forms a nice pattern http://puu.sh/1QMqC fixed
01:10:455 (1,2,3,4) - Angle is off. Try moving 01:10:991 (3) - to x 260 y 233 and 01:11:169 (4) - to x 251 y 245 fixed in another way
01:15:097 (2,3) - Transition isn't straight. Move second point of 3 to x 232 y 283. fixed
01:19:384 (3,1,2) - Lower spacing to 1.50? Actually i recommend you just remove 1. It's not following the beat and is unneeded. Plays better without it. [/color]
01:20:098 (4,5,6) - You should fix transitions that stack upward. If you manual place the stack to prevent this, it would be better. Try moving 01:20:991 (5,6) to x 194 y 163, - . thought I mad them nice now

Angel

00:12:419 (3,4,5) - Jumps not based off of the beat >.< It would be better if the singer was actually singing on beat. Oh well. =.=
00:20:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - Start on the horizontal line? It's a better approach IMO. Ok
00:28:491 (7,1,2,3) - I don't like that you slowed down the pace so suddenly. You can more naturally transition to the slow pace by increasing the spacing at 1,2. Consider doing so. I think that I indicates this with a finish sound=.=
00:59:027 (1,2,3) - Flows badly. a simple triple here would suffice. Ok then
01:00:098 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this plays even worse. Where are the beats? i can barely hear them but yet you expect players to play large jumps based off them. You should delete 01:00:991 (3) - , and 01:01:170 (4,5,1) - should have the same spacing since they go together. I highly recommend sticking to this timeline. This is the beat. http://puu.sh/1QNru Anything other than this is overmapped. hmm, you're right in a certain extent
01:04:205 (5,6,1) - This is unnecessarily confusing. Stacking 6,1 seems like the proper approach here. It sounds like it should be stacked. fixed
01:15:455 (4,5) - Such an unnatural jump IMO. This transition is very awkward and not like the beat at all. I highly recommend lowering the spacing. lower the spacing for this has been mentioned more than once
01:22:776 (1,2) - Nazi- isn't exactly straight fixed

Conclusion

This beatmap set is rough. Your pattern usage includes very sharp transitions that are hit or miss in fitting the song in general. You're lucky that falls under personal preference. Keep getting opinions, it's not far away from a bubble, but you have to weed badly flowing patterns. Thx for the opinions, I didn't really consider about the transition things

Sonnyc wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Late mod is better than no mod at all.

SUPER sorry for the Super delay ;_; owo

Most of your notes are unsnapped by +1. Resnap them all (aimod doesn't catch) fixed but not sure if fixed all

Easy:

00:39:741 (1) - Some more symmetry please fixed
00:45:098 (2) - Make this a curve to interact with (1) fixed
00:59:384 (2) - Uhh,, 1 grid left? fixed
01:20:812 (2) - Add soft-Finish at the end add in each diff

Normal:

00:28:312 - Add a note nope
00:37:956 (1) - Honestly, I didn't liked this slider.. since it's too sharp. (also in Easy) =.=
00:57:242 (4) - Place this somewhere else fixed
01:05:813 (3) - Whistle
01:07:063 (1,2) - ^
01:17:242 (3,2) - ^ not fond of these

Hard:

00:16:704 (6) - Make a line with (5) fixed
00:31:527 (1) - Make the spacing like what you've done at 00:30:097 (2,3) fixed
00:40:812 (1) - Line with previous slider fixed
00:42:598 (3) - Overlap with the previous slider? I don't think this as a good idea.. If you want to leave this, at least try to follow 00:41:527 (2) make them overlap better
01:00:098 (1) - Neatly please fixed in a certain extent

Angel:

-- Some were playable, but lots of jumps weren't that expectable to me... changed a bit=.=

00:48:311 (7) - Make the shake(?) little weaker. Current shape isn't perfect for me fixed
00:50:098 (4) - 1 Grid Right to not make this touch (2) fixed
00:57:241 (5) - More symmetry fixed
01:15:634 (5) - Unexpected jump, I think..

Rock Forever wrote:

kurosanyan's taiko oni:

00:22:122 (1) - I think that a slider must be better at this point, instead of the spinner With this bpm, it's 1/8 sliders, so no.

01:14:027 (1) - 01:14:384 (4) - just another little thing, this RRRR must sound better with a RBBR. I'll check this one when I can go on osu and will edit my post

and if you want, set the initial slider velocity to 2.0 No I prefer to keep this SV.

• 00:12:241 - 00:32:598这一段感觉clap声音略大 可以考虑减一点音量

• 00:39:741(1)whistle换成soft的finish？ 这里哨音感觉不舒服 其他diff也是
  00:51:170(3)改成这样的节奏试试
  SPOILER

  

• 00:18:312(3,4)感觉这样排要好一些
  SPOILER

  
  
  00:27:241(4)可以再多折一次
  00:49:205(5)spin可以在后面的短白线开始

• 00:16:527(5)x:32 y:243
  00:32:955(4,5,6)排成这个样子好看些
  SPOILER

  
  00:56:527(1)这个nc换成combo colour2 1,3的差别实在太小

• 00:14:920(4)左一格
  00:47:062(2,3,4,5)下一格

Melt wrote:

:3
mod as request

[General]

• 00:12:241 - 00:32:598这一段感觉clap声音略大 可以考虑减一点音量

嘛 不错的建议

[Easy]

• 00:39:741(1)whistle换成soft的finish？ 这里哨音感觉不舒服 其他diff也是 试了下……差不多 没改
  00:51:170(3)改成这样的节奏试试http://puu.sh/1XLLo

想留后门的白线上的finish音……

[Normal]

• 00:18:312(3,4)感觉这样排要好一些
  SPOILER

  
  感觉所谓不大 排版不太好改><
  00:27:241(4)可以再多折一次 有人建议我后面加note我觉得flow不太好 这样改好像还可以……虽然我不是特别喜欢这种这么长的reverse折返2次 不过好像还是无可厚非吧 改了 把后面的滑条位置也调合适了
  00:49:205(5)spin可以在后面的短白线开始

没必要

[Hard]

• 00:16:527(5)x:32 y:243 3和5都移到(33,243)了
  00:32:955(4,5,6)排成这个样子好看些
  SPOILER

  
  还可以 不过感觉不顺手 没动
  00:56:527(1)这个nc换成combo colour2 1,3的差别实在太小

嗯 不错

[Angel]

• 00:14:920(4)左一格 fixed
  00:47:062(2,3,4,5)下一格

不明所以 没动

大概就是这些 加油

Autumn wrote:

Hi
其实你post的时候我的queue是Open for M4M only的...嘛既然已经po了我就来看看吧 唔没有注意到……非常感谢
[General]
Angel难度不错，其他几个难度短滑条太多，这种flow缺乏连续性，而且短滑条在控制flow的方向上存在缺陷（因为你没办法把他掰弯..低难度下只能采取头尾相连的形式，如Normal里的00:09:742 (2,3,4,5,6)，这样不是很好看。） /。\ 感觉那时候散点摆得很烂就没好意思摆……
低难度下多试试单点叠长滑条，而不是连续的短滑条~ 可以理解

[Easy]
除了Flow还可改更流畅一些以外，没问题 自己改了一点点

[Normal]
00:24:205 (2) - 放下去：fixed
00:26:171 (1) - 向下弯：fixed
00:59:742 (4,5) - 调整：fixed 以及后面的

[Hard]
00:20:097 (1,2,3) - 这种flow不好看啊..给你一个备用方案： 采用了类似的形状 但是1和2是错开的
00:48:848 (4) - 蓝线弱起节奏感不好，尽量避免这类情况。建议把00:47:598 (3) 改成二分拍，然后再加个长滑条填充： 类似改法 只是我把滑条4拉成四分之三拍去掉了5
00:33:669 (6) - 对准00:32:777 (3) ： 不是很喜欢这感觉 没动 会再考虑

[Angel]
01:15:634 (5,6,7,1) - 建议去掉01:15:634 (5) ，后面三个改成三角跳：（因为原来的跳从蓝线弱拍开始） fixed
01:17:955 (1,2,3) - 滑条挡note..有点危险。错开的话反而更好看： finally它们被拉出来了 不过和前面的长滑条是错开的

That's all.
希望能帮到你.

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:

1. Inconsistency in Tags:

1. 00:20:098 (4) - why don't you try something like this? it will br more simpler to read for beginners
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:26:527 (1,2) - spacing
3. 00:30:455 (3,1) - spacing
4. 00:32:955 (2,3) - spacing
5. 00:37:598 (5) - this slider is not simmetric :X
6. 00:44:384 (1,2,1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent here
7. 00:52:598 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern can be confusefull for beginners, try something like that:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:55:812 (1,2,3) - make spacing consistent with other parts continue to using 1.0
9. 01:02:598 (2,3,1) - spacing o3o
10. 01:14:027 (2,3) - spacing

1. 00:54:027 (4,1) - spacing

1. 00:10:098 (4.5) - remove one repeat from this sliders it will fit better with the music
   
2. 00:51:884 (1) - it's overlapped with spinner comboburst

1. 00:22:122 (1) - this spinner is so short ; 3 ;

1. 00:16:527 (8) - this circle touch HP drain
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:42:598 (1) - i think this slider will be cuter and it will frow better if it has a U form

Andrea wrote:

Call me back once you've fixed Lally's mod.

Kurosanyan wrote:

The spinner in the oni is not too short so there's nothing to change in this mod for my taiko.

Lally wrote:

Hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥

[General]

1. Inconsistency in combo colours:

Angel :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 236,190,140
Combo3 : 220,86,86

Hard :
Combo1 : 198,224,184
Combo2 : 217,227,236
Combo3 : 253,238,170

Normal :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,255,142
Combo3 : 138,74,86

Easy :
Combo1 : 170,208,223
Combo2 : 1,139,133
Combo3 : 143,156,171
I think this may not be a problem since I used different BGs

1. Inconsistency in Tags:

Angel : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel
Hard : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel
Normal : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel
Easy : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel
Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel Kurosanyan
Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni : visual novel galgame Opening December when there is no angel Kurosanyan
fixed

[Easy]
suggestion : why don't you start your diffs with a spinner that start 00:02:955 - and end 00:05:813 hmm, an good idea, I also think a spinner is needed for an Easy diff. But this means changing this diff's offset. And I don't know if I need to change all the other diffs' offset together. Will discuuss this with Andrea

1. 00:20:098 (4) - why don't you try something like this? it will br more simpler to read for beginners Ok fixed
2. 00:26:527 (1,2) - spacing fixed
3. 00:30:455 (3,1) - spacing fixed
4. 00:32:955 (2,3) - spacing not changing it currently for I think this looks nice and as we know, the distance between ths two sliders are actually not as far as it shows. I think begginners should learn that it's not neccessary to move the cursor to the very end of a slider.
5. 00:37:598 (5) - this slider is not simmetric :X Oh fixed
6. 00:44:384 (1,2,1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent here fixed
7. 00:52:598 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern can be confusefull for beginners, try something like that Ok the stacks are gone
8. 00:55:812 (1,2,3) - make spacing consistent with other parts continue to using 1.0 adjusted (2) and (3)'s distace inbetween but didn't chaged the one between (1) and (2) , the reason is the same as I mentioned above
9. 01:02:598 (2,3,1) - spacing o3o ^
10. 01:14:027 (2,3) - spacing ^

[Normal]

1. 00:54:027 (4,1) - spacing Changed a smaller blancket

[Hard]

1. 00:10:098 (4.5) - remove one repeat from this sliders it will fit better with the music nope, actually you're folling the dums and I'm following the melody inbehind
2. 00:51:884 (1) - it's overlapped with spinner comboburst Ok they've gone elsewhere

[Angel]

1. 00:16:527 (8) - this circle touch HP drain fixed
2. 00:42:598 (1) - i think this slider will be cuter and it will frow better if it has a U form I know what you mean but sorry for not changing. Because 00:40:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3) - all these are actually a suit of objects and I want them fit each other.

Zero__wind wrote:

Andrea wrote:

Call me back once you've fixed Lally's mod.

Sorry for this delay
I'm facing some problem pulling through the bugs of the editor currently =.=
Will fix and update asap
Thx!

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Colours between the difficulties are inconsistent.

Andrea wrote:

Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni

00:22:122 (1) - Do this instead of the spinner.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent and there is also an extra useless space.

Colours between the difficulties are inconsistent.

Offset is wrong, use 5.835 and resnap all notes, green lines, etc.

~Easy~

00:36:884 (4) - New combo.

~Normal~

Reduce AR by 1 tick.

01:00:099 (5) - New combo.
01:01:528 (1) - Remove new combo.

~Hard~

00:52:954 (3,4) - They look pretty bad to me.
01:07:955 (3) - Hidden slider repeat.

Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni

00:22:122 (1) - Do this instead of the spinner.

~Angel~

00:39:384 (8) - Random and unexpected slowdown. currently with no good idea, and actually I don't think the present one is bad
00:48:311 (7) - Ugly slider. make it ordinary
01:14:027 (1) - This slider is really hard to see, please don't overlap it. Cgabged tgoroughly from here
01:15:812 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I find this part pretty confusing, please remake it. Let's see the new arrangement

This map still need some more work.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Mod time! Sorry for the delay :/

[General:]

• Would be better if you can find other BGs for the Taiko difficulties, so all the difficulties have different BGs. In my opinion will look much better having different BGs in all diffs. instead of doing that.
• Preview Time: The Preview Point is Slighty different comparing all difficulties. In Easy diff. the Preview Point is in 59049 and in the other difficulties is 58692. So, you must make it consistent between all the difficulties.
• 00:05:835 (1) - This Note sounds really Slow comparing with the music. Try using 45% in the Red line, will sound properly then.
• 00:06:549 (T) - In this Green Line try adding 10% in the Volume because sounds also low in all the diffs.

[Easy:]

• Settings:
--> The HP Drain Rate is a bit low in this difficulty. Try increasing it by 1 Tick (HD+1)

• 00:21:549 (2) - In the Repetition, sounds better a finish instead of your Custom Whistle. So, it is better if you replace it here sorry but I'm not fond of a finish here. There is one later.
• 00:51:192 (3,1) - This pattern sounds weird, it is not following properly anything in the music. To follow better the song (the Vocal especially) I suggest you to do something like this:
• 00:54:049 (1) - If you did the above suggestion, I feel this New Combo unnecesary. In my opinion it is better if you remove it from here
• 00:59:763 (3) - Replace this Slider in 2 Single Notes, the kiai it is the most important part in the song, so it is better if you starting it with a Click on a Note Didn't change for I think it's not neccessary, I consider the vocal here is long, so I placed a slider, also, to keep consistent with the latter one
• 01:07:263 (5) - I'd delete this Note, can be difficult to follow properly this pattern with these 1/4.. Maybe a rest deleating this note is the best option delete even more
• 01:22:977 (3) - I think that a Soft Whistle sounds better than a Normal Whistle in this Note. Would be better if you replace that. I know you mean a soft finish, changed

• One more thing at the end: Add a Spinner (at least) to make a variety in the score, if you don't do that we will have a lot of similar scores if the map is in the Ranked Status. that's what Lally has already spoken and what I was considering. Changed each diffs' offset and add a spinner in Easy

- In general you did a good job with this difficulty, anyways I dislike the way that you used the spacing. In my opinion you should re-arrange all the patterns using 1.10x in the Distance Spacing, give it a try pls. Did it. Better now.

[Normal:]

• 00:27:263 (4) - The second Reverse Arrow in this Slider is almost covered by the hitburst of (3), you should do something to fix the mistake because it is unrankable stuff.
• 00:29:763 (2) - Move this Note to x:220 y:192 for a better flow
• 00:48:334 (4) - *A bit Nazi*- But this pattern can be clean up a bit more. Actually the previous Slider (2) gives a bad ''Hitburst Overlap'' to this Slider, to avoid that overlap you can try blanketing, like here: didn't fix in your way, but I did fixed a little and I think it's fine now
• 00:56:549 (2) - I would remove the Whistle from the Sliderbody, actually sounds annoying to me. It's a mistake. Removed the whistle on the body and remain the ones on the head and the end
• 00:57:084 (x) - Hmm.. A note here is pretty necessary imo.
• 01:06:370 - 01:06:906 - Why did not you map this section? You did it in Easy, and easy diff. is supposed to be easier than a Normal of course. You should map this blank section as you did in easy, will play much better
• 01:07:799 - 01:08:334 - (^)
• 01:17:799 - 01:18:334 - (^)
• 01:19:227 - 01:19:763 - (^) Actuall I'm afraid to make them too difficult(the notes start on blue tick), so I left them blank to give newbie players time to react. But, I filled the blank as you and some earlier modders suggested
• 01:22:977 (4) - Same as Easy, use Soft Finish instead of Normal.

- Not bad, but map this blanks spaces mentioned in my mod, it provides a bad flow imo.

[Hard:]

• 00:10:120 (4,5) - These Sliders with 2 Repetitions don't flow that good, try using a pattern like this will flow better.. I think they're fine and didn't change anything. You know that when players clicked a kick-slider, they won't move their cursor to follow, but stay and head for the next item.
• 00:41:549 (2,3) - This kind of patterns are not to my liking, because they don't provide a good visibility of the pattern.. If I were you I'd change it inmediatley but it is up to you because we are talking about a personal think. sorry for that, but not changing.
• 00:49:406 (Spin) - This Spinner sounds really random at the end, would be better if you map it instead. made it end earlier and add a few stuffs and I think they're fine now
• 00:52:977 (3,4) - Same thing as 00:41:549 =.=
• 00:56:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reversed pattern have always a bad flow, and this is not an exception it flows pretty bad. I suggest you to do a pattern more like this:
• 01:01:906 (2,3) - This Spacing is really random, because it doesn't fits with the music it is a really slow section and you used a jump, it doesn't make sense. Reduce the Spacing between the Notes pls big changes.
• 01:03:334 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Again, this is really random, it is the kiai section but the section of the song is really slow, reduce the spacing between these Objects too pls, it doesn't make sense. as above
• 01:21:727 (1) - This Slider is not covering properly the Vocal, since it is a Hard would be better if you follow the Rhythm closely, so decompress this Slider in 2. 1st Slider start in 01:21:727 and finish in 01:21:906 and the 2nd Slider starts in 01:22:084 and finish in 01:22:263. fixed in another way

- This difficulty went well till the Kiai Time, I don't understand why you add unnecesary Jumps in a really slow part of the song. In addition, they were placed randomly, a little tip, if you want to add break in slow songs try adding them in Combo changes especially because on other places they will look random and without sense.

[Angel:]

- Wow, I dislike this diff at all. Sorry , it has the same problems as the kiai in Hard diff. A lot of unnecesaries and big jumps in a really slow song, this is not the kind of Insane that fits with this song. Would be unnecesary to mod that, but please reduce the jumps as much as you can because play bad with this song. I imagined a low level Insane before to see the diff. but when I saw the diff. I felt dissapointed really . I'm sorry for that but I'm not gonna fix much. I did some changes during Kiai, for I think it's the only part which is too hard.

Btw, Both Taiko Difficulties look technically fine for me.. Glad to hear that

Well, that's all.
Easier diffs. and Taiko diffs. are well designed and should be ready to go, but Hardest one need more work before to be consider for Ranking, it looks repetitive but a lot of unnecessary jumps for a slow song..
Best of luck with your map (and please don't give up)

Athena Tennos wrote:

神馬情況。。。感覺好厲害的樣子/w\

- t e n n y a - wrote:

~ M4M from My Queue ~

Hi Zero__wind

General

1. Add to tags: eroge ?

Don't know if it;s neccessary, not changing for now

Easy

1. 00:27:262 (2)- : Fix the distance pls n_n. Current one is 1.08 Oh I think it's fine
2. 00:34:405 (1)- : move this to x256 y80 would be nice fixed
3. 00:39:762 (1)- : make the distance 1.13? current one is too close imo fixed
4. 00:43:334 (3)- : 1grid up?

halfNothing on Normal

Hard

1. 00:31:548 / 00:31:549 (1)- : try this slider?
   

   105,269,31549,6,0,P|60:240|48:192,2,100,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   ok
2. 00:56:912 (3,4)- : Fix the distance? Q_Q

Oh big mistake

Angel

1. 00:39:405 (8)- : NC. Because change of slider velocity >_<

fixedthat's all good luck

qkenan wrote:

IRC mod~

SPOILER

16:38 Zero__wind: 求看图
16:38 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/175583 Haruna Ikeda - I hope so... [Angel]]
16:38 Zero__wind: remap完了
16:39 Zero__wind: 简单到炸
16:39 Zero__wind: Redl一下 加了hitsound
16:39 qkenan: dling
16:41 Zero__wind: ·改得我已经快不会再爱了
16:41 Zero__wind: 昨天夜里一直想梗想到趴在桌子上睡着了都没想出来 不能多说
16:42 qkenan: 好辛苦^
16:43 qkenan: so 良心
16:43 Zero__wind: 是啊……
16:44 Zero__wind: 随手HDSS了
16:44 qkenan: 粗打一遍下来，感觉基本可以了
16:45 qkenan: 有些滑条还是有点，嗯哼
16:45 qkenan: 没有overmap
16:46 Zero__wind: 有点0.0 ?
16:46 qkenan: 美观问题，小事
16:46 Zero__wind: 哦
16:46 Zero__wind: 至少感觉流畅多了是吧……
16:46 qkenan: 是的~
16:46 qkenan: 没有前作那种比较牵强的jump
16:47 Zero__wind: 这要再碰到连mod都不写直接枪毙掉的状况我真不会再爱了=。=
16:48 qkenan: =。=
16:48 qkenan: 可怜的孩子
16:49 qkenan: 00:32:607 (2,3,4,5,6) -
16:49 qkenan: 已经有点像是你招牌式的HD梗了、
16:50 qkenan: 00:36:179 (4) - 不好看
16:51 qkenan: 00:45:822 (1) - 从这开始很长一段都是一个方向转，感觉在短的slider方向上做点变化会好些，嘛，个人感觉
16:51 qkenan: 00:47:250 (4) - 比如这个Ctrl+G
16:52 qkenan: 00:52:250 (2) - 形状……
16:52 qkenan: 00:54:036 (1) - 形状……
16:53 Zero__wind: 嗯
16:53 qkenan: 00:57:250 (5) - 画个勺子就算了，别把棱角露出来
16:53 Zero__wind: 旋转问题上我很赞成……我感觉我一个方向都快转晕了
16:53 qkenan: 连续的几个同方向，是顺手，太多就是……嗯哼
16:54 Zero__wind: 对的
16:54 qkenan: 00:58:679
16:54 qkenan: 这开始的几个Drum音效有点突兀……
16:54 Zero__wind: 00:36:179 (4) - 这个有啥建议没 我当时画得时候就比较……#$%^&*()
16:54 Zero__wind: 那几个drum音不改了 每个diff都是的
16:55 qkenan: 哦，那没事
16:55 Zero__wind: 和伴奏比较搭的其实
16:55 qkenan: 00:36:179 (4) - 这个最简单就是对称着拉直
16:55 Zero__wind: 哦
16:56 qkenan: 至于别的复杂些可能更好看的改法我暂时也想不到233
16:56 Zero__wind: 嗯……我也想不到
16:56 Zero__wind: 刚mod完一张滑条非常艺术的图……
16:56 Zero__wind: 感觉技术拙计
16:57 qkenan: 可以偷偷改成my map，经常拿出来学习
16:57 qkenan: 01:09:750 (3) - 不要露棱角
16:57 Zero__wind: 嗯 把第四个锚点拆成两个好像就没问题了
16:58 qkenan: 01:16:179 (4) - 棱角，另外考虑下尾巴与①的stack？反正都是那种边缘距离差不多的那种摆法
16:58 Zero__wind: 哦
16:58 Zero__wind: 试试
16:59 qkenan: 01:19:393 (2) - 和之前的①稍稍有点overlap，拉开不拉开，随意
16:59 qkenan: 01:21:179 (3) - 包的不是很完美
16:59 Zero__wind: 哦 大丈夫 我直接是旋转的
16:59 Zero__wind: 嗯
16:59 Zero__wind: 这个也是 把红点后面的锚点拆成 刚才我问过我师傅了 owo
17:00 qkenan: =w=
17:01 Zero__wind: 我去 我发现diif名字还能是中文
17:02 qkenan: 不会变成乱码么……
17:02 Zero__wind: 不太确定噢 感觉很文艺
17:03 qkenan: 音效基本没得挑，节奏也是
17:03 qkenan: 我去骗一发kd？
17:04 Zero__wind: 好

mintong89 wrote:

零风神, 竟然可以叫那么多modder

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

I've checked your bpm and offset, its all good!

DX5536 wrote:

Just some random Suggestion from me. Gosh, why don't this get ranked?
I've requested a MAT and don't worry
Easy:
I feel kinda empty (at 01:07:250 and) at 01:08:679. I would add a circle there.But it's up to you you're right, there used to be notes. But considering that they're too intense, I removed them

Normal:
01:06:536 Super confused part for someone new in Normal and there are lot of mini streams. This is still Normal please have mercy and reduce the number of mini stream. reduced

Hard:
00:42:607 This slider is kinda ugly, try something like this.This slider is from another map. You can make something similar.

How it's been make
Thx for the idea but I think the current shape actually fits the vocal well so I'm not feel like changing it
00:54:036 (Please) make the both side of this slider same (or almost same because it's kinda ugly). seems not quite a deal

Angle:
-Nothing particular for now-

Sorry for my noob english. And Good Luck!

spboxer3 wrote:

omo

[Taiko Oni]

1. 00:09:869 (2) - remove? Nope
   
   
2. 00:11:179 (1) - move to 00:11:357 - ? ^
   
   
3. 00:21:655 (2) - remove? ^
   
   
4. 00:22:131 (1) - spinner is add here is a kinda odd for player because I can't hear any beat/voice should be hold (stream) Well, since almost everyone is complaining about my spinner, I removed it and made dd k instead. I don't like it but I hope it's ok now.
   
   
5. 00:28:321 (2) - remove. I guess you follow the voice (or guitar) for your main rely, that's why I make this suggest for you. I follow the drums for almost the whole map, why would I follow the vocals...?
   
   
6. 00:36:893 (1) - remove. sound it's excess. ??? I guess you wrote the wrong note here because I don't understand why I should remove this one.
   
   
7. 00:39:155 (2,3) - remove both note, they are excessive note for this part I think my mapping fit to the drums here
   
   
8. 00:41:655 (2) - remove and add note at 00:41:655 (2) - There's already a note at 00:41:655 (2) - and no for the other suggestion.
   
   
9. 00:43:441 (1,1) - same remove :< Nope
   
   
10. 00:47:489 (1) - ,01:10:345 (2) - ^ ^

※the issue is 5 plat stream is really unsuit for 1/3,1/6 rhythm song and you try to add it, but sound your pattern didn't make this diff outstanding just make it a kinda odd for playing. I don't try anything, I just map the stuff I hear.

Frostmourne wrote:

hi

General
Offset seems late, offset should be 2960 (-5) make sure you don't forget to resnap all notes and green lines as well all diff fixed

Easy
00:33:673 (3) - this slider ends weirdly, it has no sound on the music on the end of the slider so I suggest you remove this note 00:34:387 (1) - and end this slider at this point instead fixed
00:56:531 (2) - whistle head so the sound in the music will correspond with 00:57:244 (3) - and 00:55:816 (1) - as well fixed

Normal
00:40:107 (1) - whistle head sounds weird, I will remove it only head here , the tail still sounds nice here fixed
00:41:536 (3) - I would add whistle at 1st and 2nd points because they will correspond with 00:40:107 (1) - 's tail only added on head
01:21:714 (1,2,3,4) - it's really confusing for this part. Actually it shouldn't be confusing but what you have done so far in this diff are about 01:17:964 (4,5,1,2) - which is really complicated and hard to read but whatever , it sounds nice in the other side too.
So, to prevent the conflicted rhythmical logic here , I suggest you use this rhythm as you have done before so it will still be understandable as it should be

SPOILER

fixed

I will check the Hard and Insane later because some of them which I'm not sure are 1/6 beats

mintong89 wrote:

恭喜bubble
留名

1. ArtistUnicode : 池田春菜
2. Add Leaf to your tags
3. Inconsistent Combo colours... could u give me a reason?

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ pop for wrong artistunicode

[General]

1. ArtistUnicode : 池田春菜
2. Add Leaf to your tags
3. Inconsistent Combo colours... could u give me a reason?

may mod it thoroughly later

Flask wrote:

This is a small issue, but if you can take a look on taiko muzu/oni, the bg will be like this while playing:

Muzu

Oni

Do you get it? The girl's face in the bg has overlapped by the playfield. Set this in the notepad may solve this problem:

Muzu:
//Background and Video events
0,0,"taiko1.jpg",0,100 (current 1,1)

Oni:
//Background and Video events
0,0,"taiko1.jpg",0,150 (current 1,1)

You can change the number if you want, but please do not let the playfield overlaps the face!

@Zero__Wind: 看到記事本裡[events]的第二行0,0,"bg",1,1全改成0,0,"bg",0,0. 1,1會造成遊戲時BG偏移1pixel

Good luck!

1. 首先，我不反对用1/6，而且这个曲子用1/6也还算合适……只不过曲子本身的鼓点和吉他和vocal重音是1/4的所以多少觉得有点off
2. 00:07:483 (5,6) - 这里，前面同样的1/6的二连你用了stack，这里一下子距离拉开很远。考虑到Kick Slider头部的点击特性，我更期待(4)->(5)之间能有个大间距的跳，而不是在(5)->(6)之间。虽然这么放并不会太坑，但总觉的不舒服。二连的话，我认为是00:09:269 (4,5) - 的间距放的比较适合。
3. 00:08:317 (1) - 这个NC在我看来这个地方和前面是一句上的，所以NC应该放到后面的Note上而不是这里
4. 00:12:424 - vocal重音在这里（注意是个1/4），所以如果不想放打击点的话，我认为至少把slider的红色拐点对齐这里来突出一下也好，现在的拐点位置歪到前面去了。
5. 00:15:340 - 建议加note，vocal重音
6. 00:17:960 (2) - 考虑到vocal结构，拆成slider+note的样子？比如这种：
   
7. 00:21:055 - 加note建议
8. 00:21:888 (3,4) - slider尾带来的错位感，听着不舒服，建议节奏：
   
9. 00:27:721 - 依然是空拍空的很不舒服的点
10. 00:28:555 (1,2) - 这跳的间距你是认真的？
11. 00:29:388 (2,3,4) - 前面一直1/6为什么这一段突然就变回1/4了？
12. 00:33:912 (6) - Slider轨道被遮挡的比较严重。其实这里我觉得2个note就刚好，是个放空拍的好地方。
13. 00:41:769 (4) - 依然是2连间距问题叠到后面(5)那里去不好么？从开头到这里你几个2连间距就一直在变……很乱诶……如果你下定决心就用这个坚决的话也最好前后统一。
14. 00:54:031 (1) - 做成对称吧
15. 00:56:531 (3) - 突然一个红点的折线slider感觉比较违和。这不还没进kiai呢弄成弧线吧

1. SliderTickRate 3 for 1/6 based
2. 00:08:317 (1) - k?
3. 00:14:031 (1) - k?
4. 01:14:745 (5,1) - k d?

1. SliderTickRate 1 for 1/4 based

1. 00:22:840 (6,7) - 感觉slider更合适
2. 00:26:531 (2,3,4,5) - 和Insane一样，为什么从这里开始突然就变成1/4based了
3. 00:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - 难看+难打
4. 00:59:626 (4,5) - 又变回1/6了，另外建议slider
5. 01:07:067 (1,2) - 不要这样1/4 1/6来会切换好不好很难受的……而且这还是Hard。。。
6. 01:11:055 (3,4) - Slider

1. 00:17:245 (1) - 形状弯的有些过了
2. 00:24:209 (2) - 建议删掉
3. 00:26:888 (2,3) - 毕竟是Normal，稍微考虑下难度的问题吧，相当于168bpm的1/2连打新人会困扰的，放一个slider就会好很多了
4. 00:28:317 - 这里倒是可以放个note来平衡你的节奏
5. 00:45:817 (3) - stack没叠好
6. 00:54:031 (4) - 向上挪动到74:185，对齐spacing和blanket
7. 00:57:067 (3,4) - 1. 难度问题 2. 遮挡问题 。所以建议改掉做成这样
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:18:317 (5,1) - 依然是难度问题

1. 00:12:245 (1) - 中间描点往左上放放，扭曲的太多了
2. 00:21:531 (2) - 尾巴向下放平一点
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:28:317 - 这里可以加个note，空拍不是很好听
4. 00:29:388 (1,3) - 弧度做小点并且拉对称了
5. 00:35:817 (2) - 都出屏幕了，竖过来放不好么……没必要把自己给憋到死角去吧
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:745 (3) - 去掉尾巴上的whistle音
7. 00:41:531 (1) - 依然是自己把自己堵死的节奏……和后面(2)做成对称的样式吧
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:245 - 建议加note，这里节奏是对称的
9. 01:08:674 - ^
10. 01:11:174 (3) - 已经都贴边了还要往外拐，直着上去稍微斜一点不就好了
11. 01:17:245 (2) - NC挪到这里来

Scorpiour wrote:

okay~~here's my mod, sorry for my late due to my courseworks >_<
No Kds, please~~，然后中文mod了，方便理解

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Angel]

1. 首先，我不反对用1/6，而且这个曲子用1/6也还算合适……只不过曲子本身的鼓点和吉他和vocal重音是1/4的所以多少觉得有点off
2. 00:07:483 (5,6) - 这里，前面同样的1/6的二连你用了stack，这里一下子距离拉开很远。考虑到Kick Slider头部的点击特性，我更期待(4)->(5)之间能有个大间距的跳，而不是在(5)->(6)之间。虽然这么放并不会太坑，但总觉的不舒服。二连的话，我认为是00:09:269 (4,5) - 的间距放的比较适合。 k
3. 00:08:317 (1) - 这个NC在我看来这个地方和前面是一句上的，所以NC应该放到后面的Note上而不是这里 k
4. 00:12:424 - vocal重音在这里（注意是个1/4），所以如果不想放打击点的话，我认为至少把slider的红色拐点对齐这里来突出一下也好，现在的拐点位置歪到前面去了。 k
5. 00:15:340 - 建议加note，vocal重音 k
6. 00:17:960 (2) - 考虑到vocal结构，拆成slider+note的样子？比如这种：
   k
7. 00:21:055 - 加note建议 k
8. 00:21:888 (3,4) - slider尾带来的错位感，听着不舒服，建议节奏：
   k
9. 00:27:721 - 依然是空拍空的很不舒服的点 改了节奏
10. 00:28:555 (1,2) - 这跳的间距你是认真的？ 改了结构
11. 00:29:388 (2,3,4) - 前面一直1/6为什么这一段突然就变回1/4了？ 哎呀反正以前跟vocal的地方就用了1/4 跟鼓的就用了1/6 现在全都1/6了
12. 00:33:912 (6) - Slider轨道被遮挡的比较严重。其实这里我觉得2个note就刚好，是个放空拍的好地方。 no
13. 00:41:769 (4) - 依然是2连间距问题叠到后面(5)那里去不好么？从开头到这里你几个2连间距就一直在变……很乱诶……如果你下定决心就用这个坚决的话也最好前后统一。 就用大间距了
14. 00:54:031 (1) - 做成对称吧 k
15. 00:56:531 (3) - 突然一个红点的折线slider感觉比较违和。这不还没进kiai呢弄成弧线吧 k

[Taiko Oni]

1. SliderTickRate 3 for 1/6 based fixed
2. 00:08:317 (1) - k?
3. 00:14:031 (1) - k?
4. 01:14:745 (5,1) - k d?

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. SliderTickRate 1 for 1/4 based fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:22:840 (6,7) - 感觉slider更合适 k
2. 00:26:531 (2,3,4,5) - 和Insane一样，为什么从这里开始突然就变成1/4based了 ^
3. 00:56:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - 难看+难打 改了节奏
4. 00:59:626 (4,5) - 又变回1/6了，另外建议slider k
5. 01:07:067 (1,2) - 不要这样1/4 1/6来会切换好不好很难受的……而且这还是Hard。。。 节奏都改了
6. 01:11:055 (3,4) - Slider k

Hard整体难度和Insane太接近，而且我觉得你在做的时候完全没有想清楚到底是要按1/4来走还是1/6 全都1/6了 感觉这不可能难啊

[Normal]

1. 00:17:245 (1) - 形状弯的有些过了 k
2. 00:24:209 (2) - 建议删掉 k
3. 00:26:888 (2,3) - 毕竟是Normal，稍微考虑下难度的问题吧，相当于168bpm的1/2连打新人会困扰的，放一个slider就会好很多了 k
4. 00:28:317 - 这里倒是可以放个note来平衡你的节奏 不太想 而且感觉不好放
5. 00:45:817 (3) - stack没叠好 fixed
6. 00:54:031 (4) - 向上挪动到74:185，对齐spacing和blanket k
7. 00:57:067 (3,4) - 1. 难度问题 2. 遮挡问题 。所以建议改掉做成这样
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
8. 01:18:317 (5,1) - 依然是难度问题 删了个note

[Easy]

1. 00:12:245 (1) - 中间描点往左上放放，扭曲的太多了 k
2. 00:21:531 (2) - 尾巴向下放平一点
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
3. 00:28:317 - 这里可以加个note，空拍不是很好听 不 保持和前面的节奏型一致
4. 00:29:388 (1,3) - 弧度做小点并且拉对称了 k
5. 00:35:817 (2) - 都出屏幕了，竖过来放不好么……没必要把自己给憋到死角去吧
   
   SPOILER

   
   k
6. 00:39:745 (3) - 去掉尾巴上的whistle音 no
7. 00:41:531 (1) - 依然是自己把自己堵死的节奏……和后面(2)做成对称的样式吧
   
   SPOILER

   
   no
8. 01:07:245 - 建议加note，这里节奏是对称的 一开始加了的 就是被说太难了又删了 行吧 我又加回来了 还不够我纠结的
9. 01:08:674 - ^ ^
10. 01:11:174 (3) - 已经都贴边了还要往外拐，直着上去稍微斜一点不就好了 k
11. 01:17:245 (2) - NC挪到这里来 k

大概就是这样了。我的意见是在rebubble之前再去找几个靠谱的mod好好修改一下吧，现在这质量泡的实在是太勉强。

另外，taiko也需要更多的mod，现在的质量很难过关。Taiko staff的意见是直接remap，自己考虑下吧。 太鼓我自己真不知道该怎么说 找过五六个人看过了 也没改出什么东西来=。= 我真是#$%^&*()

LKs wrote:

作图还要晒妹是不是该烧 求神拉克丝饶小的一命Q^Q

[Timing]

Above all timing is slightly off, use 108/5823(+6) instead k

Don't listen to these two notes:
00:00:108 (1) - there is only guitar sound
00:02:965 (5) - this is where the the sweep picking begins, the sweep pick sounds in hundreds of ms so it's not good reference



a relatively big timing shift here, add 2 red lines plz I really know NOTHING about this! Thanks for the help...

[Rhythm&Placement]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/701193 First try, just missed the sowdown slider and got 3 100s. However I didn't feel like I was clicking notes accurately, the reason I got such high ACC is due to low OD and the big amount of sliders(which are more easy on getting 300s) I think OD7 is OK 0.0

The following are reasons of the problem:

1. The random/unperfect usage of 1/4 and 1/6

First of all, let's make an important thing clear: 1/4 or 1/6, which one is more suitable for this map? both of them are okay to follow but the better answer is 1/6.
Technically speaking, many drums and part of the vocal were arranged in 1/6, and we can easily judge which one is better by comparison:

00:10:102 (1,2,3,4) - snap all these 4 notes by 1/4 snap divisor, it sounds weird and just like a broken tape recorder playing ancient songs(lag lag blahblah)

Okay, therefore, your map's problem is the existence of 1/4 rhythms, why did you use them? for not making a boring map or so? Imo 1/6 is fun enough. Actually since you have to map without distance snap quite often in Hard, i.e. you need to put jumps. It's hard to steer clear of confusion when playing. The song itself doesn't have strongly obvious 1/4-1/6 change so it's not necessary to switch them in your map, even though you designed them carefully.

00:44:269 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 之前那种双slider违和感还不强 这种节奏就明显猎奇了

So make your choice here, use only 1/4 or 1/6, don't mingle them in one map. (ofc, 1/6 is my suggestion Made Hard diff and Angel diff with 1/6 all the way through

2. Spacing and jumps

Some jumps are not recommended for they are unexpected

Examples:

00:06:531 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/2yAwc distance between 3&4, 5&6 are almost the same(blank line), but the players need to move 1 times faster to click 5&6, which doesn't play smoothly, although the sudden jump is not huge, the song is quiet here isn't it? got it, fixed
00:10:817 (3) - This slider leans too much to the right http://puu.sh/2yADV you can see in the pic the track suddenly becomes harsh with acute angle, especially when this is a 1/6 jump, it'd be better this way http://puu.sh/2yAB0 no, I got it really smooth
00:22:483 (4) - again, spacing looks the same but time spans differ. NC, or change this pattern, like reduce spacing betweenhttp://puu.sh/2yAK8 k
00:28:555 (1,2) - you can use jumps like this, but most of these jumps should be based on patterns, that's to say only when the previous notes have already formed a good structure can we use them for enhancing the playing experience. here is not a good place to set it changed the arrangement


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00:09:269 (4,5,6) - nazi like this alignment should be checked by yourself, not going to point them out. fixed, but I JUST DON'T want them to line up
00:13:198 (4,5) - 00:09:269 (4,5) - same here, don't use different spacing between notes like this, pay attention to better consistency fixed, a big deal
00:13:674 (6) - maybe it's only me, this looks ugly =.=
00:54:745 (2,3) - blanket的间距要一致 k
01:02:959 (1) - 这种blanket要用两个node解决 不然效果就不好 didn't got it
01:16:174 (4) - http://puu.sh/2yATm 波浪slider的基础就是对称node 一样的不提了 fixed all
01:22:960 (1) - 一般我们惯性习惯把最后一个放在延长线上 然而如果stack在01:21:888 (1) - 头呢 你可以考虑一下 nice idea

3. Hitsound

Above all, the usage of custom soft-hitwhistle is good.

Well, another severe problem in your map is hitsound, the song is soft, which means it could be followed well by soft samplest and a little bit normal samplest adorned at downbeat

but the fact is you used them too frequently

actually notes before 00:09:745 (6) - should have a single normal sound, in regardless of this

00:06:531 (3,4) - no normal on the ends
00:07:602 (6) - no normal on the beginning
00:08:674 (3) - ^
00:08:555 (2) - no normal. ok now listen to the intro again. there is contrast between strong and soft parts in the music. I'm not going to fix all for you, you'd check and fix the whole map accordingly About the first part, I changed, but changed into a really different sound pattern, comparing with your suggestion

00:35:459 (2,3,4) - remove normal on the beginnings
00:32:586 (2,3,4,5) - think about this yourself, some of normal samplests need to be changed to soft ones
00:37:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:537 (2,3,1,2,3) - don't use normal sound on the ends. it's too strange to give the ends such strong sounds I think I reduced many of normal sounds, but still not that much as you want. I think this is what I want now.

Strawberry wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

irc modded. Ranked.

Though i still hope a better quality map but for newbie... anyway.

lkx_Shore wrote:

你知道吗，我已经不敢再下载这图了

Strawberry wrote: