1. sliderfollowcircle的尺寸有问题，最好做成256*256
2. 因为你用了自己的hitcircleoverlay，所以你需要在osu文件的[Colours]项目里手动添加SliderBorder的颜色代码，比如
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

3. 另外spinner-clear, spinner-osu和spinner-spin这一套我不是很确认能不能做成看不到的……略有点担心

1. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"FLASH.png",320,240
   这部分里面有行冗余代码，手动删了
   

   M,0,28190,,320,240

   另外下面那大段的F有很多可以用Loop做的……倒是不用改不过。。略蛋疼……
2. 上面block的部分…………太乱了…………而且有大量时间线的重叠…………比如
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,182940,,81,191
    F,0,182940,,1
    V,0,182940,,0.4367996,0.6313599
    F,0,183190,,1
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,151190,,183,192
    F,0,151190,,1
    V,0,151190,,0.3958395,0.6620799
    F,0,151440,,0
    F,0,180190,182190,0,1
    F,0,182940,,1
    F,0,183440,,0

   整段的没有指定结束时间点导致这些代码基本不是按照你预想的方式运作的…………我也不知道该怎么说比较好，但是建议你先把自己要用到block的地方的起始/结束时间点标识出来，然后再手动把结束点添加上。
3. 另外诸如
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,151190,,183,192

   这样的代码，是完全可以去掉M的那一行，缩写成
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",183,192

1. 00:18:690 (5,6) - this kinda overlap make your map not looked ... neat .. should say i don't like them very much ...
2. 00:27:190 (3,4) - ^, try to avoid the overlap in lower diffs plz
3. 00:30:690 (3) - add a whistle?
4. 00:32:690 (1) - ^
5. 00:34:690 (3) - ^
6. 00:39:190 (4,1) - another beat follows vocal may better? like this:
   
   and also place a whistle at 00:39:690 -
7. 00:46:690 (4) - also , whistle?
8. 00:48:690 (1) - ^
9. 00:50:690 (3) - ^
10. 00:54:690 (3) - ^
11. 00:55:190 (4) - whistle at end?
12. alright....add whistle at the second white line in a chorus during all kiai times - i won't mention the whistle more...
13. 01:39:190 (4,1) - note first and then slider
14. 01:43:190 (4) - looks ... weird....
15. 01:59:190 (6,7,8,9) - i'd like to choose 2 sliders but not 4 notes due to the difficulty issue...
16. 02:24:190 (1) - SV from here, i suppose 0.75 is enough - 0.5 is too slow
17. 02:45:190 (1,2,3) - ugly overlaps...objects are crowed together...

1. 00:05:190 (5) - heard weird... i suppose there's no reason to reverse on blue tick...
2. 00:45:315 (6,7) - move the afterward 1/4 tick to make triplet with 00:45:690 (8) -
   
3. 00:47:690 (7) - good thinking but bad SV change
4. 00:48:690 (2) - ^
5. 00:49:690 (5,1,2) - highly recommend to move the far away but not crowed ... and also bad SV change.
   
6. 00:53:315 (5,6) - move to next red tick
7. 00:55:690 (7) - still... the sudden SV reducing is really awful ... especially in kiai part .. i know you may want to make the map not boring but .. it's not a good solution, jump is much better than that
8. 00:58:190 (1,2,3) - same to 00:49:690, and to be the honest i cannot agree with your copy-paste - don't be lazy plz
9. 01:14:690 (2) - it's completely invisible due to the prev slider
10. 01:31:315 (5,6) - move to next red-tick
11. the recommendation of rest part is same to above part, so i think you can check them out by youself :>

1. 00:11:315 (5,6) - move to next red tick
2. 00:29:940 (7,8,1,2) - heard weird a bit ... try this beat?
   
3. 00:34:190 - here should be a note .. and remove 00:34:315 (1) -
4. 00:38:315 (1) - it should be removed if there's no note placed at 00:38:065 -
5. 00:41:940 (8,9,1,2) - similar to 00:29:940
6. 00:46:315 (1) - i choose to move it to prev white line
7. 00:50:315 (1) - ^
8. 00:58:315 (1) - ^
9. The other two parts have the same problems .. i'm afraid that u need to consider the beat again and make them more neat. other than that the placement is fine.

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~~

[General]

1. sliderfollowcircle的尺寸有问题，最好做成256*256 嗯改掉了
2. 因为你用了自己的hitcircleoverlay，所以你需要在osu文件的[Colours]项目里手动添加SliderBorder的颜色代码，比如
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

   加上了
3. 另外spinner-clear, spinner-osu和spinner-spin这一套我不是很确认能不能做成看不到的……略有点担心

额这个我也不知道，我就是觉得漂亮就放上了。。。

[Storyboard]

1. Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"FLASH.png",320,240
   这部分里面有行冗余代码，手动删了
   

   M,0,28190,,320,240

   另外下面那大段的F有很多可以用Loop做的……倒是不用改不过。。略蛋疼……
2. 上面block的部分…………太乱了…………而且有大量时间线的重叠…………比如
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,182940,,81,191
    F,0,182940,,1
    V,0,182940,,0.4367996,0.6313599
    F,0,183190,,1
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,151190,,183,192
    F,0,151190,,1
    V,0,151190,,0.3958395,0.6620799
    F,0,151440,,0
    F,0,180190,182190,0,1
    F,0,182940,,1
    F,0,183440,,0

   整段的没有指定结束时间点导致这些代码基本不是按照你预想的方式运作的…………我也不知道该怎么说比较好，但是建议你先把自己要用到block的地方的起始/结束时间点标识出来，然后再手动把结束点添加上。
3. 另外诸如
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",320,240
    M,0,151190,,183,192

   这样的代码，是完全可以去掉M的那一行，缩写成
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"block.png",183,192

我把我看懂的基本上都改了，有些个我需要再看看怎么改才好

[Call Me Sweetie]

1. 00:18:690 (5,6) - this kinda overlap make your map not looked ... neat .. should say i don't like them very much ... 这个我觉得还ok啦，我能够接受~不会遮很多。。。
2. 00:27:190 (3,4) - ^, try to avoid the overlap in lower diffs plz 其实这个我觉得也还好。。。
3. 00:30:690 (3) - add a whistle?
4. 00:32:690 (1) - ^
5. 00:34:690 (3) - ^
6. 00:39:190 (4,1) - another beat follows vocal may better? like this:
   你这么改的话也可以，但是后面空出了一个我就不知道怎么办了【其实关键是不好看了。。。】
   and also place a whistle at 00:39:690 -
7. 00:46:690 (4) - also , whistle?
8. 00:48:690 (1) - ^
9. 00:50:690 (3) - ^
10. 00:54:690 (3) - ^
11. 00:55:190 (4) - whistle at end? whistle都加上了
12. alright....add whistle at the second white line in a chorus during all kiai times - i won't mention the whistle more...
13. 01:39:190 (4,1) - note first and then slider 我觉得这个也还可以啊。。。
14. 01:43:190 (4) - looks ... weird.... 甜筒没了底托~
15. 01:59:190 (6,7,8,9) - i'd like to choose 2 sliders but not 4 notes due to the difficulty issue... 但是那样不如这个好玩呀~这个其实也不算难。。。吧？
16. 02:24:190 (1) - SV from here, i suppose 0.75 is enough - 0.5 is too slow
17. 02:45:190 (1,2,3) - ugly overlaps...objects are crowed together... 这个我也改了改，但是总感觉别扭。。

this diff may need more works i suppose....

[Call Me Smoothie]

1. 00:05:190 (5) - heard weird... i suppose there's no reason to reverse on blue tick...呃呃呃改掉了
2. 00:45:315 (6,7) - move the afterward 1/4 tick to make triplet with 00:45:690 (8) - 好
   
3. 00:47:690 (7) - good thinking but bad SV change 那我这里可就不知道怎么做了。。。Q^Q
4. 00:48:690 (2) - ^
5. 00:49:690 (5,1,2) - highly recommend to move the far away but not crowed ... and also bad SV change. OJZ这个我也不知道怎么改好。。。你提供的吧跟后面连不上，但是这三个看起来确实比我的好
   
6. 00:53:315 (5,6) - move to next red tick 嗯
7. 00:55:690 (7) - still... the sudden SV reducing is really awful ... especially in kiai part .. i know you may want to make the map not boring but .. it's not a good solution, jump is much better than that
8. 00:58:190 (1,2,3) - same to 00:49:690, and to be the honest i cannot agree with your copy-paste - don't be lazy plz
9. 01:14:690 (2) - it's completely invisible due to the prev slider 这。。。这个我觉得应该大概没问题吧。。。的确是挡住了，我在找人试试图然后看看后面的mod怎么说吧，这个先没动
10. 01:31:315 (5,6) - move to next red-tick 我觉得没现在好听诶
11. the recommendation of rest part is same to above part, so i think you can check them out by youself :>

[Call Me Strawberrie]

1. 00:11:315 (5,6) - move to next red tick 嗯
2. 00:29:940 (7,8,1,2) - heard weird a bit ... try this beat?
   
3. 00:34:190 - here should be a note .. and remove 00:34:315 (1) -
4. 00:38:315 (1) - it should be removed if there's no note placed at 00:38:065 -
5. 00:41:940 (8,9,1,2) - similar to 00:29:940
6. 00:46:315 (1) - i choose to move it to prev white line
7. 00:50:315 (1) - ^
8. 00:58:315 (1) - ^
9. The other two parts have the same problems .. i'm afraid that u need to consider the beat again and make them more neat. other than that the placement is fine.二连的还是没改。。。我也不知道怎么的我当时做的时候就是觉得这样好听。。。现在觉得也还不错。。。OJZ 在你之前有人跟我说过这样怪怪的，但是玩起来的时候据说还可以

that's all~~ good luck :>

HellDawn wrote:

Hello;


Insane

00:30:190- It would be better If you put note here but you should delete this note > 00:30:315- (Rhytm is gonna be perfect)
00:46:315- ^ i don't really like those...sry
00:59:315 (6,8,11)- whistle added whistles, but not in that circle..

Hard

01:12:190- if you turn up the volume, all combos will be good changed in all diffs~
02:43:690- whistle just beginning yes

Easy

00:19:190- this slider so close. 2 grid up ? doesn't look good..
01:35:190- I was disappointed because all sliders are perfect but this :S :C i think its cute...

Yes this is my mod so call me maybe.

Tony wrote:

Call Me Never!

Strawberry wrote:

OD+1~2(for strawberriediff PLZZZZZZZZZZ AND IT'S AWESOME
\:D/

Pink Agate wrote:

女屌丝神曲，哇，超喜欢

tutuhaha wrote:

抢2kd！
皮肤里面那个slider的时候转的那个花帧数有问题吧找皮肤专家看看
觉得默认whistle不配这个音乐啊....特别是在easy里显得有点刺耳...我觉得还凑合。。。。

[Easy]
00:25:690 (2,1) - 有点略挤 稍微挪了点
01:59:190 (6,7,8,9,1) - 对于前面的排列和节奏来说略急促了一点，况且这还是中圈，比较招新手讨厌 这个我还是坚持不改了，normal应该没问题
02:27:190 (2,4) - 虽然有那么点高难度，但是还是希望后面的4能和这个尾巴这块重叠下 嗯我试了试，这里改了的话后面就压不上。。。
02:43:690 (6) - 轨道加音效太吵了 恩改掉了
02:56:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 对于前面的排列和节奏来说略急促了一点，况且这还是中圈，比较招新手讨厌 这个我还是坚持不改了，normal应该没问题

[Hard]
00:47:690 (7) - 像是这种故意拖的真的有必要出现在这里么？首先节奏在这地方并没有突出点，然后，就是超难读=_=.....
仔细想想，假如真的不想改的话就加个NC吧，后面的也一样
01:20:440 (2) - NC从这里开始 改掉
02:37:190 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 前面玩的好好的突然在这里搞跳了，真不好，属于坑人行为，差评
那个短的拖拍slider真心不建议，因为你前面有用到一样的普通的短slider很容易搞混，但是其实不改也没问题就考虑加个NC吧
有时候做图的时候会觉得好像梗太普通了想搞些跳啊什么的，但是我觉得你这个hard这么平平淡淡的打下去倒是会很受大多player的欢迎
所以，还是不要搞那种跳吧.............难度平均点好 短slider的我还真没有什么好办法，加nc也别扭，看看以后mod怎么说吧。跳得那里我觉得不是很有必要改，毕竟是一个hard，跳又不大，我觉得比较和节奏

[Insane]
00:06:940 (3) - 和2和4靠的太近了看起来容易读错 这个保持现状了。。
00:32:065 (1,2) - 轻微性没覆盖好 轻微性修复
00:38:315 (1) - 这个音是多余的，要不去掉要不放到前面的长白线上 这个我还是不想改呢，其实我有好多节奏是多余的。。。。
00:54:315 (1) - ^
01:00:190 (X) - 加个note在这里，spinner向后移一格好
02:59:940 (6) - NC这里开始 我前面的nc基本上都是照现在这样的。。。我觉得没什么问题。。。

Failed wrote:

this is CRAZY /o/

Wreath wrote:

i forgot it >o<...
☆～

Fenya wrote:

GO GO FOR RANK!! :3

Roxas wrote:

Starred ♥ if u want a mod CALL ME MAYBE ♥ moe

rafradek wrote:

I found several problems:
- Invisible spinner background. It always take more time to find. actually i made the spinner BG exactly the same as the playing BG
- Unnecessary or missed beats. For example: 00:46:315 | 01:51:190 - 01:52:065, in difficulty Call Me Strawberrie . yea i know, but thats what it is in my weird little head lol, so instead, i made it easier to get a 300 by making OD down by 1, hope that would help.
- Difficulty Call Me Smoothie , up to 00:45:440 is easy. After this, there are unstacked 1/4 beats. i would say this is a Hard instead of Normal, so imo its fine
Also, what is "Strawberrie"? This word does not exist. haha this is the name, made up word meaning nothing, so just go with it

Roxas wrote:

Revive this map and I'll mod >< ♥

Elisha wrote:

I dont think its worth reviving at this point. No offense. I mean, the Nightcore version of this song is already out there. And it wasn't popular. Try a less mainstream song, prehaps?

i know what you mean, actually i only make the song i like, i had fun mapping . I would be glad to see if this can be ranked. Thanks for advising anyway, i will try my best ;P

Shoily wrote:

It doesn't hurt to revive it if they're actually going to finish it and get it ranked

it is graved because i have no time to play , now its holiday so i can work on this again

Caarlos97 wrote:

Excelente beatmap, no entiendo porque no esta rankeado ._.

im not speaking Spanish, but i think i got your word :O i will try my best on ranking this

1. When listening to the map, the first thing that irked me was the soft-hitclap sounding a little off compared to the soft sound (I honestly can't tell if it's early or late .) It seems very noticeable to me throughout out the song.
2. 00:28:190 - In this part as well as the chorus later again, why not put whistles on 00:30:440 and 00:30:690, as well as the other parts like that? (Basically whenever that finish-esque sound appears)
3. 00:43:190 - In each diff, you should add whistles in this area (especially for the sliderslide). You can make it seem like a diminuendo whenever necessary, but that's optional.

1. 00:12:690 (1,2) - Honestly, it doesn't look good under this slider, so either widen the space between them or move them to the area in the left.
2. 00:18:690 (5,6) - (5) isn't properly blanketed
3. 01:35:190 (4) - Honestly..... WTF. But it's just my opinion (and I don't like how it overlaps with 01:35:190 (4,1,2))
4. 01:43:190 (4) - ^
5. 01:59:190 (6) - Fix this stream so that this note is at the same place as (2)
6. 03:03:190 (1) - Even if it fits with the song, remove the NC since it's not that necessary.
7. 03:04:190 (1) - silence the end of this spinner

1. 00:12:190 (1) - move to the end of (6)
2. 00:12:690 (3,4) - move 1 grid down
3. 02:52:440 (1,2) - This rhythm doesn't make sense in this place and it doesn't appear again in this part (except for the next mod.) Change it to fit the song.
4. 02:54:440 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:06:440 (2,3,4) - IMO, this just looks ugly. You should change (3).
2. 00:27:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You probably should compress this slider a little more to make it seem neater. (use 0.7x DS)
3. 00:59:190 (5) - add NC
4. 01:51:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - You probably should compress this slider a little more to make it seem neater.
5. 02:15:190 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:47:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Compress this again
7. 03:04:190 (5) - move to x:256 y:188

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Hey, I just met you,
On the modding community.
We both need help....
Mod4mod maybe?

[General]

1. When listening to the map, the first thing that irked me was the soft-hitclap sounding a little off compared to the soft sound (I honestly can't tell if it's early or late .) It seems very noticeable to me throughout out the song. true, i will fix this
2. 00:28:190 - In this part as well as the chorus later again, why not put whistles on 00:30:440 and 00:30:690, as well as the other parts like that? (Basically whenever that finish-esque sound appears)
3. 00:43:190 - In each diff, you should add whistles in this area (especially for the sliderslide). You can make it seem like a diminuendo whenever necessary, but that's optional.

[Sweetie]

1. 00:12:690 (1,2) - Honestly, it doesn't look good under this slider, so either widen the space between them or move them to the area in the left. i widened the space a little, but still a bit blocked, because i have to keep the spacing...
2. 00:18:690 (5,6) - (5) isn't properly blanketed hmm idk how could i fix this...
3. 01:35:190 (4) - Honestly..... WTF. But it's just my opinion (and I don't like how it overlaps with 01:35:190 (4,1,2))
4. 01:43:190 (4) - ^ ok since soooo many ppl complained about this, im gonna change that
5. 01:59:190 (6) - Fix this stream so that this note is at the same place as (2) i dont think thats necessary, i tried in test, it doesnt show the overlap
6. 03:03:190 (1) - Even if it fits with the song, remove the NC since it's not that necessary. for this, im gonna keep it first to see what other ppl say
7. 03:04:190 (1) - silence the end of this spinner hmm i have already silenced the whole spinner...

[Smoothie]

1. 00:12:190 (1) - move to the end of (6) ok
2. 00:12:690 (3,4) - move 1 grid down sure
3. 02:52:440 (1,2) - This rhythm doesn't make sense in this place and it doesn't appear again in this part (except for the next mod.) Change it to fit the song.
4. 02:54:440 (1,2) - ^ changed both

[Strawberrie]

1. 00:06:440 (2,3,4) - IMO, this just looks ugly. You should change (3). k
2. 00:27:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You probably should compress this slider a little more to make it seem neater. (use 0.7x DS) i think its fine now, because i always use 1.0x for the streams in the following parts
3. 00:59:190 (5) - add NC done
4. 01:51:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - You probably should compress this slider a little more to make it seem neater.
5. 02:15:190 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:47:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Compress this again
7. 03:04:190 (5) - move to x:256 y:188 tried, but i prefer what it is now

Even though I don't really like this song..... Good Luck!! I'm a pretty slow modder....

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
进出spinner的时候有一种微妙的异样感... 我也觉得是呢。。。为什么呢？亮度问题？

[Call Me Sweetie]
00:11:690 (5,1,2) - 略挤 而且(1)和(2)也不是对称的... 这个我实在是没办法了，对称了就破了DS
00:25:190 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 对一个easy来说这么多1/2有点难了 我会告诉你这个是normal吗？
00:42:190 (4) - NC 嗯
01:59:190 (6,7,8,9,1) - 挖好鬼畜 normal就不鬼畜了:)
02:07:190 (3) - 比起在中间加个哨子倒不如3个都加finish... 那个哨子是多余的。。。。。
02:15:190 (3) - 这个为啥连哨子都没 因为之前就没想加、、、

[Call Me Smoothie]
开始那一段音效少了点
00:50:690 (2,3) - 距离太近了
00:54:190 (1,2) - (1)的clap给(2) 嗯
01:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音效音效 适当的加些whistle就好其实
01:59:690 (5,6,7,8,1) - 感觉难了 Hard难度。。。
02:27:690 (2,3) - 可以再往下拉点 好的
02:47:690 (5,6,7,8,1) - 又难了 hard。。
02:49:940 (7) - 尾的clap可以去掉 嗯
02:54:440 (9) - NC

[Call Me Strawberrie]
开头那一段也可以考虑适当地多加点whistle 同样的还有01:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
00:21:565 (5) - 尾whistle 后面几个也一样 我觉得不加好听诶。。
01:21:565 (5) - ^
02:01:190 (4) - 尾clap嗯
02:03:940 (2,3) - (2)的clap给(3) 后面的也一样
02:28:690 (6) - NC
02:49:440 (5) - 尾clap
02:57:690 (4) - clap
03:00:690 (3) - 头clap
03:04:190 (5) - 既然不要声音加个note有何用呢 还不如直接spinner

各难度timing的多余绿线清一下
没了=。=

1. try Slider Tick Rate 2! It fits here beter, imo.
2. Weird effect appears after spinner ;_;
   
   this picture explains better than me :V

   
3. You have some flashing elements in your SB. enable epilepsy warning, or at least warn us by writing somewthing about SB in "Creator's Word"!

1. Why don't you try AR+1? It fits with your style pretty good! Rhythm and flow here are great, so faster AR won't hurt players! (using AR5 here will make map more readable, more readable = easier. so It's ok for easiest diff)
2. 00:04:190 - make start part louder, please! I can't hear anything but whistles ;_;
3. 00:05:190 (3,5) - I heard you like nazi mods, so here's some nazi for you - blankets aren't perfect, so you can replace them with new sliders.
   
   before/after

   
4. 00:44:190 (1) - CALL ME MAYBE starts right in the middle of the slider :< It feels wrong! try to follow vocals here maybe? example
5. 01:12:190 (1) - I'd make (1) louder than other circles. It will fit here, imo.
6. 01:28:690 (1) - nazi - Overlapped with spinner's hitburst + too soon after spinner for EASIEST diff. Try to make spinner shorter/remove circle? Or at least fix overlap!
7. 01:43:190 (4,2) - This kind of sliders is a bit confusing for easiest diff. but.. it's so cute! How about mapping an easy diff? I want more of your awesome maps! >3<
8. 01:59:190 (6) - how about new combo here? This is HARDEST AND THE MOST MEMORABLE moment of this diff, so NC here will be really good!
9. 02:24:190 (1) - I feel like whistle will fit here REALLY good. First note after break should be louder + there's a loud beat in music.
10. 02:24:190 - hm..uusing slowdowns at easiest diff for only two sliders? :V I don't think that you really should use them here, but if you want to keep them, place spinner between 02:30:690 (4,1) - to make velocity changes easier to read.
    
    Great job here!

1. 00:06:440 (2) - 00:14:690 (2) - there's only two or three sliders like this. (2 reverses, i mean) and they're inconsistent. So, can you remove one reverse and use circle instead of removed reverse? o3o/
2. 00:37:190 (3) - How about adding reverse here? It'll follow vocals much better. 00:37:440 - or at least circle here to fill empty space
3. 00:47:690 (7) - NOOOOO. I was about to LOVE this map FOREVER :V Point out SV changes with New Combo if you want to use them, but personally I feel like you shouldn't use them here :< It plays awkward, imo D:
   00:50:690 (2) - I failed it 5 times during testplays :V It's impossib;le to read SV changes here
4. 01:20:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try to make volume louder here? Gradually.. step by step! It'll give you awesome sound, imo.
5. 02:38:940 (4) - Nc to warn us about another jumpy pattern. also, these star-jumps are awesome
   
   I love your patterns and rhythms, but slowdoned sliders RUIN everything :< They're hard to read/understand and appears randomly, imo. :< Fix them, pleeeease! I'm begging you!

1. 00:06:940 (3) - it's a bit overlapped with your own HP-bar and we will use default hp-bar we will get BIG overlap, so.. how about at least 1 grid down to fix overlap? >3<
2. 00:43:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ultra-nazi - how about soething like [url=http://puu.sh/1JJNt]this[/url? Consistend and easy playable jumps!
3. 02:03:190 (1,1) - how about whistles here? It sounds pretty good, and fits here
4. 02:32:440 (2,3,4,5) - awesome pattern! ♥
5. 02:35:440 - - how about circle here to follow vocals? I hear "IS" at this beat, so circle will be fine, imo.
6. 03:02:940 (4,5) - I'm pretty sure, that if you reverse (CTRL+G) this pattern it'll be much better. Awesome flow and things.. So, try to reverse it and you'll see what happen!

-Bakari- wrote:

I KNOW YOUR NUMBER, I'LL CALL YOU DAILY :V

hi!

[General]

1. try Slider Tick Rate 2! It fits here beter, imo. changed all to rate 2
2. Weird effect appears after spinner ;_; ;_; idk how to deal with that..
   
   this picture explains better than me :V

   
3. You have some flashing elements in your SB. enable epilepsy warning, or at least warn us by writing something about SB in "Creator's Word"! im not sure about the flash thing, so i m gonna ask that, btw to my its not really noticeable...

[Call Me Sweetie]

1. Why don't you try AR+1? It fits with your style pretty good! Rhythm and flow here are great, so faster AR won't hurt players! (using AR5 here will make map more readable, more readable = easier. so It's ok for easiest diff) ok added 1
2. 00:04:190 - make start part louder, please! I can't hear anything but whistles ;_; increased by 10%
3. 00:05:190 (3,5) - I heard you like nazi mods, so here's some nazi for you - blankets aren't perfect, so you can replace them with new sliders. good, fixed
   
   before/after

   
4. 00:44:190 (1) - CALL ME MAYBE starts right in the middle of the slider :< It feels wrong! try to follow vocals here maybe? example idk what you are talking about...
5. 01:12:190 (1) - I'd make (1) louder than other circles. It will fit here, imo. i cant tell you that i forgot to add the hitsound :O
6. 01:28:690 (1) - nazi - Overlapped with spinner's hitburst + too soon after spinner for EASIEST diff. Try to make spinner shorter/remove circle? Or at least fix overlap! thats true, but hmmm... idk where should i place the first circle... btw my hitburst skin should be fine for that....
7. 01:43:190 (4,2) - This kind of sliders is a bit confusing for easiest diff. but.. it's so cute! How about mapping an easy diff? I want more of your awesome maps! >3< im gonna keep it for now... you know im mapping and ranking suuuuuper slow, also the song is long, if i add anther diff, modders would be bleeding...
8. 01:59:190 (6) - how about new combo here? This is HARDEST AND THE MOST MEMORABLE moment of this diff, so NC here will be really good! sure i will do that
9. 02:24:190 (1) - I feel like whistle will fit here REALLY good. First note after break should be louder + there's a loud beat in music. changed
10. 02:24:190 - hm..uusing slowdowns at easiest diff for only two sliders? :V I don't think that you really should use them here, but if you want to keep them, place spinner between 02:30:690 (4,1) - to make velocity changes easier to read. imma keep that for now, i dont think thats really necessary since its kiai after that. good advise anyway~
    
    Great job here!

[Smoothie]

1. 00:06:440 (2) - 00:14:690 (2) - there's only two or three sliders like this. (2 reverses, i mean) and they're inconsistent. So, can you remove one reverse and use circle instead of removed reverse? o3o/ fixed
2. 00:37:190 (3) - How about adding reverse here? It'll follow vocals much better. 00:37:440 - or at least circle here to fill empty space i wanna keep it thou
3. 00:47:690 (7) - NOOOOO. I was about to LOVE this map FOREVER :V Point out SV changes with New Combo if you want to use them, but personally I feel like you shouldn't use them here :< It plays awkward, imo D: i thought i have fixed them before....alright absolutly fixed for now
   00:50:690 (2) - I failed it 5 times during testplays :V It's impossib;le to read SV changes here
4. 01:20:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try to make volume louder here? Gradually.. step by step! It'll give you awesome sound, imo.
5. 02:38:940 (4) - Nc to warn us about another jumpy pattern. also, these star-jumps are awesome k changed
   
   I love your patterns and rhythms, but slowdoned sliders RUIN everything :< They're hard to read/understand and appears randomly, imo. :< Fix them, pleeeease! I'm begging you!

[Strawberrie]

1. 00:06:940 (3) - it's a bit overlapped with your own HP-bar and we will use default hp-bar we will get BIG overlap, so.. how about at least 1 grid down to fix overlap? >3< 2 grids at maximum
2. 00:43:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ultra-nazi - how about soething like [url=http://puu.sh/1JJNt]this[/url? Consistend and easy playable jumps! not a big difference to me ,but changed due to the blocking issue
3. 02:03:190 (1,1) - how about whistles here? It sounds pretty good, and fits here i used to add like that, but as time goes, it turns to be too noisy for me..
4. 02:32:440 (2,3,4,5) - awesome pattern! ♥
5. 02:35:440 - - how about circle here to follow vocals? I hear "IS" at this beat, so circle will be fine, imo. there is, but if i add that, is gonna be a bit rushing ...
6. 03:02:940 (4,5) - I'm pretty sure, that if you reverse (CTRL+G) this pattern it'll be much better. Awesome flow and things.. So, try to reverse it and you'll see what happen! good i like that

~~~~~~~~~~
SO CALL ME MYBE? +79124973893 \o3o/

I mean, take my star!

Kamina wrote:

nice song~wait for rank

me too me too, lets make a wish

- t e n n y a - wrote:

I'll do M4M from your queue

[General]

1. too bad there's no lyrics xD

[Call Me Sweetie]

1. 01:24:690 (2)- : add whistle here and at the end of the slider? because you use whistle at here 01:22:690- and here 01:23:690-

i think thats a mistake :C thanks for pointing out [Call Me Smoothie]

1. 00:11:940 (3)- : add whistle here? It'll follow the vocal o.o hmm imma keep that... sounds a bit wired to me, but nice idea thou
2. 01:19:940 (2)- : ^
3. 01:59:690- : how about NC here? and NC again at 02:00:440- ? :3 i think i did changed nc due to the last mod, so it would be fine now, thanks
4. 02:01:690 (4)- : clap here? sure
5. 02:09:690 (3)- : ^
6. 02:11:190 (3)- : why the whistle gone? You used whistle at here 02:03:190- >< idk... its weird... added!
7. 02:13:190 (4)- : ^
8. 02:47:690 (5,6,7,8,1)- : same NC suggestion as 01:59:690- fixed!

[Call Me Strawberrie]

1. 00:32:565- : add note here? feel empty well i tried, but not playing well....to me
2. 00:48:565 -: ^
3. 01:21:190 (4)- : how about add whistle at the head? It'll follow vocal's pitch imo ><
4. 01:23:190 (4)- : ^
5. 01:25:190 (3)- : ^ i would keep that....

♫So call me maybe~
I like this song
That's all I can find, good luck o/

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi Strawberry!

From This Queue.

[Call Me Sweetie]

Good!

[Call Me Smoothie]

AR -1? i did ar +1 on the easiest one, so it would be consistant

01:34:690 (2) - last point x:224 y:272

01:42:690 (2) - ^ o_o! nice find! imma make that symmetric

02:12:190 (1) - Remove NC

02:12:440 (1) - NC

02:14:190 (1) - Remove NC

02:14:440 (1) - NC
new combos are fine to me, so i would keep them as for now

[Call Me Strawberrie]

00:05:690 (7) - Ctrl + G

00:46:440 (2) - 4st point x:284 y:340 how did you see that :O another 10 points!

Good luck~

233,127,18690,2,0,B|235:112|257:107|278:112|280:129,1,60

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod
my apology for late replying...
Call Me Sweetie

00:18:690 (5,6) - White borders overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583725

Here use this code.

233,127,18690,2,0,B|235:112|257:107|278:112|280:129,1,60

If you want any better than that, you will need to fix the asymmetry of the slider points for note 6. yours is good enough

00:20:190 - So very quiet. Add hitsound like a finish or whistle? dont really wanna do that... lets keep it quiet
00:20:690 (1) - Flow is negatively affected when you lower the spacing for such a pattern. It's probably not a big deal, but a flaw none the less. what you said is true, but i would keep that because i think it makes it clean now, will change this if its necessary
00:47:190 (5) - I officially call this a lemon slider. xD. Awesome. so we got another one later
00:53:190 (2) - Loop doesn't flow the greatest IMO. Personally i would go for something more fluid, but it's plays well enough that you could keep it. i will change it because now i think its ugly....super...
01:35:190 (4,1) - This is not a "Normal" transition or something that should be in the easiest difficulty. I say this mainly because it slows down the beat and it interrupts the flow which is bad for beginners. as for this, i used to use another one but ppl said its ugly and i changed that into this, hmm technically i can't come up with some other slider shapes with the same starting n ending points without blocking other sliders...so ..
01:43:190 (4,1) - ^
01:46:690 (3,4) - I really dislike this angle and I think it's a bad place for a loop. I suggest a different shape. 01:51:190 (4) - Same. Only my opinion though. You seem to like loops. i just find it cute
02:55:190 (4) - Try to avoid unnatural slider compress. Notice to the right of the slider center, that there is a bunch of slider lines that are really close together. It should be smooth like so. http://puu.sh/1SwRu i didint really see the difference....
03:03:190 (1) - Maybe a wavy slider? tried some, but cant make a good one..

Call Me smoothie
It started out looking like a nice slider oriented difficulty and then you changed to streams for the rest of the song. I was enjoying the sliders and was really hoping this would be a Normal like difficulty. Oh well.

00:04:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest making all of this closer to 1.00. The start and end are 1.03 and the inside is 0.98. fixed a little bit.. cause i cant make it perfectly 1.0...
00:07:190 (3,4,5,6,1) - Clean up this spacing? Also 00:07:190 (3,4,5) - looks nice evenly wrapped around 2. http://puu.sh/1SxcQ fixed
00:08:440 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks rough. The note isn't perfectly centered. tired to fix it
00:09:440 (4,1,2) - Alignment is bad. Please improve this. Make like this? http://puu.sh/1Sxm0 i changed this a bit due to the previous adjustments.
00:15:940 (5,1,2,3) - spacing is very different than your first version of this. I suggest fixing this. fixed to my best
00:16:690 (3,4,5) - Again check this pattern.
00:17:690 (5,1,2) - Again alignment. Make sure your spacing is perfect and 1 is properly blanketted with 2. fixed the above two
00:27:190 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid lowering the snap (even slightly) when you're going into a jump. I suggest keeping spacing closer to 1.0 so that players don't slow down into the jump.Also try centering 3 with 2. imo its fine for now..
00:28:190 (1) - I keep mishitting this. Place in the center of the playing field to prevent people from mishitting? i would say just keep it as it is now, or im ganna changed the whole section after that and btw its not really blocking so i think it would not be a hard point... i tried and it works pretty good.
00:49:690 (5,1,2) - stack better please.
00:57:690 (5,1,2) - ^ sure for both
02:40:690 (2,3,4,5) - Doesn't look right to me.It might be that the angle is slightly off, but i think it would better if there was a tad more space between the blanket. Try to improve the blanket is my advice. its a flow problem, i reversed them and now its better than before..
02:41:190 (5,6,7) - Personally i don't like this transition. Too complicated and follows off beat vocals. Don't need to do anything if you don't want to. fine for me ...

Call me strawberrie
Took me awhile to get used to the overmapped parts. I had problems trying to mod this so, use good judgment please when checking my findings.

01:13:190 (4,5) - feels too close after a jump. Also looks quite bad. I suggest this be a jump like the other sliders. you could stack this01:13:690 (5) - on 1 and then add a note here 01:14:065 - . definitely plays better than what you have now. If not there is probably other ways to map this part that would be better. well... shape is not that bad...at least to me and hmm its a good DS for now so i would keep that
01:24:690 (2) - Doesn't look like previous slider. You should fix this. Maybe even reverse selection the sequence, I don't know. nice catch, tail tick is off and fixed
01:29:190 (6,1,2) - Try to avoid note slider note patterns. They tend to be awkward. you should just have a triple like the next section.
01:45:940 (7,1,2) - ^its ok i think, so keep it for now..
02:27:690 (5,1) - Stack better. it is good now..



Good luck.

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Invisible spinner-osu, spinner-spin, spinner-clear are unrankable, I think yea you are right..
* Your diff name makes players are confusing which one is easier or harder one. Rename all your diff name with difficulty name (e.g. "Hard", "Normal") im probably gonna do that change, because it is so weird to me now...

[Call Me Sweetie]
* Since this diff is an easier one, it's not recommended to use 0,5x BPM Multiplier. Because it makes beginners are confusing during reading a slider but still i think it fits the song at that point, so i would like to keep that..

00:37:190 (2) - I think curve slider is better than this slider.... It's kinda weird pattern having a curve slider (00:38:190 (3)) in one combo....
00:39:190 (4) - ^ i think its pretty cute thou
01:28:690 (1) - This note is too close from spinner, since this diff is an easier one hmm if this is a must, i would like to fix that, but i dont really know where should i put that,
02:56:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - These 1/2 pattern are not fit to the music. Try changing the pattern and follow the music/rhythm from the song i changed the middle 3 ones into a slider, i would say its better?

[Call Me Smoothie]
00:14:690 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This pattern isn't same as 00:12:440 (2,3,4,5,6) its actually the same as 00:06:440 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:47:190 (6,7,1,2) - Why triplets are too much? It doesn't follow the music i did reduce some triples, now would be fine
00:55:190 (6,7,1,2) - ^

[Call Me Strawberrie]
01:35:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This streams doesn't follow the music, maybe try this pattern for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/620948
01:51:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^ imo its fine... your suggestion is good but kinda simple for me, so if its not a big deal im gonna keep that.
02:43:190 (6) - Move up a bit so it stack with (6)? sure, and also changed a little bit for the shape of the next long slider


Once you done, forum PM me

Royston wrote:

Well, it's less annoying than the Nightcore version. I'll give it that.

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

ATTATION

im gonna change spin-osu spin-clear and spin-spin

so please let me know when XATs are going to do something thank you

Kurai wrote:

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

ATTATION

im gonna change spin-osu spin-clear and spin-spin

so please let me know when XATs are going to do something thank you

If you have something to change in your bubbled map, just go ahead and fix it, you can easily ask the XAT who bubbled it to do a quick recheck and then rebubble it.

Gabe wrote:

Is it changed? If yes, PM Kurai for a rebubble since he popped it (:!

Hope to see this ranked soon c:

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

JauiPlaY wrote:

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

Man, you don't have to say that...

Anyway congratulations!

Baka草莓

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

bossandy wrote:

寶貝草莓恭喜喔!!! xD ( 說草莓會跟草莓搞錯 :p )

Edit :

Baka草莓

Andrea wrote:

You shouldn't judge the song but the map itself when you give a rating to a beatmap.

Backfire wrote:

Anyone who maps satan music (this, avril lavigne) deserves a 1, so don't tell me what I can and can't say.

Sorry if that upsets anyone, btw, I don't mean for it, but this kind of music is just so...yeah.